i heard kirakira here lmao
[is this even familiar like HW's? idk, srsly]
[is this even familiar like HW's? idk, srsly]
- 00:44:977 (3,4) - ouch. u missed normal whistle here
- 00:45:171 (1) - add finish here too wwwwww
- 00:51:364 (1) - here too
- 00:52:913 (1) - ^
- 01:03:364 (4,5,6,7) - let's see... i heard from the start that it's soft, then it goes loud. try to do a timing volume stuff from soft to loud on this part
- 01:07:719 (2,3,4) - ^
- 01:20:784 (1,1,1,1) - 02:25:816 (1,1,1,1) - so, the last one was a circle, but this one is a slider. that's weird...
- 01:59:106 (5,6) - u missed the normal whistle here (5's tail + 6 yaaa)
- 02:02:590 (1) - i hope that u can add a hitsound of dis downbeat lol. otherwise do the same thing liek 03:07:622 (1) -
- 02:14:590 (1) - try to mute the tail since it's just an empty sound
- 02:41:106 (4) - did u set a clap intentionally?
- 03:20:784 (1) - how about http://puu.sh/pErX3/4f31ee701d.jpg ? this will make it more consistent enough
- 03:51:751 (3) - u missed clap here
- 04:14:977 (6) - do i rly have a feeling that this note is a 1/16 or wut? i just have a feeling about this one
- 04:15:364 (7) - whistle
- 04:25:042 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - dis pattern reminds me sth, but good thing is that they aren't symmetrical wwwwwww
- 04:28:235 (1) - dat ending spinner turns out into a "drum" hitsound. use soft instead m8
- 04:30:655 (1,2,3) - you're ruining the quite instrumental section here by adding those hitsounds m8. remove those
- 04:52:526 (5,6) - ok, u missed those 2 hitsounds m8 (the tail one + (6)) for normal whistle
- 05:07:816 (2) - normal whistle, not just leaving a hi-hat "clap" there =w=
- 05:08:203 (3,4) - dis too. normal whistle m8
- 05:08:397 (1) - finish
- 05:14:397 (3) - normal whistle
- 05:14:590 (1) - finish
- 05:15:945 (3) - normal whistle
- 05:16:138 (1) - finish
- 05:17:493 (2) - the head should be whistle, not clap there m8
- 05:20:784 (1) - yeahhh i know, u're muting the spinner sound in the end, but i can hear the sound like just a little bit. might want to increase it a little. plus, try to do a volume stuff about that fading out sound part, ya know