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Karen

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Karen 2016-06-23T06:04:33+00:00

ProEzreal wrote:
06:49:940 (3,4,5) - I know there's some distance to let you tell this isn't starting on a red tick but I couldn't read it correctly.. that's why i made 06:49:619 (2,3) - this a large spacing
07:02:690 (1) - ctrl-g could go well want to keep 06:49:619 (2,3) - this flow TwT
07:12:762 (5,6) - hmm, seems a little too far in comparison to other distances. I don't hear anything to be emphasized either
07:55:782 (6,7) - vocals go high here, I think a bit more distance between these could follow the vocals well
08:50:885 (7) - I was hoping for an unique emphasis here, maybe a little more distance or a nc
11:15:618 (1,2,3) - these aren't correctly aligned
12:22:910 (4) - how about this at x:322 y:327
13:10:721 (3,4,5,6,1) - not a big fan of streams like these, how about keeping the circular flow going on 13:10:405 (1,2) - and map the 5 notes over slider 2? sorta like this hmm i think the stream can express the piano here well

Thanks!

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2016-06-24T15:57:00+00:00

Is the storyboard finished?

I think I have to say something serious that I thought personally.
I hope what I suggested can make the storyboard better.

[Storyboard]

First, you are in some ways imitating an interface of a music player, right? It's better for you to put the words which form songs info in order, but not make them move randomly.

It's not coordinated in the whole interface.
Please avoid to use any colors which approach to the primary colors in such flat design, since this will be not coordinated, either.

Colors which approach to the primary colors

Hope you can take a look on this mod. I will be glad if you refer to my opinion.

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2016-06-25T03:53:02+00:00

hi yes the storyboard should be finished

yf_bmp wrote:
[Storyboard]
First, you are in some ways imitating an interface of a music player, right? It's better for you to put the words which form songs info in order, but not make them move randomly.

It's not coordinated in the whole interface.
So you're against random movement? I've always done this type of crumbling texts in all of my storyboards because I personally like it, but I agree it might be off from the general flat theme. I'll try to experiment with it a bit.
Please avoid to use any colors which approach to the primary colors in such flat design, since this will be not coordinated, either.

Colors which approach to the primary colors
I personally feel like it's fine. It would've been more obvious if the BPM went up and down like the previous compilation, but I chose those colors because I wanted to express the BPM with colors. Cold blue at lowest BPM and hot red at the highest BPM. If there's any suggestions for other colors I can use, I can try implementing it.

Hope you can take a look on this mod. I will be glad if you refer to my opinion.

thanks for the suggestions! Will look into them.

update

KaedekaShizuru

625 posts

Joined January 2013

KaedekaShizuru 2016-06-28T10:59:05+00:00

@-[Koinuri]
Sorry for metadata in storyborad

Title should be: Asphodelus -アスフォデルス-
We don't know why August Co., Ltd. must write the title like this, thow we know Asphodelus = アスフォデルス, but only the English or only Katakana both wrong.
Here is my ranked map for this song:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/449207
Thank you~
Nice work

I hope DMCA never come.
辣鸡拔月趁早倒闭

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Monstrata 2016-06-29T07:28:49+00:00

Can you check if these images are used or if they're supposed to be part of the SB? They are showing up as unused.

sb\etc\line.png
sb\text\alpha_uj.png
sb\text\alpha_uk.png
sb\text\alpha_uq.png
sb\text\alpha_ux.png
sb\text\alpha_uz.png

_koinuri

451 posts

Joined June 2012

_koinuri 2016-06-29T08:11:00+00:00

updated Asphodelus

And those images are not used in the sb, so could you remove it from the folders?

Karen

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Karen 2016-06-29T16:03:11+00:00

fixed and updated

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2016-07-17T12:18:28+00:00

叼啊
[sharathon]

03:37:585 (1,2) - ctrl+g?
04:41:869 (4) - 好像有点没叠好
07:42:684 (1) - 这滑条再弯一点
08:21:375 (5) - 叠好点
09:39:790 - 这首歌是6/4拍
10:35:192 (1,3) - 这overlap丑

Karen

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Karen 2016-07-17T12:24:18+00:00

all fixed

ZZHBOY

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ZZHBOY 2016-07-17T12:24:47+00:00

还是帆神会 #1

VINXIS

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VINXIS 2016-07-18T01:05:12+00:00

:0

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-07-18T18:46:39+00:00

还是帆神会 #2

Underforest

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Underforest 2016-07-18T23:53:50+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
:O

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2016-07-19T02:51:28+00:00

还是帆神会 #3
Qualified

^?

Narcissu

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Narcissu 2016-07-19T03:41:06+00:00

00:03:986 - 6/4, dont forget change green line, NC （long white line/weak beat ）and some jump 00:17:319 (1) -

Edit : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/59323 Narcissu VS lfj —— 2 : ∞

Last edited by Narcissu 2016-07-19T03:43:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Karen

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Karen 2016-07-19T03:42:15+00:00

好

Rizia

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Rizia 2016-07-19T03:51:40+00:00

[General]
http://puu.sh/q6xUb/43f9aaef10.png

[Sharathon]
00:35:986 - 第一段這裡停就已經夠了吧
02:03:262 - 漏了個note?
02:07:262 - ^
02:27:300 (1,1,1) - 這裡不是應該速度由慢到快嗎
06:33:728 (1,2) - 可以近點都跟06:34:166 (3,4) - 一樣了
06:49:940 (3,4,5) - 這個會不會有其他更好的方法去表現出來呢連打從藍線開始容易100
09:25:685 - 加個note跟09:25:485 (3) - stack一起? 後面的也是

現在說可能有點太遲但是我覺得最後一曲歌的音樂可以直接播到結束的

Karen

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Karen 2016-07-19T04:59:32+00:00

Rizia wrote:
[General]
http://puu.sh/q6xUb/43f9aaef10.png

[Sharathon]
00:35:986 - 第一段這裡停就已經夠了吧想考虑到中间停顿的时间要差不多，都是夏萝的锅
02:03:262 - 漏了個note? 这节奏故意这样的诶，感觉好玩不想改了
02:07:262 - ^
02:27:300 (1,1,1) - 這裡不是應該速度由慢到快嗎
06:33:728 (1,2) - 可以近點都跟06:34:166 (3,4) - 一樣了
06:49:940 (3,4,5) - 這個會不會有其他更好的方法去表現出來呢連打從藍線開始容易100
09:25:685 - 加個note跟09:25:485 (3) - stack一起? 後面的也是

現在說可能有點太遲但是我覺得最後一曲歌的音樂可以直接播到結束的都是夏萝的锅

thanks!