Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
Source: Shakugan no Shana II - Fixed
a preview point for this map is not set. - Fixed
02:01:402 - start kiai mod here. and end here 02:38:545 in both difficulties. - Fixed
your background size is incorrent, please cut/resize to 1024 x 768 - For next general upload, don't have time
any kind of SB element must not be over 800 x 600, so resize your SB files too. - ^
Add Easy difficulty - I'll think about it
Use same count and length of kiai mod. - It'll be.
Add hitsounds - ^

[Normal]
Use same count of break points as in [Hard]
I wonder, why you add green line that discreases sliderspeed by x0.80 in same time with red line.
00:07:117 (1) - select slider --> select 3rd point of slider --> move it 1 grid left --> select 2nd point of slider move down by 1 grid. And shape looks better.
00:12:831 (1) - try to do same shape as previous sliders
00:14:259 (2) - make it linear. http://puu.sh/2DkN
01:19:081 (3) , 00:38:545 (1,2) - please do not use stacks of such type :/
01:19:795 (1) - better to start on white tick, it's kinda hard to start from red tick.
00:21:402 (1,2,3,4) - fix those stacks, it's hard to read, and it's really hard for newbie/middling players.
00:27:116 (1,2,3,4) - more fantasy, more style instead of boring stacks.
00:54:438 - ~? http://puu.sh/2DlD
00:58:902 (1) - um? http://puu.sh/2DlJ
01:00:152 (2) - linear, linear
01:12:831 - http://puu.sh/2DlT
256,48,72831,2,0,B|136:16|96:128,1,192
00:15:688 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Dm6
00:21:402 (1) - spacing
00:29:974 (6) - http://puu.sh/2Dmi
00:41:402 (1) - remove new combo
. . .

FIXED

[Hard]

Nothing to mod here. Not like it's perfect, it's just too random, if i want to suggest something, i'd probably better remap this myself. Everything is random and feels overmapped.
First of all slider velocity/slider speed dose not fit with such calm voice, so i'd suggest to discrease it.
Second, please do not use such stuff 00:39:974 (1,2,3,7) - 00:51:045 (7) - 00:28:545 (1,2,3) They don't fit at all, and sounds odd too.
Third use patterns, i saw some of them on Normal difficulty, that piece of Normal diffiuclty is infinit. times better then this
Take a look (not steal) at some [Hard] diffiuclties with such bpm. judge yourself.

No Star.

kurohana wrote:

my mod

[General]

the bg size must be 1024x768 (because of the quality)
it looks better, if the diffs have a same start

[Normal]

00:42:402 (1) a bit confusing, maybe another location?
01:27:116 - slider starting with the voice, at 01:26:938
02:10:668 (3,5) set 3 at the same position as the end of 5
02:22:116 (1) remove new combo
03:45:688 (5) a bit confusing again
03:58:545 - finish?

[Hard]

meeep, one error, you can't use more than 3 different slider speeds
00:35:331 (7) clap
00:36:759 (3) ^
00:37:474 (6) ^
00:38:118 (1) ^
00:39:616 (6) ^
hmm, could take some time to list up all these claps... try to make some rhythm and set hitsounds, at every second white grip (in the same sequence as above)
00:42:116 (4) hm? slider must end at 00:42:295
00:42:563 (5) set at the red grip after
01:38:902 (1) confusing
01:46:581 (1) aaand 01:48:009 (1) set the first one note at the end of the black slider, looks better
01:53:902 (4,5) spacing >.<
02:00:509 (2,3,4,5) looks a bit confusing...
02:05:331 (3) spacing
03:46:866 (3,4,5,6)

i really like this song (mami kawada >////<) so i give you a star ~(^.^)~
don't forget to give kudosu~~~

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

General

the wallpaper is 1224x767 you should make 1024x768 that is better - I'll do it, as last step.
The mp3 is 427kbps you should re-encode mp3 to 192 kbps - ^

[normal]

00:48:545 (3) - Grid 1 dowm?
01:45:688 (2) - Grid 1 up?
01:54:259 (2) - Grid 1 right?
02:22:116 (2) - Remove new combo?
02:49:259 (2) - the end slider is weird the 02:49:974 (1) - end slider maybe make better stack?

lol empty you should make hitsound imo

Hard

Ho my i like this diff i can't find wrong...
ho also again empty hitsound

Star!

CXu wrote:

Hi there, sorry I didn't get to actually mod this before now orz

Offset is a bit off. You should probably get someone more experience to check it, but try: 7153. Remember to resnap all notes, as well as fix the inherited sections~~

[Normal]
00:09:617 - Add a note?
00:29:974 (4) - Finish?
00:35:688 (1,3) - The claps on these 2 sliders feels a bit out of place imo.
00:39:081 (2) - Nothing wrong really, just pointing out that this pattern isn't done much in your map, and that it could be a bit tricky. It is fine in itself though, so feel free to keep it.
00:41:402 (1) - With distance snap on, move this more to the left so that it's not obscured by the previous slider. Also, finish?
00:35:688 - 00:52:831 You could try use some whistles here and see if you think that sounds cool
00:49:974 - Increase the volume a bit here since the song is picking a bit up?
00:49:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to move this pattern so that 00:50:331 (2) - is directly stacked under 00:48:902 (4)
00:53:188 (1) - I think the chorus could sound better without the claps, but that's entirely my opinion, but this particular one really sounded odd to me.
00:55:152 (4) - Try adding finish on notes like this and see if you like it?
00:58:009 (4) - Move a bit right and down so 00:57:652 (3,4) is parallell with the slider. Not important, but I guess it looks better.
01:04:259 (3) - Finish
01:09:795 (1,2) - I know the distance is right, but it feels a bit short for me, so try spacing it a wee bit more?
01:23:545 (1,2,3) - Nothing wrong, but you could try to make a symmetrical pattern here
01:43:188 (3) - The anchor points aren't actually doing anything here.
01:46:759 (4,1) - Swap the combos?
02:18:366 (1,2,3,4) - Try rearranging this combo a bit. Right now it looks a bit messy and weird.
02:22:116 (2) - Start this slider at the red tick before, and end at 02:22:474?
02:27:474 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not really getting the rhythm you're following here, consider changing?
02:31:759 (1) - Remove this
Same hitsoundcomments like the first part.
02:49:259 (2) - Not expecting another repeat, so remove 1 repeat here?
03:02:116 (3,4) - Stack them, and end the slider at 03:02:831, then move 03:03:366 (5) to 03:03:188
03:28:902 (5) - This slider should begin at 03:29:081 - imo
03:30:688 (3) - Try to make it like this? http://puu.sh/7i5l
03:38:902 (4) - and 03:40:331 (3) - feels weird imo. The repeats doesn't really fit.

[Hard]
00:29:974 - Add a note here with normal-hitfinish.
00:39:974 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These feels out of place in this slow spot. If you want to keep them, atleast make them the same shape.
Yeah, try add some whistles here too xP
00:51:045 (7) - This is unexpected imo.
00:52:831 (8) - 1 grid down, 1 grid left
The chorus has so many 1/2 sliders. Make some longer ones too?
Oh and if you can, try add some finishes.
01:39:438 (4) - Remove this, move this to begin at that spot 01:39:616 (5), and add a note at 01:40:331. Remember to fix hitsounds.
02:14:974 (9) - move to 02:15:152 -
02:52:831 (1) - Make this prettier
02:54:795 (2) - ^
03:00:331 (4) - CTRL+R? I find this disturbing the flow
03:01:581 (2) - Remove the repeat, and move it to 03:01:759?
03:05:331 (6) - Shouldn't the long slider at 03:05:688 (1) - begin here instead?
03:08:545 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 03:09:616 - , then add a note at 03:09:974 - instead

Nice maps overall though, and I like the feeling of the map ^^

AmaiHachimitsu wrote:

Map is worth to be ranked IMO.

I tried to remap it a bit while using CXu's instructions. I hope that will help you with the rest.

Dunno how to "star" a map, but as soon as I realise that I will do it xD

With regards,

Nitojgrem wrote:

IRC Mod.
Change some Timing things and little stuff...
It's not the whole mod because Osu crashed but I think it's long enough oO

Mod

20:16 <Nitojgrem> : Öhmm sorry... Osu has been crashed oO
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : are you there? No you're afk... ok
20:17 <Acrith> : No i;m not
20:17 <Acrith> : xD
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : lol Osu said that
20:17 <Nitojgrem> : where i was? D:
20:18 <Acrith> : 1:57:510 (1)
20:18 <Nitojgrem> : yes... what is your opinion to that?
20:18 <Acrith> : I changed combo, because it was a good idea.
20:20 <Nitojgrem> : 02:49:295 (2) - Clap at Endpoint (you've done this before so, I think it's one note you have missed when you repaired normal...)
20:21 <Acrith> : Done
20:22 <Nitojgrem> : 03:10:724 (2) - why you don't make it look like 1?
20:22 <Acrith> : It's > and <
20:22 <Acrith> : >
20:22 <Acrith> : <
20:23 <Acrith> : You know what I mean
20:23 <Nitojgrem> : 2 yes 1... more than a L
20:24 <Acrith> : repaired
20:25 <Nitojgrem> : 03:30:545 (3) - maybe a Clap at the midpoint
20:26 <Acrith> : done (It seems good)
20:27 <Nitojgrem> : 03:56:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - You've forget the Claps (I know you understand what I mean; same Claps as here 03:50:367 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
20:27 <Acrith> : Wops, you're right
20:30 <Nitojgrem> : I think thats all I find in Normal... I hope that you have not expect something big... but before i go further with Hard I have a question.
20:30 <Acrith> : Hm?
20:31 <Acrith> : Go ahead.
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : Why are this picture unlimited is in the song folder? I haven't seen it to be used
20:31 <Acrith> : I didn't used it in Normal
20:31 <Nitojgrem> : oh ok
20:31 <Acrith> : because I don't use "1,5x inherit section"
20:32 <Acrith> : for a special moment.
20:32 <Nitojgrem> : I think I'll see what you mean
20:32 <Acrith> : In this "speed up" on hard, the unlimited spell from Shanabg is lighting
20:32 <Acrith> :
20:34 <Acrith> : Hard now ^^
20:35 <Nitojgrem> : 00:20:724 (2) - why not make it as a "opposite of 1"? I've you understand what i mean
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite of 1..?
20:36 <Acrith> : Am..
20:36 <Acrith> : Opposite slider of 1 so slider start on top(up) of screen and going down?
20:37 <Acrith> : There're many pairs of opposite sliders, so leave team without comment. There won't be any suggestions to them anyway
20:37 <Acrith> : them*
20:37 <Nitojgrem> : i meant something like this http://puu.sh/8ya5
20:38 <Acrith> : Am..
20:38 <Nitojgrem> : it's just a suggestion
20:39 <Nitojgrem> : and i know it's wrong spaced on the timeline ._. XD
20:39 <Acrith> : ...
20:39 <Acrith> : xd
20:40 <Acrith> : done
20:40 <Nitojgrem> : another Question; how it would when AR - 1 and OD - 1?
20:41 <Acrith> : I won't change AR, because it going then to be unreadable
20:41 <Acrith> : slowly unreadable*
20:41 <Acrith> : Overall Difficulty - I could:)
20:42 <Nitojgrem> : ok, for sure, I won't say anything to the spacing of this Diff.... It's totally confusing me x_x
20:42 <Acrith> : It's 0,8x
20:43 <Acrith> : And 1,0 and 1,2x
20:43 <Nitojgrem> : yeah and and and and... the AiMod (I've taken one look, j4f) and it says 147 wrong spacings XD
20:43 <Acrith> : WHAT?!
20:44 <Acrith> : You're kidding..
20:44 <Nitojgrem> : *138
20:44 <Acrith> : CXu didn't saw any wrong spacings
20:44 <Acrith> : And previous modders too
20:45 <Nitojgrem> : yeah it's because you didn't use only one DS... It's not a big thing when the AIMod says something like this...
20:45 <Acrith> : So:)
20:47 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add a Finish here 00:54:831 (4,5) - and here: 00:57:688 (5,6) -
20:48 <Acrith> : Nice.. Done
20:48 <Acrith> : 01:03:581 (3) - I added at Ending - Clap
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : If yes then here: 01:06:260 (7,8) - and here: 01:09:117 (6,7) - too... öet me see this 3...
20:49 <Acrith> : added
20:49 <Nitojgrem> : 3 seems ok
20:50 <Acrith> :
20:50 <Nitojgrem> : 01:45:546 (5) - Clap
20:51 <Acrith> : donew
20:51 <Acrith> : 01:50:902 (4) - Added clap at ending
20:52 <Nitojgrem> : it's interesting. You mod your own Map xD
20:53 <Acrith> : Because when you're adding some hitsound
20:53 <Acrith> : I adding next, which it's necessary
20:53 <Acrith> : where it is*
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : I think when i make some suggestions you see some other notes where a Hitsound seems to be ok too and add it...another advantage of IRC
20:54 <Nitojgrem> : modding 'cuase it's live
20:54 <Acrith> : xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:03:045 (3) - Clap; and the 4 and 5 after that finish
20:55 <Acrith> : 02:06:260 (5,6) -
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : 02:05:902 (4,5,6) - same procedure
20:55 <Acrith> : Finish added
20:55 <Acrith> : roar.. xD
20:55 <Nitojgrem> : lulz
20:56 <Acrith> : Okay, go further
20:56 <Nitojgrem> : 02:14:474 (8) - endpoint finish and by 9 startpoint finish
20:57 <Acrith> : finish
20:57 <Acrith> : tfu, done
20:57 <Acrith> : xd
20:58 <Nitojgrem> : 02:22:867 (1) - why it's not the same slider than 02:21:438 (5) - ?
20:58 <Acrith> : It's the same..
20:58 <Acrith> : Maybe some small.. differents..
20:59 <Nitojgrem> : are you kidding me? small differents....
20:59 <Acrith> : For me..
20:59 <Acrith> : And they're opposite.
20:59 <Acrith> : In vertical.
21:00 <Acrith> : I meant |
21:01 <Nitojgrem> : ok... i don't get it but it's unnecessary....
21:02 <Acrith> : mhm, nevermind
21:02 <Acrith> : go further
21:02 <Nitojgrem> : yes
21:04 <Nitojgrem> : 02:58:581 - Why you stoped at this point with the fast section?
21:05 <Nitojgrem> : I mean from the music I would say that it would go further...
21:05 <Acrith> : Hm..
21:05 <Acrith> : Idk
21:06 <Acrith> : Hard would be too hard?
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : lol xD
21:06 <Acrith> : ;d
21:06 <Nitojgrem> : and what will you do now?
21:06 <Acrith> : I don't knoiw.
21:07 <Nitojgrem> : this...is not good...
21:07 <Acrith> : I could do it..
21:08 <Acrith> : but I don't have motivation to do it now
21:08 <Acrith> : xD
21:08 <Nitojgrem> : oh I see that you haven't make the mini SB further too
21:09 <Acrith> : what..
21:09 <Acrith> : ?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : the unlimited picture thing...
21:10 <Acrith> : yup..?
21:10 <Nitojgrem> : it's stopped at the same time
21:10 <Acrith> : Yup
21:10 <Acrith> : Because I ended 1,5x slider section
21:11 <Nitojgrem> : so.. maybe you can let it then it's now
21:11 <Acrith> : am, i don't understand L:?
21:11 <Acrith> :
21:12 <Nitojgrem> : I thought that, my english sucks
21:12 <Acrith> :
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : let it like it's now or something like that i want to say with that if you can understand... and if not i'll ask the google translator if he translate my
21:13 <Nitojgrem> : german sentencee into polish
21:13 <Acrith> : try to translate into polish
21:13 <Acrith> : xd
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : Zostaw tak jak jest teraz
21:14 <Acrith> : why?
21:14 <Nitojgrem> : maybe... if you don't want to change...
21:15 <Acrith> : okey, okey
21:15 <Acrith> : nevermind
21:15 <Acrith> : Go further
21:17 <Nitojgrem> : Maybe add this hit 03:03:938 (6) - and a clap
21:18 <Nitojgrem> : 03:05:367 (1) - Clap at startpoint...
21:19 <Acrith> : 03:06:438 (2) -
21:19 <Acrith> : Same
21:19 <Nitojgrem> : yes
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm, can't find something more :/
21:21 <Acrith> : It;s all?
21:21 <Acrith> :
21:21 <Nitojgrem> : hmm... I personally can't find any more
21:22 <Acrith> : it's okey
21:22 <Acrith> : Write in thread about modding on IRC
21:22 <Nitojgrem> : But I have to say too that I think that you can ask a MAT now... maybe....
21:22 <Acrith> : maybe?
21:22 <Acrith> :
21:23 <Nitojgrem> : I'm not an expert. You can ask a MAT. I mean you've +25 stars and I have to say that it was not easy for me to find some thing
21:24 <Acrith> : But i have +25 in a old "star" receiving
21:24 <Acrith> : Now we can only spend kudosu
21:24 <Nitojgrem> : I know. It's a better way (as long as the Modders aren't big egoists...)

Laurier wrote:

hi
mod4mod time

normal
AR-1
00:20:724 (3) - 1grid right?
00:26:081 (2) - spacing
00:51:081 (4) - add clap?
00:56:795 (2) - spacing
01:00:367 (3) - move to the right of (2). Beginners will get confused.
01:01:795 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/8E0c
01:04:653 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8E0l
01:15:903 (1) - start at 01:15:724
01:21:438 (3) - delete and start spinner
01:23:581 (1) - make it pretty http://puu.sh/8E0F
01:48:581 - add note
01:49:295 - ^
02:11:438 (5) - new combo
02:23:581 (4) - stack
02:30:010 (5) - stack
02:50:010 (1) - 2nd waypoint x176 y192 endpoint x160y240
03:45:724 (5) - new combo
03:58:581 (1) - sound volume 5%

hard+
00:38:581 (3) - 2grid up and 1grid left
00:40:724 (6) - new combo?
00:41:438 (1) - add finish
00:57:331 (4) - stack
01:19:653 (7) - 1grid right
01:20:545 (2) - 1grid left?
01:57:152 (4) - new combo?
02:06:260 (5) - 2grid up and 1grid right
02:12:867 (5) - add finish?
03:40:010 (1) - stack on 03:38:938 (4)tail
04:02:510 (1) - try silent

That's all GL