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S o r d a wrote:

star~

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kami map~
star~

swish wrote:

kami map~
star~

arigatou!
Thank you star~!!

Rigeru wrote:

:P

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nicemap!!

tomosan wrote:

nicemap!!

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very fun and entertaining! good job!

h3k1ru wrote:

:)

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senaya wrote:

very fun and entertaining! good job!

Thank you very much xD
I am glad

Hi hi~ random mod

Should you be having difficulties reading English, please consult those who can.

Overall:
BG is Vocaloid? Peculiar...
Even with the hardest difficulty, it only maps half of the song. Consider mapping the entire song, or cut the mp3 shorter.

[Easy]
Slider velocity is too low, I strongly recommend anything equal to or higher than x0.7.
Even so, the patterns in this diff is not so appealing. Consider re-arranging.
You may it easier to arrange objects if slider velocity is higher.
Shorten some long combos.

00:21:567 (5) - new combo?
00:24:689 (x) - add a note?
00:27:116 (5) - ^
00:34:053 (5) - ^
00:35:787 (x) - add a note?
00:54:862 (7) - new combo?
00:56:249 (9) - hitsound finish at ends of slider (bang x4)
01:00:411 (4) - new combo?
01:12:897 (6) - ^
01:16:018 (x) - add a note?
01:23:995 (5) - new combo?
01:27:116 (x) - add a note?

[Normal]
Drain Rate is too low, consider 4.
Approach Rate is too low, consider 4.
Even though this is a "normal" diff, it contains quite a lot of jumps like 00:18:793 (1). Maybe rename this diff to [Hard]?wwww
If you changed this diff to [Hard], make sure you increase slider velocity, drain rate, overall difficulty, etc.
Shorten some long combos. (I won't point out examples this time.)

00:30:238 (2) - clap?
00:30:931 (4) - ^
00:43:417 (6) - ^ (I'll stop pointing out examples. Check the others.)
01:25:035 (4) - ooh, I see what you trying to do here. But still, try to align with (2).
01:26:076 (7,8,9,10) - how about placing these as going down not going up?

Whaaaaat??? Map is so short wwwwwww

[gow's Hard]
No break for 2 minutes D:

00:45:151 (7) - new combo?
00:56:076 (1,2,3) - hitsound finish at white ticks
01:36:480 (7) - new combo?

Very nice~

[Love jump!!]
Drain Rate 7 (9 is too high)

00:45:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hitsound finish on white ticks?
01:21:220 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetrical
02:08:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh my this is cool~

The jumps are hard! But fun!

==============

Balance the mapset, especially [Easy], and it will be good.
Star!

Yeah!!
ほんとにもうスルーしてくれてもいいからね！
souce かtag に kimura yuki　って追加してください。

[Easy]
00:29:891 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - spacing

[Normal]
00:34:746 (3,4,5,6) - まっすぐ上にしてみては？
00:43:417 (6,7,8) - 切り替えしスライダーにしてみては？
01:03:012 (5) - Remove
01:08:215 (10,12) - ^
01:15:151 (6,8) - ^
01:14:978 (5,6,7,8) - spacing
00:43:590 (7) - Remove
01:03:012 (5) - ^
00:59:024 (5,6) - sliderの最後にﾎｲｯｽﾙ入れてみては？
01:25:035 (4) - 1 grid down
01:19:833 (5,6,7) - 単発消してスライダー入れるといいかも
01:20:527 (1,2,3) - ^
01:26:249 (8,10) - Remove
01:31:625 (6,7,8) - 切り替えしスライダー入れてみては？

[gow's Hard]
Nice map!!ごうさんの置き方がもろに出てるｗ

[Love jump!!]
01:37:868 (3) - New combo
01:53:995 (3) - 前の部分(01:02:665 (1) - )とあわせるならNew combo

Nice mapp!!!
いいジャンプだわ（・・Fight!!

yongtw123 wrote:

Hi hi~ random mod

Should you be having difficulties reading English, please consult those who can.

Overall:
BG is Vocaloid? Peculiar...
Even with the hardest difficulty, it only maps half of the song. Consider mapping the entire song, or cut the mp3 shorter.

[Easy]
Slider velocity is too low, I strongly recommend anything equal to or higher than x0.7.
Even so, the patterns in this diff is not so appealing. Consider re-arranging.
You may it easier to arrange objects if slider velocity is higher.
Shorten some long combos.

00:21:567 (5) - new combo?
00:24:689 (x) - add a note?
00:27:116 (5) - ^
00:34:053 (5) - ^
00:35:787 (x) - add a note?
00:54:862 (7) - new combo?
00:56:249 (9) - hitsound finish at ends of slider (bang x4)
01:00:411 (4) - new combo?
01:12:897 (6) - ^
01:16:018 (x) - add a note?
01:23:995 (5) - new combo?
01:27:116 (x) - add a note?

[Normal]
Drain Rate is too low, consider 4.
Approach Rate is too low, consider 4.
Even though this is a "normal" diff, it contains quite a lot of jumps like 00:18:793 (1). Maybe rename this diff to [Hard]?wwww
If you changed this diff to [Hard], make sure you increase slider velocity, drain rate, overall difficulty, etc.
Shorten some long combos. (I won't point out examples this time.)

00:30:238 (2) - clap?
00:30:931 (4) - ^
00:43:417 (6) - ^ (I'll stop pointing out examples. Check the others.)
01:25:035 (4) - ooh, I see what you trying to do here. But still, try to align with (2).
01:26:076 (7,8,9,10) - how about placing these as going down not going up?

Whaaaaat??? Map is so short wwwwwww

[gow's Hard]
No break for 2 minutes D:

00:45:151 (7) - new combo?
00:56:076 (1,2,3) - hitsound finish at white ticks
01:36:480 (7) - new combo?

Very nice~

[Love jump!!]
Drain Rate 7 (9 is too high)

00:45:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hitsound finish on white ticks?
01:21:220 (1,2,3,4) - not symmetrical
02:08:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh my this is cool~

The jumps are hard! But fun!

==============

Balance the mapset, especially [Easy], and it will be good.
Star!

I all revised it!
I change the BG
mp3 was cut short!

[normal] has changed a little easier.
Hmm. . . [Normal] is short?
[Easy], [Normal],and I want to be together Length. . .

[Love jump!!] rename [Love jump].

Thank you very much mod!! Iam glad

val0108 wrote:

Yeah!!
ほんとにもうスルーしてくれてもいいからね！
souce かtag に kimura yuki　って追加してください。

[Easy]
00:29:891 (1,2,3,4,5,7) - spacing

[Normal]
00:34:746 (3,4,5,6) - まっすぐ上にしてみては？
00:43:417 (6,7,8) - 切り替えしスライダーにしてみては？
01:03:012 (5) - Remove
01:08:215 (10,12) - ^
01:15:151 (6,8) - ^
01:14:978 (5,6,7,8) - spacing
00:43:590 (7) - Remove
01:03:012 (5) - ^
00:59:024 (5,6) - sliderの最後にﾎｲｯｽﾙ入れてみては？
01:25:035 (4) - 1 grid down
01:19:833 (5,6,7) - 単発消してスライダー入れるといいかも
01:20:527 (1,2,3) - ^
01:26:249 (8,10) - Remove
01:31:625 (6,7,8) - 切り替えしスライダー入れてみては？

[gow's Hard]
Nice map!!ごうさんの置き方がもろに出てるｗ

[Love jump!!]
01:37:868 (3) - New combo
01:53:995 (3) - 前の部分(01:02:665 (1) - )とあわせるならNew combo

Nice mapp!!!
いいジャンプだわ（・・Fight!!

修正しました！
Normalは少し簡単にしました～。
modありがとう

m i z u k i wrote:

:roll:

Thank you star~

wonderfull

K o h a k u wrote:

:oops: wonderfull

Thank you star~~

楽しかったです！応援してます！
LOVE&JOY

ponsaku wrote:

楽しかったです！応援してます！
LOVE&JOY

ありがとう～！ 頑張ります！(`･ω･´)
LOVE&JOY~

good map

AquaBlue wrote:

good map

Thank you for playing~

riechan wrote:

:)

Thank you star~~

Love&Joy~♪

Thite wrote:

Love&Joy~♪

Thank you star
Love&Joy~~<3

miss_dior wrote:

;)

Thank you star~!!

nice map!
star

yeokki wrote:

nice map!
star

Thank you for playing~

Mucha wrote:

:D

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nice map
nice song

Klonoa_0 wrote:

nice map
nice song

Thank you for playing~

Muya wrote:

:oops:

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すごく楽しい譜面でした
star~

osuyo wrote:

すごく楽しい譜面でした
star~

ありがとう～！
Thank you star