Hatsuki Yura - Eclipse Parade

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月11日 at 23:27:12

Artist: Hatsuki Yura
Title: Eclipse Parade
Tags: Newspaper Cup gxytcgxytc Mei Tsukuyomi baldrace Lyric FreeSongs Zero__wind drop 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu
BPM: 208
Filesize: 19819kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. FreeSongs' Parade (5.31 stars, 1042 notes)
  2. Gxy's Insane (4.64 stars, 1049 notes)
  3. Insane (4.77 stars, 1187 notes)
  4. Lyric's Hard (3.34 stars, 720 notes)
  5. Mei's Normal (2.07 stars, 358 notes)
  6. Yomi's Easy (1.63 stars, 250 notes)
  7. Zero's Insane (4.55 stars, 1184 notes)


Download: Hatsuki Yura - Eclipse Parade
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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27th beatmap #2 for ranked
Newpaper cup(Mapping contest) #4
No pp here , skip this map if you are farming PP ,
plz play this map if you don't like pp maps → GARNiDELiA - Gokuraku Jodo
FreeSongs' Expert #3 ------ by FreeSongs
Zero's Insane #2 ------ by Zero__wind https://osu.ppy.sh/s/430875
gxy's Insane #6 ------ by gxytcgxytc
Hard ------ Lyric
Normal ------ Mei
Easy ------ Tsukuyomi
Simple lyric storyboard by me
BG source
You can find the winner of newspaper cup here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/424357
also Misure's verson here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/430380
Iolite
我我我要送gd!(举手
Topic Starter
Vert

LunaSaika wrote:

我我我要送gd!(举手
我的妈妈呀,结果都塞过来了吗(
Kinomi
DreaM117er
這是準備摸到我吐血嗎?? 先說一下,歌曲太長我摸不了這麼多,絕不可能全摸。

我要是BN我才會全摸,只摸大概到我那圖等長 :?

[General]
  1. 沒用到的音效:
    normal-hitclap14.wav, soft-hitclap11.wav, soft-hitfinish11.wav, soft-hitwhistle11.wav
[Easy]
  1. 變速問題,之後看著辦
    00:41:152 - 這裡怎麼不擺1/1滑條?? 後面一些類似的地方都有的說;01:57:306 - 一樣
    01:29:037 (3) - 我記得Easy這個nazi必死
    01:32:498 (1) - 大概同上
    01:44:614 (2) - 之前找摸的時候,所有的人都說不要在低難度逆彎,希望Yoru把這個改掉
    02:48:652 (1) - 這顆DS跟錯了
    02:50:960 (1,2,3) - 這裡一定會被噴死;你之後看著吧,到時候改轉盤
[Mei妹妹]
  1. 你GG了,不用1/3作圖,低難度音沒對到必死
[Hard]
  1. 1/3的Hard可能就S醬處理的最好,1/3最好不要分開的太過;2/3的間距再分開來,1/3保持DS這樣最好,要不然光是讀圖都困難
    00:58:171 (2,3) - 就上面那個的舉例,我看這個就死定了
  2. 其他東西不摸,自己思考下
[Zero]

  • 00:04:517 (5) - Ctrl+G,我也不知道該怎麼說,很煩人?? 我自己的幾次經驗,反過來會比較好按好讀
    00:11:056 (4,5) - 太遠了太遠了,這個鐵定完蛋
    00:13:364 (3,4) - 同理^
    00:15:671 (4,5) - ^
  1. 後面就不點出來了,太占空間 (第一個Insane別搞得太難,會被噴死,間距什麼的掌握好一下,也比較好順利rank)
    00:19:133 (3) - 這circle沒有必要,刪掉它節奏也比較好
    00:21:440 (3) - 同理^
    00:50:094 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 據人哥說的,第一個Insane連打不超過9個,但不知道適不識用1/3的曲子
    00:58:171 - ???????;後面也不抓了,太超過
    01:01:921 (3) - 這個不要疊,拜託;後面同樣01:11:152 (3) - 。知道這是故意的梗,是坑死人的讀不來
    01:19:133 (3) - 多餘的,可以刪;後面也懶得抓了
    01:48:364 (4) - NC
  2. 摸到這裡停吧,感覺我已經摸完了整張圖的重點,後面基本也是一樣的問題
[Gxy]
  1. 我操你媽,做得太好了 :)
    ※我可以為這個難度射一顆星
[Vert]
  1. 好壯觀 :?
    ※不知道要怎麼摸給你比較好,還是射星給你好了2333

加油??? :?
yf_bmp
大方向我都说过了所以就多不写优点了
[FreeSongs' Expert]
好多遮挡挺乱的,还有些随机不等间距也造成比较乱的结果

01:42:017 (3,4) - 这种距离?知道想突出 但还是觉得略远 在这段气氛里。
01:43:171 (2,3) -
01:45:479 (2,3) -
01:45:479 (2,3) -
01:46:633 (3,4) -

[Insane]
开头的音效能不能解释下怎么回事,我塔码快聋了
好多finsih不如用soft的,参考01的难度

00:21:248 (2) - ctrl+g? 跟前面那个类似
00:47:498 (7) - nc
00:52:594 - 空了多奇怪

[Gxy's Insane]
细节美丽

00:10:575 (1,3) - 之前那个exciting的梗呢
00:12:883 (1,3) - ^

[01]
AR8 一个赛艇

[Lyric]
不看了 肯定神的不要不要的

[Mei's Normal]
开头音效?不说别的,那个sliderslide真吵。

1/3歌啊,那些1/2肯定不行

[尻老板]
摸泥煤

GL
Mei
1/3都改了
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: eclipse parade.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60190
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Eclipse Parade
TitleUnicode:Eclipse Parade
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Vert
Version:Mei's Normal
Source:
Tags:Newspaper Cup gxytcgxytc Mei Tsukuyomi Lyric FreeSongs Zero__wind drop 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu
BeatmapID:962396
BeatmapSetID:430339

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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339,306,251152,2,0,P|298:284|259:287,1,80,2|2,1:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
193,316,251729,2,0,P|170:276|185:236,1,80,2|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,252210,2,0,P|246:161|215:113,1,106.666666666667,4|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
151,107,252883,5,4,1:2:0:0:
79,142,253171,1,0,3:0:0:0:
121,210,253460,1,2,1:2:0:0:
52,250,253748,1,2,3:2:0:0:
45,329,254037,6,0,L|74:376,1,53.3333333333333,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
151,361,254517,2,0,P|198:322|237:289,1,106.666666666667,4|0,1:2|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,255190,12,4,257498,1:0:0:0:
151,62,259806,5,0,0:0:0:0:
386,155,262114,5,4,1:0:0:0:
Lyric

DreaM117er wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 1/3的Hard可能就S醬處理的最好,1/3最好不要分開的太過;2/3的間距再分開來,1/3保持DS這樣最好,要不然光是讀圖都困難
    00:58:171 (2,3) - 就上面那個的舉例,我看這個就死定了
  2. 其他東西不摸,自己思考下
    >>>哎,好。我也没什么好讲的。我也不管你S酱是谁,我也不管我今天是不是死定了。我就是做成这样,好玩。
Nothing.
Topic Starter
Vert

yf_bmp wrote:

[Insane]
开头的音效能不能解释下怎么回事,我塔码快聋了 哈哈哈哈,我复制的不知道怎么没复制好,应该开头是soft才对(跑
好多finsih不如用soft的,参考01的难度

00:21:248 (2) - ctrl+g? 跟前面那个类似
00:47:498 (7) - nc 确定加这吗。。我加在前面那个note上了
00:52:594 - 空了多奇怪 加了
JJburstOwO
[FreeSongs' Expert]
听说可以用中文 :3
绿线吓死人
00:58:940 (7) - Ctrl+J
01:00:767 (3) - ↓↓
01:12:594 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:39:421 - 第二段的滑条速度比第一段慢很多啊=-=
01:57:594 (4,5) - 用折返滑条
02:34:133 (3) - 摆远点
摸不出啦,神图!

[Insane]
00:00:960 (5) - 摆上面,因为后边00:01:537 (2,3,4,5) - 00:02:690 (2,3,4,5) - 都是一致的方向
00:16:633 (2) - 这个我我觉得Ctrl+G,因为00:16:921 (3,4,5) - 是从左到右顺着的
00:42:210 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
00:56:344 (4,5) - 和00:56:633 (1) - 的角度一样好看点,不过无所谓了
01:01:921 (4) - 这个和3中心对称
01:16:537 (2,3) - 这个间距不用特别变大的,因为后边01:16:921 (4,5,6,7) - 又变回来了
01:45:190 (1,2,3,4) - 有点乱,应该和前面一样两个一组平行
01:59:229 (2,3) - Ctrl+G,因为01:58:075 (2,3) - ↑ 01:58:364 (4,5) - ↓ 01:58:652 (6,7) - ↑ 01:58:941 (1) - ↓ 01:59:229 (2,3) - ↑
02:08:748 - 这个别漏吧,vocal和音乐都有变化
02:15:190 (1) - 拉长换掉10
02:20:671 (1) - 这个太小气了,放到(315,330)
02:51:537 (4) - NC
03:29:614 - 这边蛮好发挥的啊,留空不爽
03:56:730 (1) - 容易读错,叠着

[Gxy's Insane]
00:31:633 (1) - 蹭到了
00:38:267 (2,3,4) - 蹭到了
高星宇的难度不会摸啊=-= 感觉排列都有逻辑但是又迷之混乱

[Zero's Insane]
神麻婆的不用看了吧(

[Lyric's Hard]
02:26:440 (3,4) - 这里节奏有点怪,应该抓人声吧
02:29:614 (7) - 拆成两个
神!好整洁,节奏也perfect

NM EZ不看啦,检查一下AIMOD就行了

水摸 射一颗
Shad0w1and
可能需要统一combo color

[Freesong]
00:43:171 (2,3) - flow is is not good, make them closer or NC (3)
01:47:210 (5) - NC
02:14:902 (8) - nc
03:34:710 (1) - this slider is rather confusing, as you switched from instrument to vocal too sudden and then switched back. there is a missing beats at 03:34:806 - at least add 03:34:710 - a note b4 the slider

[Gxy]
00:03:844 (1) - 取消NC
00:03:652 (9) - NC这里或者不NC都行
00:38:267 (2,3,4) - overlap
00:46:344 (1,2,3,4) - 间距要不要统一
02:30:190 (1,2,3) - 排好
03:12:787 (6) - 包
03:32:402 (1,2,3) - 排好
03:33:364 (4,1) - overlap
03:43:940 (5) - NC
你是不是开着网格作图的....你这种排列风格怎么能用网格
Topic Starter
Vert

Shad0w1and wrote:

可能需要统一combo color 应该是不用,我记得同一个gder统一combo color就行
moonlightleaf
[妹妹]

00:01:344 (3) - 要不换个折返? 带起来比较舒服

00:10:575 (3,4) - 要不要试试跟这个音,

01:03:075 (3,4) - DS

01:06:825 (4) - 按照前面滑条上提 我觉得放在(168,272)这样子

01:16:056 (6) - 试试这样放6(44,295)?

转盘结束在 01:18:364 - 可好?

01:52:114 (3,4) - 没什么,可不改

02:09:325 (2) - 放在02:09:421 -

02:24:614 (2) - 单点放02:24:710 -可行,

02:32:498 (1,2) - 建议改改

转盘结束在02:52:690 -

03:20:383 (4,5,1) -

03:52:114 (1,2) - 似乎是唯一一个stack,感觉没必要...

04:14:037 (1) - 按照你前面的1234摆放,这个放(96,316)会顺些

[歌词]

太晚了,明天补上

Sampleset:Drum 我觉得不太合适

00:29:517 - 补note?

00:34:133 - ^

01:02:979 (2) - 这个其实只是歌声的延长,并没有其他音,删

04:05:671 (8,9,10,1) - wtf 3分拍4连

[学妹I]

太晚了,明天补上

02:17:402 (1,2) - 这个着实有点远 5x DS....

02:54:998 (5,6) - ^

04:06:249 (3,4) - ^ 很多这类的,不再提,作为Insane ,友好度-5

02:22:979 (8,1) - 这类的你都是2连的 这里却是空拍 容易被误读

03:10:479 (1) - 感觉放个note再转盘03:10:479 -很有打击感的,适合note

03:29:517 (2) - 加note

没有找到什么有价值的建议
Gust
[Insane]
00:45:094 (1,2) - 00:56:633 (1) - 01:03:556 (1) - 01:59:518 (4) - 02:40:479 (1,2) - 像这种地方我觉得不需要跟vocal(现在有种强行跟vocal的感觉?),拆成circle+slider会好一些。这么爽的二连图索性就做彻底一点,这种跟vocal跟底音都合适的就全都跟底音做二连好了 8-)
01:06:825 (8,1) - 02:22:979 (8,1) - 03:56:441 (8,1) - 在满是二连的情况下塞这么个梗真是坑啊。。
01:08:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 这是南瓜形状吗
02:06:440 (4,5,6) - 03:01:921 (6,7,8) - 04:03:171 (6,1,2) - 类似的视觉上看并不好,遮太多了。(应该无所谓)
02:15:190 (1,2,3,4) - 四个slider统一向下方向比较好?
02:41:921 (2,3,4,5) - 同,不需要跟vocal,感觉有点奇怪 :D

大约没了,这二连图好棒!
gxytcgxytc

waiaifu wrote:

[Gxy's Insane]
细节美丽

00:10:575 (1,3) - 之前那个exciting的梗呢
00:12:883 (1,3) - ^
怕DQ 据人说够DQ好几次了.-.

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Gxy's Insane]
00:31:633 (1) - 蹭到了
00:38:267 (2,3,4) - 蹭到了
高星宇的难度不会摸啊=-= 感觉排列都有逻辑但是又迷之混乱
改了 我也觉得很乱

Shad0w1and wrote:

[Gxy]
00:03:844 (1) - 取消NC
00:03:652 (9) - NC这里或者不NC都行
00:38:267 (2,3,4) - overlap
00:46:344 (1,2,3,4) - 间距要不要统一
02:30:190 (1,2,3) - 排好
03:12:787 (6) - 包
03:32:402 (1,2,3) - 排好
03:33:364 (4,1) - overlap 什么意思
03:43:940 (5) - NC
你是不是开着网格作图的....你这种排列风格怎么能用网格
其他大概都改了

thx~
FreeSongs

yf_bmp wrote:

大方向我都说过了所以就多不写优点了
[FreeSongs' Expert]
好多遮挡挺乱的,还有些随机不等间距也造成比较乱的结果

01:42:017 (3,4) - 这种距离?知道想突出 但还是觉得略远 在这段气氛里。 这里重新摆了下,现在近了不少
01:43:171 (2,3) -
01:45:479 (2,3) -
01:45:479 (2,3) -
01:46:633 (3,4) -

GL

JJburstOwO wrote:

[FreeSongs' Expert]
听说可以用中文 :3
绿线吓死人 种草很累的qwq
00:58:940 (7) - Ctrl+J 这个跟后面02:14:902 (1,2) - 距离是差不多的, 不改啦
01:00:767 (3) - ↓↓ 这里那个跟后面还有blanket, 不改啦
01:12:594 (5) - Ctrl+G
01:39:421 - 第二段的滑条速度比第一段慢很多啊=-= 其实不慢>< 只是加速滑条全变成circle了
01:57:594 (4,5) - 用折返滑条
02:34:133 (3) - 摆远点
摸不出啦,神图!<3

Shad0w1and wrote:

可能需要统一combo color

[Freesong]
00:43:171 (2,3) - flow is is not good, make them closer or NC (3) moved them closer
01:47:210 (5) - NC fixed!
02:14:902 (8) - nc fixed!
03:34:710 (1) - this slider is rather confusing, as you switched from instrument to vocal too sudden and then switched back. there is a missing beats at 03:34:806 - at least add 03:34:710 - a note b4 the slider I think I was mainly following vocal while adding some beats based on instrument, so there was like a mix between these two. Added a note here instead 03:35:094 -
Thanks for modding!

update: http://puu.sh/oMMe5/f7f44e0ca1.osu
Topic Starter
Vert

Frost Moon wrote:

[Insane]
00:45:094 (1,2) - 00:56:633 (1) - 01:03:556 (1) - 01:59:518 (4) - 02:40:479 (1,2) - 像这种地方我觉得不需要跟vocal(现在有种强行跟vocal的感觉?),拆成circle+slider会好一些。这么爽的二连图索性就做彻底一点,这种跟vocal跟底音都合适的就全都跟底音做二连好了 8-)我作图下节奏的原则是先跟vocal然后有音的地方就干他的娘塞爆,那么没有音的地方自然我也不会overmap
01:06:825 (8,1) - 02:22:979 (8,1) - 03:56:441 (8,1) - 在满是二连的情况下塞这么个梗真是坑啊。。还好吧。。我比较喜欢这种顿一下的感觉
01:08:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 这是南瓜形状吗 并不是233,后面9 10 1是为了包下面的滑条
02:06:440 (4,5,6) - 03:01:921 (6,7,8) - 04:03:171 (6,1,2) - 类似的视觉上看并不好,遮太多了。(应该无所谓) 抄的宵暗花火
02:15:190 (1,2,3,4) - 四个slider统一向下方向比较好? 没必要吧。。同一方向flow感觉不好
02:41:921 (2,3,4,5) - 同,不需要跟vocal,感觉有点奇怪 :D同第一条

moonlightleaf wrote:

[学妹I]

太晚了,明天补上

02:17:402 (1,2) - 这个着实有点远 5x DS....全图都是kick slider所以其实这个实际打起来只是个2.5x的跳

02:54:998 (5,6) - ^

04:06:249 (3,4) - ^ 很多这类的,不再提,作为Insane ,友好度-5 我当然目标是做个ex但是星上不去不是我的锅

02:22:979 (8,1) - 这类的你都是2连的 这里却是空拍 容易被误读 nc了不慌,给别人试图的时候还没发现有读错的

03:10:479 (1) - 感觉放个note再转盘03:10:479 -很有打击感的,适合note 可以

03:29:517 (2) - 加note 感觉没必要。。隔得有点远

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Insane]
00:00:960 (5) - 摆上面,因为后边00:01:537 (2,3,4,5) - 00:02:690 (2,3,4,5) - 都是一致的方向
00:16:633 (2) - 这个我我觉得Ctrl+G,因为00:16:921 (3,4,5) - 是从左到右顺着的 没必要。。因为我作图的时候压根就没那么想。。还是这样比较顺
00:42:210 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
00:56:344 (4,5) - 和00:56:633 (1) - 的角度一样好看点,不过无所谓了 故意斜点的,一样了太呆板,我试过
01:01:921 (4) - 这个和3中心对称
01:16:537 (2,3) - 这个间距不用特别变大的,因为后边01:16:921 (4,5,6,7) - 又变回来了 好,因为绑定了sv所以就放大了,改小了
01:45:190 (1,2,3,4) - 有点乱,应该和前面一样两个一组平行 没错,23平行14平行,本来就是2个一组啊
01:59:229 (2,3) - Ctrl+G,因为01:58:075 (2,3) - ↑ 01:58:364 (4,5) - ↓ 01:58:652 (6,7) - ↑ 01:58:941 (1) - ↓ 01:59:229 (2,3) - ↑
02:08:748 - 这个别漏吧,vocal和音乐都有变化
02:15:190 (1) - 拉长换掉10 可以,前面类似的也改了
02:20:671 (1) - 这个太小气了,放到(315,330)
02:51:537 (4) - NC
03:29:614 - 这边蛮好发挥的啊,留空不爽 留着吧,休息一下
03:56:730 (1) - 容易读错,叠着 还好吧,全图都没有叠着的,我找了几个试图的也都没读错
thx for modding
Topic Starter
Vert
帮yomi 和 mei 改摸

moonlightleaf wrote:

[妹妹]

00:01:344 (3) - 要不换个折返? 带起来比较舒服 感觉没必要

00:10:575 (3,4) - 要不要试试跟这个音, 不弄这么复杂了,善良点好

01:03:075 (3,4) - DS fixed

01:06:825 (4) - 按照前面滑条上提 我觉得放在(168,272)这样子

01:16:056 (6) - 试试这样放6(44,295)?

转盘结束在 01:18:364 - 可好? 后面大白线正好是一节结束,所以

01:52:114 (3,4) - 没什么,可不改 差不多,就不改了

02:09:325 (2) - 放在02:09:421 -

02:24:614 (2) - 单点放02:24:710 -可行, 可以

02:32:498 (1,2) - 建议改改

转盘结束在02:52:690 - 同前

03:20:383 (4,5,1) - 就现在这样吧,没必要用同一个梗

03:52:114 (1,2) - 似乎是唯一一个stack,感觉没必要...改了

04:14:037 (1) - 按照你前面的1234摆放,这个放(96,316)会顺些 感觉现在可以,没必要

DreaM117er wrote:

[General]
  1. 沒用到的音效:
    normal-hitclap14.wav, soft-hitclap11.wav, soft-hitfinish11.wav, soft-hitwhistle11.wav
删了
[Easy]
  1. 變速問題,之後看著辦 虽然我也支持不用变速不过既然做了轻微的变一点应该没问题
    00:41:152 - 這裡怎麼不擺1/1滑條?? 後面一些類似的地方都有的說;01:57:306 - 一樣 跟的vocal不用非得map上吧
    01:29:037 (3) - 我記得Easy這個nazi必死 见过很多rank的这种滑条,大概没问题
    01:32:498 (1) - 大概同上 ^
    01:44:614 (2) - 之前找摸的時候,所有的人都說不要在低難度逆彎,希望Yoru把這個改掉 还好吧,这个是包后面的滑条,而且弯也不大
    02:48:652 (1) - 這顆DS跟錯了 视觉上一样就行了吧,所以不改
    02:50:960 (1,2,3) - 這裡一定會被噴死;你之後看著吧,到時候改轉盤 先保留吧,我也觉得这个比较jb,看后面的bn怎么说
thx for modding again

and all updated except Lyric's hard
Lyric

JJburstOwO wrote:

[Lyric's Hard]
02:26:440 (3,4) - 这里节奏有点怪,应该抓人声吧 >>>这里为了保持连贯是不应该mapvocal的。
02:29:614 (7) - 拆成两个 >>>这里是相对平静的阶段,不应该让玩家打得太累。

moonlightleaf wrote:

[歌词]

太晚了,明天补上

Sampleset:Drum 我觉得不太合适 >>>哦?我看到不是Drum的说。

00:29:517 - 补note? >>>非副歌的这一部分我想突出一下重音。

00:34:133 - ^

01:02:979 (2) - 这个其实只是歌声的延长,并没有其他音,删 >>>副歌开始应该是为了连贯的感觉加这一个吧。

04:05:671 (8,9,10,1) - wtf 3分拍4连 >>>you are right i 把 here 改成了 one repeat slider.
thanks for your mods and below is an update
http://puu.sh/oOXAV/97756ae124.7z
Harrharrqi
图很好玩
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