1. Ami-Insane (4.93 stars, 270 notes)
2. Kitamura-Normal (2.8 stars, 104 notes)
3. lovhin's Ryuji-Easy (1.26 stars, 73 notes)
4. Ono's Taiko (4.94 stars, 389 notes)
5. Taiga-Hard (4.44 stars, 168 notes)
6. vincerio's Minori-Insane (4.98 stars, 314 notes)

Saten-san wrote:

The link on your signature doesn't work btw

Star~

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~

Weezy wrote:

jameskong1 wrote:

NICE~~
can I make a hard diff?.?
star~

Sure go right ahead

jameskong1 wrote:

Wow a quick response~

Saten-san wrote:

Happy New Year Weezy!

Here's something unexpected

ziin wrote:

Good news everyone, I like toradora, so I guess I'll mod this.

[general]
Delete the osb if you're not using it and redo the full submit. Doesn't have to happen immediately.

[sounds]
this is a clapping song, at least during kiai. usually claps are found on beats 2 and 4, but there are some spots where it goes 2,4,2,4,2,4,2,e of 3,+ of 3,4 (go play http://osu.ppy.sh/s/12216 for the last part of this rhythm). I think a whistle on beats 1 and 3 or wherever there is a bass drum hit sound really good.

[easy]

SPOILER

this is too hard for an easy IMO. The map's not fun due to lack of a downbeat. Since I think easy is better than normal, I'll try to provide suggestions to get the beats off the red notes and onto the white ones.
00:04:330 copy what you did before or do this:

00:11:663 keep on with the sliders, ignore the lyrics.
00:13:219 (3,4) good, keep these.
00:22:108 go with the half beat here.
00:29:219 half beat sliders here so it seems like it picks up, but you're still hitting the same beats. You can add in a few red notes, but keep it mostly white.
00:57:441 get rid of this beat
01:01:219 repeat what you did earlier
01:06:552 shorten the slider to make it have a red beat in the middle, and add a beat where the end of the slider used to be.
01:11:663 repeat what you did earlier, perhaps spice it up a little with a note on every white beat now.
01:14:774 extend the previous slider to here (remove repeater and add a clap to go with music)
silence the spinner at the end.

[normal+]

SPOILER

You've got a perfect clapping song, yet you're using zero claps. There's only a few sections with claps built in. You've got a nice bass drum going most of the time but only on the beat. I think emphasizing that with a whistle on every bass hit sounds good.
00:13:219 this is like, the perfect spot for a spinner.
00:44:997 finish
00:50:108 not digging the slider
00:52:108 finish
00:52:330 this doesn't match the previous two.
00:53:663 just stack 3 and 4
00:54:552 If you put in a spinner earlier, take out this spinner and put in beats plus a long slider.
01:27:219 end spinner here
01:27:886 start a straight slider here until 01:28:552

The kiai section doesn't really follow either the lyrics or the beat faithfully, and there's breaks in the beats for no apparent reason (where there should be claps!).

[palm top tiger]

SPOILER

insane is anything goes. I sort of like the map, but there are parts which are overstepped. If there's one thing I hate, it's notes or beats on something that is not in the BGM, and this map is chock full of them, so that's the only thing I'm going to point out (if I don't say anything it's because there is no beat in the BGM at this spot). Don't get me wrong, I like streams, just not when you made it up.
00:03:997
00:06:997
00:07:552
00:11:330 there IS a beat here
00:13:663
00:14:108 to 00:14:997 is rageworthy.
00:27:663 to 00:29:219 has beats on most of those notes, but there's a ewi playing which leaves out a few beats, and you should too.
00:42:663
00:42:886
00:53:997 the notes in this section which have that mid range note in the background need a finish (you've got it right in normal+
00:55:886
00:56:219
00:56:441
00:56:886
01:19:663 double check that you want this slider here and not on the blue note. She sings something different which sounds better than just following the beat IMO.
01:27:663 most of these beats are made up.

I like the maps and the song, but the made up notes are a deal breaker for me, so I can't give you a star unless you fix the streams. I think that taking away notes makes a rhythm much more interesting (and somewhat harder too).

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:4091d]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:4091d]

Weezy wrote:

vincerio wrote:

offset 110
Audio lead-in 2000

[attachment=0:aaffd]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [vincerio].osu[/attachment:aaffd]

fixed the offset and will fix the audio leading in the next update (forgot to now and im pretty lazy )

thanks for the diff If you don't like the name let me know!

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

とらドラ!

vincerio's Minori has a different audio lead-in Changed earlier

Ryuji

fine

Kitamura

00:04:109~00:05:221 like the pic that i shown

00:04:109 (x) - add a circle and 00:04:554(1) - make this slider start at 00:04:332
00:04:544(1) - make more smooth?
[attachment=1:0314e]1.png[/attachment:0314e]

01:16:766(4) - look not pretty enough since overlap with (1) (2)

try it
[attachment=0:0314e]2.png[/attachment:0314e]

01:23:887(3) - change the shape to make a symmetry

Taiga

00:00:998(2) - del?
00:47:665(5) - X:216 Y:168
00:48:109(1) - X:380 Y:168
00:48:998(2) - move 1 grid down (lv3)

at kiai time

it would be better to add hitsounds like Kitamura or Ami Nope seems ok now

Ami

00:24:998(3) - move 1 grid left (lv4)
00:57:665(1) - finish
01:12:332(3) - move 1 grid down (lv4)


overall,quite well

starrrrrrrr

loveFantasy wrote:

Hi~

[Ryuji]
some notes are 2 beat away from each other while some are 3/2 beat away, this might confuse newbies Really don't see a problem with this

<00:06:775> (3,4,5) you should change up the pattern, dont stack 4 nope
<00:15:220> (1,2,3,4) is empty, suggest makes 2,3,4 into slider that start at 00:16:109, 00:16:998 and 00:17:887 Did something else along these lines
<00:26:331> this is what i mentioned at the start nope
<00:46:998> (1,2) combine into slider Nope
<01:01:220> (1,2) you're following lyrics, but 2 is uncomfortable at this place than 01:02:109, especially when this combo is after one at 00:57:664, which is the regular pattern Fixed

[Kitamura]

<00:04:109> (6,1) add new combo on 6, and stack with 1 (remove new combo), you may need to rearrange position Will stack but No combo change
<00:53:664> (1) suggest move closer to the middle and remove new combo nope

[Taiga]
is a comfortable diff

<01:00:775> a bit empty, you may try to add a note here or extend slider at 00:59:442
<01:04:331> ^ to make gameflow symmetrical, you should modify here if you modify above part
<01:14:998> a bit empty, i'd like a hitsound here rather than at 01:14:775 done

this is individual feeling and you may ignore them, but hope you try it
^Not all done^

[Ami]

<00:54:775> a bit weird jump nope.

star

Shiirn wrote:

General
I don't like your difficulty names, but tough shit for me, eh? Might add the actually diff name like Ami's Insane later on but I'm not ditching the character's name

Ryuji
I honestly don't know what this is following. This diff was kinda hard to make :/
01:25:887 (1,1) - These are a bad idea for an easy diff. Fixed

Kitamura
00:20:776 (4) - This isn't perfect. Fix it up a bit.
00:41:442 (6) - ^. This looks 90% better symmetrizededed.
Done

Taiga
01:28:775 (1) - Spinner's pretty short. auto gets 2000 fine here

Ami
00:37:664 (4) - Spacing. Fiddle with it on grid4 until it's 0.97 to 3/5. Fixed
The entire thing is rather linear and uninteresting, but I really liked the jump bit at 00:53:664 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). Try to make more like that?
I can't find any other good spots :/

Star'd

lovhin456 wrote:

Hey ~ >w<

General;
- I really think Ryuji is better than Kitamura >w<
- You have 2 osb. files, 1 is okk but 2 is bad, delete both and full-sub

Ryuji;
- Ehhh, well is a good Easy, it makes a good Easy, kind of boring . . . and that's it, it just makes a good "easy" I don't like it ;w;
- At the spinner at the very end, you use soft sample set, but in Kitamura you use normal O:
- Umm, I made . . . I made an Easy for you !! I hope is okk and that you like it >w< Of course is your choice to use it or not ~
[attachment=0:c823b]Yui Horie - Silky Heart (TV Size) (Weezy) [Ryuji].osu[/attachment:c823b]

Kitamura;
- 00:06:553 (4,5) >> Aling (4) with (2) and (5) with (3)
- 01:15:887 (2,3) >> Make a slider instead ~

Taiga;
- Wtf ? Taiga is not the hardest diff ? >w<
- Errm, again nice, just nice . . .

Ami;
- 00:02:998 >> Delete
- 00:03:442 >> ^
- 00:29:109 >> Aling better with (4)

vincerio's Minori;
- Minorin will suit better ~
- I hate Minori . . . really, just a little ~ xD
- 00:48:554 >> New combo

Overall;
- I totally hate whistles for this song, sorry, but I don't think they fit the song at all

* Star