1. 00:07:505 - This circle can be easily be deleted because seriously, there's no beat here that could make "the supposed" sound emphasized. What I meant by "the supposed" is, there's no beat at this point, so why adding an object here when it doesn't follow the vocal nor the instrument? If you delete it, you should also move at least this circle, or the next slider to make your spacing consistent. I will give you two examples on what you could do:
   
   Examples

   Example 1
   
   
   Example 2
   
   
   In other word, you can place these objects where ever you want!
2. 00:13:220 (1) - This can be a bit hard because after spinning, the spinner finishes with an hitburst, which can hide the note right after the spinner. It can be confusing for some, but for some other, it will be easy. So in other word, don't take any precaution and change it? Also, I would like to suggest you something with these three circles. Since it's an Easy difficulty, wouldn't it be better if you replace these 3 circles by a slider? It will be more easier than clicking three times. Here's an example:
   
   Example+code

   
   
   Here's the code in case you want the slider I've did on the picture.
   

   100,280,13220,6,0,P|152:356|236:316,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:15:005 - It's exactly the same thing as I've mentioned on the first suggestion. This circle isn't emphasizing any vocals and it would be easier and better if you delete it. If you do that, you must move the next circle to keep the spacing consistent. If the spacing aren't consistent, it may be too Hard, may create a jump in some situations. Here's an example of what you could do:
   
   Example

   
4. 00:18:041 (2,3) - These circles are just.. not acceptable for an Easy difficulty. First, they are stacked and beginners aren't ready to have this kind of thing for now. It will better if you maybe, keep the same rhythm, but in a different way instead of stacking two circles together. So I want to suggest you to replace the circle 1 and 2 by a slider and with the slider, you should keep the flow you had with the previous slider (the reverse one). I suggest you to have a curved slider like that.
   
   With this rhythm

   
5. 00:20:720 (1,2) - At this part, there's alot of 1/2 rhythm which will sound a bit annoying for some and also, really boring to click. I would suggest you to delete the circle (5) and (6) and make the slider (4) longer. By doing this, it's going to be way more easy and of course, less boring. Here's what I want you to do.
6. 00:23:220 (1,2,3,4) - I've said something similar above, but it's not the same thing since it's not stacked but it's pretty close it each other. You should make these circles way more easier for beginners since it's an Easy difficulty. I will suggest you to replace these circle with 1/2 sliders. For an example, the circles (1,2) will make a 1/2 slider and the circles (3,4) will make another 1/2 slider. By doing this, it will be easier since they won't click twice since it will only be a simple 1/2 slider. Also, it will keep the same rhythm you've did, but differently.
7. 00:24:648 (1) - Since the four previous objects are pointing down, it would be better if you do the same thing to keep the same pattern, by moving it down. Move this circle to x:48 y:336. If you do that, make sure that your next objects has the same spacing consistency ad the previous spacings.
   Here's an example of pattern you could do:
   
   Example+Code

   
   
   As you can see on the picture, I've deleted the circle at 00:26:434 to replace it by a reverse arrow. What do you think of it? Also, here's the code, in case you want to whole pattern. If you accept this, you would need to rearrange the spacing after 00:27:863 (3) - , since it won't be consistent!
   

   48,336,24648,5,8,0:0:0
   48,240,25005,1,0,0:0:0
   120,168,25363,1,8,0:0:0
   120,72,25720,2,0,B|8:72,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   200,128,26791,6,0,B|308:128,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   392,88,27505,1,8,0:0:0
   376,184,27863,2,0,B|440:184|440:336|376:336,2,200

8. 00:30:720 (3) - Instead of coming back and staking it with the circle (1), why wouldn't you do a diamond form? (Aka, square and all this thing..) To be honest, it will be good for your next object if it wasn't stacked with the circle (1). So for here.. I would like you to move it to x:156 y:224 to make a good and simple diamond form.
9. 00:31:077 (4,2,3) - That's completely a wrong thing. It stacks with the beginning of the previous slider, it can be first, unreadable for some users; second, well, it looks a bit awkward and three, the stacking can hide the circle (2) which will be bad and as said for the first point, it may be unreadable by beginners. I will suggest you to move it somewhere else to make beginners' life a bit easier. For an example, you could do something very simple. Click on the box below. Also, if you do something similar to what I've mentioned, make sure to rearrange the spacing of your next objects.
   
   Example

   
10. 00:37:148 (2,1) - Don't you think the emplacement of these objects look a bit.. awkward? It would be better if you do something else. Mostly that it's because you have the same form, placed in the same way, but the second one has a reverse arrow. But still, that looks a bit awkward and they are overlapping each others. You could actually do something better, that may look with the two previous sliders, but somewhere else. Here's an example:
    
    Example

    
11. 01:25:720 (3) - I would like you to unstack this slider with the previous circle. Like I've told you some points above, it's not pretty good to stack objects together when it's an Easy difficulty. Normally, these kind of stacks can fit well on a Normal, but not an Easy. For this slider, I will suggest you to move it at around x:444 y:88. If you do that, make sure your next objects has the same spacing.
12. 01:29:648 (3,4) - Same thing has said on the previous point, I would like you to unstack these object. but this one, it's a bit easier to unstack since it won't affect the spacing of the next object. Here's my example:
    
    Example

    
13. 01:30:720 (1,2,3) - I will point two things here. First, the object (1) and (3) aren't pretty well stacked, which will look a bit odd if they aren't since they are pretty close already. Second, the way beginners will move the mouse to click these circles, it's not pretty good. I will give you a suggestion that may be, pretty good. With what I've told you on the previous point, I would like you to move the circle (1) at x:312 y:300, the circle (2) at x:236 y:368 and the slider (3) to x:164 y:300. By doing this, it won't affect any spacing after the slider (3), it will make a diamond form and it will looks good and easier with the suggestion above. Here's what it should look like:
    
    Example

    
14. 01:36:434 (5,6) - The emplacement of the previous objects were pretty good since there was no stacks and then, there's these two circles which are stacked and may be difficult for beginners. Try to move the circle (6) somewhere else and rearrange the spacing of the next objects, to make the spacing consistent. Also, I think you've forgot to add a clap to the circle (6). If it was intentional, you should add one to keep the consistency with your previous and next claps. When I've heard that there was no claps here, it sounded a bit awkward and it would be better if you add one.
15. 01:42:863 (1,2) - I am not against the stacking of these sliders, but the problem here is the stack with the object (6) and (1). It's not pretty good since the sliders (1) and (2) are already stacked, so in other word, it's making three objects stacked together. So, it doesn't make it great.
16. For the slider 01:45:720 (1) - and 01:48:577 (1) - I think you didn't added claps to both slider's end because the song is not loud, but you should actually keep the consistency with the claps by added claps to both slider's ends.
17. 01:47:148 (2,1) - This isn't a pretty good spacing. The slider (2) points at the right, so if you were keeping the flow here, you would have made the slider (1) pointing down. Right now, it's not pretty good since you're making a jump between the end of the slider (2) and the beginning of the slider (1). You should make something else here to make it easier.
18. 02:07:863 (3) - Since most of you patterns has stacked notes in 1/3, It would be better if you don't stack this slider with the previous circle which is placed in 1/4. So I normally think you should move this slider somewhere else to keep the spacing consistency with your 1/4 objects.
19. 02:10:005 (5) - Add a new combo here because right now, the combo it's pretty long and it would fit with the vocal and the previous combos if you add a new combo. I guess you've just forgot to.

kanpakyin wrote:

Nothing more to say, two years is long enough.

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Pereira006 wrote:

OMG !

long time no see, Komeiji Yuki !

CONGRATZ !!!!!!

spboxer3 wrote:

恭喜了~

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OnosakiHito wrote:

Unbelivable old. Old like a stone.

Congratulation for rank, you really deserve it after such long time.