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thx for -0.05 SR, now just -0.39 to go
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[General]
  1. 00:16:938 - 01:44:459 - 02:06:339 - red line here should offset-20
  2. 05:01:380 - offset -10
  3. from 09:40:352 - to 10:40:181 - timing seem off too


[longest map i have modded]
  1. 00:49:758 (1) - extend to 00:50:100 - , feel not good if have a sound on 00:50:014 -
  2. 00:57:621 (1) - same
  3. 02:41:542 (8,1) - could be closer, spacing looks like 1/2 with 02:41:884 (1,2) -
  4. 04:52:149 (1) - for me, move this under 04:51:807 (1) - will be better
  5. 05:01:038 (1) - so good for song, but i'm worry it will be easy to sliderbreak(tail)
  6. 05:44:798 (1) - same
  7. 05:41:209 (1,2) - how about ctrl+g
  8. 06:02:405 (3) - stack better with 06:01:892 (1) - tail
  9. 06:20:696 (1) - ctrl+g? i think 06:20:354 (3) - to 06:20:696 (1) - should be have a lager spacing(06:21:038 (2,3,4) - same, if you apply)
  10. 08:18:643 (2) - how about stop at 08:18:899 - then make a kick slider on 08:18:985 - , 08:18:985 - have sound, it could be clickable
  11. 08:40:181 - streams are too long, it make pressure for playing marathon map, i recommend make some reverse slider for a break like this
  12. 08:59:412 (1) - directly stop at 09:02:062 - , 09:02:062 (1) - i think it's too suddenly, also 09:01:891 - seem on sound to support it stop at here
  13. 09:19:925 (1) - same
  14. 12:40:351 (6) - nc here
  15. 14:18:128 (2) - move to x33 y156, stacking feel boring
  16. 14:39:837 (1) - AImod said unsnapped at the end, also you have two green line in same time
  17. 18:31:631 (3) - ctrl+g


i think it will need a timing check
/me dead
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@Rizia

18:31:631 (3) - ctrl+g -nah, the reason I won't ctrl+g is the flow, when u aim for this slider u go from right to left, and then 18:32:143 (2,3,4) aiming for this u go from left to right, creating that anti-flow movement, basically the movement (18:30:947 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) is alternating from left to right
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[General]
  1. 00:16:938 - 01:44:459 - 02:06:339 - red line here should offset-20
  2. 05:01:380 - offset -10
  3. from 09:40:352 - to 10:40:181 - timing seem off too


[longest map i have modded]
  1. 00:49:758 (1) - extend to 00:50:100 - , feel not good if have a sound on 00:50:014 - there is specific sound on blue tick that I mapped it to though
  2. 00:57:621 (1) - same fix this one though
  3. 02:41:542 (8,1) - could be closer, spacing looks like 1/2 with 02:41:884 (1,2) -
  4. 04:52:149 (1) - for me, move this under 04:51:807 (1) - will be better moved down but did something different for aesthetic
  5. 05:01:038 (1) - so good for song, but i'm worry it will be easy to sliderbreak(tail) so far testing players had to problem and it's too cool to change lol
  6. 05:44:798 (1) - same this will be even easier to expect after the first one
  7. 05:41:209 (1,2) - how about ctrl+g
  8. 06:02:405 (3) - stack better with 06:01:892 (1) - tail visible on purpose for readability
  9. 06:20:696 (1) - ctrl+g? i think 06:20:354 (3) - to 06:20:696 (1) - should be have a lager spacing(06:21:038 (2,3,4) - same, if you apply) I agree partly, but I think changing flow here is enough pressure instead of extra spacing, like the playability from 06:20:354 (3,1) - is different than the whole circle flow motion at 06:20:696 (1,2,3,4) -
  10. 08:18:643 (2) - how about stop at 08:18:899 - then make a kick slider on 08:18:985 - , 08:18:985 - have sound, it could be clickable put more emphasis on drums so I don't want to focus on more than one thing here
  11. 08:40:181 - streams are too long, it make pressure for playing marathon map, i recommend make some reverse slider for a break like this I won't be able to sleep at night now :(:(:(
  12. 08:59:412 (1) - directly stop at 09:02:062 - , 09:02:062 (1) - i think it's too suddenly, also 09:01:891 - seem on sound to support it stop at here I want to have it clickable cause of new song section start :( kinda feels better for me
  13. 09:19:925 (1) - same this one has strong sound on spinner end so I think this fits well
  14. 12:40:351 (6) - nc here how come? it just makes it inconsistant with 12:29:411 (5) -


i think it will need a timing check
/me dead sori
fixed all but red
I feel that timing is ok, but maybe someone can check to make sure
put -10 offset global and removed all unnecessary red lines

thank you!
posted

Rizia wrote:

[*]14:18:128 (2) - move to x33 y156, stacking feel boring 1/1 vocals for the stack, 1/2 vocals for the jumps
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posted
Loved the map except found stream starting at 8:39:00 to be.. Shitty

It's just my opinion but..
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I like it too
posted
checked the map and it should be ready to go
good luck
#1
posted
late sorz m4m

[general]
  1. maybe its just me but i find the clap used in the kiai (N:C25) really loud and sometimes i feel it overpowers the songs too much zz up to u


[marathon]
  1. putting the spinners on 1/16 seems kinda unneeded but w/e
  2. 00:37:526 (1) - would prefer if you ended it on 1/2 instead, having such small gap size isnt that nice tbh especially when most of ur other spinners have a 1/2 gap
  3. 01:44:278 (1) - 02:04:791 (1,2,3,4) - stuff like this plays really lame and u know it xd, but since u spammed gap patterns nonstop i guess its fine.. (the 2nd one has a cool pattern thooo)
  4. 02:06:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - for this whole part; i feel really lost here, all the 5-note streams all have different and varying spacing.. some are really small like 0.2, some are 0.5 0.7 1.0?? i see the consistency in the really small spacing after sliders and the 1.0 in stream spam (02:13:764 (4,5) - seems inconsistent tho etc.etc.), but stuff like 02:12:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - is like a lost puppy :(:(
  5. 04:03:935 (1,2,3,4) - sounds pretty empty compared to how you mapped this song
  6. 04:50:430 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i think the player knows it after the first two sliders; the sv's change. i dont think this spam is need at all (the one at the end of the song makes more sense and has a bigger purpose, bc everything overlaps + the changes are more intensde)
  7. 05:28:721 (1,2,3,4) - while this antispacing is probably intended, i feel this really kills the intensity here, one of the louder (kiai too) parts as well. try ctrlging (2,3)? u do this later in the song too tho... oh well
  8. 06:48:037 (1,1) - since there's a vocal at 1/2, would end it there as well. previous slow sliders were 1/2 too so 1/4 is a biiiit confusing here
  9. 10:40:516 (1) - just to be safe, i wouldnt have the slider end completely on the body if u get what i mean, kinda messes with reading / clear slider track
  10. 12:08:892 (7) - 12:11:627 (7) - having the clap on the slider end sounds a bit iffy and plays weird <_<
  11. 12:45:735 (4) - having to start on the blue tick here is really uncomfortable and (4,5,6,7) plays like a 4note stream now which is feels really out of the place here and isnt predictable at all. i really hope you can change this
  12. 12:51:291 (2,3,4) - even tho only basing on the instruments it makes sense to have these two alone, but as someone who mapped this song too, i found that the vocals are more prominent and feel that they deserve something on their own instead of just being part of a pattern
  13. 13:02:060 (3,4,5,6,7) - 13:12:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 13:23:940 (5,6,7,8,9) - both stacked, different snap, right after each other = lame. also, the sounds on (6,7) are so strong, kinda expected some form of spacing in between tbh (13:35:052 (7,8,9,1) - are less strong, yet spaced wot)
  14. 14:07:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - depending on how people play extended sliders this can play a bit strange for some due to the burst playing like a 4-note in some cases. some players prefer to switch keys with entended slider and some just singletap it ... up to u
  15. 14:13:342 (5,6) - too far for 1/8 pattern
  16. 14:41:205 (1) - for this song; i feel that the spacing could b improved more.. its really hard to grasp the concept of your extended sliders in terms of spacing. the spacing used for 1/4 and 1/2 always changes and even the 3/4 spacings themselves tend to fluctuate a lot. this wouldve been fine if the spacing changes were minimal, but they are spaced quite largely to the extent it kinda worries me :/ wish you could b more consistent
  17. really gj on the koven one, tho i kinda wish 16:29:838 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - would also be consistent with the other streams... yes this one has vocal + beats too but 16:07:958 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - for example is spaced like that too..
  18. pishi god polarity and rhythm usage done right thank u


As mentioned in my mod, I feel like some parts could have some patching up in terms of spacing 'n consistency.

As you know from the past, I cannot really agree with your mapping style sometimes, but let me know when you apply this mod and I'll can see what I can do. Most of the things look pretty good though.

Again, sorry for being late. Wasn't home and didn't have access to a computer on my trip orz.

call miback
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14:07:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - depending on how people play extended sliders this can play a bit strange for some due to the burst playing like a 4-note in some cases. some players prefer to switch keys with entended slider and some just singletap it ... up to u changed rhythm
14:13:342 (5,6) - too far for 1/8 pattern it's got a 1/4 gap afterwards tho so it's like any 1/4 slider
best part of the map
posted
late sorz m4m

[general]
  1. maybe its just me but i find the clap used in the kiai (N:C25) really loud and sometimes i feel it overpowers the songs too much zz up to u I think it's good, it puts more intensity on the songs I find to be more energetic


[marathon]
  1. putting the spinners on 1/16 seems kinda unneeded but w/e
  2. 00:37:526 (1) - would prefer if you ended it on 1/2 instead, having such small gap size isnt that nice tbh especially when most of ur other spinners have a 1/2 gap kkk
  3. 01:44:278 (1) - 02:04:791 (1,2,3,4) - stuff like this plays really lame and u know it xd, but since u spammed gap patterns nonstop i guess its fine.. (the 2nd one has a cool pattern thooo) the first thing I intended normal stack but it was too hard to read for some people, so made it a bit more spaced. the second plays cool with music. decided to unstack the first thing tho
  4. 02:06:329 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - for this whole part; i feel really lost here, all the 5-note streams all have different and varying spacing.. some are really small like 0.2, some are 0.5 0.7 1.0?? i see the consistency in the really small spacing after sliders and the 1.0 in stream spam (02:13:764 (4,5) - seems inconsistent tho etc.etc.), but stuff like 02:12:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - is like a lost puppy :(:(it's mostly how intense vocals are, like when the guy starts screaming I have 1.0x, when calm down after scream it's less, when it's medium it's medium, but I fixed the first one tho, the rest seem to follow what I intended more or less
  5. 04:03:935 (1,2,3,4) - sounds pretty empty compared to how you mapped this song hmm, I used this quite often, not so much in this section but still I think it's good for the downbeat emphasis thing
  6. 04:50:430 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i think the player knows it after the first two sliders; the sv's change. i dont think this spam is need at all (the one at the end of the song makes more sense and has a bigger purpose, bc everything overlaps + the changes are more intensde) well I thought about it before and just felt weird about having the first things NCed and the rest not, just want to be safe with consistency
  7. 05:28:721 (1,2,3,4) - while this antispacing is probably intended, i feel this really kills the intensity here, one of the louder (kiai too) parts as well. try ctrlging (2,3)? u do this later in the song too tho... oh well yea, this is just the style I felt like going with when doing this song, by manual stacking the main instrument and jumps on drums
  8. 12:08:892 (7) - 12:11:627 (7) - having the clap on the slider end sounds a bit iffy and plays weird <_< because density is already pretty insane here, I didn't want to make it even worse
  9. 14:41:205 (1) - for this song; i feel that the spacing could b improved more.. its really hard to grasp the concept of your extended sliders in terms of spacing. the spacing used for 1/4 and 1/2 always changes and even the 3/4 spacings themselves tend to fluctuate a lot. this wouldve been fine if the spacing changes were minimal, but they are spaced quite largely to the extent it kinda worries me :/ wish you could b more consistent I tried adjusting a lot of 1/2 spacing, except for 1/4 sliders, because it's mostly obvious that it's leniency with those


As mentioned in my mod, I feel like some parts could have some patching up in terms of spacing 'n consistency.

As you know from the past, I cannot really agree with your mapping style sometimes, but let me know when you apply this mod and I'll can see what I can do. Most of the things look pretty good though.

Again, sorry for being late. Wasn't home and didn't have access to a computer on my trip orz.

call miback
welcome back and ty
posted


fixed slider thank

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@appleeaterx

12:45:735 (4) - having to start on the blue tick here is really uncomfortable and (4,5,6,7) plays like a 4note stream now which is feels really out of the place here and isnt predictable at all. i really hope you can change this - fixed
12:51:291 (2,3,4) - even tho only basing on the instruments it makes sense to have these two alone, but as someone who mapped this song too, i found that the vocals are more prominent and feel that they deserve something on their own instead of just being part of a pattern - aight well I think the emphasis is gr8 now
13:02:060 (3,4,5,6,7) - 13:12:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 13:23:940 (5,6,7,8,9) - both stacked, different snap, right after each other = lame. also, the sounds on (6,7) are so strong, kinda expected some form of spacing in between tbh (13:35:052 (7,8,9,1) - are less strong, yet spaced wot) - fixed everything, the double snares a.k.a the stacked ones are now jumps and the other part is readjusted
really gj on the koven one, tho i kinda wish 16:29:838 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - would also be consistent with the other streams... yes this one has vocal + beats too but 16:07:958 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - for example is spaced like that too.. - thank and yea fixed the density of the stream
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applied both snownino and appleeater's suggestions, thank you c:

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223,337,419319,2,0,P|184:305|157:233,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,250,419576,1,2,0:3:0:0:
232,228,419661,1,2,0:3:0:0:
251,193,419747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,153,419832,1,2,0:3:0:0:
332,27,420003,1,8,0:0:0:0:
417,213,420174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,213,420259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,213,420345,6,0,P|398:192|388:153,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,33,420516,2,0,P|454:42|435:60,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,187,420687,2,0,P|262:151|245:91,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,126,420943,1,2,0:3:0:0:
145,126,421029,2,0,P|114:130|84:126,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,41,421200,1,2,0:3:0:0:
153,254,421371,2,0,P|162:204|153:145,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,345,421712,6,0,P|198:300|193:222,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,22,422054,2,0,P|296:71|295:128,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,165,422311,1,2,0:3:0:0:
312,200,422396,1,2,0:3:0:0:
346,221,422482,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,222,422567,1,2,0:3:0:0:
499,111,422738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
446,336,422909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
446,336,422994,1,2,0:3:0:0:
446,336,423080,6,0,P|434:316|428:280,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,130,423251,2,0,P|397:142|361:148,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,292,423422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
241,130,423593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,133,423678,1,2,0:3:0:0:
169,157,423764,1,2,0:3:0:0:
154,194,423849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,234,423935,1,2,0:3:0:0:
204,359,424106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,246,424277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,219,424362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,183,424447,5,2,0:3:0:0:
240,112,424618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,357,424789,2,0,P|163:314|163:261,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,240,425046,1,2,0:3:0:0:
100,206,425131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,164,425217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,127,425302,1,2,0:3:0:0:
62,32,425473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,156,425644,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,156,425730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,156,425815,6,0,P|280:142|300:114,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,22,425986,2,0,P|388:46|399:79,1,53.9999983520508
429,266,426157,2,0,P|390:231|379:164,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,351,426413,1,2,0:3:0:0:
348,351,426499,2,0,P|332:329|328:295,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,129,426670,2,0,P|246:156|230:186,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,272,426841,2,0,P|106:264|88:158,1,161.999995056153,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,368,427183,6,0,P|154:322|142:271,1,107.999996704102,4|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
186,26,427524,2,0,P|157:71|164:123,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,134,427781,1,2,0:3:0:0:
243,156,427866,1,2,0:3:0:0:
262,191,427952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,231,428037,1,2,0:3:0:0:
375,76,428208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
425,284,428379,1,2,0:3:0:0:
425,284,428465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,284,428550,6,0,P|403:268|389:234,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,212,428721,2,0,P|268:196|282:162,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,44,428892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
50,152,429063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,150,429148,1,2,0:3:0:0:
118,148,429233,1,2,0:3:0:0:
153,147,429319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,146,429405,1,2,0:3:0:0:
237,39,429576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
418,140,429747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
387,166,429833,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,171,429918,5,2,0:3:0:0:
343,29,430089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,269,430259,2,0,P|335:223|347:171,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,148,430516,1,2,0:3:0:0:
314,114,430601,1,2,0:3:0:0:
278,97,430687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,100,430772,1,2,0:3:0:0:
79,149,430943,1,8,0:0:0:0:
189,306,431114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,306,431200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,306,431285,6,0,P|201:286|206:252,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,45,431456,2,0,P|155:65|150:99,1,53.9999983520508
296,216,431627,2,0,P|300:165|345:140,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,323,431883,1,2,0:3:0:0:
377,323,431969,2,0,P|363:301|353:252,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,63,432140,1,2,0:3:0:0:
126,258,432311,6,0,B|147:253|147:253|168:259|168:259|189:254|189:254|211:258|211:258|233:256,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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tags Whatever I Do feat. KlļĀ½Ā¾Ä‡ĀĀ»?ļĀ½Ā»lļĀ½Ā½Ä¼Ā½Ā

also maybe consider tickrate 2 bc dnb genryuukaiko sound spam ?
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I guess osu doesn't like Kóstja

I don't really like how tick rate looks on some sliders but it fits better with the music so ok
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I hope they will get rid of the limitation later on, we need 1 hour long marathons.

#2
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same

ty!
posted
[Marathon]
  1. 00:26:500 (5,7) - better to NC imo
  2. 00:32:996 (11,12) - change to a slider? better to keep consistency with 00:30:261 (5) - imo
  3. 00:52:825 (1,1) - a bit concerned about the ds here cuz the spacing is the same as 00:52:141 (8,1) - but it's 3/2 rather than 1/2.
    How about swaping 00:54:705 (1,3) - or 00:54:705 (1,2) - ? Looks cool as well.
  4. 01:15:560 - add a note? the beat is as strong as 01:15:218 (4) - and would be consistent with 01:16:415 (3,4,5,6) - .
  5. 01:26:329 (3,1) - since you emphasise the downbeat 01:25:304 - by a jump 01:25:133 (6,1) - ,why use such small ds here?
  6. 01:31:799 (3,1) - same here,you should emphasis by a jump for both two or both use stack
  7. 01:33:338 (7) - stack it with 01:32:483 (2) - slider head should be fine, i think ds is now a bit too big
  8. 01:36:928 (1,1) - as above
  9. 01:43:936 (6,7,8) - ctrl+J? would play much more fun and flow will be nice
    http://puu.sh/qTPt0/8bba00c3d9.jpg
  10. 01:44:278 (1) - cancel NC
  11. 01:47:697 (2) - ctrl+J? it flows better and also looks neat.
  12. 01:55:389 (1,2) - the only 2 sliders that are not identical compared with 01:47:184 (1,2) - 01:49:919 (1,2) - 01:52:654 (1,2) - etc.
  13. 02:04:962 (3,4) - 02:05:645 (3,4) - sounds like 1/4...how about swap 02:04:449 (4,5) - 02:05:133 (4,5) - 02:05:816 (4,5) - ?this also fits 02:03:594 (1,2,1) - flow better.
  14. 02:25:303 - 02:25:388 - add notes here.
  15. 03:10:772 (2,4) - stack?looks better lol
  16. 03:33:422 - clearly there should be a note here as a drum sound.03:33:165 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - make it a stream.
  17. 03:47:353 (8,1) - distance is really too big,try a smaller one?
  18. 03:59:832 (1,2) - why is this different from 04:00:174 (3,4,5) - ?should be 4 sliders imo
  19. 04:34:875 (4,5) - swap these two so flow and spacing will be better. also there's emphasis on 04:35:046 -
  20. 04:42:225 (4) - NC for better readability
  21. 04:47:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesnt fit here imo,at least NC 04:47:695 (4) - ot it will be really hard to play.
  22. 04:49:063 (1,1) - dont stack,do sth similar to 04:40:858 (1,1) - 04:43:593 (1,1) -
  23. 04:50:430 - i really don't like the NC spam here. although it's 1.5x and 1.0x, you can put 2 in a group so 04:50:772 (1,1) - etc. NC can be cancelled.
    The music actually suggests that 2 in a group is fine,so i guess making it 1,2,1,2...looks better.Too many NCs will only mess up this part.
  24. 05:12:311 (1,2,3) - flow is too straight, mind changing to a more friendly one?
  25. 05:28:892 (2,3) - why not swap these 2...sudden stack just plays really really weird.also if you need stack 05:28:379 (6,7) - should be stacked instead of 05:28:721 (1,2) - if you listen to the music and compare with 05:33:849 (6,7) -
  26. 05:31:627 (2,3) - 05:34:362 (2,3) - 05:37:097 (2,3) - 05:39:832 (2,3) - swap cuz the music should be emphasised but not a stack.
  27. 05:44:789 (1) - maybe change a shape cuz it's exactly the same as 05:01:029 (1) - ...
  28. 06:01:883 (1,2,3) - bit hard to read imo
  29. 06:56:584 (2,3) - 06:59:319 (3,4) - 07:04:789 (3,4,5,6,7) - 07:07:781 (3,4,5,6) - 07:10:259 (3,4,5) - ds should be consistent,especially the last one.
  30. 08:36:926 (6) - ctrl+G?only place where 08:36:926 (6,7) - has large spacing
  31. 08:53:849 - the stream from here is really too long,44 notes......you should break it apart,such as use sliders 08:54:533 - .I can't accept a stream with 44 notes here...there's not even a change in the song but more notes=more intense.
  32. 10:06:670 (3,1) - ds feels like 1/2 if you look at 10:06:499 (2,3) -
  33. 10:40:516 (1) - actually i think tick rate 1 is better..cuz so many white dots on the slider,looks horrible
  34. 12:51:120 (1,2) - increase spacing here?too small imo
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Too tired,will do the second half later...

[continue]
  1. 14:13:342 (5,6) - too big compared with 14:02:402 (5,6) -
  2. 14:35:222 (6,7,1) - ^
  3. 15:50:436 (4,1,2) - this flow...too blunt and ds is a bit imbalanced
  4. 16:19:154 (1,2,3) - 1/2 but spacing is the same as 16:18:128 (5,6,1) - ,why?it's really confusing..
  5. 18:09:069 (1,1) - maybe overlap instead of stack
  6. 20:19:496 (4,5,1) - weird spacing

Call me back.
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[Marathon]
  1. 00:26:500 (5,7) - better to NC imo I used new combo for piano pitch change in this section
  2. 00:32:996 (11,12) - change to a slider? better to keep consistency with 00:30:261 (5) - imo similar story, has to do with piano pitch, I used sliders for those like at 00:35:047 (3,4,5) -
  3. 00:52:825 (1,1) - a bit concerned about the ds here cuz the spacing is the same as 00:52:141 (8,1) - but it's 3/2 rather than 1/2.
    How about swaping 00:54:705 (1,3) - or 00:54:705 (1,2) - ? Looks cool as well.
  4. 01:15:560 - add a note? the beat is as strong as 01:15:218 (4) - and would be consistent with 01:16:415 (3,4,5,6) - . I focused on two instruments here which is 01:25:987 (1,2,3) - and drums, like that part you mentioned is pretty much the same as in kiai just quieter and at 01:16:928 (6) - it has the sound I'm following just like at 01:27:868 (4) - etc
  5. 01:26:329 (3,1) - since you emphasise the downbeat 01:25:304 - by a jump 01:25:133 (6,1) - ,why use such small ds here? because those are 1/1 gaps and jump for emphasis just wouldn't work, so I just used it for aesthetics instead. same applies for the rest to be consistant in spacing
  6. 01:31:799 (3,1) - same here,you should emphasis by a jump for both two or both use stack
  7. 01:33:338 (7) - stack it with 01:32:483 (2) - slider head should be fine, i think ds is now a bit too big nah it's intended, most intense in the section, it's similar to 01:38:808 (4) - 01:27:868 (4) -
  8. 01:36:928 (1,1) - as above
  9. 01:43:936 (6,7,8) - ctrl+J? would play much more fun and flow will be nice
    http://puu.sh/qTPt0/8bba00c3d9.jpg
  10. 01:44:278 (1) - cancel NC
  11. 01:47:697 (2) - ctrl+J? it flows better and also looks neat. 01:47:184 (1) - ctrl j on this instead because my original intention was to make it similar to 01:48:722 (2,3) - just idk what happened there
  12. 01:55:389 (1,2) - the only 2 sliders that are not identical compared with 01:47:184 (1,2) - 01:49:919 (1,2) - 01:52:654 (1,2) - etc.
  13. 02:04:962 (3,4) - 02:05:645 (3,4) - sounds like 1/4...how about swap 02:04:449 (4,5) - 02:05:133 (4,5) - 02:05:816 (4,5) - ?this also fits 02:03:594 (1,2,1) - flow better.
  14. 02:25:303 - 02:25:388 - add notes here. nah I emphasize certain notes this way
  15. 03:10:772 (2,4) - stack?looks better lol I like the current flow a lot
  16. 03:33:422 - clearly there should be a note here as a drum sound.03:33:165 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - make it a stream. it's because I wanted to emphasize 03:33:507 (8) - with a jump, not very easy to emphasize such things with a stream
  17. 03:47:353 (8,1) - distance is really too big,try a smaller one? most of the section focuses on emphasizing that note so I'll keep and it's rather cosistant anyway 03:36:413 (8,1) - 03:46:157 (1) -
  18. 03:59:832 (1,2) - why is this different from 04:00:174 (3,4,5) - ?should be 4 sliders imo because 04:00:003 (2) - has vocal aswell, the rest of the red ticks on the slider don't
  19. 04:34:875 (4,5) - swap these two so flow and spacing will be better. also there's emphasis on 04:35:046 - actually disagree, because if I swap them then the flow of 04:34:362 (2,3,5) - would become linear and that kinda of flow I don't really like, also 04:35:046 (5) - is already emphasized, it's the biggest jump right now http://image.prntscr.com/image/570dc128 ... c16d43.png
  20. 04:42:225 (4) - NC for better readability no, I indicated 1/1 gaps with NC so it would break my idea
  21. 04:47:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - doesnt fit here imo,at least NC 04:47:695 (4) - ot it will be really hard to play. I have jumps on drums, and as said NC indicates 1/1 gaps right now
  22. 04:49:063 (1,1) - dont stack,do sth similar to 04:40:858 (1,1) - 04:43:593 (1,1) -
  23. 04:50:430 - i really don't like the NC spam here. although it's 1.5x and 1.0x, you can put 2 in a group so 04:50:772 (1,1) - etc. NC can be cancelled.
    The music actually suggests that 2 in a group is fine,so i guess making it 1,2,1,2...looks better.Too many NCs will only mess up this part.
  24. 05:12:311 (1,2,3) - flow is too straight, mind changing to a more friendly one?
  25. 05:28:892 (2,3) - why not swap these 2...sudden stack just plays really really weird.also if you need stack 05:28:379 (6,7) - should be stacked instead of 05:28:721 (1,2) - if you listen to the music and compare with 05:33:849 (6,7) - changed 05:28:379 (6,7) - only
  26. 05:31:627 (2,3) - 05:34:362 (2,3) - 05:37:097 (2,3) - 05:39:832 (2,3) - swap cuz the music should be emphasised but not a stack. stacks for the instrument I follow, jumps for drums
  27. 05:44:789 (1) - maybe change a shape cuz it's exactly the same as 05:01:029 (1) - ... uhh what's wrong with having same shape, it's even better imo because people will know what do expect when they see it again
  28. 06:01:883 (1,2,3) - bit hard to read imo better than completely overlapping imo
  29. 08:36:926 (6) - ctrl+G?only place where 08:36:926 (6,7) - has large spacing slider leniency so the spacing is the same http://image.prntscr.com/image/07f0c341 ... be69b4.png
  30. 08:53:849 - the stream from here is really too long,44 notes......you should break it apart,such as use sliders 08:54:533 - .I can't accept a stream with 44 notes here...there's not even a change in the song but more notes=more intense. meh, it was 128 note stream before lol, but I tried, to make it even easier, I don't even see what's so hard about it, spacing is really low
  31. 10:06:670 (3,1) - ds feels like 1/2 if you look at 10:06:499 (2,3) - again indicating with NCs that those are 1/1, noone had problems reading that so far.
  32. 20:19:496 (4,5,1) - weird spacing indicating with nc again, plus rather calm, also noone messed it up ever
Too tired,will do the second half later...
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