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Tonon - Shirayuki ~sirayuki~

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yf_bmp
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yf_bmp
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月31日 at 17:08:32

Artist: Tonon
Title: Shirayuki ~sirayuki~
Tags: Kurousa-P 黒うさP Kimi no Iru Keshiki 君のいる景色 Narcissu Streliteela ZZHBOY Adol Christin - Jelly -
BPM: 89
Filesize: 10643kb
Play Time: 04:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Adol's Normal (2.02 stars, 355 notes)
  2. Expert (4.46 stars, 845 notes)
  3. Jelly's Easy (1.58 stars, 263 notes)
  4. Narcissu's Insane (4.28 stars, 808 notes)
  5. ZZH & Stella's Hard (3.28 stars, 494 notes)


Download: Tonon - Shirayuki ~sirayuki~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Usa ver.: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/28436

Expert - me
Insane - Narcissu
Hard - ZZHBOY (00:00:707 ~ 03:14:864) & Streliteela (03:14:864 ~)
Normal - Adol Christin
Easy - - Jelly -

之前是在哦蘇作圖的，而我放梗的原則是，「淦你娘姬芭到爆」
沒錯，就是淦你娘姬芭到爆，老子才不管甚麼一分沒人玩三小的，每次做的圖就是一大姬芭，小跳變大跳亂飛，單點變切指連打，跟把整個編輯器塞爆沒兩樣。

我還記得，我那個月作圖25天，L管跑來跟我說，這個月哦蘇玩家減少26萬，你有頭緒嗎？
我他媽的怎麼會知道。
Last edited by yf_bmp , edited 59 times in total.
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
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Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib
01:14:864 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 感觉不要用overlap比较好，最好全部铺开做出那种满屏note的感觉
yf_bmp
1,530 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

Zweib wrote:

01:14:864 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 感觉不要用overlap比较好，最好全部铺开做出那种满屏note的感觉
好啊
Lavender
876 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
irc with mapper
2016-09-09 22:18 yf_bmp: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/926381 Tonon - Shiroyuki ~sirayuki~]
2016-09-09 22:18 yf_bmp: nice song
2016-09-09 22:18 yf_bmp: old styel
2016-09-09 22:20 Lavender: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/926381 Tonon - Shiroyuki ~sirayuki~]
2016-09-09 22:26 Lavender: 神
2016-09-09 22:26 yf_bmp: g
2016-09-09 22:28 Lavender: 怎么又是这个地方
2016-09-09 22:28 yf_bmp: 没有飞滑条的
2016-09-09 22:34 Lavender: 02:52:449 (3,4,5) - 这三连overmap不太好吗
2016-09-09 22:34 Lavender: 吧*
2016-09-09 22:34 Lavender: 02:57:842 (3,4,5) - 一样的
2016-09-09 22:34 Lavender: 这都是完全没音的
2016-09-09 22:35 yf_bmp: 考虑下好了
2016-09-09 22:36 Lavender: 还有就是1/3不明显
2016-09-09 22:36 Lavender: 03:08:572 (2,3,4) - 比如这儿大概完全看不出是1/3
2016-09-09 22:36 yf_bmp: 啥
2016-09-09 22:36 Lavender: 建议可以全部nc
2016-09-09 22:36 yf_bmp: 那就改下这处
2016-09-09 22:37 yf_bmp: 其他的1/3我好像都是用大间距d
2016-09-09 22:37 Lavender: 对
2016-09-09 22:37 Lavender: 有间距就能看出来
2016-09-09 22:37 Lavender: 而这个后面还有1/4三连stack
2016-09-09 22:37 Lavender: 打起来就#$(%%)(*
2016-09-09 22:38 Lavender: 04:04:752 (1,2) - 
2016-09-09 22:38 Lavender: 这个间距提一下
2016-09-09 22:38 Lavender: 估计你也不想改
2016-09-09 22:40 yf_bmp: 或许会改
2016-09-09 22:42 Lavender: 好像没了
2016-09-09 22:42 Lavender: 不挑nazi
moonlightleaf
1,850 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
[General]

???等等, sb呢?????????

[Jelly's Easy]

00:03:909 (2) - 这种小短链不是很友好啊,改单点这样?后面的不再提

00:36:437 (2,3) - 试试这样放

02:02:729 (2,3) - ^

00:47:898 (2) - 感觉Easy还是少用这种超短折返吧

00:58:685 (2) - ^

01:02:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点太多...试试345换成折返滑条 然后3要NC

02:29:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

01:12:168 (1,2) - overlap啊 试试这么放,整洁些

01:20:258 (5,7) - 换下位置比较顺

02:36:100 (4,5) - ^

02:46:550 (3,5) - ^

01:22:954 (2) - 太高碰血条了,要dq的

= =怎么有种复制了前面的然后就旋转了一下???

02:59:696 (3,4,1) - 试试这种,你那个有点坑新手,3换单点41改转盘到03:02:055 -

03:45:876 (3,4,5,6) - 还是有点太多单点了,试试这样

后面不做好像也可以? 排版还不算很整洁的,作为新人还是有很大提升空间,基础知识可以去多学点(我是新人的时候好像也差不多233

[阿豆]

00:05:763 (5,1) - 我不是很中意这个叠合flow,随意参考 然后前面4可以向下弯一点

00:20:932 (3,1) - 这种空很长的 可以不需要按照DS,以后作图可以使用到

00:42:505 (3,4) - 3不要叠,放下面的空间,然后4拉下来点距离,随意参考

00:54:640 (1,2,3) - 总感觉叠着不舒服,下图随意参考,改的话,后面的也修修,懒的话pass

01:01:044 (2) - 没位置塞的话 不如把1弄弯点就有位置了

01:09:471 (3,4,5) - 试试这样?

02:15:539 (1,2) - 我也想要点不一样的滑条,可是你2放不下了,试试这个?

02:16:887 (3) - 接上面排版

02:34:078 (5) - 这个确实不适合叠 放(163,373)?

02:44:864 (5) - ^ 放不下就叠不是很好的选择,

02:51:269 (2,3) - 太下面了,可能你是跟音乐的,因为降调,嘛,随意参考

04:10:145 (1) - dq 碰血条

[智障波xS酱]

稍后回来补

00:55:819 (4,5) - 这类有点坑

01:20:595 (7,1,2,3,4) - F5了8次全挂了,不如这样吧

01:52:617 (7) - 碰血条,最近怎么这么多这种????????

02:36:774 (7,8) - ctrl+g顺

后面kiai2怎么有复制的,差评1芬, 好久没见的挺难的Hard了

[Insane]

稍后回来补

00:09:808 (2) - 我觉得的缩减2个折返,很容易出100的现在这个

00:51:606 - 加一个圈

02:17:898 - ^

01:01:044 (2,3) - 交换下?

02:27:336 (1,2) - ^

01:02:730 (1) - 虽然漂亮但是我怎么接都出100,顺时针好像容易接,不过少了拉的感觉,或者绿线加点sv缩减下DS?

02:29:022 (1) - ^ 似乎有方法能300,有待研究,(菜鸡player不懂

01:22:954 (6,7) - 换下节奏

02:49:246 (6,7) - ^

01:54:302 (1) - 放(260,188)怎么样,增加读图率

02:05:089 (1) - ^ (256,200)

02:35:932 (6) - 要不ctrl+g试试效果?

03:47:224 (1) - 我的血条很细擦着边,估计默认的就boom了

翻倍做(差不多打着就是Ex) 难怪缺一个diff
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
[Insane]
00:03:067 (8,9,10) - 曲子一开始就搞1/3连打会死人的
00:08:460 (8,9,10) - ↑ 这两个地方的1/3三连建议换成折返 后面的不用
00:51:606 - 漏音？
KIAI还是感觉略慢 部分因为01:02:730 (1,2,3,4)带起来的速度落差太大
01:18:909 (1,2,3,4) - slider之间拉开距离会比较爽而不是叠一起
01:49:751 (1) - 某种意义上这里压的并不是你当前跟的轨 所以初见读图会比较莫名 听上去是“没有音”的
01:53:122 (4) - sliderhead 同↑
01:55:145 (1) - ↑
02:03:909 (4) - sliderhead 同↑
01:56:493 (5) - 这里就是真的没有音了
02:00:538 (1) - ↑
02:45:202 (1,2,3,4) - 同01:18:909 (1,2,3,4) 而且slider tail不跟前面一样消音吗
03:08:460 (2,3,4) - 是1/2不是1/3
03:49:920 (1,2,3,4) - 同01:18:909 (1,2,3,4)
03:54:640 (3) - 听上去是1/3
03:53:965 (1,2) - 打击感很差 slider应该在前
04:01:550 - 又漏音
04:07:954 (2) - 要放也应该放在04:07:786吧
04:26:830 (2) - ↑

[Jelly]
check AIMOD
some wrong DS on 02:57:336 (1,2,3,4)
03:00:202 (4) - you'd better not foldback once more
map end too early

别的没什么好说的
yf_bmp
1,530 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

moonlightleaf wrote:

[General]

???等等, sb呢????????? ..
[Insane]

稍后回来补

00:09:808 (2) - 我觉得的缩减2个折返,很容易出100的现在这个 这个切指就好

00:51:606 - 加一个圈 不好

02:17:898 - ^ 不好

01:01:044 (2,3) - 交换下? 不好，鼓音不能突出

02:27:336 (1,2) - ^ 不好，鼓音不能突出

01:02:730 (1) - 虽然漂亮但是我怎么接都出100,顺时针好像容易接,不过少了拉的感觉,或者绿线加点sv缩减下DS? 这个我也发现了 换了个方法

02:29:022 (1) - ^ 似乎有方法能300,有待研究,(菜鸡player不懂 ^

01:22:954 (6,7) - 换下节奏 不了 我想突出这个鼓音

02:49:246 (6,7) - ^

01:54:302 (1) - 放(260,188)怎么样,增加读图率 这不好吧

02:05:089 (1) - ^ (256,200) ^

02:35:932 (6) - 要不ctrl+g试试效果? 小问题 差不多 不改了

03:47:224 (1) - 我的血条很细擦着边,估计默认的就boom了 换了个位置

翻倍做(差不多打着就是Ex) 难怪缺一个diff

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:067 (8,9,10) - 曲子一开始就搞1/3连打会死人的 不会死
00:08:460 (8,9,10) - ↑ 这两个地方的1/3三连建议换成折返 后面的不用 没关系
00:51:606 - 漏音？不是的，刻意的
KIAI还是感觉略慢 部分因为01:02:730 (1,2,3,4)带起来的速度落差太大 要的就是这种感觉惹 不过前面那个滑条我改了下
01:18:909 (1,2,3,4) - slider之间拉开距离会比较爽而不是叠一起
01:49:751 (1) - 某种意义上这里压的并不是你当前跟的轨 所以初见读图会比较莫名 听上去是“没有音”的 但是为了梗的和谐 也就只好这样了 不过我下了音效缓解这个问题
01:53:122 (4) - sliderhead 同↑
01:55:145 (1) - ↑
02:03:909 (4) - sliderhead 同↑
01:56:493 (5) - 这里就是真的没有音了
02:00:538 (1) - ↑
02:45:202 (1,2,3,4) - 同01:18:909 (1,2,3,4) 而且slider tail不跟前面一样消音吗 忘了
03:08:460 (2,3,4) - 是1/2不是1/3 这个 讲道理本意是1/3但没snap好 4肯定是在1/3上的，3在1/8上 但这样节奏就没法玩了
03:49:920 (1,2,3,4) - 同01:18:909 (1,2,3,4)
03:54:640 (3) - 听上去是1/3 这个我改下
03:53:965 (1,2) - 打击感很差 slider应该在前 这个我改下
04:01:550 - 又漏音 故意的
04:07:954 (2) - 要放也应该放在04:07:786吧 no 灵魂作图
04:26:830 (2) - ↑

别的没什么好说的
thx for moddinggg
Adol Christin
630 posts
Joined October 2012
Adol Christin
只回拒绝的吧，没回的都改了。

moonlightleaf wrote:

[阿豆]

00:42:505 (3,4) - 3不要叠,放下面的空间,然后4拉下来点距离,随意参考 :arrow: 放到下面的话flow折了一下，不想在音乐没有转折的地方折flow。

00:54:640 (1,2,3) - 总感觉叠着不舒服,下图随意参考,改的话,后面的也修修,懒的话pass :arrow: 这里音乐有所重复，相当于有提示了，我觉得没关系。视野内叠滑条尾在N难度，感觉反而毁读图了。

01:01:044 (2) - 没位置塞的话 不如把1弄弯点就有位置了 :arrow: 不想在1和2之间折

02:16:887 (3) - 接上面排版 :arrow: 不希望在视野内看到滑条头尾的堆叠。

02:34:078 (5) - 这个确实不适合叠 放(163,373)?

02:44:864 (5) - ^ 放不下就叠不是很好的选择, :arrow: 这两个叠有大半的原因是故意的，实际上怎么都放得下。

04:10:145 (1) - dq 碰血条 :arrow: 现在不用纠结血条问题了，人格说过的。
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:白雪 ~sirayuki~
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ArtistUnicode:とのん
Creator:yf_bmp
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Zweib
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Zweib
怎么AR加到8.5了
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yf_bmp
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Zweib wrote:

怎么AR加到8.5了
remove from fav(
太jb以至于fc不了了zzzz

改8.2好了
- Jelly -
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- Jelly -

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Jelly's Easy]

00:03:909 (2) - 这种小短链不是很友好啊,改单点这样?后面的不再提改了

00:36:437 (2,3) - 试试这样放好像还是觉得原来的比较整齐，先保留着吧。

02:02:729 (2,3) - ^

00:47:898 (2) - 感觉Easy还是少用这种超短折返吧

00:58:685 (2) - ^ 爱抚爷爷也提到了，但是感觉还是这样节奏比较丰富，先保留看看吧。。

01:02:730 (3,4,5,6,7) - 有点太多...试试345换成折返滑条 然后3要NC考虑一下

02:29:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

01:12:168 (1,2) - overlap啊 试试这么放,整。洁些这边都re了

01:20:258 (5,7) - 换下位置比较顺好

02:36:100 (4,5) - ^

02:46:550 (3,5) - ^这边都re了

01:22:954 (2) - 太高碰血条了,要dq的re了

= =怎么有种复制了前面的然后就旋转了一下???的确是这样_(:з」∠)_ re之后kiai改动了下

02:59:696 (3,4,1) - 试试这种,你那个有点坑新手,3换单点41改转盘到03:02:055 -
这里是yf给的建议保留试试看

03:45:876 (3,4,5,6) - 还是有点太多单点了,试试这样
想保留，一开始做的时候基本都是滑条，然后yf说因为BPM低所以可以用1/2单点。

后面不做好像也可以? 排版还不算很整洁的,作为新人还是有很大提升空间,基础知识可以去多学点(我是新人的时候好像也差不多233 已经补完了，第一次作图作的差见谅，谢谢摸图/w\

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Jelly]
check AIMOD好
some wrong DS on 02:57:336 (1,2,3,4)
03:00:202 (4) - you'd better not foldback once more
map end too early这边都re了，后面已经补完。

别的没什么好说的谢谢。
- Jelly -
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yf_bmp
1,530 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp
updated including timing
-SuGon-
120 posts
Joined November 2011
-SuGon-
路過 給一顆
Misure
860 posts
Joined September 2012
Misure
手莫
[Insane]
  1. 03:04:921 (8) - 这应该不是故意的吧..
  2. 03:08:123 - 多余绿线

[Narcissu's Insane]
  1. aimod
  2. 00:50:594 (1,2) - bao
  3. 01:02:392 (6,7,1) - 这条flow接起来感觉不如把01:02:729 (1) - 和01:03:740 (4) - 反向好
  4. 01:07:448 (4) - 有一点点容易读成二分拍间隔 我采集

[ZZH & Stella's Hard]
  1. 00:00:707 (1) - 4:3分辨率都到这个位置了 太危险
  2. 00:05:258 (2) - 这个包的效果并不明显 不如包滑条尾巴
  3. 00:15:539 (2,3) - 感觉还是DS好 这个间距和后面一对比有点微妙
  4. 00:35:763 (4,5) - 虽然前后都是DS 但是这个位置摆的感觉有些挤了
  5. 01:16:213 (1) - ctrl+G 感觉离前面有些远了 尤其是高密度后的空拍之后
  6. 第二段居然复制粘贴的
  7. 03:46:887 (7,1) - 我觉得这里应该小跳一下

[Adol's Normal]
  1. 宽屏支持
  2. 02:12:168 (3,1) - 这个flow不太好 这样？
  3. 02:15:539 (1,2,3) - 这个也有点 可以适当改改
  4. 02:26:325 (1,2) - 这个stack有点迷 略突然 不如这种

[Jelly's Easy]
  1. 00:18:235 (2,1) - 这个我觉得没必要这么摆 破了DS flow又不好 摆上边横向fow感觉就ok
  2. 01:15:876 - easy的话我觉得这拍完全可以放掉 而且二次折返也不太常见
  3. 01:26:999 (1) - 我强迫症 为什么不摆在正中间orz
  4. 04:24:975 (3) - 一样 可以改成两个短条 呃现在easy是不允许短条么
  5. 04:34:413 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 对称歪了..


Good luck! :)
Pata-Mon
1,438 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
嗯感觉最近老给低难度写论文呢……突然觉得自己的低难度真是太用心了，虽然也是半小时糊完

[Easy]
  1. 总体来说：
    这图跟我最开始做的低难度很像，就是总想着去包啊做对称啊，或者摆一些什么梗出来，但却摆不好，很多地方显得有点挤（比如01:05:426 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - ）．其实很多时候，舒舒服服用顺畅的flow摆出来就已经很好看，效果不会比强行对称什么的差，随便举个例子，比如00:59:359 (3,1,2) - 这里，直接用这样简单的排列就很好：http://b1.loli.io/images/LGYR.jpg，http://b1.loli.io/images/4yqA.jpg

    不过其实rank标准并不高，尤其是低难度gd．把底下红字改了其实你这图就完全够了，但要是还想提高的话就要看你自己想法了~加油
  2. 00:08:797 (1,2) - 这里用长滑条跟一下乐器，然后用note突出一下00:09:808 - 镲声会比较好：http://b1.loli.io/images/3PGr.jpg
  3. 00:14:190 (1,2,3,4) - 这样下节奏虽然无过，但未免太不能表现曲子了．甚至2那里都没有鼓声，那你这么下只能看做是跟vocal，但是跟vocal的话，这里清楚的八个音，非常适合用4个1/2滑条来跟．另外如果你这几小节主要都跟vocal的话，前面00:12:505 (2) - 也可以删掉，ez没必要什么都往上放，清晰地表达一下vocal会更好
  4. 00:16:887 (1,2) - 用ctrl+H和ctrl+G 以及按住ctrl键摆第二个滑条，好好做一个对称，现在这样看着很奇怪．不想做对称就不要摆得很像对称
  5. 00:18:235 (2,1) - 另外你这里ds好像也不对
  6. 00:22:280 (1,2) - 这看着有点不好看，我知道是为了2跟3的blanket，如果你不想动2的弧度的话，这么摆：http://b1.loli.io/images/oLn7.jpg
  7. 00:27:673 (1,2) - 同上，而且你这里既然都没有blanket了，可以考虑直接把1跟2的弧度弄小些
  8. 00:41:831 (2,3) - ez里不是很建议随便使用这种反向flow
  9. 00:50:258 (2,3) - 这种排列也是，在hard里会很好，但是低难度慎用，而且因为视觉ds看着很近，容易误读
  10. 01:01:381 (2,1) - 这角度不好看，后面note放到大约398,377会跟2的角度一起看舒服一些．
  11. 01:05:426 (1,3) - 类似前面提过的问题．其实普通地把01:06:775 (3) - 移到235,354左右就很舒服，没必要
  12. 01:14:864 (3) - 在ez和nm中不要使用多次折返滑条．后面还有不再说
  13. 01:16:887 (2,3) - ds不对
  14. 01:22:954 (2) - 类似前面说过的
  15. 后面看下复制粘贴很多，所以不重复说了，基本就是类似前面提到的自己检查一下
  16. 02:59:695 (1,2) - ez里遇见这种节奏就带过去就行了……http://b1.loli.io/images/YGLK.jpg
  17. 03:56:829 (1,1) - ez转盘后接转盘至少要一小节，对于这种bpm的话可以按一半计算，那就应该是两拍
  18. 04:15:537 (1) - 单独的一个滑条一般没必要这么弯
  19. 04:20:930 (1,2) - 2要再往上移一些才对称
  20. 04:26:323 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段给我的感觉是完全没做任何排列，只下了节奏？ds也不对


[Normal]
  1. 因为你这难度节奏密度比主难度低得多，有些地方音效复制下来的时候你再修一下，改个音量，或者删点东西会比较好．00:16:213 (4) - 像这种就会感觉特别吵
  2. 00:02:055 (4,6) - nazi，这里也ds一下．00:04:078 (2,4) - 同．后面好像挺多的，这些注意一下看上去会清爽不少
  3. 00:09:808 - 这里有一个挺明显的镲声，跟一下？另外前面折返滑条直接换成一个一拍的滑条会显得节奏更丰富些，毕竟适合用一拍滑条的地方并不多
  4. 00:30:370 (1,2) - 感觉稍微有点太干了……稍微用一点弯的
  5. 00:39:808 (3) - 这种轨迹不够清晰的滑条不能在ez和nm里用，尾巴那里至少要展开才行
  6. 00:41:831 (2,3) - nm里不能在尾巴后面叠东西．后面还有不说了
  7. 00:49:246 (1) - 这安全度要比上面那个高些，但也不建议，而且也不觉得好看．后面类似的不说了
  8. 00:54:640 (1,2,3) - 别叠三个，虽然这个不是必死，但我觉得也没必要．想表达这三个音一组的方法很多，我觉得在normal里直接用一个折返滑条就很好．后同
  9. 01:51:269 (1,2) - 这视觉ds看着不对，换个排列吧
  10. 02:04:752 (1,2,3) - 好干吧
  11. 02:07:449 (1,3) - 这overlap不好看
  12. 02:23:628 (1,2) - 这方向反着好别扭的
  13. 02:39:471 (5) - 没必要note啊，要跟的话就把4跟5换成滑条，或者干脆不跟
  14. 03:33:740 (1,2,3) - 这种真的感觉好没意思．稍微用最简单的弯滑条感觉都会好看很多：http://b1.loli.io/images/lxBw.jpg
  15. 03:56:829 (1) - 转盘里停这里好奇怪……这个bpm的normal的话转盘后可以只隔一拍，停04:01:380 - 这里看看
  16. 04:10:144 (1) - 碰血条确实rankable，不过跟blanket一个道理，能修好还是修
  17. 04:12:166 (4,1) - 视觉ds，4尾巴看着跟1就太近，不好看
  18. 04:34:413 (1,2) - 这overlap并不好看啊




[Hard]
  1. 01:09:471 (4,5) - 这里摆这么远不太好，尤其前面刚刚有01:07:112 (5,6) - 这是隔1/2
  2. 01:15:539 (3) - 重音是在这里，所以jump也好，新一组形状的开始也好，nc也好，放在这里都会舒服得多
  3. 01:50:258 (2,3,4) - 4跟2、3是不同性质的声音，全叠一起感觉不是好主意．或者把3、4换成滑条，或者2、3换滑条其实也行．01:55:650 (2,3,4) - 同
  4. 01:59:359 (1,2) - 虽然没啥问题，但打起来实在有点
  5. 02:14:358 - 02:14:527 - 这漏了感觉很不爽，而且你前面都跟了鼓．想切轨感觉也是02:15:538 - 这里再切更好
  6. 02:27:336 (1) - 这nc什么意思
  7. 02:35:763 (4,5) - 02:41:830 (3,1,2) - 同前……这复制粘贴的好明显
  8. 03:42:505 (2,3,4) - 这图里的1/4有这么放的吗？突然这样太奇怪了，没道理


[主难度]
  1. ？？？爱抚我求你换个自定义难度名，我读书少你别骗我这难度哪止insane
  2. nc可以再看看，比如02:14:022 (1,2,3) - 02:19:415 (5,6,1) - 这种nc不一致我感觉有点无理
  3. 03:04:921 (8) - 尾巴好像不对
  4. 摸完了．我是你脑残粉，爱抚大神量产神图，真心的．


GL~
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yf_bmp
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yf_bmp

Misure wrote:

手莫
[Insane]
  1. 03:04:921 (8) - 这应该不是故意的吧.. 这个真是故意的 为了跟某个音
  2. 03:08:123 - 多余绿线 好

Good luck! :)xie xie!

Pata-Mon wrote:

嗯感觉最近老给低难度写论文呢……突然觉得自己的低难度真是太用心了，虽然也是半小时糊完 怕她神

[主难度]
  1. ？？？爱抚我求你换个自定义难度名，我读书少你别骗我这难度哪止insane 写啥呢 expert?
  2. nc可以再看看，比如02:14:022 (1,2,3) - 02:19:415 (5,6,1) - 这种nc不一致我感觉有点无理 看了下 这两个对应也不是我的本意 00:45:033 (1,2,3) - 00:47:730 (1,2,3) - 我是想对应这种。其他地方又看了遍 目测也没啥问题吧。。
  3. 03:04:921 (8) - 尾巴好像不对 这个真是故意的 为了跟某个音
  4. 摸完了．我是你脑残粉，爱抚大神量产神图，真心的． 爷爷


GL~
[Mahua]
693 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
被叫来模图
[Insane？]
感觉直滑条有的地方看起来不是很舒服的感觉（无视这条就好
开头是不是太密集了点（
02:49:920 (8) - 找半天才看出来这么点东西 滑条稍微调整下会好看点
03:11:157 (1,2,3,4) - 有点形单影只
03:35:089 (3) - 这个我会用弧形的滑条
04:33:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 大概是我觉得唯一一个有点不匹配周围的梗……

反...反震？？？？？

[Narcissu's Insane]
00:19:583 (1,2,3) - 你说这俩滑条要对称多好
01:06:437 (4) - 有点不好看 你说换成横着的然后换个位置怎么样
01:08:122 (1) - 不适合跟这种红描点滑条
01:14:190 (2) - ^
01:35:763 (2) - ^
01:43:852 (3) - ^
01:30:706 (4) - 换个位置吧 不好看
02:00:706 (1) - 修一下形
02:18:234 (1) - 丑
02:35:425 (5) - 修形
02:39:133 (4) - 这种滑条一般用于blanket
02:46:549 (5,6) - 丑
02:51:942 (1) - 曲子不适合这种滑条
04:00:030 (2) - ^
04:05:424 (2) - ^
04:24:300 (2) - ^
02:56:661 (3) - 修
03:33:739 (1) - 我认为放屏幕下半好看
03:38:458 (4) - 莫名逆flow
04:13:513 (3) - 可以用直滑条
04:37:109 (1,2) - 不好看


别的diff貌似也不用说了……
yf大大摸下我的tearvid啊（
yf_bmp
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yf_bmp

[Mahua] wrote:

被叫来模图
[Insane？]
感觉直滑条有的地方看起来不是很舒服的感觉（无视这条就好
开头是不是太密集了点（
02:49:920 (8) - 找半天才看出来这么点东西 滑条稍微调整下会好看点 可以
03:11:157 (1,2,3,4) - 有点形单影只 来个爽的
03:35:089 (3) - 这个我会用弧形的滑条 试试吧 不过不怎么重要
04:33:739 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 大概是我觉得唯一一个有点不匹配周围的梗…… 结尾来个爽的

反...反震？？？？？ 没...没抄！！！！！

别的diff貌似也不用说了……
yf大大摸下我的tearvid啊（ 哦 你rank吗 不rank就算了 反正我看了下好像还挺屌
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