Hebe Tien - A Little Happiness

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kabmi
Good job :)
DreaM117er
標記 :)
PatZar
gogogogo
Gyro Zeppeli
滋磁啊,先占个坑
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
sb里用的BG居然只有一张 我还期待能有什么不同Orz 如果能用更多剧照的话 就算没有什么牛逼的特效 sb也会比较丰满了
尤其是第一段副歌结束黑屏后 我满怀期待能看到一张不一样的BG 结果……

[Our Times]
diff name "Our Times"→"Our Lucky Times"
乃不觉得乃的flow一直在长时间地向同一个方向绕圈圈吗 越看越觉得别扭
别的其实也没什么可挑的
01:22:199 (1) - 像587那样用一个kick效果比较好
02:35:110 (1) - 1/2slider吧 tail消音 甚至我觉得可以给它减速
03:01:313 (3) - 向上移到X268 Y164 overlap一半同时跟03:01:692 (4)blanket多好看
03:22:389 (4,5) - CTRL+G 逆转flow 不要总是一个方向转圈
03:44:414 (1,2) - 首尾stack?
04:16:014 (1) - 似乎并不是完美地每个点都压准……我建议spinner从这里开始 不要kick

[587]
SC2-CLAP好怪 我觉得不太适合
有些滑条尾音很弱的要跟着一起做下消音哇 比如00:16:882 (5)
00:25:996 (3,6) - 错开再大一点为好 就像00:26:376 (4,1)一样
01:00:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五边形不完美导致最后01:02:832 (6)首尾无法兼顾stack 可以再调一下
02:14:604 - hard这里距离spinner足够远了 可以放note 不要放过
03:44:224 (5,3) - stack?
04:16:014 (1) - 同insane
我怎么觉得乃做的是light insane

谴责一下楼上的 :D
haha5957
[General]




[Storyboard]

03:28:275 (4) - "Pulse" here feels better when it's moved to 03:26:756 (1) -
and 03:44:414 (6) - to 03:44:984 (1) - ,
03:50:490 (6) - to 03:51:060 (1) - .

the blue tick pulse does make sense, but big white ticks are definitely the ones that deserve the pulse more than blue ticks IMO.


[Hard]

03:11:186 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although I do think it's fine because music calls for it, this part still looks significantly harder than rest of the map. Consider merging one of them to 1/1 slider so people who will actually play this map (2.8 star players obviously) can have some time to prepare..?

[Out lucky Times]

03:10:047 (1,2,3) - I understand that you actually followed music here but it's just better to have a jump here too (just like 03:08:528 (1,2,1,2) - ) due to music's feeling here in my opinion




okay map was way too great for me actually touch it, and music was super nice too despite me not being able to understand the lyrics.

wish you best luck!
ignorethis
01:11:186 (3) - 此处歌词应为“人理所当然地忘记” 结合上下文推断此处忘记应为动词 因此修饰动词时应用“地”
03:00:553 (2) - 同上

<Normal>
01:25:237 (1) - 我感觉这里kiai段的音效其实不是特别好...和乐曲不太搭配

<Hard>
开aimod可以看到没snap的object
00:12:325 (1) - 这里开始的一段我觉得object的声效音量太大了 30%就够了(如同normal)另外也可以加一些variety进去 像最高难度一样
01:25:237 (1) - 我这里也是和normal一样的意见 貌似音效和乐曲本身不太搭配 建议再找找有没有其他更合适的音效
02:56:376 (6) - 这里new combo是不是应该挪到下一个1那里

<Our lucky times>
looks good

good luck :)
Gust
[Our Lucky Times]
00:13:085 - 00:19:161 - 00:36:914 这些地方的vocal和背景音都很重,用滑条尾真的合适吗。。
00:22:958 (4) - 渐强的背景音也用slider带过了也太省事了(,我的话可能会考虑变距的单点
01:15:743 (6,1,2) - 个人不太喜欢这里的节奏下法。。一是1虽然是长白线而且有音,但音很轻,盖不过前面2个note。6是个vocal音的话可以考虑用一个1/2的slider,1作为尾。然后是01:16:503 (2) - 这里拆成2个note,01:16:882 - 没有理由作为滑条尾。
01:23:338 (3) - 考虑NC?前面的一堆变DS都NC了,这里作为歌词的起始,和前面也有一定距离了,应该可以的。
01:27:136 (4,5) - 建议节奏ctrl+g,有种4的声音比起5更适合note的感觉
01:33:211 (4,5) - 同
01:39:287 (6) - 跟钢琴音拆成2个note?
01:51:439 (4,5) - 同上上
01:57:515 (4,5) - 同
02:26:376 (2) - 拆成2个note?
?再后边居然摸不出东西了
Topic Starter
Kencho

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
sb里用的BG居然只有一张 我还期待能有什么不同Orz 如果能用更多剧照的话 就算没有什么牛逼的特效 sb也会比较丰满了
尤其是第一段副歌结束黑屏后 我满怀期待能看到一张不一样的BG 结果…… 劇照我再找找吧

[Our Times]
diff name "Our Times"→"Our Lucky Times"
乃不觉得乃的flow一直在长时间地向同一个方向绕圈圈吗 越看越觉得别扭 改善了改善了
别的其实也没什么可挑的
01:22:199 (1) - 像587那样用一个kick效果比较好
02:35:110 (1) - 1/2slider吧 tail消音 甚至我觉得可以给它减速 想做停頓效果
03:01:313 (3) - 向上移到X268 Y164 overlap一半同时跟03:01:692 (4)blanket多好看
03:22:389 (4,5) - CTRL+G 逆转flow 不要总是一个方向转圈
03:44:414 (1,2) - 首尾stack?
04:16:014 (1) - 似乎并不是完美地每个点都压准……我建议spinner从这里开始 不要kick 先保留

谴责一下楼上的 :D

Pikastar wrote:

[General]




[Storyboard]

03:28:275 (4) - "Pulse" here feels better when it's moved to 03:26:756 (1) -
and 03:44:414 (6) - to 03:44:984 (1) - ,
03:50:490 (6) - to 03:51:060 (1) - .

the blue tick pulse does make sense, but big white ticks are definitely the ones that deserve the pulse more than blue ticks IMO.

[Out lucky Times]

03:10:047 (1,2,3) - I understand that you actually followed music here but it's just better to have a jump here too (just like 03:08:528 (1,2,1,2) - ) due to music's feeling here in my opinion




okay map was way too great for me actually touch it, and music was super nice too despite me not being able to understand the lyrics.

wish you best luck! Thanks!

ignorethis wrote:

01:11:186 (3) - 此处歌词应为“人理所当然地忘记” 结合上下文推断此处忘记应为动词 因此修饰动词时应用“地” 這個東西我還是選擇先跟官方歌詞吧
03:00:553 (2) - 同上

<Our lucky times>
looks good

good luck :)

Ultimate Madoka wrote:

[Our Lucky Times]
00:13:085 - 00:19:161 - 00:36:914 这些地方的vocal和背景音都很重,用滑条尾真的合适吗。。 先保留
00:22:958 (4) - 渐强的背景音也用slider带过了也太省事了(,我的话可能会考虑变距的单点 先保留
01:15:743 (6,1,2) - 个人不太喜欢这里的节奏下法。。一是1虽然是长白线而且有音,但音很轻,盖不过前面2个note。6是个vocal音的话可以考虑用一个1/2的slider,1作为尾。然后是01:16:503 (2) - 这里拆成2个note,01:16:882 - 没有理由作为滑条尾。 先保留
01:23:338 (3) - 考虑NC?前面的一堆变DS都NC了,这里作为歌词的起始,和前面也有一定距离了,应该可以的。
01:27:136 (4,5) - 建议节奏ctrl+g,有种4的声音比起5更适合note的感觉
01:33:211 (4,5) - 同
01:39:287 (6) - 跟钢琴音拆成2个note?
01:51:439 (4,5) - 同上上
01:57:515 (4,5) - 同
02:26:376 (2) - 拆成2个note? 先保留
?再后边居然摸不出东西了

Thanks for mod
DreaM117er
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377,218,95680,2,0,P|448:222|505:152,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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139,353,98908,2,0,P|85:369|16:244,1,210,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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162,195,100427,6,0,P|238:206|287:210,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
308,239,100996,2,0,L|365:232,1,52.5,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
463,211,101566,1,4,0:3:0:0:
486,108,101946,2,0,P|438:28|327:44,1,210,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
275,126,103085,1,0,0:3:0:0:
331,214,103465,6,0,P|346:261|342:336,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
333,367,104034,2,0,L|265:359,1,52.5,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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104,271,104984,2,0,P|56:297|0:294,2,105,0|0|4,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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440,182,107262,1,0,0:3:0:0:
421,78,107642,2,0,P|351:87|309:94,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
234,27,108401,2,0,P|164:18|122:11,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
36,61,109161,1,4,0:3:0:0:
2,160,109541,6,0,P|10:222|20:276,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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171,370,110680,2,0,P|231:360|385:343,1,210,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
483,351,111819,2,0,P|476:298|467:247,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
392,173,112579,5,4,0:3:0:0:
405,69,112958,1,0,0:3:0:0:
315,13,113338,2,0,P|243:22|196:29,1,105,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
170,60,113908,2,0,P|88:55|26:117,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
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206,258,115617,6,0,P|212:205|219:153,2,105,4|0|0,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
249,353,116756,2,0,P|316:343|385:338,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
398,244,117515,2,0,P|465:254|534:259,2,105,0|4|0,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
304,195,118655,6,0,P|258:223|184:210,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
114,174,119414,2,0,P|120:107|126:61,1,105,0|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
138,18,119984,2,0,P|212:28|311:41,1,157.5,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
352,125,120933,1,4,0:3:0:0:
455,108,121313,1,0,0:3:0:0:
510,196,121692,6,0,P|503:273|499:323,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
472,345,122262,2,0,L|402:337,1,52.5,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
315,324,122832,1,4,0:3:0:0:
211,307,123211,2,0,P|124:335|41:236,1,210,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
21,158,124351,1,0,0:3:0:0:
82,73,124730,6,0,P|130:64|188:58,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
231,30,125300,2,0,L|307:41,1,52.5,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
373,90,125870,1,4,0:3:0:0:
475,68,126249,2,0,P|467:151|457:284,1,210,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
400,365,127389,1,0,0:3:0:0:
297,341,127768,6,0,P|242:343|198:311,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
176,270,128338,2,0,L|186:208,1,52.5,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
235,125,128908,1,4,0:3:0:0:
170,42,129287,2,0,P|101:16|19:109,1,210,0|4,0:3|0:3,0:3:0:0:
41,208,130427,1,0,0:3:0:0:
41,208,130806,5,4,0:3:0:0:
256,192,130996,12,4,133844,0:0:0:0:
205,59,145996,6,0,P|139:53|101:46,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,308,148275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,270,148655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
478,262,149034,6,0,P|469:313|464:366,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,174,150174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,114,150553,2,0,P|328:61|319:10,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,151692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
167,205,152072,6,0,P|104:185|18:301,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,373,153211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,373,153401,2,0,P|140:366|218:354,1,157.5
276,266,154351,2,0,P|328:271|379:281,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
474,235,155110,6,0,P|504:174|420:58,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,42,156249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,106,156629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,121,157009,2,0,P|140:67|132:14,2,105,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,223,158148,6,0,P|63:225|15:275,1,105
101,327,158908,2,0,P|155:317|223:311,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,325,159477,2,0,P|244:253|234:153,1,157.5
269,69,160427,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,31,160806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,64,161186,6,0,P|460:130|456:181,1,105
449,273,161946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,335,162325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,312,162705,2,0,P|215:339|157:333,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,231,163844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
353,128,164224,6,0,P|301:125|256:152,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,233,164984,2,0,P|120:227|67:218,2,105,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,294,166123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,351,166503,2,0,P|412:351|454:321,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,229,167262,6,0,P|463:198|411:199,1,105
306,187,168022,2,0,P|254:198|202:204,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,272,168781,2,0,L|115:348,2,52.5,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
24,229,169541,2,0,P|12:177|6:125,1,105,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
45,28,170300,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,57,170680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,15,171060,2,0,P|295:26|366:30,2,105,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,172199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,158,172579,2,0,P|237:149|284:139,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,136,173338,6,0,P|441:202|412:312,1,210,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,174477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,332,174857,2,0,P|182:340|116:346,1,105
76,347,175427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,347,175617,2,0,P|67:295|62:242,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,162,176376,6,0,P|173:192|244:179,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,88,177515,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,115,177895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,139,178275,2,0,P|413:82|417:26,2,105,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,243,179414,6,0,P|473:246|524:301,1,105
435,348,180174,2,0,P|382:341|322:332,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,244,180933,2,0,L|285:167,2,52.5,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,336,181692,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,364,182072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,329,182452,6,0,P|16:277|12:224,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
54,128,183211,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,150,183591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,78,183971,2,0,P|280:76|347:63,1,105
439,87,184730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
485,181,185110,6,0,P|476:252|471:306,1,105
408,368,185870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,335,186249,2,0,P|246:326|195:322,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,326,186819,2,0,P|106:266|123:168,1,157.5
186,112,187768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,139,188148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,80,188528,6,0,P|425:75|490:71,2,105,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,139,189667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,237,190047,2,0,L|393:247,2,52.5,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,295,190806,2,0,P|180:288|110:272,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,229,191566,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,124,191946,2,0,L|31:69,1,52.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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238,86,193085,2,0,P|289:75|341:68,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,68,193655,2,0,P|448:116|439:206,1,157.5
378,277,194604,6,0,P|339:250|269:250,2,105,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
303,351,195743,2,0,P|198:337|94:327,1,210,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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57,155,197262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,56,197642,6,0,P|76:51|129:40,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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263,172,198971,2,0,P|218:217|244:324,1,157.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,361,199920,2,0,P|364:352|439:343,1,105,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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423,61,201439,1,8,1:2:0:0:
326,19,201819,2,0,P|266:32|108:52,1,210,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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476,29,206566,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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206,152,207895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,130,208275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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345,291,210933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,143,212452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,126,213971,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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138,247,215490,2,0,L|128:332,1,52.5,8|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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340,24,219667,1,8,1:2:0:0:
240,52,220047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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265,163,223085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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206,318,224224,1,8,1:2:0:0:
206,318,224414,2,0,P|154:309|101:304,1,105,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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122,71,226503,2,0,P|60:66|23:31,2,105,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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322,37,228022,6,0,P|313:88|305:140,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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223,323,229161,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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223,323,230300,1,8,1:2:0:0:
223,323,230490,2,0,P|288:331|351:337,1,105,4|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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326,206,232199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,111,232579,2,0,L|435:104,2,52.5,2|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,71,233338,2,0,P|217:78|146:84,1,105,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,350,236376,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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454,113,237895,1,8,1:2:0:0:
397,24,238275,2,0,P|328:37|281:41,1,105,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,243401,12,0,245490,0:0:0:0:
140,131,246249,6,0,P|132:73|125:18,2,105,4|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
175,338,247768,1,4,0:3:0:0:
372,131,249287,6,0,P|380:73|387:18,2,105,4|0|4,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
337,338,250806,1,4,0:3:0:0:
191,205,252325,6,0,P|133:204|92:232,1,105,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,253937,12,0,259614,0:0:0:0:
liangv587

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

SC2-CLAP好怪 我觉得不太适合
有些滑条尾音很弱的要跟着一起做下消音哇 比如00:16:882 (5) ok
00:25:996 (3,6) - 错开再大一点为好 就像00:26:376 (4,1)一样 感觉不出来的
01:00:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 五边形不完美导致最后01:02:832 (6)首尾无法兼顾stack 可以再调一下 sv跟ds不一样,不可能的
02:14:604 - hard这里距离spinner足够远了 可以放note 不要放过 不用
03:44:224 (5,3) - stack?会破坏间距
04:16:014 (1) - 同insane
我怎么觉得乃做的是light insane 2.8怎么可能是insane

Pikastar wrote:

[Hard]
03:11:186 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Although I do think it's fine because music calls for it, this part still looks significantly harder than rest of the map. Consider merging one of them to 1/1 slider so people who will actually play this map (2.8 star players obviously) can have some time to prepare..? not hard

ignorethis wrote:

<Hard>
开aimod可以看到没snap的object ok
00:12:325 (1) - 这里开始的一段我觉得object的声效音量太大了 30%就够了(如同normal)另外也可以加一些variety进去 像最高难度一样ok
01:25:237 (1) - 我这里也是和normal一样的意见 貌似音效和乐曲本身不太搭配 建议再找找有没有其他更合适的音效 懒了
02:56:376 (6) - 这里new combo是不是应该挪到下一个1那里ok
thanks for modding
smallboat
[General]
1.標籤不一致
2.117的spinner後面間隔好像太近?

[117's Normal]
02:44:224 (1) - 後面背景finish是輕的,這個finish聽的好大聲又重,不覺得很突出?

[liangv587's Hard]

03:11:186 (1,3) - 這兩個要交換NC吧,重音在大白線上而且這樣擺放也不會看得不對勁

[Our Lucky Times]

間距挺合理的,nazi問題我就不提出了,fine。
DreaM117er
交給肯求改吧,音效的話我沒意見
Topic Starter
Kencho

smallboat wrote:

[General]
1.標籤不一致 Fixed
2.117的spinner後面間隔好像太近? 這個再考慮一下

[117's Normal]
02:44:224 (1) - 後面背景finish是輕的,這個finish聽的好大聲又重,不覺得很突出? Fixed

[liangv587's Hard]

03:11:186 (1,3) - 這兩個要交換NC吧,重音在大白線上而且這樣擺放也不會看得不對勁 Fixed

[Our Lucky Times]

間距挺合理的,nazi問題我就不提出了,fine。
Thanks for mod
smallboat
Bubbled
moonlightleaf
都bubble了, hhh

关于SB,现在的也还凑合,不过还是有几句话要say:

1) 最普通的sb , 就歌词缓动淡入淡出 还有几个缩放淡出....

2) 歌词不描个边吗

3) white.png 1366x768 好像也不是不可以 ,一般用854x480的样子

4) 第一段kiai结束后 白边完事以为有什么新的bg,然后还是那张...( 期待感突然暴死

5) 缩放我觉得都太大了,考虑改成0.7 ? -> S,0,194604,195363,0.625,0.7 <- 第二段kiai那边可以大一点点,毕竟大声些

6) 最后04:06:249 (1) - 开始每个钢琴音对应的note可以加一个闪光, 像大蘑菇 里 05:42:110 (1) - 这样的
Topic Starter
Kencho
加了張劇照,改了縮放,把white.png改成了854x480,加上了閃光,感謝二妹
Update!
smallboat
Okay Rebubbled
Topic Starter
Kencho
metadata重新找了下
Romanised Title : A Little Happiness
Source : 我的少女時代 Our Times
等下個bn來的時候我再fix
Karen
Our Lucky Times
  1. 00:12:705 (2,3) - 这两个不好看,要么直的要么弯一下blanket。 00:37:009 (2,3) - 这个就好看了 我也不知道为啥 可能角度问题
  2. 04:03:211 - 加个finish?
  3. 03:32:832 (1,2) - 这有些不太好吧 有点坑而且也不好看


metadata给个网站

只顾着看歌词了呜呜
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