DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Kyptoric

Joined January 2012

Kyptoric 2017-04-25T01:23:26+00:00

i think the map is fine to be honest, its not perfect and i feel like it would be possible to polish it even further at some parts but it looks like rank quality to me

Yumeno Himiko

Elite Storyboarder

1,168 posts

Joined August 2012

Yumeno Himiko 2017-04-25T03:49:40+00:00

Let's do some more discussion before pusing forward

[Chronos]
00:31:479 (6) - the 1/4 here actually follows nothing, and I believe removing this won't hurt the whole pattern so please consider this.
00:32:646 (2,3,4) - Sampleset Normal hitsound? Is it just a mistake?
00:43:563 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I listened to this part several times and I believe it's 1/6.
01:30:813 (4,5,6) - as I noticed you changed the later similar pattern like this, you'd better remove the 1/8 note 01:30:854 (5) here too.
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additional personal mods:
00:16:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - All triples in this part are anti-flows instead of this one, I know the rhythm will change here, what about keeping one anti-flow instead of 0?
00:24:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo the anti-flows are having a bit large movement and very easy to miss here, make the antis just 1.2x will be better.
00:42:563 (1,2,3,4) - make more movement? Like this one 00:47:229 (1,2,3,4)
00:59:673 (5) - remove this one since no beat calls for a note here, and move 00:59:784 (5) to x:160, also it'll be a nice idea if 00:59:562(4) changed to a slider. It'll still be a intense flow here, no worry.
01:24:563 (1,2,3,4) - Lack movement here too, ctrl+G on 01:24:896 (3,4)

Hope this requalified soon.

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-04-25T15:53:08+00:00

Yumeno Himiko wrote:
Let's do some more discussion before pusing forward

[Chronos]
00:31:479 (6) - the 1/4 here actually follows nothing, and I believe removing this won't hurt the whole pattern so please consider this. EDIT: Finally it's indeed too small to be emphasized like this, removed, sorry for the inconvenience
00:32:646 (2,3,4) - Sampleset Normal hitsound? Is it just a mistake? Wow didn't saw it before, thanks
00:43:563 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I listened to this part several times and I believe it's 1/6. Indeed, if we hear with 25% playback rate 1/6 looks more consistent, I am ashamed.
01:30:813 (4,5,6) - as I noticed you changed the later similar pattern like this, you'd better remove the 1/8 note 01:30:854 (5) here too. For this one i'm pretty sure that 1/8 is fine here, try with 25% playback rate and you'll hear a really fast 1/8 melody.
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additional personal mods:
00:16:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - All triples in this part are anti-flows instead of this one, I know the rhythm will change here, what about keeping one anti-flow instead of 0? Done
00:24:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo the anti-flows are having a bit large movement and very easy to miss here, make the antis just 1.2x will be better. 1.2x will ruin the design but I agree that it's sometimes shitmissable for HD players, reduced to 1.34x
00:42:563 (1,2,3,4) - make more movement? Like this one 00:47:229 (1,2,3,4) Done, also fixed other spacing for the consistency
00:59:673 (5) - remove this one since no beat calls for a note here, and move 00:59:784 (5) to x:160, also it'll be a nice idea if 00:59:562(4) changed to a slider. It'll still be a intense flow here, no worry. Changed in my way, (6) is now emphasized
01:24:563 (1,2,3,4) - Lack movement here too, ctrl+G on 01:24:896 (3,4) Not for this one, first because it will be inconsistent with the following pattern: it will remove the hyperdash and it's really hard to fix that without destroying the whole pattern, but also because I really like as it is but it's personnal.

Hope this requalified soon. I'll do my best.

Thank you, It was useful.

@Ascendance, Deif, Yuii- Also, tasuke912 checked the timing and said that It should be fine.

EDIT: Kin asked Bonsai to check the timing too, he said the same thing

screnshot

That's why I think that we can keep this offset.

Last edited by Kyuare 2017-04-25T21:15:20+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-04-25T19:02:11+00:00

Just I would drop some for the highest diff

00:52:896 (7,8,9,10) - This one deserves to get longer distance with its pitch transition on 00:52:979 (8,9) - so try to make more distance at least longer than 00:52:813 (6,7) .
00:56:563 (1,2) - This one could be HDashed due to its pitch differences, even if you disagree at least I wanna see the different pattern usage compared with 00:55:896 (1,2,3) .

some recommendable usages

00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:57:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wanna hear the reason that why did you used 2 - 4 rhythm usage which isn't 3 - 3 like the others, do you have any proper things?
00:59:229 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) .
00:59:563 (4) - With the instrumental emphasis I think full horizontal slider works well for here
01:01:896 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) .
01:02:229 (4,5,6) - This one also can be different than the other triples
01:03:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 01:04:119 (3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) .
01:17:896 (3,4) - Flow transition here doesn't seem naturally for me. To fix this, I think you should flip every patterns after 01:18:479 (8) - this object, and try with this one :

SPOILER

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-04-25T20:51:15+00:00

CLSW wrote:
Just I would drop some for the highest diff

00:52:896 (7,8,9,10) - This one deserves to get longer distance with its pitch transition on 00:52:979 (8,9) - so try to make more distance at least longer than 00:52:813 (6,7) . I increased the distance to have the same spacing as (6,7) more will make it hard to read
00:56:563 (1,2) - This one could be HDashed due to its pitch differences, even if you disagree at least I wanna see the different pattern usage compared with 00:55:896 (1,2,3) . Done
some recommendable usages

00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:57:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wanna hear the reason that why did you used 2 - 4 rhythm usage which isn't 3 - 3 like the others, do you have any proper things? To avoid repetitive movement, since it's a new santza I wanted to find something different than triangles and I found that 2 - 4 follow the song too so I got the idea of quadruplets
00:59:229 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) . Done
00:59:563 (4) - With the instrumental emphasis I think full horizontal slider works well for here I don't think so because the spacing is already very big, the actual slider fit better imo because it creates a reverse effect
01:01:896 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) . Done
01:02:229 (4,5,6) - This one also can be different than the other triples Done
01:03:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 01:04:119 (3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) . Same thing
01:17:896 (3,4) - Flow transition here doesn't seem naturally for me. To fix this, I think you should flip every patterns after 01:18:479 (8) - this object, and try with this one :
SPOILER
Fixed in my way but kept the good idea

Sorry for your recommendable usages but if I put some of them I will need to erase some of the triplets and it will be hard to fix the consistency, I prefer to keep them, but it will inspire me for my next map. Thank you for this mod, it was useful.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2017-04-26T02:34:35+00:00

Platter Code

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Fixed both suggestions from Sinnoh's mod

ty Sinnoh :3

Kyuare

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Kyuare 2017-04-26T06:01:18+00:00

WildOne94 wrote:

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360,248,107396,2,0,L|456:248,2,75,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,107896,6,0,P|64:184|128:160,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,152,108563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
79,144,108896,2,0,L|167:144,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,109229,6,0,L|136:144,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,109896,2,0,L|520:144,2,75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,110396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,144,110563,6,0,P|104:208|152:248,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,111063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,111229,2,0,L|472:232,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,111729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,232,111896,5,10,0:0:0:0:
72,216,111979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,176,112063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,128,112146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,112229,1,10,0:0:0:0:
104,64,112313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,56,112396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,56,112563,5,10,0:0:0:0:
416,56,112729,1,10,0:0:0:0:
328,56,112896,1,10,0:0:0:0:
80,64,113063,1,10,0:0:0:0:

Fixed both suggestions from Sinnoh's mod

ty Sinnoh :3

Updated.

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2017-04-26T12:51:45+00:00

good luck!

this map deserves to be ranked

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-04-27T05:31:11+00:00

Kyptoric wrote:
i think the map is fine to be honest, its not perfect and i feel like it would be possible to polish it even further at some parts but it looks like rank quality to me

It's impossible to achieve a "perfect" beatmap that'd please everybody. Thousands of players would have different ideas on how to polish a beatmap, but I'm with you that this one deserves to be qualified again.

Timing was doublechecked and it feels more accurate, odd snaps in Chronos were fixed and its gameplay improved a bit more with the last mods you got in it. With all said, I'm confident to push the beatmap forward again:

Bubbled!

Kimitakari

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Kimitakari 2017-04-27T10:52:41+00:00

Not a modding thing but why is 01:45:396 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - dosent moved?

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-04-28T02:45:02+00:00

Looking good

Before it gets qualified (no more DQ drama this time):

Chronos

00:56:896 (4) - x:240 seems like a bit more of a comfortable distance here, such a sharp antiflow could be potentially jarring to the player
01:02:229 (4) - x:208 for the same above reason, if you could!
01:03:563 (1) - x:352 for consistent distance with 01:03:229 (1,2) - ? Looks nicer imo!

moe furely

01:38:896 (5,6) - I'd really make both of these fully horizontal. The current tilt on them makes them a bit awkward to play since you have to abruptly stop.

I'm really happy with the changes you made here. Looks good to be moved back to ranking!

the bg is showing some nipple so maybe a new bg is in order as well :thinking:

Pyrzhe

Pyrzhe 2017-04-28T11:23:37+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
the bg is showing some nipple so maybe a new bg is in order as well :thinking:

You complain about seeing a nipple that is covered... I understand your point of view... But for me I'm not 100% sure that there's a nipple, I can't say it only a fold, but even if there's a nipple, itsn't that obvious
Then if you look at your maps, on the Zerosiki Material - Love for example you can see a large part of his chest, as well as a much lighter outfit than the background of Kyuare...
In my opinion Zerosiki (and many others*) have a background that is less safe for work than Chronoxia...
So I think there is no need to change the background personally.

* others map :
- Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - COME BACK TO MY HEART (Ryu* Remix)
- Umetora - Ifuudoudou
- Eclipse - nO limiT (TV Size)
- LEAF XCEED Music Division - Fur Elise

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-04-28T11:40:42+00:00

@Pyrzhe Just saying that the 4 maps you listed are all from 2013 or earlier - standards change, we have to change too. You can't judge current maps based on old rules and criteria.

That being said, I don't see anything overtly suggestive or sexual about this particular background, nor was there any such intention in the case of Zerosiki.

MorsayFanGirl

MorsayFanGirl 2017-04-28T11:45:52+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
@Pyrzhe Just saying that the 4 maps you listed are all from 2013 or earlier - standards change, we have to change too.

So remove all beatmap with NSFW background... I don't understand why the background of this beat is a problem. I'm agree with Pyrzhe when he say : "" I'm not 100% sure that there's a nipple, I can't say it only a fold, but even if there's a nipple, itsn't that obvious""

MBomb

MBomb 2017-04-28T11:56:42+00:00

MorsayFanGirl wrote:
JBHyperion wrote:
@Pyrzhe Just saying that the 4 maps you listed are all from 2013 or earlier - standards change, we have to change too.

So remove all beatmap with NSFW background... I don't understand why the background of this beat is a problem. I'm agree with Pyrzhe when he say : "" I'm not 100% sure that there's a nipple, I can't say it only a fold, but even if there's a nipple, itsn't that obvious""

I get the feeling you didn't read the rest of what he said...

Bg seems fine to me too, will recheck later on today (also I think ascendance may have been joking with that comment)

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-04-28T12:13:42+00:00

actually that's not a tit it's quite clearly just another random bump of skin like the one on her neck

Vincs

166 posts

Joined October 2012

Vincs 2017-04-28T12:29:01+00:00

You guys get baited too easily :thinking:

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-04-28T13:32:22+00:00

I don't even remember writing it, it was late and I was out of it haha

Also as usual, MorsayFanGirl provides nothing of use to the conversation and is subsequently making himself look worse by ignoring everything except the stuff he can pour salt over 👀

Let's also remember that we can't use past ranked maps as references in any circumstance. Each map must be addressed individually. Obviously, it was my mistake, I wanted to mod this before it was qualified again and I was absolutely exhausted so there are bound to be some errors.

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-04-28T17:10:22+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Looking good

Before it gets qualified (no more DQ drama this time):

Chronos

00:56:896 (4) - x:240 seems like a bit more of a comfortable distance here, such a sharp antiflow could be potentially jarring to the player I don't think so, first because others similar triplets have the same spacing, but also because the adrenalline of the player just kicked in, his reflexes should be hightened
01:02:229 (4) - x:208 for the same above reason, if you could! same thing sorry...
01:03:563 (1) - x:352 for consistent distance with 01:03:229 (1,2) - ? Looks nicer imo! Sorry but no because it's a new santza, the consistency is here: 01:04:229 (1) - and 01:03:563 (1) -
moe furely

01:38:896 (5,6) - I'd really make both of these fully horizontal. The current tilt on them makes them a bit awkward to play since you have to abruptly stop. Furely told me that he really want to keep these pattern as it is, objectively it will be really tricky since we already have fully horizontal sliders just before, which increased the intensity a lot. Making them fully horizontal would be "too much" and will sometimes cause a shitmiss.
I'm really happy with the changes you made here. Looks good to be moved back to ranking! Thank you for your advices ! But I think that my map is better as it is actually... sorry.

the bg is showing some nipple so maybe a new bg is in order as well :thinking:I can't see them, she is wearing a dress o.o