General
You can simplify the name of the bg, it doesn't need to be that long

Furely's Overdose
00:06:562 (1,1) - Directly stacking after a 1/1 is difficult to follow because of momentum. The hyper causes player to end up to the right of where the fruit is, so the player has to go left to be ablle to catch the next fruit, but has to press right again quickly directly after to follow flow. This creates a lot of key presses in a section where almost nothing is happening in the music. Maybe for Rain players, but Overdose players can control when they need stop or continue. This is not difficult to follow because it's a 1/1, players will have the time to analyze the situation and stop here.
Some nice diagrams of what is going on

Images, read this

The lines represent flow, the circles repesent significant changes in flow/antiflow

00:01:230 (3,1) - This pattern is fine. There is no emphasis put on the part where there is no sounds, and gives enough leniency to flow


00:04:229 (2,3) - This pattern however, requires an extra key press due to how it's organised and the large distance. This is over-mapping the section by how it's played, and should be simplified. We can't call that over-mapping since beat actually exist here, the extra movement is here to introduce the player for the next pattern because the more the music continues, the more the intensity increases

that on top of creating really awkward flow stops there. The pattern should be changed a little as well as other similar ones in the next section
00:12:452 (3,4) - What happened to the hypers here, the current pattern implies that 4 has identical importance compared to 3. This is inconsistent with the later identical sections such as 00:14:451 (9,1) - and 00:15:118 (3,4) - , which also use difficult flow to emphasise this even further. Because it's a new santza, Furely mapped it to avoid repetitive patterns.
00:18:229 (4) - There are drums here that should be mapped, since you've changed focus from violins to bass here. Yes, indeed
00:20:007 (2) - I can't 100% tell because I don't have headphones, but I'm fairly sure there's no sound here to map I can hear a small song but I think that it's less repetitive with a slider, done.
00:31:229 (5,6,7) - Edge dashes should not be used in conjunction with hypers, it's one of the guidelines from the ranking criteria. It's an easy edge dash, but it's still an edge dash. You'll need to either change it or explain why it's like this and why the quality of the set would be lowered if it was changed. This is not a edge dash, a edge dash would be at x:0 or x:512
i thought there would be more but there wasn't

Chronos
00:07:118 (3,4) - Avoid major composition differences in similar sections. The basic spacing and rhythm should be similar, while patterning can vary. This ensures that rhythm and intensity in all similar sections reflect a song similarly. - Ranking Criteria It actually follow the Ranking Criteria,
the timeline and the spacing is the same with 00:07:674 (5,6) - , while the slider shape vary.

If you're going to innovate the ranking criteria, do it outside the ranked section. Respond to Ascendance's mod properly since he's covered basically everything.

Kyuare wrote:

This is not a edge dash, a edge dash would be at x:0 or x:512

Yumeno Himiko wrote:

Let's do some more discussion before pusing forward

[Chronos]
00:31:479 (6) - the 1/4 here actually follows nothing, and I believe removing this won't hurt the whole pattern so please consider this. EDIT: Finally it's indeed too small to be emphasized like this, removed, sorry for the inconvenience
00:32:646 (2,3,4) - Sampleset Normal hitsound? Is it just a mistake? Wow didn't saw it before, thanks
00:43:563 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I listened to this part several times and I believe it's 1/6. Indeed, if we hear with 25% playback rate 1/6 looks more consistent, I am ashamed.
01:30:813 (4,5,6) - as I noticed you changed the later similar pattern like this, you'd better remove the 1/8 note 01:30:854 (5) here too. For this one i'm pretty sure that 1/8 is fine here, try with 25% playback rate and you'll hear a really fast 1/8 melody.
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additional personal mods:
00:16:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - All triples in this part are anti-flows instead of this one, I know the rhythm will change here, what about keeping one anti-flow instead of 0? Done
00:24:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo the anti-flows are having a bit large movement and very easy to miss here, make the antis just 1.2x will be better. 1.2x will ruin the design but I agree that it's sometimes shitmissable for HD players, reduced to 1.34x
00:42:563 (1,2,3,4) - make more movement? Like this one 00:47:229 (1,2,3,4) Done, also fixed other spacing for the consistency
00:59:673 (5) - remove this one since no beat calls for a note here, and move 00:59:784 (5) to x:160, also it'll be a nice idea if 00:59:562(4) changed to a slider. It'll still be a intense flow here, no worry. Changed in my way, (6) is now emphasized
01:24:563 (1,2,3,4) - Lack movement here too, ctrl+G on 01:24:896 (3,4) Not for this one, first because it will be inconsistent with the following pattern: it will remove the hyperdash and it's really hard to fix that without destroying the whole pattern, but also because I really like as it is but it's personnal.

Hope this requalified soon. I'll do my best.

screnshot

CLSW wrote:

Just I would drop some for the highest diff

00:52:896 (7,8,9,10) - This one deserves to get longer distance with its pitch transition on 00:52:979 (8,9) - so try to make more distance at least longer than 00:52:813 (6,7) . I increased the distance to have the same spacing as (6,7) more will make it hard to read
00:56:563 (1,2) - This one could be HDashed due to its pitch differences, even if you disagree at least I wanna see the different pattern usage compared with 00:55:896 (1,2,3) . Done

some recommendable usages

00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 00:57:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I wanna hear the reason that why did you used 2 - 4 rhythm usage which isn't 3 - 3 like the others, do you have any proper things? To avoid repetitive movement, since it's a new santza I wanted to find something different than triangles and I found that 2 - 4 follow the song too so I got the idea of quadruplets
00:59:229 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) . Done
00:59:563 (4) - With the instrumental emphasis I think full horizontal slider works well for here I don't think so because the spacing is already very big, the actual slider fit better imo because it creates a reverse effect
01:01:896 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:56:563 (1,2) . Done
01:02:229 (4,5,6) - This one also can be different than the other triples Done
01:03:229 (1,2,3,1,2,3) and 01:04:119 (3,1,2,3) - Same as 00:57:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6) . Same thing
01:17:896 (3,4) - Flow transition here doesn't seem naturally for me. To fix this, I think you should flip every patterns after 01:18:479 (8) - this object, and try with this one :

SPOILER

Fixed in my way but kept the good idea

WildOne94 wrote:

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Fixed both suggestions from Sinnoh's mod
ty Sinnoh :3

Kyptoric wrote:

i think the map is fine to be honest, its not perfect and i feel like it would be possible to polish it even further at some parts but it looks like rank quality to me

1. 00:56:896 (4) - x:240 seems like a bit more of a comfortable distance here, such a sharp antiflow could be potentially jarring to the player
2. 01:02:229 (4) - x:208 for the same above reason, if you could!
3. 01:03:563 (1) - x:352 for consistent distance with 01:03:229 (1,2) - ? Looks nicer imo!

1. 01:38:896 (5,6) - I'd really make both of these fully horizontal. The current tilt on them makes them a bit awkward to play since you have to abruptly stop.

Ascendance wrote:

the bg is showing some nipple so maybe a new bg is in order as well :thinking:

JBHyperion wrote:

@Pyrzhe Just saying that the 4 maps you listed are all from 2013 or earlier - standards change, we have to change too.

MorsayFanGirl wrote:

JBHyperion wrote:

@Pyrzhe Just saying that the 4 maps you listed are all from 2013 or earlier - standards change, we have to change too.

So remove all beatmap with NSFW background... I don't understand why the background of this beat is a problem. I'm agree with Pyrzhe when he say : "" I'm not 100% sure that there's a nipple, I can't say it only a fold, but even if there's a nipple, itsn't that obvious""

Ascendance wrote:

Looking good

Before it gets qualified (no more DQ drama this time):

Chronos

1. 00:56:896 (4) - x:240 seems like a bit more of a comfortable distance here, such a sharp antiflow could be potentially jarring to the player I don't think so, first because others similar triplets have the same spacing, but also because the adrenalline of the player just kicked in, his reflexes should be hightened
2. 01:02:229 (4) - x:208 for the same above reason, if you could! same thing sorry...
3. 01:03:563 (1) - x:352 for consistent distance with 01:03:229 (1,2) - ? Looks nicer imo! Sorry but no because it's a new santza, the consistency is here: 01:04:229 (1) - and 01:03:563 (1) -

moe furely

1. 01:38:896 (5,6) - I'd really make both of these fully horizontal. The current tilt on them makes them a bit awkward to play since you have to abruptly stop. Furely told me that he really want to keep these pattern as it is, objectively it will be really tricky since we already have fully horizontal sliders just before, which increased the intensity a lot. Making them fully horizontal would be "too much" and will sometimes cause a shitmiss.

I'm really happy with the changes you made here. Looks good to be moved back to ranking! Thank you for your advices ! But I think that my map is better as it is actually... sorry.

the bg is showing some nipple so maybe a new bg is in order as well :thinking:I can't see them, she is wearing a dress o.o