DJ Totoriott - Chronoxia [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Kyuare

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-12-15T15:03:03+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
General
Combo Colours aren't enough, also they are not at all related with Background ( File -> Open osu. in Notepad -> go to "Colours" and paste at all diffs )
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 203,131,252
Combo2 : 129,112,54
Combo3 : 132,132,255
Combo4 : 183,183,0
Added color but not yours because I think blue is also important
Add to tags: konami bemani Okay
Crystal's Salad
CS 3 please Changed to 3.2
00:05:896 (2,3,1) - try to keep the same distance as you did on 00:03:229 (2,3,1) -, so move 00:06:229 (3,1) - to x:312 Well it doesn't change anthing..I will keep x:308 for the symmetry.
00:08:563 (2,3,1) - I don't know why your distances doesn't have consistency. Move 00:08:896 (3) - to x:312 and 00:09:229 (1) - to x:208 Again it doesn't change anything, CLSW wanted to make it symmetrical, if i follow your suggestion it will break his idea, sorry
00:11:229 (2,3,1) - 00:16:563 (2,3,1) - following your previous patterns, it might looks nicer if you change they into something like 00:05:896 (2,3,1) -, in the other hand 00:13:896 (1,2,1) - could be like 00:03:229 (2,3,1) - to keep a better consistency, remenber distances pls.
00:19:896 (1,2,1,2,3) - there are two problems with this pattern, first of all, looks messy, then I don't understand why you decided to add break at 00:20:896 - when the intensity of the song is increasing, I recommend you to make 00:19:896 (1,2,1) - horizontally with a distance of 1.78x in the midle, then change 00:20:896 (2) - into 1 slider from 00:20:896 - to 00:21:118 -, finally 00:21:229 (3) - could be at the head of 00:20:896 (2) -, check this this I added a slider for the break But i won't change his pattern, you said that it looks messy but i don't think so, the shape is pretty consistent because it follow the flow correctly. Also I don't really like your suggestion sorry, it will break the whole pattern and it's too hard for a Salad
00:29:229 (1,2) - why not the same distance as 00:27:896 (1,2) -? Looking to your distances, I feel that you reduced the distance between 00:29:229 (1,2) - to keep 1.50x between 00:29:896 (2,1) - right? you need to search into your patterns to try to fix it, for example, the distance between 00:31:229 (2,1) - is too short, if you move 00:29:896 (2,1,2) - to x:363 you will kill two birds with one shoot. Fixed in my way, moved some sliders to make the spacing more consistent
00:39:229 (2,1) - you should increase distance here, same as you did on 00:33:229 (1,1) - and 00:44:563 (2,1) -, so move 00:39:896 (1) - to x:40. Increased a bit, but not to x:40
From 00:54:563 - to 01:05:229 - looks messy, difficult doesn't mean unsightly patterns, also you don't have consistency at structure, I don't know how many points it will take me if I give you my suggestions step by step, so I wanna give you a pattern, if you don't like feel free to reject but keep in mind the idea, I suggest you to remove 00:54:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) -, save your change and open osu in notepad, ( File -> Open osu. in Notepad -> go to "Hitobjects" ) and paste ( don't worry about Hitsounds or NewCombos ) :
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No, you say that these sliders are messy, but it's only for you, I really like the shape imo. I don't know what structure is for you, but objectively we can see that sliders are not randomly placed: 00:57:563 (2) - symmetry with (1), 00:57:896 (3,4) - same spacing as 00:57:563 (2,3) -
00:58:785 (1) - symmetry with 00:59:118 (2) - ;00:59:452 (3,4,5) - same spacing, I won't list everything but I just wanted to say that instead of asking to remap something to your idea, maybe you can find a solution to improve and not rebuild. I won't change them because they are not messy for the majority, and also because I don't want to rebuild what CLSW already built, sorry
01:22:563 (1,2) - don't you think that distance between such notes should be 1.20x? consistency with 01:27:896 (1,2) -, move 01:21:229 (1,2,1) - to x:96 Just moved 01:28:563 (2) - to x:96
01:25:229 (1,1) - why not enphasize the cymbal sound with more distance? 01:25:229 (1) - move to x:320, 01:26:563 (1,2,1,2) - to x:384 No, it will break the symmetry and I think that this is what CLSW wanted to keep, also it will break the consistency with 01:24:563 (2,1) -
01:28:563 (2,1) - the current distance is still too long because there isn't a strong sound that deserve jump, so move 01:29:229 (1,2,1) - to x:272 Already fixed because i moved 01:28:563 (2) - to x:96
01:31:729 (5) - this note sounds much better at 01:31:396 -, then move to x:320 I see that you wanted to empathise the finish, but I think it's better to keep equal distances because this is a Salad, it will be too hard if we empathise the finish
01:31:896 - after my previous suggestion, I recommend you to add more distance between 01:31:896 (1) - and the previous note than 01:31:896 (1,2) - cause high pitch is on 01:31:896 -, my advice is 01:31:896 (1) - move to x:144, 01:32:563 (2,1,2,3) - move to x:272 Since i didn't followed your previous suggestion this one won't be valid too, sorry
01:39:896 - same cymbal sound and you didn't enphasize, I recommend you to press Ctrl+G, then make it vertical, finally you can add curve to the left if you want. Juse did the same as 01:39:229 (3) -
I don't like this diff tbh, let's see if my advices help you to inprove it.
Furely's Overdose
00:01:563 (1,2) - what are you trying to enphasize here if strong sound is on 00:01:896 -? check carefully your own patterns, wich is following high pitch propertly, 00:04:229 (2,3) - or 00:04:895 (4,5,6,7) -?
.- Patterns that should be fixed:
l 00:01:563 (1,2) - 00:02:229 (3,4) - 00:04:229 (2,3) - 00:09:563 (2,3) - 00:10:229 (4,5) - Fixed
01:33:563 (5,6) - unsightly, also to mark the difference with the highest diff I strongly recommend you to change it, move 01:33:229 (1,2) - to x:256, 01:33:396 (3,4) - to x:40, 01:33:563 (5) - press Ctrl+G and move to x:240 and finally 01:33:730 (6) - press Ctrl+H and move to x:440 I won't change it because Furely really want to keep it, also i don't think it's a bad thing if there is a link between the harder diff, but contrariwise, it's consistent.
01:38:896 (5,6) - same as above, you are lowering the quality of the diff with such jump, I suggest you to move 01:38:563 (3) - to x:136, 01:38:729 (4) - press Ctrl+G and move to x:328, 01:38:896 (5) - press Ctrl+G and move to x:224 and finally move 01:39:063 (6) - to x:40 Same here too, you say that he is lowering the quality of the diff with such jump but i can't see how, it's very subjective. Maybe you're not used to see these jumps on overdoses but I really think it's okay, I asked testplay and no one complained about these
01:45:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - I know that you don't want to make it repetitive but the current pattern is too long without hyper dashes and is not a good idea at high diffs, try to move 01:45:229 (1,2,3) - to x:176 and 01:45:813 (4) - to x:232 Moved the whole pattern to x:176
01:47:813 (7) - move to x:96, the current transition between 01:47:563 (6,7) - looks stacked, unsightly. Done
01:47:896 (1,2) - 1.50x doesn't looks good to be honest, the current jump is too long, keep in mind that you have a hyper dash previously, take a look at 01:46:896 (3,4) -, is the same pattern but looks better, I strongly recommend you to make 01:48:063 (2) - horizontally, same as 01:48:396 (4) - and move to x:416. Done
01:52:646 (2,3) - Why you stopped your pattern? doesn't looks better if you continue increasing the distance here too? 01:52:730 (3,4) - move to x:392 fixed in my way
01:52:896 (5) - move to x:160, only if you followed my previous advice, to continue increasing the distance gradually. ^
01:53:063 (6) - looks better at x:424 tbh, is the last note and deserve a bit of enphasis done

You could be applying while I finish with Platter and Chronos

Thank you !

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-12-16T05:42:49+00:00

not sure why I wasn't notified to apply things for CLSW but ok

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2016-12-16T17:23:56+00:00

Ascendance wrote:

not sure why I wasn't notified to apply things for CLSW but ok

CLSW told me to fix it for him 8 month time ago because he didn't wanted to take care of it.
Also, I was not aware of this, I don't look people's userpage.

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2016-12-16T21:29:33+00:00

Ascendance wrote:

not sure why I wasn't notified to apply things for CLSW but ok

somebody is butthurted :^)

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2016-12-19T11:20:04+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Kurokami's Rain
00:09:118 (9,1) - you miss a hyper dash here, consistency with 00:03:563 (4,1) - Yes but if I place a Hyper there by just changing the slider the droplets ends up being almost uncatchable which means I need to change the whole map up to the break and I don't really intent to re-map it. I just reverted the Hyper into a simple jump instead.
00:53:229 (1,2,3) - hyper dash looks better between 00:53:396 (2,3) - to enphasize cymbal sound, I suggest you to move 00:53:396 (2) - to x:384 and 00:53:563 (3) - to x:160 To be honest this should be two set of double Hyper but that would be too hard for Rain isn't it? I decided to follow the melody with the Hypers instead of the cymbal which, despite of the finisher, is still weaker. It would be weird to hear a strong sound which should be Hyper than jump for some weak one.
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - same as above, you know that consistency is important to me uwu, also a mirrored pattern looks cool, try moving 00:53:896 (1) - to x:336, 00:54:063 (2) - to x:224 and 00:54:230 (3) - to x:448 I moved it to be symmetrical.
00:54:563 - intense part starts here, why 1/1 as a prelude? to be constant I strongly recommend you to change 00:54:563 (1) - and 00:54:896 (2) - into sliders. I'm pretty sure you didn't recognized the build up in these patterns. 00:54:563 (1,2,3,4) - 2 circle and 2 slider, 00:57:229 (1,2,3,4) - four slider, 00:59:896 (1,2,3,4) - four slider with 3 of them being 1/3 repeat, 01:02:563 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - while the rhythm here is a bit different but this is already full of 1/3. Mapping a lot of 1/3 pattern in a section is really tiring and its easy to run out of ideas so I decided to do something different this time.
00:56:896 (6,1) - Stacked doesn't looks good, was it on purpose? Thats fixed by moving with the previous part mentioned above.

I hate the AR9 on this map so much. Anyway, if you have some concerns feel free to poke me during Christmas so we can talk about it. Thanks for looking at.

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CelegaS

484 posts

Joined April 2012

CelegaS 2017-02-07T07:16:57+00:00

Can't wait to see this masterpiece ranked

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-02-20T20:27:06+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
Honestly at this point I don't feel ready to rank this due to the number of things I have to say. I'll give my two cents and then you can call me back in a few mods. However, I will finish this mod.

[Crystal's Salad]
Overall: I understand fluctuations in GDs but jeez in some sections the density shoots up like a rocket here. You might want to lighten up some sections I've indicated below.
00:05:563 (2) - Remove this to preserve consistency. Alternatively, you could add a hitcircle at every other instance this music occurs. No sorry it's consistent with 00:10:896 (2) -
00:26:229 - Add a hitcircle here for consistency with the music. Done
00:26:563 (3,4,5) - Surprisingly low distancing. For example, 00:28:563 (2,3,4) has the same absolute distancing, but the spacing is about twice as large. Done
00:58:785 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - The distancing at 00:55:452 (3,4,1,2) is much nicer than the one you have here due to being more reasonable on the player. Lower distancing between (1,2) etc. Done
01:00:563 (2) - See below.
01:02:563 (1) - I find this section to be too dense. Perhaps you could lower the density with the means below:
Ticker is on 01:03:563
Lowered the density but in my way
01:20:896 (6,1) - Move 01:21:229 (1) to x=92 or so to represent a larger movement to the kiai. I increased the spacing, but not until x:92
01:21:229 (1,2,1) - Pls no antiflow dash to more antiflow, too hard for salad players At least do something along the lines of Ctrl+Ging 01:21:896 (2). Okay
01:23:729 (3,1) - Make (1) a gentler slant. The movement could catch salad players by surprise. I understand it's the kiai and all, but still, be more careful. Done
01:40:396 (2) - Again, lower distancing. Salad players may not catch this since it leads to a movement in the opposite direction. Not for this one sorry, since it's the final we can make something harder because adrenaline is at its maximum

TBC

Thanks.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-02-20T21:27:10+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Kurokami's Rain]
Overall: I don't really like some of the spacing choices, but I understand that's what fits into your style. Otherwise, it plays pretty well and I don't have much of a problem with it. As I told you, feel free to point these out.

01:42:813 (2) - I see that you follow the 1/4 here but you don't follow it anywhere else in the same musical pattern but 01:48:146 (2). You could add them at 01:44:146, 01:45:479, etc. or remove the 1/4 that exist in this section. I wanted to avoid the repetitive patterns so I created some variety on the timeline. 01:42:563 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - and 01:47:896 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - are actually the ones which repeats itself. Its much easier to handle the repetitive parts of the song this way because you won't be out of the patterns at the end of it.
01:51:229 (3,4) - No movement? I'd rather have the catcher move some distance here, at least. There was a movement once but changed along the way and now I think due to the higher AR its much better this way. It creates a nice (half a sec) pause before the big finish.

The rest changed. Thank you.

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32,64,23229,2,0,L|48:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,272,24146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,176,24396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,192,25396,1,4,0:0:0:0:
336,240,25479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,25563,2,0,L|208:224,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,25896,2,0,L|384:144,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,160,26813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,288,27229,2,2,L|352:208,1,90
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416,256,28396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,28563,2,0,L|208:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,333,28896,2,0,L|417:253,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,192,29396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,29479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,29563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,29729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,160,29813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,192,29896,2,0,L|432:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,30229,2,0,L|208:336,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,30563,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,288,30729,2,0,L|256:304,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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352,256,31729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,256,31896,6,0,L|160:320,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,224,32229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,192,32396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,176,32563,1,4,0:0:0:0:
464,144,32646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,32729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,32813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,32,32896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,0,33063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,16,33229,6,0,L|64:80,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,112,33563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,144,33729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,33813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,304,34229,2,0,L|176:241,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,192,34563,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,128,34896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,64,35229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,48,35563,2,0,L|448:48,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,35896,6,0,L|96:128,2,90,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,36396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,208,36479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,256,36563,2,0,L|160:256,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,36896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,176,37063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,37229,6,0,L|224:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,128,37896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,38063,2,0,L|240:192,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,128,38229,2,0,L|239:128,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,38396,2,0,L|240:64,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,38563,6,0,L|0:96,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,39063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,144,39146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,39229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,224,39396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,304,39563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,336,39729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,336,39896,5,4,0:0:0:0:
272,256,40229,2,0,L|96:192,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,40896,2,0,L|384:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,41229,5,4,0:0:0:0:
384,32,41396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,32,41479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,41563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,41729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,41813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,41896,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,240,42063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,42146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,42229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,240,42396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,42479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,42563,6,0,L|176:240,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,42896,2,0,L|320:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,272,43229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,208,43396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,176,43563,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,160,43646,1,0,3:0:0:0:
96,112,43729,1,0,3:0:0:0:
128,64,43813,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,64,43896,6,0,L|432:64,2,90,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,96,44396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,144,44479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,44563,2,0,L|272:192,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,144,44896,2,0,L|512:144,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,45229,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,272,45563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,320,45896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,192,46229,2,0,L|464:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,46563,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,144,46729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,96,46896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,64,47063,2,0,L|112:96,1,45
144,144,47229,2,0,L|224:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,47563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,96,47729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,208,47896,6,0,P|112:240|160:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,48563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,208,48729,2,0,L|224:208,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,144,48896,2,0,L|384:144,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,80,49063,2,0,L|224:80,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,80,49229,6,0,P|448:112|432:240,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,49729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,304,49813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,272,49896,2,0,P|96:240|160:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,112,50396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,50563,6,0,P|32:96|96:192,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,51063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,256,51229,2,0,L|144:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,352,51563,2,0,L|368:256,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,224,51896,6,0,L|112:128,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,52146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,52229,2,0,L|256:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,256,52479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,52563,2,0,L|112:368,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,352,52896,2,0,L|336:352,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,53063,2,0,L|192:288,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,53229,5,4,0:0:0:0:
496,192,53396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,160,53563,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,53896,5,4,0:0:0:0:
16,128,54063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,54230,1,4,0:0:0:0:
304,64,54563,6,0,L|176:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,54896,2,0,L|208:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,55229,2,0,L|176:144,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,224,55563,2,0,L|160:224,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,55896,6,0,L|192:224,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,56229,2,0,L|68:304,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,304,56563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,256,56674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,208,56785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,256,56896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,80,57229,6,0,P|96:112|128:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57563,2,0,P|272:224|240:304,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,57896,2,0,P|400:240|368:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,176,58229,2,0,P|224:144|256:64,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,64,58563,6,0,L|416:16,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,58896,2,0,L|208:112,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,59229,2,2,L|96:96,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,59452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,176,59563,2,0,L|400:288,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,288,59896,6,0,L|160:288,2,60,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,60229,2,0,L|416:144,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,144,60563,2,0,L|240:192,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,60896,2,0,L|480:16,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,61229,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,144,61341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,61452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,224,61563,2,0,L|352:320,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,61896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,256,62007,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,176,62118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,62229,2,0,L|256:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,48,62563,6,0,L|0:96,2,60,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,80,62896,2,0,L|208:32,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,63229,5,2,0:0:0:0:
352,176,63341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,224,63452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,63563,5,8,0:0:0:0:
176,272,63674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,63785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,224,63896,6,0,L|288:224,2,60,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,64229,2,0,L|80:224,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,176,64563,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,64674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,112,64785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,160,64896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,112,65007,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,64,65118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,112,65229,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,304,75896,6,0,L|192:304,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,76146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,76229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,76396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,76479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,76563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,256,76729,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,76813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,224,77063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,256,77146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,288,77229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,336,77396,6,0,L|96:320,2,45,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,77729,2,0,L|352:352,2,45,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,78063,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,208,78146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78229,2,0,L|240:160,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,78396,2,0,L|192:96,1,45
352,128,78563,5,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,78729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,78813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78896,5,8,0:0:0:0:
192,240,79063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,288,79146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,336,79229,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,288,79313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,79396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,176,79479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,160,79563,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,112,79646,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,48,79729,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,0,79813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,0,79896,5,2,0:0:0:0:
400,48,79979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,80063,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,160,80146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,80229,2,0,L|192:112,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,80396,2,0,L|288:48,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,0,80563,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,64,80729,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,144,80896,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,208,81063,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,240,81229,6,0,P|64:208|128:96,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,81729,2,0,L|304:128,1,45
272,160,81896,2,0,L|176:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,82229,2,0,L|432:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,82563,6,0,L|128:272,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82729,2,0,L|176:208,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,208,82896,2,0,L|384:208,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,272,83062,2,0,L|336:272,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,128,83229,2,0,L|256:80,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,48,83563,2,0,L|320:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,64,83896,6,0,P|48:96|96:208,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,84396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,84479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,224,84563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,160,84729,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,84896,2,0,L|160:160,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,160,85229,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,160,85396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,85563,2,0,L|432:16,2,90,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,86063,2,0,L|208:64,1,45
256,128,86229,2,0,L|352:128,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,86563,6,0,L|320:192,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,87063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,288,87146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,87229,2,0,L|240:320,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,340,87563,2,0,L|276:340,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,352,87896,6,0,L|96:320,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,88063,2,0,L|192:256,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,88229,2,0,L|80:224,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,224,88396,2,0,L|176:176,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,208,88563,2,0,L|16:144,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,88896,2,0,L|80:80,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,64,89229,6,0,L|480:160,2,180,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,16,90063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,90229,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-02-21T20:06:27+00:00

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Hyperion's Cup]
Overall: Pretty good cup. Some of the spacing is a little awkward (although that's pretty unimportant since I would mention it in my mod if I found it particularly important), although the rhythmic stuff is pretty good.
00:10:563 (4,5) - Here, the "main hits" of the instruments (excluding drums) start on 00:09:229, 00:09:563, 00:10:229, and 00:10:896. However, unlike the patterns before it, you don't quite follow this-- I would make 00:10:229 (3) a 1/1 slider and turn 00:10:563 (4) into a hitcircle on 00:10:896. I'm following held sounds with the sliders, I feel this is executed fine as it is
01:03:229 (3) - This would function better as a vertical slider as the leftmost droplet could be missed because you can essentially stand still for most of the slider. Changed this section up a different way
01:29:229 (1,2) - This place and 01:39:896 (1,2,3) have the same music but you've covered more beats at 01:39:896 (1,2,3) (every 1/1). Pick one rhythm or the other. The second half of the kiai has higher density to create a buildup effect towards the climax of the song, I don't see a problem with this
01:49:896 (2) - Make this a straight slider that still ends in the same place, but the head is on x=52 instead. This makes a more clear pathway to 01:50:563 (1). Nah, the pitch and intensity are lower here so a vertical slider works better. Besides, that would require me to repattern the previous section to maintain spacing
01:52:563 (3) - 1/2 slider because you made 01:52:896 (4) a 1/2 slider. I'm assuming you were following the high wind instruments there. 01:52:896 (4) - beats are equally strong and more intense than 01:52:563 (3) - and the following red tick. I want to keep a movement to (4), so I sacrificed the prior red tick beat

Please stop editing old posts and just make a new one so that I get email alerts and people generally know what the hell is going on. Thanks in advance.

Also thanks for the suggestions!

osu file format v14

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Title:Chronoxia
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Artist:DJ Totoriott
ArtistUnicode:DJ Totoriott
Creator:Kyuare
Version:Hyperion's Cup
Source:REFLEC BEAT groovin'!!
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Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2017-02-28T12:43:52+00:00

totto in tags? (Most common alias of Yoshihiro Tagawa aka DJ TOTTO/DJ Totoriott)

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-02-28T15:12:34+00:00

Nwolf wrote:
totto in tags? (Most common alias of Yoshihiro Tagawa aka DJ TOTTO/DJ Totoriott)

Done, thanks

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-02-28T17:10:17+00:00

I was told that Salad needs some modderation so I am here

Suggestion
Unrankable issue

Salad
1. Timeline

First thing that bothers me are new combos since start you place them on new stanza even only for 2 objects. I guess you probably forgot to put them at all so I will point every new combo issue/suggestion.

00:15:896 (3) - NC
00:13:229 (3) - NC
00:26:563 (4) - NC
00:38:563 (4) - NC
00:39:896 (7) - NC lol
00:47:896 (5) - NC
00:59:118 (1) - unnecessary NC, remove
00:59:896 (5,1) - swam new combos
00:55:896 (6,1) - NC at 00:56:118 - doesn't make sense to me put it on 00:55:896 - where is new stanza and strong beat
01:03:229 (1) - unnecessary NC, remove
01:17:229 (3,3) - NC for keeping consistency with your NCing
01:23:896 (4) - NC
01:25:229 (6) - NC lol2
00:20:896 (2,3) - and 01:04:896 (2,3) - and 01:42:396 (3,1) - inconsistency in placing a 'finisher' NC for end of section first 2 don't have NC at section but last got a new combo, for keeping consistency in your NCing I am suggesting to put NC on both 00:21:229 (3) - and 01:05:229 (3) - so it will be follow your NC placement

2. Gameplay

00:32:896 (4,1) - distance might be too much and it's inconsistency with your other dash placement, all others dash distance is around 1,50-1,60 so reduce it to point it's similar to others
01:27:229 (3,1,2) - dash between (3-1) and (1-2) is a way to much with connection with anti-flow and spaced slider, I would just ctrl + g the slider and move it at x:432
01:29:229 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - using all over distance snap 1,5 might be too hard for novice players/beginners so I suggest you to reduce DS on 01:29:229 (1,2,1) - and 01:31:563 (4,5,1) -
01:40:563 (3,4) - uhh that doesn't flow well, consider changing it to something you used earlier this for example - 01:38:563 (1,2) -

3. Others issues

Song ends here 01:53:063 - not at 01:45:229 - , it's an spread issue and even that is a Guess Difficulty I think that it should be mapped to same point as other diffs

Other than those the diff is totally fine to me. Anyway good luck!

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-02-28T17:27:44+00:00

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
I was told that Salad needs some modderation so I am here

Suggestion
Unrankable issue

Salad
1. Timeline

First thing that bothers me are new combos since start you place them on new stanza even only for 2 objects. I guess you probably forgot to put them at all so I will point every new combo issue/suggestion.
00:15:896 (3) - NC
00:13:229 (3) - NC
00:26:563 (4) - NC
00:38:563 (4) - NC
00:39:896 (7) - NC lol
00:47:896 (5) - NC
00:59:118 (1) - unnecessary NC, remove
00:59:896 (5,1) - swam new combos
00:55:896 (6,1) - NC at 00:56:118 - doesn't make sense to me put it on 00:55:896 - where is new stanza and strong beat
01:03:229 (1) - unnecessary NC, remove
01:17:229 (3,3) - NC for keeping consistency with your NCing
01:23:896 (4) - NC
01:25:229 (6) - NC lol2
00:20:896 (2,3) - and 01:04:896 (2,3) - and 01:42:396 (3,1) - inconsistency in placing a 'finisher' NC for end of section first 2 don't have NC at section but last got a new combo, for keeping consistency in your NCing I am suggesting to put NC on both 00:21:229 (3) - and 01:05:229 (3) - so it will be follow your NC placement
2. Gameplay

00:32:896 (4,1) - distance might be too much and it's inconsistency with your other dash placement, all others dash distance is around 1,50-1,60 so reduce it to point it's similar to others
01:27:229 (3,1,2) - dash between (3-1) and (1-2) is a way to much with connection with anti-flow and spaced slider, I would just ctrl + g the slider and move it at x:432
01:29:229 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - using all over distance snap 1,5 might be too hard for novice players/beginners so I suggest you to reduce DS on 01:29:229 (1,2,1) - and 01:31:563 (4,5,1) -
01:40:563 (3,4) - uhh that doesn't flow well, consider changing it to something you used earlier this for example - 01:38:563 (1,2) -
3. Others issues

Song ends here 01:53:063 - not at 01:45:229 - , it's an spread issue and even that is a Guess Difficulty I think that it should be mapped to same point as other diffs

Other than those the diff is totally fine to me. Anyway good luck!

All fixed, thanks !
I will ask CLSW about the Spread issue.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-02-28T17:37:27+00:00

I disagree with the drain time fix. Actually it's just a Guest Difficulty and it follows the guest mapper's own opinions to be sure. I don't think to map them all to just make same drain time as the other diffs is better, because I don't like it. I wanna leave some difference from this different drain time as the others.

BoberOfDarkness

1,059 posts

Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-02-28T17:58:33+00:00

CLSW wrote:
I wanna leave some difference from this different drain time as the others.

what's the reason?^ doesn't make any sense to me

And btw this is my favorite part of guideline :>

Try to have at least one spinner in each difficulty to create variety in the map and fluctuation among scores. However, if a spinner just doesn't fit anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.

According to this you should place a spinner at higher diffs :^)

Best places for spinner that song clearly indicates is from 01:13:229 - to 01:15:563 - or 01:15:729 - (for Rain+) as JBH and WildOne94 placed it. Also in that spot you can consider placing another spinner in Crystal's Salad.

CLSW

osu! Alumni

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Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-02-28T19:51:54+00:00

Guidelines are just guideline, not the actual 'rule'. It can be ignored as an exception.
Also it's not good to force one's personal taste to yours, was really a huge excuse to mapper with letting me to say about over-perfunctory reasons on drain time differences. Spinners as well

Just a reminder here, as I did on remote control, if you still wanna force it i'm ready enough to just leave from this mapset. And please don't use some comments like :^) on modding, it's really sarcastic and mockingly statement for me tbh.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-02-28T23:37:30+00:00

Just weighing in with my 2 cents here.

@Bober - Guidelines are not rules and can be broken with valid reasoning. Extra leniency is typically given to GDs in particular, precisely because people have different styles and ways they find more comfortable to map. It's somewhat counterproductive to force these to be consistent when the whole point of them is to add variety in the first place, no? Same thing goes for spinners - you're not forced to add one, it's just generally helpful to include one if possible.

That said, I'm not really a fan of how the Salad ends at present. The spinner ends halfway through a pretty intense part of the map, and as a player I'm left feeling like: "That's it? But this part is cool too I want to play it!" This obviously isn't an objective unrankable, just my personal opinion. If enough people agree or disagree with something, that gives information on whether it should be changed or if it's fine as it is. Let's see what others think, and then act accordingly in a calm and civilised fashion, please.

@CLSW - If you really want to end after the kiai, I think it sounds better without the spinner, ending at 01:42:563 (1) -. This way you finish on a clear sound and the diff doesn't awkwardly end in the middle of the next section.

CLSW

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Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-03-01T00:18:07+00:00

Oh one more question, the drain time of the highest diff which was mapped by the creator of this mapset has less than the other difficulties, is that okay? iirc at least the creator should map the highest percentage of the whole sum of the all diffs' drain time

@jbh pretty make sense, gonna check when i'm home in this midnight

BoberOfDarkness

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Joined October 2013

BoberOfDarkness 2017-03-01T00:37:18+00:00

Leaving a mapset as reference for not applying mods isn't very relevant.

JBHyperion wrote:
Just weighing in with my 2 cents here.

@Bober - Guidelines are not rules and can be broken with valid reasoning. Extra leniency is typically given to GDs in particular, precisely because people have different styles and ways they find more comfortable to map. It's somewhat counterproductive to force these to be consistent when the whole point of them is to add variety in the first place, no? Same thing goes for spinners - you're not forced to add one, it's just generally helpful to include one if possible.

That said, I'm not really a fan of how the Salad ends at present. The spinner ends halfway through a pretty intense part of the map, and as a player I'm left feeling like: "That's it? But this part is cool too I want to play it!" This obviously isn't an objective unrankable, just my personal opinion. If enough people agree or disagree with something, that gives information on whether it should be changed or if it's fine as it is. Let's see what others think, and then act accordingly in a calm and civilised fashion, please..

I totally agree with that with highlighting 'valid reasoning' and personal taste to end map in middle of intense section is very strange and I feel that is not valid reasoning.

About spinners I am just suggesting to follow the guideline there as it clearly says

'However, if a spinner just doesn't fit anywhere in the song, then there's no need to force one.'

There is a break that part of it might be mapped as slider as some people did here, I don't see why that part of guideline being official as it can be totally ignored. I am just suggesting thats nice to add at least one spinner because it makes for example:
-variation of score what is very low in osu!catch (that guideline was made to make maps leader-boards more various)
-spinners increase map tournament potential

and please don't say something I blindly follow rules, I am not, I am here to help improve the map and maybe @CLSW you don't care but Kyuare cares about ranking that map and way of acting like

if you still wanna force it i'm ready enough to just leave from this mapset

thats childish and doesn't help mapset owner at all.

CLSW wrote:
Oh one more question, the drain time of the highest diff which was mapped by the creator of this mapset has less than the other difficulties, is that okay? iirc at least the creator should map the highest percentage of the whole sum of the all diffs' drain time

@jbh pretty make sense, gonna check when i'm home in this midnight

you just said that is about personal taste and you now considering having less drain on higher diffs as an issue? :thinking:

CLSW

osu! Alumni

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CLSW 2017-03-01T10:05:02+00:00

So you need 'valid' reason? Fine.
Do you know Ouendan series or Elite Beat Agents which is an original game of osu? Most of the published songs in that game has the ending style like this. I loved them and I think it fits well in this song either because it came to my own experiences of rhythm game. Also try to look at perthed again mapped by asphyxia, it also ends at definitely not the total end.

The drain time issue which I've said directly meets with ranking criteria, but yours is just a personal opinion. Don't compare them on the same line. It's really stupid.

CelegaS

484 posts

Joined April 2012

CelegaS 2017-03-09T17:57:14+00:00

Rules say if there is 30s of song after last note you need to shorten song file or fill with note to fit this rule, it's actually 10s (from my memory).

BoberOfDarkness wrote:
Best places for spinner that song clearly indicates is from 01:13:229 - to 01:15:563 - or 01:15:729 - (for Rain+) as JBH and WildOne94 placed it.

I checked that and i don't hear why put a spinner here unless it's just for havin a slider in the map.
For me there is 2 long note during this time with beat that mime clock sound every 1/2. Personnaly i prefer to place slider for 1 long note or as ending.
If you could explain why put spinner here for my curiosity

.

Vincs

166 posts

Joined October 2012

Vincs 2017-03-12T15:56:16+00:00

okay, let's try to mod something that's already noice

Wild's Platter

00:50:563 (1,2) - The distance between those two seem a bit odd, I think changing it to the same as 00:49:896 (2,3) - would feel and look better, it plays well tho, so this isn't really something super important

Kurokami's Rain

00:24:896 (7,1,2) - This is the only problem I've got with this diff, it feels like this is too much compared to the diff as a whole, no idea if it is too much for a rain tho, just a normal jump should do, maybe add an anti-flow pattern to stress the strong beat.

Chronos

00:24:813 (9,10) - Essaye de mettre ça plus proche du 3.01x en spacing, même distance que 00:23:146 (5,6) - ou au contraire augmente le pour qu'on ressente plus que tu appuis sur le strong beat derrière.

J'ai rien d'autre chef, elle m'a l'air bueno comme elle est la, la difficulté me semble parfaitement où elle doit être :>

I hope this helps :> Et bonne chance Kyu ♥

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-03-12T16:07:37+00:00

Vincs wrote:
okay, let's try to mod something that's already noice

Chronos
00:24:813 (9,10) - Essaye de mettre ça plus proche du 3.01x en spacing, même distance que 00:23:146 (5,6) - ou au contraire augmente le pour qu'on ressente plus que tu appuis sur le strong beat derrière. Done
J'ai rien d'autre chef, elle m'a l'air bueno comme elle est la, la difficulté me semble parfaitement où elle doit être :>

I hope this helps :> Et bonne chance Kyu ♥

Merci beaucoup !

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2017-03-12T17:56:17+00:00

Vincs wrote:
okay, let's try to mod something that's already noice

Kurokami's Rain
00:24:896 (7,1,2) - This is the only problem I've got with this diff, it feels like this is too much compared to the diff as a whole, no idea if it is too much for a rain tho, just a normal jump should do, maybe add an anti-flow pattern to stress the strong beat. You are right it might be a little bit too much as that part is a really jumpy one anyway. I removed the first HyperDash instead of your suggestion though. It is not really needed anyway as it's lack is barely noticable.

I hope this helps :> Et bonne chance Kyu ♥

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160,176,43563,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,160,43646,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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128,64,43813,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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144,64,47063,2,0,L|112:96,1,45
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144,208,47896,6,0,P|112:240|160:352,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,112,50396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,50563,6,0,P|32:96|96:192,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Pachiru

osu! Alumni

2,957 posts

Joined June 2013

Pachiru 2017-03-12T17:59:43+00:00

Je savais pas que tu mappais Kyuare! Dommage que je ne sache pas modder du CTB sinon je t'aurais bien aidé ;w;

Je te donne un kudo pour te soutenir, bon courage

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-03-19T19:03:37+00:00

Since nobody else seems to be confident in this for some reason I was asked to check it myself

Salad

00:17:896 (2,1) - 00:19:229 (2,1) - Ambiguous spacing, players will not read these as a dash considering how similar they are to 00:17:229 (1,2) - 00:18:563 (1,2) -. Try increasing the distance between the former and reducing the distance between the latter so this is easier to read
00:19:896 (1,2) - I don't hear any noticeable sound on the tails of these, which makes them sound equal to 00:20:563 (1,2) - when they're really not. I'd stick to circles here instead
00:29:896 (2,3,1) - 00:31:229 (2,3,1) - Pretty hard for a walkable spacing when you compare it to 00:28:563 (2,3,1) -, and streamed dash will not be playable for typical Salad players. Move the circle in each pattern closer to the previous slider, so the jump is clearly on the second slider only (this slider has the strong sound you want to emphasise after all)
00:37:896 (2,3,1) - 00:43:229 (4,5,1) - ^ Same as before
00:45:896 (5,1) - Quite a hard distance to walk considering the antiflow. Reduce this if it's an intended walk to make it more comfortable to play. Otherwise, increase it a little to make the dash more clear
00:48:896 (3,4,1) - 00:49:896 (3,4,1) - 00:51:229 (3,4,1) - etc. - More awkward streamed dash spacings
00:51:063 (2,3) - And then the actually strong triplet type sound isn't emphasised ):
00:52:896 (2,3,4,5,1) - (3,5) are very clearly the stronger sounds here, so it feels weird that they all have the same spacing. Make (2,3) and (4,5,1) a dash and the other spacings walkable for emphasis
00:54:896 (2,3) - Dash seems misplaced here, you didn't use it anywhere else in this section. Since you're mapping more densely than usual, it would help to make the spacing more lenient
01:19:896 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't need to repeat myself anymore but yeah there are more of these D:
01:27:229 (3,1) - Could be increased a little for a clearer dash imo

not bad, but some very ambiguous spacing makes me sad ):

Platter

00:01:007 (1,2,1) - Could you make these equally spaced? The dash isn't clear at all and it just looks a bit ugly. Same goes for 00:01:563 (2,3) - etc. as these are just a pain to walk right now
00:01:896 (3,4) - Tough spacing if this is intended to be walkable, consider reducing, since I don't think a dash really fits here
00:03:896 (1,2) - ^ As above, except harder this time since it's after dash
00:14:229 (3,1) - 00:19:229 (4,1) - Feels weird to have a single hdashs here when you didn't put any others in this section. Some consistency would be nice, since these are definitely not the strongest sounds exclusively
00:22:229 (4,1) - Why doesn't this have a hyper for example when 00:21:007 (6,1) - did despite being weaker?
00:23:063 (3,4) - 00:23:729 (5,1) - No dashes here at all? Feels quite plain to play imo
00:24:563 (3,4,1) - Hyper should be placed between (4,1), it's far stronger than and more fitting than your current placement
00:40:896 (3,1) - Potentially problematic hyper into antiflow, consider curving (1) to provide more leniency
00:51:063 (2,3) - Why hyper to this when you were previously hypering to strong cymbal sounds like 00:50:563 (1) - ? Seems misplaced in current patterning
00:52:896 (2,1) - Come on dude these claps are so strong, this deserves more spacing and you know it
00:55:229 (3,4) - 1/3 dash into antiflow at 180BPM please no I have done this myself before and it's painful ;w;
01:03:896 (1,2,3,4) - Feels weird to jump on (2) for a weak sound and not the strong sound on (4). Try moving (2,3) close to (1), then flipping 01:04:896 (4,5,6,1) - to the right
01:20:396 (4,1) - Not worthy of a hyper imo, yes there is some finality to this sound but it's hardly strong. Regular dash would be fine here
01:52:563 (8) - NC here would be nice, this gets quite long without it

nice kiai

Rain

00:01:896 (4,5) - All similar spacings to this are walkable, so I'd reduce this one for consistency
00:46:896 (3,4,5) - This little antiflow wiggle is a bit weird to play, would flow better with (4) facing right instead imo as it removes one direction change
01:16:563 (6,1) - Wasn't expecting this little jump here considering how weak (1) is. Perhaps try moving 01:15:896 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - right slightly to reduce the spacing?
01:37:229 (1) - Maybe curve this a little more since it's easy to miss a couple of droplets here due to the hyper

good shit

Overdose

00:11:896 (1) - Reduce the curve on this slider a little please, the hyper isn't that strong and it's easy to miss the furthest droplet because everything before this was tap hypers
00:59:563 (10,11) - Quite a hard jump after the previous hyper. Moving (10) left slightly would be more comfortable here
01:02:785 (3,4) - Really tricky spacing after the wiggle pattern considering this isn't that far away from being a hyper. Please reduce this a little, e.g. 01:02:563 (1,2,3) - right a couple of grid spaces
01:30:896 (6,7) - Kinda tricky if you're not expecting the dash here, since the music is quite quiet compared to other parts in the kiai. I'd lower this a tiny bit
01:33:563 (5,6) - Aaaaa this 1/4 reverse hyper stair really comes out of nowhere, you didn't use anything like this anywhere else in the map so it comes really unexpectedly. For this difficulty you're better sticking to something like 01:27:897 (3,4) - but with inverted sliders, e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593242
01:38:896 (5,6) - Same deal here, this is made even harder by the previous hyper chain. Go for more distance and the inwards facing sliders, sure, but please drop the extreme antiflow
01:47:229 (5,6) - Tough dash after the previous 1/4 hyper, was this meant to be a hyper? Would be consistent with previous patterns

a couple of awkward jumps which i pointed out, but otherwise fine

Chronos

00:32:396 (4,1,2) - Annoyingly easy to overshoot this, I'd reduce the hyper strength a bit and/or remove the antiflow element
00:53:146 (10,1) - 00:53:563 (3,1) - Hyper strength here makes the next objects a pain to reach. If you could lower the distance just a tiny bit, it would retain the challenge but feel much less annoying to play
01:23:146 (8,1) - This is super easy to overshoot after the previous hyper chain, reducing the strength a little and/or curving the slider slightly would help. 01:28:563 (1) - is the same deal, only even stronger than before
01:42:896 (3,4) - This flowstop feels really awkward to play, especially since you're still carrying momentum out of the kiai. Some more distance here would be nice to maintain flow

now my fingers hurt xd

Hope this helps! (:

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-03-20T10:22:48+00:00

All applied. Thanks.

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kyuare

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Kyuare 2017-03-20T22:45:51+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Since nobody else seems to be confident in this for some reason I was asked to check it myself

Salad
00:17:896 (2,1) - 00:19:229 (2,1) - Ambiguous spacing, players will not read these as a dash considering how similar they are to 00:17:229 (1,2) - 00:18:563 (1,2) -. Try increasing the distance between the former and reducing the distance between the latter so this is easier to read Done
00:19:896 (1,2) - I don't hear any noticeable sound on the tails of these, which makes them sound equal to 00:20:563 (1,2) - when they're really not. I'd stick to circles here instead Changed the start but kept the end since we can clearly hear 1/3 beats here
00:29:896 (2,3,1) - 00:31:229 (2,3,1) - Pretty hard for a walkable spacing when you compare it to 00:28:563 (2,3,1) -, and streamed dash will not be playable for typical Salad players. Move the circle in each pattern closer to the previous slider, so the jump is clearly on the second slider only (this slider has the strong sound you want to emphasise after all)
00:37:896 (2,3,1) - 00:43:229 (4,5,1) - ^ Same as before
00:45:896 (5,1) - Quite a hard distance to walk considering the antiflow. Reduce this if it's an intended walk to make it more comfortable to play. Otherwise, increase it a little to make the dash more clear
00:48:896 (3,4,1) - 00:49:896 (3,4,1) - 00:51:229 (3,4,1) - etc. - More awkward streamed dash spacings
00:51:063 (2,3) - And then the actually strong triplet type sound isn't emphasised ): It's the same as 00:49:229 (1,2,3) - so we'll keep same spacing
00:52:896 (2,3,4,5,1) - (3,5) are very clearly the stronger sounds here, so it feels weird that they all have the same spacing. Make (2,3) and (4,5,1) a dash and the other spacings walkable for emphasis
00:54:896 (2,3) - Dash seems misplaced here, you didn't use it anywhere else in this section. Since you're mapping more densely than usual, it would help to make the spacing more lenient
01:19:896 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't need to repeat myself anymore but yeah there are more of these D:
01:27:229 (3,1) - Could be increased a little for a clearer dash imo
not bad, but some very ambiguous spacing makes me sad ):
No answer = Fixed

Overdose
00:11:896 (1) - Reduce the curve on this slider a little please, the hyper isn't that strong and it's easy to miss the furthest droplet because everything before this was tap hypers Done
00:59:563 (10,11) - Quite a hard jump after the previous hyper. Moving (10) left slightly would be more comfortable here Done
01:02:785 (3,4) - Really tricky spacing after the wiggle pattern considering this isn't that far away from being a hyper. Please reduce this a little, e.g. 01:02:563 (1,2,3) - right a couple of grid spaces Done
01:30:896 (6,7) - Kinda tricky if you're not expecting the dash here, since the music is quite quiet compared to other parts in the kiai. I'd lower this a tiny bit Done
01:33:563 (5,6) - Aaaaa this 1/4 reverse hyper stair really comes out of nowhere, you didn't use anything like this anywhere else in the map so it comes really unexpectedly. For this difficulty you're better sticking to something like 01:27:897 (3,4) - but with inverted sliders, e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7593242 Discussed in game, will keep it as it is from now
01:38:896 (5,6) - Same deal here, this is made even harder by the previous hyper chain. Go for more distance and the inwards facing sliders, sure, but please drop the extreme antiflow Same
01:47:229 (5,6) - Tough dash after the previous 1/4 hyper, was this meant to be a hyper? Would be consistent with previous patterns
a couple of awkward jumps which i pointed out, but otherwise fine Done

Chronos
00:32:396 (4,1,2) - Annoyingly easy this, I'd reduce the hyper strength a bit and/or remove the antiflow element It's not that easy to overshoot, indeed the intensity is stronger but the song suggests it, so it's justified.
00:53:146 (10,1) - 00:53:563 (3,1) - Hyper strength here makes the next objects a pain to reach. If you could lower the distance just a tiny bit, it would retain the challenge but feel much less annoying to play Done
01:23:146 (8,1) - This is super easy to overshoot after the previous hyper chain, reducing the strength a little and/or curving the slider slightly would help. 01:28:563 (1) - is the same deal, only even stronger than before Curved both
01:42:896 (3,4) - This flowstop feels really awkward to play, especially since you're still carrying momentum out of the kiai. Some more distance here would be nice to maintain flowDone
now my fingers hurt xd
Hope this helps! (:

Thank you very much.

MBomb

MBomb 2017-03-26T19:36:30+00:00

Ok since no one else seems to be here, I'm back o.o

[Salad]

00:18:563 (1,2) - Distance to this feels pretty strong right now, and also I think a dash to the next combo would fit nicely considering the intensity of the note there, try x:376 on this section.
00:25:229 (1) - Maybe try x:408 on this? It's a pretty strong note, so a dash would fit nicely to it in my eyes.
00:27:896 (1) - Again with this, kinda difficult distancing right now, I think a dash was intended so increase it to x:452.
00:30:563 (1,2) - Distancing to 1 here is pretty strong, so a reduction would be nice, but then also having a dash to the next combo would be nice for the strong cymbal, try x:380 on this section.
00:33:229 (1) - x:432 to remove the dash ambiguity here?
00:38:563 (1) - Try x:16 to add a dash here, I feel like it was intended as one but it's currently a bit too weak.
00:43:229 (4) - I feel like x:68 would play nicely on this, as to make a nice movement for the drums and also to add a dash to the next combo for the cymbal.
00:49:229 (1) - Try moving it to x:412 to add a dash to it for the cymbal, and to add comfortable movement for the next pattern.
00:50:563 (1) - Same as previously, maybe try x:48 instead.
00:51:063 (2,3) - Maybe try x:192 on this section, to make movement comfortable after the previous change and also to add a dash to the next note.
00:53:563 (3,4,5) - Hmm, dash to 3 to the cymbal would be nice, whereas getting rid of the dash to 5 would be better as double dashes are highly unrecommended in salads. Try 3 on x:444, 4 on x:276 and 5 on x:444 as well.
01:20:563 (2) - Dash to this was intended I think, but current distance is too weak, try x:448.
01:22:563 (1) - Distance to this is a bit weak for a dash right now, but it doesn't really sound right as a dash to me anyway, so I'd recommend reducing it to something like x:132.
01:26:563 (1) - Distance is a bit weak for a dash, should be increased to be more fitting with the cymbal, try x:64.
01:30:563 (1) - A bit strong for a backforth distance, could be difficult for a salad player, try x:296 on it.
01:32:563 (2) - x:240 could work nicely, to emphasise the pitch on this and also to add a dash to the next note for the even stronger pitch there.
01:37:229 (1) - Pretty difficult to hit right now, considering the strength of the movement before this note, and then the strength to this also being so strong, this could cause problems for a salad player. Try x:64 instead, also makes distancing to the more note feel more comfortable.
01:39:229 (3) - x:192 could be good on this, considering the strength is stronger than the previous notes, and also would make the dash to the next note more obvious here because it's currently quite ambiguous.
01:41:896 (2,3,1) - Try x:382 on this pattern, would work nicely to put some better emphasis on the pitch of 2.

[Platter]

01:20:896 (2) - Distancing to this feels pretty strong, especially after the previous HDash, could be very difficult to hit for a platter player. Maybe just ctrl+g it and move it to x:296?

That's it, it looks a lot cleaner now.

[Rain]

00:21:229 (1) - Maybe a bit too strong of a distance to this, could be a bit too difficult to hit considering the previous pattern, x:320 works better in my opinion.
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - I'd really recommend trying a different pattern here, that stop-start movement ends up feeling very uncomfortable to me because you go from a strong dash to a really small movement to a HDash, and it just causes quite a few momentum issues.
00:57:896 (3,4) - Considering the antiflow in 2, a smaller distance to 3 would really be recommended to give a reaction time for the player here, try x:368 on this section.
01:02:896 (2) - Considering the strong pitch change on this, having no HDash to it sounds really strange, at least to me.

Not really a style of mapping I'd particularly do myself, but it plays fine for the most part and is fun, so it feels fine to me.

[Overdose]

Amazing.

[Chronos]

00:59:007 (5) - Maybe put this one at x:32, the constant antiflow here feels quite repetitive, so adding one or two instances of normal flow here would make it feel a bit more intereting in my opinion.
01:02:341 (5) - This one would also be a nice break point from the antiflow, try x:336.
01:05:229 (1) - I'm not sure why, but I always miss this one. It's probably just a problem with my playing, not the map, but I thought I'd point it out anyway.

The antiflow feels a little excessive at times, but there's nothing wrong with it, it's just a stylistic choice, so I think it should be fine.

That's it!

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2017-03-26T20:07:18+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Ok since no one else seems to be here, I'm back o.o

[Rain]

00:57:896 (3,4) - Considering the antiflow in 2, a smaller distance to 3 would really be recommended to give a reaction time for the player here, try x:368 on this section. I'm not sure if we really speak about antiflow here http://kurokami.s-ul.eu/ert2PrVA despite of how those sliders look like in editor they can be catched without any movement as they are almost straight. I prefer to have equal distance between them.

Not really a style of mapping I'd particularly do myself, but it plays fine for the most part and is fun, so it feels fine to me. I struggled with 1/3 so there are some part what even I don't like. lol

Rest is fixed. Thanks.

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Kyuare

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Kyuare 2017-03-28T21:07:57+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Ok since no one else seems to be here, I'm back o.o

[Salad]

00:18:563 (1,2) - Distance to this feels pretty strong right now, and also I think a dash to the next combo would fit nicely considering the intensity of the note there, try x:376 on this section. Well, dash are here to empathize the strong beat, it will be inconsistent if we put a dash between them since the beat isn't really strong. But I reduced the spacing in general.
00:25:229 (1) - Maybe try x:408 on this? It's a pretty strong note, so a dash would fit nicely to it in my eyes.
00:27:896 (1) - Again with this, kinda difficult distancing right now, I think a dash was intended so increase it to x:452.
00:30:563 (1,2) - Distancing to 1 here is pretty strong, so a reduction would be nice, but then also having a dash to the next combo would be nice for the strong cymbal, try x:380 on this section.
00:33:229 (1) - x:432 to remove the dash ambiguity here?
00:38:563 (1) - Try x:16 to add a dash here, I feel like it was intended as one but it's currently a bit too weak.
00:43:229 (4) - I feel like x:68 would play nicely on this, as to make a nice movement for the drums and also to add a dash to the next combo for the cymbal.
00:49:229 (1) - Try moving it to x:412 to add a dash to it for the cymbal, and to add comfortable movement for the next pattern.
00:50:563 (1) - Same as previously, maybe try x:48 instead.
00:51:063 (2,3) - Maybe try x:192 on this section, to make movement comfortable after the previous change and also to add a dash to the next note.
00:53:563 (3,4,5) - Hmm, dash to 3 to the cymbal would be nice, whereas getting rid of the dash to 5 would be better as double dashes are highly unrecommended in salads. Try 3 on x:444, 4 on x:276 and 5 on x:444 as well.
01:20:563 (2) - Dash to this was intended I think, but current distance is too weak, try x:448.
01:22:563 (1) - Distance to this is a bit weak for a dash right now, but it doesn't really sound right as a dash to me anyway, so I'd recommend reducing it to something like x:132. No sorry it's consistent with 01:27:896 (1) - , also there is a really strong beat, it's fine to empathize it with a dash
01:26:563 (1) - Distance is a bit weak for a dash, should be increased to be more fitting with the cymbal, try x:64.
01:30:563 (1) - A bit strong for a backforth distance, could be difficult for a salad player, try x:296 on it. Reduced but not to 296
01:32:563 (2) - x:240 could work nicely, to emphasise the pitch on this and also to add a dash to the next note for the even stronger pitch there.
01:37:229 (1) - Pretty difficult to hit right now, considering the strength of the movement before this note, and then the strength to this also being so strong, this could cause problems for a salad player. Try x:64 instead, also makes distancing to the more note feel more comfortable. Reduced
01:39:229 (3) - x:192 could be good on this, considering the strength is stronger than the previous notes, and also would make the dash to the next note more obvious here because it's currently quite ambiguous.
01:41:896 (2,3,1) - Try x:382 on this pattern, would work nicely to put some better emphasis on the pitch of 2. Done
No answer: Fixed every dash by increasing the spacing to 1.65x instead of 1.50x, also decreased some 1.20x 1/2 spacings to 1.10x. Dash are less ambiguous now.

[Overdose]

Amazing.

[Chronos]

00:59:007 (5) - Maybe put this one at x:32, the constant antiflow here feels quite repetitive, so adding one or two instances of normal flow here would make it feel a bit more intereting in my opinion. No sorry, it will be inconsistent with the previous pattern, I also prefer antiflow here
01:02:341 (5) - This one would also be a nice break point from the antiflow, try x:336. Same thing, we need to keep the consistency here, sorry
01:05:229 (1) - I'm not sure why, but I always miss this one. It's probably just a problem with my playing, not the map, but I thought I'd point it out anyway.
Reduced the distance a bit, it's less shitmissable
The antiflow feels a little excessive at times, but there's nothing wrong with it, it's just a stylistic choice, so I think it should be fine.

That's it!

Thank you.

WildOne94

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Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2017-04-05T19:06:04+00:00

Well it's taken me 4 months to reply to this (Kek kek kek) But here we go finally :^). Going to apply all mods tonight. Will post and edit this one at a time.

Absolute Zero wrote:
[Wild's Platter]
Overall: It's...okay. I'll continue my mod to improve stuff, but there's still some work to be done.
00:01:007 (1,2,3) - (Trivial) Even out the spacing here. A little startling, especially since it's the very first three notes of the tune. - Done
00:11:674 - You might want to hit the note here, as well as 00:11:785. It just sounds weird, consider you hit 00:11:229 (3). I would suggest a 1/3 repeat slider instead. - Done. Yeah I did this since I did it at 00:06:229 (5,6,7,1) - which is kind of similar
00:14:229 (3) - ^ - Maybe not this one as it's a different change of pattern and as the single note shows atm it gives a bit of emphasis for the drums.
00:24:896 (4) - I would make this a 1/2 slider instead to follow both drumhits. Additionally, this creates a hyper from 00:24:896 (4,1), accenting the new phrase. - Couple of things why I won't do this. 1st is that the hyper would be against a anti-flow reverse slider afterwards (WHich I don't want to change). and 2nd is that the emphasis works well with the drum beat in the song.
00:34:396 (4,1) - Strange increase in distance. I would at least move this to around x=256 to make sure players don't miss here. Also I want to point out the strange rhythm at 00:34:563 (1). It doesn't appear you're following anything at this slider end, except a weaker beat in which you do not follow on 00:34:896 (2). Make them consistent rhythm-wise. - Fixed although didn't change the pattern
00:40:563 (2,3,1) - I would lower the distancing in (2,3) due to the fact that it might catch the player by surprise. - Done
00:43:063 (2,3) - Excessive distancing. Same solution as above. You may have to change some things to match 00:43:646 (4). - Done
00:53:229 (1,2,3) - I'd rather flip (2,3) or something along those lines to accent the flute(?). - Nah I don't think this is really needed imo. I like what I have atm
00:56:896 (7,1) - Increase distancing here. This is a new phrase and should be accented to at least a stronger dash. - Done
00:58:674 - Here and 00:58:785 have no notes, but you follow the notes at 00:56:341 (2,3) instead. I would add notes at the indicated spots for consistency. - I will consider this one thoroughly and see what I do
01:20:729 - Extremely prevalent accordion(?) here. You hit 01:20:896 (2) but not this. Might be a good time to utilize a hyperdash (if you want). - Hmm I really would but from the pattern I have already it's kind of hard. I don't think it's too much of a problem as without that note then people can have a breather which also fits with the quietness before the kiai.
01:30:979 - 01:31:063 - 01:31:146 - 01:26:146 (4,5,6,7) follows the 1/4 rhythm of the accordion but you completely ignore it here. I would at least put a 1/2 beat, if not even hitting all the notes in a simple pattern. - Added 1
01:48:896 (3) - Make this a 1/2 repeat slider starting on 01:48:785 to keep consistency with the rest of the patterns. - What other patterns O-o ?
01:52:563 (8) - I would do something along the lines of a back-forth pattern instead because the spacing now is a little strange and doesn't follow the music. - I find it's fine :O
01:52:563 (8) - NC. - Done

Thanks for the mod AZ

JBHyperion wrote:
Platter
00:01:007 (1,2,1) - Could you make these equally spaced? The dash isn't clear at all and it just looks a bit ugly. Same goes for 00:01:563 (2,3) - etc. as these are just a pain to walk right now - Fixed these with AZ's mod but I did leave some like 00:03:785 (5,1) - where it emphasises more for a dash.
00:01:896 (3,4) - Tough spacing if this is intended to be walkable, consider reducing, since I don't think a dash really fits here - Funny enough I litereally fixed this after reading last suggestion XD
00:03:896 (1,2) - ^ As above, except harder this time since it's after dash - Did some adjustments. Hope it looks better.
00:14:229 (3,1) - 00:19:229 (4,1) - Feels weird to have a single hdashs here when you didn't put any others in this section. Some consistency would be nice, since these are definitely not the strongest sounds exclusively - Made both hypers to be consistent
00:22:229 (4,1) - Why doesn't this have a hyper for example when 00:21:007 (6,1) - did despite being weaker? - Added
00:23:063 (3,4) - 00:23:729 (5,1) - No dashes here at all? Feels quite plain to play imo - Imo this does not really need a dash.
00:24:563 (3,4,1) - Hyper should be placed between (4,1), it's far stronger than and more fitting than your current placement - Fixed
00:40:896 (3,1) - Potentially problematic hyper into antiflow, consider curving (1) to provide more leniency - Done
00:51:063 (2,3) - Why hyper to this when you were previously hypering to strong cymbal sounds like 00:50:563 (1) - ? Seems misplaced in current patterning - Yeah that was weird of me. Fixed
00:52:896 (2,1) - Come on dude these claps are so strong, this deserves more spacing and you know it - Done
00:55:229 (3,4) - 1/3 dash into antiflow at 180BPM please no I have done this myself before and it's painful ;w;
01:03:896 (1,2,3,4) - Feels weird to jump on (2) for a weak sound and not the strong sound on (4). Try moving (2,3) close to (1), then flipping 01:04:896 (4,5,6,1) - to the right - Done differently
01:20:396 (4,1) - Not worthy of a hyper imo, yes there is some finality to this sound but it's hardly strong. Regular dash would be fine here - I agree. Done
01:52:563 (8) - NC here would be nice, this gets quite long without it - Done on AZ's mod
nice kiai

Thanks for the mod JBH

MB I applied your suggestion already as I fixed it with JBH's mod but thank you also for the mod

OKAY ALL DONE!

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Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2017-04-06T02:16:31+00:00

WildOne is alive. omg Where is that champagne?

MBomb

MBomb 2017-04-08T14:20:39+00:00

Hello there. Recheck, no kudosu.

[Salad]

00:19:896 (1) - Increased distance to this would be nice to make a dash to it, it seems that was what was intended. Try x:480.
00:53:563 (3) - A bit too strong distance right now, either increase it to make it a dash or decrease it to x:396 to make it more comfortable for a salad player.

Looks a lot cleaner now, nice!

[Platter]

00:35:896 (1) - HDash to this feels strange, there's not really a HDash to similar sounds and so it sounds pretty inconsistent.
00:41:229 (1) - ^.

Kyuare

228 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Kyuare 2017-04-08T16:23:54+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Hello there. Recheck, no kudosu.

[Salad]

00:19:896 (1) - Increased distance to this would be nice to make a dash to it, it seems that was what was intended. Try x:480. Whoops forgot it
00:53:563 (3) - A bit too strong distance right now, either increase it to make it a dash or decrease it to x:396 to make it more comfortable for a salad player. Done

Looks a lot cleaner now, nice!

Thanks !

I also reduced 01:19:896 (1,2,3,4) - spacing in Chronos difficulty, for the spread.

WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2017-04-08T16:44:18+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
[Platter]

00:35:896 (1) - HDash to this feels strange, there's not really a HDash to similar sounds and so it sounds pretty inconsistent.
00:41:229 (1) - ^.

Fixed 2nd suggestion but not the first as I somewhat feel that this one is okay to me ;w;.

Thanks for the recheck <3

00:09:674 (2,3) - Also reduced distance here a bit as it was confusing if to dash or not

01:15:896 (1,2) - ^ here also

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WildOne94

581 posts

Joined October 2013

WildOne94 2017-04-08T17:10:30+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
WildOne is alive. omg Where is that champagne?

I don't drink btw (^:

MBomb

MBomb 2017-04-08T17:51:49+00:00

I think Furely might by my new favourite overdose mapper.

Bubbled <3

Pyrzhe

Pyrzhe 2017-04-22T03:47:32+00:00

When is the qualification of the map?

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-04-22T12:17:26+00:00

No kudosu:

[General]

You don't really need to manually add custom break times, moreover if it's inconsistent thoughout your difficulties. Consider removing it from Cup (both beginning and end of break time) and Platter (just at the beginning).

[Rain]

00:11:563 (5,1) - I kind of missed a hyper for the cymbal sound as you added in similar examples. You can probably move (4,5) more to the left to cancel the hyper (3,4) and add one at (5,1) instead.

[Salad]

01:01:896 (3) - Consider flipping that slider horizontally and placing it at the left side of (2) at about x:112 or similar positions. The current movement can be a bit confusing as it implies a sudden direction change with clustered notes due to the low AR.

[]
The rest of the mapset looked clean. Chronos is much more balanced than the last time I checked it, though you removed the relatively calm part you had at 01:38:563 - I like how it ended up. That should be it.

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