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Chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.)

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aesopl19193
Pokie
easy未更新?

同埋我dl落黎得easy..
重新full-submit一下
Topic Starter
wmfchris
all fixed~
eveless
[general]
ARTIST shouldnt be Rin Kagamine ,Plz change the real one

[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连,可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线,或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打

[Hard]
我不认为有用中号CS的理由 这个难度打起来感觉比最高难还难

00:59:388 (5) - 打起来不舒服 而且听起来也没必要
02:38:603 (8,9,10) - 不好打,也没必要这么放

我只想说...这难度玩/mod起来可能还不如某些新人mapper的舒服...

[Normal]
00:19:531 (2,3) - 放在这里不适合 很不适合
Amethyst Wolf

eveless wrote:

[Wolf]
00:30:031 (1) - 角度可以再往右拉一点...跟之前的贴太近了 拉了點 XD
01:14:388 (4) - 放在尾巴上会打快 往左边拉大概一个note的位置感觉比较好
01:26:388 (9) - 打起来没有太大的问题 但是从EDIT里来看 并不好看
01:45:031 (7) - 这边开始的尾三连,可以考虑用红线起手而不是白线,或者是红白搭配 即XXX X XXX X这样交换起来用根我風格有點不相同啊...
02:47:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这边感觉要么就跟歌 要么用slider折返
02:50:603 (9) - nc
02:52:317 (1) - 取消nc
03:45:889 (3,4,5) - 强烈要去换个地方 很难读這個...
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - 不好打
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
ouranhshc
Wolf
00:24:889 (1) - you might not want to have this placed directly under (9) because its making (9) stack awkwardly

01:46:317 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think having jumps going into anitjumps are a good idea. (i'm not saying that you have to change them)
02:00:031 (3,4,5,6) -^
03:21:246 (6,7,1,2) - make spacing even here?
04:06:889 (3) - maybe move this from out under (2), it looks bad ingame

Hard
00:55:531 (9) - maybe place this in line with (7,8)
02:52:960 (6,7) - maybe like this?

04:05:174 (1) - maybe map this spinner and start a spinner 04:07:746 instead?

Normal
01:08:174 (5,6) - make the spacing the same as (1,2) and (3,4)?
01:37:746 (1) - kinda short for a normal diiff
04:01:746 (1) - map this section instead of placing a spinner
04:05:174 (1) - same as [Hard]

Easy
00:56:174 (3) - new combo?
01:30:031 (3) - ^?

good map
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed~
KT_Hin
banvi
:)
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
You can just use the artist's name in the artist field. Even if she's not an actual artist, you can still put whatever name she uses on NND, or even her actual name if you know it :D.

Wolf's Diff:
01:02:388 (3) - You could probably get away with flipping this horizontally. When it plays, the hand will continue to move toward the left of the screen, as the previous notes do, instead of randomly turning to the right.
02:33:674 - FFFFUUUU- 0.5 GAAAAAHH
02:37:531 - I'M GOING TO GOUGE OUT YOUR EYEBALLS AND SKULLFUCK YOU.
03:00:889 - You could probably add a 0.75 section here.
03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this pattern D:. It's too close that it's too hard to read.

Hard:
00:20:710 - GAAAH 0.5 SECTION

Normal:
01:12:888 (1) - FFFFUUU-
01:16:317 (1) - YOUR ASS IS GRASS AND I'M THE WEEDWHACKER
01:26:603 (1) - I guess this is less gay, because you halved the spacing, but overall, I dislike this section having a 0.5
01:42:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - This just sounds akward when listening to the lyrics and what you've placed here.
02:40:317 (1) - . . . I guess it works.

Easy:
Cool.

I'm not against 0.5 sections, I just hate where they're placed most of the time.
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed, I'm waiting her response about the artist's name.
KanaRin
Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
Topic Starter
wmfchris

KanaRin wrote:

Artist..... ChiYing Ok?
大階好像比較美
她本人說的啊。
orioncomet
[Hard]
02:46:317 ~ 03:14:603 - use soft hitsound sound better imo >_<

[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)?
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;;
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2)
some jump look like random to me.. x_x;

other diffs look fine
Amethyst Wolf

orioncomet wrote:

[Wolf's Level 4]
00:35:174 (3) - new combo? or fix spacing now combo(ed)
00:46:960 (4) - ^ hard to read that it's 1/2 Did some fix
01:02:388 (3) - move a bit closer to (2)? ^
01:25:960 (6,7,8,9) - "I" just a bit don't like this, maybe add new combo on (6)And did some fix too
01:43:317 (3) - add new combo? for easer to read suddenly spacing changed Am...It's not too hard to read. After all, it's a insane diff
01:46:960 (4) - ^ for spacing changed
01:57:031 (3) - ^
02:00:674 (4) - ^
03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - O__o?? can't tell which is 1/2 and 1/4 at all, don't make them like this. make 03:45:889 (3,4,5) all just stack, don't make them like this x__x;;; D:
03:52:746 (3,4,5) - like 03:45:460 (1,2,3,4,5) but just make (3) stack under (2) I just make is easier before= =
some jump look like random to me.. x_x; About this, I'll improve it in the future
Thanks for your mod.

Download: chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Rukario
General:
- Why does 'Wolf's Level 4' have a countdown and the other diffs not? Either remove it or add it to all the others.
- Only in aesopl's Easy was Kiai time used. Maybe use it for the other diffs too? Or remove it from aesopl's diff?


Wolf's Level 4:
Not gonna point out the stuff Ploy already pointed out. I pointed them all out and then saw that Ploy already did those.

How about tick rate 1 like all the other diffs?



I have to agree with Ploy that some jumps really feel a bit random.


Other than that, pretty neat mapset.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ok all fixed...
agreed with ploy but ._.
Sakura
[General]
Shouldnt the artist be the vocaloid, and the person that craeted the song with vocaloid in the tags instead?
Why am i not seeing the skip button at the end except on [Hard]?

[Storyboard]
Some storyboard elements have small unnecessary transparencies, Ex: 024.png http://puu.sh/10W6 see the transparencies at the left and right? here's a reversed color version which should make it easier to see http://puu.sh/10W8

[Wolf's Level 4]
01:17:603 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
01:40:103 (4) - Unnecessary extra slider tick is messing up this slider shape a bit
02:13:528 - This break might be a bit too long i recommend you shorten it.
02:53:174 (3) - Unrankable, This slider is hidden below previous slider.
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard

[Normal]
01:17:710 (1) - New combo to fix spinner bug.
02:02:174 (1) - ^
02:43:853 (1) - ^
03:14:710 (1) - ^
03:28:960 (1) - ^
03:43:853 (1) - ^

[Easy]
01:36:674 (X) - I think you could use a spinner here, it fit very well on Hard

Edit: Forgot to mention, pretty nice mapset, i like it, feel free to call me for a recheck
Saturio
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
ok all fixed~
Sakura
Recheck:
[General]
Source would either be "Vocaloid" or the composer of the vocaloid btw.

[Wolf's Level 4]
03:55:317 (4) - I was wondering why i couldnt see this slider... but it's directly below the previous one, no wonder i thought the previous one hadn't finished fading and this wasn't a slider, sorry but putting sliders directly below other sliders is unrankable.

[aesopl's Easy]
00:25:317 (1) - New combo, it's not being applied correctly because of spinner bug. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/60533 see how it's not going 300k but 300?.

Looking better, forum PM me again when it's fixed.
Amethyst Wolf
Topic Starter
wmfchris
okey fixed~
Sakura
[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.

No kudosu
Amethyst Wolf

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Wolf's Level 4]
03:48:460 (4) - This is still directly below another slider too.

No kudosu
Thx for re-mod. How about now?

Download: Kagamine Rin - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Sakura
Great!
Beuchi
Just passing around~ I know you posted in the queue, sorry for being too late ;~;

Anyways, ahhh this song is so cute, and the cantonese seems to give it an even softer and cuter tone >w<

The storyboard is pretty nice btw, but I think the letterboxes ruin the dark-bright moments sometimes... Just my opinion here x3

Good luck!!
Andrea
[Wolf's Level 4]

03:52:317 (1,2,3,4,5) - I find this extremely confusing.
03:58:746 (7,8,9,1) - ^


Also, make sure to disable Letterbox during breaks on every difficulty like Beuchi said!
Amethyst Wolf
Andrea
Much better.

Ranked~
Megurine Luka
CONG. Nice ver.
eveless
I still dont know why this artist use Kagamine Rin

why you must use Kagamine Rin? It's not the true artist for this song

Also source shouldnt be Vocaloid too...
Topic Starter
wmfchris
not sure about that but this is the willing of the original artist too >_<

DarkRingSystem
:)
OMG this is kokoro~!
eveless

wmfchris wrote:

not sure about that but this is the willing of the original artist too >_<

but you cant , if you dont want chiying to be artist then change others. likes Cantonese or some others

what i said is "Kagamine Rin shouldnt be the artist of this song"

^this is the point
jameskong1
will it be unranked? :cry:
I don't want to 凸 again orz-sno
Topic Starter
wmfchris
I'll look after this next time >A<
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