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Chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.)

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wmfchris
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 29 March, 2011 at 22:24:44

Artist: Chiying
Title: Kokoro (Cantonese ver.)
Source: ToraburutaP
Tags: Saturio Amethyst Wolf aesopl19193 Kagamine Rin
BPM: 140
Filesize: 7029kb
Play Time: 04:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. aesopl's Easy (1.12 stars, 222 notes)
  2. Hard (4.66 stars, 448 notes)
  3. Normal (3.15 stars, 308 notes)
  4. Wolf's Level 4 (4.84 stars, 512 notes)
Download: Chiying - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.)
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14th beatmap.
Re-download if you have an older version before 20/3/2011 for the change of beatmap name.

Ready for moddings!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1xsO47qsB2k

Voice: 子瑩 (Chiying)
Lyrics: 小狼

Easy : aesopl19193
Normal : Saturio
Hard : me
Wolf : Amethyst Wolf
SB : Sandpig
Last edited by wmfchris , edited 48 times in total.
KanaRin
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HEYOOO!
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JoJo
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4TH...

Great work...I can find nothing...

Just star!
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5th

keeping the flow
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6th.....what?
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[Normal]
First, check the unsnapped notes with 'Ctrl+Shift+A' :3
01:57:470 (4) - Touched by HP bar ;_;
02:02:184 (1) - Start at 02:02:613 :3
03:27:041 (1) - [Nazi] How about move this note into x:168 y:240?
03:41:613 ~ 03:43:755 - Little much Kiai toggle ;_;
03:53:827 ~ 03:57:577 - ^

[Hard]
00:54:256 (6,7) - Intended spacing changing :3? [Others are 1.0x but it's 0.91x]
01:56:613 (2) - [Nazi Suggestion] Make it heads to little up from 01:57:470 (3)'s position? Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43355
03:16:327 (3) - [Nazi] How about move this into x:136 y:316?
03:39:684 (4) - [Suggestion] http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/43356 :3?
03:46:113 (3) - [Nazi] How about move this into x:220 y:140?

[Wolf's Level 4]
01:05:392 (4) - [END OF NAZI]
Use this codes on .osu
408,160,65392,2,0,B|256:168|164:304,1,255,0|2
Some patterns ;_;



:3
Good luck and merry christmas XD
SiU_LeAf
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12th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-口-
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01:05:392 (t) - added 0.65x timing point
01:06:035 (t) - added 1.00x timing point

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Kotone
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@A@ why give me kds?
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karenying wrote:

@A@ why give me kds?
maybe for sb
wmfchris
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預支sb
不要走數啊
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star!! >3<
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hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Wolf's Level 4

00:47:392 (5,6,7,8) - 这些在红线上的note建议都分开
00:51:250 - add a note? 前边那几个音是从红线开始的这里最好也从红线开始._.
00:56:821 (2,3) - 上下错位再多一点或者换个方向 (I hate this kind of arrangement x.x)
01:04:321 (2,3,4) - 这两个slider也建议多错开一点，虽然间隔相对长 ._.
01:46:964 (4) - new combo?
02:00:678 (4) - ^
02:19:964 (1,2,3) - 因为这一段是从红线开始的所以建议只叠2和3把1放到其他地方，这样读图比较明了，不用盯着approach circle ._.
02:39:035 - 这个停顿感觉很违和(而且还是stack)，如果不想要这个音试着这里用slider带过，或者用jump
02:52:321 (1,2) - 再错开一点._.
03:15:250 (1,2) - 音量调整一下
03:44:178 (2,3,4) - 排成正三角形好看一点._. 后面也是
03:59:178 (1) - 这个slider建议和03:58:749 (7)叠起来
04:00:464 (6,7,8,9,10) - 排漂亮一点._.


Hard

建议用一些Normal进去，感觉太软了 (前边可以适当加一些Normal在过渡的地方，高潮部分只用clap和whistle打拍子显得很无力)

01:40:113 (4,5,6) - 和前边note超过一拍间隔又都在红线上打起来有点羞涩…… (我第一次打直接3个全点在白线上._.) 如果想这么用4前边的白线上加个note垫一下，比较有节奏感
02:00:470 - 同样建议加个note (我的观点是不要为了跟歌词而skip掉太多的白线，这样打起来缺乏节奏感._.)
02:38:613 (11,12,13) - 不喜欢clap串
02:49:970 (9) - ^
02:55:649 (3) - 这个建议整体往前移动1/4拍放到红线上，仔细听了一下这里的人声也不在蓝线上所以还是放到比较整的拍子上比较好(而且03:09:256 (4) 是在红线上)
03:00:041 (12) - 拍拍拍。如果想要加重的话可以尝试一下Normal
03:17:720 (4) - 我总觉得与其放一个音在蓝线上不如前后用两个note把它夹起来._. 而且人声不像伴奏那么准确，没有必要去纠结它在蓝线上还是红线上
03:45:470 (1) - slider在这一串出现的位置提前1/2，感觉这样打起来比较贴合音乐
03:52:541 (1) - ^
03:58:327 (2,3) - 这两个slider和音乐有点脱离了，可以换一种节奏(比如红白红，红白红<下图>)，或者直接把note排满
SPOILER


Normal

00:48:899 (8) - 太慢了._. 可以速度x2长度x2
01:07:755 (2,3,4) - 这里的似乎需要在红线上的note否则太死板了，后面的也是，试试这样的节奏
SPOILER
03:40:326 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 一直单点感觉很枯燥，03:41:827或者什么地方插个note
03:54:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里也需要更多的note


暂时这么多 8-)
Kotone
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sb不用kd吧
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咁你比番我 XD
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fixed

Download: Rin Kagamine - kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Normal].osu
Miu Matsuoka
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star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
wmfchris
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cheukhin1985 wrote:

star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
sor呀 >_<
我做圖平時會內部徵晒guest diff先 orz
所以下次M群請早 >_<
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wmfchris wrote:

cheukhin1985 wrote:

star~ :)
btw can i make a diff?? ;)
sor呀 >_<
我做圖平時會內部徵晒guest diff先 orz
所以下次M群請早 >_<
ok :D
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求歌词
歌姬求交往
8-)
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star...... lol
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歌詞

SPOILER
《心》
原曲：《ココロ》
作曲、編曲：トラボルタ
(日文)原詞：トラボルタ　　原唱：鏡音リン

詞：內木一郎

（靜越世紀　守等你）
　程式　（像夢）思憶裏　守等你
　奇跡　（願被）儲起　守等盼希

有個寂寥極的科學家　灌注血汗賭上是希冀
製作受傳頌的機器人　叫「傳奇」（叫「傳奇」） [註1]

卻說這部淚珠的結晶　有個缺陷仿似在賭氣
我欠缺掉程式稱作「心」　無從明白你

經幾百年　我守等這兒　這篇「傳奇」　結果等太遲
使機器人　覺醒的本事　想探知

想知為何　我給生出來　想知你曾　怎麼的盼待
經千百回　以一生製成　「心」裏愛

現時　能開始　無從阻止　無從阻止
如　限制　頃刻裏被廢
沉思中　明眸怱怱　有淚暗湧
為何從胸口　微微的抖
從幻覺　找到了脈膊
從質感　纏縈傷感　我問這就叫「心」？

這顆心　多麼真　這顆心　多麼深
我已領教了　這　世界裏有興奮
這顆心　多麼真　這顆心　多麼深
我已領教了　這　世界裏有悽暗
這顆心　多麼深　早超出　限禁
心裏面　每感覺　亦太震撼　啊～～

現時才開始　明瞭當初
明白你　怎麼要造我
從「心」底　明瞭孤單　這樣痛楚
傳奇和思憶　埋藏心胸
藏着你　的希冀或痛
從今起　能從「心」中　滿溢四湧

讓我開～口說　來自心中的感覺
誠心～一句　Arigatou
Arigatou、Arigatou
你賜予我這世界　你把一切　都給我
Arigatou、Arigatou
每串過往也有你　伴我走過
Arigatou、Arigatou
有了你這片厚愛　去將鎖困　都打破
Arigatou、Arigatou
現在我「傳奇」中高歌～
Arigatou、Arigatou
此刻的真我　是「心」的結果

〔讀白：〕
呢個係個驚人嘅傳奇，
佢有咗「心」之後，就不停咁
將佢嘅感覺唱出嚟。
不過，傳奇唔係維持咗好耐。
始終，「心」對佢嚟講，太沉重喇，
佢承受唔住，
於是停咗落嚟，唔再郁。
由嗰刻起，佢就一直保持住呢個
天使嘅幸福笑容。

第二項……啊哈哈
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是玩osu的人吗?
还是说是香港的acg团体搞的......... :o
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wuliang wrote:

是玩osu的人吗?
还是说是香港的acg团体搞的......... :o
是後者
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說不定會因為這map把她拉進來:D
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Sandpig wrote:

hi :D

(>'(oo)')> my mod <('(oo)'<)


Wolf's Level 4

00:47:392 (5,6,7,8) - 这些在红线上的note建议都分开 以前分開過, 現在感覺比較好
00:51:250 - add a note? 前边那几个音是从红线开始的这里最好也从红线开始._. good idea
00:56:821 (2,3) - 上下错位再多一点或者换个方向 (I hate this kind of arrangement x.x) fixed
01:04:321 (2,3,4) - 这两个slider也建议多错开一点，虽然间隔相对长 ._. 不, 足夠讀出來了
01:46:964 (4) - new combo? ~.~
02:00:678 (4) - ^
02:19:964 (1,2,3) - 因为这一段是从红线开始的所以建议只叠2和3把1放到其他地方，这样读图比较明了，不用盯着approach circle ._.fixed
02:39:035 - 这个停顿感觉很违和(而且还是stack)，如果不想要这个音试着这里用slider带过，或者用jump ~.~
02:52:321 (1,2) - 再错开一点._.足夠讀出了
03:15:250 (1,2) - 音量调整一下 =]
03:44:178 (2,3,4) - 排成正三角形好看一点._. 后面也是呃...改了點
03:59:178 (1) - 这个slider建议和03:58:749 (7)叠起来 =]
04:00:464 (6,7,8,9,10) - 排漂亮一点._.=]
Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
Lanttu
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First and second combo color are quite similar to me and it confused me in some places, maybe change the second color a bit? ;u;

[Wolf]
No kiai in this diff?
This diff has some jumps that feel pretty random to me, but I guess no need to change them if you really don't want to.. :V
01:40:542 (5 end) - add clap?
01:42:257 (1 end) - ^
01:47:399 (5,6) -^
01:54:256 (5 end) - ^
01:55:971 (1 end) - ^
02:01:114 (5,6) - ^
02:04:114 (4) - Maybe new combo?
02:30:257 (3) - ^
02:52:328 (1,2) - I don't like these sliders too much, they look and play not very well. >:
03:28:328 (1,2,3) - Remove clap at the end of every slider and add clap to beginning of 2 and 03:29:614 (4), instead?
03:30:042 (1) - Starting from this the clap pattern suddenly changes to red ticks? Nothing wrong with that, I just thought it sounded pretty weird.

[Hard]
00:56:613 (2) - Maybe move the end one grid up so that it's parallel with the previous slider? It would look nice to me. :3
01:18:041 (6) - Maybe new combo?
01:20:613 (1) - Remove new combo and add it to next note?
02:37:113 (4) - New combo?
02:57:470 (7) - ^

[Normal]
00:48:899 (8) - Is it rankable anymore to use red timing sections to slow down sliders? ;_; I'm not sure, but at least new combo here?
01:04:327 (5) - New combo here and remove it from the next note?

Ahhh, hope there were even something helpful in this modding. ;u; Starred~
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:?:

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [aesopl's Easy].osu
kanpakyin
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MOD黎...講明先...我會偷懶..
紅色=個人認為你要修改
藍色=意見
[General]
Normal Hard Level4都開左countdown..關左佢
offset未統一.
全部自重去..明明artist不是Rin Kagamine(指

[aesopl's Easy]
Resnap all notes
00:05:613(3)-whistle
00:09:041(1)-^
01:31:434(x)-將個spinner移到01:31:541
01:40:970(4.5)-我始終晤係咁建議easy入面有2個1/2拍癡埋一齊
01:47:827(4.5)-^
之後類似^都省略.晤打出黎 ww
03:21:041(2)-微細spacing問題
03:24:470(2)-下移一格(LV4)
03:57:041(8.1)-在8加上new combo..在(1)remove new combo
04:05:184(2)-同04:04:756(2)對稱

[Normal]
00:51:041(9)-New combo
03:14:613(4)-Remove clap
冇咩可以nazi...就咁= =

[Hard]
00:21:470(6)-New combo and畫好d..>_>
00:24:041(8)-移走clap..用normal
00:46:970(4)-感覺slider頭尾不對稱
00:55:113(8)-下移N格直到同(6)對稱
00:57:256(3)-喂!!畫好d啦(指
01:06:470(2)-4 grid right@_@
01:53:827(7)-New combo
02:34:970(6)-Remove clap
02:38:613(8.9.10)感覺3連打在白線開始會怪怪的..
03:16:327(3)-同(1)對稱
03:20:184(1)-感覺下移N格會好睇好多?
03:22:327(5)-New combo
Kotone
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我幫kanpakyin mod的>_<
Wolf's Level 4
何等不自重
00:14:399 - whistle
00:16:757 - ^
00:23:614 - 這串不用normal hitsounds么=/=
00:36:792 - 吵死了這clap
00:38:185 - 別叠着 感覺是應該分開的 叠着太2了
00:43:542 - 這個...spacing突然慢掉
00:51:899 - nazi
01:02:399 - 讚一下 美
01:05:399 - 0.65x unrank ya
01:19:757 - whistle
01:23:185 - ^
01:30:042 - 分開
01:31:114 - no whistle

ya
Vikon
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Vikon
[General]
1) 除左wolf果個diff之外，其他都未加tag...
2) 每個diff 加audio lead-in 1至2秒?? 一開波就讀白，有種太趕ge感覺.
3) baka狼個diff ge offset同其他唔同
4) offset -20 ? (不是指狼果個diff)
5) 將easy以外，其他3個diff ge countdown取消佢?
6) 話時話，幅BG可唔可以換過佢? 既然係新version, 就唔好同當年一樣，太容易令人作比較 (拍肩

[aes's Easy]
00:11:184 (1,2,3) - 覺唔覺呢3個notes之間ge時間好空? 或者將佢地改做有reverse ge slider?
00:26:184 (1) - 玩慣easy，每個note間距係1/1，所以呢個note同之前個slider之間ge間距令人覺得有d怪... 或者將刪除(1)呢個note，然後係00:25:756整個slider，係(2)果度停?
01:07:541 (1) - 間距好空, 或者將(1)變做slider，係01:08:613到停? (間距太空ge話，我驚新手仲易miss)
01:10:970 (4) - 理由同上，將(4)變做slider，係01:12:041到停?
01:12:898 (1,2) - 理由同上，將(1)變slider係(2)到end，然後再加一reverse?
02:05:184 (2) - new combo?
02:06:041 (1) - remove new combo?

[Normal]
00:50:399 個「叫」字好誤導人click早左，或者係呢度開始個slider，然後係00:51:041 (1) 到end?
01:16:327 (1) - 移開呢個slider? 被遮住了中間(有點)不美觀
01:20:613 (1,2) - 係1到整slider,係2到end? 01:21:256 個「我」字好誤導人早click左
01:24:041 (2,3) - 理由同上，係2到整slider，3到end?
01:26:613 (1) - 理由同上，減少一個reverse，然後係01:27:470 果到整slider，係01:28:327 (2) 到end?
01:37:756 (1) - noraml級出現個咁短ge slider.... 有點BT
01:57:470 (4) - 會唔會放得太上? 可唔可以拉返佢落黎?

[Hard]
00:24:041 (3) - 囧, 一來，default clap唔多適合首歌，二黎，default clap連續用 聽起來不太好。 考慮下用我附件果個組合hitsound? soft-hitfinish未必用得著，但只係佢地係一pair黎，鐘意可以參考下..
呢個diff玩落ok順，只係d 連續clap有d騷擾性
如果有用^呢d hitsound，有興趣可以再搵我mod下d hitsound.

[Wolf's Level 4]
nice diff~!
default clap(normal同soft都係)唔多適合首歌... 或者考慮下附件果隻clap鼓聲?
00:57:685 (3) - 呢個slider有d危險...因為佢幾乎被前個slider遮晒咁滯(全遮的話不能rank)，安全起計移開佢多d好d
01:02:399 (8) - 覺唔覺個心有d偏,總之有種唔對稱ge感覺..
01:56:399 (2) - 取消這個clap?
02:53:185 (2) - 同樣是危險的slider，移開d?
03:06:899 (6) - ^
03:33:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 將呢段ge clap頻率由1/1 改返做2/1? 即每2個紅線拍一下， 咁樣做前後層次感好d。
03:47:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

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wmfchris
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sounding -> Saturio 搞緊, 會考慮
aesopl, bakawolf自己改 其他稍後update
Amethyst Wolf
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Joined April 2010
Amethyst Wolf
個sounding唔知點解好似畀人改左...同我個style差好多...我要重新改過佢

以上所有sounding mod要無視了:P

個心我都覺樣衰, BAKAYING是在說反義詞對吧?

至於"危險的slider", shin比我更危...也RANK了
而kiai部分, 我想畀一種高潮小小既FEEL, 所以都唔會畀太多停既位係到, 所以VIK後2個MOD我都選擇無視:P

Download: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro (Cantonese ver.) (wmfchris) [Wolf's Level 4].osu
TristanShi
98 posts
Joined September 2010
TristanShi
聲音有夠萌啊...www
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Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
Wolf's Level 4
00:43:113 (3,4) - 這spacing危險
01:04:113 (1,2,3,4,8) - 8-)
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