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-kevincela-
Ok,here's my mod!

[General]

Your mp3 has a veeery low quality,maybe try to increase the volume.

[Easy]

00:11:846 (2) - Maybe remove all the repeats and create a note on 00:12:560 - ?
00:44:227 (2) - Maybe remove all the repeats and create a note on 00:44:941 - ?
00:45:417 (1) - This slider seems ugly to me,maybe change the shape?

[Normal]

00:17:322 (1) - Move the central waypoint 1 grid down

[Hard]

From 00:37:798 - to the end - This part is poor of hitsounds,please put some hitsounds!

Good for being one of your first maps,star!
Kogure
[General]
nice song, if i was you i would put the preview point on 00:37:814 in all diffs.

[Easy]
Looks good, i have no problems with it.

[Normal]
00:06:369: New combo
Only that

[Hard]
Also looks good

Good work, keep it up!
~star 8-)
JoJo
Hi~Randomly take the request from kanpakyin's queue.

Red-You must fix it.
Blue-You'd better to fix it.
Black-Suggestion only.

[General]
Delete the useless .osb file in the folder and then do a full-submit.
There is no preview time in the hard diff.
●Add "TV Size" in title?

[Easy]
00:34:465 (1) - Make it "more circle"...
00:45:417 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:34:465 (1) - Ugly.Make it like this.


[Hard]
Fine.

Have a star and fight ! >w</
Suzully
Thank you for request~ :)
SPOILER
General

  • There are unsnaped green lines.
    Why do you use same SV on all diffs.
    I reccomend you to use lower SV on easier diff.
Easy
  1. 00:28:750 (1) - extend slider to next white line.
  2. 00:30:655 (1) - ^
  3. 00:32:560 (1) - ^
  4. 00:36:369 (1) - too short spinner for easy player.
  5. 00:52:560 (1) - put finish sound at end of slider?
  6. 00:53:512 (1,2) - put clap sound at end of slider?
Normal
  1. 00:36:369 (1) - too short spinner?remove 00:37:798 (1,2) and finish this spinner at 00:38:036?
  2. 00:42:560 (1) - remove new combo.
  3. 00:42:798 (2) - put clap sound at end of slider?
  4. 00:44:227 (2) - ^

Hard

  • Set a preview point.
    I couldn't find major problem about pattern or spacing.
    I tell you just my suggestion about hitsound :3
  1. 00:14:227 (3) - put clap sound?
  2. 00:15:417 (1) - put finish sound?
  3. 00:19:703 (6) - put finish sound instead of whistle?
  4. 00:28:512 (1,3) - put whistle sound?
  5. 00:30:417 (1,3) - ^?
  6. 00:32:322 (1,3) - ^?
  7. 00:34:465 (1,3,5) - ^?
  8. 00:49:242 (6) - put clap sound?
  9. 00:56:385 (1) - put finish sound?
  10. 00:57:575 (1,3,5) - put whistle sound?
DoReMi<3
Which the character do you like? I like Onpu XD
Good luck!
Star~!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Suzully wrote:

DoReMi<3
Which the character do you like? I like Onpu XD
Good luck!
Star~!
Maybe, I like Doremi and Poppu.
Vass_Bass
star it
Miu Matsuoka
There's currently no maps that needed to be modded yet~ (coz I recently got the one bubbled)
But you can check out this map and give ANY suggestions, thanks!
Map link: Rin Kagamine - Kokoro

[Overall]
Timing
BPM: Okay~ ;)
Offset: 5893 (coz it's weird to start the first beat on 00:05:416)
Suggestion
If I were you, I will add a silenced 'soft-sliderslide.wav' into the mapset.

[Easy]
00:11:131 (1) - Delete Clap (Slider End)
00:15:417 (1) - Change Clap to Whistle instead?
00:17:322 (1) - Too close to a spinner end
00:34:465 (1) - x:336 y:88 , Finish (Slider End)
00:37:798 (1) - Too close to a spinner end
00:49:703 (1) - ^
00:55:417 (3) - x:128 y:224 (ignoring distance snap is okay imo)
00:58:988 (2) - Right 1 Grid

[Normal]
00:36:369 (1) - End at 00:37:321? Finish hitsound?
00:44:227 (2,3,4,5) - x:302 y:232 (Highlight them then move)
00:53:512 (1) - Too close to a spinner end
00:57:575 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:09:227 (1) - WAT 1/6? I don't see the point using 1/6 in this map, change to a reversing 1/4 slider?
00:10:179 (1) - ^
00:34:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - At least get them symmetrical? Such as this...
RED TIMING POINT 00:37:814 - Change to inheriting (Green one)
RED TIMING POINT 00:59:719 - Change to inheriting (Green one)

Star~!
Kogure
Here your brand-new spinner for your map :P

IMPORTANT NOTE: Change all this images names to spinner- and the name on the spoilerbox, example spinner-metre.

Do this with all the images and you must have:
Spinner-metre
Spinner-circle
Spinner-background
Spinner-approachcircle

Then add them all into the song's folder and ta-da, nice new spinners :D


Also, you should change the combo's colors: change the green to a pink color like doremi's color and remove the red. Something like this:

Thats mah gift, enjoy. When i get kudos, i will kudostar this map :)
Ayeen_old
Ayeen mod for M4M:

Easy:
00:36:607 (1) Move spinner to 00:36:369

Normal:
00:14:940 add note or lengthen the spinner here

Hard:
00:35:178 (4,5) Inconsistent spacing
Kurosanyan
Well here is my mod as promised:

[General]
  1. What the hell, slider velocity and distance snap are the same for all diffs? You should make it a bit slower for easy and a bit faster for hard :/
  2. Your spinner's background have really a bad quality, use this one? http://puu.sh/1QUs
    If you want to see what it looks like:http://puu.sh/1QUq
  3. Tags: Magical Girl Mahou Shoujo
[Easy]
  1. Everyone keeps saying that 00:36:607 (1,1) - should be avoided for an easy, and they're totally right. Well my suggestion:
    00:37:797 - Make the spinner end here and remove the slider, then add a circle at 00:38:273 - or make this: http://puu.sh/1QUc
[Normal]
  1. Notes aren't snapped :/
That's all~
Sure
[General]
Setting offset after notes isn't good idea. Move it to 3,988 and resnap all notes.


[Hard]
00:35:178 (4) - (grid lv4) x:292 y:52
00:35:416 (5) - (grid lv4) x:220 y:52


[Normal]
Unsnapped!
Others are fine to me.


[Easy]
Slider velocity is a bit fast to beginner... But whatever.
00:36:607 (1,1) - After spinner note immediately? It's hard to beginner. Moreover that slider too far from center. I'd like to delete a spinner.


Good luck.
Leorda
Hi

General

* The spinner-background is kinda low quality and semi-transparent

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Easy
* Approach Rate +3?
* Enable the "Letterbox during breaks"

00:17:321 (1) - Too far from spinner, please make it closer to the spinner. Otherwise, beginner player can't reach this object during gameplay
00:32:559 (1) - Overlapped by 00:30:654 (1) is kinda awful
00:36:607 (1) - This spinner is too short for easy diff, please extend it as possible, otherwise beginner player don't have time to spin the short one
00:37:797 (1) - Too far from spinner, please make it closer to the spinner. Otherwise, beginner player can't reach this object during gameplay
00:49:702 (1) - ^

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Normal
* Resnap all notes, I found 18 unsnapped notes

00:20:179 (1) - Too short spinner, extend it please
00:28:274 (IP) - Don't set the 0,60x SV in inherited points, otherwise averagple player will confuse this
00:52:337 (1) - Too short spinner, extend it please
00:53:528 (1) - It's too close from spinner (look timeline), average player can't click this after spinner >.<
00:57:575 (1) - ^

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Hard
00:35:416 (5) - Inconsistent spacing

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I agree with Jigoku-nyan, this song is kinda epic gay~
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[general]
ur.....why use the original combo colour..how about choose colour as girl's hair.but it's no problem

[Easy]
00:15:416 (1,1) - a little hard for a beginner
00:31:607 cancel the clap?
00:33:512 ^


[Normal]
00:52:321 short breaktime....may cancel it
other seems fine for me


[Hard]

00:49:226 snap the distance
other fine


Good map.Star for it.
Derekku
Removed kd for star posts and a couple other non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu for substantial mod posts.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Derekku wrote:

Removed kd for star posts and a couple other non-mod posts. Please only give kudosu for substantial mod posts.
You're right, I must keep this in mind though.
K i R a
Hi, :D (too short song XD). Please, this are suggestions xD except offset.

~General~

Offset alredy is like OK but perfect is: 5898

~Easy~

00:13:035 (1) - Remove new combo
00:13:512 (5) - New combo
00:34:464 (1) - Stack

A little hard to easy.

~Normal~

Nothing to say :)

~Hard~

Too easy for a hard (there are not streams...)

I think you need to map some streams.

The rest is ok.

Good luck and star ~

Rating:

Song: 6
Map: 5 (sorry...)
eldnl
[Easy]

00:57:797 (1) You can improve the slider.

[Normal]

  1. The offset in this difficulty is different of the others.
00:37:797 (x) Add a note.
00:38:035 (x) ^

[Hard]

00:36:131 (8) Down 1 grid and Right 2


Star.
winber1
Hard

00:36:136 (8) - *nazi* move 1 grid left (to be symmetrical with combo 1)
00:39:707 (1) - delete note
00:39:945 (2) - new combo

Normal

00:07:564 (1) - extend to 00:08:040
00:34:469 (1) - end at 00:35:897
00:36:136 (x) - add a spinner that ends at 00:37:802, and delete the existing note there?
00:39:945 (1) - extend to 00:40:421
00:57:564 (1) - end at 00:57:802
00:58:278 (2) - end at 00:58:517 (then fix spacing of combo 1 and 2)

Easy

00:34:469 (1) - end at 00:35:421
00:36:136 (x) - add note?
00:38:755 (1) - add clap

Looks fine to me.

Nice map! :3
Star~~
Yusu Aoi
Hi^^

Mod 4 Mod gets the highest priority so here's my mod^^

Generally.
I see, You used the 0,5x section (00:28:278), so maybe make the distance there like in 1x?
what do U think?;)

Easy:
00:57:802 (1,2,3) maybe try to make like this? (I used Shift to make the 2,3 looking a little better)


Normal:
Nice:))

Hard:
00:49:707 (1) try to make this slider like this?


00:53:517 (2) try to make this slider like this?


Very nice beatmap!:))
Here's a Star! and GL with getting it ranked:))
Kert
Well, this will be a long mod post...
Lots of screenies for you..

[Easy]
00:58:993 (2) - Move this note to 00:59:231 to x:256 y:208 and stack the following note with it
Though I'm not sure on that one ^

[Normal]
00:15:421 (1) - This spinner doesn't really fit and is pretty short
Can you make this instead of it?
And make the next two slider in a way like this:
00:34:469 (1) - I feels and it is too close to the previous note
And make that slider more cute like I tried here ^
The next spinner is also not good... Try this pattern:

00:48:040 (1) - End this here - 00:48:993 and add a note here - 00:49:231. And don't forget to fix spacing with the next slider

[Hard]
00:15:421 (1) - I would better map something here too..
00:56:374 (1) - Replace this with some notes/sliders, please
It will be cool if you add a note at these two places too:
00:07:326 and 00:39:707

The maps are very short, but they are not badly done. Keep mapping and you'll get better
Have a star from me~
roflninja
all just suggestions, ignore if you don't agree~

[easy]
00:47:802 (3,1) - maybe like this?

[normal]
00:48:040 (1) - newer players tend to have trouble with repeating sliders like that, maybe change it? up to you

[hard]
a little easy for a hard, but nothing wrong. maybe try to map a bit of the breaks

nice map and good luck
lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod >w< Oh and mod4mod: so please mod http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28643

General;
- Try these colors ?
Combo1 : 253,174,57
Combo2 : 248,50,100
Combo3 : 75,177,239

Skin;
- Your are missing these elements;
* Spinner-osu
* Spinner-spin
* Spinner-clear
- Also, your spinner-bg looks like is bad quality

Easy;
- I suggest;
* Circle size >> large
* Approach Rate >> -1
- 00:11:136 (1,2) >> Maybe this is a bit hard for easy ? Maybe delete (2) and add a circle at 00:12:564
- 00:12:564 >> Finish ?
- 00:28:755 ~ 00:34:469 >> I don't really feel the slowdown here but okk
- 00:35:897 >> Is better to make a slider that starts here and ends at the next white tick with a finish
- 00:38:278 >> Replace the clap with finish
- 00:44:231 (1,2) >> Again this may be too dificult, maybe delete this and add a note at 00:44:469
- 00:44:945 >> Finish
- Overall, work on the placement of notes (playfield)

Normal;
- 00:10:183 >> I don't think this new combo is necessary
- 00:12:564 >> Replace with finish
- 00:36:136 >> Add a note
- 00:58:993 >> Finish

Hard;
- Ehhh Circle Size +1 (bigger)
- 00:28:993 >> Add a note
- 00:30:897 >> ^
- 00:44:945 >> Replace with finish

* Overall, that slowdown doesn't make sense to me and is confusing on Hard
* Star
al2e10
*by AL2 mod queue

[Hard]
00:41:612 (1-1st) - Clap
00:42:802 (3) - Remove clap
00:43:040 (4) - Clap
00:43:517 (1-1st) - ^
00:45:421 (1) - ^
00:45:897 (3) - Remove clap
00:46:374 (5-3rd) - Remove clap 00:46:374 (5-1st) - clap
00:58:993 (5) - Finish

[All]
Ohh, my god.
Small sound of mp3...
Gonzvlo
[General]
  1. Try to avoid using objects before the offset, use Offset: 3993 to fix that.
  2. The quality of the Spinner-bg is awful. Honestly, it makes the spinner really ugly. Try to get a better one or use another pic instead.
  3. You need to add the following file to avoid skin mixing: "spinner-osu", "spinner-clear" and "spinner-spin".
[Easy]
  1. 00:15:064 - This break is not necessary at all, it's too short. Remove that break, nobody will lose during that second.
  2. 00:33:993 (2,1) - I suggest to unstack these objects because 2 has a different slider speed to it might be a little unexpected while playing.
  3. 00:36:612 - This break is even shorter :O!. Remove this one too, please.
  4. 00:48:278 (1) - Perhaps add a whistle at the beginning and the end of this slider to suit the voice?
  5. 00:53:517 (1,2,3) - Some parts of (3) are getting covered by (1) and (2), I suggest to move (3) away, like this
  6. 00:57:802 (1) - This slider is placed too soon after the spinner. Honestly I think that the spinner doesn't fit with this part of the song, I suggest to remove it and try something like this instead. (If you decide to keep the spinner you'll have to start the slider 1/1 later)
  7. 00:57:802 (1) - Some whistles at the beginning and end of this slider would sound great with that piano sound :3
  8. 00:59:231 (2,3) - I think that 1 "Finish" used on (3) would sound better than 2 "Finishes" on both of the circles.
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - This feels too empty, I suggest to add some hitsounds like a Finish on (1) and some whistles on (3) and (5).
  2. 00:20:183 (1) - This spinner seems too short imo, almost like a ninja spinner, I highly suggest to use a slider instead.
  3. 00:28:755 ~ 00:36:374 - This part feels empty, It needs some hitsounds, why don't you add some soft whistles? Those whistles fit perfectly for this song.
  4. 00:38:278 (1,1) - This New Combo seems kinda random, is it really necessary? I suggest to remove it.
  5. 00:48:040 (1,2) - Same suggestions about adding whistles following the voice.
  6. 00:45:421 (1) - That whistle on the slider track sounds odd, you didn't use it for any other part in the song. I suggest to remove it, sounds too random.
    00:53:517 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm yeah, this killed the flow... try a vertical flip for this whole pattern, that should be enough. (Try to move it some grids up too :3)
  7. 00:56:017 - Same as [Easy] this break is too short and not necessary at all, just remove it.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:183 - If you mapped this part for [Normal], I don't see why you didn't map it for [Hard]. Go ahead and map it :3
  2. 00:20:183 (1) - Hmm ok this slider seems of for [Hard] (Not for [Normal]) Perhaps add a Finish at the end of this spinner?
  3. 00:48:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same suggestions about adding some soft whistle to spice these parts a bit.
  4. 00:56:136 - Same as [Normal] this break is too short, remove it please.
I don't see major problems with the diffs so have a star!
Good Job.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Gonzvlo wrote:

[General]
  1. Try to avoid using objects before the offset, use Offset: 3993 to fix that. Done all!!!!
  2. The quality of the Spinner-bg is awful. Honestly, it makes the spinner really ugly. Try to get a better one or use another pic instead. I'll think of it soon.
  3. You need to add the following file to avoid skin mixing: "spinner-osu", "spinner-clear" and "spinner-spin". ^


[Easy]
  1. 00:15:064 - This break is not necessary at all, it's too short. Remove that break, nobody will lose during that second. Done!
  2. 00:33:993 (2,1) - I suggest to unstack these objects because 2 has a different slider speed to it might be a little unexpected while playing. Fixed and I changed the way.
  3. 00:36:612 - This break is even shorter :O!. Remove this one too, please. ^
  4. 00:48:278 (1) - Perhaps add a whistle at the beginning and the end of this slider to suit the voice? Added.
  5. 00:53:517 (1,2,3) - Some parts of (3) are getting covered by (1) and (2), I suggest to move (3) away, like this Moved.
  6. 00:57:802 (1) - This slider is placed too soon after the spinner. Honestly I think that the spinner doesn't fit with this part of the song, I suggest to remove it and try something like this instead. (If you decide to keep the spinner you'll have to start the slider 1/1 later) That sounds cool, I added what you did on that picture.
  7. 00:57:802 (1) - Some whistles at the beginning and end of this slider would sound great with that piano sound :3 That's gotta be true, added.
  8. 00:59:231 (2,3) - I think that 1 "Finish" used on (3) would sound better than 2 "Finishes" on both of the circles. Removed the sound from (2).


[Normal]
  1. 00:15:421 (1,2,3,4,5) - This feels too empty, I suggest to add some hitsounds like a Finish on (1) and some whistles on (3) and (5). Added.
  2. 00:20:183 (1) - This spinner seems too short imo, almost like a ninja spinner, I highly suggest to use a slider instead. I added the slider with few reverses in it.
  3. 00:28:755 ~ 00:36:374 - This part feels empty, It needs some hitsounds, why don't you add some soft whistles? Those whistles fit perfectly for this song. Added it on sliders only.
  4. 00:38:278 (1,1) - This New Combo seems kinda random, is it really necessary? I suggest to remove it. Removed the NC from (2).
  5. 00:48:040 (1,2) - Same suggestions about adding whistles following the voice. Removed the NC from (2).
  6. 00:45:421 (1) - That whistle on the slider track sounds odd, you didn't use it for any other part in the song. I suggest to remove it, sounds too random. Done!
    00:53:517 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm yeah, this killed the flow... try a vertical flip for this whole pattern, that should be enough. (Try to move it some grids up too :3) Done!
  7. 00:56:017 - Same as [Easy] this break is too short and not necessary at all, just remove it. Done!
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:183 - If you mapped this part for [Normal], I don't see why you didn't map it for [Hard]. Go ahead and map it :3 Done.
  2. 00:20:183 (1) - Hmm ok this slider seems of for [Hard] (Not for [Normal]) Perhaps add a Finish at the end of this spinner? Done.
  3. 00:48:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same suggestions about adding some soft whistle to spice these parts a bit. Done.
  4. 00:56:136 - Same as [Normal] this break is too short, remove it please. Done.
I don't see major problems with the diffs so have a star! Well, your mod is very helpful to me and I want you to say think you for it, and the start as well. So I'm giving you kudosu.
Good Job. Thank you again, I'm gonna use this list for my modding.
val0108
hey o/

[Easy]
fine!

[Normal]
fine!

[Hard]
00:10:183 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:326 - add note

good luck!!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

val0108 wrote:

hey o/

[Easy]
fine! Good.

[Normal]
fine! Good.

[Hard]
00:10:183 (1) - remove new combo Done.
00:57:326 - add note Done and I fixed it.

good luck!! Thank you!
Kogure
OK!
New Skin DONE!
Whats new?

Combobursts added!
Hitcircle added!
New spinner background and all spinner stuff added! (approachcircle, background, circle, clear, metre, osu, spin)
Star2
Just add all the files in the .rar in the song's folder and voilá!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

K o g u r e wrote:

OK!
New Skin DONE!
Whats new?

Combobursts added!
Hitcircle added!
New spinner background and all spinner stuff added! (approachcircle, background, circle, clear, metre, osu, spin)
Star2
Just add all the files in the .rar in the song's folder and voilá!
All of them are added and thank you so much.:-)
Kamure
Wow, aren't you committed to getting this ranked....

Kd stars!!
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Wow, aren't you committed to getting this ranked....

Kd stars!!
I hope so...

And thank you.
Shiirn
General
Spinner background looks like crap. It also doesn't fit with the spinner fill. I highly suggest getting someone good at skinning to make you a good bg (I will if you can find me a better bg)
Offset 4015
All of the difficulties having the same slider velocity makes me a very sad panda.


Easy
00:11:158 (1) - remove new combo
00:12:110 (2) - New combo
00:13:062 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:539 (2) - new combo
00:53:539 (1) - remove new combo

Normal
This was completely boring and not very fun at all. AR+1 maybe?
00:43:517 (1) - Linear sliders don't fit this song at all, and this is the only one you use?

Hard
the slider velocity and the use of 0.5 makes this very, very irritating
This also lacks the neat sliders that the other diffs have, you obviously remapped the others at some time while going "eh the hard is fine"
00:34:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing is off and visibly awkward
00:41:612 (1) - if you're going to insist on using linear sliders, at least have the corners aligned with the sliderticks.
The complete lack of jumps makes me very sad.

Overall, the map was *okay*, but this is still far from what I would consider ranking material.
Meiri
Hi Kokoroanime ! Sorry For Delay >:(

Easy
00:05:897 (1) - Add Whistle ?
00:06:850 (2) - ^ ?
00:16:850 (3) - ^ ?
00:35:897 (2) - ^ ?
00:36:850 (1) - Add Whistle On Both And Start ?
00:43:516 (1) - Remove Clap On The End ? And Make The Clap On The Start ?
00:44:469 (2) - Add Clap ?
00:45:421 (1) - Add Whistle ?

Normal
00:21:135 (1) - Add Finish ?
00:36:850 - Add A Note Or Slider Here ?

Hard
Fine !

Good Job !
Roddie
Hi.

Easy
  1. 00:05:421 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
  2. 00:13:516 (2)-Add a finish?
  3. 00:16:373 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  4. 00:19:231 (1)-Remove new combo.
  5. 00:28:754 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  6. 00:34:469 (1)-^
  7. 00:56:373 (3)-Add a whistle on the end?
Normal:
  1. 00:20:183 (1)-Remove new combo? And also, add a finish on the end.
  2. 00:34:469 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning.
  3. 00:36:135 (2)-Add a finish?
  4. 00:38:278 (1)-I think replacing that clap with a finish sounds better.
Hard:
  1. 00:13:040 (1)-Add a finish on the end.
  2. 00:21:136 (5)-Add a finish.
That's all. Good luck, man.

Star.
SapphireGhost
[Easy]
00:19:707 (1) - Remove this spinner and map through it or extend the break fittingly.
[Normal]
00:17:326 (1,2) - Too many claps.
00:36:135 - It feels like you could map through this break with a slider.
[Hard]
00:36:374 (1) - This spinner is still rankable but still fairly short.

Map was alright.
Tashi_Scarlett[x]
In fact
no more to say
it:s nice i think
:> star~
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
Note: I have to pause from fixing my beating due to no internet at my house. But it gonna take few weeks to get back on it.

So please do not graveyard this beatmap after it's up to 4 over weeks/1 month, I well return in few weeks.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Shiirn wrote:

General
Spinner background looks like crap. It also doesn't fit with the spinner fill. I highly suggest getting someone good at skinning to make you a good bg (I will if you can find me a better bg)
Offset 4015 I'll let you know, for the offset is done.
All of the difficulties having the same slider velocity makes me a very sad panda. I wanted to but... If I change them in a normal way for hard and normal? How long it take to fix the circles and sliders back?


Easy
00:11:158 (1) - remove new combo Done!
00:12:110 (2) - New combo ^
00:13:062 (1) - remove new combo ^
00:13:539 (2) - new combo ^
00:53:539 (1) - remove new combo ^

Normal
This was completely boring and not very fun at all. AR+1 maybe? Got it.
00:43:517 (1) - Linear sliders don't fit this song at all, and this is the only one you use? Changed...

Hard
the slider velocity and the use of 0.5 makes this very, very irritating Aww... I'll fix it when I change the speed...
This also lacks the neat sliders that the other diffs have, you obviously remapped the others at some time while going "eh the hard is fine"
00:34:469 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing is off and visibly awkward Well, where else I can use???
00:41:612 (1) - if you're going to insist on using linear sliders, at least have the corners aligned with the sliderticks. Changed.
The complete lack of jumps makes me very sad. Aww... I will fix this, I promise...

Overall, the map was *okay*, but this is still far from what I would consider ranking material. Alright, and Ilm very sorry for being very last fixing it and here's a kudosu.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

- Peaceful Melody - wrote:

Hi Kokoroanime ! Sorry For Delay >:( That's okay and the same goes to you too.

Easy
00:05:897 (1) - Add Whistle ? Done.
00:06:850 (2) - ^ ? ^
00:16:850 (3) - ^ ? ^
00:35:897 (2) - ^ ? ^
00:36:850 (1) - Add Whistle On Both And Start ? Done.
00:43:516 (1) - Remove Clap On The End ? And Make The Clap On The Start ? Done
00:44:469 (2) - Add Clap ? Done!
00:45:421 (1) - Add Whistle ? ^

Normal
00:21:135 (1) - Add Finish ? Added.
00:36:850 - Add A Note Or Slider Here ? Added.

Hard
Fine ! Good.

Good Job ! Thank you.
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Roddie wrote:

Hi.Hey.

Easy
  1. 00:05:421 (1)-Add a finish on the end. No...
  2. 00:13:516 (2)-Add a finish? ^
  3. 00:16:373 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Done.
  4. 00:19:231 (1)-Remove new combo. Done.
  5. 00:28:754 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done.
  6. 00:34:469 (1)-^ ^
  7. 00:56:373 (3)-Add a whistle on the end? Done.
Normal:
  1. 00:20:183 (1)-Remove new combo? And also, add a finish on the end. Done.
  2. 00:34:469 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. Done.
  3. 00:36:135 (2)-Add a finish? Hey.
  4. 00:38:278 (1)-I think replacing that clap with a finish sounds better. Done.
Hard:
  1. 00:13:040 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Done.
  2. 00:21:136 (5)-Add a finish. ^
That's all. Good luck, man. Thank you.

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