Etsu wrote:

Hello!

My modding

Key: 1|2|3|4

Easy

00:09:794 - I think you should put a note on the and 00:49:500 - at key 1
00:22:147 - add note?
00:36:706 - this note should delete
01:02:735 - add key 3
01:01:412 - add key 4
01:02:956 (62956|2) - does not fit must remove
01:03:618 - add key 4
01:35:824 - better finish to hold not you think?

Normal

00:13:765 (13765|3,13985|2,14206|1,14427|0,14647|2,14647|0) -
you would be better that way:


00:49:941 (49941|0) - delete
00:56:559 (56559|3) - delete?
01:27:441 (87441|0,87882|1,87882|3,88765|2) -
and if you change it better?

This was the basics I saw good luck and good map

Rivals_7 wrote:

Mod Request

Afgan - Jodoh Pasti Bertemu[OsuMania]

You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it

hmm. typical indon songs. not my type actually. i'm still expecting people to mapping a songs from "KOTAK" lel. maybe soon

[General]
Background: No problem
Metadata: No problem.
Mapset:

SPOILER

Ranking Criteria wrote:

A difficulty's name must indicate its level of difficulty, with the exception of the hardest level of difficulty in a set. The mapset's hardest difficulty may use an appropriate custom difficulty name, unrelated to a username. Mapsets may also use a complete set of custom difficulty names that clearly indicate their level of difficulty to the player. Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming.

"Galau" and "Loneliness" aren't indicate the level of the diff. I'll Change it

Loneliness=Kesendirian => sepi, tidak bersama.
Galau(Adj./kata sifat)=ramai, tidak karuan.

Dah mendingan namain diffnya "EZ, NM" "Easy, Normal" atau "Mudah, Sedang" aja. Lebih gampang dimengerti :^)

Difficulty Spread:Cool
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Fine
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: Fine.
Timing: Nice
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4|

Galau

Might want to raise this diff to 1*. I'm Not Sure I can do It ....

00:10:677 (10677|0) - uhh, what's this follows? if you follow vocals, should be splitted into 2 lines. If this follows guitar, well.... there is no guitar.

00:34:721 - seems the guitar actually start here. cut the LN? hmm... at first i was thinking like that but.. i'll consider it later :3
00:35:382 (35382|0) - same thing. ^

01:02:956 (62956|2,63177|3) - move to 4|1 respectively, kinda bugging me that this is hitted on the same hand.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

01:17:735 (77735|1) - i dont think this is really needed. it only represent pitch change. might want to delete this.

Loneliness

00:09:353 (9353|1) - W pls

00:10:677 (10677|0) - again, wut is this?

00:11:118 (11118|1) - W

00:12:441 (12441|1,12882|0) - W

00:21:706 (21706|2) - W

00:26:559 (26559|1) - W
And still a lot of missing Hitsound, compare with your easiest diff.

kinda illustrate what i meant about missing Hitsound, right?

00:39:353 (39353|1,39794|0) - 1|3 respectively, this pattern...

...i dont think this is fit on the really low BPM songs

00:42:735 (42735|2,42809|1,42882|0,42882|2) - do something similar like above, i guess...

01:02:294 (62294|2) - delete, faint impact shouldnt be 3 notes.

01:04:059 (64059|0) - F

kiai time section:
You missing a lot of potentially mapped noise. such as guitar string at - 01:06:044 - , a clap-like noise - 01:07:368 - and else. Do not limit your mapping here, since this is the hardest diff.

01:21:706 (81706|0) - F maybe?
01:25:235 (85235|3) - here as well

cant say this is a bad map nor a good map tho. This is like an average 2 diff TV size mapping. After all, its not bad

well then. good luck Thanks >w<

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Afgan Ninja Hotaru haiii >w< /

Mod Via ♡ Верный Mania Queue ♡

4K = |1|2|3|4|

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Uncheck widescreen support on Sedang diff since there no SB in your map
2. Inconsistent Audio volume on Sedang & Mudah difficult
   
   Make sure you're check each diff volume, and make both of that are same audio with volume 40% or 30%

Mudah

OD : 6,5 or 7
HP : 6

1. 00:23:912 (23912|1) - pitchnya sangat rendah, karena dari awal anda hanya mengikuti suara kick, snare & cimbal. Agar lebih konsisten dengan pitch, Saran mending dihapus aja karena disini hanya terdengar suara low hat
2. 00:25:677 (25677|0) - sama halnya seperti diatas, walaupun disini juga terdengar low piano, tapi untuk consistency mending dihapus. Tapi boleh dipertimbangkan, kalau sendainya itu disengaja agar pattern gak terlihat empty emang bener rada kecil suaranya.. cuma bakal kosong kalau ga di isi
3. 01:02:956 (62956|0) - wah.. penempatan note disini terlihat canggung dengan rhytim yang anda ikutin, lebih baik pindah ke red tick 1/4 snap 01:02:735 - agar lebih ngefeel ke sentuhan vocal, dan juga boleh dipasang note disini 01:03:618 -
4. 01:04:059 - mulai dari kiai sampai selesai, spertinya pattern kurang ngefeel, lel karena banyak bagian yang terlihat kosong. saranku sih coba ngemap suara lain.. mungkin low hat atau low piano contoh untuk suara ini 01:09:794 (69794|2)

Sedang

OD : 7
HP : 7

1. 00:39:132 - apakah hotaru yakin ngak tambah note disini? karena ada suara loud di blue tick 1/4, sama halnya dengan :
   00:42:662 - di tambah owo /
2. 00:46:412 - overmapped, hapus 1 note karena ada 3 alasan :
   1) pitch yang terdengar hanya suara piano dan kick
   2) pattern terkesan dipaksakan kecuali untuk bagian Kiai section
   3) penyetaraan dengan diff sebelumnya yaitu easy diff yang hanya memasang 1 note, akan tetapi untuk diff ini memasang lebih dari 2.
   ok.. jangan lupa coba cek bagian ini :
   00:49:941 -
   01:03:177 -
   01:11:118 -
   01:21:706 -
   01:22:588 -
   01:23:471 -
   01:25:235 -
3. 00:47:294 - tambah note di |4| karena disitu ada suara piano + kick seperti yang saya jelaskan diatas dan ditambah lagi untuk konsistensi
4. 01:01:412 (61412|0) - untuk suara electric guitar mengapa harus LN kalau normal note 1/4 bisa dibuat lel, saran LN diganti jadi normal note.. otomatis note disemua blue tick dipasang 01:01:632 - 01:02:074 - berhubung ini diff paling akhir/susah
5. 01:17:294 (77294|2) - potong LN dibagian red tick 01:17:735 - karena disitu juga terdengar suara piano yang sama dengan 01:17:294 -
6. 01:35:382 - sampai 01:35:603 - bagian penutupan juga boleh dibuat lebih sulit patternya, coba bagian LN diganti jadi stair pattern 1/12 untuk suara stream guitar seperti 00:39:206 (39206|0,39280|1,39353|2) - mungkin ini bisa meningkatkan stars untuk diff normal

Verniy_Chan wrote:

My Rating

82,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Hue~ akibat tiba-tiba padam listrik, jadinya mengulang dari awal mod mapmu Huee
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

thanks >w<

Nivrad00 wrote:

General
I asked -Kamikaze- about your diff names and he says they have to indicate the difficulty in English so the majority of people can understand it

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

Sorry for the delay ;n; Fun fact, this is now the second-slowest song I have on osu Yeayyy \ (>w<) /

General
I asked -Kamikaze- about your diff names and he says they have to indicate the difficulty in English so the majority of people can understand it Hmm... I see.. I'll Change It owo.. Actually The Meaning Of Mudah is Easy and Sedang it's Normal taken From Indonesian/Melayu Language Since Soo Much People Did't Understand It so i change it

Mudah
00:49:941 - if you're following the guitar with this LN, why not put LNs at 00:51:706 - and 00:53:471 - ? whoa.. My Mistake XD

Sedang
01:01:853 (61853|3,62074|2,62294|3,62735|3,62956|2,63177|3,63618|2,64059|3,64500|3,64721|2,64941|3) - this pattern is oddly repetitive on the right hand Whoaa.. That's Why I Feel Bad when i play That Part

I think this is a wonderful simple map and I would be totally missing the point if I tried to nitpick technical details.Whoaa Thanks Good luck!

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

BAPER MZ ? Bukannya udah punya cewe sekarang mah haha *run

Random mod nanti saya mod pass malam hari.

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi mz hotaru ^^

Random mod

Col : 1|2|3|4

Easy

00:15:530 (15530|1,15971|3) - ctrl+g serasa berat maen'in tangan jika 00:14:206 (14206|3,14647|2) - 3-4 tangan kanan lalu 00:15:088 (15088|0,15530|1) - 1-2 di tangan kiri.
^ jika di ctrl+g 00:15:971 (15971|1) - ini pindah ke col 3
00:19:059 (19059|1) - move col 3 lebih kerasa flownya
00:25:235 (25235|2) - move col 2 00:24:794 (24794|3,25235|2) - my feeling berat asli u,u lalu jika di acc 00:26:118 (26118|1) - ini pindah ke 4
^ accept atas 00:27:882 (27882|3,28765|0) - ctrl+g
00:34:059 - my recomended pattern biar ada variasi dikit http://puu.sh/p93TB/9f99c625d7.jpg keep Since it was Easy owo
00:39:353 (39353|1) - move col 4 ^
00:45:530 (45530|2) - move col 2 00:45:971 (45971|3) - single dan LN tidak di 3-4 lebih enak example 00:42:000 (42000|0,42221|1,42441|3,42882|2) - 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2,21265|0,21706|1) - stslenya gitukan xD
00:48:177 (48177|2) - move col 4 lalu jadikan LN itu karena ada suara lel suara gitar atau piano sih itu 00:49:059 - stop
dan 00:49:059 (49059|1) - jadikan LN stop 00:49:941 - well soalya jika tidak di buat LN 00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ini gantung kan ikut itu suara.
00:51:706 (51706|2,53471|3,56559|3) - wew LNnya maen 3-4 terus baby
00:51:706 (51706|2) - ini LN pindah ke 1 sama kamu pass in lagi okay
00:56:559 (56559|3) - move col 3 00:57:000 (57000|1) - pindah ke col 4
00:57:441 - recomended http://puu.sh/p94DA/2c24ff8e4e.jpg
01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - aww man ini jack ganggu LN di col 1 jack di col 2 01:02:294 (62294|1,62735|1) - jack pindah ke col 4 dan 01:03:177 (63177|3,63618|2,64059|0,64059|1) - ctrl+h hindari jack kembali
01:04:941 (64941|3) - move col 1
01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ini stairs 1/2 jangan di col 2-3-4 tapi 4-3-2 singkatnya 01:11:118 (71118|1,71559|2,72000|3) - ctrl+g lalu 01:12:882 (72882|1) - ini move col 1
01:23:912 - gak banget deh jika LN + stairs ada di easy :v recomended http://puu.sh/p95Oj/9ee5be38ce.jpg

Normal

00:09:353 (9353|1,9353|3,10235|1,10235|3,11118|1,11118|3) - so i'am boring pattern xD 00:10:235 (10235|1) - move col 1
00:13:838 (13838|2) - mau nanya ini ngikut suara apa btw ? 00:13:765 (13765|3,13765|0,13985|1,14206|0,14427|3) - ini kan suara piano yah ? 00:13:838 (13838|2) - lalu ini apa ? delete saja Nah.. Sebenernya itu bunyi string Gitar.. jadi saya ngikutin itu xD
00:23:912 (23912|0,24353|1) - ctrl+g wall terus dari tadi 00:22:588 (22588|2,22588|3,23030|1,23030|0,23471|2,23471|3) - biasa gak balanced ke tangan
00:45:530 (45530|2,45530|1) - geser kekanan 1 baris lalu 00:45:971 (45971|3) - move col 2
00:49:941 (49941|2) - LN ikut suara instrumen kan ? bukan nya stop sampai sini ? 00:51:265 - Nope i guess owo
00:57:000 (57000|1,57000|2,57882|1,57882|2) - gampang boring wall kek gini ssaran saya sama ke kamu dikit re-pattern buat note wallnya
00:59:647 (59647|1) - move col 1
01:02:735 (62735|3,62956|2) - geser kek kiri 1 baris keep balanced 01:02:294 (62294|3) -
01:06:485 - missing note 01:05:824 (65824|1,65824|3,66044|2,66265|1) - same
01:07:588 (67588|3,67588|2,68030|1,68250|0,68471|1,68471|2,68912|1,68912|0,69353|2) - gak enak banget ini LNnya :3 recomended http://puu.sh/p96as/c840a7e422.jpg
01:15:088 (75088|2,75088|3,75530|1,75530|2,75971|0,75971|1,76412|2,76412|3) - kurang ngeh banget ini LN xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96sJ/1d3b54f9d3.jpg
01:29:647 (89647|2,89647|3,90088|1,90088|2,90530|0,90530|1,90971|3,90971|2,91412|1,91412|0,91853|3,91853|2,92074|1,92294|0,92294|2) - sama ini nya kurang ngehh xD recomended http://puu.sh/p96yz/eb655f851f.jpg

Diff name mungkin bisa seperti ini :
EZ 'Baper'
NM 'Putus cinta' // 'Php' // 'Galau' dll :v sebaiknya tanya BN saja.

Maaf jika modnya tidak membantu wiiihh bantu banget ko >w<)/

Good luck mz thanks :3

erlinadewi- wrote:

semoga bisa bergelembung deh

Adinata28 wrote:

Semangat!

One Miss wrote:

M4M from your que lol o/
|1|2|3|4|

i mainly focus on pitch relevance feel free to ignore what you dont feel is important.

Easy

1. 00:00:530 (530|0) - move to 1
2. 00:00:971 (971|1) - move to 2 for
3. 00:01:412 (1412|2) - move to 3
4. 00:04:059 (4059|2) - move to 3
5. 00:04:500 (4500|3) - move to 4
6. 00:04:941 (4941|2) - move to 3
7. 00:13:765 (13765|3) - move to 4
8. 00:13:985 (13985|2) - move to 3
9. 00:14:206 (14206|1) - move to 2
10. 00:14:647 (14647|0) - move to 1
11. 00:15:088 (15088|2) - move to 3
12. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ctr+g
13. 00:34:941 (34941|3) - move to 00:34:059
14. 00:35:824 (35824|0) - move to 00:35:824 the holds should be placed on the guitar, there are no long notes where you currently have these LN start.
15. 00:42:000 (42000|3,42221|2,42441|0,42882|1) - ctr+h
16. 00:43:324 (43324|2) - move to 3 if you accept prior change.
17. 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1) - make holds?
18. 01:11:118 (71118|0,71559|1,72000|2,72441|3) - ctr+g and move 01:10:677 (70677|0) - to 2
19. 01:24:353 (84353|2,84794|1) - should not be holds, there are not drawn out sounds here.

Normal

• 00:01:412 (1412|3) - move to 4

1. 00:04:941 (4941|3) - move to 4
2. 00:42:441 (42441|2) - make a hold?
3. 00:42:662 (42662|1) - ghost note if following the guitar.
4. maby increase hitsound volume on kai time(do for both diffs if you do it.)

GL on rank!

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Oke, song setup ga ada masalah, plus jg metadatanya oke https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MV_euZ_lKH8 official youtube (wkwkwk buat menyakinkan QAT aja ini)
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   Sip semua, cuman soft-hitnormalnya terlalu rendah volumenya, coba ganti sama ini aja http://puu.sh/pZ5Ur/5a1e0d4245.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   Oke
4. Background
   Resolusinya bermasalah gan, direkomendasikan rasio resolusinya 16:9 atau 4:3 ==> ini udah ane fix jadi 16:9 http://puu.sh/pZ5w7/32ffced203.jpg tinggal diubah aja BG semula
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   Hehe agak sedikit malas penjelasan modnya, tapi intinya ya untuk bisa memperbaiki kualitas mapnya
   
   [Easy]
5. Cek AIMOD (ctrl + shift + a) berbahaya dan tolong di fix
6. 00:07:588 - coba ditambahin aja 1 note di kolom 4 . . . lumayan keras kok soft-impactnya buat intro
7. 00:15:971 - tambah note buat kick nya gan . . . masa suara yg sejelas gitu nggk dimap owo . . . sekalian tambahin hitsoundnya juga
8. 00:28:324 (28324|2) - hapus notenya gan, ga ada suara disana (ghost note) coba bikin break aja disini, sekalian 00:27:882 (27882|0) - jadikan LN karena ada suarayg sama seperti LN sebelumnya . . . contoh http://puu.sh/pZ6dc/b1ecc27e13.jpg
9. 00:40:897 - ini cukup jelas kok gitarnya, tambah note aja
10. 00:27:000 (27000|1) - 00:34:941 (34941|1,35824|2) - 00:39:353 (39353|3) - 00:42:882 (42882|2) - 00:46:412 (46412|2) - 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1,49941|2) - 00:51:706 (51706|0) - 00:57:000 (57000|3) - 01:04:059 (64059|1) - 01:07:588 (67588|3) - 01:08:912 (68912|1) - 01:18:177 (78177|0) - 01:21:706 (81706|2) - 01:22:588 (82588|1,83471|3) - 01:28:765 (88765|2) - 01:35:824 (95824|0) - tambah whistle gan, ketinggalan wado cek aja lagi sendiri gan klo emang ada kick ya kasi whistle aja, jangan ditinggal
11. 01:08:471 (68471|2) - 01:31:412 (91412|2) - tambah clap, ketinggalan
12. 01:34:059 (94059|0,94500|1) - kebalik, seharusnya yg punya hitsound whistle dibawah
    
    [Normal]
13. 00:13:324 - mungkin lebih enaknya begini aja http://puu.sh/pZ7om/49b0487da1.jpg LN nya fokus seutuhnya ke instrumen gitar
14. 00:17:735 (17735|3) - pindah ke kolom 3 biar lebih balance, qm kebanyakan pakai kolom 4 masalahnya 00:17:294 (17294|3,18177|3) -
15. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ubah jadi LN, selaraskan sama ini 00:21:265 (21265|0,21485|1) - contoh http://puu.sh/pZ7Pw/04f8740277.jpg
16. 00:23:912 (23912|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1, balancing
17. 01:02:294 - http://puu.sh/pZ8aV/a8628e091f.jpg
18. 01:06:265 (66265|1,66485|0) - Ctrl G 01:07:147 (67147|0,67368|1) - Ctrl G juga
19. 01:26:118 (86118|1) - ke kolom 1, balancing
20. sisanya tinggal hitsound aja lagi yg masih banyak ketinggalan . . . klo udah di fix semua panggil balik aja lagi saya

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

RIP my 2 kudos

Bubble Check

|1|2|3|4|

• 
  [General]

1. Song Setup & Metadata
   Oke, song setup ga ada masalah, plus jg metadatanya oke https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MV_euZ_lKH8 official youtube (wkwkwk buat menyakinkan QAT aja ini)
2. Audio & Hitsounds
   Sip semua, cuman soft-hitnormalnya terlalu rendah volumenya, coba ganti sama ini aja http://puu.sh/pZ5Ur/5a1e0d4245.wav
3. BPM & Timing
   Oke
4. Background
   Resolusinya bermasalah gan, direkomendasikan rasio resolusinya 16:9 atau 4:3 ==> ini udah ane fix jadi 16:9 http://puu.sh/pZ5w7/32ffced203.jpg tinggal diubah aja BG semula
   
   |1|2|3|4|
   
   Hehe agak sedikit malas penjelasan modnya, tapi intinya ya untuk bisa memperbaiki kualitas mapnya
   
   [Easy]
5. Cek AIMOD (ctrl + shift + a) berbahaya dan tolong di fix
6. 00:07:588 - coba ditambahin aja 1 note di kolom 4 . . . lumayan keras kok soft-impactnya buat intro
7. 00:15:971 - tambah note buat kick nya gan . . . masa suara yg sejelas gitu nggk dimap owo . . . sekalian tambahin hitsoundnya juga
8. 00:28:324 (28324|2) - hapus notenya gan, ga ada suara disana (ghost note) coba bikin break aja disini, sekalian 00:27:882 (27882|0) - jadikan LN karena ada suarayg sama seperti LN sebelumnya . . . contoh http://puu.sh/pZ6dc/b1ecc27e13.jpg
9. 00:40:897 - ini cukup jelas kok gitarnya, tambah note aja
10. 00:27:000 (27000|1) - 00:34:941 (34941|1,35824|2) - 00:39:353 (39353|3) - 00:42:882 (42882|2) - 00:46:412 (46412|2) - 00:48:177 (48177|0,49059|1,49941|2) - 00:51:706 (51706|0) - 00:57:000 (57000|3) - 01:04:059 (64059|1) - 01:07:588 (67588|3) - 01:08:912 (68912|1) - 01:18:177 (78177|0) - 01:21:706 (81706|2) - 01:22:588 (82588|1,83471|3) - 01:28:765 (88765|2) - 01:35:824 (95824|0) - tambah whistle gan, ketinggalan wado cek aja lagi sendiri gan klo emang ada kick ya kasi whistle aja, jangan ditinggal
11. 01:08:471 (68471|2) - 01:31:412 (91412|2) - tambah clap, ketinggalan
12. 01:34:059 (94059|0,94500|1) - kebalik, seharusnya yg punya hitsound whistle dibawah
    
    [Normal]
13. 00:13:324 - mungkin lebih enaknya begini aja http://puu.sh/pZ7om/49b0487da1.jpg LN nya fokus seutuhnya ke instrumen gitar
14. 00:17:735 (17735|3) - pindah ke kolom 3 biar lebih balance, qm kebanyakan pakai kolom 4 masalahnya 00:17:294 (17294|3,18177|3) -
15. 00:20:824 (20824|3,21044|2) - ubah jadi LN, selaraskan sama ini 00:21:265 (21265|0,21485|1) - contoh http://puu.sh/pZ7Pw/04f8740277.jpg
16. 00:23:912 (23912|2) - pindahin ke kolom 1, balancing
17. 01:02:294 - http://puu.sh/pZ8aV/a8628e091f.jpg
18. 01:06:265 (66265|1,66485|0) - Ctrl G 01:07:147 (67147|0,67368|1) - Ctrl G juga
19. 01:26:118 (86118|1) - ke kolom 1, balancing
20. sisanya tinggal hitsound aja lagi yg masih banyak ketinggalan . . . klo udah di fix semua panggil balik aja lagi saya

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Bubbled selamat ya !

erlinadewi- wrote:

first bubble.. gratz jakiiiieeehhh....

>w<)/

leoudel wrote:

jodoh ga kemana

yuleee wrote:

akhirnya dapet balon juga yaa jodoh:'>

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Lagu indo :v

ajeemaniz wrote:

jodoh pasti berhumu uwu

leoudel wrote:

ajeemaniz wrote:

jodoh pasti berhumu uwu

1-8000 uwu

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

jodoh masih belum bertemu