o i forgot about it
Immortalbecause of some spacing, AR9,7 or 9,8
HP2 is a bit too low, just make it 3
00:11:111 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - not sure about the triangles, they seem like they are kinda overdone and needa be nerfed even more. I know you wanna keep it difficult but this is too much of a good thing
00:34:596 (2) - SV on this kind of sliders may be higher, it goes slower than biggest part of the streams
00:36:739 (4,1) - this stream jump doesn't play well, reconsider the pattern
00:52:253 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - maybe some more interesting slider patterns can be used and maybe different SVs too to make it look more interesting
01:16:939 (1,2,3) - wouldn't 2 returning sliders be better? just an idea tho, the sliders do feel awkward and you get easily mixed up because of you thinking it's 1/4 and not 1/3
01:19:681 (1,2) - why not face 1 towards 2?
01:35:710 (4,1) - again this streamjump is naaaah, would move it a little closer to each other
02:02:881 (5) - nice blanket, but would make it a little slower as I can see many people sliderbreak here
02:06:310 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - same as before
02:17:281 (1,2) - the connection between these two are very weird, again maybe face 1 towards 2 to make it not feel this awkward
02:44:624 (4,1) - these dont flow well, maybe curve 02:44:367 (1,2,3,4) - more towards 02:44:710 (1) -
03:03:529 (1,2,3,4) - this whole stream is really overdone, since the song isnt even too intense here. maybe put some sliders in the start
03:53:522 (2) - wouldnt you need a NC here?
04:04:408 (1,2) - not really sure whether the double here is really needed, and yes, i listened it on 50% and 25%
04:25:579 (4,5,6) - the DS on this triple is weird, please look over it again
04:50:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would decrease spacing on this, as it goes too big for the song
05:14:093 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - maybe make this pattern more consistent, it looks kinda random now
05:33:293 (1) - why have the SV here this high when at the other parts you didnt have this?
05:44:178 (8,1) - jump on this is too big for the spacing that comes afterwards, consider nerfing it a bit
05:53:521 (1,1) - these break flow because no jump
make it jump please
05:56:608 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - bruh this, this is nooooooo, spacing wayyy too high, or you must have a really good reason for it. pleaseplease consider nerfing it
ok that's it
i suck at mapping streams but i hope this helps