Epiclol wrote:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7xCgcjGBGk-ZWVsUG9QX3ZFV1k/view?usp=sharing

This is the actual video and the size is 691mb

-In the video I compressed it to 127 (The quality worsened) because if you use anything over 140+ mb video your osu will crash when you play the beatmap with the actual size

If you somehow find a way to compress it without losing that bad of quality then cool! If you want the compressed one I did then reply and I will upload that as well

Ps. Since it's in a google doc you can press the download button. should be on the top!

domSaur wrote:

i don't normally listen to english covers of japanese songs but this is just way too good

[Marathon]

1. 00:11:102 (3) - remove clap and put it on 00:10:915 (2) -
   not quite sure about your hitsounding so i'll prolly just point out that one alone but maybe have your claps at every 2nd and 4th beat(since i can hear drums here anyway)
2. 00:16:540 (2) - you can prolly move this by some wee pixels away... or not. just doesn't look nice aesthetically
3. 00:47:102 (2,3,1) - you can probably extend distance of these so that 00:47:102 (2,1) - won't have to overlap
4. 00:55:352 (2) - feel free not to follow this if you don't want tomaybe you could move this left of the stream around x:35 y229 or smth. and if you did so, you may also wanna blanket 00:55:540 (1) - to it..
5. 00:55:915 (3) - this slider feels weird. maybe copy 00:55:540 (1) - and ctrl+h
6. 01:09:040 (7) - maybe NC
7. 01:25:540 (4) - fix blanket(if it is supposed to be)
8. 02:02:290 (2) - any reason why is this ending on a blue? end it on the red or white tick(the white has a strong beat so try to put smth there should you end this slider on red) At this point, same reason of this previous slider 02:00:040 (7) - I've followed her voice, not the beat of the music XD
9. 02:07:540 (5) - also maybe nc
10. 02:30:602 (7) - unnecessary clap on tail. there's no drum here.
11. 02:31:165 (2) - put the clap here instead
12. 02:45:602 (3) - fix blanket
13. 03:40:727 (1) - i feel like the nc would be better on 03:40:540 (7) - instead
14. 03:59:290 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can form these into a pentagon/star(with 04:00:228 (6) - still on the top of (5)

not sure if these are of any help but eh..

1. I dont understand the purpose of combo colors and 8 , it doesnt match in anyway ~ also its really dark - people with dim bg will get blind x-x

1. Increase OD to 7
2. 00:10:540 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:22:727 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
4. 00:53:852 (1) - remove nc
5. 01:08:665 (6,2) - stack these
6. 01:10:540 (2) - start nc from here instead of 1
7. 01:23:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
8. 01:24:040 (6,1) - ^
9. 01:36:227 (7,1) - ^^
10. 01:56:665 (3,5) - make proper blanket
11. 01:58:165 (1) - remove nc
12. 02:10:165 (6) - nc starts from here
13. 02:27:602 (2,3) - fix blanket
14. 02:29:102 (3,4) - make blanket
15. 02:36:977 (4) - nc
16. 03:22:165 - add circle
17. 03:24:602 (4,5) - fix blanket
18. 04:00:790 (9,1,2,3) - i think u should remove nc but if u really want nc there , start it from 04:00:790 (9) -
19. 04:02:852 (3,4) - fix blanket
20. 04:26:290 (5) - uncurve it just a little from the end
21. 04:30:602 (6,7) - fix blanket
22. 04:46:165 (1) - remove nc
23. 04:48:040 (2,3) - fix blanket
24. 04:52:540 (3) - curve it more and try to make blanket with 04:52:352 (2) -
25. 05:00:227 (5,1) - make blanket
26. 05:05:290 (3,4) - fix blanket
27. 05:12:227 (7,1) - nazi blanket
28. 05:16:540 (1,2) - increase DS
29. 05:31:727 - dude are u sure about the 5% volume here??? increase to 40
30. 05:39:790 (1,2) - these sliders dont match the music at all , change shape

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi

General :

1. I dont understand the purpose of combo colors and 8 , it doesnt match in anyway ~ also its really dark - people with dim bg will get blind x-x

Marathon :

1. Increase OD to 7
2. 00:10:540 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:22:727 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
4. 00:53:852 (1) - remove nc
5. 01:08:665 (6,2) - stack these
6. 01:10:540 (2) - start nc from here instead of 1
7. 01:23:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
8. 01:24:040 (6,1) - ^
9. 01:36:227 (7,1) - ^^
10. 01:56:665 (3,5) - make proper blanket
11. 01:58:165 (1) - remove nc
12. 02:10:165 (6) - nc starts from here
13. 02:27:602 (2,3) - fix blanket
14. 02:29:102 (3,4) - make blanket
15. 02:36:977 (4) - nc
16. 03:22:165 - add circle
17. 03:24:602 (4,5) - fix blanket
18. 04:00:790 (9,1,2,3) - i think u should remove nc but if u really want nc there , start it from 04:00:790 (9) -
19. 04:02:852 (3,4) - fix blanket
20. 04:26:290 (5) - uncurve it just a little from the end
21. 04:30:602 (6,7) - fix blanket
22. 04:46:165 (1) - remove nc
23. 04:48:040 (2,3) - fix blanket
24. 04:52:540 (3) - curve it more and try to make blanket with 04:52:352 (2) -
25. 05:00:227 (5,1) - make blanket
26. 05:05:290 (3,4) - fix blanket
27. 05:12:227 (7,1) - nazi blanket
28. 05:16:540 (1,2) - increase DS
29. 05:31:727 - dude are u sure about the 5% volume here??? increase to 40
30. 05:39:790 (1,2) - these sliders dont match the music at all , change shape

Thats all from me~ GL

Whirl wrote:

01:13:540 (1) - move this note to the right so it matches the stream
01:44:102 (3,4) - Overlap, Overlap makes it look messy, try to make it like this: http://puu.sh/oTjbV/2b94f851b4.jpg
02:13:165 (1,2,3,4) - This stream looks weird, try making it straighter
03:25:352 (6,1,2) - maybe change this too this: http://puu.sh/oTjA1/2b3a2725bc.jpg
03:29:290 (4) - move this too the right, it'll look better
03:45:790 (1,2,3) - This looks weird, try this http://puu.sh/oTjL6/a87882c23f.jpg
04:24:415 (5,1) - overlap, try this http://puu.sh/oTjRl/335e3e2384.jpg
These are just a few suggestions, if you took 3 or more of these suggestions kudos please

Eeveesenpai_4_u wrote:

i found it on june.....
hello mapper of that map
i like that Anime so hard XD
so here a short mod

00:16:727 (3,4) - distance
04:52:540 (3) - why you don't make that slider curvy?
04:53:290 (4,5,6) - i would overwork this part....

slider from 04:53:290 - 04:53:477
04:53:665 - circle
slider from 04:53:852 - 04:54:415

03:53:852 - circle
slider from 03:54:040 - 03:54:227


this is only a personal opinion but pls make a slider bow *^*
i hope my mod was helpfull^^ or not mehhh sniff #eeveessaidplsrankthismap... ok i don not Play Standard but rank it XD

DylanSan wrote:

Hello from #modreq

NEW PAGE AYYYY

Marathon

Change audio lead in time to like 850 or something, Otherwise the player will have nearly no time to prepare before song begins, You can do this by editing the .osu file in the editor and looking for audio lead in or something similar

That deep purple colour might be hard to see when people play with 100% dim

00:01:352 (5,6) - If youu are overlapping, why not make it blanket too :v)
00:05:852 (1,3) - Maybe blanket (3) on that angle of (1)
00:09:602 (7,9) - Maybe blanket, makes slider look nicer too
00:15:977 (5,1) - Nazi stack fix
00:17:290 (5,6) - Blanket maybe?
00:18:602 (8,9) - Make blanket nicer by making the curve less extreme
00:22:727 (1,2) - Nazi blanket fix http://puu.sh/pnCgV.jpg
00:22:727 (1,3) - Nazi stack fix
00:38:477 - Missing note
00:46:540 (1) - How about trying something like this? http://puu.sh/pnClC.jpg
00:47:852 (1) - ^
00:55:165 (1) - Remove nc
00:55:821 (2) - I think this looks better http://puu.sh/pnCpr.jpg
01:18:227 (6,8,9) - Stack
01:24:602 (1,3) - Stack


Ok so i am going to stop here, I am getting kinda frustrated i wont be pointing out every blanket you'd have to fix or every stack,
My advice is go over the map a few times and try to make your stacks perfect and your blankets too, you can use the approach circle as guideline as seen the screenshots i provided.

Another tip is: simple is best, So your slider doesnt need 20 anchor points to make that little wiggle line, You can try to do it with like 4 of them. you can add these points by selecting the slider and holding ctrl and clicking anywhere. click on an existing one with ctrl again and it will turn into a red one, this way you wont have to re-do the whole slider if it looks crooked or something.

I am only trying to help, it might seems harsh, but i promise you its only to help you

I wish you the best of luck with mapping

SherryCherry wrote:

hi

00:05:852 (1) - This looks too uneven too.Aesthetically, I think you could improve the slider. Fixed
00:06:602 (3,1) - overlapping can be avoided . Fixed
00:12:040 (1) - 180*+ctrl+g to improve flow Changed
00:15:977 (5,6,1) -The pattern desigining is a bit messy here Fixed
00:18:602 (8,1,2,3) - overlap Fixed
00:21:227 (8,9,1) - bad flow imo Changed a bit
00:47:102 (2) - make better Fixed
00:47:852 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:040 (9,1,2,3) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh Fixed
02:02:290 (2) - move to a white tic I rather leave it like this, she pauses for a moment her voice just like here 02:00:040 (7) -
03:45:415 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 11) it’s not a good idea to ignore snare sounds I'll keep it like this.

Nice song. Gl~

Hiro-chan wrote:

Olá, pedi para o meu amigo Net0 me mandar um mapa em que eu poderia estar ajudando e ele me mandou o seu.

Eu revi o seu mapa e tenho alguns pontos em que você poderia estar mudando, são apenas sugestões para que o mapa siga um pouco mais o ritmo da música.

O que pode ser alterado

00:02:102 (7) - troque esse slider por um que vá do 00:02:102 - até 00:02:290 - e troque ele por um slider deste assim http://image.prntscr.com/image/4f76c822 ... 6eeec1.png (desculpa não sei o nome) e deixe ele ir até o 00:02:665 - deixando do assim http://image.prntscr.com/image/471a9aed ... 97595b.png ou deixe o tempo dele até 00:02:477 - e em 00:02:665 - adicione um hitcircle

02:00:040 (7) - neste slider você pode mudar o tempo do slider ele vai até o 02:00:321 - aumente o tempo dele deixando ele ir até 02:00:415 - Prefiro deixar deste jeito, neste momento estou sendo fiel a pausa que ela faz na entonação da voz.

02:02:290 (2) - a mesma coisa aqui faça ele ir até o 02:02:290 (2) - Mesmo ^

00:00:602 (3) - diminua o tempo dele para 00:00:790 - Prefiro manter o foco na guitarra

00:00:977 - adicione um hitcircle ^

00:01:352 (5) - diminua o tempo dele para 00:01:540 - ^

00:01:727 - adicione um hitcircle ^

00:04:165 (6) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider que vai do 00:04:165 - até 00:04:352 - Prefiro manter assim

00:06:977 (4) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider que vai do 00:06:977 - até 00:07:165 - Arrumado

00:22:446 (4) - retire esse hitcircle Ok, arrumado

00:23:665 (4) - 00:24:040 (5) - retire esse dois sliders e adicione um hitcircle em 00:23:665 - e outro em 00:24:227 - e também adicione entre eles um slider do 00:23:852 - até 00:24:040 - Ok, good stuff

00:24:415 (6) - 00:24:790 (1) - remova esses dois sliders e adicione um hitcircle em 00:24:415 - e outro em 00:24:977 - e também adicione entre eles um slider do 00:24:602 - até 00:24:790 - Ok

00:25:165 (2) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:25:165 - até 00:25:352 - Prefiro manter

00:25:915 (1) - diminua o tempo dele para 00:26:102 - e adicione um hitcircle em 00:26:290 - Prefiro manter o slider longo

00:31:915 (5) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:31:915 - até 00:32:102 - Prefiro manter

00:33:602 (5) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:33:602 - até 00:33:790 - ^

00:34:915 (2) - 00:35:102 (3) - retire esses dois hitcircles e adicione um slider do 00:34:915 - até 00:35:102 - Prefiro manter

00:37:915 (2) - reitire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:37:915 - até 00:38:102 - Vou manter os hitcircles que tu sugeriu tirar

00:42:227 (6) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:42:227 - até 00:42:415 - ^

00:42:602 (7) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:42:602 - até 00:42:790 - ^

00:53:852 (7) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 00:53:852 - até 00:54:040 - ^

00:54:227 (1) - retire esse slider e adicione um hitcircle em 00:54:227 - Manterei o kick slider

01:01:446 (6) - retire esse hitcircle O que disse anteriormente ^

01:02:571 (6) - retire esse hitcircle ^

01:05:852 (2) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 01:05:852 - até 01:06:040 - ^

01:12:602 (3) - retire esse hitcircle e adicione um slider do 01:12:602 - até 01:12:790 - ^

01:22:540 (8) - 01:22:727 (1) - retire esses dois hitcircles e adicione um slider do 01:22:540 - até 01:22:727 - Alterado

01:23:102 (3) - retire esse slider e adicione um hitcircle em 01:23:102 - e adicione também um slider em 01:23:290 - até 01:23:477 - Manterei o slider longo

01:32:665 (4) - 01:32:852 (5) - retire esses dois hitcircles adicione um slider do 01:32:665 - até 01:32:852 - Alterado

01:46:540 (6) - 01:46:727 (1) - retire esses dois hitcircles e adicione um slider do 01:46:540 - 01:46:727 - Manterei assim

02:07:915 (3) - 02:08:102 (4) - 02:08:196 (5) - retire esses três hitcircles e adicione um slider do 02:07:915 - até 02:08:102 - Manterei a pattern atual por hora

02:09:040 (3) - 02:09:227 (4) - retire esses dois hitcircles e adicione um slider do 02:09:040 - até 02:09:227 - ^

02:22:165 (4) - 02:22:352 (5) - retire esses dois hitcircles e adicione um slider do 02:22:165 - até 02:22:352 - Manterei a pattern

05:25:165 - adicione um hitcircle Adicionado

Bom isso são algumas coisas que você pode mudar no seu mapa, espero não ter sido uma perda de tempo para você. Não foi perda de tempo!

E que o mapa seja rankeado. (っ´∀｀)っ

[Goku] wrote:

Olá, do #modreqs

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Marathon
Hitsound muito alto nas 1ª 2ª e 4ª sessões kiai
00:19:446 (2) - overmapped (recomendo colocar a velocidade em 25% e ouvir com hitsound em 0%) Intencional
00:35:102 (3) - overmapped - Alterado
01:01:446 (6) - overmapped - Intencional
02:56:665 (7) - não sei por que mas a forma desse slider não me agradou Alterado
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Boa sorte.

Halkem wrote:

Dei uma passada no #modreqs e achei seu mapa. Achei muito agradável de se jogar e os hitsounds estão excelentes!
Só uma coisa que me chamou atenção:
Eu gostei bastante dessa pattern 02:36:227 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , só que aqui 02:38:102 (1,2) - em vez de você continuar os jumps você colocou esse slider, eu acho que ficaria muito melhor se continua-se com a pattern anterior até porque a musica continua aumentando a intensidade nesse ponto.

Eu tentei, mas não consegui achar mais nada lol Boa sorte Fenrir!