1. Marathon (4,17 stars, 1136 notes)

[ Kosuna ] wrote:

menino abobado mas fez um ótimo trabalho.

cruzneto0 wrote:

Fenrir curti demais o mapa o/ mandou bem.
Vou dar umas sugestões meio bobas mas já que você vai precisar de mods pra rankear isso vamo que vamo (use-as da forma que preferir ou não as use)

A intro ficou muito show, a unica coisa que poderia ser modificada é essa stream 00:03:602 - ; daria pra colocar depois do slider 00:03:227 - um outro triple e aproveitar o final da bateria com outro pattern.
Esse hitcircle não é exatamente necessário se você quiser poderia tirá-lo sem afetar o flow da música 00:07:165 (4) -
Essas duas partes 00:16:352 - e 00:40:352 - tem a mesma sensação de ritmo e são bem parecidas, você acha que dá pra colocar os combos de forma semelhante também?
Nesta daqui eu penso que você poderia manter o flow nos vocais 02:01:165 - até 02:01:727 -
A mesma ideia nesse ponto 03:13:165 - aqui ela fala "Goodbye" se você for focar nos vocais seria no caso 1 hitcircle e o slider.
Nesse ponto você iniciou seguindo o vocal 03:52:915 - mas o slider acaba "colidindo" com o mesmo nesse momento 03:53:852 - . Por mim vc pode manter do jeito que está mas tem gente dentro do QAT que não curte muito isso
Nessa parte do solo 04:53:852 - dá pra colocar doubles ao invés dos sliders, mas isso também é completamente pessoal.

No geral o flow ta perfeito, ótimo trabalho mesmo o/ . Desculpa se o texto estiver errado eu não o revisei

fabiojhon wrote:

Eae fenrir, como vai? o/

Eu vim aqui te ajudar com o desenvolvimento desse mapa.

Lembrando que se você nao gostar de alguma so alterar a forma normal, qualquer duvida PM me, é nois ♥

Sugestoes (Modding)

Epiclol wrote:

GOD DAMN! These updates I swear I have to fc it every single time again :c

Love the updates though keep up the good work!

Shoga wrote:

A random modder

irrc

18:16 Shoga: yo
18:16 *Shoga is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/924219 Amanda Lee Feat. Dima - Your Lie In April]
18:16 Tio Fenrir: Yo
18:16 Shoga: I can mod this if u 're free :D
18:17 Tio Fenrir: In chat?
18:17 Shoga: yea
18:17 Tio Fenrir: Fine
18:17 Tio Fenrir: go ahead
18:17 Shoga: ok
18:18 Shoga: 00:00:602 (3,5,7) - 
18:18 Shoga: u see
18:18 Shoga: those three slider
18:18 Shoga: U miss the strong beat there
18:18 Shoga: at 00:00790
18:18 Shoga: 00:00:790
18:19 Tio Fenrir: I ain't folowwing it, I only followed the guittar there
18:19 Tio Fenrir: You see, the sliders are for the guittar soound
18:19 Shoga: I know U follow the guitar
18:19 Shoga: I see
18:20 Tio Fenrir: aham
18:20 Shoga: Just a friendly suggestion
18:20 Shoga: :X
18:20 Shoga: :D
18:20 Tio Fenrir: yeah
18:20 Tio Fenrir: You suggesting to short the slider
18:20 Tio Fenrir: and put another note for the strong beat
18:20 Tio Fenrir: ?
18:20 Shoga:  Yea
18:21 Tio Fenrir: Fien, I'll consider
18:21 Tio Fenrir: Fine*
18:21 Shoga: 00:00:227 (2) - 
18:21 Shoga: u can turn this into a repeat
18:21 Shoga: slider
18:21 Shoga: maybe
18:22 Tio Fenrir: hmm, ok
18:22 Tio Fenrir: might be good
18:23 Shoga: same for 00:02:102 (7) - 
18:24 Shoga: 00:19:915 (4,5) - Fix blanket
18:24 Shoga: 00:22:915 (2,3) - ^
18:25 Tio Fenrir: aham
18:26 Shoga: 01:12:040 (10,1,2,3) - I think U should increase the spacing here since player might sightread as a stream.
18:27 Shoga: 01:18:602 (7,8) - Blanket
18:28 Shoga: U might wanna fix the blanket
18:28 Shoga: or keep that 
18:29 Shoga: since I notice It happen quite a lot in your map
18:29 Tio Fenrir: I'll try to fix/improve some since you're suggesting
18:29 Shoga: ok
18:30 Shoga: 01:23:102 (3,4) - Blanket
18:31 Shoga: 01:42:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
18:31 Shoga: u see
18:31 Shoga: that pattern
18:31 Shoga: I mean u should increase the spacing there
18:31 Shoga: the jumps is fine
18:31 Tio Fenrir: ok
18:32 Shoga: 02:07:540 (5) - Should put a New combo here 
18:33 Tio Fenrir: Agreed
18:33 Tio Fenrir: hahaha
18:33 Shoga: :D
18:33 Shoga: 01:09:040 (7) - mayas well a NC here
18:34 Shoga: 01:13:821 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - SHould increase the spacing here as well
18:34 Shoga: lol I jump a bit backward lol
18:36 Shoga: 02:01:540 (4,5,1) - Instead of stacking there
18:38 Shoga: U can turn that single tap part into something like this
18:38 Shoga: hang on
18:38 Shoga: puushing
18:38 Shoga: http://puu.sh/nTWAq/4319f83192.jpg
18:39 Tio Fenrir: Ok, I'll think on something
18:39 Shoga: ok
18:39 Shoga: Becuz the spacing is not consistent there imo
18:40 Tio Fenrir: Sure
18:41 Shoga: 03:53:852 (7) - perhaps  NC here 
18:42 Shoga: 04:00:977 (1,2,3,1) - Should space the stream out a bit might be a problem since they might think it is a stream
18:44 Tio Fenrir: I'm planning to keep those sightreads
18:44 Shoga: I see
18:45 Shoga: I think that 's enough
18:45 Shoga: The rest of the map is pretty well mapped
18:46 Tio Fenrir: Ok, thanks dude
18:46 Shoga: are u planning on mapping the rest of the song?
18:46 Tio Fenrir: post the log, I'll give you the kudos
18:46 Tio Fenrir: I don't know yet to be honest
18:47 Tio Fenrir: at first I wanted to
18:47 Shoga: I see
18:47 Shoga: Oh yea
18:47 Shoga: One more thing
18:47 Tio Fenrir: but I gave up, I like to listen the song after the map ends
18:47 Shoga: generall
18:47 Shoga: the spacing
18:47 Shoga: form the half the song to the end
18:47 Shoga: the spacing is bit greater
18:47 Shoga: compare to the first half
18:48 Shoga: U mioght wanna increase the spacing of the first half by just a little
18:48 Shoga: might*
18:48 Tio Fenrir: I'll consider o/
18:48 Shoga: \o
18:49 Shoga: Plz Push this to rank!
18:49 Shoga: I love it!
18:49 Tio Fenrir: I'll try my best
18:49 Tio Fenrir: post the log, I'll give you the kudosus
18:49 Shoga: ok

-Mo- wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs

-

Marathon
- Quite a few of your New Combos seem fairly inconsistent and don't make much sense to me. Th general rule of thumb is to have NCs on downbeats, or the nearest significant beat if that isn't possible. For example I would make 00:05:852 (6) and 00:07:352 (4) NCs, whilst removing the ones from 00:06:415 (1) and 00:08:102 (1). I don't think it's worth me going through the entire map the point out which NCs I would change, but if you'd like me to do that then I can follow up a post to do that. I'll pont out a few which I think are important though.
- 00:17:852 (6) - I'd recommend trying to use as little slider points as possible to make your sliders look as smooth as possible. You could also use some red points to make the slider look better.

Example

- 00:21:602 (1,2) - Kind of a minor thing but it would look better if these two sliders were the exact same shape. Just copy-paste one of them and rotate.
- 00:23:665 (4,5,6) - Try to have these sliders a consistent spacing apart from each other for this pattern.
- 00:25:540 (3) - This is a good place for an NC due to the downbeat and the gap in the rhythm.
- 00:25:915 (1) - As before about sliders.

Example

- 00:30:977 (1,2,3) - I don't think this spacing/flow matches the music very well. You made 1-2 jump, and then reduced the spacing going into slider 3, where in my opinion the intensity of this note is higher as the vocals are higher pitched. Plus I don't believe the way 3 curves is the most intuitive flow you can have here following from 2. The main thing I'd recommend is increasing the spacing for 2-3 though.

Example

- 00:31:915 (4) - Place a clap on this for consistency.
- 00:38:665 (4) - As above.
- 00:46:540 (1,2,1) - These sliders look really rough in my opinion. I think the best thing here is to look up sliderwaves on this thread, since that thread already has everything explained.
- 00:54:227 (2) - I'd put the NC here since this is where the guitar starts, and would make the timing easier to read, since currently 00:53:665 (6,1) and 00:53:852 (1,2) has fairly similar spacing.
- 01:12:040 (1,2,3,4) - I wouldn't say there's anything in the music that suggests using reduced spacing like this.
- 01:17:102 (3) - As before about making smoother sliders.
- 01:19:352 - Perhaps consider placing a circle on here before going straight into the spinner? The harder note would represent the guitar note better than a spinner start.
- 02:00:040 (7) - You seem to have the whistle going over the entire slider instead of just the head. I'm not sure if this is intentional or not.
- 02:02:290 (2) - As above.
- 02:13:540 (5) - NC here might be more appropriate since this is where the kiai starts.
- 02:27:602 (2) - As before about making the slider smooth. Try to use one slider point for the curve if possible.

Example

- 02:29:102 (3,5) - Same applies to these.
- 02:33:602 (8) - And this one.
- 02:34:727 (3,4,5) - Similar thing as before about appropriate spacing. I feel that 02:35:102 (5) has more impact that the other notes in this combo, so a jump into 5 is more appropriate than the reduced spacing.
- 03:00:790 (6) - Interesting slider. It can still benefit by reducing the amount of slider points you use though.

Example

- 03:03:040 (1) - Same for this one.

Example

- 03:09:040 (1,2) - And these. I'd recommend using some red points so that the corners look a little better.

Examples

- 03:40:165 (6) - This slider misses the vocal note on 03:40:352 and maps the downbeat to a slider end, which to me isn't ideal. I'd recommend reducing this slider down to a 1/2 and place a circle on the downbeat.

Example

- 03:46:540 (1,4) - As before about having the whistle over the entire slider. These actually don't sound too bad here though, so you could just apply this to the other sliders if you wished.
- 03:59:852 (5,6) - I'd reccommend stacking these so that there is less confusion in the timing since there's a gap in the rhythm.
- 04:01:540 - Perhaps use a silent sliderslide.wav for this quiet section?
- 04:01:540 (1) - As before with sliders.

Rough example

You can make this even better by making it perfectly symmetrical by placing it in the centre and Ctrl+H it until it looks the same on both sides.

- 04:24:790 (1) - Wow the slider ticks. Yeah this one definitely needs to be changed.

Suggestion

- 04:50:477 (1,4) - Slider things here too.
- 04:52:352 (2,3) - This sort of overlapping doesn't look very nice in my opinion. Overlapping 1 may be a little more acceptable though.

Example

- 04:55:915 (2) - I feel like you could do a better slider than this, right now it looks really out of place. It doesn't even need to be that complex.
- 04:57:227 (3,4) - More sliders that could be improved.
- 05:00:227 (5,6,1) - The flow could be improved by moving 05:00:602 (1) below 05:00:415 (6) so that the circular flow remains in the same direction.

Example

- 05:04:540 (2) - Another slider that could be improved.
- 05:22:915 (3,4,5) - Similar thing as before about spacing. I feel like 05:23:290 (5) deserves a greater spacing because of the piano note.
- 05:27:977 (5,6,7) - Same thing here but with slider 7.
- 05:31:540 - In my opinion, ending the map here feels somewhat abrupt and I wasn't expecting it. I feel like it would accompany the music much better if you mapped to the end of the song.

Other than a few rough edges it's not a bad map. Good luck!

Tio Fenrir wrote:

About the ending, I want to map, but I can't find the right BPM when the music get slower. XD

Ataraxia wrote:

Ola fenrir

Adicione um timepoint no offset 348243 e coloque 44,910 BPM nele .

E com isso tenho certeza que o timing esta correto !

Epiclol wrote:

Osu! Amanda Lee Feat. Dima - Your Lie In April

THIS VIDEO GOES SO WELL!

Kana chan wrote:

beautiful song! beautiful map

00:12:040 (6) - new combo here instead of 1
00:25:915 (1) - move the red dot higher
00:26:665 (3) - should bend up
00:28:915 (1) - bend right
00:35:290 (4) - copy paste 1 so it looks the same pls
00:47:102 (2,1) - copy paste pls?
00:51:227 (1) - bend right
01:44:102 (3) - bend right
02:00:040 (7) - make this longer? or add a note there or something
02:15:602 (1) - make the end more circular
04:17:102 (5) - bend left
04:55:915 (2) - lmao

1. 00:11:102 (3) - remove clap and put it on 00:10:915 (2) -
   not quite sure about your hitsounding so i'll prolly just point out that one alone but maybe have your claps at every 2nd and 4th beat(since i can hear drums here anyway)
2. 00:16:540 (2) - you can prolly move this by some wee pixels away... or not. just doesn't look nice aesthetically
3. 00:47:102 (2,3,1) - you can probably extend distance of these so that 00:47:102 (2,1) - won't have to overlap
4. 00:55:352 (2) - feel free not to follow this if you don't want tomaybe you could move this left of the stream around x:35 y229 or smth. and if you did so, you may also wanna blanket 00:55:540 (1) - to it..
5. 00:55:915 (3) - this slider feels weird. maybe copy 00:55:540 (1) - and ctrl+h
6. 01:09:040 (7) - maybe NC
7. 01:25:540 (4) - fix blanket(if it is supposed to be)
8. 02:02:290 (2) - any reason why is this ending on a blue? end it on the red or white tick(the white has a strong beat so try to put smth there should you end this slider on red)
9. 02:07:540 (5) - also maybe nc
10. 02:30:602 (7) - unnecessary clap on tail. there's no drum here.
11. 02:31:165 (2) - put the clap here instead
12. 02:45:602 (3) - fix blanket
13. 03:40:727 (1) - i feel like the nc would be better on 03:40:540 (7) - instead
14. 03:59:290 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can form these into a pentagon/star(with 04:00:228 (6) - still on the top of (5)

Epiclol wrote:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7xCgcjGBGk-ZWVsUG9QX3ZFV1k/view?usp=sharing

This is the actual video and the size is 691mb

-In the video I compressed it to 127 (The quality worsened) because if you use anything over 140+ mb video your osu will crash when you play the beatmap with the actual size

If you somehow find a way to compress it without losing that bad of quality then cool! If you want the compressed one I did then reply and I will upload that as well

Ps. Since it's in a google doc you can press the download button. should be on the top!

domSaur wrote:

i don't normally listen to english covers of japanese songs but this is just way too good

[Marathon]

1. 00:11:102 (3) - remove clap and put it on 00:10:915 (2) -
   not quite sure about your hitsounding so i'll prolly just point out that one alone but maybe have your claps at every 2nd and 4th beat(since i can hear drums here anyway)
2. 00:16:540 (2) - you can prolly move this by some wee pixels away... or not. just doesn't look nice aesthetically
3. 00:47:102 (2,3,1) - you can probably extend distance of these so that 00:47:102 (2,1) - won't have to overlap
4. 00:55:352 (2) - feel free not to follow this if you don't want tomaybe you could move this left of the stream around x:35 y229 or smth. and if you did so, you may also wanna blanket 00:55:540 (1) - to it..
5. 00:55:915 (3) - this slider feels weird. maybe copy 00:55:540 (1) - and ctrl+h
6. 01:09:040 (7) - maybe NC
7. 01:25:540 (4) - fix blanket(if it is supposed to be)
8. 02:02:290 (2) - any reason why is this ending on a blue? end it on the red or white tick(the white has a strong beat so try to put smth there should you end this slider on red) At this point, same reason of this previous slider 02:00:040 (7) - I've followed her voice, not the beat of the music XD
9. 02:07:540 (5) - also maybe nc
10. 02:30:602 (7) - unnecessary clap on tail. there's no drum here.
11. 02:31:165 (2) - put the clap here instead
12. 02:45:602 (3) - fix blanket
13. 03:40:727 (1) - i feel like the nc would be better on 03:40:540 (7) - instead
14. 03:59:290 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe you can form these into a pentagon/star(with 04:00:228 (6) - still on the top of (5)

not sure if these are of any help but eh..

1. I dont understand the purpose of combo colors and 8 , it doesnt match in anyway ~ also its really dark - people with dim bg will get blind x-x

1. Increase OD to 7
2. 00:10:540 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:22:727 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
4. 00:53:852 (1) - remove nc
5. 01:08:665 (6,2) - stack these
6. 01:10:540 (2) - start nc from here instead of 1
7. 01:23:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
8. 01:24:040 (6,1) - ^
9. 01:36:227 (7,1) - ^^
10. 01:56:665 (3,5) - make proper blanket
11. 01:58:165 (1) - remove nc
12. 02:10:165 (6) - nc starts from here
13. 02:27:602 (2,3) - fix blanket
14. 02:29:102 (3,4) - make blanket
15. 02:36:977 (4) - nc
16. 03:22:165 - add circle
17. 03:24:602 (4,5) - fix blanket
18. 04:00:790 (9,1,2,3) - i think u should remove nc but if u really want nc there , start it from 04:00:790 (9) -
19. 04:02:852 (3,4) - fix blanket
20. 04:26:290 (5) - uncurve it just a little from the end
21. 04:30:602 (6,7) - fix blanket
22. 04:46:165 (1) - remove nc
23. 04:48:040 (2,3) - fix blanket
24. 04:52:540 (3) - curve it more and try to make blanket with 04:52:352 (2) -
25. 05:00:227 (5,1) - make blanket
26. 05:05:290 (3,4) - fix blanket
27. 05:12:227 (7,1) - nazi blanket
28. 05:16:540 (1,2) - increase DS
29. 05:31:727 - dude are u sure about the 5% volume here??? increase to 40
30. 05:39:790 (1,2) - these sliders dont match the music at all , change shape

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hi

General :

1. I dont understand the purpose of combo colors and 8 , it doesnt match in anyway ~ also its really dark - people with dim bg will get blind x-x

Marathon :

1. Increase OD to 7
2. 00:10:540 (1,2) - fix blanket
3. 00:22:727 (1,2,3) - fix blankets
4. 00:53:852 (1) - remove nc
5. 01:08:665 (6,2) - stack these
6. 01:10:540 (2) - start nc from here instead of 1
7. 01:23:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
8. 01:24:040 (6,1) - ^
9. 01:36:227 (7,1) - ^^
10. 01:56:665 (3,5) - make proper blanket
11. 01:58:165 (1) - remove nc
12. 02:10:165 (6) - nc starts from here
13. 02:27:602 (2,3) - fix blanket
14. 02:29:102 (3,4) - make blanket
15. 02:36:977 (4) - nc
16. 03:22:165 - add circle
17. 03:24:602 (4,5) - fix blanket
18. 04:00:790 (9,1,2,3) - i think u should remove nc but if u really want nc there , start it from 04:00:790 (9) -
19. 04:02:852 (3,4) - fix blanket
20. 04:26:290 (5) - uncurve it just a little from the end
21. 04:30:602 (6,7) - fix blanket
22. 04:46:165 (1) - remove nc
23. 04:48:040 (2,3) - fix blanket
24. 04:52:540 (3) - curve it more and try to make blanket with 04:52:352 (2) -
25. 05:00:227 (5,1) - make blanket
26. 05:05:290 (3,4) - fix blanket
27. 05:12:227 (7,1) - nazi blanket
28. 05:16:540 (1,2) - increase DS
29. 05:31:727 - dude are u sure about the 5% volume here??? increase to 40
30. 05:39:790 (1,2) - these sliders dont match the music at all , change shape

Thats all from me~ GL

Whirl wrote:

01:13:540 (1) - move this note to the right so it matches the stream
01:44:102 (3,4) - Overlap, Overlap makes it look messy, try to make it like this: http://puu.sh/oTjbV/2b94f851b4.jpg
02:13:165 (1,2,3,4) - This stream looks weird, try making it straighter
03:25:352 (6,1,2) - maybe change this too this: http://puu.sh/oTjA1/2b3a2725bc.jpg
03:29:290 (4) - move this too the right, it'll look better
03:45:790 (1,2,3) - This looks weird, try this http://puu.sh/oTjL6/a87882c23f.jpg
04:24:415 (5,1) - overlap, try this http://puu.sh/oTjRl/335e3e2384.jpg
These are just a few suggestions, if you took 3 or more of these suggestions kudos please

Eeveesenpai_4_u wrote:

i found it on june.....
hello mapper of that map
i like that Anime so hard XD
so here a short mod

00:16:727 (3,4) - distance
04:52:540 (3) - why you don't make that slider curvy?
04:53:290 (4,5,6) - i would overwork this part....

slider from 04:53:290 - 04:53:477
04:53:665 - circle
slider from 04:53:852 - 04:54:415

03:53:852 - circle
slider from 03:54:040 - 03:54:227


this is only a personal opinion but pls make a slider bow *^*
i hope my mod was helpfull^^ or not mehhh sniff #eeveessaidplsrankthismap... ok i don not Play Standard but rank it XD

DylanSan wrote:

Hello from #modreq

NEW PAGE AYYYY

Marathon

Change audio lead in time to like 850 or something, Otherwise the player will have nearly no time to prepare before song begins, You can do this by editing the .osu file in the editor and looking for audio lead in or something similar

That deep purple colour might be hard to see when people play with 100% dim

00:01:352 (5,6) - If youu are overlapping, why not make it blanket too :v)
00:05:852 (1,3) - Maybe blanket (3) on that angle of (1)
00:09:602 (7,9) - Maybe blanket, makes slider look nicer too
00:15:977 (5,1) - Nazi stack fix
00:17:290 (5,6) - Blanket maybe?
00:18:602 (8,9) - Make blanket nicer by making the curve less extreme
00:22:727 (1,2) - Nazi blanket fix http://puu.sh/pnCgV.jpg
00:22:727 (1,3) - Nazi stack fix
00:38:477 - Missing note
00:46:540 (1) - How about trying something like this? http://puu.sh/pnClC.jpg
00:47:852 (1) - ^
00:55:165 (1) - Remove nc
00:55:821 (2) - I think this looks better http://puu.sh/pnCpr.jpg
01:18:227 (6,8,9) - Stack
01:24:602 (1,3) - Stack


Ok so i am going to stop here, I am getting kinda frustrated i wont be pointing out every blanket you'd have to fix or every stack,
My advice is go over the map a few times and try to make your stacks perfect and your blankets too, you can use the approach circle as guideline as seen the screenshots i provided.

Another tip is: simple is best, So your slider doesnt need 20 anchor points to make that little wiggle line, You can try to do it with like 4 of them. you can add these points by selecting the slider and holding ctrl and clicking anywhere. click on an existing one with ctrl again and it will turn into a red one, this way you wont have to re-do the whole slider if it looks crooked or something.

I am only trying to help, it might seems harsh, but i promise you its only to help you

I wish you the best of luck with mapping

SherryCherry wrote:

hi

00:05:852 (1) - This looks too uneven too.Aesthetically, I think you could improve the slider. Fixed
00:06:602 (3,1) - overlapping can be avoided . Fixed
00:12:040 (1) - 180*+ctrl+g to improve flow Changed
00:15:977 (5,6,1) -The pattern desigining is a bit messy here Fixed
00:18:602 (8,1,2,3) - overlap Fixed
00:21:227 (8,9,1) - bad flow imo Changed a bit
00:47:102 (2) - make better Fixed
00:47:852 (1) - ^ ^
01:12:040 (9,1,2,3) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh Fixed
02:02:290 (2) - move to a white tic I rather leave it like this, she pauses for a moment her voice just like here 02:00:040 (7) -
03:45:415 (5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 11) it’s not a good idea to ignore snare sounds I'll keep it like this.

Nice song. Gl~