toby fox - Spider Dance

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cheesiest
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 5, 2017 at 7:14:53 PM

Artist: toby fox
Title: Spider Dance
Source: UNDERTALE
Tags: -kevincela-
BPM: 230
Filesize: 3254kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra (5.77 stars, 512 notes)
  2. Hard (3.23 stars, 234 notes)
  3. Insane (4.57 stars, 404 notes)
  4. kevincela's Extra (5.41 stars, 480 notes)
  5. Light Insane (4.15 stars, 317 notes)
  6. Normal (0.46 stars, 3 notes)
  7. Yoeri's Extra (5.46 stars, 436 notes)
  8. Yoeri's Normal (2.05 stars, 180 notes)


Download: toby fox - Spider Dance
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ImpulseTheFox
Hi, I'm from #osu
I have some ideas for changes (if you like)

00:31:382 - Add preview point here
00:33:469 - Start kiai time
00:41:751 - End kiai time
00:41:817 - Start kiai time
00:50:164 - End kiai time
00:03:991 (8) - Change to reversed slider half as long (00:29:034 (8) - like you did it right here)
00:20:686 (8) - Same ^
00:54:338 (1) - Split slider into cirlce + slider http://puu.sh/nEezl/932c671d86.jpg
00:55:382 (6) - Same ^
01:09:860 (6) - (Hard and extra) The ending of the slider sounds really weird, you could extend it and replace the next slider with a circle at the end (just an idea) http://puu.sh/nEfj5/011cd4f8a9.jpg

I hope to be helpful.
Topic Starter
cheesiest

ImpulseTheFox wrote:

Hi, I'm from #osu
I have some ideas for changes (if you like)

00:31:382 - Add preview point here
00:33:469 - Start kiai time
00:41:751 - End kiai time
00:41:817 - Start kiai time
00:50:164 - End kiai time
00:03:991 (8) - Change to reversed slider half as long (00:29:034 (8) - like you did it right here)
00:20:686 (8) - Same ^
00:54:338 (1) - Split slider into cirlce + slider http://puu.sh/nEezl/932c671d86.jpg
00:55:382 (6) - Same ^
01:09:860 (6) - (Hard and extra) The ending of the slider sounds really weird, you could extend it and replace the next slider with a circle at the end (just an idea) http://puu.sh/nEfj5/011cd4f8a9.jpg

I hope to be helpful.
kiai times i'll keep as a whole section, imo im not sure if the middle of it is a good place to put another fountain.
hard suggestions: no change, the reason it's not a 1/4 kick for those two parts is because the sections are different and i'd figure the denser section would haev a better time with the 1/4 kick, also it follows a placement scheme as well, etc etc.
no splitting the slider, makes the section too hard and i feel the way it is mapped atm is fine.
also the ending is kinda weird, i guess i could silence it but i do not want to extend the sliders
MillhioreF
posting in this thread so cheesiest gets an email
-kevincela-
same
Topic Starter
cheesiest

MillhioreF wrote:

posting in this thread so cheesiest gets an email
Yeah
bbj0920
I just can't help loving this map
I
JUST
CAN'T
pkk
:!:
Chupalika
ohai
SuperMIC
ok +12 sp ready for rank
FriendoFox
Soo, like I said, first mod, so it's probably gonna be really bad, but here goes nothing! I'm only gonna do the Insane though, since I am really bad :?

00:04:251 : You could make it so that the sliders go a little faster with the sounds, for example:

00:04:251 : Sliderspeed 1,76 (Like it is right now)
00:04:773 : Sliderspeed 1,90 or 2,00 (I don't know how big the differences are xD)
00:05:295 : Sliderspeed 2,20?
00:05:817 : Sliderspeed 2,40?
And then back to normal, and that at 00:12:599 and 00:20:947 and at 00:29:295 , I got this idea because it might fit when the sound gets more intense (I don't know how to explain to be honest) Oh and of course make the sliders bigger if you increase the speed of them so they fit to the beat :D

00:32:947 : You could maybe make 3 4 5 and 6 go in a little pattern so it closes in to the next slider like this:


Instead of



Only personal preference :)

01:03:208 : Make 3 and 4 look more like 1 and 2 before maybe, basically so that the sliders are also a little twisted (is that the right word?)

That's all I got basically! It's not alot, and I hope I didn't fail miserably, but I guess it works for my first! :P

(i have no idea what i'm doing lol)
Topic Starter
cheesiest

Friendofox wrote:

Soo, like I said, first mod, so it's probably gonna be really bad, but here goes nothing! I'm only gonna do the Insane though, since I am really bad :?

00:04:251 : You could make it so that the sliders go a little faster with the sounds, for example:

00:04:251 : Sliderspeed 1,76 (Like it is right now)
00:04:773 : Sliderspeed 1,90 or 2,00 (I don't know how big the differences are xD)
00:05:295 : Sliderspeed 2,20?
00:05:817 : Sliderspeed 2,40?
And then back to normal, and that at 00:12:599 and 00:20:947 and at 00:29:295 , I got this idea because it might fit when the sound gets more intense (I don't know how to explain to be honest) Oh and of course make the sliders bigger if you increase the speed of them so they fit to the beat :Di wil have to decline on this, it Just. Isnt Me. at least as far as this map goes

00:32:947 : You could maybe make 3 4 5 and 6 go in a little pattern so it closes in to the next slider like this: i have um the slider like. a catching slider kinda, except you just retain your momentum going into it w/o it being a straight slider so i think it is fine as is.


Instead of



Only personal preference :)

01:03:208 : Make 3 and 4 look more like 1 and 2 before maybe, basically so that the sliders are also a little twisted (is that the right word?) curved!!! is the word you're looking for i think. also umm i have them differently since like. the sections are similar, but i'd rather a different feel for it than the curved sliders give? also it looks less clunkier this way since curved sliders "lose" distance kinda ecause of their curves

That's all I got basically! It's not alot, and I hope I didn't fail miserably, but I guess it works for my first! :P

(i have no idea what i'm doing lol)
thank you for the mod!!!
Topic Starter
cheesiest

SuperMIC wrote:

ok +12 sp ready for rank
Tanhk....... thank bro....
GeekyPotato
Just a few things I wanted to say about this map (this colour means that the changes aren't huge or largely significant):

Light Insane


00:23:034 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of having this part slow down for a second, maybe adding some jumps there might be better

00:31:382 (1,2,3) - (^ add jumps here as well)

I want to see this map ranked, it plays really well :)
Topic Starter
cheesiest
no to both lol
but thanks
smau5
@light insane
00:03:991 (8) - make it a small slider repeat to match the song
00:20:686 (8) - this one too
01:25:643 (1,2,3) - try putting the circle then a small slider repeat
01:33:991 (1,2) - this part too
01:27:208 (6,7) - this part doesnt match the melody
01:35:556 (6,7) - this one too
sorry i couldnt help too much
Topic Starter
cheesiest
no to all
SnowTheme
Why is this not ranked D:
-kevincela-

SnowTheme wrote:

Why is this not ranked D:
Because cheesiest is lazy at ranking stuff :(
SnowTheme
I started to create a Spider Dance Map too but i am a new mapper so its probably badd in the opinion of others. Maybe the easy and hard one of mine could be helpfull :) ?
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