M4M kub, Gonna mod this in English cuz I can't write Thai on my notepad thing.
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Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/365163
Ty kub P' and good luck~
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- 00:30:282 (1,2) - Ctrl+G the rhythm here? So the rhythm here would be more similar to 00:31:532 (3,4) also because you seem to have vocal on clickable objects so the clickable drum on 00:31:115 (2) is kinda random imo.
- 00:42:365 (5) - Well if you agreed of what I pointed above then this one should be changed into sth that isn't clickable with the same reasoning as above, well there are similar cases later so if that's intentional then I won't point them out anymore.
- 01:21:948 (3) - Yeah you missed a whistle here.
- 01:44:448 (5) - Clap?
- 02:02:365 - Whistle?
- 02:55:282 (1,1) - Set the volume here at 60%? Imo the clap on the first spinner is really loud. Same applies to all diffs I guess.
- 03:37:782 (1,2) - The flow's kinda random here, I mean, you never did a blanket like this before and the flow here isn't the same as usual, not sure how to describe this properly.
- 04:05:282 (1,2,3) - Doesn't sound match with the rhythm imo, you can hear that the vocal gave a pause between 04:05:282 (1,2) but not between 04:07:157 (2,3) so they sounded a bit weird, my suggestion here is to start 04:07:157 (2) at 04:07:782 and then add a circle on 04:07:157 , you might want to try a similar rhythm suggestion here with 04:09:032 (3) as well if you get what I mean.
- 04:17:782 (1) - Clap on the head instead of whistle?
- 04:22:782 (1,2,3) - Pretty much something random+my preference but a 1/1 repeat slider also works here imo.
- 00:36:532 (4) - Since most of your claps earlier are clickable then how about this one?
- 00:44:448 - Feels weird to have this ignored tho, maybe it's just me.
- 00:59:865 (4) - the head is on instrument while the vocal is on the tail so it doesn't feel right, actually I prefer 2 circles like what you just did on 00:58:615 (4,1) .
- 01:00:282 (5,1) - Imo the neither music nor vocal is calling for a jump here at all.
- 01:01:740 (2,3) - Unstack this? Because you did stacks on 01:03:407 (2,3) - 01:05:698 (1,2,3) - which they all based on vocal so I think if 01:01:740 (2) isn't based on vocal then it should be presented differently.
- 01:10:282 (7) - It seems like you ignored a few beats of vocal here but maybe it's intentional so I'll mention this just in case.
- 01:54:032 (3,4) - Ctrl+G the rhythm here? So players would know that you're starting to follow a guitar here from a 1/1 slider.
- 02:15:282 (3,4) - Making these a 1/2 repeat slider starting from 02:15:282 is better imo. It's really hard to suddenly switch between drums and vocals on 02:14:448 (6,1,2,3,4) so if this 02:15:282 (3) was a slider then the less movement will be required which is a lot easier to follow imo.
- 02:23:198 (2,3) - The jump here feels off, the jump should be on 02:22:782 (1,2) instead.
- 02:25:073 - If this is clickable then it would feel less awkward imo, also to keep the rhythm consistent with 02:26:323 (4) .
Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/365163
Ty kub P' and good luck~