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AnatOWJIya
TheGesk's Insane Updated
Rivals_7
a little bit more i guess

[TheGesk's Insane]

00:13:053 - think i just notice that this LN has two different pitch. so it should be somewhat like this


00:18:214 - similar to above


02:32:400 - i feel like you forget the guitar here. should be like this


about your point there, i heard it again and i think i could agree.


about the Background tho. I feel its kinda low quality. Also the fact when i search this with google images, the biggest resolution that came up is 1062 x 704 so I assume you upscaling the BG lol

anyways I found one that kinda fitting

https://puu.sh/vL1r6/66f78b6da2.jpg

This one 1750 x 984 tho and since the RC state we could have a BG up until 1920 x 1200 so why not?
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AnatOWJIya

Rivals_7 wrote:

a little bit more i guess

about the Background tho. I feel its kinda low quality. Also the fact when i search this with google images, the biggest resolution that came up is 1062 x 704 so I assume you upscaling the BG lol

anyways I found one that kinda fitting

https://puu.sh/vL1r6/66f78b6da2.jpg

This one 1750 x 984 tho and since the RC state we could have a BG up until 1920 x 1200 so why not?
Thanks for new BackGround Image =w=)b
Gesk

Rivals_7 wrote:

a little bit more i guess

[TheGesk's Insane]

00:13:053 - think i just notice that this LN has two different pitch. so it should be somewhat like this


00:18:214 - similar to above


02:32:400 - i feel like you forget the guitar here. should be like this
DONE
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AnatOWJIya
Updated
Rivals_7
Nominated!
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AnatOWJIya

Rivals_7 wrote:

Nominated!
Thanks a lot of ;w;
Shmiklak
Grats
alacat
hi, I think the source should be "劇場版デート・ア・ライブ 万由里ジャッジメント"




Link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p06y07Qmu50
http://date-a-live-anime.com/judgement/
http://date-a-live-anime.com/book/cd11.html
http://www.kadokawa-pictures.jp/official/date_a_live_movie/

How do you think ?
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AnatOWJIya

alacat wrote:

hi, I think the source should be "劇場版デート・ア・ライブ 万由里ジャッジメント"




Link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p06y07Qmu50
http://date-a-live-anime.com/judgement/
http://date-a-live-anime.com/book/cd11.html
http://www.kadokawa-pictures.jp/official/date_a_live_movie/

How do you think ?
I thought Movie's name is okay itself (Date a Live:Mayuri Judgement), but yea, all links says it should be 劇場版デート・ア・ライブ 万由里ジャッジメント . Thanks for noticing it, feel free to DQ so i can change it.
Akasha-
Hey there,

I want to talk about the BPM/Offset section before too late

Here is the thing:

As I notice from your map, there is some multiple BPMs
but only 3 timings should be added: which are 88 - 94 and 184

1. Offset: 782ms	BPM: 88,00
2. Offset: 12.372ms BPM: 94,00
3. Offset: 13.010ms BPM: 184,00

Why so?
00:00:782 - this calm piano is matched with BPM 88 so I have nothing to say about this
00:12:372 - sound like a speeding up right here, which is better to have a BPM faster than 88 but still hit the next BPM perfectly, I did a calculate: it is 94 BPM here
00:13:010 - it's 92 doubled to 184, but the main drum and bass already explained why it's 184 isntead of 92

03:10:401 - there is no need to make another 92BPM here, it's calm yes, but the main flow is still going fine with this BPM

That was BPM section

Coming up some snapping check (personally)

After fix the BPM, the snap on here must be refix manually
I will take "TheGesk's Insane" as an example
(these hyperlink can only work after you fixed the BPM/offset)

[TheGesk's Insane]
00:12:850 - 00:12:930 - should be 1/8 snap
Okay, so this one is weird, the correct snap to me is on 00:14:640 - 00:15:007 - 1/8 00:15:374 -
00:15:618 - should make another long note and end on 00:15:781 - for the trumpet sound
00:13:010 (13010|0) - it's conflicted to 00:15:620 (15620|0,15781|3) - because this one is merged while this 00:15:620 (15620|0,15781|3) - is seperate into two
01:09:586 (69586|0) - it's wrong, it should be end on 01:09:912 - , and with that following, 01:09:749 (69749|3) - should be begin on 01:09:912 -
01:12:520 - you can add a note on here for bass sound
01:15:455 (75455|2) - should be end on 01:16:270 - and make another long note on here and end on 01:16:760 - (the sound is seperated on here)
01:18:064 (78064|1) - it's ghost note, no sound on here
01:23:607 (83607|2) - seperate into two long notes, it's different sounds on here
01:26:216 (86216|1) -
01:28:825 (88825|0) -
01:31:433 (91433|2) -
(It's hard to notice with 100% playback, I recomended you to check it carefully with 25% playback, it's small different in pitch in these sections)

02:05:183 - and so on, you can reference on the previous mod (like where to seperate your long notes) and stuffs.

Good luck.
alacat
DQ'ed
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AnatOWJIya
Changed Title according to links that alacat gave and fixed timings and diffs with Kuo Kyoka via IRC. Map should be good and ready for re-qualify, but i might ask bn's for additional check.
Rivals_7
Thegesk isnt responding to KK's mod yet so i think i'm going to hold this. one thing tho

01:23:607 (83607|2) - seperate into two long notes, it's different sounds on here
01:26:216 (86216|1) -
01:28:825 (88825|0) -
01:31:433 (91433|2) -
i did checking this and I will says the violin is definitely one pitch. I cant really notice with 25% either so.......
its a small difference anyway so it wont bother players, i think.
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

Rivals_7 wrote:

Thegesk isnt responding to KK's mod yet so i think i'm going to hold this. one thing tho

01:23:607 (83607|2) - seperate into two long notes, it's different sounds on here
01:26:216 (86216|1) -
01:28:825 (88825|0) -
01:31:433 (91433|2) -
i did checking this and I will says the violin is definitely one pitch. I cant really notice with 25% either so.......
its a small difference anyway so it wont bother players, i think.
If i got you right it's good he didn't changed them into 2 LNs. Is there anything else you'd like to talk about or map doesn't have anything questionable?
Rivals_7
1234
Hitsounds are applied to all diffs. make sure you check carefully

[Insane]

00:13:010 (13010|0) - this is still not splitted tho

00:18:227 (18227|1) - u forgot WF. Also split the LN for consistent

00:55:727 (55727|2) - 02:03:553 (123553|2) - 03:08:281 (188281|0) - add F

01:33:879 (93879|2) - kinda sure you missing W here (or C idk)

01:18:064 (78064|1) - considered ghost notes. still not removed nor addressed (Tho myself cant really say this is really a ghost notes or just cant be hearded because vocal being really loud) because overall it'll break the consistency on the other 2 similar chorus - 02:25:890 (145890|3) - and - 03:51:977 (231977|1) -

02:00:537 (120537|2) - not sure if you missing C or - 00:52:711 (52711|2) - are a mistake

02:28:009 (148009|1) - pretty sure this should be C instead of W or something and also missing W at - 02:28:336 (148336|1) - here

03:58:009 (238009|1) - I think there's F

04:11:705 (251705|1) - 04:12:846 (252846|1) - 04:14:314 (254314|3) - ^

04:06:080 (246080|3) - could say this is ghost

[Hard]

00:46:923 (46923|1) - F

04:11:053 (251053|2) - there's kinda anchory on col 3. consider to move this to 2

@Anatowjiya pls tell if thegesk allow you to change things on his diff so i can be sure either things are changed or not
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

Rivals_7 wrote:

1234
Hitsounds are applied to all diffs. make sure you check carefully

[Insane]

00:13:010 (13010|0) - this is still not splitted tho Done

00:18:227 (18227|1) - u forgot WF. Also split the LN for consistent Done

00:55:727 (55727|2) - 02:03:553 (123553|2) - 03:08:281 (188281|0) - add F Done

01:33:879 (93879|2) - kinda sure you missing W here (or C idk) Done

01:18:064 (78064|1) - considered ghost notes. still not removed nor addressed (Tho myself cant really say this is really a ghost notes or just cant be hearded because vocal being really loud) because overall it'll break the consistency on the other 2 similar chorus - 02:25:890 (145890|3) - and - 03:51:977 (231977|1) - I don't think it's ghost

02:00:537 (120537|2) - not sure if you missing C or - 00:52:711 (52711|2) - are a mistake Don't think it is

02:28:009 (148009|1) - pretty sure this should be C instead of W or something and also missing W at - 02:28:336 (148336|1) - here Done

03:58:009 (238009|1) - I think there's F Done

04:11:705 (251705|1) - 04:12:846 (252846|1) - 04:14:314 (254314|3) - ^ Done

04:06:080 (246080|3) - could say this is ghost I don't think it's ghost

[Hard]

00:46:923 (46923|1) - F Done

04:11:053 (251053|2) - there's kinda anchory on col 3. consider to move this to 2 Done

@Anatowjiya pls tell if thegesk allow you to change things on his diff so i can be sure either things are changed or not
TheGesk allowed me to change his diff as he's busy for now, gonna pray diffs and HSes are good now. Thanks for mod ;3
Rivals_7
uhh..

[Hard]
02:37:955 (157955|2,157955|3) - misplaced Double. should be at - 02:37:792 (157792|0) - . Almost all of your structures are like - 02:43:009 (163009|0,163009|3,163173|1) - (Double single) for a kick-clap structure rather than Single Double like that. so thats an inconsistencies

02:57:683 (177683|0) - 02:58:336 (178336|2) - 02:58:988 (178988|1) - doesnt sound consistent with - 02:59:640 (179640|3,179640|1) - in structural form. The first three uses single, while the last pattern using double.

03:04:205 (184205|1,184205|2) - kinda wondering why you didnt use the similar LN layering like - 02:56:705 (176705|3) - . recommended to add them for Layering consistency

03:29:966 (209966|2) - ( i think i already said this on my mod before idk) Reduce this one. the emphasis is not that big so using 3 noter is quite weird

03:43:336 (223336|2,223499|1) - quite didnt get why these two also exist while the other kiai doesnt

04:09:096 (249096|0) - should've been split this for main melody. see - 04:06:488 (246488|2,246651|0) - 04:11:705 (251705|1,251868|3) -

03:08:770 (188770|1) - you forget to F here

[Normal]

00:24:728 (24728|0) - man the snap

02:53:770 (173770|1) - 03:02:901 (182901|2) - think that LN should've been ended here according to the noise i heard

[Easy]

03:08:770 (188770|2) - 03:53:444 (233444|2) - 03:54:749 (234749|2) - F

03:50:999 (230999|3) - think this should be splited in half giving how the percussion works in 2 section
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

Rivals_7 wrote:

uhh..

[Hard]
02:37:955 (157955|2,157955|3) - misplaced Double. should be at - 02:37:792 (157792|0) - . Almost all of your structures are like - 02:43:009 (163009|0,163009|3,163173|1) - (Double single) for a kick-clap structure rather than Single Double like that. so thats an inconsistencies Done

02:57:683 (177683|0) - 02:58:336 (178336|2) - 02:58:988 (178988|1) - doesnt sound consistent with - 02:59:640 (179640|3,179640|1) - in structural form. The first three uses single, while the last pattern using double. Done

03:04:205 (184205|1,184205|2) - kinda wondering why you didnt use the similar LN layering like - 02:56:705 (176705|3) - . recommended to add them for Layering consistency Done

03:29:966 (209966|2) - ( i think i already said this on my mod before idk) Reduce this one. the emphasis is not that big so using 3 noter is quite weird Done

03:43:336 (223336|2,223499|1) - quite didnt get why these two also exist while the other kiai doesnt Deleted

04:09:096 (249096|0) - should've been split this for main melody. see - 04:06:488 (246488|2,246651|0) - 04:11:705 (251705|1,251868|3) - Done

03:08:770 (188770|1) - you forget to F here Done

[Normal]

00:24:728 (24728|0) - man the snap Fixed

02:53:770 (173770|1) - 03:02:901 (182901|2) - think that LN should've been ended here according to the noise i heard Done

[Easy]

03:08:770 (188770|2) - 03:53:444 (233444|2) - 03:54:749 (234749|2) - F Done

03:50:999 (230999|3) - think this should be splited in half giving how the percussion works in 2 section Done
Checked Hses thru all the diffs,should be okay now( i think d;) Sorry for all that
ColdHat
Хай вот тебе мой мод (надеюсь он будет полезным)
Сразу скажу что HD чекать не стал. А вот с остальными повозился. Поехали!
EZ:
1.00:01:634 - за место ноты протяни до сюда лн
2.00:04:361 - ^
3.00:07:088 - убери ноту
4.00:09:816 - (как в первом пункте)
5.00:22:466 - звук есть, можно поставить ноту, но это на твой вкус
6.01:10:401 - ставь ноту (особо карту она не усложнит)
7.01:47:004 - ты дальше ставишь в такие места ноту, поставь её и сюда.
8.02:02:901 - ставить ноту сюда или нет решай сам
EZ END
NM:
1.00:10:237 - убери лн и поставь две ноты (тишина же)
2.01:04:205 - зачем? (нет звуков)
3.01:09:749 - ^
4.01:37:140 - (хитсаунды такие или мне мерещится звук лавы из Sonic'a, ладно пох) убери ноту и протяни лн до 01:37:466
5.01:55:727 - ноту
6.01:56:868 - ^
7.01:59:640 - ^
8.04:21:325 - ^
9.04:21:488 - ^
10.04:21:651 - ^
NM END
The Gesk's Insane [IN]:
Прим. Найденные недочёты относятся к спокойной части.
1.03:12:031 - здесь пианино, так что ставь ноту
2.03:13:825 - я слышу вроде бы ноту, но сказать точно не могу.
3.03:21:325 - сюда хорошо впишется лн до 03:22:140 (но я хз)

Всего доброго тебе AnatOWJIya. ;)
Topic Starter
AnatOWJIya

SoldatRacer wrote:

Хай вот тебе мой мод (надеюсь он будет полезным)
Сразу скажу что HD чекать не стал. А вот с остальными повозился. Поехали!
EZ:
1.00:01:634 - за место ноты протяни до сюда лн Нет, как по мне лучше тут обычные ноты
2.00:04:361 - ^
3.00:07:088 - убери ноту Там есть звук, как и на всех остальных таких же моментах
4.00:09:816 - (как в первом пункте) А вот тут приму
5.00:22:466 - звук есть, можно поставить ноту, но это на твой вкус Я не хочу выделять эти ударные
6.01:10:401 - ставь ноту (особо карту она не усложнит) Принял
7.01:47:004 - ты дальше ставишь в такие места ноту, поставь её и сюда. Там другой звук
8.02:02:901 - ставить ноту сюда или нет решай сам Я другие звуки выделял
EZ END
NM:
1.00:10:237 - убери лн и поставь две ноты (тишина же) Принял, спасибо
2.01:04:205 - зачем? (нет звуков) Спасибо, исправил
3.01:09:749 - ^ Там есть звук
4.01:37:140 - (хитсаунды такие или мне мерещится звук лавы из Sonic'a, ладно пох) убери ноту и протяни лн до 01:37:466 Я не выделяю тут длинные звуки
5.01:55:727 - ноту Я выделяю гитару
6.01:56:868 - ^ ^
7.01:59:640 - ^ Добавил на 01:59:477 -
8.04:21:325 - ^ Как по мне в NM не вписывается оно
9.04:21:488 - ^ ^
10.04:21:651 - ^ ^
NM END
The Gesk's Insane [IN]:
Прим. Найденные недочёты относятся к спокойной части.
1.03:12:031 - здесь пианино, так что ставь ноту Принял
2.03:13:825 - я слышу вроде бы ноту, но сказать точно не могу. А я не слышу
3.03:21:325 - сюда хорошо впишется лн до 03:22:140 (но я хз) Не хочу ещё ЛНов в эту секциюЪ


Всего доброго тебе AnatOWJIya. ;)
Спасибо за мод ;3
Rivals_7
already rechecked along with the recent mod
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You have to give a kudosu to SoldatRacer.
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AnatOWJIya
Bubble popped 'cause of map ressurection
Bubble: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6090402
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