[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Привет Толя
мод(м4м)

sweet

[EZ]

00:30:614 (30614|3) - в 1
00:31:266 (31266|1) - в 4
00:35:994 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988677
00:46:918 - добавь ноту здесь
00:55:233 (55233|1,55722|2) - ctrl + g
01:33:873 - ноту добавь в 3 колонку
01:54:091 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988696
02:01:428 (121428|3,121428|0,121754|2,122080|1,122406|2,122569|3) - либо только лн, либо ноты
02:07:786 (127786|0,128438|1,129091|2,129743|3,130395|0,131047|1,131699|2,132351|3) - может разнообразишь ?
02:15:612 (135612|1) - в 3
02:33:873 (153873|3,154525|2,155177|1,155829|0,156482|3,157134|2,157786|1,158438|0) -
02:51:645 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988713
02:54:579 (174579|0,175069|1,175395|2,175884|3,176373|0,176699|1,177025|2,177351|3) -
03:08:275 (188275|0) - в 4


[NM]

00:10:331 (10331|2) - измени на лн
00:35:505 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988743
00:41:864 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988747 больше разнообразия :/ чего все так однотипно
00:45:125 (45125|1,45288|2) - ctrl + g
00:53:603 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988757
00:55:722 (55722|1) - в 1
01:02:570 (62570|3) - во 2
01:20:668 (80668|0) - во 2
01:31:265 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988779
01:45:939 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5988785
01:49:362 (109362|0,109525|1) - ctrl + g
01:51:482 (111482|0) - в 3
01:52:134 (112134|1,112297|0) - ctrl + g
02:16:264 (136264|3,136428|2,136591|0,136591|1,136754|3,137080|2,137243|0,137243|1,137569|3,137732|2,137895|0,137895|1) -
02:28:167 (148167|3,148493|1) - удаляй

посмотрел дальше диффу и скажу одно Толя, ты можешь сделать эту диффу намного лучше, если есть желание
EZ и NM далеко не в идеальном состояние, хотя EZ выглядит куда лучше

примешь мод и потом изменишь на более точный тайминг

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
786,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
13052,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
13058,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18222,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18225,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26045,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57352,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57353,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83439,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
83439,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125178,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
125178,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148656,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
148656,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190396,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211265,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
211265,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243873,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
254308,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
259362,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
259362,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0

Старайся, старайся и еще раз старайся, удачи !

eyes wrote:

Привет! Ловите рандомный мод

mod

[Hard]

00:35:990 (35990|2,35990|1,36153|0) - Принял
01:31:265 - поставь здесь лны, как эти - 01:29:471 (89471|0,90123|2,90775|3) Принял
01:58:819 - поставь ноту на 3 Принял
02:28:656 (148656|2) - перемести на первую колонку Принял
03:10:719 - 03:11:371 - 03:11:534 - упущены звуки Отказано
04:21:155 (261155|2,261237|3,261318|1,261400|2,261481|3,261563|1,261644|2) - неправильный снап Принял

Удачи!

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
781,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
12997,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
12997,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18216,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18222,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26042,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57346,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83433,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125172,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148650,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190393,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211262,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,1
211262,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243870,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0

Starting at 04:21:357 - with Beat Snap Divisor in 1/8 it should look like this:


Note: The 3rd note is snapped to 1/12 at 04:21:506 -

Feerum wrote:

Greetings

No kds

AnatOWJIya asked me to test play the beatmap.
While the test play i did notice something is wrong.

I really doubt the timing are correct how they are now. He showed me a Mod from Shana (Hi Shana ></) where it got "fixed"
What Shana did is overall correct but at the same time wrong.

A lot of unnecessary timing points got added to fix the offset every time. while just the offset at the beginning was pretty off.
After some time in the beatmap i figured out what the, hopefully, correct timing should be.

[TimingPoints]
781,681.818181818182,4,2,1,40,1,0
781,-47.8468899521531,4,2,1,40,0,0
12997,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
12997,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
18216,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
18222,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
26042,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,0
57346,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
83433,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
125172,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
148650,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
190393,652.173913043478,4,2,1,40,1,0
190393,-50,4,2,1,40,0,0
211262,326.086956521739,4,2,1,40,1,1
211262,-100,4,2,1,40,0,1
243870,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0

I noticed it only because of the notes at the end which where really really wrong snapped.
The notes arround 04:21:316 - should be like this:

Starting at 04:21:357 - with Beat Snap Divisor in 1/8 it should look like this:


Note: The 3rd note is snapped to 1/12 at 04:21:506 -

With this the timings and the notes at the end should be correct now.
Wish you good luck with the beatmap!

AJIekceu wrote:

BEEEEEEEEP BEEEEEEEEEEEP

HopmaJI

00:22:129 (22129|2) - что-то мне подсказывает, что тут Клап пропущен
02:20:335 - где нота? Если опираться на аналогичный момент на 01:12:509 - , то ты пропустил ударный звук. Подозреваю что эта 02:20:172 (140172|0) - вниз опустилась по каким-то причинам
Честно говоря не знаю, чему именно следовать. Только ударным как в первом припеве, или выделить (эмм... Что это за инструмент? Я слишком аутист чтобы описывать звуки) как во втором припеве и пропустить первый ударный. В обоих случаях свои плюсы и минусы (исполнения в том числе). Но если ты больше выделяешь ударные, то, я считаю, тебе бы надо так же сделать и во втором припеве
И насколько я осведомлен, то ставить хсы на одну ноту нельзя, нет? Если нет то так и скажи, вдруг я немного остался в 2014 (02:20:498 (140498|1) - )
02:24:574 - потерялась нота
02:24:900 (144900|3,145063|2,145226|0,145389|1,145552|2,145715|0,145878|1,146041|2,146041|3) - намеренное повторение первого припева? Я предлагаю вот что:
02:24:248 (144248|3) - во вторую колонку (1|2|3|4), 02:24:411 (144411|1,144574|0) - Ctrl+G, 02:24:085 (144085|0) - в третью. Пропущенную ноту 02:24:574 - - в чевертую колонку. После всего этого 02:26:041 (146041|3,146694|0) - Ctrl+H. Конечно теряется паттерн с ЛНами 4-2-3-1, но тем не менее.
Насколько адекватно сие предложение решать тебе, я порю дичь несу
03:24:740 (204740|3,205066|2) - Ctrl+G, чтобы с предыдущим не совпадало (по крайней я не вижу смысла их повторять, зацикленности в песне нет, так что не надо пожалуй)
03:31:262 - первые два блока ну прям идентичны. Третий и четвертый уже различаются между собой. Если уж с повторениями, то в четвертом блоке вот эту 03:35:664 (215664|0) - на третью, а 03:35:827 (215827|1,215827|2) - сдвинуть на одну влево
04:08:272 (248272|0,248354|1) - может на одну вправо все-таки? Просто указательный плец правой руки вообще без действий остается, плюс в первая колонка была уже буквально недавно задействована. Да и это удобнее, я думаю
Вот ближе к концу я так расставил

Я че то уже не помню как так получилось, но это именно то, чего не хватает - больше разнообразия в паттернах. У тебя лоибо лесенки, либо 1-3-2-4, либо лесенка например 1-2-3-4-2-3-1-2-3-4 и т.д.
Можешь сам что-нибудь еще попробовать :moonface:

Xapq

00:26:042 - -> 00:33:868 - вот стоит разнообразить хоть немного (я не говорю ремаппать это все, просто два-три паттерна расставить еще дополнительных)
Пощади игроков. у тебя слишком много нот в первой колонке. 01:03:868 (63868|0) - во вторую, 01:04:194 (64194|1,64357|2) - на одну влево, 01:04:520 (64520|0) - в третью, 01:04:846 (64846|2,65172|1) - Ctrl+H
02:43:161 (163161|2,163324|1) - хмммМММ, может быть даже надо Ctrl+H. Три лесенки подряд, две из которых в одну сторону - не комильфо. Так хоть уравняем
03:49:359 (229359|0) - потерял свисток

На этом все, более I have no idea.
Удачи тебе в скором ранке :moonface:

Protastic101 wrote:

no kds
I need to learn to be on time with my mods

col 1|2|3|4

*boop*

General

1. The hitsounding is nice and all, but honestly, you should probably have a kick and finish sample somewhere as that's one of the most important sounds from a drum. Try this one for the kick http://puu.sh/suicq.wav . As for the finish, I'd rename the current soft-hitfinish to something else and just use the default soft-hitfinish
2. I don't really think the cowbell is fitting here. What I think you're looking for is a rim hit. Try this one http://puu.sh/suiTU.wav
3. Also, please turn up your hitsound vol. I can't hear them even with music/effect 80/100. Maybe 60% is better?

Difficulties

[Easy]00:01:292 - 00:04:019 - 00:06:746 - 00:09:474 - I think it's better to have notes here as these places are accented by the piano hit, and the player would probably expect to hit a note there.
00:17:562 - Why not add a note here for the change in pitch of the violins?
00:35:987 (35987|3,36313|1) - Seeing as you've only been using 2/1 rhythms, this 1/2 is really way too fast for the player to expect. I'd suggest removing them and just keeping it at 1/1.
00:46:911 (46911|1,47237|0) - This is just my personal preference, but I think control J (make sure to move the hitsound too) would make this roll play a bit nicer as the minitrill at 00:46:585 (46585|1,46748|2,46911|1) - might throw some people off.
00:54:574 - No note here for the tom? The 3/2 silence seems out of place since the pauses have only been 1/1 long.
01:07:128 (67128|2,67781|3) - Again, just personal preference, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN were in 4 and the short note in 3.
01:14:139 - I'd really suggest having a note here for the cymbal. It's a really prominent sound and it doesn't make too much sense to just leave it out in favor of the snare.
01:15:444 - Same as the above.
01:16:748 - ^^ that
01:33:378 (93378|0) - You've mapped using 1/2 bursts before this like at 01:17:726 (77726|3,77889|2,78052|1) - , so why don't you do it now? I'd consider trying this or something instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659180
02:05:824 (125824|3,127128|2) - Shouldn't these notes be doubles since you map the snare using doubles here?
02:16:748 - As I mentioned a few lines above, I'd really consider adding notes for the crashes here since they're easily audible.
02:24:900 (144900|0) - Rather than just using this one LN, I'd try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659191 Alternatively, you can use short notes to represent the 1/2 LNs as i think the 1/2 LNs might be a little difficult.
02:27:998 (147998|0) - Again, you've mapped 1/2 before, so why not map it here?
02:28:650 (148650|3,149302|2,150607|1,151911|2,153215|0) - Make all these doubles if you want to be consistent, since it makes no sense to begin mapping the same snare sounds at 02:34:520 - using doubles when the sound hasn't changed at all.
02:37:781 (157781|3) - I'd consider making this a double and moving it up to 02:37:944 - for the snare.
02:39:737 (159737|1,161041|0,162346|2,163650|0,164955|1,166259|0) - Again, be consistent with your chord sizes. Make these all doubles since you've been mapping snares using doubles here.
02:49:520 - Just stick with one chord size throughout this entire section for the snare/crashes. I really don't understand why you always start these out using singles only, and then add jumps midway through. Like, there's no change in pace of the music to support suddenly mapping the snares with doubles instead of singles. Also, the crashes like at 02:50:661 (170661|0,171965|0,173270|1,174574|0) - are way more important than the snares, yet you choose to emphasize the snares rather than the cymbals.
03:01:911 (181911|0) - I don't really understand why you have this note accenting a guitar when the snare at 03:02:237 - is more predictable based off what you've previously mapped.
03:06:150 (186150|2,186476|3) - I think it'd serve to emphasize the trumpets if you switched columns here, so the shorter LN is in 4 and the longer in 3. I think it's because leaving a column space between notes serves to signify the start of a new musical phrase.
03:29:632 (209632|1,209958|0) - Similar to what I said above, I'd control J this cause otherwise a newer player may mistake this as a simple 1/2 right -> left roll.
03:29:958 - I'd also consider having an LN here and ending at 03:31:262 - to represent the violin run.
03:41:696 - I'ma recommend here what I mentioned a few lines above about adding notes for the crashes like at 03:42:838 - 03:45:446 -
03:50:990 (230990|2) - I'd consider ending this at 03:51:642 - and starting a new LN in 2 to represent the change from snare roll to tom roll
03:52:131 - Also, I'd really suggest using a double note here to represent the crash as it's louder than the snare but gets accented with less.
04:09:088 - Definitely add a note here, the LN release doesn't do the crashes and outro here any justice.
04:23:272 (263272|0) - Just my opinion, but I think ending LNs look nicer in [1] and [4] rather than [1][3], but again, that's just my preference.

[Normal]00:17:888 - I think it'd be a nice idea to add a 1/2 LN here to represent the growing sound of the cymbal.
00:35:661 (35661|3) - I'd consider leaving this note out since there's really not a sound there to warrant it, unlike the drum roll beginning at 00:35:824 -
00:36:476 - tbh, I feel like this section would be better off going with density than speed. What I mean is that rather than use 1/2, I'd just consider making it all 1/1, but using doubles on the 2nd and 4th beats, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698738
01:07:128 - Don't you normally use 2/1 LNs for drum rolls in this diff? Why not use one here?
01:23:270 (83270|3,83433|0) - I'd consider moving these notes to [1] and [2] respectively as I think it's easier to hit short notes when you aren't holding an LN down at the same time.
01:44:302 - This here I don't really understand. At 00:36:476 - , you mapped using only 1/2 notes, and this section here is pretty much the same thing, but you added doubles on the offbeats now. I'd stick with one or the other in this case.
02:02:889 (122889|1,122889|2,123052|0) - I'd consider flipping the notes here so the accent comes on the cymbal.
02:02:563 - 02:03:541 - I'd also recommend doubles here for the crash.
02:05:172 - This is the kiai, but why does it feel so empty? I understand the drums aren't very active here, but I'd really consider adding LNs for the violin as currently, it feels like playing an Easy right now.
02:20:498 - Why not have a note here for the snare?
02:50:661 - 02:51:965 - 02:53:270 - 02:54:574 - 02:55:878 - 02:57:346 - Again, I'd really suggest using doubles for all the crashes as they're easily noticeable in the music.
03:08:514 (188514|1,188596|0,188677|2,188759|3) - You haven't used 1/4 in the map at all so far, barring the 92bpm stuff, so I don't see any reason why you'd map this here using 1/4 when similar places were just mapped with 1/2. I think it'd be best to just use an LN here to represent it, starting from 03:08:433 - to 03:08:759 - with a double at the end for the crash

[Hard]00:26:042 - Here, I think it's better to remove the 1/2 and just use doubles every 1/1, because when the music gains intensity at 00:36:476 - , the diff actually loses chart density as a result, which I don't think makes much sense.
00:46:422 (46422|0,46422|1,46585|3,46585|2,46748|2,46748|1,46911|0,46911|1) - for this, I don't think the minijack at 00:46:585 (46585|2,46748|1,46748|2,46911|1) - feels too natural to play imo. I'd consider arranging the chords to be like [13][24] or [14][23] like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698844
01:58:650 (118650|2,118813|2) - Idk, these jacked notes came as a bit of a surprise to me, and I really can't hear a reason for them, since all the sounds are pretty different.
02:10:878 - It feels like you're missing a note here, as I instinctively hit a key here due to the way the music is set up.
02:16:911 (136911|3) - I think it'd be nice to leave a 1/1 pause between the crash and the next note as it serves to emphasize the loudness of the crash drowning out the other sounds.
03:30:610 (210610|2,211262|3) - Just my opinion, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN was in 4 and the short note in 3, as it'd kind of feel like the LNs are holding in all the notes between them. But that makes no sense, so idm whatever you do lol

[Gesk's Insane]00:35:987 (35987|1,35987|3,36150|0,36150|2,36150|1,36313|2,36313|1,36313|3,36476|2,36476|3,36476|0) - I'd consider jacking these hands together as it's easier to read, at least in my opinion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698895
00:51:476 - If you're mapping the piano here, you're missing a note and should add one.
01:08:433 (68433|2,68433|1) - I think it's fine to make this note single as the sound there is more like a hihat and doesn't need a double imo
02:47:237 - this jump-hand-jump spam is a bit difficult to read and hit imo. I'd try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698921
03:51:642 (231642|1,231723|3,231805|1,231887|3,231968|1,232050|3) - tbh, I think a roll would be better here as the toms get lower in pitch. Maybe something like this would work https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698931
04:01:914 (241914|0,241914|1,242077|1,242077|2,242240|1,242240|0,242403|0,242403|2) - For these notes, I'd try to jack them just so it's easier to play imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698937

I will go over the hitsounds once you have applied the diff check.

Protastic101 wrote:

no kds
I need to learn to be on time with my mods

col 1|2|3|4

*boop*

General

1. The hitsounding is nice and all, but honestly, you should probably have a kick and finish sample somewhere as that's one of the most important sounds from a drum. Try this one for the kick http://puu.sh/suicq.wav . As for the finish, I'd rename the current soft-hitfinish to something else and just use the default soft-hitfinish
   Renamed Finish,didn't get the part with Kick help lolol
2. I don't really think the cowbell is fitting here. What I think you're looking for is a rim hit. Try this one http://puu.sh/suiTU.wav
   Used this one for now,old one renamed.
3. Also, please turn up your hitsound vol. I can't hear them even with music/effect 80/100. Maybe 60% is better?

[notice]

Difficulties

[Easy]00:01:292 - 00:04:019 - 00:06:746 - 00:09:474 - I think it's better to have notes here as these places are accented by the piano hit, and the player would probably expect to hit a note there. Accepted
00:17:562 - Why not add a note here for the change in pitch of the violins? Accepted
00:35:987 (35987|3,36313|1) - Seeing as you've only been using 2/1 rhythms, this 1/2 is really way too fast for the player to expect. I'd suggest removing them and just keeping it at 1/1. Accepted
00:46:911 (46911|1,47237|0) - This is just my personal preference, but I think control J (make sure to move the hitsound too) would make this roll play a bit nicer as the minitrill at 00:46:585 (46585|1,46748|2,46911|1) - might throw some people off . Accepted
00:54:574 - No note here for the tom? The 3/2 silence seems out of place since the pauses have only been 1/1 long. Accepted
01:07:128 (67128|2,67781|3) - Again, just personal preference, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN were in 4 and the short note in 3. Accepted
01:14:139 - I'd really suggest having a note here for the cymbal. It's a really prominent sound and it doesn't make too much sense to just leave it out in favor of the snare. Accepted
01:15:444 - Same as the above. Accepted
01:16:748 - ^^ that Accepted
01:33:378 (93378|0) - You've mapped using 1/2 bursts before this like at 01:17:726 (77726|3,77889|2,78052|1) - , so why don't you do it now? I'd consider trying this or something instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659180 Accepted
02:05:824 (125824|3,127128|2) - Shouldn't these notes be doubles since you map the snare using doubles here? I've deleted doubles cause on other kiai's there singles
02:16:748 - As I mentioned a few lines above, I'd really consider adding notes for the crashes here since they're easily audible. Accepted
02:24:900 (144900|0) - Rather than just using this one LN, I'd try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659191 Alternatively, you can use short notes to represent the 1/2 LNs as i think the 1/2 LNs might be a little difficult. Accepted
02:27:998 (147998|0) - Again, you've mapped 1/2 before, so why not map it here? Accepted
02:28:650 (148650|3,149302|2,150607|1,151911|2,153215|0) - Make all these doubles if you want to be consistent, since it makes no sense to begin mapping the same snare sounds at 02:34:520 - using doubles when the sound hasn't changed at all. Changed
02:37:781 (157781|3) - I'd consider making this a double and moving it up to 02:37:944 - for the snare.
02:39:737 (159737|1,161041|0,162346|2,163650|0,164955|1,166259|0) - Again, be consistent with your chord sizes. Make these all doubles since you've been mapping snares using doubles here.
02:49:520 - Just stick with one chord size throughout this entire section for the snare/crashes. I really don't understand why you always start these out using singles only, and then add jumps midway through. Like, there's no change in pace of the music to support suddenly mapping the snares with doubles instead of singles. Also, the crashes like at 02:50:661 (170661|0,171965|0,173270|1,174574|0) - are way more important than the snares, yet you choose to emphasize the snares rather than the cymbals. Remapped a bit
03:01:911 (181911|0) - I don't really understand why you have this note accenting a guitar when the snare at 03:02:237 - is more predictable based off what you've previously mapped. Remapped a bit
03:06:150 (186150|2,186476|3) - I think it'd serve to emphasize the trumpets if you switched columns here, so the shorter LN is in 4 and the longer in 3. I think it's because leaving a column space between notes serves to signify the start of a new musical phrase. Accepted
03:29:632 (209632|1,209958|0) - Similar to what I said above, I'd control J this cause otherwise a newer player may mistake this as a simple 1/2 right -> left roll. Accepted
03:29:958 - I'd also consider having an LN here and ending at 03:31:262 - to represent the violin run. Accepted
03:41:696 - I'ma recommend here what I mentioned a few lines above about adding notes for the crashes like at 03:42:838 - 03:45:446 - Accepted
03:50:990 (230990|2) - I'd consider ending this at 03:51:642 - and starting a new LN in 2 to represent the change from snare roll to tom roll Accepted
03:52:131 - Also, I'd really suggest using a double note here to represent the crash as it's louder than the snare but gets accented with less. Accepted
04:09:088 - Definitely add a note here, the LN release doesn't do the crashes and outro here any justice. Accepted
04:23:272 (263272|0) - Just my opinion, but I think ending LNs look nicer in [1] and [4] rather than [1][3], but again, that's just my preference. Accepted

[Normal]00:17:888 - I think it'd be a nice idea to add a 1/2 LN here to represent the growing sound of the cymbal. Accepted
00:35:661 (35661|3) - I'd consider leaving this note out since there's really not a sound there to warrant it, unlike the drum roll beginning at 00:35:824 - Accepted
00:36:476 - tbh, I feel like this section would be better off going with density than speed. What I mean is that rather than use 1/2, I'd just consider making it all 1/1, but using doubles on the 2nd and 4th beats, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698738 remapped
01:07:128 - Don't you normally use 2/1 LNs for drum rolls in this diff? Why not use one here? I checked whole diff and found no drum roll for moments like this
01:23:270 (83270|3,83433|0) - I'd consider moving these notes to [1] and [2] respectively as I think it's easier to hit short notes when you aren't holding an LN down at the same time. Accepted
01:44:302 - This here I don't really understand. At 00:36:476 - , you mapped using only 1/2 notes, and this section here is pretty much the same thing, but you added doubles on the offbeats now. I'd stick with one or the other in this case. Remapped
02:02:889 (122889|1,122889|2,123052|0) - I'd consider flipping the notes here so the accent comes on the cymbal. Accepted
02:02:563 - 02:03:541 - I'd also recommend doubles here for the crash. Accepted
02:05:172 - This is the kiai, but why does it feel so empty? I understand the drums aren't very active here, but I'd really consider adding LNs for the violin as currently, it feels like playing an Easy right now. Added LN's
02:20:498 - Why not have a note here for the snare? Moved it
02:50:661 - 02:51:965 - 02:53:270 - 02:54:574 - 02:55:878 - 02:57:346 - Again, I'd really suggest using doubles for all the crashes as they're easily noticeable in the music. Accepted
03:08:514 (188514|1,188596|0,188677|2,188759|3) - You haven't used 1/4 in the map at all so far, barring the 92bpm stuff, so I don't see any reason why you'd map this here using 1/4 when similar places were just mapped with 1/2. I think it'd be best to just use an LN here to represent it, starting from 03:08:433 - to 03:08:759 - with a double at the end for the crash Accepted

[Hard]00:26:042 - Here, I think it's better to remove the 1/2 and just use doubles every 1/1, because when the music gains intensity at 00:36:476 - , the diff actually loses chart density as a result, which I don't think makes much sense. Accepted
00:46:422 (46422|0,46422|1,46585|3,46585|2,46748|2,46748|1,46911|0,46911|1) - for this, I don't think the minijack at 00:46:585 (46585|2,46748|1,46748|2,46911|1) - feels too natural to play imo. I'd consider arranging the chords to be like [13][24] or [14][23] like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6698844 Accepted
01:58:650 (118650|2,118813|2) - Idk, these jacked notes came as a bit of a surprise to me, and I really can't hear a reason for them, since all the sounds are pretty different. Accepted
02:10:878 - It feels like you're missing a note here, as I instinctively hit a key here due to the way the music is set up.
02:16:911 (136911|3) - I think it'd be nice to leave a 1/1 pause between the crash and the next note as it serves to emphasize the loudness of the crash drowning out the other sounds. I Think i got you right and removed that note
03:30:610 (210610|2,211262|3) - Just my opinion, but I think it'd look nicer if the LN was in 4 and the short note in 3, as it'd kind of feel like the LNs are holding in all the notes between them. But that makes no sense, so idm whatever you do lol I moved LN to 2 LOL

[Gesk's Insane]Don't know about his changes,but still i'll update his diff cause he accepted mod

I will go over the hitsounds once you have applied the diff check.

Protastic101 wrote:

Ahhh, I'm so sorry about how long I've taken orz

Also, it'd still be nice if Gesk could respond so that I have an easier time rechecking the mapset.

recheck

General

1. Please remove "Cowbell1.wav" from the song folder as it isn't used anywhere in the chart. Done
2. Idk about the soft-hitfinish, it doesn't play when I try to listen to the sounds in the editor. To add, I think a more traditional crash/cymbal would be better rather than using a hihat (apologies to eyes, I really do like the hitsounds, but some of the samples sound a bit strange with the music, no offense, please don't hate me, I love you <3) Try this http://puu.sh/sRFIA.wav or http://puu.sh/sRFJ3.wav maybe? Used echo one
3. Lastly, I'd consider naming kick.wav to soft-hitwhistle or something as this is a sample you're using a lot in this song.

Done

Hitsounds

[Gesk's Insane]00:18:214 (18214|1) - add a kick?
00:26:368 (26368|2,26694|1,27020|0,27346|3,27672|2,27998|0,28324|1,28650|2,28976|0,29302|0,29628|0,29955|0,30281|1,30607|2,30933|0,31259|1,31585|1,31911|2,32237|1,32563|0,32889|1,33215|0,33542|2,33868|2,34194|1,34520|0,34846|0,35172|0,35498|2,35824|2) - Add kicks. I've highlighted every note in this section so you only have to apply the hitsound once.
00:36:476 (36476|2) - replace with kick
00:37:128 (37128|3,37781|0,38433|2,39085|3,39737|3,40389|3,41041|1,41694|0,42346|3,42998|2,43650|3,44302|3,44955|1,45607|0,46259|1) - Add kicks
00:52:128 (52128|0) - Add a finish?
00:53:270 (53270|2,53270|1) - Add finish and kick to each note once.
00:54:737 (54737|2) - I would replace this with a finish as there's no snare here.
00:55:063 (55063|2) - replace with kick
00:55:226 (55226|0) - add finish
00:55:715 (55715|0) - add kick
00:56:041 (56041|0,56041|3) - add finish and kick to each note once
00:57:346 (57346|0) - add kick
00:57:835 (57835|2,59139|3,59955|2) - add kicks
00:59:955 (59955|0) - add finish
01:00:444 (60444|1,61259|0,61748|3,62563|2) - add kicks
01:02:563 (62563|3) - add finish
01:03:052 (63052|2,63868|1,64357|3,65172|0) - add kicks
01:05:172 (65172|3) - add a finish
01:05:661 (65661|2,66476|2,66965|1) - add kicks
01:07:128 (67128|2,67210|1,67291|2,67373|1,67536|1,67618|2,67699|1) - add claps
01:07:781 (67781|2) - replace with kick
01:07:781 (67781|3) - add finish
01:08:596 (68596|0,68922|0,69248|1,69900|1,70389|0,71205|2,71857|1,72509|0,72998|1,73813|3,74139|1,74465|1,75118|2,75444|1,75770|1,76422|3,76748|3) - add kicks
01:08:922 (68922|3,70389|1,72998|0,74139|3,75444|2,76748|1) - add finishes
01:12:998 (72998|2) - remove clap
01:17:156 (77156|3,77237|2,77482|2,77563|3) - add claps
01:17:726 (77726|1,77808|2,77889|1,77971|2,78052|1,78134|2) - make them all kicks and remove the claps
01:20:172 (80172|2) - add kick
01:20:661 (80661|1) - add finish
01:33:541 (93541|2,93705|2) - Could consider adding kicks here, but it's also fine as is since the sound is a tom
01:34:357 (94357|2,94520|3,95335|3,95661|1,95824|0,96150|1,96476|3,96965|2,97128|1,97944|3,98270|1,98433|0,99085|2,99574|1,99737|2,100063|1,100552|1,100878|3,101041|2,101694|1,102183|0,102346|2) - replace with cowbell.wav

bit incomplete but talking in game about it

Protastic101 wrote:

take my first bubble in like 2 weeks or smth

1. 00:00:781 - Highly Recommended for the whole piano intro to be piano pitch related
   
   you can ignore the bias thing as from the BPM itself will not make any problem to the newer players
   
   -----------------------------------
   
2. 00:19:357 (19357|1,19357|2) - now you can just move it to right side if you'd like to avoid some kind of hand balance issues - 00:19:357 (19357|2,19846|3,20824|2) -
   
   OR
   
   00:20:824 (20824|2) - move this to 2, - 00:21:476 (21476|1,22129|2) - 3|2 , 00:24:411 (24411|0) - change to SN and move to 4, - 00:24:737 (24737|1) - move to 1 and make it an LN, - 00:25:389 (25389|3) - also make this an LN following the LN i suggest before
   
   ^ this one is an attempt to relate the pitch more accurately
   
   -------------------------------------
   
3. 00:41:694 - could actually add a note. looks like too awkward to leave this loud piano chord empty
   
4. 00:44:302 - ^
   
5. 00:45:607 - ^
   it could be applied to all similar places
   
6. 00:53:270 (53270|3) - is it necessary to have an LN here? you can ultimately just focus with the percussion only since well, its the thing that you do in this entire diff alone. just make it an SN so it'll doubled with - 00:53:270 (53270|2) -
   
7. 01:11:531 (71531|1) - you forget F
   
8. 01:20:661 (80661|3) - LN instead? i dont see what encourages you from doing so. (up till - 01:23:433 (83433|2,83433|0) - )
   
9. 01:58:650 (118650|2,119139|1) - its not consistent with - 00:50:824 (50824|0) - if you notice it
   
10. 02:01:422 (121422|0) - now its just a single LN. compared with the same rythmical part before the first kiai - 00:53:270 (53270|2) - its completely different. idk whats going on here :/
    
11. 02:37:781 (157781|2,157944|3) - i think i saw this kind of patterning too many in the Easy diff. balance it
    
12. 02:49:520 (169520|3) - should have be a double. refer - 02:57:346 (177346|0,177346|3) - same rythmical structure
    
13. 03:03:215 (183215|2) - should've be shifted into red line above (1/2) if you were following the main melody
    
14. 03:42:675 (222675|2,222838|3) - pls balance
    
15. 04:05:175 (245175|2) - extend. for relient gameplay
    
16. 04:06:479 (246479|3) - add one more note. same kind of emphasis as - 04:07:620 (247620|0,247620|3) -

1. 00:09:815 (9815|3) - what is this LN for? there's no long piano noises here. if its not intended, then delete it
   
2. 00:44:302 (44302|1) - should've doubled this for the piano chord like you have done at - 00:41:694 (41694|1,41694|3) -
   
3. 00:55:715 (55715|1) - add F for cymbal just like - 00:55:226 (55226|2,55226|1) -
   
4. 01:03:868 (63868|2) - delete. consistency with - 00:58:650 (58650|0) -
   
5. 01:41:694 (101694|2) - double. piano chord the same as - 01:39:085 (99085|2,99085|1) -
   
6. 01:58:650 (118650|0) - why is this different from - 00:50:824 (50824|3) - ? pls consistent
   
7. 03:08:107 (188107|0,188270|2) - 3|1 respectively. so - 03:08:025 (188025|1,188107|0) - are not biased in the same hand
   
8. 03:49:359 (229359|3,229359|0) - now i dont get it why is this doubled for cymbal whil you using only one note all the time
   
9. 04:06:153 (246153|1) - should've been doubled for the snare drum
   
10. 04:12:838 (252838|3) - double here. even easy have double

1. 00:09:815 (9815|3) - same reason as Normal
   
2. 00:27:346 (27346|2,27672|2,27998|2,28324|2) - looks too much for me. probably rearrange them
   
3. 00:51:476 - add note for piano. following the other 4 notes - 00:51:639 (51639|0,51802|1,51965|2,52128|3) -
   
4. 00:55:715 (55715|3,55715|2) - pretty sure this is the same as - 00:55:226 (55226|3,55226|2,55226|1) -
   
5. 01:07:455 (67455|0) - probably delete. quite odd to see a double inside the stream which is particularly revolve around the same drumroll volume
   
6. 01:39:737 (99737|0) - not doubling this? its actually the same as - 01:39:574 (99574|3,99574|2) -
   
7. 02:06:476 (126476|3) - you put SN for kick but then a double - 02:09:085 (129085|3,129085|2) - ? (you also missing a kick on that double tho) pls make it double for consistent
   
8. 02:22:781 (142781|0) - should've shifted to redline above

1. 00:01:974 (1974|0,2485|1) - move to 2|1 respectively so the gimmick done right along with the pitch
   
2. 00:05:042 (5042|3,5212|1,5383|2) - could've just make this a vice versa version of - 00:04:360 (4360|2,4531|1,4701|0) -
   
3. 00:07:087 - particular same concept reasoning
   
   
4. 00:22:618 (22618|2,22781|2,23107|2,23433|2,23596|2) - this kinda weird. just move - 00:23:107 (23107|2) - to 2
   
5. 00:35:661 (35661|2) - could've deleted this since its just a vocal so the LN already justified enough
   
6. 01:44:465 (104465|3,104791|2) - from this point onwards, you need to use different approach for this LN patterning. There's absolutely no kind of guitar like you've done at - 00:36:639 (36639|0,36965|1,37292|2) - so its irrelevant
   
7. 01:51:639 (111639|3) - should've LN this for vocal
   
8. 03:10:389 - add a note so the players could approach the piano (which is apparently blended with the piano you were trying to layer with) more better.
   
9. 03:12:838 - 03:15:936 - 03:17:077 - 03:17:240 - 03:23:599 - missing piano
   
10. 03:29:958 (209958|0) - delete. too much for just a low impact

Rivals_7 wrote:

1|2|3|4
[Easy]

1. 00:00:781 - Highly Recommended for the whole piano intro to be piano pitch related
   
   you can ignore the bias thing as from the BPM itself will not make any problem to the newer players Accepted
   
   -----------------------------------
   
2. 00:19:357 (19357|1,19357|2) - now you can just move it to right side if you'd like to avoid some kind of hand balance issues - 00:19:357 (19357|2,19846|3,20824|2) -
   
   OR
   
   00:20:824 (20824|2) - move this to 2, - 00:21:476 (21476|1,22129|2) - 3|2 , 00:24:411 (24411|0) - change to SN and move to 4, - 00:24:737 (24737|1) - move to 1 and make it an LN, - 00:25:389 (25389|3) - also make this an LN following the LN i suggest before
   
   ^ this one is an attempt to relate the pitch more accurately I've chose 2nd option
   
   -------------------------------------
   
3. 00:41:694 - could actually add a note. looks like too awkward to leave this loud piano chord empty Done
   
4. 00:44:302 - ^ Done
   
5. 00:45:607 - ^ Done
   it could be applied to all similar places
   
6. 00:53:270 (53270|3) - is it necessary to have an LN here? you can ultimately just focus with the percussion only since well, its the thing that you do in this entire diff alone. just make it an SN so it'll doubled with - 00:53:270 (53270|2) - Done
   
7. 01:11:531 (71531|1) - you forget F Thanks
   
8. 01:20:661 (80661|3) - LN instead? i dont see what encourages you from doing so. (up till - 01:23:433 (83433|2,83433|0) - ) Done
   
9. 01:58:650 (118650|2,119139|1) - its not consistent with - 00:50:824 (50824|0) - if you notice it Noticed it now
   
10. 02:01:422 (121422|0) - now its just a single LN. compared with the same rythmical part before the first kiai - 00:53:270 (53270|2) - its completely different. idk whats going on here :/ D:
    
11. 02:37:781 (157781|2,157944|3) - i think i saw this kind of patterning too many in the Easy diff. balance it Done
    
12. 02:49:520 (169520|3) - should have be a double. refer - 02:57:346 (177346|0,177346|3) - same rythmical structure Done
    
13. 03:03:215 (183215|2) - should've be shifted into red line above (1/2) if you were following the main melody Done
    
14. 03:42:675 (222675|2,222838|3) - pls balance Done
    
15. 04:05:175 (245175|2) - extend. for relient gameplay Done
    
16. 04:06:479 (246479|3) - add one more note. same kind of emphasis as - 04:07:620 (247620|0,247620|3) - Done

[Normal]

1. 00:09:815 (9815|3) - what is this LN for? there's no long piano noises here. if its not intended, then delete it Deleted
   
2. 00:44:302 (44302|1) - should've doubled this for the piano chord like you have done at - 00:41:694 (41694|1,41694|3) - Done
   
3. 00:55:715 (55715|1) - add F for cymbal just like - 00:55:226 (55226|2,55226|1) - Done
   
4. 01:03:868 (63868|2) - delete. consistency with - 00:58:650 (58650|0) - Done
   
5. 01:41:694 (101694|2) - double. piano chord the same as - 01:39:085 (99085|2,99085|1) - Done
   
6. 01:58:650 (118650|0) - why is this different from - 00:50:824 (50824|3) - ? pls consistent Done
   
7. 03:08:107 (188107|0,188270|2) - 3|1 respectively. so - 03:08:025 (188025|1,188107|0) - are not biased in the same handDone
   
8. 03:49:359 (229359|3,229359|0) - now i dont get it why is this doubled for cymbal whil you using only one note all the time
   
9. 04:06:153 (246153|1) - should've been doubled for the snare drum Done
   
10. 04:12:838 (252838|3) - double here. even easy have double Thx for noticing

[Hard]

1. 00:09:815 (9815|3) - same reason as Normal Done
   
2. 00:27:346 (27346|2,27672|2,27998|2,28324|2) - looks too much for me. probably rearrange them Done
   
3. 00:51:476 - add note for piano. following the other 4 notes - 00:51:639 (51639|0,51802|1,51965|2,52128|3) - Done
   
4. 00:55:715 (55715|3,55715|2) - pretty sure this is the same as - 00:55:226 (55226|3,55226|2,55226|1) - Done
   
5. 01:07:455 (67455|0) - probably delete. quite odd to see a double inside the stream which is particularly revolve around the same drumroll volume Deleted
   
6. 01:39:737 (99737|0) - not doubling this? its actually the same as - 01:39:574 (99574|3,99574|2) - Done
   
7. 02:06:476 (126476|3) - you put SN for kick but then a double - 02:09:085 (129085|3,129085|2) - ? (you also missing a kick on that double tho) pls make it double for consistent Added
   
8. 02:22:781 (142781|0) - should've shifted to redline above Done

Rivals_7 wrote:

[TheGesk's Insane]

1. 01:44:465 (104465|3,104791|2) - from this point onwards, you need to use different approach for this LN patterning. There's absolutely no kind of guitar like you've done at - 00:36:639 (36639|0,36965|1,37292|2) - so its irrelevant

Rivals_7 wrote:

a little bit more i guess

about the Background tho. I feel its kinda low quality. Also the fact when i search this with google images, the biggest resolution that came up is 1062 x 704 so I assume you upscaling the BG lol

anyways I found one that kinda fitting

https://puu.sh/vL1r6/66f78b6da2.jpg

This one 1750 x 984 tho and since the RC state we could have a BG up until 1920 x 1200 so why not?

Rivals_7 wrote:

a little bit more i guess

[TheGesk's Insane]

00:13:053 - think i just notice that this LN has two different pitch. so it should be somewhat like this


00:18:214 - similar to above


02:32:400 - i feel like you forget the guitar here. should be like this

Rivals_7 wrote:

Nominated!

alacat wrote:

hi, I think the source should be "劇場版デート・ア・ライブ 万由里ジャッジメント"




Link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p06y07Qmu50
http://date-a-live-anime.com/judgement/
http://date-a-live-anime.com/book/cd11.html
http://www.kadokawa-pictures.jp/official/date_a_live_movie/

How do you think ?

1. Offset: 782ms	BPM: 88,00
2. Offset: 12.372ms	BPM: 94,00
3. Offset: 13.010ms	BPM: 184,00

01:23:607 (83607|2) - seperate into two long notes, it's different sounds on here
01:26:216 (86216|1) -
01:28:825 (88825|0) -
01:31:433 (91433|2) -

Rivals_7 wrote:

Thegesk isnt responding to KK's mod yet so i think i'm going to hold this. one thing tho

01:23:607 (83607|2) - seperate into two long notes, it's different sounds on here
01:26:216 (86216|1) -
01:28:825 (88825|0) -
01:31:433 (91433|2) -

i did checking this and I will says the violin is definitely one pitch. I cant really notice with 25% either so.......
its a small difference anyway so it wont bother players, i think.

Rivals_7 wrote:

1234
Hitsounds are applied to all diffs. make sure you check carefully

[Insane]

00:13:010 (13010|0) - this is still not splitted tho Done

00:18:227 (18227|1) - u forgot WF. Also split the LN for consistent Done

00:55:727 (55727|2) - 02:03:553 (123553|2) - 03:08:281 (188281|0) - add F Done

01:33:879 (93879|2) - kinda sure you missing W here (or C idk) Done

01:18:064 (78064|1) - considered ghost notes. still not removed nor addressed (Tho myself cant really say this is really a ghost notes or just cant be hearded because vocal being really loud) because overall it'll break the consistency on the other 2 similar chorus - 02:25:890 (145890|3) - and - 03:51:977 (231977|1) - I don't think it's ghost

02:00:537 (120537|2) - not sure if you missing C or - 00:52:711 (52711|2) - are a mistake Don't think it is

02:28:009 (148009|1) - pretty sure this should be C instead of W or something and also missing W at - 02:28:336 (148336|1) - here Done

03:58:009 (238009|1) - I think there's F Done

04:11:705 (251705|1) - 04:12:846 (252846|1) - 04:14:314 (254314|3) - ^ Done

04:06:080 (246080|3) - could say this is ghost I don't think it's ghost

[Hard]

00:46:923 (46923|1) - F Done

04:11:053 (251053|2) - there's kinda anchory on col 3. consider to move this to 2 Done

@Anatowjiya pls tell if thegesk allow you to change things on his diff so i can be sure either things are changed or not