21:18 jonathanlfj: those hidden traps tho
21:18 Giralda: hehe
21:26 jonathanlfj: ok just a few things
21:28 jonathanlfj: 00:54:166 (1,2,3) - i would make the second triangle slightly bigger to make up for the big jump from the previous one
21:28 jonathanlfj: 00:54:333 (2) - plus there is a finish on this
21:29 Giralda: will add the finish on Laurier's too
21:29 jonathanlfj: 01:20:166 (5) - NC here makes more sense to follow the vocals
21:29 jonathanlfj: dat hidden troll tho
21:30 Giralda: heh
21:31 jonathanlfj: 01:58:833 (8) - clap here
21:31 Giralda: sure
21:32 jonathanlfj: 02:34:999 (1) - missing finish
21:32 jonathanlfj: 02:43:833 (5,6,7) - dat extreme jump tho
21:33 Giralda: I think I was trying to hard here
21:35 jonathanlfj: 03:34:333 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i always wondered why i keep getting 100s here
21:35 jonathanlfj: 03:34:749 (10,12) - these dont appear to be mapped to anything in the music
21:35 jonathanlfj: i would swap out the later half for 2 1/4 slider instead if you want to keep the density
21:37 Giralda: I don't think the two 1/4s would be justified, due to the transition into the next section
21:37 jonathanlfj: then its best to do 5 note + a jump
21:37 jonathanlfj: 02:24:999 (3,4,1,2) - forgot to say hidden troll #2
21:38 Giralda: yes
21:38 jonathanlfj: 03:46:833 - extend the spinner here this is where the music stops
21:39 jonathanlfj: 04:21:499 (4,1) - this jump feels very difficult to catch
21:40 jonathanlfj: especially because its off-vocal so the emphasis is not there
21:40 jonathanlfj: 04:33:665 (8) - clap
21:41 Giralda:
http://puu.sh/nGU4o/31fde201bc.jpg changed that stream to this
21:41 Giralda: that should do it
21:42 jonathanlfj: 05:05:665 (3,4,1) - fyi stack leniency causes the first circle to touch the hp bar, if you can move the whole jump a little bit down
21:42 Giralda: yeah I can do that
21:43 jonathanlfj: 00:54:999 (1) - why is this fast sv but not 00:33:666 (1) -
21:44 Giralda: It's because I felt that the first half isn't as impactful as the second
21:44 jonathanlfj: ah
21:45 jonathanlfj: i thought i was dillusional before i checked it in the editor
21:45 jonathanlfj: so just making sure lol
21:45 Giralda: the second half feels more "lively" so yeah
21:46 jonathanlfj: ok that should be all
21:46 jonathanlfj: sure the metadata is ok
21:46 jonathanlfj: i dont want to get hit again with that
21:46 Giralda: I didn't get a confirmation but I did some research with Oko before and we confirmed it was correct
21:47 jonathanlfj: ok
21:47 jonathanlfj: update it after you finish and poke me
21:49 Giralda: also we good
21:49 Giralda: alright8
21:49 Giralda: **'
21:49 Giralda: wow can't type