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Hana - Sakura to Kotori

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Len
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Joined June 2012
Len
01:38:999 (6) - nc

kds pls OLOL
Sing
354 posts
Joined December 2013
Sing
IRC
2016-03-09 16:45 Giralda: hey hey hey may i get a mod request w
2016-03-09 16:45 Sing: maybe but idk if ill do it Xd
2016-03-09 16:45 Sing: whats ht map
2016-03-09 16:46 Giralda: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/923245 Hana - Sakura to Kotori]
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: i smell pp
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: just fomr title
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: Xd
2016-03-09 16:46 Giralda: ofc
2016-03-09 16:46 Giralda: you know it
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: Parts of Extra inspired by Alyce's (vellya) Sakura no Uta
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: my nose is god
2016-03-09 16:46 Sing: noseosu
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: H OLY
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: no
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: stop
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: right
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: ther
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: e
2016-03-09 16:47 Sing: wnn a do irc rn bc im lazayaay
2016-03-09 16:47 Giralda: oko
2016-03-09 16:48 Sing: tespltay firstl egogo no wamrup
2016-03-09 16:48 Sing: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/923245 Hana - Sakura to Kotori [Serenity]] -NoFail
2016-03-09 16:48 Giralda: hi oko!
2016-03-09 16:53 Sing: alyce in giraldaland
2016-03-09 16:54 Giralda: wow
2016-03-09 16:54 Sing: p g tbh
2016-03-09 16:54 Giralda: t hank
2016-03-09 16:55 Sing: 00:14:666 (6,1) -  this angle fletk inda weird when playubing but that mightve been bc i had no wamrup
2016-03-09 16:55 Giralda: tried to move it to the left a bit more
2016-03-09 16:55 Sing: okg
2016-03-09 16:57 Sing: 00:54:999 (1) - andf 01:05:666 (1) -  i feel like these r impactful sliders in the song so id make just these kinds a higher sv
2016-03-09 16:58 Sing: 01:16:166 (5,1) -  this partt fdeels rlly weird to me bc  01:16:499 (1) -  starts at a part where id put a hit circle and then a slider, or have a slider end on it
2016-03-09 16:59 Sing: so id jsut make 01:16:166 (5) -  a longer slider or smth
2016-03-09 16:59 Sing: 01:21:833 (1,2) -  just like this yoohhhhhhh
2016-03-09 17:00 Sing: 01:36:666 (2) -  parts liek this in fit the song pretty well considering ur mapping to the lyrics but it feels like so hhhhhhfhfhfghfggfhghg
2016-03-09 17:00 Sing: like whne ur getting head and she stops right when u omar kumal
2016-03-09 17:00 Sing: id replace hte long repeating with like 2 3/4 sliders or osmehting
2016-03-09 17:01 Sing: liek the jumps r so hype ND Tthen the slider comes n ur just like Xd but lowkey D:
2016-03-09 17:01 Giralda: 3/4 isn't really part of the theme t b h
2016-03-09 17:01 Sing: well atleast make it higher sv or osmehting ggggggggggggggggggggg
2016-03-09 17:02 Sing: but thats my opinoion xd
2016-03-09 17:02 Giralda: i'll prolly just increase the spacing
2016-03-09 17:02 Sing: w8 but were u mappign the lyrcis @ tht part
2016-03-09 17:02 Giralda: yeah
2016-03-09 17:02 Sing: o well thn hwy does 01:37:499 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -  section not follow lyrics
2016-03-09 17:03 Giralda: idfk i just map to whatever track feels most natural xD
2016-03-09 17:04 Sing: ghghghghdhfhfd tbtu tis the kiaiai i man get hYPED the start of it fits but iddddddddd recommend rate8/8 5/7 to change that slow repeaitng lglg lsisislierd
2016-03-09 17:04 Giralda: but dude it's gonna look like shit with higher sv cuz it's at the edge already LO
2016-03-09 17:05 Sing: then taka it out entirely and folow the drums liek tin the next section!@@@!!/11?
2016-03-09 17:06 Sing: also back track to 01:23:833 (5,6,7,8,9) -  these 2 tripls together feel real outta place cuz like at the soing this stage is like slowly buildion up and ur other sections in this part haveo nly the token triple
2016-03-09 17:06 Sing: so id change it to justy like one triple and slider or osmehting
2016-03-09 17:06 Sing: or jsut opt to delete 01:24:166 (8) - 
2016-03-09 17:06 Sing: tbh
2016-03-09 17:07 Giralda: idk i kinda like it like that tho
2016-03-09 17:07 Giralda: t b h
2016-03-09 17:08 Sing: 02:32:499 (1) -  sameas section b4 and any others similar to this in the rest of th song
2016-03-09 17:08 Sing: ok fasm
2016-03-09 17:08 Giralda: yeah oko
2016-03-09 17:09 Sing: 03:13:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) -  im not sure what ot hink or say about this part
2016-03-09 17:09 Sing: but inot rlly anyhting wrong wit hti tbh
2016-03-09 17:09 Sing: but i feel like future modders will find some shit to complain about it 
2016-03-09 17:10 Sing: it felt weird playing it but its g
2016-03-09 17:10 Giralda: tbh if you look at laurier's and whatever i cant think of a better way to do it
2016-03-09 17:10 Giralda: cuz the 1/1 seems to fit the "pulsing" vocals
2016-03-09 17:10 Giralda: or smth
2016-03-09 17:10 Sing: yeah
2016-03-09 17:10 Sing: both the vocals and the durnms
2016-03-09 17:10 Sing: do tht pattern
2016-03-09 17:10 Sing: so idkxd
2016-03-09 17:11 Giralda: i mean you can hear some red tick stuff but i don't feel like i need to map it
2016-03-09 17:11 Sing: tru
2016-03-09 17:11 Sing: mmm cant rlly find anyhting else, the problems i alrdy stated happen 2 or 3 timesi n the map, its pretty consistent which is g
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: ye i guess thats it Xd
2016-03-09 17:12 Giralda: oko
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: jumps r g flow is g 5/7
2016-03-09 17:12 Giralda: post for KKKds
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: oKKK dad
2016-03-09 17:12 Giralda: racist fuk
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: fuk u
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: ted cruz is the zodiac killer
2016-03-09 17:12 Sing: for all those that read htis irc mod
Yunomi
292 posts
Joined May 2014
Yunomi
im gay

01:34:666 (8,9) - i think you can make this look nicer (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690329) to me this looks better but it's no big deal. don't have to fix this if you don't want

01:34:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - jumps feel cluttered here compared to others in map

01:55:666 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - vocal emphasis really changes on 01:55:999 (7) - so instead of having a single stacked stream you could ease into a stacked stream with a regular non stack stream https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690388 example but you could do better obviously xd. or just use 01:58:333 (3,4,5,6,7) - that to lead into a stacked stream

02:28:333 (1,3) - fix blanket TILTD

03:13:666 (1) - tbh this whole 1/1 section can be spaced :O might b e more comfortable to play, and even split into sets of 4 starting on diff locations at each measure 03:23:999 (4,5) - kinda like what you did here

03:28:333 (1,2,3) - this should show a large spacing increase to indicate that this section is different than the 1/1 pattern starting from earlier, then 03:28:999 (3,4,5,6,7) - wouldn't surprise people when they come across it

04:14:165 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hoyl monstrata in the house

04:30:499 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same suggestion as stream #1
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Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda
did pretty much everything from Adore's mod

The stream suggestions is pretty clever and I tried to make it look nice, see if the changes suit your taste? xd

also thanks Yohanes for the stars!
Yunomi
292 posts
Joined May 2014
Yunomi

Giralda wrote:

did pretty much everything from Adore's mod

The stream suggestions is pretty clever and I tried to make it look nice, see if the changes suit your taste? xd

also thanks Yohanes for the stars!
yeha u made it awsum xd
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
Support <3

[Serenity]
  1. 00:31:667 (4,1) - swap Nc better
  2. 00:39:499 (2) - This spacing is really awkward. so I think stack 00:38:333 (3) - this slider head more better flow lol
  3. 01:05:333 (5,6,1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this ?
    img
  4. 01:06:666 (4) - changed circle + circle pattern more better fit this song <3
  5. 01:07:999 (4,5) - I think that you should do Ctrl+G to let you emphasize at 01:08:333 (1) - this slider.
    img
  6. 01:59:083 (1) - You must be add Nc here. it's an unrankble lol
  7. 02:42:666 (5,6) - Ctrl + G ? on your pattern imo lol
  8. 02:48:333 (5) - add Nc ?
  9. 03:24:333 (5) - same as above.
  10. 03:35:416 (2) - overmapped. so remove note better.
  11. 04:19:499 (2,3,4,5) - This spacing is really awkward. so Try to 04:19:665 (3,4) - ctrl + g ? I'm not sure no idea rip
Good Luck <3
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda
Applied everything from Satellite! <3

Thanks Adore and appleeaterx for the stars!
EDIT: Thanks Jonny and Pho for your stars too!

Haruru wrote:

いいね
!! Haruru-san~
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Haruru
215 posts
Joined May 2010
Haruru
いいね
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,913 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
idk what this "throw 3 stars trend" is but i joined in
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
i'm here
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda

Laurier wrote:

i'm here
<33333

Okoratu wrote:

idk what this "throw 3 stars trend" is but i joined in
LOL thanks oko <3

also thanks Gaia and KaedekaShizuru for your star support ~
_Hou
391 posts
Joined November 2014
_Hou
Hello,
from my queue
Blue is advice or something
Pink is for stuff i strongly recommend to pay attention on
black is for thoughts, offers and talk about stuff i am not sure with or whatever.
So,
here we go.
(There are way less then I expected)

Serenity


  1. 00:10:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - As it is the very beginning it might be made in more easy way, more smooth.
  2. 00:34:499 (2) - sure this white tick wants be clickable
  3. 01:19:499 (3) - ctrl+G
  4. 01:23:916 (6) - Don't hear a thing allowing this to be triple
  5. 01:43:833 (3,4) - feels weird for me
  6. 01:57:999 (2) - no
  7. 02:40:833 (2,3,4) - again nothing for triple here
  8. 02:50:249 - fill it and and connect pattern
  9. 03:05:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - a lillte bit uncomfortable, tho
  10. 03:11:999 (8,1,2,3,4) - feels strange
  11. 03:13:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - so boring...
  12. 03:54:332 (2) - Sure white tick wants to be clickable
  13. 04:32:832 (2) - no
Long acc maop <3
Almost clear thing,
shoot you a star,
Good luck. :)
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda

Hou Rearu wrote:

Serenity


  1. 00:10:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - As it is the very beginning it might be made in more easy way, more smooth.
  2. 00:34:499 (2) - sure this white tick wants be clickable
  3. 01:19:499 (3) - ctrl+G did something else here
  4. 01:23:916 (6) - Don't hear a thing allowing this to be triple Hmm I hear differently
  5. 01:43:833 (3,4) - feels weird for me
  6. 01:57:999 (2) - no The circle here is meant for the vocals
  7. 02:40:833 (2,3,4) - again nothing for triple here Same as above
  8. 02:50:249 - fill it and and connect pattern
  9. 03:05:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - a lillte bit uncomfortable, tho plays fine to me o.o
  10. 03:11:999 (8,1,2,3,4) - feels strange ehhh idk what you mean by that
  11. 03:13:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - so boring... I guess everyone finds this boring :< idk I'll come up with something...
  12. 03:54:332 (2) - Sure white tick wants to be clickable
  13. 04:32:832 (2) - nosame as above
Anything not replied to was fixed or changed in some sort of way. Thanks for the mod and star!

edit: w h thank you fuyuyu for another 3 stars
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
Dark Giralda III
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
ヾ(｡･ω･)ｼ

[Serenity]
  1. 00:10:999 (1) - Even though the current one plays fine, the movement would feel much better of the slider was pointing upwards.
    Example
  2. 01:08:333 (1,2,3) - The spacing feels awfully close between these sliders, it's especially weird because the vocals keep increaseing their tone into something more powerful compared to 01:06:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
  3. 02:31:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the overlaps that are happening between the jump pattern (editor-wise, at least), you could try something like this? Spacing might be a bit too big, though.
    Example
  4. 02:51:749 (1) - The spinner feels really odd here, maybe it's because the song doesn't really change its intensivity at all. I personally think this would be better off with a long slider or two, or then mapped normally, rather than spinner.
  5. 03:05:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern looks messy compared to the similar ones before. Might be intentional, considering you may have not wanted a star pattern and something else, but if this is not the case, just do it by ctrl shift D and make it perfect.
  6. 03:34:333 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The stream shape could be better, the curves are kind of disappointing. Try this for the sake of visuals?
    Example
  7. 03:38:666 (1,2,3) - The idea of these is nice, but I don't hear sound in the background that would support the 1/2. Maybe you could do something similar to 03:35:999 (1) - ? The idea of a long slider would feel nice.
  8. 03:56:832 (2) - If you want a perfect stack with 03:55:832 (2) - , move the red anchor to x:229 y:151.
  9. 04:13:665 (4) - No idea if this was your intention again, but you can move your note to x:111 y:99 so it's in the middle of 04:14:165 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
  10. 04:47:999 (5,1) - Blanket.
[Laurier]
  1. 00:13:499 (1) - I dislike the fact that this finish is covered by the slider end. I also feel like you could follow the melody better with a note into 1/2 slider, so consider this?
    Example
  2. 02:26:333 (4) - Maybe rotate a little bit for a better blanket with 02:25:166 (4) - ?
  3. 02:31:333 (2,3) - NC both of them to stay consistent with 01:14:999 (1,1,1) - ?
  4. 03:13:666 - This might be little boring for the players play, considering it's just 1/1 notes in a row one after another. Maybe try to do something what Giralda did, and play with 1/1 1/2 sliders?
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda

Asphyxia wrote:

ヾ(｡･ω･)ｼ

[Serenity]
  1. 00:10:999 (1) - Even though the current one plays fine, the movement would feel much better of the slider was pointing upwards. I tried to make adjustments to make this work but I couldn't help but keep the blanket for 00:11:499 (3,1)
    Example
  2. 01:08:333 (1,2,3) - The spacing feels awfully close between these sliders, it's especially weird because the vocals keep increaseing their tone into something more powerful compared to 01:06:999 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
  3. 02:31:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like the overlaps that are happening between the jump pattern (editor-wise, at least), you could try something like this? Spacing might be a bit too big, though. I made tried to avoid some of the overlaps, but I didn't want to enlarge the spacing any further.
    Example
  4. 02:51:749 (1) - The spinner feels really odd here, maybe it's because the song doesn't really change its intensivity at all. I personally think this would be better off with a long slider or two, or then mapped normally, rather than spinner. The spinners in the map act as a "break-point" for players as there isn't any, or rather lack of, appropriate points in the map where a break is justified.
  5. 03:05:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This pattern looks messy compared to the similar ones before. Might be intentional, considering you may have not wanted a star pattern and something else, but if this is not the case, just do it by ctrl shift D and make it perfect.
  6. 03:34:333 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The stream shape could be better, the curves are kind of disappointing. Try this for the sake of visuals?
    Example
  7. 03:38:666 (1,2,3) - The idea of these is nice, but I don't hear sound in the background that would support the 1/2. Maybe you could do something similar to 03:35:999 (1) - ? The idea of a long slider would feel nice.
  8. 03:56:832 (2) - If you want a perfect stack with 03:55:832 (2) - , move the red anchor to x:229 y:151.
  9. 04:13:665 (4) - No idea if this was your intention again, but you can move your note to x:111 y:99 so it's in the middle of 04:14:165 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - .
  10. 04:47:999 (5,1) - Blanket.
Fixed/applied anything that wasn't commented on. Thank you for the mod Asphyxia <3
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze
I was told to mod that map but I suck so take a star instead :?
Mikii
393 posts
Joined August 2013
Mikii
wow im retarded

gl
Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda

Shyotamaze wrote:

I was told to mod that map but I suck so take a star instead :?
Thanks for the star!

Mikii wrote:

wow im retarded

gl
LOL Mikii thanks for the star xD

and also thanks Exa for your stars too :)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite

jonathanlfj wrote:

Dark Giralda III
GiralDark LoL
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/nG92i/6ee4b661e2.osu
fixed
Mikii
393 posts
Joined August 2013
Mikii
Increase ur OD, this is a big mistake not increasing your OD and would bring ur map playcount up 600%
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Giralda
1,008 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Giralda
oh yeah lfj told me to do this yesterday, thanks for reminding me
chucentry
401 posts
Joined April 2013
chucentry
serenity IRC
2016-03-14 21:22 Giralda: i mean if you want to mod it sure, just leave Laurier's alone cuz it's hard to get him on osu aasdsadlkghasg
2016-03-14 21:22 chucentry: its impossible mod his map bcuz are perfect
2016-03-14 21:22 chucentry: aa
2016-03-14 21:22 chucentry: like you
2016-03-14 21:22 Giralda: aa
2016-03-14 21:22 Giralda: nuu
2016-03-14 21:23 chucentry: here 01:04:999 (3,4,5,6) - i can listen like u cna use drum HS
2016-03-14 21:24 chucentry: idk if here need the NC 01:28:666 (1) -
2016-03-14 21:24 chucentry: i understand what you put it but idk if need necesary
2016-03-14 21:27 chucentry: do you liek this with whistle? 02:09:833 (2,1,3) -
2016-03-14 21:27 chucentry: to follow the instrument
2016-03-14 21:29 Giralda: most of my hitsounds were copied from Laurier's and added a few things to it
2016-03-14 21:29 chucentry: ah oh
2016-03-14 21:29 Giralda: once I start using the soft whistles there I would probably end up wanting to us it for the entire map
2016-03-14 21:29 Giralda: so yeah
2016-03-14 21:30 chucentry: mm this idk if is the same but ...
2016-03-14 21:31 chucentry: the part before the first kiai 01:33:499 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2016-03-14 21:31 chucentry: and this 02:49:499 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
2016-03-14 21:31 chucentry: looks similar but in the first part u use it
2016-03-14 21:31 chucentry: 01:33:666 (1,2,3) -
2016-03-14 21:32 chucentry: and the second part used it 02:49:499 (4,5,1) -
2016-03-14 21:32 chucentry: mm not looks the same time but feels good too in the 2 parts
2016-03-14 21:32 chucentry: idk if u can change it or its ok
2016-03-14 21:33 chucentry: and idk if u can understand me bcuz i suck at english but im the best loving laurier and giralda
2016-03-14 21:33 Giralda: idk it sounds different to me
2016-03-14 21:33 chucentry: a ok
2016-03-14 21:34 chucentry: sory giralda gomen
2016-03-14 21:34 chucentry: pls no hate i love you
2016-03-14 21:34 chucentry: aww i suck at it T.T
2016-03-14 21:34 Giralda: of course not <3
2016-03-14 21:37 chucentry: maybe this blanket? 04:40:999 (3) - with 04:40:832 (2) -
2016-03-14 21:38 chucentry: idk if the last i say is stupid bcuz the distance is the same like the other slider
2016-03-14 21:38 Giralda: wasn't really trying to blanket there haha
2016-03-14 21:38 chucentry: ok sry
2016-03-14 21:39 chucentry: idk what happend with me but here i listen drum or a HS that sound like drums
2016-03-14 21:39 chucentry: 04:43:499 (2) -
2016-03-14 21:39 chucentry: 04:43:165 (1) -
2016-03-14 21:41 Giralda: fixed
2016-03-14 21:41 chucentry: its ok?
2016-03-14 21:41 Giralda: yeah I added drum finishes to the slider
2016-03-14 21:41 chucentry: if is bad u can slap me if u slap me i feel good bcuz giralda touch me
2016-03-14 21:41 chucentry: 05:05:749 -
2016-03-14 21:42 Giralda: ><
2016-03-14 21:42 Giralda: hentai
2016-03-14 21:42 chucentry: here i listen a triple in 25%
2016-03-14 21:42 chucentry: hahah
2016-03-14 21:43 Giralda: oh
2016-03-14 21:43 Giralda: wow i heard wrong
2016-03-14 21:43 Giralda: im baka
2016-03-14 21:43 Giralda: ><
2016-03-14 21:50 Giralda: okay updated :3
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
I am here to fulfill the prophecy
21:18 jonathanlfj: those hidden traps tho
21:18 Giralda: hehe
21:26 jonathanlfj: ok just a few things
21:28 jonathanlfj: 00:54:166 (1,2,3) - i would make the second triangle slightly bigger to make up for the big jump from the previous one
21:28 jonathanlfj: 00:54:333 (2) - plus there is a finish on this
21:29 Giralda: will add the finish on Laurier's too
21:29 jonathanlfj: 01:20:166 (5) - NC here makes more sense to follow the vocals
21:29 jonathanlfj: dat hidden troll tho
21:30 Giralda: heh
21:31 jonathanlfj: 01:58:833 (8) - clap here
21:31 Giralda: sure
21:32 jonathanlfj: 02:34:999 (1) - missing finish
21:32 jonathanlfj: 02:43:833 (5,6,7) - dat extreme jump tho
21:33 Giralda: I think I was trying to hard here
21:35 jonathanlfj: 03:34:333 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i always wondered why i keep getting 100s here
21:35 jonathanlfj: 03:34:749 (10,12) - these dont appear to be mapped to anything in the music
21:35 jonathanlfj: i would swap out the later half for 2 1/4 slider instead if you want to keep the density
21:37 Giralda: I don't think the two 1/4s would be justified, due to the transition into the next section
21:37 jonathanlfj: then its best to do 5 note + a jump
21:37 jonathanlfj: 02:24:999 (3,4,1,2) - forgot to say hidden troll #2
21:38 Giralda: yes
21:38 jonathanlfj: 03:46:833 - extend the spinner here this is where the music stops
21:39 jonathanlfj: 04:21:499 (4,1) - this jump feels very difficult to catch
21:40 jonathanlfj: especially because its off-vocal so the emphasis is not there
21:40 jonathanlfj: 04:33:665 (8) - clap
21:41 Giralda: http://puu.sh/nGU4o/31fde201bc.jpg changed that stream to this
21:41 Giralda: that should do it
21:42 jonathanlfj: 05:05:665 (3,4,1) - fyi stack leniency causes the first circle to touch the hp bar, if you can move the whole jump a little bit down
21:42 Giralda: yeah I can do that
21:43 jonathanlfj: 00:54:999 (1) - why is this fast sv but not 00:33:666 (1) -
21:44 Giralda: It's because I felt that the first half isn't as impactful as the second
21:44 jonathanlfj: ah
21:45 jonathanlfj: i thought i was dillusional before i checked it in the editor
21:45 jonathanlfj: so just making sure lol
21:45 Giralda: the second half feels more "lively" so yeah
21:46 jonathanlfj: ok that should be all
21:46 jonathanlfj: sure the metadata is ok
21:46 jonathanlfj: i dont want to get hit again with that
21:46 Giralda: I didn't get a confirmation but I did some research with Oko before and we confirmed it was correct
21:47 jonathanlfj: ok
21:47 jonathanlfj: update it after you finish and poke me
21:49 Giralda: also we good
21:49 Giralda: alright8
21:49 Giralda: **'
21:49 Giralda: wow can't type
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Gratz I agree, Best of 2016!
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Thanks Satellite for the approval and everyone else for their congratulations.
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