UNISON SQUARE GARDEN - Linear Blue wo Kikinagara · forum

-NanoRIPE-

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-11T11:30:22+00:00

_kotachi_ wrote:
hi from queue!
※not good english

Hard
00:05:868 (2) - ctrl+G
00:09:129 (2) - here is blanket?
00:14:835 (2) - put on the left - i dont get it ~ can you explain this one?
00:34:401 (2) - ^ - ^
00:38:640 (3,1) - I think this distance is get confused. Let's shorten it slightly - for emphatize to vocal
00:43:205 (1) - x112 y108 -
01:03:748 (3) - here is get confused too. put some object 01:03:585
01:18:259 (4) - blanket - i think the blanket looks good
01:36:683 (1) - ^
01:42:593 (3,4) - I think distant - for emphatize to drum sound (looks strong here)
no reply = fixed

Good luck!

Thanks!! ~ kotachi

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-01-11T13:11:32+00:00

LeQuack wrote:
M4M

Moei's Easy
00:26:248 (3,4) - I feel that this should be mapped differently to the previous 2 sliders as its a very different sound, maybe make (4) a 3/2 slider starting at 00:26:738 - however if you want to keep it as 1/1 sliders at least make it different visually
You correct, illl remake this
01:47:973 (2) - I think this should follow the flow of the previous slider (so moved to the right) as this part is intense and the movement can be a bit too hard for new players
lemme hear more

GL with the mapset

Kami-senpai wrote:
Mod mod mod mod

Moei's Easy
00:22:988 (2,4) - Overlap may be a bit confusing for beginners
...its stack
00:26:248 (3,4) - Since these are different sounds, make them different patterns than 00:24:944 (1,2) -
remade
00:27:553 (1) - End this on 00:28:368 - and start 00:28:857 (2) - on 00:28:694 -
Okei
01:19:727 (1,2) - Could be blanketed a bit better
remade this one
01:22:335 (1,2) - ^
01:33:096 (3,1) - ^

God i really hate when songs have offset differences in the middle >.>

Good luck

http://puu.sh/tiBG8/dbe3938253.osu

DeletedUser_423548

DeletedUser_423548 2017-01-13T15:39:25+00:00

Hi

I'm not good at English I am using translation

*I am not a modder
You can not be a good mod

I have not seen General

[Moei's Easy]

00:05:379 (2,3) - I think copy is good
Symmetric with Ctrl+J.H.G
00:11:901 (1,2) - ^
00:13:205 (3,1) - Not blanket
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046880
00:23:640 (3) - I recommend moving for the appearance
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7046912
00:45:814 (1,2,3,4) - Why do not you copy it and shift it by angle?
It is very strange
01:11:248 (4,1) - This flow is not like Easy
01:21:031 (2,1) - The big difference of DS

I write the rest at a later date I am busy for another reason after accepting mod

no kds

Juiceys

530 posts

Joined June 2016

Juiceys 2017-01-15T06:39:52+00:00

can't mod due to being really busy irl

have some kds instead?

sorry if I can find time I'll try to mod in due time

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-15T20:30:35+00:00

Hi, from queue.~

[

General]

normal-hitclap, normal-hitfinish, and normal-hitwhistle seem to be unused.
Higher quality background here: http://i.imgur.com/n3Z5vj6.jpg

[]

[

Hazu's Insane]

00:51:357 (2,3) - Not too much a fan of this implied visual flow. Looks like you forced the stack too hard imo. I think this looks better: http://i.imgur.com/XQEOmjS.jpg
01:24:292 (3,4) - Try something like this so it looks more connected with the previous slider http://i.imgur.com/xGz2iIa.jpg
01:42:593 (5) - I would make this two circles and stack the last one on top of 01:43:082 (1) - like this or something similar: http://i.imgur.com/UQTIgjn.jpg it gives the pause more emphasis.
01:46:751 (4,5) - Move this closer to 01:46:343 (3) - since you didn't ever do a triple after a slider in this map (which is already meh for introducing it so late) but this distance looks the same as your 1/2, which could lead to misreading.

[

Hard]

00:17:118 (1,2) - This jump is really big compared to what you've been doing so far and the song is less intense before the kiai here. You could do something like this http://i.imgur.com/xinwIbM.png instead.
00:18:096 - I feel like this should be clickable but keeping the spinner would make it too short. Maybe circle and slow slider?
00:25:270 (3,5) - These don't get the same level of emphasis at all? Try moving 00:25:922 (5) - further away? 00:35:705 (2,4) - Same.
00:50:379 (1,2,3) - Space these equally?
01:07:988 (1,2,3) - Super linear, are you sure about this sort of jump so late in the map? I'd make this a bit more angular.
01:20:379 (3) - I think this slider end should be clickable. Not clicking this but clicking the rest of 01:21:031 (1,2,3) - feels really weird.
01:23:966 (2) - I also think this slider end should be clickable. Not only do you skip a vocal here at 01:24:129 - (not the point but I'll at least tell you) the end has a guitar strum and a strong vocal on it, which is really noticeable when you don't click it.
01:42:593 (3,4) - Shorten the distance between these or space 01:43:082 (5) - further away because they look awfully similar especially with this low AR.
01:48:951 (4) - You follow the triple drum but all of a sudden skip it here? Try this: http://i.imgur.com/md42ZgE.png ?

Good luck.~

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-17T12:03:59+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi, from queue.~

[ General]
normal-hitclap, normal-hitfinish, and normal-hitwhistle seem to be unused. - keep these,maybe i will use that someday ~
Higher quality background here: http://i.imgur.com/n3Z5vj6.jpg

[]

[ Hard]
00:17:118 (1,2) - This jump is really big compared to what you've been doing so far and the song is less intense before the kiai here. You could do something like this http://i.imgur.com/xinwIbM.png instead.
00:18:096 - I feel like this should be clickable but keeping the spinner would make it too short. Maybe circle and slow slider?
00:25:270 (3,5) - These don't get the same level of emphasis at all? Try moving 00:25:922 (5) - further away? 00:35:705 (2,4) - Same.
00:50:379 (1,2,3) - Space these equally?
01:07:988 (1,2,3) - Super linear, are you sure about this sort of jump so late in the map? I'd make this a bit more angular.
01:20:379 (3) - I think this slider end should be clickable. Not clicking this but clicking the rest of 01:21:031 (1,2,3) - feels really weird.
01:23:966 (2) - I also think this slider end should be clickable. Not only do you skip a vocal here at 01:24:129 - (not the point but I'll at least tell you) the end has a guitar strum and a strong vocal on it, which is really noticeable when you don't click it.
01:42:593 (3,4) - Shorten the distance between these or space 01:43:082 (5) - further away because they look awfully similar especially with this low AR. - fixed in another way
01:48:951 (4) - You follow the triple drum but all of a sudden skip it here? Try this: http://i.imgur.com/md42ZgE.png ?

Good luck.~

no reply/blue note = fixed!
thanks for your mod Mir!

Ryuusei Aika

Elite Mapper

1,085 posts

Joined January 2016

Ryuusei Aika 2017-01-19T03:45:50+00:00

from queue

sry cannot find anything so take my star xd
gl for rank

My Angel RangE

1,055 posts

Joined April 2015

My Angel RangE 2017-01-21T03:05:50+00:00

Hello~
I don't well Engilsh

well? 2nd red line start look 01:33:952 ~

[Easy]

00:06:683 (1) - With 00:06:031 (3) tihs body parallel error (?)
00:12:553 (2) - minute blasket error. or not?
00:13:205 (3) - blasket.
00:32:444 (4,1) - DS error.

[Nomal]

00:13:694 (4,5) - Ds error
00:45:814 (1,2) - Ds error
01:02:118 (2,3) - ^ too.

good luck!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-21T12:19:02+00:00

My Angel RangE wrote:
Hello~
I don't well Engilsh

well? 2nd red line start look 01:33:952 ~

[Nomal]

00:13:694 (4,5) - Ds error
00:45:814 (1,2) - Ds error
01:02:118 (2,3) - ^ too.

fixed all thx!

good luck!

Agatsu

Beatmap Nominator

1,145 posts

Joined January 2015

Agatsu 2017-01-26T01:51:17+00:00

nano from queue

[Hazu]

00:18:911 - something like this would play better
01:29:346 (3,4,5) - this should be a better rhythm
00:03:748 (2,3,4,5) - it would look better if you tilt the stream a bit

[Hard]

00:33:422 (3) - are the anchors intentional?
00:03:748 (3,4) - you should make this a triple to emphasize the 1/4 notes in the drums

:>

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-01-26T02:11:32+00:00

Wait a little for my update
;w;

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-26T05:45:59+00:00

Agatsu wrote:
nano from queue

[Hard]
00:33:422 (3) - are the anchors intentional? - yep
00:03:748 (3,4) - you should make this a triple to emphasize the 1/4 notes in the drums

no reply = fixed
thanks!

:>

mindmaster107

710 posts

Joined August 2016

mindmaster107 2017-01-26T09:35:50+00:00

[Hazu's Insane]
Due to the clear effort to have a goof rotational flow in the map, I will focus mainly on the problems with flow.
00:09:292 (1) - This breaks the flow by not being lead into by the rotation.
00:17:118 (1) - This is not facing the right way for the rotation. A possible fix is flipping all the sliders 00:17:118 (1,1,1,2) , and repairing the jump after the final slider.
00:30:161 (1,2,3,4) - The straight sliders were uncomfortable to play doe to the crooked angles between sliders.
00:50:542 (5,6,1) - The angle between circle (6) and the slider is way to sharp to enter the slider comfortably. Make it either a smooth entry, or make the angle sharper to be a snap slider.

01:14:509 (1) - This slider breaks the rotation, bu being perpendicular to the direction of movement. Change it into a wishbone slider, or use a mini jump.

This map is pretty good, as only these issues were obvious.

Nevo

Global Moderator

1,176 posts

Joined November 2015

Nevo 2017-01-29T09:09:29+00:00

I'm a horrible modder so i'll try to get the others to mod too // I love this song

:)

Normal
01:20:053 (2) - could be blanketed better

Hard
00:12:879 (4) - make into a 1/4 slider fits better imo
00:34:727 (3) - the spacing seems a little small in comparison to the sliders before

Haru
Maybe (it doesn't matter either way) make 00:03:259 (1) - a 1/4 slider and and another 1/4 slider that leads into the stream

SrSkyPlayer

487 posts

Joined January 2014

SrSkyPlayer 2017-01-29T10:53:38+00:00

general
k

hazu's insane
00:01:629 (2,4) - imo this blanket can be better
00:42:879 (5) - if you change the angle of this slider for something like this, would be so much better
01:19:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - why didn't spam jumps just like you did before 01:09:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ? I mean this kinda breaks the emphasys on the intrumental (if it's what you're looking for, lol) consider to repeat the same idea of that
01:49:767 (1) - I think this spinner could end here 01:50:750 - and then you can put a slider on the red tick 01:50:909 - ending right there 01:51:724 -

hard
00:07:988 (5,2) - I think you can make a blanket with them too, it would be nice, but then you will need to replace some notes, I guess

normal
01:33:911 (1) - why did you NC here? I mean it kinda breaks the consistency of 1 - 6 (combos). I consider you to try something more repetitive in terms of ncing

moei's easy
01:37:988 (3,1) - this blanket can be improved tbh

gl, I really liked this set

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-29T11:22:25+00:00

Nevo wrote:
I'm a horrible modder so i'll try to get the others to mod too // I love this song
:)

Normal
01:20:053 (2) - could be blanketed better

Hard
00:12:879 (4) - make into a 1/4 slider fits better imo - i think a circle is enough ~ cause the guitar sound ended here
00:34:727 (3) - the spacing seems a little small in comparison to the sliders before - cause im follow ds here and the prebious object im not follow ds because im emphatize the vocal

SrSkyPlayer wrote:
general
k

hard
00:07:988 (5,2) - I think you can make a blanket with them too, it would be nice, but then you will need to replace some notes, I guess

normal
01:33:911 (1) - why did you NC here? I mean it kinda breaks the consistency of 1 - 6 (combos). I consider you to try something more repetitive in terms of ncing - i think its okay cause there are some pattern that like this one but you ponted out such as 00:08:640 (4,1)

gl, I really liked this set

no reply =- fixed
thx GUYS!!

Kyuukai

1,511 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-01-29T19:37:17+00:00

ay, old M4M req from my collab queue

Easy

00:54:618 (2) - You should lower it a bit for a better visual, it looks too "straight" atm
01:46:996 (1,3) - Maybe you can change their shapes, x4 straight sliders feels meh D:

Normal

00:06:683 (1) - 408,72 to blanket with 00:06:357 (5) -
00:07:335 (2) - 304,124 to blanket with 00:07:988 (3) -
00:09:292 - You should really map it in my opinion, it feels really weird to not click it
00:51:357 (2,3) - Blanket
01:19:727 (1,2) - Blanket's a bit off
01:26:248 (1) - The curve in the middle of the slider seems like it's not balanced, try to make it better like this
01:38:966 (5,1) - Blanket's a bit off (sliderend, check with 1/8)

Hard

00:03:585 - I think this should be clickable, smth like dis would be better I think
00:18:096 (1,2) - the 2 should be stacked with the sliderend of the 1 since u're slowing down the SV
00:48:422 (1,2) - blanket's a bit off
01:09:292 (1,2) - ^
01:12:553 (3,4) - ^
01:14:346 (5,1) - ^
01:17:770 (3,4) - ^
01:22:335 (1,3) - ^

Insane

00:37:172 (2,4) - stack's a bit off
01:33:422 (5) - I think you can change it to a slider return and make a note there 01:33:911 - instead at the beginning of 01:34:075 (1) -

Very blankety mod, sorry D: gl tho

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-30T05:58:31+00:00

yaleufeu wrote:
ay, old M4M req from my collab queue

Normal
00:06:683 (1) - 408,72 to blanket with 00:06:357 (5) -
00:07:335 (2) - 304,124 to blanket with 00:07:988 (3) -
00:09:292 - You should really map it in my opinion, it feels really weird to not click it - i dont think so,the guitar sound looks strong for me so nope
00:51:357 (2,3) - Blanket
01:19:727 (1,2) - Blanket's a bit off
01:26:248 (1) - The curve in the middle of the slider seems like it's not balanced, try to make it better like this
01:38:966 (5,1) - Blanket's a bit off (sliderend, check with 1/8)

Hard
00:03:585 - I think this should be clickable, smth like dis would be better I think
00:18:096 (1,2) - the 2 should be stacked with the sliderend of the 1 since u're slowing down the SV - lemme hear other opinion about this
00:48:422 (1,2) - blanket's a bit off
01:09:292 (1,2) - ^
01:12:553 (3,4) - ^
01:14:346 (5,1) - ^
01:17:770 (3,4) - ^
01:22:335 (1,3) - ^

Very blankety mod, sorry D: gl tho

no reply = fixed (im tried with blanked tho xd)
Thanks!

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2017-01-31T06:07:48+00:00

M4M from halcyon queue <3

Color coding:

Color coding

Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General

There's a lot of hitsound-related notes in the specific difficulties. I'd highly advice taking a look at those

01:39:333 - Rip acc xdd If you know someone who can use an audio ending programme, I'd consider editing the mp3 so that timing line isn't necessary.

Hitsound stuff that applies to all diffs:
00:19:727 - to 00:24:618 - The whistle sound is really strange alone, since the feedback isn't too good on that hitsound, as well as it sounding pretty much identical to the hit-normal, just amped up. I would advice to find a hitsound (preferably a dimmed clap), which suits the spots where the whistle is placed better, so it can replace it

00:30:814 - to 00:35:053 - Same applies here obviously

Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav

^ If this isn't true, then tell me lol, modding assistent is mean sometimes.. :p

Moei's Easy

Disclaimer: There's a lot of things that are hitsound related, so if you aren't the hitsounder Moei, just do the pattern related things.

General:
OD1 is a little funky lol, but I guess it's fine.. I'd still suggest OD2 though

00:05:705 - Missing clap
00:45:814 (1,2,3,4) - The curves being different makes for a pretty weird looking pattern in my opinion xd Maybe make the curves look the same? (copy-paste thingy)
00:51:031 - Finish?

I assume they go on red ticks in the other diffs which is why it's not here on this diff, i'd still advice doing that tho ^^
01:07:988 (3,4) - Same curve like at 00:45:814 (1,2,3,4) - ? It's a noticeable difference imo
01:14:509 - Finish?
01:15:814 - Finish?
^ Those two finishes because it'd make for a nice lead-in for the easy :3 (You could technically add it in the other diffs too)
01:26:248 - Add a lower volume green line here and add a finish.
01:41:941 - Whistle

01:48:952 - Finish, it's on literally every other slider before this one in this pattern xD

Normal

00:02:770 (4,5,6) - I donno if there's something better you can do here in terms of patterning. It's not necessarily a bad pattern, but I'd probably make a stack somewhere since the rhythms are 3/2 and 1/1 here so it's a lot easier to distinguish hmm xd
01:04:238 - Here I'd probably add a single kickslider instead, and then make a single tap on 01:04:727 - and then the slider from 01:04:890 - . Here's a pic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196386 (Look at timeline, your patterning is definitely better than mine lol)
01:22:335 (1) - If you made this slider go on the top side of the 1/2 slider, that'd make the "train" pattern cooler imo (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196398) (Again, my patterning is an example and is unpolished xdd)
01:24:292 - I feel like this sound is too strong to not be clickable.
01:26:248 - Add a quiet finish.
01:33:911 - Finish

Hard

00:03:259 (2,3,4,5) - Looks pretty cramped. Idea: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196407
00:09:129 - Finish, it's important to still have the feedback
00:16:466 (2,3,4,5) - Make this the same as 00:03:585 (3,4,5) - from the previous suggestion

(if you applied it)
00:17:118 (1,2) - Random suggestion to make it look a little cooler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196414 (Copy-paste and turn 90 degrees) Flows pretty nicely too imo.
00:20:868 - Imo this switch in focus is odd, when you follow the drums for the first measure. Because of this, I'd change 00:19:727 (1,2,3,4) - to be similar to 00:30:161 (1,2,3) - , so the intensity doesn't randomly decrease.
00:33:422 (3) - I think you wanted to do a sharp curve here lol (whoopsie xd)
00:48:096 (4,1) - pretty picky, but they aren't parallel
01:04:890 (3,4,5) - Like beginning? :3333333
01:33:911 - Finish? I know it's red tick but still, feedback is important
01:35:216 - Same could apply here.
01:42:267 - Clap?
01:46:343 (3,4,5) - Hi xd (only if you liked the thing from earlier)
01:48:300 (1,2,3) - HI xd (you get the drill lol)
01:49:115 (5,6,1) - This being almost linear is a really mean way to end the pattern.
01:48:789 (3,4,5) - Same also applies to this jump section. Lemme come with a suggestion that is similar. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196437 . This way, the flow will be easier to handle for players at this skill level.

Hazu's Insane

00:06:194 (4,5) - The strong sound on the slider is on the slider end sadly, so i'd advice making the rhythm here single tap to slider instead of slider to single tap.
00:09:292 (1,1) - Inconsistent focus. The first part has a strong red tick sound too, so I'd probably use that too for clicking :3
00:37:172 (2,4) - noticeably off overlap xd
01:04:074 (9,1,2) - When I played through this, I had issues with the quint because the last note wasn't NC'ed. I'd advice NC'ing it due to the white tick

01:19:727 - Add a finish, since you added one at 01:21:031 - .
01:30:977 (4,5) - Same as on 6:194
01:34:075 (1,2,3,1) - Same as on 9:292
01:45:039 (3) - unsnapped slider : oooo

I hope that helps ya out buddy

Just tell me if you have any questions!

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-01-31T07:42:23+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:

M4M from halcyon queue <3

Color coding:
Color coding
Unrankable if unchanged
Normal Suggestion/Comment
Strong Suggestion

General

There's a lot of hitsound-related notes in the specific difficulties. I'd highly advice taking a look at those
01:39:333 - Rip acc xdd If you know someone who can use an audio ending programme, I'd consider editing the mp3 so that timing line isn't necessary.

Hitsound stuff that applies to all diffs:
00:19:727 - to 00:24:618 - The whistle sound is really strange alone, since the feedback isn't too good on that hitsound, as well as it sounding pretty much identical to the hit-normal, just amped up. I would advice to find a hitsound (preferably a dimmed clap), which suits the spots where the whistle is placed better, so it can replace it - i think the hs is fine as well because we follow the bass drum so its okay ~
00:30:814 - to 00:35:053 - Same applies here obviously - ^

Unused hitsounds:
normal-hitclap.wav
normal-hitfinish.wav
normal-hitwhistle.wav

^ If this isn't true, then tell me lol, modding assistent is mean sometimes.. :p

Normal

00:02:770 (4,5,6) - I donno if there's something better you can do here in terms of patterning. It's not necessarily a bad pattern, but I'd probably make a stack somewhere since the rhythms are 3/2 and 1/1 here so it's a lot easier to distinguish hmm xd
01:04:238 - Here I'd probably add a single kickslider instead, and then make a single tap on 01:04:727 - and then the slider from 01:04:890 - . Here's a pic: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196386 (Look at timeline, your patterning is definitely better than mine lol)
01:22:335 (1) - If you made this slider go on the top side of the 1/2 slider, that'd make the "train" pattern cooler imo (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196398) (Again, my patterning is an example and is unpolished xdd)
01:24:292 - I feel like this sound is too strong to not be clickable.
01:26:248 - Add a quiet finish.
01:33:911 - Finish - its really weird imo when i add finish there

Hard
00:03:259 (2,3,4,5) - Looks pretty cramped. Idea: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196407 - i dont think so,cause my diff always stack circles on the slidertail (and its consistent so i think its fine)
00:09:129 - Finish, it's important to still have the feedback - same as before
00:16:466 (2,3,4,5) - Make this the same as 00:03:585 (3,4,5) - from the previous suggestion (if you applied it) - same as before
00:17:118 (1,2) - Random suggestion to make it look a little cooler: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196414 (Copy-paste and turn 90 degrees) Flows pretty nicely too imo.
00:20:868 - Imo this switch in focus is odd, when you follow the drums for the first measure. Because of this, I'd change 00:19:727 (1,2,3,4) - to be similar to 00:30:161 (1,2,3) - , so the intensity doesn't randomly decrease. - fixed in another way
00:33:422 (3) - I think you wanted to do a sharp curve here lol (whoopsie xd) - i like this so i will keep it (maybe i will change it when BN point this out)
00:48:096 (4,1) - pretty picky, but they aren't parallel
01:04:890 (3,4,5) - Like beginning? :3333333 - same as beginning
01:33:911 - Finish? I know it's red tick but still, feedback is important - same as before
01:35:216 - Same could apply here. - ^
01:42:267 - Clap?
01:46:343 (3,4,5) - Hi xd (only if you liked the thing from earlier)
01:48:300 (1,2,3) - HI xd (you get the drill lol)
01:49:115 (5,6,1) - This being almost linear is a really mean way to end the pattern.
01:48:789 (3,4,5) - Same also applies to this jump section. Lemme come with a suggestion that is similar. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7196437 . This way, the flow will be easier to handle for players at this skill level. - for this one im follow ds for make it easier but i will keep that circles that you pointed out above

I hope that helps ya out buddy Just tell me if you have any questions!

what a great mod! Thanks!!!
edit : no reply = fixed!

Spork Lover

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2017-01-31T11:16:55+00:00

Yo, just wanted to point out that you should probably check the hitsounds on the easy/insane if you copied - They aren't applied

(The suggestions for the specific diffs)

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-02-01T13:56:25+00:00

Thanx minna !

@spork: about hs ing x i only copying from nano x.x

http://puu.sh/tJDPs/92e72d0a7f.osu

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-01T14:10:05+00:00

O-Moei wrote:
Thanx minna !

@spork: about hs ing x i only copying from nano x.x

http://puu.sh/tJDPs/92e72d0a7f.osu

update!

Spork Lover wrote:
Yo, just wanted to point out that you should probably check the hitsounds on the easy/insane if you copied - They aren't applied (The suggestions for the specific diffs)

cause the rhythm is really different with insane so there are some hitsounds not applied ~

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2017-02-02T18:27:20+00:00

Hey

[Easy]
00:30:161 (1,2,3,4) - Do something to (3), current flow might be a bit annoying to play for beginners.
00:45:814 (1,2,3,4) - Again this is pretty hard for newbies, consider making something easier.
01:49:564 - I suggest changing this to a circle so it gets the impact it deserves.

[Normal]
00:01:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That rhythm is pretty complicated for a beginning, consider nerfing it.
00:43:857 (2) - Move it 1 tick earlier ?

[Hard]
00:01:629 (2,3) - That antiflow feels rather random, consider using CTRL+J to (3).
00:02:770 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Again this is a bit too hard and brutal, I recommand using a reverse slider at 00:03:748 -
00:25:922 (5) - I think it's bad that it doesn't provides the same feeling as 00:25:270 (3) -
00:31:140 (3,1) - This looked like 1/1, also the spacing you use is a bit exagerated considering the way you emphasized stronger sounds like 00:25:922 (5,1) -
00:34:075 (1) - No jump here ?
00:35:705 (2) - ^ (this is a fake jump lol)
00:46:792 (3,1) - Swap NCs since 00:46:792 (3,1,2,3,4) - are all following the same thing. btw the high spacing between 00:46:792 (3,1) - is a bit awkward since you're emphasizing the guitar which isn't something you're following.
01:30:325 (1,2,3,4,1) - Flow could be improved here. Maybe rotate (3)

[Insane]
00:01:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You ignore too many beats which isn't a good thing for the highest diff of the mapset.
00:28:368 (4,5) - Maybe increase the spacing a bit to make it look cleaner.
00:30:161 (1,2,3,4) - You used to map the 1/2 sliders in group of 4 but these are mapped in group of 2.
00:42:227 (3) - CTRL+J to make a better transition between 00:42:064 (2,4) -

That's all from me, good luck.

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-03T11:08:21+00:00

6th wrote:
Hey

[Normal]
00:01:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That rhythm is pretty complicated for a beginning, consider nerfing it. - keep cause the rhythm really fit with the music
00:43:857 (2) - Move it 1 tick earlier ? - im not follow guitar here

[Hard]
00:01:629 (2,3) - That antiflow feels rather random, consider using CTRL+J to (3). - i dont think so
00:02:770 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Again this is a bit too hard and brutal, I recommand using a reverse slider at 00:03:748 - at 00:03:748 im want to follow the drum sounds more so i will keep this one
00:25:922 (5) - I think it's bad that it doesn't provides the same feeling as 00:25:270 (3)
00:31:140 (3,1) - This looked like 1/1, also the spacing you use is a bit exagerated considering the way you emphasized stronger sounds like 00:25:922 (5,1) -
00:34:075 (1) - No jump here ? - move to left a bit for make it farther
00:35:705 (2) - ^ (this is a fake jump lol) - fake jump but its still hard to click it/play it right?
00:46:792 (3,1) - Swap NCs since 00:46:792 (3,1,2,3,4) - are all following the same thing. btw the high spacing between 00:46:792 (3,1) - is a bit awkward since you're emphasizing the guitar which isn't something you're following.
01:30:325 (1,2,3,4,1) - Flow could be improved here. Maybe rotate (3) - keep cause i like this flow

That's all from me, good luck.

no reply/blue = fixed
THANKS!! 6th

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-02-05T11:45:42+00:00

Ill do some remake, pls wait thx 6th

Starset

652 posts

Joined April 2015

Starset 2017-02-05T15:03:13+00:00

nm from q

[Insane]
-00:18:096 (1) - end on 00:18:911 - and circle here 00:18:993 -
-00:40:271 (4) - x60 y96 better more spacing for 1/1 gap
-01:32:933 (2,3,4,5) - seems like this pattern got rushed and flows randomly imo, try making them an appropriate square pattern
-01:38:966 (3) - unsnapped?
-01:46:303 (3,4,5) - lower spacing would play better imo
-01:49:727 (1) - should end at 01:50:868 - imo that the crash sound is

[Hard]
-00:10:922 (2) - doesnt need more spacing then the usual
-00:18:096 (1) - kinda looks odd for a slider lol doesnt look mooth enough, the sharp angles are showing, if u want to keep this shape maybe lower the red anchor a bit like this http://puu.sh/tPuiN/421b87b45e.jpg
-00:25:922 (5) - no spacing emphasis for this one? like you did here 00:25:270 (3) - , its basically the same sound...
-00:27:879 - clap
-00:33:422 (3) - :thinking: what is this shape lol
-00:36:357 (4) - same like above
-01:07:335 (3) - its overlapping with the reverse on 01:06:683 (1) - so basically its hard to tell if theres a reverse or not better unstack
-01:39:945 (3) - no need for mroe spacing

[Normal]
-00:25:759 - this is like 00:25:107 - same sound so add note?
-00:26:738 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rythm like u did here 00:36:683 (3,4,5) -
-01:42:553 - clap

gl

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-05T19:32:45+00:00

I'll reply the mods
Sorry for late ;w;

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Linear blue wo kikinagara1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65542
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Linear Blue wo Kikinagara
TitleUnicode:リニアブルーを聴きながら
Artist:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
ArtistUnicode:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Hazu's Insane
Source:劇場版 TIGER & BUNNY -The Beginning-
Tags:Ending Tiger & Bunny Movie The Beginning O-Moei Hazu- B_r_o_k_e_n Ed Cut Version
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:427550

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Tiger_bunnyAJG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
162,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
4074,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
14428,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
14509,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
17607,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,65,0,0
18096,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
18993,-200,4,2,1,5,0,0
19075,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
19727,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
40596,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
45814,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
48422,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
48993,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49075,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49645,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49727,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49971,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50053,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
50297,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50379,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,55,0,0
50868,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
66683,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
82335,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,1
86248,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
88694,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
99251,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
99333,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
109767,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
111724,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 94,53,253
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,255,255

[HitObjects]
192,160,1466,6,0,P|140:152|104:148,2,80,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,1954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,48,2118,2,0,P|292:112|296:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,280,2444,2,0,P|464:216|468:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,2770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,36,3259,2,0,P|400:28|300:20,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,140,3748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,135,3829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,131,3911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,127,3992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,123,4075,6,0,P|276:184|272:224,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,4401,2,0,P|212:320|168:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,276,4727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,4890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,360,5053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,168,5216,6,0,P|196:140|256:200,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,232,5705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,299,5868,2,0,P|170:247|178:207,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,6194,2,0,P|264:56|296:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,6520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,172,6683,6,0,P|271:176|239:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,292,7009,2,0,P|142:296|174:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,7335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,248,7498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,376,7661,2,0,P|192:372|224:368,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,7988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,176,8151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,8314,2,0,P|336:300|340:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,80,8640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,252,8803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,160,8966,2,0,P|396:152|352:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,9292,6,0,P|144:168|120:268,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,10107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,192,10270,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,100,10433,6,0,P|432:192|440:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,380,10923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,264,11085,2,0,P|180:172|188:84,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,11575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,176,11738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,64,11901,6,0,P|40:76|-4:160,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,12716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,156,12879,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,156,13205,6,0,P|104:212|112:268,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,376,13531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,344,13694,2,0,P|136:312|224:288,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,14183,2,0,P|368:236|356:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,14509,6,0,P|296:168|248:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,14835,2,0,P|230:63|258:103,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,15161,2,0,P|173:164|193:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,15488,2,0,P|384:40|424:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,15814,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,32,15977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,16140,2,0,P|352:212|360:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,368,16629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,356,16710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,16792,2,0,L|224:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,17118,6,0,P|176:96|136:92,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,17607,6,0,P|356:184|296:192,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,18096,6,0,P|220:288|364:300,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,304,19075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19727,6,0,L|112:360,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,284,20053,2,0,L|92:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,20379,2,0,L|128:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,20705,2,0,L|108:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,21031,6,0,P|248:80|244:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,21357,2,0,P|329:161|298:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,21683,2,0,P|320:276|280:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,22009,2,0,P|238:357|213:326,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,22335,6,0,L|164:156,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,22661,2,0,L|268:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,22988,2,0,L|188:84,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,23314,2,0,L|244:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,23640,6,0,L|112:288,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,23966,2,0,L|228:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,140,24292,2,0,L|329:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,24618,2,0,L|440:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,24944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,100,25107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25271,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,324,25759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,100,25922,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,100,26248,6,0,P|280:164|168:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,26738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,112,26901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,288,27064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,212,27227,2,0,P|72:196|112:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,27553,6,0,P|304:176|380:232,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,28042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,28205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,336,28368,2,0,P|352:320|316:312,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,356,28694,6,0,B|184:300|184:300|167:253|167:253|177:190,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29183,2,0,P|276:116|284:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,29510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,116,29673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,29836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,30161,6,0,L|376:168,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,30488,2,0,P|312:336|280:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,30814,2,0,P|224:204|256:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,31140,2,0,L|452:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,31466,6,0,P|232:300|268:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,31792,2,0,P|324:72|288:32,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,32118,2,0,P|148:144|188:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,236,32444,2,0,P|364:224|404:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,80,32770,6,0,P|504:144|500:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,336,33096,2,0,P|432:312|400:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,364,33422,2,0,P|232:304|224:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,33749,2,0,P|120:156|112:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,332,34074,6,0,P|88:316|128:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34401,2,0,P|276:224|236:212,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,34727,2,0,P|64:148|104:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,35054,2,0,P|252:56|212:44,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,24,35378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,152,35542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,164,35705,1,4,0:0:0:0:
20,164,36031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,344,36194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36683,6,0,B|256:76|256:144|352:100,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,60,37172,2,0,P|472:124|468:164,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,288,37498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37661,2,0,P|348:200|384:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,360,37988,6,0,P|408:364|320:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,38477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,38640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,368,38803,2,0,P|112:324|116:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,39129,6,0,P|176:136|264:116,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,39618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,56,39781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,39944,2,0,P|264:208|304:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,40270,2,0,P|420:108|380:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,40596,6,0,B|237:67|237:67|224:97|224:97|229:148,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,41085,2,0,P|204:248|132:240,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,41575,2,0,P|116:356|156:352,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,41901,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,42064,1,8,0:3:0:0:
460,272,42227,2,0,P|408:280|376:288,1,64,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,42553,2,0,P|220:296|216:256,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,42879,2,0,P|108:176|104:216,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,352,43205,6,0,P|72:308|144:296,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,43694,2,0,P|292:260|288:200,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,44183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,156,44346,6,0,P|448:152|368:144,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,128,44835,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,128,45161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,253,45325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45814,6,0,P|102:157|94:69,1,128,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,46303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,46466,2,0,P|204:280|236:276,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,46792,2,0,P|352:192|384:196,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,47118,6,0,P|512:340|512:360,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,376,47444,2,0,P|328:320|328:300,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,47770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,336,47933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,184,48096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,208,48259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,312,48422,6,0,B|229:352|233:276|129:324,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,356,49075,6,0,P|108:280|20:292,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,200,49727,6,0,P|72:184|104:192,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,50053,2,0,P|220:236|252:228,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50379,5,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,50542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,50705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50868,6,0,P|316:260|324:368,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,51357,2,0,P|476:168|476:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,24,51683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,180,51846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,44,52010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,124,52172,6,0,B|231:115|231:115|184:132|184:132|121:122,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,48,52661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,236,52825,2,0,P|112:224|216:208,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,53314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,20,53477,6,0,P|304:100|296:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,53966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,136,54129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,54292,2,0,P|312:256|264:252,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,54618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,76,54781,6,0,P|376:76|440:192,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,364,55270,2,0,P|404:344|356:332,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55596,2,0,P|251:303|285:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,55922,2,0,P|356:212|370:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,356,56248,6,0,P|404:360|328:364,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,364,56738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,56819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,340,56901,2,0,P|140:288|136:240,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,57227,2,0,P|152:120|220:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,57553,6,0,P|344:188|344:284,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58205,2,0,P|456:320|452:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,58531,2,0,P|256:208|252:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,376,58857,6,0,B|243:369|243:369|285:345|285:345|348:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59509,2,0,P|504:176|496:148,1,80
352,76,59835,2,0,P|304:80|256:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,60161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,60325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,60488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,64,60651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,76,60732,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,88,60814,2,0,P|76:128|80:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,61140,2,0,P|152:308|208:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,214,61466,6,0,P|345:198|265:186,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,104,61955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,62118,2,0,P|316:80|312:124,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,62444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,112,62608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,62770,6,0,P|436:224|440:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,63096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,312,63259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,63422,2,0,P|272:204|224:212,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,63748,5,8,0:0:0:0:
76,171,63829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,211,63911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,251,63992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
86,291,64074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,344,64238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64727,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,152,64890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65216,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,352,66683,6,0,P|324:316|324:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,67172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,67335,2,0,P|448:240|396:236,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,67661,2,0,P|208:208|204:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,56,67988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,224,68151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,68314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,228,68477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,68640,2,0,P|316:124|360:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,68966,2,0,P|420:228|376:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,69292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,332,69455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,69618,2,0,P|256:192|252:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,69944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,168,70107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,336,70270,2,0,P|232:328|188:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,70596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,211,70759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,70922,2,0,P|108:288|112:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,71248,2,0,P|220:124|224:172,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,71575,2,0,P|340:280|344:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,84,71901,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,288,72064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,72227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,200,72390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,72553,2,0,P|224:268|156:276,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,72879,2,0,P|88:124|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,73205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,180,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,73532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,48,73694,2,0,P|184:56|136:64,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,160,74020,2,0,P|28:224|32:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,74346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,356,74509,6,0,P|56:332|88:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,74835,2,0,P|252:248|284:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,75161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,356,75325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,172,75488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,328,75651,6,0,P|448:320|340:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,340,76140,2,0,P|184:292|184:248,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,76466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,102,76547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,96,76629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,96,76710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,102,76792,1,8,0:3:0:0:
355,111,76873,1,8,0:3:0:0:
383,114,76955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
410,111,77036,1,8,0:3:0:0:
437,103,77118,6,0,P|420:156|408:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,77444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,240,77607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,77770,2,0,P|244:212|196:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,78096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,78259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,78422,5,2,0:0:0:0:
0,256,78585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,78748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,76,78911,2,0,P|72:160|72:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,79238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,79401,2,0,P|312:144|360:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,280,79727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,240,79890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,92,80053,2,0,P|504:148|508:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,336,80379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,80542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,328,80705,2,0,P|220:312|268:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,81031,6,0,B|451:312|451:312|434:270|434:270|439:206,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,81520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,81683,2,0,P|320:192|364:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,104,82009,2,0,P|464:96|420:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,82336,6,0,P|175:33|67:45,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,82825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82988,2,0,P|164:204|200:200,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,83314,2,0,P|292:100|256:96,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,40,83640,6,0,P|88:88|88:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,83966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,84129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,200,84292,2,0,P|36:204|72:210,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,84618,2,0,P|248:308|283:302,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,84944,6,0,P|432:132|424:88,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,85270,2,0,P|268:80|260:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,85596,2,0,L|276:232,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
108,320,85922,2,0,L|24:308,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,360,86248,6,0,B|288:344|288:344|336:356|336:356|320:280|352:228|428:236|448:316|412:328|376:312,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,87227,6,0,P|448:208|476:360,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,380,88205,6,0,L|280:376,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,88694,6,0,P|136:136|228:128,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,89183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,89346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,89509,2,0,P|208:268|212:320,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,376,89836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89998,6,0,P|444:156|340:104,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,12,90488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,188,90651,2,0,P|308:176|360:168,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,44,90976,2,0,P|428:32|376:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,91303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,91466,6,0,P|360:296|356:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,91792,2,0,P|152:232|148:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,92118,2,0,P|296:172|292:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,372,92444,2,0,P|128:352|84:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,196,92770,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,280,92933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,316,93096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,124,93259,2,0,P|168:172|176:216,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,380,93585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,244,93748,2,0,P|344:232|308:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,94075,6,0,P|108:256|112:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,32,94890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,212,95053,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,80,95216,6,0,P|264:80|320:156,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,95705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,224,95868,2,0,P|108:136|112:52,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,96357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,148,96520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,96683,6,0,P|440:244|516:248,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,97498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97661,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97988,6,0,P|276:192|272:240,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,98314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,204,98477,2,0,P|492:156|440:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,16,98966,2,0,P|256:28|168:52,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,40,99333,6,0,P|128:96|132:152,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,99659,2,0,P|224:224|228:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,92,99985,2,0,P|360:148|364:204,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,100311,2,0,P|360:328|312:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,100637,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,100800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,352,100963,2,0,P|56:316|72:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,101452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,101615,2,0,P|248:236|212:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,101941,6,0,P|40:128|4:124,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,102430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,17,102593,2,0,P|193:61|201:105,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,336,103083,6,0,P|256:280|360:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,103572,2,0,P|480:248|472:288,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,103898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,176,104061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,356,104224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,232,104387,6,0,B|192:200|192:256|112:228,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,104876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,105039,6,0,P|272:60|368:72,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,105528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,332,105691,6,0,P|344:252|332:156,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,28,106180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,200,106343,6,0,P|164:152|256:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,172,106751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,180,106833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,312,106996,6,0,P|488:204|484:140,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,20,107485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,135,107648,6,0,B|245:190|245:190|262:237|262:237|250:312,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,372,108137,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,176,108300,6,0,P|116:164|188:156,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,72,108789,2,0,P|312:60|272:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,28,109115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,44,109197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,60,109278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,236,109441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,44,109604,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109767,12,0,111724,0:0:0:0:

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-06T11:32:56+00:00

HB24 wrote:
nm from q

[Hard]
-00:10:922 (2) - doesnt need more spacing then the usual
-00:18:096 (1) - kinda looks odd for a slider lol doesnt look mooth enough, the sharp angles are showing, if u want to keep this shape maybe lower the red anchor a bit like this http://puu.sh/tPuiN/421b87b45e.jpg
-00:25:922 (5) - no spacing emphasis for this one? like you did here 00:25:270 (3) - , its basically the same sound...
-00:27:879 - clap
-00:33:422 (3) - :thinking: what is this shape lol
-00:36:357 (4) - same like above - whats wrong with this slider? its just normal curve slider :/
-01:07:335 (3) - its overlapping with the reverse on 01:06:683 (1) - so basically its hard to tell if theres a reverse or not better unstack - i dont think so
-01:39:945 (3) - no need for mroe spacing

[Normal]
-00:25:759 - this is like 00:25:107 - same sound so add note? - fixed in another way
-00:26:738 (2,3) - ctrl+g for rythm like u did here 00:36:683 (3,4,5) -
-01:42:553 - clap

gl

no reply/blue = fixed!
Thanks HB! ~

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-02-06T13:00:54+00:00

http://puu.sh/tQPEW/27579fe4f9.osu renew

SkyDevil

1,771 posts

Joined October 2010

SkyDevil 2017-02-07T21:09:46+00:00

hii m4m from my queue

Moei's Easy

*00:04:401 - hmm maybe you can use a slidertick with a clap sound to fill up these empty holes without hitsounds. Especially at parts like 00:27:553 (5,6) they would add a lot to the beatmap
*00:40:596 - why break here? the map is only 2 min long.. if the argument is used that easy players get tired quickly then I doubt a short break like this is gonna help much...
*01:24:944 (1) - I'm not a big fan of the spinner here, I think it would be better to map it out normally since the spinner sort of follows the vocals and then just awkwardly ends after 4 beats

Normal

*00:01:466 (1,2) - A thing I noticed is that you stacked these two, then stacked these two 00:03:259 (5,6) - shortly afterwards, I think newer players have a difficult time reading the approach circle so they are more reliant on distance spacing.. If these two are so close to each other they might get confused
*00:13:205 (3,4) - maybe finish on both slider heads? it blends well with the music
*00:28:205 (5) - why drum clap? shouldnt it be the whistle youre using the whole time before this point? there is actually a drum sound in the music that fits with the drum clap hitsound though, for example here 00:38:966 (2,3) - , a drum-clap addition on the slider end of (2) and on both the head/end on (3) sounds really good, if youre gonna do that then you should also add those here: 00:29:672 - & 00:44:672 -
*00:28:531 - I feel like there should be a note here, maybe a circle, or maybe you can repeat the slider (5), it just feels a bit too forced onto the vocals
*00:29:509 (7) - clap on slider head?
*00:40:922 (1) - clap on slider head and tail? c;
*00:43:531 (1,2) - clap on slider end (1) and slider head (2)
*00:50:376 (4) - clap on slider head (both at begin and end, btw sorry for so much hitsound things I just sorta miss those when playing through it ; ; )
*00:55:270 (5,6,1) - I dont really like patterns like this on normal ; ; because most players have combo burst on so the slider (6) gets hidden under the combo burst of (5), also theyre often a bit slow on reaction so they might not see (1) on time. I think you should try moving either (5) or (1) around
*01:10:270 (3) - I think this should only be a circle, a slider doesnt add much here
*01:27:227 (1) - those whistles are a bit awkward >< maybe its better if its quiet
*01:45:325 (4,1) - (4) covers up a lot of (1)... you should move it a bit down, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7263099

Hard

Read the hitsound notes at normal
*00:03:259 (2,3) - you should space out these two as well, you put some distance between (1,2), why not between (2,3)?
*00:16:629 (2,3,4) - I think stacking another slider under it might confuse people, some newer hard players tap a bit too much when trying to beat triple circles so they might panic after seeing that the slider head dissappeared early
*00:50:379 (1) - Why nc? the spacing got like a liitttllee bit bigger so it wouldnt matter that much anyways, it just looks a bit odd now.. if youre not going to change the nc then i think you should look into making the spacing the same for 00:50:705 (3) -, the distance between (3,2) and (3,1) should be the same since you just sped up...
*01:26:167 - I have to point this out again because it really sounds weird to me ; ; I really dont think the whistles sound good here, soft sound with no extra hitsounding on is better ; ;
*01:32:118 (3) - maybe its better to reverse this since you made (1,2) a jump
*01:49:564 (1) - the jump is so small, it looks very weird the way it is right now, i think you should jut make the spacing the same as the others

Hazu's Insane

*00:12:879 (3,1) - I dont really understand why you put the next circle on the same spot, it really kills the flow a bit.. 01:37:661 (3,1) -
*01:08:151 (2,4) - It would be better if you either stacked them properly or moved them out of each other, since this is a bit odd imo
*01:25:596 (3,4) - I think these should be a bit closer to each other,to make it really obvious that the map is slowing down
*01:46:669 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit awkward... it looks too forced to fit 01:45:691 (1) -'s slider end... why not make it equal spacing at least?
I dont really have any fixes because the diff itself looks pretty good

Good luck with your map! Im sure you can rank it

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-08T07:37:29+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
hii m4m from my queue

Normal

*00:01:466 (1,2) - A thing I noticed is that you stacked these two, then stacked these two 00:03:259 (5,6) - shortly afterwards, I think newer players have a difficult time reading the approach circle so they are more reliant on distance spacing.. If these two are so close to each other they might get confused
*00:13:205 (3,4) - maybe finish on both slider heads? it blends well with the music
*00:28:205 (5) - why drum clap? shouldnt it be the whistle youre using the whole time before this point? there is actually a drum sound in the music that fits with the drum clap hitsound though, for example here 00:38:966 (2,3) - , a drum-clap addition on the slider end of (2) and on both the head/end on (3) sounds really good, if youre gonna do that then you should also add those here: 00:29:672 - & 00:44:672 -
*00:28:531 - I feel like there should be a note here, maybe a circle, or maybe you can repeat the slider (5), it just feels a bit too forced onto the vocals
*00:29:509 (7) - clap on slider head? - im not need hs for this slider cause the clap is too loud for this part
*00:40:922 (1) - clap on slider head and tail? c; - ^
*00:43:531 (1,2) - clap on slider end (1) and slider head (2) - ^
*00:50:376 (4) - clap on slider head (both at begin and end, btw sorry for so much hitsound things I just sorta miss those when playing through it ; ; )
*00:55:270 (5,6,1) - I dont really like patterns like this on normal ; ; because most players have combo burst on so the slider (6) gets hidden under the combo burst of (5), also theyre often a bit slow on reaction so they might not see (1) on time. I think you should try moving either (5) or (1) around - keep for now,if someone point this out i will fix this
*01:10:270 (3) - I think this should only be a circle, a slider doesnt add much here - i dont think so,cause the word "sono" really suits with 1/2 slider than a circle
*01:27:227 (1) - those whistles are a bit awkward >< maybe its better if its quiet
*01:45:325 (4,1) - (4) covers up a lot of (1)... you should move it a bit down, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7263099
Hard

Read the hitsound notes at normal
*00:03:259 (2,3) - you should space out these two as well, you put some distance between (1,2), why not between (2,3)?
*00:16:629 (2,3,4) - I think stacking another slider under it might confuse people, some newer hard players tap a bit too much when trying to beat triple circles so they might panic after seeing that the slider head dissappeared early - i dont think so
*00:50:379 (1) - Why nc? the spacing got like a liitttllee bit bigger so it wouldnt matter that much anyways, it just looks a bit odd now.. if youre not going to change the nc then i think you should look into making the spacing the same for 00:50:705 (3) -, the distance between (3,2) and (3,1) should be the same since you just sped up...
*01:26:167 - I have to point this out again because it really sounds weird to me ; ; I really dont think the whistles sound good here, soft sound with no extra hitsounding on is better ; ; - ehhhh wrong timing i guess cause you point a blank part (theres no objects)
*01:32:118 (3) - maybe its better to reverse this since you made (1,2) a jump - hmmmm keep cause i like this kind of pattern
*01:49:564 (1) - the jump is so small, it looks very weird the way it is right now, i think you should jut make the spacing the same as the others
Good luck with your map! Im sure you can rank it

no reply = fixed!
thanks!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-08T23:02:42+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
hii m4m from my queue

Hazu's Insane
*00:12:879 (3,1) - I dont really understand why you put the next circle on the same spot, it really kills the flow a bit.. There's really no problem with this, is quite common, although I don't really like the stacks xD 01:37:661 (3,1) - Same.
*01:08:151 (2,4) - It would be better if you either stacked them properly or moved them out of each other, since this is a bit odd imo Something like that.
*01:25:596 (3,4) - I think these should be a bit closer to each other,to make it really obvious that the map is slowing down Fixed.
*01:46:669 (1,2,3) - this looks a bit awkward... it looks too forced to fit 01:45:691 (1) -'s slider end... why not make it equal spacing at least? I moved this more closer
I dont really have any fixes because the diff itself looks pretty good
Good luck with your map! Im sure you can rank it

Thanks~

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Linear blue wo kikinagara1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65542
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Linear Blue wo Kikinagara
TitleUnicode:リニアブルーを聴きながら
Artist:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
ArtistUnicode:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Hazu's Insane
Source:劇場版 TIGER & BUNNY -The Beginning-
Tags:Ending Tiger & Bunny Movie The Beginning O-Moei Hazu- B_r_o_k_e_n Ed Cut Version
BeatmapID:972289
BeatmapSetID:427550

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Tiger_bunnyAJG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
162,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
4074,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
14428,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
14509,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
17607,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,65,0,0
18096,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
18993,-200,4,2,1,5,0,0
19075,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
19727,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
40596,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
45814,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
48422,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
48993,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49075,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49645,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49727,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49971,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50053,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
50297,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50379,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,55,0,0
50868,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
66683,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
82335,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,1
86248,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
88694,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
99251,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
99333,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
109767,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
111724,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 94,53,253
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,255,255

[HitObjects]
192,160,1466,6,0,P|140:152|104:148,2,80,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,1954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,48,2118,2,0,P|292:112|296:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,280,2444,2,0,P|464:216|468:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,2770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,36,3259,2,0,P|400:28|300:20,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,140,3748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,135,3829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,131,3911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,127,3992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,123,4075,6,0,P|276:184|272:224,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,4401,2,0,P|212:320|168:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,276,4727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,4890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,360,5053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,168,5216,6,0,P|196:140|256:200,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,232,5705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,299,5868,2,0,P|170:247|178:207,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,6194,2,0,P|264:56|296:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,6520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,172,6683,6,0,P|271:176|239:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,292,7009,2,0,P|142:296|174:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,7335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,248,7498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,376,7661,2,0,P|192:372|224:368,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,7988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,176,8151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,8314,2,0,P|336:300|340:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,80,8640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,252,8803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,160,8966,2,0,P|396:152|352:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,9292,6,0,P|144:168|120:268,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,10107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,192,10270,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,100,10433,6,0,P|432:192|440:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,380,10923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,264,11085,2,0,P|180:172|188:84,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,11575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,176,11738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,64,11901,6,0,P|40:76|-4:160,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,12716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,156,12879,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,156,13205,6,0,P|104:212|112:268,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,376,13531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,344,13694,2,0,P|136:312|224:288,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,14183,2,0,P|368:236|356:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,14509,6,0,P|296:168|248:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,14835,2,0,P|230:63|258:103,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,15161,2,0,P|173:164|193:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,15488,2,0,P|384:40|424:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,15814,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,32,15977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,16140,2,0,P|352:212|360:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,368,16629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,356,16710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,16792,2,0,L|224:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,17118,6,0,P|176:96|136:92,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,17607,6,0,P|356:184|296:192,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,18096,6,0,P|220:288|364:300,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,304,19075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19727,6,0,L|112:360,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,284,20053,2,0,L|92:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,20379,2,0,L|128:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,20705,2,0,L|108:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,21031,6,0,P|248:80|244:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,21357,2,0,P|329:161|298:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,21683,2,0,P|320:276|280:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,22009,2,0,P|238:357|213:326,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,22335,6,0,L|164:156,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,22661,2,0,L|268:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,22988,2,0,L|188:84,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,23314,2,0,L|244:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,23640,6,0,L|112:288,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,23966,2,0,L|228:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,140,24292,2,0,L|329:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,24618,2,0,L|440:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,24944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,100,25107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25271,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,324,25759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,100,25922,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,100,26248,6,0,P|280:164|168:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,26738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,112,26901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,288,27064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,212,27227,2,0,P|72:196|112:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,27553,6,0,P|304:176|380:232,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,28042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,28205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,336,28368,2,0,P|352:320|316:312,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,356,28694,6,0,B|184:300|184:300|167:253|167:253|177:190,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29183,2,0,P|276:116|284:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,29510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,116,29673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,29836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,30161,6,0,L|376:168,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,30488,2,0,P|312:336|280:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,30814,2,0,P|224:204|256:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,31140,2,0,L|452:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,31466,6,0,P|232:300|268:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,31792,2,0,P|324:72|288:32,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,32118,2,0,P|148:144|188:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,236,32444,2,0,P|364:224|404:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,80,32770,6,0,P|504:144|500:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,336,33096,2,0,P|432:312|400:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,364,33422,2,0,P|232:304|224:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,33749,2,0,P|120:156|112:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,332,34074,6,0,P|88:316|128:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34401,2,0,P|276:224|236:212,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,34727,2,0,P|64:148|104:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,35054,2,0,P|252:56|212:44,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,24,35378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,152,35542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,164,35705,1,4,0:0:0:0:
20,164,36031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,344,36194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36683,6,0,B|256:76|256:144|352:100,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,60,37172,2,0,P|472:124|468:164,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,288,37498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37661,2,0,P|348:200|384:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,360,37988,6,0,P|408:364|320:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,38477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,38640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,368,38803,2,0,P|112:324|116:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,39129,6,0,P|176:136|264:116,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,39618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,56,39781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,39944,2,0,P|264:208|304:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,40270,2,0,P|420:108|380:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,40596,6,0,B|237:67|237:67|224:97|224:97|229:148,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,41085,2,0,P|204:248|132:240,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,41575,2,0,P|116:356|156:352,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,41901,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,42064,1,8,0:3:0:0:
460,272,42227,2,0,P|408:280|376:288,1,64,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,42553,2,0,P|220:296|216:256,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,42879,2,0,P|108:176|104:216,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,352,43205,6,0,P|72:308|144:296,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,43694,2,0,P|292:260|288:200,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,44183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,156,44346,6,0,P|448:152|368:144,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,128,44835,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,128,45161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,253,45325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45814,6,0,P|102:157|94:69,1,128,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,46303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,46466,2,0,P|204:280|236:276,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,46792,2,0,P|352:192|384:196,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,47118,6,0,P|512:340|512:360,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,376,47444,2,0,P|328:320|328:300,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,47770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,336,47933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,184,48096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,208,48259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,312,48422,6,0,B|229:352|233:276|129:324,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,356,49075,6,0,P|108:280|20:292,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,200,49727,6,0,P|72:184|104:192,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,50053,2,0,P|220:236|252:228,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50379,5,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,50542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,50705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50868,6,0,P|316:260|324:368,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,51357,2,0,P|476:168|476:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,24,51683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,180,51846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,44,52010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,124,52172,6,0,B|231:115|231:115|184:132|184:132|121:122,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,48,52661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,236,52825,2,0,P|112:224|216:208,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,53314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,20,53477,6,0,P|304:100|296:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,53966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,136,54129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,54292,2,0,P|312:256|264:252,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,54618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,76,54781,6,0,P|376:76|440:192,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,364,55270,2,0,P|404:344|356:332,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55596,2,0,P|251:303|285:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,55922,2,0,P|356:212|370:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,356,56248,6,0,P|404:360|328:364,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,364,56738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,56819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,340,56901,2,0,P|140:288|136:240,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,57227,2,0,P|152:120|220:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,57553,6,0,P|344:188|344:284,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58205,2,0,P|456:320|452:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,58531,2,0,P|256:208|252:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,376,58857,6,0,B|243:369|243:369|285:345|285:345|348:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59509,2,0,P|504:176|496:148,1,80
352,76,59835,2,0,P|304:80|256:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,60161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,60325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,60488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,64,60651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,76,60732,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,88,60814,2,0,P|76:128|80:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,61140,2,0,P|152:308|208:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,214,61466,6,0,P|345:198|265:186,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,104,61955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,62118,2,0,P|316:80|312:124,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,62444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,112,62608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,62770,6,0,P|436:224|440:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,63096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,312,63259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,63422,2,0,P|272:204|224:212,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,63748,5,8,0:0:0:0:
76,171,63829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,211,63911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,251,63992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
86,291,64074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,344,64238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64727,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,152,64890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65216,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,352,66683,6,0,P|324:316|324:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,67172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,67335,2,0,P|448:240|396:236,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,67661,2,0,P|208:208|204:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,56,67988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,68151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,68314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,228,68477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,68640,2,0,P|316:124|360:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,68966,2,0,P|420:228|376:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,69292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,332,69455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,69618,2,0,P|256:192|252:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,69944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,168,70107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,336,70270,2,0,P|232:328|188:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,70596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,211,70759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,70922,2,0,P|108:288|112:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,71248,2,0,P|220:124|224:172,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,71575,2,0,P|340:280|344:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,84,71901,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,288,72064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,72227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,200,72390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,72553,2,0,P|224:268|156:276,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,72879,2,0,P|88:124|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,73205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,180,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,73532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,48,73694,2,0,P|184:56|136:64,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,160,74020,2,0,P|28:224|32:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,74346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,356,74509,6,0,P|56:332|88:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,74835,2,0,P|252:248|284:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,75161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,356,75325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,172,75488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,328,75651,6,0,P|448:320|340:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,340,76140,2,0,P|184:292|184:248,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,76466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,102,76547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,96,76629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,96,76710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,102,76792,1,8,0:3:0:0:
355,111,76873,1,8,0:3:0:0:
383,114,76955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
410,111,77036,1,8,0:3:0:0:
437,103,77118,6,0,P|420:156|408:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,77444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,240,77607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,77770,2,0,P|244:212|196:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,78096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,78259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,78422,5,2,0:0:0:0:
0,256,78585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,78748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,76,78911,2,0,P|72:160|72:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,79238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,79401,2,0,P|312:144|360:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,280,79727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,240,79890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,92,80053,2,0,P|504:148|508:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,336,80379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,80542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,328,80705,2,0,P|220:312|268:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,81031,6,0,B|451:312|451:312|434:270|434:270|439:206,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,81520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,81683,2,0,P|320:192|364:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,104,82009,2,0,P|464:96|420:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,82336,6,0,P|175:33|67:45,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,82825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82988,2,0,P|164:204|200:200,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,83314,2,0,P|292:100|256:96,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,40,83640,6,0,P|88:88|88:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,83966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,84129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,200,84292,2,0,P|36:204|72:210,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,84618,2,0,P|248:308|283:302,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,84944,6,0,P|432:132|424:88,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,85270,2,0,P|268:80|260:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,85596,2,0,L|276:232,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
140,320,85922,2,0,L|56:308,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,360,86248,6,0,B|288:344|288:344|336:356|336:356|320:280|352:228|428:236|448:316|412:328|376:312,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,87227,6,0,P|448:208|476:360,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,380,88205,6,0,L|280:376,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,88694,6,0,P|136:136|228:128,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,89183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,89346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,89509,2,0,P|208:268|212:320,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,376,89836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89998,6,0,P|444:156|340:104,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,12,90488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,188,90651,2,0,P|308:176|360:168,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,44,90976,2,0,P|428:32|376:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,91303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,91466,6,0,P|360:296|356:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,91792,2,0,P|152:232|148:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,92118,2,0,P|296:172|292:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,372,92444,2,0,P|128:352|84:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,196,92770,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,280,92933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,316,93096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,124,93259,2,0,P|168:172|176:216,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,380,93585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,244,93748,2,0,P|344:232|308:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,94075,6,0,P|108:256|112:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,32,94890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,212,95053,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,80,95216,6,0,P|264:80|320:156,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,95705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,224,95868,2,0,P|108:136|112:52,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,96357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,148,96520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,96683,6,0,P|440:244|516:248,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,97498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97661,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97988,6,0,P|276:192|272:240,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,98314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,204,98477,2,0,P|492:156|440:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,16,98966,2,0,P|256:28|168:52,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,40,99333,6,0,P|128:96|132:152,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,99659,2,0,P|224:224|228:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,92,99985,2,0,P|360:148|364:204,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,100311,2,0,P|360:328|312:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,100637,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,100800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,352,100963,2,0,P|56:316|72:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,101452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,101615,2,0,P|248:236|212:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,101941,6,0,P|40:128|4:124,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,102430,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,17,102593,2,0,P|193:61|201:105,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,336,103083,6,0,P|256:280|360:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,103572,2,0,P|480:248|472:288,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,103898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,176,104061,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,356,104224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,232,104387,6,0,B|192:200|192:256|112:228,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,104876,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,105039,6,0,P|272:60|368:72,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,105528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,332,105691,6,0,P|344:252|332:156,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,36,106180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,200,106343,6,0,P|164:152|256:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,172,106751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,180,106833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,288,106996,6,0,P|484:180|480:116,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,24,107485,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,135,107648,6,0,B|245:190|245:190|262:237|262:237|250:312,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,372,108137,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,176,108300,6,0,P|116:164|188:156,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,108789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,32,108953,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,220,109115,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,204,109197,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,188,109278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,8,109441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,192,109604,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109767,12,0,111724,0:0:0:0:

Grafs

16 posts

Joined September 2015

Grafs 2017-02-09T12:53:48+00:00

Hello,
About Hazu's Insane from AiMod, there are different tags, and 01:39:333 (1) - this timing offset change you dont have it on other difficulties and its not necessary imo so for me you should remove it and adjust song to timeline. Another thing 01:05:053 (3,4,5) - move it to half beat (red tick 01:05:216 (3,4,5)). That's all froom me hope it helps.

Hard:
00:19:238 (2) - doesn't really like this circle its really easy to miss combo when you play first time this map, maybe put it closer to previous slider
00:25:270 (2) - suggesting to remove this slider put single circle in this place and next from 00:25:515 - put slider to red tick (00:25:759) and in 00:25:922 (4) - single circle
00:27:390 (1) - I think first slider from NC should start from this half-beat (make it longer)
00:29:509 (3) - maybe remove slider and start from half beat 00:29:672 with single circle?
00:35:705 (2) - suggesting to remove slider and put single circle and next from 00:36:031 to 00:36:194 add slider and in 00:36:357 put circle
01:45:005 (3) - from AiMod adjust slider to timeline

Edited post and added something about hard level in my opinion, gl.

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-09T14:28:45+00:00

Grafs wrote:
Hello,

Hard:
00:19:238 (2) - doesn't really like this circle its really easy to miss combo when you play first time this map, maybe put it closer to previous slider
00:25:270 (2) - suggesting to remove this slider put single circle in this place and next from 00:25:515 - put slider to red tick (00:25:759) and in 00:25:922 (4) - single circle - fixed in another way
00:27:390 (1) - I think first slider from NC should start from this half-beat (make it longer) - i want to emphatize the vocal more
00:29:509 (3) - maybe remove slider and start from half beat 00:29:672 with single circle? - too dense
00:35:705 (2) - suggesting to remove slider and put single circle and next from 00:36:031 to 00:36:194 add slider and in 00:36:357 put circle - ^
01:45:005 (3) - from AiMod adjust slider to timeline

Edited post and added something about hard level in my opinion, gl.

thanks for your mod
no reply/blue = fixed

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-09T14:32:08+00:00

Removed and fixed tags in my diff
Thanks~

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Linear blue wo kikinagara1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65542
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Linear Blue wo Kikinagara
TitleUnicode:リニアブルーを聴きながら
Artist:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
ArtistUnicode:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Hazu's Insane
Source:劇場版 TIGER & BUNNY -The Beginning-
Tags:Ending Tiger & Bunny Movie The Beginning O-Moei Hazu- Cut Version
BeatmapID:972289
BeatmapSetID:427550

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Tiger_bunnyAJG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
162,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
4074,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
14428,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
14509,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
17607,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,65,0,0
18096,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
18993,-200,4,2,1,5,0,0
19075,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
19727,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
40596,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
45814,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
48422,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
48993,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49075,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49645,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49727,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49971,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50053,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
50297,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50379,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,55,0,0
50868,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
66683,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
82335,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,1
86248,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
88694,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
99210,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
99292,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109767,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
111724,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 94,53,253
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,255,255

[HitObjects]
192,160,1466,6,0,P|140:152|104:148,2,80,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,1954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,48,2118,2,0,P|292:112|296:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,280,2444,2,0,P|464:216|468:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,2770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,36,3259,2,0,P|400:28|300:20,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,140,3748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,135,3829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,131,3911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,127,3992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,123,4075,6,0,P|276:184|272:224,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,4401,2,0,P|212:320|168:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,276,4727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,4890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,360,5053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,168,5216,6,0,P|196:140|256:200,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,232,5705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,299,5868,2,0,P|170:247|178:207,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,6194,2,0,P|264:56|296:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,6520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,172,6683,6,0,P|271:176|239:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,292,7009,2,0,P|142:296|174:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,7335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,248,7498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,376,7661,2,0,P|192:372|224:368,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,7988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,176,8151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,8314,2,0,P|336:300|340:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,80,8640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,252,8803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,160,8966,2,0,P|396:152|352:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,9292,6,0,P|144:168|120:268,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,10107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,192,10270,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,100,10433,6,0,P|432:192|440:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,380,10923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,264,11085,2,0,P|180:172|188:84,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,11575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,176,11738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,64,11901,6,0,P|40:76|-4:160,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,12716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,156,12879,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,156,13205,6,0,P|104:212|112:268,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,376,13531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,344,13694,2,0,P|136:312|224:288,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,14183,2,0,P|368:236|356:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,14509,6,0,P|296:168|248:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,14835,2,0,P|230:63|258:103,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,15161,2,0,P|173:164|193:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,15488,2,0,P|384:40|424:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,15814,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,32,15977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,16140,2,0,P|352:212|360:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,368,16629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,356,16710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,16792,2,0,L|224:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,17118,6,0,P|176:96|136:92,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,17607,6,0,P|356:184|296:192,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,18096,6,0,P|220:288|364:300,1,220,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,304,19075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19727,6,0,L|112:360,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,284,20053,2,0,L|92:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,20379,2,0,L|128:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,20705,2,0,L|108:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,21031,6,0,P|248:80|244:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,21357,2,0,P|329:161|298:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,21683,2,0,P|320:276|280:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,22009,2,0,P|238:357|213:326,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,22335,6,0,L|164:156,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,22661,2,0,L|268:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,22988,2,0,L|188:84,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,23314,2,0,L|244:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,23640,6,0,L|112:288,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,23966,2,0,L|228:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,140,24292,2,0,L|329:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,24618,2,0,L|440:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,24944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,100,25107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25271,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,324,25759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,100,25922,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,100,26248,6,0,P|280:164|168:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,26738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,112,26901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,288,27064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,212,27227,2,0,P|72:196|112:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,27553,6,0,P|304:176|380:232,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,28042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,28205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,336,28368,2,0,P|352:320|316:312,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,356,28694,6,0,B|184:300|184:300|167:253|167:253|177:190,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29183,2,0,P|276:116|284:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,29510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,116,29673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,29836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,30161,6,0,L|376:168,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,30488,2,0,P|312:336|280:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,30814,2,0,P|224:204|256:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,31140,2,0,L|452:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,31466,6,0,P|232:300|268:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,31792,2,0,P|324:72|288:32,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,32118,2,0,P|148:144|188:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,236,32444,2,0,P|364:224|404:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,80,32770,6,0,P|504:144|500:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,336,33096,2,0,P|432:312|400:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,364,33422,2,0,P|232:304|224:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,33749,2,0,P|120:156|112:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,332,34074,6,0,P|88:316|128:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34401,2,0,P|276:224|236:212,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,34727,2,0,P|64:148|104:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,35054,2,0,P|252:56|212:44,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,24,35378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,152,35542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,164,35705,1,4,0:0:0:0:
20,164,36031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,344,36194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36683,6,0,B|256:76|256:144|352:100,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,60,37172,2,0,P|472:124|468:164,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,288,37498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37661,2,0,P|348:200|384:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,360,37988,6,0,P|408:364|320:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,38477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,38640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,368,38803,2,0,P|112:324|116:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,39129,6,0,P|176:136|264:116,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,39618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,56,39781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,39944,2,0,P|264:208|304:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,40270,2,0,P|420:108|380:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,40596,6,0,B|237:67|237:67|224:97|224:97|229:148,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,41085,2,0,P|204:248|132:240,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,41575,2,0,P|116:356|156:352,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,41901,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,42064,1,8,0:3:0:0:
460,272,42227,2,0,P|408:280|376:288,1,64,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,42553,2,0,P|220:296|216:256,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,42879,2,0,P|108:176|104:216,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,352,43205,6,0,P|72:308|144:296,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,43694,2,0,P|292:260|288:200,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,44183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,156,44346,6,0,P|448:152|368:144,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,128,44835,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,128,45161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,253,45325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45814,6,0,P|102:157|94:69,1,128,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,46303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,46466,2,0,P|204:280|236:276,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,46792,2,0,P|352:192|384:196,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,47118,6,0,P|512:340|512:360,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,376,47444,2,0,P|328:320|328:300,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,47770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,336,47933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,184,48096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,208,48259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,312,48422,6,0,B|229:352|233:276|129:324,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,356,49075,6,0,P|108:280|20:292,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,200,49727,6,0,P|72:184|104:192,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,50053,2,0,P|220:236|252:228,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50379,5,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,50542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,50705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50868,6,0,P|316:260|324:368,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,51357,2,0,P|476:168|476:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,24,51683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,180,51846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,44,52010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,124,52172,6,0,B|231:115|231:115|184:132|184:132|121:122,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,48,52661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,236,52825,2,0,P|112:224|216:208,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,53314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,20,53477,6,0,P|304:100|296:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,53966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,136,54129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,54292,2,0,P|312:256|264:252,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,54618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,76,54781,6,0,P|376:76|440:192,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,364,55270,2,0,P|404:344|356:332,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55596,2,0,P|251:303|285:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,55922,2,0,P|356:212|370:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,356,56248,6,0,P|404:360|328:364,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,364,56738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,352,56819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,340,56901,2,0,P|140:288|136:240,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,108,57227,2,0,P|152:120|220:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,57553,6,0,P|344:188|344:284,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58205,2,0,P|456:320|452:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,58531,2,0,P|256:208|252:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,376,58857,6,0,B|243:369|243:369|285:345|285:345|348:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59509,2,0,P|504:176|496:148,1,80
352,76,59835,2,0,P|304:80|256:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,60161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,60325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,60488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,64,60651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,76,60732,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,88,60814,2,0,P|76:128|80:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,61140,2,0,P|152:308|208:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,214,61466,6,0,P|345:198|265:186,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,104,61955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,62118,2,0,P|316:80|312:124,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,62444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,112,62608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,62770,6,0,P|436:224|440:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,63096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,312,63259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,63422,2,0,P|272:204|224:212,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,132,63748,5,8,0:0:0:0:
76,171,63829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,211,63911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,251,63992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
86,291,64074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,344,64238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64727,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,152,64890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65216,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,352,66683,6,0,P|324:316|324:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,67172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,67335,2,0,P|448:240|396:236,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,67661,2,0,P|208:208|204:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,56,67988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,68151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,68314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,228,68477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,68640,2,0,P|316:124|360:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,68966,2,0,P|420:228|376:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,69292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,332,69455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,69618,2,0,P|256:192|252:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,69944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,168,70107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,336,70270,2,0,P|232:328|188:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,70596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,211,70759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,70922,2,0,P|108:288|112:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,71248,2,0,P|220:124|224:172,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,71575,2,0,P|340:280|344:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,84,71901,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,288,72064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,72227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,200,72390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,72553,2,0,P|224:268|156:276,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,72879,2,0,P|88:124|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,73205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,180,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,73532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,48,73694,2,0,P|184:56|136:64,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,160,74020,2,0,P|28:224|32:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,74346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,356,74509,6,0,P|56:332|88:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,74835,2,0,P|252:248|284:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,75161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,356,75325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,172,75488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,328,75651,6,0,P|448:320|340:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,340,76140,2,0,P|184:292|184:248,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,76466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,102,76547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,96,76629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,96,76710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,102,76792,1,8,0:3:0:0:
355,111,76873,1,8,0:3:0:0:
383,114,76955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
410,111,77036,1,8,0:3:0:0:
437,103,77118,6,0,P|420:156|408:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,77444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,240,77607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,77770,2,0,P|244:212|196:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,78096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,78259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,78422,5,2,0:0:0:0:
0,256,78585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,78748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,76,78911,2,0,P|72:160|72:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,79238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,79401,2,0,P|312:144|360:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,280,79727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,240,79890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,92,80053,2,0,P|504:148|508:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,336,80379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,80542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,328,80705,2,0,P|220:312|268:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,81031,6,0,B|451:312|451:312|434:270|434:270|439:206,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,81520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,81683,2,0,P|320:192|364:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,104,82009,2,0,P|464:96|420:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,82336,6,0,P|175:33|67:45,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,82825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82988,2,0,P|164:204|200:200,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,83314,2,0,P|292:100|256:96,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,40,83640,6,0,P|88:88|88:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,83966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,84129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,200,84292,2,0,P|36:204|72:210,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,84618,2,0,P|248:308|283:302,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,84944,6,0,P|432:132|424:88,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,85270,2,0,P|268:80|260:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,85596,2,0,L|276:232,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
140,320,85922,2,0,L|56:308,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,360,86248,6,0,B|288:344|288:344|336:356|336:356|320:280|352:228|428:236|448:316|412:328|376:312,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,87227,6,0,P|448:208|476:360,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,380,88205,6,0,L|280:376,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,88694,6,0,P|136:136|228:128,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,89183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,89346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,89509,2,0,P|208:268|212:320,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,376,89836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89998,6,0,P|444:156|340:104,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,12,90488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,188,90651,2,0,P|308:176|360:168,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,44,90976,2,0,P|428:32|376:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,91303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,91466,6,0,P|360:296|356:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,91792,2,0,P|152:232|148:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,92118,2,0,P|296:172|292:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,372,92444,2,0,P|128:352|84:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,196,92770,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,280,92933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,316,93096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,124,93259,2,0,P|168:172|176:216,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,380,93585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,244,93748,2,0,P|344:232|308:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,94075,6,0,P|108:256|112:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,32,94890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,212,95053,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,80,95216,6,0,P|264:80|320:156,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,95705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,224,95868,2,0,P|108:136|112:52,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,96357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,148,96520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,96683,6,0,P|440:244|516:248,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,97498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97661,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97988,6,0,P|276:192|272:240,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,98314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,204,98477,2,0,P|492:156|440:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,16,98966,2,0,P|256:28|180:44,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,36,99292,6,0,P|144:92|148:148,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,99618,2,0,P|224:224|228:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,92,99944,2,0,P|360:148|364:204,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,100270,2,0,P|360:328|312:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,100596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,100759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,352,100922,2,0,P|56:316|72:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,101411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,101574,2,0,P|248:236|212:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,101900,6,0,P|40:128|4:124,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,102389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,17,102552,2,0,P|193:61|201:105,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,336,103042,6,0,P|256:280|360:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,103531,2,0,P|480:248|472:288,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,103857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,176,104020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,356,104183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,232,104346,6,0,B|192:200|192:256|112:228,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,104835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,104998,6,0,P|272:60|368:72,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,105487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,332,105650,6,0,P|344:252|332:156,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,36,106139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,200,106302,6,0,P|164:152|256:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,172,106710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,180,106792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,288,106955,6,0,P|484:180|480:116,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,24,107444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,135,107607,6,0,B|245:190|245:190|262:237|262:237|250:312,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,372,108096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,176,108259,6,0,P|116:164|188:156,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,108748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,32,108912,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,220,109074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,204,109156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,188,109237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,8,109400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,192,109563,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109726,12,0,111683,0:0:0:0:

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-02-09T20:02:03+00:00

Hi! I'm here because Hazu threatened me :'(

nice song btw <3

[general]

01:39:333 - this red line on hazu's isnt accurate, so it should be removed imo D:
tags problem with hazu's

[hazu]
00:03:585 - podrías considerar hacer este beat clickable? 3/2 + circle quedaría super bien imo.
00:18:911 - Como esta es la última diff encuentro que estaría bien aplicar este triple que entrega la canción. Es como raro que no haya :d
00:28:368 (4) - podrías moverlo un poco más a la izq para que sea vea más estructurado el pattern.
00:58:042 (2,3,2,3) - en estos usas stack en el triple pero 00:56:738 (2,3) - acá no lo cual hace que se vea un poco inconsistente.
01:04:075 (5) - este nota no existe en la canción D: Dejarlo en un stream de 4 no queda mal tampoco así que podrías probar eliminando esa nota xd
01:14:020 (5,6) - ctrl+g el ritmo? Encuentro que le pegaría mejor ya que harías que 01:14:183 - sea cliqueable
01:43:572 (2) - Lo mismo me pasa con el primer triple que mencioné, al ser la última diff creo que sería mejor que enfatizaras mejor la batería acá con unos jumps que es bastante fuerte, y la verdad quedaría mejor poner jumps que 1/2+jumps.

[hard]
00:19:727 (1,4) - stack?
00:31:466 (4) - nc?
00:58:694 (5,1) - this DS is a bit too high compared to previous sections :d
01:30:325 (1,2,3) - 01:31:466 (1,2,3,4) - All these patterns felt so messy compared from the very first section. It's like the DS is not consistent at all if you look at them, try doing with similar spacing as you did 00:04:075 - here

[moei]
huh.. OD 1 feels more like for a beginner diffs xd. consider raising it to 2 or 3
no custom colors? D:

Didn't go through normal nor easy nor hitsounds because i'm lazy xd

GL!

Hazu-

3,881 posts

Joined July 2014

Hazu- 2017-02-10T02:59:33+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! I'm here because Hazu threatened me :'( </3

nice song btw <3

[general]
01:39:333 - this red line on hazu's isnt accurate, so it should be removed imo D: En el update de antes lo había arreglado xD
tags problem with hazu's Same.

[hazu]
00:03:585 - podrías considerar hacer este beat clickable? 3/2 + circle quedaría super bien imo. Fixed.
00:18:911 - Como esta es la última diff encuentro que estaría bien aplicar este triple que entrega la canción. Es como raro que no haya :d ^
00:28:368 (4) - podrías moverlo un poco más a la izq para que sea vea más estructurado el pattern. ^
00:58:042 (2,3,2,3) - en estos usas stack en el triple pero 00:56:738 (2,3) - acá no lo cual hace que se vea un poco inconsistente. ^
01:04:075 (5) - este nota no existe en la canción D: Dejarlo en un stream de 4 no queda mal tampoco así que podrías probar eliminando esa nota xd Cambié el 3 por un slider 1/2, no me gustan mucho los stream de 4 notas :c
01:14:020 (5,6) - ctrl+g el ritmo? Encuentro que le pegaría mejor ya que harías que 01:14:183 - sea cliqueable Cuando pueda lo voy a arreglar D:
01:43:572 (2) - Lo mismo me pasa con el primer triple que mencioné, al ser la última diff creo que sería mejor que enfatizaras mejor la batería acá con unos jumps que es bastante fuerte, y la verdad quedaría mejor poner jumps que 1/2+jumps. Fixed.

Didn't go through normal nor easy nor hitsounds because i'm lazy xd

GL!

Gracias <3

Poi

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Linear blue wo kikinagara1.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65542
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Linear Blue wo Kikinagara
TitleUnicode:リニアブルーを聴きながら
Artist:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
ArtistUnicode:UNISON SQUARE GARDEN
Creator:-NanoRIPE-
Version:Hazu's Insane
Source:劇場版 TIGER & BUNNY -The Beginning-
Tags:Ending Tiger & Bunny Movie The Beginning O-Moei Hazu- Cut Version
BeatmapID:972289
BeatmapSetID:427550

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Tiger_bunnyAJG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
162,326.086956521739,4,2,1,60,1,0
3504,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
3585,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
4074,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
14428,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
14509,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
17607,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,65,0,0
18096,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
19075,-200,4,2,1,65,0,0
19727,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
40596,-125,4,2,0,40,0,0
45814,-125,4,2,1,40,0,0
48422,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
48993,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49075,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49645,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
49727,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
49971,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50053,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
50297,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,5,0,0
50379,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,55,0,0
50868,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
66683,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
82335,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,60,0,1
86248,-125,4,2,0,50,0,0
88694,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
99210,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
99292,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
109767,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
111724,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 94,53,253
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 128,255,255

[HitObjects]
192,160,1466,6,0,P|140:152|104:148,2,80,12|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,228,1954,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,48,2118,2,0,P|292:112|296:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,280,2444,2,0,P|464:216|468:172,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,28,2770,5,4,0:0:0:0:
472,36,3259,2,0,P|400:28|336:24,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,3585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,140,3748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,135,3829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,131,3911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,127,3992,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,123,4075,6,0,P|276:184|272:224,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,4401,2,0,P|212:320|168:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,276,4727,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,4890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,360,5053,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,168,5216,6,0,P|196:140|256:200,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,232,5705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,299,5868,2,0,P|170:247|178:207,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,6194,2,0,P|264:56|296:68,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,24,6520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,172,6683,6,0,P|271:176|239:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,292,7009,2,0,P|142:296|174:300,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,7335,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,248,7498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,376,7661,2,0,P|192:372|224:368,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,7988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
276,176,8151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,8314,2,0,P|336:300|340:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,80,8640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,252,8803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,160,8966,2,0,P|396:152|352:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,9292,6,0,P|144:168|120:268,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,24,10107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,192,10270,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,100,10433,6,0,P|432:192|440:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,380,10923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,264,11085,2,0,P|180:172|188:84,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,20,11575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,176,11738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,64,11901,6,0,P|40:76|-4:160,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,92,12716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,156,12879,1,10,0:0:0:0:
92,156,13205,6,0,P|104:212|112:268,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,376,13531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,344,13694,2,0,P|136:312|224:288,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,14183,2,0,P|368:236|356:180,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,14509,6,0,P|296:168|248:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,24,14835,2,0,P|230:63|258:103,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,15161,2,0,P|173:164|193:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,28,15488,2,0,P|384:40|424:48,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,188,15814,5,2,0:0:0:0:
512,32,15977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,16140,2,0,P|352:212|360:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,368,16629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,356,16710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,344,16792,2,0,L|224:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,100,17118,6,0,P|176:96|136:92,2,80,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,17607,6,0,P|356:184|296:192,1,120.000004577637,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,284,18096,6,0,P|220:288|336:296,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,308,18993,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,308,19075,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,372,19727,6,0,L|112:360,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,284,20053,2,0,L|92:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,192,20379,2,0,L|128:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,104,20705,2,0,L|108:92,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,32,21031,6,0,P|248:80|244:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,116,21357,2,0,P|329:161|298:186,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,21683,2,0,P|320:276|280:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,22009,2,0,P|238:357|213:326,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,22335,6,0,L|164:156,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,40,22661,2,0,L|268:124,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,64,22988,2,0,L|188:84,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,220,23314,2,0,L|244:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,23640,6,0,L|112:288,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,23966,2,0,L|228:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,140,24292,2,0,L|329:244,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,320,24618,2,0,L|440:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,24944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,100,25107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25271,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,152,25596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
368,324,25759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,100,25922,1,4,0:0:0:0:
312,100,26248,6,0,P|280:164|168:172,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,296,26738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,112,26901,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,288,27064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,212,27227,2,0,P|72:196|112:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,92,27553,6,0,P|304:176|380:232,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,296,28042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,148,28205,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,336,28368,2,0,P|332:320|296:312,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,356,28694,6,0,B|184:300|184:300|167:253|167:253|177:190,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,29183,2,0,P|276:116|284:164,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,256,29510,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,116,29673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,29836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,80,30161,6,0,L|376:168,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,352,30488,2,0,P|312:336|280:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,30814,2,0,P|224:204|256:200,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,144,31140,2,0,L|452:232,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,31466,6,0,P|232:300|268:260,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,31792,2,0,P|324:72|288:32,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,132,32118,2,0,P|148:144|188:152,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,236,32444,2,0,P|364:224|404:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,80,32770,6,0,P|504:144|500:184,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,336,33096,2,0,P|432:312|400:308,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,364,33422,2,0,P|232:304|224:256,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,33749,2,0,P|120:156|112:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,332,34074,6,0,P|88:316|128:304,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,240,34401,2,0,P|276:224|236:212,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,34727,2,0,P|64:148|104:136,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,72,35054,2,0,P|252:56|212:44,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,24,35378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,152,35542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,164,35705,1,4,0:0:0:0:
20,164,36031,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,344,36194,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,104,36683,6,0,B|256:76|256:144|352:100,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,60,37172,2,0,P|472:124|468:164,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,288,37498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,192,37661,2,0,P|348:200|384:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,360,37988,6,0,P|408:364|320:372,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,38477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,276,38640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,368,38803,2,0,P|112:324|116:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,39129,6,0,P|176:136|264:116,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,216,39618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,56,39781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,39944,2,0,P|264:208|304:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,40270,2,0,P|420:108|380:100,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,16,40596,6,0,B|237:67|237:67|224:97|224:97|229:148,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,296,41085,2,0,P|204:248|132:240,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,368,41575,2,0,P|116:356|156:352,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,360,41901,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,200,42064,1,8,0:3:0:0:
460,272,42227,2,0,P|408:280|376:288,1,64,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,336,42553,2,0,P|220:296|216:256,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,136,42879,2,0,P|108:176|104:216,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,352,43205,6,0,P|72:308|144:296,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,344,43694,2,0,P|292:260|288:200,1,128,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,56,44183,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,156,44346,6,0,P|448:152|368:144,1,128,2|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
200,128,44835,1,8,0:3:0:0:
200,128,45161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,253,45325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45488,1,2,0:0:0:0:
110,209,45814,6,0,P|102:157|94:69,1,128,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,216,46303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,46466,2,0,P|204:280|236:276,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,46792,2,0,P|352:192|384:196,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,284,47118,6,0,P|512:340|512:360,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,376,47444,2,0,P|328:320|328:300,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,148,47770,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,336,47933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,184,48096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
504,208,48259,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,312,48422,6,0,B|229:352|233:276|129:324,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,356,49075,6,0,P|108:280|20:292,1,195.999994018555,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,200,49727,6,0,P|72:184|104:192,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,220,50053,2,0,P|220:236|252:228,1,83.9999974365235,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50379,5,8,0:0:0:0:
156,312,50542,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,120,50705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,196,50868,6,0,P|316:260|324:368,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,51357,2,0,P|476:168|476:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,24,51683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,180,51846,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,44,52010,1,8,0:0:0:0:
287,124,52172,6,0,B|231:115|231:115|184:132|184:132|121:122,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,48,52661,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,236,52825,2,0,P|112:224|216:208,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,53314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,20,53477,6,0,P|304:100|296:184,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,316,53966,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,136,54129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,260,54292,2,0,P|312:256|264:252,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,54618,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,76,54781,6,0,P|376:76|440:192,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,364,55270,2,0,P|404:344|356:332,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,332,55596,2,0,P|251:303|285:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,55922,2,0,P|356:212|370:259,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,356,56248,6,0,P|404:360|328:364,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,356,56738,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,364,56819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,364,56901,2,0,P|160:312|156:264,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,124,57227,2,0,P|168:136|236:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,136,57553,6,0,P|344:188|344:284,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,372,58205,2,0,P|456:320|452:280,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,156,58531,2,0,P|256:208|252:248,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,376,58857,6,0,B|243:369|243:369|285:345|285:345|348:338,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59346,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59428,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,240,59509,2,0,P|504:176|496:148,1,80
352,76,59835,2,0,P|304:80|256:88,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,60161,5,2,0:0:0:0:
192,40,60325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,188,60488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,64,60651,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,76,60732,1,2,0:0:0:0:
68,88,60814,2,0,P|76:128|80:180,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,61140,2,0,P|152:308|208:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,214,61466,6,0,P|345:198|265:186,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,104,61955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,24,62118,2,0,P|316:80|312:124,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,62444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,112,62608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,168,62770,6,0,P|436:224|440:268,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,368,63096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,312,63259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,63422,2,0,P|272:204|224:212,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,224,63748,5,8,0:0:0:0:
32,240,63829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,256,63911,2,0,P|72:264|112:284,1,80
272,368,64238,5,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64401,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,384,64727,5,8,0:0:0:0:
180,152,64890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65053,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65134,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,352,65216,1,10,0:0:0:0:
368,352,66683,6,0,P|324:316|324:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,67172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,248,67335,2,0,P|448:240|396:236,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,67661,2,0,P|208:208|204:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,56,67988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
100,216,68151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,56,68314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,228,68477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,68640,2,0,P|316:124|360:120,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,236,68966,2,0,P|420:228|376:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,276,69292,5,2,0:0:0:0:
384,332,69455,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,132,69618,2,0,P|256:192|252:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,69944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,168,70107,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,336,70270,2,0,P|232:328|188:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,244,70596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,211,70759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,352,70922,2,0,P|108:288|112:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,71248,2,0,P|220:124|224:172,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,71575,2,0,P|340:280|344:232,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,84,71901,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,288,72064,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,72227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,200,72390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,264,72553,2,0,P|224:268|156:276,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,120,72879,2,0,P|88:124|156:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,56,73205,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,180,73369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,73532,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,48,73694,2,0,P|184:56|136:64,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,160,74020,2,0,P|28:224|32:264,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,328,74346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,356,74509,6,0,P|56:332|88:316,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,74835,2,0,P|252:248|284:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,244,75161,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,356,75325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,172,75488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,328,75651,6,0,P|448:320|340:304,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,340,76140,2,0,P|184:292|184:248,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,76466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
246,102,76547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,96,76629,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,96,76710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,102,76792,1,8,0:3:0:0:
355,111,76873,1,8,0:3:0:0:
383,114,76955,1,8,0:3:0:0:
410,111,77036,1,8,0:3:0:0:
437,103,77118,6,0,P|420:156|408:204,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,336,77444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
508,240,77607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,77770,2,0,P|244:212|196:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,320,78096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,144,78259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,364,78422,5,2,0:0:0:0:
0,256,78585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,78748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,76,78911,2,0,P|72:160|72:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,296,79238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,79401,2,0,P|312:144|360:152,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,280,79727,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,240,79890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,92,80053,2,0,P|504:148|508:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,336,80379,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,152,80542,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,328,80705,2,0,P|220:312|268:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,368,81031,6,0,B|451:312|451:312|434:270|434:270|439:206,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,56,81520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,200,81683,2,0,P|320:192|364:188,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,104,82009,2,0,P|464:96|420:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,28,82336,6,0,P|175:33|67:45,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,82825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,208,82988,2,0,P|164:204|200:200,1,71.9999978027344,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,83314,2,0,P|292:100|256:96,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,40,83640,6,0,P|88:88|88:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,276,83966,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,84129,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,200,84292,2,0,P|36:204|72:210,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,312,84618,2,0,P|248:308|283:302,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,192,84944,6,0,P|432:132|424:88,1,71.9999978027344,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,20,85270,2,0,P|268:80|260:124,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,85596,2,0,L|276:232,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
140,320,85922,2,0,L|56:308,2,47.9999985351563,8|8|8,0:3|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
240,360,86248,6,0,B|288:344|288:344|336:356|336:356|320:280|352:228|428:236|448:316|412:328|376:312,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,216,87227,6,0,P|448:208|476:360,1,320,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,380,88205,6,0,L|280:376,1,64,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,144,88694,6,0,P|136:136|228:128,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,89183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,52,89346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,212,89509,2,0,P|208:268|212:320,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,376,89836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,208,89998,6,0,P|444:156|340:104,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,12,90488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,188,90651,2,0,P|308:176|360:168,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,44,90976,2,0,P|428:32|376:24,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,91303,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,240,91466,6,0,P|360:296|356:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,288,91792,2,0,P|152:232|148:184,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,116,92118,2,0,P|296:172|292:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,372,92444,2,0,P|128:352|84:340,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,196,92770,5,2,0:0:0:0:
228,280,92933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,316,93096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,124,93259,2,0,P|168:172|176:216,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,380,93585,1,2,0:0:0:0:
396,244,93748,2,0,P|344:232|308:224,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,94075,6,0,P|108:256|112:356,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,32,94890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,212,95053,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,80,95216,6,0,P|264:80|320:156,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,316,95705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,224,95868,2,0,P|108:136|112:52,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,48,96357,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,148,96520,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,248,96683,6,0,P|440:244|516:248,2,160,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,97498,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97661,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,124,97988,6,0,P|276:192|272:240,1,80,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,98314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,204,98477,2,0,P|492:156|440:56,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,16,98966,2,0,P|256:28|180:44,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,36,99292,6,0,P|144:92|148:148,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,280,99618,2,0,P|224:224|228:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,92,99944,2,0,P|360:148|364:204,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,336,100270,2,0,P|360:328|312:324,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,100596,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,100759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,352,100922,2,0,P|56:316|72:216,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,101411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,232,101574,2,0,P|248:236|212:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,132,101900,6,0,P|40:128|4:124,2,80,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,160,102389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,17,102552,2,0,P|193:61|201:105,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,336,103042,6,0,P|256:280|360:260,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,168,103531,2,0,P|488:232|480:272,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,344,103857,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,152,104020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,348,104183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,232,104346,6,0,B|192:200|192:256|112:228,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,144,104835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,48,104998,6,0,P|272:60|368:72,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,152,105487,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,332,105650,6,0,P|344:252|332:156,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,36,106139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,200,106302,6,0,P|164:152|256:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,172,106710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,180,106792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,288,106955,6,0,P|484:180|480:116,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,24,107444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,135,107607,6,0,B|245:190|245:190|262:237|262:237|250:312,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,372,108096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,176,108259,6,0,P|116:164|188:156,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,108748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,32,108912,5,4,0:0:0:0:
264,220,109074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,204,109156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,188,109237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,8,109400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,192,109563,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,109726,12,0,111683,0:0:0:0:

-NanoRIPE-

2,018 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

-NanoRIPE- 2017-02-10T05:23:10+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! I'm here because Hazu threatened me :'(

nice song btw <3

[hard]
[*]00:19:727 (1,4) - stack?
[*]00:31:466 (4) - nc?
[*]00:58:694 (5,1) - this DS is a bit too high compared to previous sections :d
[*]01:30:325 (1,2,3) - 01:31:466 (1,2,3,4) - All these patterns felt so messy compared from the very first section. It's like the DS is not consistent at all if you look at them, try doing with similar spacing as you did 00:04:075 - here - try something else

GL!

all fixed!
thanks iyiyo!

O-Moei

O-Moei 2017-02-10T12:54:57+00:00

SkyDevil wrote:
hii m4m from my queue

Moei's Easy

*00:04:401 - hmm maybe you can use a slidertick with a clap sound to fill up these empty holes without hitsounds. Especially at parts like 00:27:553 (5,6) they would add a lot to the beatmap
pls wait

*00:40:596 - why break here? the map is only 2 min long.. if the argument is used that easy players get tired quickly then I doubt a short break like this is gonna help much...
That's not the rhythm i hear

*01:24:944 (1) - I'm not a big fan of the spinner here, I think it would be better to map it out normally since the spinner sort of follows the vocals and then just awkwardly ends after 4 beats
ugh okei...
Good luck with your map! Im sure you can rank it

iYiyo wrote:
Hi! I'm here because Hazu threatened me :'(

nice song btw <3

[general]
01:39:333 - this red line on hazu's isnt accurate, so it should be removed imo D:
tags problem with hazu's

[moei]
huh.. OD 1 feels more like for a beginner diffs xd. consider raising it to 2 or 3
lol, how i forgot dis x'D
no custom colors? D:
oh, wat happened

Didn't go through normal nor easy nor hitsounds because i'm lazy xd

GL!

Ill see more about hitsounding, thx everyone XD
http://puu.sh/tWPk1/b4596a9730.osu

UNISON SQUARE GARDEN - Linear Blue wo Kikinagara

Sign In To Proceed

Don't have an account?

UNISON SQUARE GARDEN - Linear Blue wo Kikinagara

_kotachi_ wrote:

LeQuack wrote:

Kami-senpai wrote:

Mir wrote:

My Angel RangE wrote:

Agatsu wrote:

Nevo wrote:

SrSkyPlayer wrote:

yaleufeu wrote:

General

Moei's Easy

Normal

Hard

Hazu's Insane

Spork Lover wrote:

General

Normal

Hard

O-Moei wrote:

Spork Lover wrote:

6th wrote:

HB24 wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

Grafs wrote:

iYiyo wrote:

iYiyo wrote:

SkyDevil wrote:

iYiyo wrote:

New reply