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kamome sano - citrus [OsuMania]

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sherrysina
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 28, 2020 at 9:02:14 PM

Artist: kamome sano
Title: citrus
Source: jubeat prop
Tags: jubeat plus jubeat series SDVX 3 BEMANI SUMMER DIARY 2015
BPM: 174
Filesize: 3696kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. 4k Advanced - 4Key (2.62 stars, 717 notes)
  2. 4K Basic - 4Key (1.64 stars, 473 notes)
  3. 4K Extreme - 4Key (3.81 stars, 1023 notes)
  4. 6K Advanced - 6Key (2.41 stars, 723 notes)
  5. 6K Basic - 6Key (1.57 stars, 472 notes)
  6. 6K Extreme - 6Key (3.77 stars, 1088 notes)
Download: kamome sano - citrus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 (hopefully) FOR RANK

ready for mod!
Ortlinde
No kds. Just a quick mod
Will mod the others tomorrow
very sleepy here =w=

4K Extreme
  1. 00:01:820 (1820|3,2509|0) - make it into LN for consistency ( check 00:04:578 (4578|0,5268|3) - )
  2. 00:11:992 (11992|1,12078|2,12165|3) - 1/8
  3. 00:32:940 - add 1 note for hihat
  4. 00:34:234 - it doesn't deserve 2-noter. Delete 1 note (for consistency too)
  5. 00:39:751 (39751|2) - ^
  6. 00:39:837 - add 1 note for hihat
  7. 00:40:440 (40440|0) - change column to emphasize the sound difference
  8. 00:41:820 (41820|1) - change column too
  9. 00:48:027 (48027|0) - 2-noter since it has a kick and melody
  10. 00:49:406 - Delete 1 note
  11. 00:49:492 - Add 1 note
  12. 01:04:578 - Delete 1 note
  13. 01:04:665 - Add 1 note (change the rest too)
  14. 01:11:303 (71303|2,71303|1) - Delete 1 note since it has no kick (and for the drop too)
  15. 01:26:820 - Add 1 note for piano
-BANGKE-
helo :>

m4m

1|2|3|4

general
  1. add " jubeat plus / jubeat plus (Android) BEMANI SUMMER DIARY 2015 pack "
  2. add KONAMI di sebelah bemani nya

4k extrem
00:02:682 - missing
00:05:440 - ^
00:06:647 - ^
00:11:647 - > 00:12:337 - wrong snap, coba ini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692903
00:15:785 (15785|0,15871|1,15958|3,16001|2,16044|1,16087|0,16130|3) - wrong snap, ini 1/6
00:25:096 - knp ga di kasih note kyk gini aja? 00:23:716 (23716|3) -
00:27:165 (27165|3,27208|2,27251|1,27294|0) - wrong snap, 1/6
00:27:380 (27380|2,27466|0) - ghost, delete
00:27:854 - kasih note kyk yang tadi
00:36:475 (36475|0,36561|2) - ctrl j, 00:36:647 (36647|0,36820|2) - ctrl j, flownya lebih enak
00:42:165 (42165|3,42337|3,42509|3,42682|3) - kebanyakan D:, re arrange lagi aja
00:51:130 - knp mulai dari sini kosong? kasih note aja biar ada bedanya sama diff lain
01:06:992 (66992|3,67165|3,67337|3,67509|3) - sama nih, kebanyakan
00:59:492 - masih ada synth, add note
01:21:820 (81820|3,81992|2,82165|1,82337|3,82509|1) - ini 1/6
01:23:199 - wrong snap, mestinya kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692959
01:26:820 - masih ada pianonya, add note
01:41:130 (101130|2,101303|2,101475|2,101647|2) - kebanyakaaan xD, 01:41:647 (101647|2,101820|1) - ctrl h
01:54:234 (114234|1) - pindahin ke 1

antimeta extrem
00:02:682 - missing sama kek di mod sebelumnya
00:05:440 - ^
00:06:647 - ^
00:11:906 (11906|0,11992|1,12078|2,12165|3,12251|4,12337|5,12337|0) - wrong snap, samain aja kek mod sebelumnya
00:14:751 (14751|3,15785|0,15871|1,15958|5,16001|4,16044|3,16087|2,16130|1,16245|0,16360|5,16475|2,16475|3) - sama nih kek sebelumnya
00:27:165 - sini juga, samain aja yah kek di mod sebelumnya
rata" sih sama problemnya, cek ulang aja
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Ortlinde wrote:

No kds. Just a quick mod
Will mod the others tomorrow
very sleepy here =w=

4K Extreme
  1. 00:01:820 (1820|3,2509|0) - make it into LN for consistency ( check 00:04:578 (4578|0,5268|3) - ) no, 00:04:578 (4578|0,5268|3) - are for that loud synth.
  2. 00:11:992 (11992|1,12078|2,12165|3) - 1/8
  3. 00:32:940 - add 1 note for hihat
  4. 00:34:234 - it doesn't deserve 2-noter. Delete 1 note (for consistency too) that double notes are for that loud synth too
  5. 00:39:751 (39751|2) - ^ ^
  6. 00:39:837 - add 1 note for hihat
  7. 00:40:440 (40440|0) - change column to emphasize the sound difference
  8. 00:41:820 (41820|1) - change column too this and mod above are making me confused @@
  9. 00:48:027 (48027|0) - 2-noter since it has a kick and melody
  10. 00:49:406 - Delete 1 note no no
  11. 00:49:492 - Add 1 note fixed. also re-arranged some :>
  12. 01:04:578 - Delete 1 note
  13. 01:04:665 - Add 1 note (change the rest too) the rest? can't you tell me which? :<
  14. 01:11:303 (71303|2,71303|1) - Delete 1 note since it has no kick (and for the drop too) for that loud synth
  15. 01:26:820 - Add 1 note for piano keep for now, it will break the flow

-BANGKE- wrote:

helo :>

m4m

1|2|3|4

general
  1. add " jubeat plus / jubeat plus (Android) BEMANI SUMMER DIARY 2015 pack "
  2. add KONAMI di sebelah bemani nya

done

4k extrem
00:02:682 - missing
00:05:440 - ^
00:06:647 - ^ ^^^ missing apa ya? ga denger apa apa itu @@
00:11:647 - > 00:12:337 - wrong snap, coba ini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692903 re-arranged
00:15:785 (15785|0,15871|1,15958|3,16001|2,16044|1,16087|0,16130|3) - wrong snap, ini 1/6 ....1/6? @@
00:25:096 - knp ga di kasih note kyk gini aja? 00:23:716 (23716|3) - added, dan untuk seterusnya
00:27:165 (27165|3,27208|2,27251|1,27294|0) - wrong snap, 1/6
00:27:380 (27380|2,27466|0) - ghost, delete
00:27:854 - kasih note kyk yang tadi
00:36:475 (36475|0,36561|2) - ctrl j, 00:36:647 (36647|0,36820|2) - ctrl j, flownya lebih enak keep, bagiku flow yang itu lebih enak..
00:42:165 (42165|3,42337|3,42509|3,42682|3) - kebanyakan D:, re arrange lagi aja D: ada saran? itu flownya udah enak sebenernya
00:51:130 - knp mulai dari sini kosong? kasih note aja biar ada bedanya sama diff lain
01:06:992 (66992|3,67165|3,67337|3,67509|3) - sama nih, kebanyakan sama seperti sebelumnya..?
00:59:492 - masih ada synth, add note keep deh
01:21:820 (81820|3,81992|2,82165|1,82337|3,82509|1) - ini 1/6 1/16 D:
01:23:199 - wrong snap, mestinya kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4692959
01:26:820 - masih ada pianonya, add note keep dulu
01:41:130 (101130|2,101303|2,101475|2,101647|2) - kebanyakaaan xD, 01:41:647 (101647|2,101820|1) - ctrl h
01:54:234 (114234|1) - pindahin ke 1

antimeta extrem
00:02:682 - missing sama kek di mod sebelumnya
00:05:440 - ^
00:06:647 - ^
00:11:906 (11906|0,11992|1,12078|2,12165|3,12251|4,12337|5,12337|0) - wrong snap, samain aja kek mod sebelumnya
00:14:751 (14751|3,15785|0,15871|1,15958|5,16001|4,16044|3,16087|2,16130|1,16245|0,16360|5,16475|2,16475|3) - sama nih kek sebelumnya
00:27:165 - sini juga, samain aja yah kek di mod sebelumnya
rata" sih sama problemnya, cek ulang aja
no rep means okay.
untuk 6K Extreme nya, mod replies sama kaya yang 4k ext
terima kasiiih modnya >w<
buat bangjay, mod untuk fire fire nya ditunggu ya~

UPDATED!
ilikecatsalot
Really enjoyed the map! hope this gets ranked! owo
Cipse
Same here :D
Love the 6K difficulties
Topic Starter
sherrysina

TheFishOnCrack wrote:

Really enjoyed the map! hope this gets ranked! owo

Cipse wrote:

Same here :D
Love the 6K difficulties
oh my god, thank you so much guys!! :'3
Cipse
Hi, just a random mod.
I'm pretty new to modding/mapping, so tell me if I give crap advice.

6K Basic


Add a note here - 00:50:605? It follows the melody. If you add a note, consider moving 00:50:432 (50432|1) - to 00:50:432 (50432|2) -, for a stair pattern

01:01:992 (61992|2) - move to 01:01:992 (61992|4) -, as the area is slightly dense
01:13:019 (73019|2) - move to 01:13:019 (73019|4) -, as above. If you move it, move 01:12:846 (72846|4) - to 01:12:846 (72846|3) -

01:26:927 (86927|0,87157|2,87386|3,87616|4) - these are also on the triplet beats, plus the pattern starts on a triplet. I'm not sure if a player at this level would notice that they are evenly spaced (in terms of timings). I don't really know what else to do, maybe try out 01:26:812+01:26:927+01:27:042+LN 01:27:157?

01:30:260 (90260|5,90260|1,90490|4,90490|0,90720|2,90720|3) - Maybe change it to 01:30:260+01:30:490+01:30:720, with a stair pattern, since it is on the triplets whilst being dense

4K Basic


Again, consider adding a note here: 00:50:605. If you do, maybe remove one from 00:50:958 (50958|0,50958|1) -
01:26:935 (86935|3,87394|2,87624|0) - see 6K Basic
01:30:268 to 01:30:728 - consider changing it to {1,3}+{2,4}+{1,3}, since they are on the triplets. I do think these ones need two notes, unlike the 6K difficulty.

General Stuff


Consider looking at changing the offset to 1295 - make sure you test this, I'm not entirely confident in my listening :lol: (I'm using https://osu.ppy.sh/s/4659)
Consider changing the OD of 4/6K Extreme to 8.5 or 9, since there are a lot of stair patterns for the difficulty's star ratings

__

Good luck :D
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Cipse wrote:

Hi, just a random mod.
I'm pretty new to modding/mapping, so tell me if I give crap advice.

6K Basic


Add a note here - 00:50:605? It follows the melody. If you add a note, consider moving 00:50:432 (50432|1) - to 00:50:432 (50432|2) -, for a stair pattern

01:01:992 (61992|2) - move to 01:01:992 (61992|4) -, as the area is slightly dense
01:13:019 (73019|2) - move to 01:13:019 (73019|4) -, as above. If you move it, move 01:12:846 (72846|4) - to 01:12:846 (72846|3) -

01:26:927 (86927|0,87157|2,87386|3,87616|4) - these are also on the triplet beats, plus the pattern starts on a triplet. I'm not sure if a player at this level would notice that they are evenly spaced (in terms of timings). I don't really know what else to do, maybe try out 01:26:812+01:26:927+01:27:042+LN 01:27:157?

01:30:260 (90260|5,90260|1,90490|4,90490|0,90720|2,90720|3) - Maybe change it to 01:30:260+01:30:490+01:30:720, with a stair pattern, since it is on the triplets whilst being dense

4K Basic


Again, consider adding a note here: 00:50:605. If you do, maybe remove one from 00:50:958 (50958|0,50958|1) -
01:26:935 (86935|3,87394|2,87624|0) - see 6K Basic
01:30:268 to 01:30:728 - consider changing it to {1,3}+{2,4}+{1,3}, since they are on the triplets. I do think these ones need two notes, unlike the 6K difficulty.

General Stuff


Consider looking at changing the offset to 1295 - make sure you test this, I'm not entirely confident in my listening :lol: (I'm using https://osu.ppy.sh/s/4659)
Consider changing the OD of 4/6K Extreme to 8.5 or 9, since there are a lot of stair patterns for the difficulty's star ratings

__

Good luck :D

you're so kind.. i'm touched x'3
i will reply and apply your mods as soon as possible.. thank you!
kudosu, sent! owo)7
YatsuKaori
Hey ho Nurul Cherry Sherry
just looking old request~ and gw keknya denger lagu ini berasa berlibur di bali kwkwkw


Key = |1|2|3|4|5|6|

6K Basic
00:06:820 (6820|1) - move to 5
00:13:371 (13371|5) - ini ikutin apa? kalo suara ngueng ngueng gitu mending pake LN, endnya di double note itu
00:18:716 (18716|0) - change to LN

LN 1 : 00:18:716 - s/d 00:18:889 -
LN 2 : 00:18:889 - s/d 00:19:061 -
LN 3 : dari LN 2 end LN 00:19:234 -

00:24:234 (24234|0) - ^ same tbh make LN
00:58:889 (58889|4) - ^ LN?

4K Basic
00:58:889 (58889|3) - enakan LN daripada note note gini kurang ngeh aku. Kalo aku map lagu ini mah pasti pake LN kalo nemu suara yang sejenis dengan ini
01:21:130 (81130|0) - pindahin ke atas di white ticknya

6K Advance
00:37:509 (37509|1,37682|2) - ctrl+J lah biar asiik
00:40:268 (40268|2) - move to another column in right (4/5)
00:41:647 (41647|3) - move to 3
00:44:234 (44234|0,44320|1,44406|2,44492|3,44578|4,44665|5,44751|4,44837|3,44923|2,45009|1,45096|0,45182|1,45268|2,45354|3,45440|5,45440|4) - sebenarnya ga ada masalah apa apa si sama pattern ini, but aku kasi nilai + sama pattern ini. I Like It

4K Advance
00:20:268 (20268|2) - enakan di kolom 2 si, but terserah kamu sih ^^
00:30:440 (30440|2,31130|1,31303|2) - ctrl+H first and then 00:30:440 (30440|1) - move to 1

overall menurutku udah bagus si

GL ya Sherry~
leoudel
little thing, please change "SDVX 3" into "SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS" since sdvx 3 grv wars is other Music Game Appearances
Topic Starter
sherrysina

leoudel wrote:

little thing, please change "SDVX 3" into "SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS" since sdvx 3 grv wars is other Music Game Appearances
gonna update, thanks
dan maaf, gd nya di cancel aja ya x'D kepingin nerusin sendirian
Cipse
Hey, this has been revived.
I'll probably do another mod, when I'm free, to see if I can improve on my previous one.

I'm not as new as before but I'll probably still give crap advise :lol:
Cipse
A slightly better mod than last time, or at least I hope it is :lol:
No kudosu, as it is a re-mod

Edit: Why did you give me kudosu, I even said in the beginning not to :cry:

0 1 2 3 4 5

6K Basic


00:06:992 (6992|3,7165|0,7337|3) - instead of using an {x,y,x} pattern, I would stick to using patterns like 00:04:234 (4234|2,4406|3,4578|4) - or 00:04:923 (4923|1,5096|3,5268|5) -. That's because there's nothing musically that suggests this pattern
00:07:682 (7682|5,7854|2,8027|5) - as with above
00:08:371 (8371|1,8544|4,8716|1) -

00:22:509 - I'm pretty sure you want a double here - to keep consistent with 00:21:992 (21992|1,21992|0) -, 00:20:268 (20268|4,20268|5) -, etc

00:50:613 - a note here for the melody?

00:57:509 - did you want a double here? It has the same sound as at 00:56:475 (56475|1,56475|0) -
01:00:268 - as with above when compared to 00:59:234 (59234|1,59234|2) -

I'm not too sure but consider adding a note at 01:00:785 - and 01:00:958 - for the bass. I'd make it a jack in {5}

01:14:923 (74923|0,75096|4,75268|0,75440|4) - I don't like this {x,y,x,y} pattern. I'd keep {a,y,b,y}, since the 2nd/4th notes have the same pithces but change the columns of the 1st/3rd notes

01:29:578 - I'd add another note here, since its a piano chord, not a note
01:30:096 - as with above

I think an LN suits 01:32:165 (92165|1) - better. Also, it's not like this is going to make the difficulty much harder to play :)

4K Basic



00:21:992 - double, as with 6K

00:50:613 - add a note, as with 6K

00:57:509 - add a note, as with 6K
01:00:268 - ^

01:00:785 - add a note, as with 6K
01:00:958 - ^

01:14:923 (74923|3,75096|0,75268|3,75440|0) - as with 6K, I'd use a different pattern. Consider {3,0,3,1} - that way you only need to change 01:15:440 (75440|0) -

01:29:578 - add note, as with 6K
01:30:096 - ^

01:32:165 (92165|2) - change to LN, as with 6K

4K/6K Advanced


00:33:889 - I think you forgot a note

Maybe move the end of 00:50:785 (50785|5) - to 00:52:854 - and change 00:52:854 (52854|0) - into an LN. I can't see why 00:52:854 (52854|0) - is an SN and why 00:50:785 (50785|5) - extends past it

00:54:923 (54923|4) - this sound ends at 00:55:613 -

01:21:303 - I think the piano chord deserves a double :D
01:24:061 - ^
01:25:440 - ^

01:30:096 - double here for the piano chord?

6K Extreme


00:07:854 - I'm not sure why this is a double
00:09:234 - ^
00:10:613 - ^

00:21:820 - not sure why this is a double

00:32:940 - did you forget a note here? (drums)
00:36:992 - ^ (melody)
00:39:837 - ^ (drums)

00:50:785 (50785|2) - um, isn't this supposed to end at 00:52:854 -?

I'd like it better if 00:59:061 (59061|2,59104|1,59147|0) - was changed into a {0,1,2}. It looks neater to me

01:04:665 - forgetting a note? (drums)
01:06:044 - ^ (drums)

Between 01:07:509 - and 01:08:889 - is mapped really weirdly, as in you haven't mapped any other parts of this difficulty in this way. I'm pretty sure it's because you removed the drums, so add them back in :)

01:10:182 - missing a note? (drums)
01:15:699 - ^ (drums)
01:26:820 - ^ (piano)
01:27:050 - ^ (piano)
01:27:509 - ^ (piano)

_

That's about it. Tell me if you want any clarifications
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Cipse wrote:

A slightly better mod than last time, or at least I hope it is :lol:
No kudosu, as it is a re-mod

Edit: Why did you give me kudosu, I even said in the beginning not to :cry:

0 1 2 3 4 5

6K Basic


00:06:992 (6992|3,7165|0,7337|3) - instead of using an {x,y,x} pattern, I would stick to using patterns like 00:04:234 (4234|2,4406|3,4578|4) - or 00:04:923 (4923|1,5096|3,5268|5) -. That's because there's nothing musically that suggests this pattern
00:07:682 (7682|5,7854|2,8027|5) - as with above
00:08:371 (8371|1,8544|4,8716|1) -

00:22:509 - I'm pretty sure you want a double here - to keep consistent with 00:21:992 (21992|1,21992|0) -, 00:20:268 (20268|4,20268|5) -, etc

00:50:613 - a note here for the melody?

00:57:509 - did you want a double here? It has the same sound as at 00:56:475 (56475|1,56475|0) -
01:00:268 - as with above when compared to 00:59:234 (59234|1,59234|2) -

I'm not too sure but consider adding a note at 01:00:785 - and 01:00:958 - for the bass. I'd make it a jack in {5}

01:14:923 (74923|0,75096|4,75268|0,75440|4) - I don't like this {x,y,x,y} pattern. I'd keep {a,y,b,y}, since the 2nd/4th notes have the same pithces but change the columns of the 1st/3rd notes

01:29:578 - I'd add another note here, since its a piano chord, not a note
01:30:096 - as with above

I think an LN suits 01:32:165 (92165|1) - better. Also, it's not like this is going to make the difficulty much harder to play :)

4K Basic



00:21:992 - double, as with 6K

00:50:613 - add a note, as with 6K

00:57:509 - add a note, as with 6K
01:00:268 - ^

01:00:785 - add a note, as with 6K
01:00:958 - ^

01:14:923 (74923|3,75096|0,75268|3,75440|0) - as with 6K, I'd use a different pattern. Consider {3,0,3,1} - that way you only need to change 01:15:440 (75440|0) -

01:29:578 - add note, as with 6K
01:30:096 - ^

01:32:165 (92165|2) - change to LN, as with 6K

4K/6K Advanced


00:33:889 - I think you forgot a note

Maybe move the end of 00:50:785 (50785|5) - to 00:52:854 - and change 00:52:854 (52854|0) - into an LN. I can't see why 00:52:854 (52854|0) - is an SN and why 00:50:785 (50785|5) - extends past it

00:54:923 (54923|4) - this sound ends at 00:55:613 -

01:21:303 - I think the piano chord deserves a double :D
01:24:061 - ^
01:25:440 - ^

01:30:096 - double here for the piano chord?

6K Extreme


00:07:854 - I'm not sure why this is a double
00:09:234 - ^
00:10:613 - ^

00:21:820 - not sure why this is a double

00:32:940 - did you forget a note here? (drums)
00:36:992 - ^ (melody)
00:39:837 - ^ (drums)

00:50:785 (50785|2) - um, isn't this supposed to end at 00:52:854 -?

I'd like it better if 00:59:061 (59061|2,59104|1,59147|0) - was changed into a {0,1,2}. It looks neater to me

01:04:665 - forgetting a note? (drums)
01:06:044 - ^ (drums)

Between 01:07:509 - and 01:08:889 - is mapped really weirdly, as in you haven't mapped any other parts of this difficulty in this way. I'm pretty sure it's because you removed the drums, so add them back in :)

01:10:182 - missing a note? (drums)
01:15:699 - ^ (drums)
01:26:820 - ^ (piano)
01:27:050 - ^ (piano)
01:27:509 - ^ (piano)

_

That's about it. Tell me if you want any clarifications
thank you so much
some are applied, some are not.. sorry cannot reply ;w;
Envory


Hi Sherry!
Sorry just Modding 4K ._.

And Please check your AiMod for All Diff.. There have some problems

|1|2|3|4|




4K Basic
00:15:777 - Why blank? you can add LN at col 2 and 00:16:122 - add LN at col 4 so didn't look so empty and i think not too excess for Basic
00:26:639 (26639|0) - Add a notes like this i think didn't hard for newbie > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067101
00:56:984 (56984|1) - Add 1 note at col 1 for kick
00:58:536 - Add 1 note at col 1
00:58:708 - Add 1 note at col 2
01:53:881 (113881|2) - Move this note to col 4
01:54:053 (114053|3) - Move this note to col 3



4K Advanced
00:20:260 (20260|2,20260|0) - Move 1 note at col 4
00:25:260 (25260|2,25260|0,25432|1) - Didn't it upside down pattern?? didn't "Tak" sound must be taken 2 notes for beggining?.. Then Move 1 note at col 1 at 00:25:260 (25260|2,25260|0) - to 00:25:432 (25432|1) - to col 1
00:28:019 (28019|1,28019|2,28191|0) - Same like above ^
00:31:122 (31122|1,31122|0,31295|2) - This too ^
01:11:812 (71812|1,71812|0) - Delete 1 note at col 1.. (Not too louder)



4K Extreme
00:06:295 (6295|0) - Add 1 note at col 2 .. (This one are different like before)
01:39:743 (99743|3,99743|2) - Delete 1 note at col 4
01:47:501 (107501|0,107501|3) - Move 1 note at col 1 to col 3 (You must know my reason)
01:47:846 (107846|2,107846|0) - Move 1 note at col 3 to col 4 ^



Nice Map!
Goodluck~ :)
Eldergleam


Hello Sherry, from Ngeng Queue
pake bahasa indo aja ya biar mudah
/1/2/3/4/5/6/

6K Basic
00:04:053 (4053|0) - ga double? referensi 00:01:295 (1295|0,1295|5) -
00:11:639 (11639|2,11726|3,11898|1) - ganti ke LN? referensi 00:11:984 (11984|4) -
00:18:708 (18708|0,18881|2,19053|4) - ctrl+H terus 00:19:226 (19226|1) - pindah ke 5
00:22:846 (22846|4,23019|3,23191|1) - LN?
00:42:329 (42329|4,42501|3) - ganti jadi LN aja mah ini
00:58:881 (58881|4,59053|3) - ^
01:01:812 (61812|3) - keknya ga diperlukan ini deh, hapus aja mending
01:12:846 (72846|4) - ^
01:21:122 (81122|4) - pindahin ke garis putihnya
01:32:329 - ga dikasih LN?

6K Advanced
00:32:501 (32501|5,32501|0,32674|3) - salah peletakan notenya, yang single note jadi double, yang double jadi single
00:40:260 (40260|2) - move to 5
00:41:639 (41639|3) - move to 3
00:43:536 (43536|1,43536|0,43708|5) - sama kek mod pertama
00:49:570 (49570|2) - move to 2?

4K Basic
00:18:708 (18708|3,18881|1,19053|0) - ganti jadi LN
00:24:226 (24226|0,24398|3,24570|1) - ^
00:40:950 (40950|0) - ganti jadi LN, finishnya di note 00:41:295 (41295|2) -
00:57:501 (57501|0) - double?
00:58:881 (58881|3,59053|2) - ganti jadi LN
01:00:260 (60260|0) - double
01:32:674 (92674|1,92846|3) - ctrl+J


itu aja, moga membantu. Goodluck for Ranking
Topic Starter
sherrysina

Mai9392 wrote:



Hi Sherry!
Sorry just Modding 4K ._.

And Please check your AiMod for All Diff.. There have some problems fixed, thanks!

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4K Basic
00:15:777 - Why blank? you can add LN at col 2 and 00:16:122 - add LN at col 4 so didn't look so empty and i think not too excess for Basic no, in the first place i don't want to follow that snare
00:26:639 (26639|0) - Add a notes like this i think didn't hard for newbie > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067101 skip for now
00:56:984 (56984|1) - Add 1 note at col 1 for kick
00:58:536 - Add 1 note at col 1
00:58:708 - Add 1 note at col 2
01:53:881 (113881|2) - Move this note to col 4
01:54:053 (114053|3) - Move this note to col 3

sorry, rejected for all TT it



4K Advanced
00:20:260 (20260|2,20260|0) - Move 1 note at col 4 emm, i don't whink that will make my pattern is comfortable to play. the combination between these 00:20:260 (20260|2,20260|0) - and this stair 00:21:467 (21467|3,21553|2,21639|1,21812|0) - is nice to be played.
i don't want it to be uncomfortable either for pros and newbies..

00:25:260 (25260|2,25260|0,25432|1) - Didn't it upside down pattern?? didn't "Tak" sound must be taken 2 notes for beggining?.. Then Move 1 note at col 1 at 00:25:260 (25260|2,25260|0) - to 00:25:432 (25432|1) - to col 1 moved the notes, but does that snare sound has to be double-notted? apa harus? ._.
00:28:019 (28019|1,28019|2,28191|0) - Same like above ^ I decided to skip this
00:31:122 (31122|1,31122|0,31295|2) - This too ^ This too^
01:11:812 (71812|1,71812|0) - Delete 1 note at col 1.. (Not too louder) no, it will ruin the consistency



4K Extreme
00:06:295 (6295|0) - Add 1 note at col 2 .. (This one are different like before) for what sound/melody?
01:39:743 (99743|3,99743|2) - Delete 1 note at col 4 keep..
01:47:501 (107501|0,107501|3) - Move 1 note at col 1 to col 3 (You must know my reason) no, unbalanced note with 01:46:984 (106984|2,107157|2) -
01:47:846 (107846|2,107846|0) - Move 1 note at col 3 to col 4 ^ ^, with 01:47:501 (107501|3,108363|3) -



Nice Map!
Goodluck~ :) thank you!!

Eldergleam wrote:



Hello Sherry, from Ngeng Queue
pake bahasa indo aja ya biar mudah
/1/2/3/4/5/6/

6K Basic
00:04:053 (4053|0) - ga double? referensi 00:01:295 (1295|0,1295|5) - engga, soalnya di awal itu ada crash. beda sama yang itu
00:11:639 (11639|2,11726|3,11898|1) - ganti ke LN? referensi 00:11:984 (11984|4) - engga, 4knya juga gitu
00:18:708 (18708|0,18881|2,19053|4) - ctrl+H terus 00:19:226 (19226|1) - pindah ke 5 no... menurutku untuk basic 6k seperti ini, perpindahan antara jari tengah sama jari manis masih susah.
00:22:846 (22846|4,23019|3,23191|1) - LN? LN untuk snarenya ya? engga deh, aku mau ngikutin melodynya aja
00:42:329 (42329|4,42501|3) - ganti jadi LN aja mah ini keep for now
00:58:881 (58881|4,59053|3) - ^ keep for now
01:01:812 (61812|3) - keknya ga diperlukan ini deh, hapus aja mending
01:12:846 (72846|4) - ^ coba dengar, itu ada sound loh
01:21:122 (81122|4) - pindahin ke garis putihnya i consider to move that to 6, lalu di garis putihnya aku add note
01:32:329 - ga dikasih LN? engga

6K Advanced
00:32:501 (32501|5,32501|0,32674|3) - salah peletakan notenya, yang single note jadi double, yang double jadi single does that snare sound has to be double-notted? apa harus? ._. (2)
00:40:260 (40260|2) - move to 5
00:41:639 (41639|3) - move to 3 ini dan ^ punya pitch yang sama
00:43:536 (43536|1,43536|0,43708|5) - sama kek mod pertama dan jawabannya sama....
00:49:570 (49570|2) - move to 2? masih pitch yang sama

4K Basic
00:18:708 (18708|3,18881|1,19053|0) - ganti jadi LN
00:24:226 (24226|0,24398|3,24570|1) - ^ ini dan ^ no..
00:40:950 (40950|0) - ganti jadi LN, finishnya di note 00:41:295 (41295|2) - hmm keep dulu deh
00:57:501 (57501|0) - double? engga, nggak konsisten sama 01:00:260 (60260|0) -
00:58:881 (58881|3,59053|2) - ganti jadi LN keep for now
01:00:260 (60260|0) - double no
01:32:674 (92674|1,92846|3) - ctrl+J no... nggak balance notenya


itu aja, moga membantu. Goodluck for Ranking thank you!
no rep means okay
sampe 2 yang garap, terima kasih banyak yaa! take my kudos! /o/
Hotaru-
olaaa

simple mod owo
req via gc efbi

srsly dah cukup bagus owo



Kolom
1|2|3|4|5|6|7


[GENERAL]
diff basic kurang nunjukin kalo itu basic,,, how about change it into novice owo

[4K advanced]
mappingnya unik seperti biasa
bahkan ini bukan generic mapping di 2017 wgwgwg
btw gak bisa ngasih banyak buat diff ini....
dari strukturnya meskipun kaga ngikut ke PR tapi dah nyaman di mainin

00:44:226 - hmmm mungkin ini pattern yang aneh tapi setelah ku pikir" beberapa kali bagian ini rasanya kurang srek kalau cuma di buat stairs


sedikit penjelasan pada bagian 00:44:570 - nadanya sudah berbeda dengan bagian sebelumnya, seperti memulai melodi baru ( entah gimana cara nyebutnya awkawkawk )

01:06:295 - hmmm masih mirip sama diatas tapi kebetulan base patternnya lebih enak buatdi kreasikan jadi sarannya seperti ini


oh ya pengecualian buat 01:36:639 - pianonya dah pas yang ini jadi no comment =w=

[6K Extreme]
aaaa top ten best 6K mapping
easy to read and tap

00:32:157 - hmmm literally terasaa berat di tangan dan next partnya bikin kaget gimana kalo gini


paternnya lebih enak buat di baca dan gak bikin kaget

00:45:088 (45088|2,45088|4) - 01:49:226 (109226|1,109226|3) - asdkjasxfcvhsadfljkasf bikin kaget aaaaaaaa

00:59:053 (59053|2,59096|1,59139|0) - ctrl + J buat variasi


bakal di lanjutin lagi nanti owo
Topic Starter
sherrysina

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

olaaa

simple mod owo
req via gc efbi

srsly dah cukup bagus owo



Kolom
1|2|3|4|5|6|7


[GENERAL]
diff basic kurang nunjukin kalo itu basic,,, how about change it into novice owo i'll consider it later

[4K advanced]
mappingnya unik seperti biasa aku tersanjung, makasih ya kiii
bahkan ini bukan generic mapping di 2017 wgwgwg
btw gak bisa ngasih banyak buat diff ini....
dari strukturnya meskipun kaga ngikut ke PR tapi dah nyaman di mainin

00:44:226 - hmmm mungkin ini pattern yang aneh tapi setelah ku pikir" beberapa kali bagian ini rasanya kurang srek kalau cuma di buat stairs okay, aku jg arrange beberapa note atasnya biar tetep enak dan balance


sedikit penjelasan pada bagian 00:44:570 - nadanya sudah berbeda dengan bagian sebelumnya, seperti memulai melodi baru ( entah gimana cara nyebutnya awkawkawk )

01:06:295 - hmmm masih mirip sama diatas tapi kebetulan base patternnya lebih enak buatdi kreasikan jadi sarannya seperti ini hmm untuk yang ini beta keep


oh ya pengecualian buat 01:36:639 - pianonya dah pas yang ini jadi no comment =w=

[6K Extreme]
aaaa top ten best 6K mapping
easy to read and tap terima kasiihh :")

00:32:157 - hmmm literally terasaa berat di tangan dan next partnya bikin kaget gimana kalo gini tapi menurutku itu udah pas...


paternnya lebih enak buat di baca dan gak bikin kaget

00:45:088 (45088|2,45088|4) - 01:49:226 (109226|1,109226|3) - asdkjasxfcvhsadfljkasf bikin kaget aaaaaaaa
reply buat ^
so, um, bagian yang 00:45:088 - aku arrange menjadi seperti ini
and this part, 01:49:226 - ku arrange menjadi seperti
kasi tau aku kalo ada yang kurang enak di tangan ya ki ;w;

00:59:053 (59053|2,59096|1,59139|0) - ctrl + J buat variasi


bakal di lanjutin lagi nanti owo kutunggu
makasih ya ki, no rep means applied
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