GuiltyGecko wrote:

Hi from your Mod queue!

Normal

1. I like the hit sounds on the map overall. Can be improved in a few spots. I'll list some that I found. thanks m9
2. 00:42:251 (4) Not sure why there's a finish hit sound(HS) right here. Sounds a bit inconsistent and would be better with another clap HS. slipped from my first attempt, fixed
3. 00:56:021 (1) Would replace this clap with a finish. sounds better
4. 01:06:513 (2) ^ changed
5. 01:21:923 (5) Remove finish HS. removed
6. 01:21:513 (4,5,1)
   The spacing on this is odd. It seems like the 5 circle should be overlapping one of the sliders. tried to do that to blanket the circle... changed but looks weird now lol
7. 01:26:267 (1,1) Having these notes this close plays kind of odd since this is the only place on this map where this happens. The entire normal difficult up to this point had 1/4, or 1/2 spacing and then this shows up at the very end. Would recommend changing it. while I do agree, I couldn't come up with anything to map these notes, because the beat does happen in the half beat, so keeping

Hard

1. For sliders I mention, place the HS on big white ticks of them (usually the beginning) unless otherwise stated. That goes for the HS mods I made in Normal as well.
2. 00:14:054 (1) Replace with Finish HS
3. 00:24:546 (1) Add Finish HS
4. 00:35:038 (6) Add Finsh HS
5. 00:35:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6) This section has too many finish HS. To make it better match with the normal I would suggest a clap on 1, clap followed by a finish on 2, the same thing on 3, the same thing on 4, finish followed by clap on 5, and a clap on 6.
6. 00:49:464 (2) Remove clap HS from whole slider, and replace with clap.
7. 00:56:021 (1) Replace with finish HS
8. 00:57:169 (4) Remove finish, add clap.
9. 00:59:136 (2) remove finish, add clap.
10. 01:00:939 (7) Remove Finish.
11. 01:06:513 (1) Add finish.
12. 01:17:005 (7) Add clap.
13. 01:18:317 (3,5) Add finish
14. 01:20:939 (3) Add finish

check all

Light Insane

1. 00:14:054 (1) Add Finish HS
2. 00:24:546 (1) Add Finish HS
3. 00:35:038 (4,6,8,10) ^
4. 00:45:530 (1) ^
5. 00:56:021 (1) ^
6. 01:18:317 (2,5) ^
7. 01:27:333 (3) ^
   
   checked all
   
8. As for the claps, you can place them to match the drums. I would start doing it at 00:14:054 section.
   
   I'll follow these for other diffs as well, thanks
   

I think based on those 3 mods you should be able to get a handle on how to generally do the others diffs. Hope this helped!

Manysi wrote:

M4M from my queue

Normal

Video offset is around 226. fixed all

SPOILER

00:14:054 (2) - NC this instead. 1 has the same quitar tone as the previous combo. fine as it is IMO
00:16:021 (4) - kinda runs out the play path because ppl playing normals don't use slider leniency. will consider
00:20:612 (1) - NC this. The same reason as i mentioned above. (u follow the guitar here) think its fine as well
00:34:710 (7,1) - Get a noob to playtest this. I'm sure this is confusing. There is a polarity change here which that might be the reason. (different interval gap between 00:34:710 (7,1) - than 00:33:726 (6,7) - ) will look for feedbacks before changing
00:35:530 (1) - thease sliders look very awkward with this tickrate
00:38:153 (3,4,5) - polarity here too. You should start with a slider at 00:40:284 so the sv change wont be surprising. And it seems a little too fast (kiai uses 1 too) so i recommend like 80% or something. IMO there's room for the player to notice the music changed pace
00:43:890 (1) - there is just so much wrong with this, such as it should start at 00:44:218 (no need for polarity in sliders since you dont exactly click in time) end at 00:44:874. So i think adding a circle at 00:43:890 and a reverse slider at 00:44:218 would be a much better option. reverse would have to be on a blue tick to last the same as the spinner, keeping
00:59:956 (3,4,5) - something like this instead?http://puu.sh/o8noA/47f945a9e9.jpg It would emphasize the decreasing pitch in the vocals. will consider reshaping the slider, just don't think the suggested one will do it
01:13:071 (3) - Curve doesn't help anything. It just fills the space between the 2 pair of circles. The diff itself is so polished that something not perfect looks out of the picture. You can do better than this as you said, it's there to fill the space.. changing it would make this section with too many circles
01:19:956 (3) - polarithy can hurt. Just start an extended slider at the red. doesn't fit, IMO
01:22:251 (1) - yeah, this sv is too much think it's fine
01:24:874 (1,2,3) - use similar rhythm you did in the beginning. for example: http://puu.sh/o8o6y/19c4d30aa3.jpg like current better

I'm kinda happy with how normal is right now, so I'm kinda picky with the changes.. sorry

Hard

SPOILER

00:02:251 (4) - yo, wouldn't it be nice alligned with 00:01:759 (3) - ? sure
00:06:677 (2,3,4,1) - flow is a little weird here. Probably because the curve of 2 doesn't really support the triangle. changed the side it's curved, should be better
00:09:300 (2,3,4,5) - You havent used the up-down flow before and it feels odd to introduce here. I mean, 00:07:989 (2,3,4) - would have been a better place to do. And i'm not sure why you didn't make an extended slider out of 00:09:300 (2) - because its literally the same as 00:07:989 (2) - IMO both shapes do their job
00:12:251 (4) - sliderend is stronger than the head and it currently doesn't support any hold sound (was ok to play) think it's fine, will see with more feedback on hitsound
00:16:021 (4) - plays better as rotated 90° anticlockwise not exactly as suggested, but changed
00:17:661 (2) - ctrl+h sure
00:19:956 (1) - ctrl+g nah
00:22:579 (6) - NC you nc-ed the next one sure
00:37:989 (4) - what are you following with thease? Would fit the vocals more at 00:38:153 changed
00:42:251 (5) - needs a little rotation fine as it is, but changed shape to be better with the vocals
00:43:562 (2) - very similar sound like 00:42:907 (1) - . Why are they so different? will consider
00:44:218 (3,4,5) - weird flow here. I think you should end 5 at the red. Thats where the instrumental stops. changed, should be better now
00:48:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flow needs improvement. Slider curves doesn't really support eachother. Looks unstructured too. IMO it's good
01:03:235 (5) - curve doesn't support the triangle after. disagree
01:06:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - i really don't like this part. Neither the clicks, nor the flow feels ideal. changed a bit, should have a better flow
01:09:136 (3) - NC this instead k
01:09:628 (4,5) - they both end on strong beats. You changed the rhythm for no reason. I like it but understeand what you mean will look what can be done
01:10:448 (2) - NC here instead k
01:12:415 (1) - well, this is one way to fix things like 01:03:235 (5) - . Are you aware that this stuff makes you slow down?
01:18:644 (4) - no need for reverse, the arrow is on the wrong beat anyways following vocals
01:19:956 (1,2) - A small increase won't hurt. yeah i guess
01:25:694 (1,4) - Easier to read them without NC keeping

Light Insane

00:02:580 (9,1) - little weird how the music stops but you still have to snap 1. Maybe ctrl+h? fine as it is

Sorry for leaving you with only this much. I just got very discouraged because of life. Hope you understand.
gl

- Milhofo - wrote:

Oi, M4M da sua queue ^^ se não houver problema vou fazer o mod em inglês que estou mais habituado :b

[Xayler's Easy]

1. 00:00:612 (1,2) - try to make a continuos flow between notes in easy, this way you have to move right in the jump and down in the slider, which makes the flow pretty weird, but then it would overlap 00:02:251 (3) - so it's up to you (this is not the most important thing to follow anyway)
2. 00:06:185 (3) - curve it a bit more so it blankets the slider start of 00:07:989 (1) - , try to guide the blanket throught the approach circle of (1)
3. 00:07:989 (1,2) - spacing has to be consistent in an easy difficulty, this is not 1.0x DS like the rest of the map (it's the criteria so not following this really leaves the diff unrankable)
4. 00:11:431 - I think the spinner should start here, since it's where the guitar plays again, where you start the spinner there's not really any new sound
5. 00:12:743 - I also think you should end the spinner here, this is not a must but there's also a stronger sound here and the guidelines say you should leave at least 4 beats distance between the end of a spinner and the following note in an easy diff (4 beats is 4 white ticks)
6. 00:15:038 (2) - shouldn't this slider end on 00:15:694 - ? The vocals end there, and the drums are also there
7. 00:19:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - the flow in this section might be really confusing for newer players, on easy difficulties you should focus on making the easiest flow possible, so new players can follow it (not too easy, but not too complicated either)
8. 00:28:808 (4) - you could curve this so it flows better into 00:29:792 (5) - , you could even make them have the same shape
9. 00:40:939 (2) - like I previously said, the ranking criteria states that you can't change spacing in easy difficulties, not even sliver velocity for that matter, so this part has to be changed to become rankable (the section between 00:35:366 (2) - and 00:40:284 - )
10. 00:49:464 - I feel like this note is a bit too strong to be skipped, you could put a single note on 00:49:136 - and start the slider at 00:49:464 -
11. 00:50:776 - wouldmake more sense to finish the slider here, to finish with the vocals
12. 00:56:021 (1,3) - try to avoid overlaps like this
13. 01:06:513 (1,2) - in parts like this it looks a lot better when the sliders have the exact same shape, because they belong to the same pattern
14. 01:15:694 (6) - the reverse isn't following anything here, both main beats are at 01:16:021 - and 01:16:349 - the only thing on the reverse is a really low hi hat sound that shouldn't really be highlighted in an easy
15. 01:17:005 - here you change the spacing again, unrankable
16. The diff needs some work on the spacing department, then some flow fixes and it should be fine ^^
17. Here's the link to the ranking criteria and guidelines for easy so you can read about the spacing problems I mentioned.

Alright, thanks for the mod, I did basically a complete remap now with the DS and other issues resolved.

Manysi wrote:

M4M from my queue

Xayler

00:00:612 (1) - find a better place for this. Its not connected to the playpath of 2 and can confuse beginners easily. I don't know what you mean by it, it just starts from there...
00:07:989 (1,2) - this looks like having no structure which can also be confusing For me it's perfect sounding and playing
00:10:448 (1) - doesn't make any sense, just keep following the guitar Changed the spinner there from last mod
00:15:038 (2) - end it at the previous white tick so it will last as long as 00:17:333 (4) - done
00:19:956 (1,2,3) - 00:21:267 (4,5,6) - a reverse sliders would be much more intuitive. Place circles at 00:20:939 and 00:22:251 if you want to have the claps mapped. I mapped it differently already from last mod, for me it sounds better the way I did
I made the rhytm for this part http://puu.sh/o8jhF/dac4408691.jpg starts at 00:19:956 (1) - hope you actually see shit xd (and I saw only a mess there xd)
00:35:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is a slower part. Currently it would definetly be hard to read for newbies. In order to emphasize that it's a weaker part, reduce the amount of clicks. I mean, use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/o8jBN/2d2a5d7227.jpg . If you change it make sure to have the green line at 00:35:038. done, did to decrease the difficulty
For kiai what about this: http://puu.sh/o8kiH/8091846ab0.jpg . You can reuse this at 00:56:021 and 01:06:513 with some changes that might occure in the music. I felt like this would fit in all 3 places.
01:12:415 (1,2,3) - do it like 01:13:726 (4) - Hmm, it's a good idea, but I like the current one more as you need to click less

Video didn't play in this diff for some reason.
I'm very inexperienced in lower diffs, hope i can still help. Your mod was good for me, thanks


Sorry for leaving you with only this much. I just got very discouraged because of life. Hope you understand.
gl

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It's ez

Reana wrote:

M4M

Nanadaime Hokage

1. Hitsound is reaaaaaaaly weird... put clap on each 1/1 beat uh oh... guess it wont hurt
2. 00:02:578 (5,6,7,8,9) - this looks bit weird think its cool
3. 00:04:874 (5) - NC k
4. 00:05:694 (1) - Remove NC k
5. 00:08:808 (5) - NC k
6. 00:09:300 (1) - Remove NC k
7. 00:10:120 (5) - NC k
8. 00:13:562 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Flow is bad should be better now
9. 00:16:677 (5) - NC k
10. 00:19:300 (5) - NC k
11. 00:19:792 (1) - Remove NC k
12. 00:21:923 (5) - Remove 2 anchor which is after red dot dont think it should matter
13. 00:25:858 (6) - NC k
14. 00:27:169 (4) - NC k
15. 00:29:792 (5) - NC dont think so
16. 00:31:759 (5) - NC k
17. 00:55:858 (1) - Remove NC k
18. 00:56:021 (3) - NC k
19. 00:57:005 (1) - Remove NC k
20. 00:57:333 (2) - NC k
21. 00:58:480 (1) - Remove NC k
22. 00:58:644 (3) - NC k
23. 00:58:972 (1) - Remove NC nah

GLGLGLGLGLGL c:

Naxess wrote:

From Queue


[Normal]

SPOILER

1. Just to clarify in case it gets confusing - when I say pattern, I mean pattern on the timeline; rhythm of notes.
2. 00:01:923 (3,4) - Feels weird having circle (4) clickable, consider making slider (3) a repeat instead. true, fixed
3. 00:03:562 (1) - This feels strange because it sounds like 00:04:054 would be clickable. Try this:
   
   00:04:874 (3) - ^
   00:06:185 (5) - ^
   00:07:497 (7) - ^ sorry, feel like current one is better for all of the previous
   00:08:808 - From here on I would suggest changing pattern, since it'll get quite repetitive otherwise.
   00:08:808 (2) - ^
   00:10:120 (4) - ^
   00:11:431 (1) - ^ I like how it is, tho
   00:12:743 (3) - ^ You could make this a unique pattern to symbolize the end of this part of the song, just a suggestion though. will consider
4. 00:08:480 (1) - This combo begins offbeat, consider starting it at 00:08:808 instead. Or, if you're going for how it sounds, at 00:07:989 where a slider would be placed if you were following my previous suggestion. following the guitar
5. 00:15:366 - Tail on downbeat (large white tick). Downbeats are often loud sounds in the song and the start of a new measure (set of 4 white ticks), and as such it wouldn't make sense to lift your finger on them. Consider making this clickable.
6. Generally you'd want to increase the consistency of the map by repeating the same pattern over two measures.
   So, for this example,
   
   should be the same as
   
   but as you can see, they're not the same. Usually repeating patterns over two measures will help you figure out a good rhythm for the whole hypermeasure (set of 4 measures) as well, since they often use the same rhythm. I know you may want to vary between patterns, but remember that doing this too much will evidently cause your pattern to be unpredictable, and as such not even a pattern anymore.
   Basically, I'd suggest keeping rhythm and changing patterns on an interval, depending on the song. You still want the player to be able to predict some of it.
7. 00:19:300 (5) - NC, downbeat. Remove NC at 00:20:284 (1) . Consider changing pattern slightly from here on as well. 00:19:956 should be clickable for example. nah pattern is fine IMO, but NC'ed
8. 00:24:546 (1) - It's usually best to have red points along a slider's path in the middle of the slider, to make it seem like even the path is following rhythm. Like this, for example:
   
   You may have been trying to blanket 00:24:218 (7) as well, so move 00:24:218 (7) to (230; 81) if you want it to look blanketed after changing slider (1). like current better
9. 00:27:825 - Sounds like this should be clickable again, consider changing pattern. will consider
10. 00:35:366 - Here's a sound which may confuse player as to when they would click on 00:35:530 (1) . You could always unstack them and add a note here which is stacked on the red slider instead. just unstacked
    00:36:677 - Add a note here as well for consistency, if you decide to add the other one. ^
11. 00:35:038 - That this is ending on a downbeat, so you may want to change this as well. Plus you should NC it. nah
    00:36:349 - ^
    00:37:661 - ^ also NC
    00:38:972 - ^
    00:40:284 - ^ also NC no NC party
12. 00:44:218 (1) - This spinner is very short and almost on the verge of being labeled as a Ninja Spinner, which is an unrankable mapping technique.
    https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ninja_Spinners will consider, but the duration of the spinner isn't the problem, as it's very well playable (I can manage to get 2k bonus from it, so it's not ninja)... the problem is within the low AR showing the notes before the spin ends
13. 01:26:349 (1) - This sort of sounds out of place. I know, but it is in place

[General]

SPOILER

1. Remove widescreen support, it's only for storyboards. done
2. It almost looks as if the combo colors reflect the five natural elements of the Naruto universe, however I'd say the combo color reflecting earth looks more orange than brown.
   Consider changing the combo colors as follows (RGB Scale):
   Fire: 215, 0, 0
   Water: 36, 145, 255
   Earth: 148, 95, 23
   Lighting: 230, 217, 0
   Wind: 0, 204, 130

the combo colours are a reference to minato, kushina, naruto, the leaf and that gorgeous sky in the background, but thanks for the suggestion, tho

6th wrote:

Hi. NM. (:


[Normal]

SPOILER

00:09:300 - Try this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902801 (don't pay attention to patterning) Like current one better
00:12:743 (3) - CTRL+J for smoother flow Feel like current one has smoother flow, IMO
00:25:530 (2) - Too much curve imo. Also I think that 00:26:185 (3,4) - using CTRL+G here would make more sense sure, fixed
00:30:221 - Blanket ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902813 nice, fixed
00:31:103 (2,3,4) - Symmetry could be perfected Improved, but its hard to make it perfect when there's so much references
00:35:038 - Heavy beat here. Make it clickable yup
00:35:530 - Unstack. It's confusing since it starts on red tick should've been fixed from an earlier update, oopsie
00:36:349 - Make them clickable. I would have done : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902837 think current one is better
00:40:284 - Make it clickable and make it look like 00:42:907 - not exactly as suggested, but fixed
00:44:218 (1) - Unrankable. That spinner is really too short and recovery time isn't long enough. alright changed
00:51:431 (1) - CTRL+J ? Like how it is, but it's something interesting to consider
00:53:071 - Forgot a hitsound here ? fk
01:06:513 - Make it clickable. Compelling the player to lift up the finger on a strong beat is soso imo ehhh, should be better now
01:13:071 (3) - Don't use red point here to make it smoother think its fine
01:15:694 - Make it clickable. Also 01:15:038 (1,2,3) - flow could be improved here, that direction change is too sudden think current is good
01:17:005 - D:
01:26:349 (1) - Fix that jump asap D: eeeh, feel like moving it too close doesn't feel the best, also the jump isnt big... but I understand what you mean and will think about how to better place these
01:27:333 - Make it clickable I like the reverses

[Hard]

SPOILER

That one is nice thanks, think thats a first lol
00:15:038 - Make it clickable ?
00:17:989 - ^ nah
00:18:317 (3,4,5) - I suggest using 3 sliders instead think current one is good
00:19:956 (1,2) - Flow is soso here. CTRL+G on 2nd slider tried this and didn't like much, but changed notes in this section a bit
00:23:235 (2,3,4,5) - Use sliders instead ? It's a bit boring to play like that everyone likes jumps
00:33:071 (1) - A normal curve would be perfectly fine will consider, but thats just to change things a little bit
00:36:349 - Make big white ticks clickable nah
00:44:218 (3) - Repeat it nice
01:17:005 - Spacing is not fine. Also that circle should be emphasized spacing is fine, just the inherit point that makes the DS go crazy 6th came to explain to me what he meant, as I understood is wrongly D: fixed
01:26:349 (1,2,3) - Spacing is way too exagerated here reduced jump by 10% on the second 3 circles.. this one will keep as it is

[LI]

SPOILER

00:02:907 - Make it clickable would be weird here, idk
00:04:055 (2,3,4) - Flow is soso here hope its better
00:05:366 - This should be mapped think current one is good b/c is follows the guitar
00:13:562 (6,7,8) - CTRL+G then move (9) will think about something
00:19:300 (4) - CTRL+J/G nah
00:34:710 - Exagerated spacing here improved
00:36:677 - Map this
00:37:989 - ^ ok, did it (both)
00:46:841 (1,2) - I don't like it that much hope you like now improved alot, IMO
00:53:399 (5) - Weird shape for nothing changed, but the idea is the same
00:56:841 - Use a circle here did something different, but changed
01:14:017 - They are almost overlapping almost D: keeping
01:15:038 - Make it clickable did
01:17:005 - ^ hitsounds will fix this
01:24:874 - ^ dunno, will think about but will most likely keep it

[Insane]

SPOILER

SV -> 1,60 to keep it consistent ? Think it's fine as 1,8 (I like 1,8 on insanes)
00:04:874 - Make it clickable think hitsounds will do the magic here
00:06:677 - Map this following le guitar
00:08:809 (5) - This should be more emphasized. Increase spacing slightly
00:10:121 (5) - ^ slightly
00:20:612 - Make it clickable nah
00:21:923 - ^ nah
00:24:219 (6) - That jumps is exagerated sure, fixed
00:28:809 (1,2,3) - This is a bit boring to play, especially when you map it normally at 00:18:317 (4,5,6,7,8) - L M A O, true will fix
00:38:972 - Make it clickable will probably change most of this section and will fix this
01:03:727 (6) - Make it closer from (5) like current
01:17:005 (10) - Place it further might change, but I like it stacked with the next slider
01:19:792 - I don't like how speed is increasing here for no real reason might change too

Good luck. (:

warpgenius wrote:

NM from my but

Xayler's Easy
xd nothing here move on

Normal

SPOILER

00:44:218 (1) - feels weird, why not use a slow SV slider instead already fixed by previous mod, thx
00:52:743 (3) - missing some claps probably fixed

Hard

SPOILER

00:05:366 (2) - Whistle fixed
01:18:644 (4) - this should be similar to 01:17:333 (1,2) - like current on better

Light Insane

SPOILER

00:45:038 (1) - should start 00:45:202 fixed
01:14:874 (1) - same with ^ fixed on previous mod
01:26:349 (5,6,7) - I don't like this will keep for now, but might change

Insane

SPOILER

00:28:809 (1,2,3) - pls change this to a different pattern maybe
00:37:662 (6) - NC
00:53:399 (6) - NC ok for both
00:55:694 (4,5,6,7,1) - I feel like it flows better if you flip vertically and place it like this wow, fixed

Nanadaime Hokage

SPOILER

00:06:185 (6) - I don't like the shape of this slider, also I think it's NC its so cool man why, NC'ed
00:14:054 (1) - Move down a little so it looks better has the same shape as the triple before
00:21:923 (5) - NC ye
00:28:808 (1) - 00:29:464 (3) - remove green timing sections
00:29:792 (5) - why is SV 1.3x here just stick with 1.0x fixed both
00:46:841 (5) - NC k
00:54:710 (5) - NC k
00:59:956 (5) - NC k
01:22:251 (1) - Please buildup the distance before slapping my face with this huge jump part made the previous reverse faster, should be better
01:23:726 (2) - too close, maybe put it x:204 y:36 around there nah
01:24:546 (3) - NC IMO keeping is better
01:27:333 (3) - make this slider end at 01:27:497 - instead, feels more natural to end the song on a white tick, or just make it a circle instead lol I like how it ends

GL Naruto fanboy thanks

sorry for not checking all already, but last days have been rushed IRL... big sorry guys

Nanadaime Hokage

1. This diff can use a nice polish, you did well to capture the vocals and instruments but i want to run through some things that can be improved.
2. 00:05:694 (3,4) - Ctrl + G this, plays much better instead of moving in a near straight line at 00:05:858 (4,5,6) -
3. 00:23:235 (1,3) - These 2 sliders should be exactly the same, by that i mean Copy and paste slider 1 and Ctrl + H it so it makes a perfect mirror.
4. 00:29:628 (4) - Blanket to 00:28:808 (1) -
5. 00:29:792 (5) - Don't feel there is a need to change the SV, seems pointless.
6. 00:41:923 (2) - Stack to 00:41:267 (5) - ?
7. 00:47:169 (7,8,9,10) - Not a fan of this, it feels odd after jumping around a lot to make smaller, awkward adjustments, space out notes 8 & 10.
8. 00:49:300 (5) - Similar situation here, Space it out.
9. 00:49:464 (1,5) - Nnnggg not a perfect stack.

Light Insane

1. 00:01:595 (3) - Blanket.
2. 00:23:071 (5,6,7) - Have a listen to these sliders, they sound much better if they began on white ticks.
3. 00:36:841 (3) - Maybe move this back to the white tick end extend the slider to the next white tick.
4. 00:45:038 (1) - Ehh, maybe go about moving this slider over to the white tick since the vocals begin there.
5. 00:46:841 (1) - Ctrl + G for sure.
6. 01:03:071 (1,2) - Sliders work and sound better on white ticks.
7. 01:07:005 (2,3) - Same issue as above.
8. 01:13:562 (1,2) - ^^^

Ambient wrote:

Heyo, from my queue.

Nanadaime Hokage

1. This diff can use a nice polish, you did well to capture the vocals and instruments but i want to run through some things that can be improved here we go.
2. 00:05:694 (3,4) - Ctrl + G this, plays much better instead of moving in a near straight line at 00:05:858 (4,5,6) - fixed
3. 00:23:235 (1,3) - These 2 sliders should be exactly the same, by that i mean Copy and paste slider 1 and Ctrl + H it so it makes a perfect mirror. fixed
4. 00:29:628 (4) - Blanket to 00:28:808 (1) - I like current one But in case I understood it wrongly, the blanket was improved with 00:29:300 (2,5) -
5. 00:29:792 (5) - Don't feel there is a need to change the SV, seems pointless. sorry, residual from a previous change
6. 00:41:923 (2) - Stack to 00:41:267 (5) - ? sure
7. 00:47:169 (7,8,9,10) - Not a fan of this, it feels odd after jumping around a lot to make smaller, awkward adjustments, space out notes 8 & 10. This is actually one of the patterns I like the most
8. 00:49:300 (5) - Similar situation here, Space it out. spaced better
9. 00:49:464 (1,5) - Nnnggg not a perfect stack. r u ok? it's fixed now, everything is fine now

Light Insane

1. 00:01:595 (3) - Blanket. made a weird blanket, but still counts
2. 00:23:071 (5,6,7) - Have a listen to these sliders, they sound much better if they began on white ticks. thanks, they sound better now and even allowed me to do a cool pattern that will be butchered soon
3. 00:36:841 (3) - Maybe move this back to the white tick end extend the slider to the next white tick. you probably checked a version without the previous mods (blame me) so it's probably fixed at this point
4. 00:45:038 (1) - Ehh, maybe go about moving this slider over to the white tick since the vocals begin there. fixed in a previous mod
5. 00:46:841 (1) - Ctrl + G for sure. fixed in a previous mod
6. 01:03:071 (1,2) - Sliders work and sound better on white ticks. sure
7. 01:07:005 (2,3) - Same issue as above. ^
8. 01:13:562 (1,2) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Hopefully this was helpful, GL! <3 have a blue heart

Naxess wrote:

From Queue

[Xayler's Easy]

SPOILER

1. 00:17:989 - Downbeats (large white ticks) are often loud sounds in songs and as such wouldn't make sense to lift your finger on. Consider making this clickable.
   00:28:480 - ^
   00:59:956 - ^
2. There's a lot of repeats, consider splitting them into two sliders, a slider and a circle or similar. For example 00:57:169 could be done like this:
   
   Same with 00:59:792
3. 00:25:858 - There's a lot of long sliders that don't begin on downbeats, but rather have their path on one instead. Consider beginning all long sliders on downbeats to minimize the amount of downbeats missed. Generally most downbeats should be clickable, like explained earlier.
4. I decided not to cover all of them, but rather give examples instead, so remember to check other parts of the map as well. Anyway, these are just suggestions, so do as you will.

[/list][/notice][/spoilerbox]

1. 00:13:480 - should be a note here
2. 00:17:661 (6) - use a circle here and add a 1/1 slider at 00:17:825 -
3. 00:43:235 (2) - this circle is not placed properly
4. 00:44:874 (6) - i recommend u use a 1/2 slider here instead

1. 00:16:021 (7,8) - Ctrl+G

1. AR 8.5 Please

1. 00:01:267 (2) - add reverse?
2. 00:36:677 - add circle
3. 00:37:989 - ^

1. 00:00:940 - change combo color

1. 00:00:940 - change combo color
2. 00:28:480 - should be a note here
3. 00:45:038 - unused green tick?

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Hello , From #modreqs

I love this song so heres a little mod for u

Nanadaime Hokage :

1. 00:13:480 - should be a note here nah
2. 00:17:661 (6) - use a circle here and add a 1/1 slider at 00:17:825 - thats some food for thought, but not like proposed
3. 00:43:235 (2) - this circle is not placed properly section should look better now
4. 00:44:874 (6) - i recommend u use a 1/2 slider here instead nah

Normal :

1. 00:16:021 (7,8) - Ctrl+G suppose this is on insane, if so, fixed

Light Insane :

1. AR 8.5 Please IDK I think it would be too much.. maybe will increase by .3 or smth

Hard :

1. 00:01:267 (2) - add reverse? god bless ur soul, thats smth that was glitching me and the answer was quite simple
2. 00:36:677 - add circle
3. 00:37:989 - ^ no for both D:

Normal :

1. 00:00:940 - change combo color not sure how healthy this is for normal, but changed

LMT1996 wrote:

From our modding queue.
I'm sorry but Shoga can't find the time to mod this as he's busy preparing for his exams. Asaiga eventually took this up but he can't quite find anything noticeable (he can only mod flow and he said yours was already so good) he was lying!!!. So I'm the only one who's free to mod this (Hako's got quite a few requests to process, let's not put more weight on his shoulders).
I understand
Overall I think it's pretty good but sometimes the hit objects are placed on the...not so precise beats. I'm not saying they're wrong, they're just not so on point and doesn't compliment the music that well, in my opinion. But it is objective so feel free to disregard some of those just because I'm being such a nazi to-the-beat modder. oh god

Extra

00:02:907 (9) - Can be emphasised. At least NC this, then you can make this into a slider that ends 00:03:078 - here and you can make the slider looks slightly funky, because the sound is funky. Nah, NC didn't feel right for me, keeping as it is
00:06:185 (1) - so you follow the lead guitar with 00:07:005 (2,3,4) - these but you neglect the first 2 guitar notes 00:06:677 - here and 00:06:841 - here. I suggest sth like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4923775 . Might change it, current is fine as it is but this might prove to be an improvement. If I change, i'll put a slider rather than 2 circles (just a note to myself lol)
00:09:628 (4) - replace this slider with jumps might be cool. think the slider does his job better
00:13:562 (3,4,5) - These are actually 1/6s https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4923800 . But it might kill the player's accuracy, I don't know but just acknowledge it. not 1/6. If you listen at 25% there are 5 beats, starting on the sliderend. I'll map the missing note and this should be fixed, as it was also noted in a previous mod
00:17:989 - You should emphasise this tick since it is a downbeat: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4923812 . sure, was thinking about somethink about this, not as suggested, but changed
00:39:464 - missing a very strong snare drum note here. (nothing wrong since you're strictly following the vocal here, but try it out). tried, but still prefer current
00:42:907 (2) - You should NC this instead of this 00:42:743 (1) - right? hmm, I guess? fixed I fucking suck with NCs, jesus fuck
00:51:267 (1) - sliderhead is very weak (also it makes sense because generally sliders shouldn't start on red ticks since they're usually weak, unless the music actually allows it, here it doesn't). You can break it up into 2 notes, or at least place a circle on the red tick then sliderhead on the next white tick. ur right, fixed. again, differently, but fixed
01:20:612 (5) - sliderend on the downbeat isn't a good thing. This slider should end on the red tick, then you put a note on the downbeat (major white tick). fixed, thanks
01:25:858 (4) - BUT this is fine, because the guitar sound is doing exactly what you just put. yey I did it! something right!!!
01:27:497 - the guitar sound ends on this tick not the blue tick, putting a circle here MIGHT be good, but it's fine as it is. keeping, like it very much :3

Insane

00:02:907 (9) - Same as in Extra diff (sth Hokage, I've stopped following naruto for too long T_T IKR, got back to it by the end of last year and was shocked, too) nah, keeping as it is.
00:04:546 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4923882 . This sounds a bit better since the downbeat is emphasised. (oh don't forget to NC that circle, i forgot to). I actually think that's one of the few downbeats that can be played like that, so keeping
00:06:185 (1) - same as in Extra here. for the sake of consistency, will change here and in extra, IF I DO change it at some point
00:13:562 (6,7,8) - same as in Extra. same as in extra, but made a weird pattern lol
00:35:038 (4) - NC this instead? nah
00:38:480 (8) - This slider doesn't go well with the music, it misses the white tick where the vocal changes the note as well as a strong tom sound. I suggest something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4924037 or just turn 8 into a circle if you don't like gimmicks. IDK, felt like the issue was on the previous slider making this one weird, so fixed
00:38:972 (10) - This also doesn't follow the music well enough in my opinion. The vocal ends 00:39:300 - here and that's also where a strong tom sound is heard. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4924066 or just extend the slider to where 11 is . And don't forget to NC 10. actually, shortened it as in extra, feels better now. The NC I changed a bit earlier in the combo, so its all good now

Light Insane

00:12:251 (2,3) - Ctrl+G this and rearrange the spacing for these 2 objects to match the music better. here's me hoping that I did it right, fixed
00:35:038 (4,5) - NC either 4 or 5 instead of 1 here. NC'ed 5
01:09:300 (2) - this is way off the music. 01:09:136 (1,2) - select these 2 and Ctrl+G should fit the music better.wow, fixed

Hard

00:13:562 (7) - Since you already know this is 1/3 you can make this a 1/3 reverse slider. Shouldn't be too hard? nah.. even with changing insane and extra, I'd like to keep this simple
--
00:51:923 (2) - not sure if this is correct. So you've been strictly following the vocal line and this is like a "filler", which is slightly ... off? I don't know. But have a think about this.
00:53:235 (5) - ^ keeping both

01:24:628 - You might want to add a note to this tick. keeping it simple

Good luck on ranking this. thanks

Ataraxia wrote:

Iai

Xayler's Easy

Just one thing in geral, most sliders seems to have the sound of Whistle in Sliderslide not know if it was mistaken, if really purposeful ignore it, although I think that was not good: s

00:00:940 (1) - New combo, to combine with mapset

00:00:612 (1,3) - These objects are very close to the other, you can try to use the final of 00:02:251 (3) - to a Blanket (Example )

00:07:989 (1,2) - This two sliders are werid ;s you can make a copy of the 00:07:989 (1) - , Invert horizontal and vertical and Control F :> (Example

01:04:546 (3,5,1) - wow so Cool

01:12:415 (1) - You can fix to be a correct blanket, (Example)

Ataraxia wrote:

Iai eae eae


Normal
Agora vai ser em portugues ;3

Normal não deve ter Alteração de velocidade, sugiro que você mude inteiramente para 1.0x e use apenas a velocidade do slider. eu gostaria muito de manter as SV atuais, fiquei de perguntar pra um BN e esqueci.. bom vamos ver >.>

Abra o Ai mod também, Normal não pode ter também quebra de snap, deve ser 1.0x ( no seu caso) o mapa inteiro O indicado é em função dos inherits que mudam de SV, por isso

Quando você aplicar as alterações acima, mande um PM para min que eu faço um mod para o normal

Hard

00:10:120 (1) - New Combo certo

00:12:743 (1) - New Combo certo

00:19:956 (1) - Muito aleatorio :s deixe 2 circles normais igual você fez aqui 00:21:267 (4,5) - . é, faz mais sentido, arrumei mas acho que deixei os 2 circles muito proximos.. sei lá lol

00:25:038 (2) - Mova para x472 e y68

00:25:202 (3) - Mova para x392 e y36 (assim , você deixa essas duas notas com um flow "linear" Assim e ainda tira a sobreposição do 00:25:858 (5) - com as notas nao exatamente como proposto pq ia aumentar mt o DS (ia ficar inconsistente com as outras patterns similares) mas arrumei o overlap

00:28:153 (4) - Mova esse slider para x252 e y112 hmm axo que entendi oq vc quer fazer, nao exatamente pra cá mas movi o head do slider pra se alinhar com a nota anterior e manter o DS

01:23:235 (5,2,4,1,2,1) - Bela pegada ! nice

Light Insane

00:00:612 (1) - Fica loco se você colocar embaixo do slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944117 ixi fica mesmo, aí é bom que essa pattern fica só pro insane

000:03:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - Não ficou muito bom, eu estou tentando achar uma solução para isso mas parece que voce tera que refazer, o maior problema é isso aqui, isso quebra o flow demais e fica feio :s , eu peguei o 00:04:383 (3,5) - e dei um Control F nelas (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944168) você pode até adotar isso, mas ainda acho melhor refazer esse combo todo :s hm tentei algo diferente e me parece ter ficado bom vamos ver


Insane

00:10:120 (1) - New Combo aqui NC é algo que me confunde a beça.. parte mais dificil de mapear, ctz lol.. mas aqui ta seguindo a guitarra e por isso acho que nao tem NC aqui nao D:

00:16:185 (8) - Aqui era para ser um wisthle, e nao um clap :p ops

00:16:349 (9) - Remoca o NC

00:16:677 (1) - Aplique o NC aqui feito

00:17:661 (7) - remova o nc mas ai o combo fica muito grande sô esquece, arrumei

00:17:989 (1) - Isso esta fora do Tick ( e o nosso querido ai mod n falo nada) bom, aplique ele no tick branco entao, tem algum bug retardado que faz com que algumas notas do nd mudem 1ms pro lado... vo tentar aplicar resnap em todas as diffs pra ver se isso resolve >.>

00:50:448 (1) - Nc aqui, mas não altere a proxima nota, deixe do deixo que ficar acho que nao é NC nao por conta do vocal

00:59:957 (1,2) - isso é muito aleatorio :s eu nao sei como eu me sinto quanto a isso lol mudei mas ficou meio estranho o resto lol.. vamos ver em relaçao às patterns agora.. quando meu braço melhorar eu faço testplay e aplico mais mudanças por aqui se achar necessario

01:14:383 (1) - Adicione o NC aqui e remova o Nc do 01:15:038 (4) - D: ta em função do vocal


Nanadaime Hokage

Gostei muiiito, nao achei nada de estranho , tudo combinou perfeitamente :3 eita jão, vlw

e isso, boa sorte com o seu mapa <3 vlw !

SonKungSWK wrote:

Hi from #modreq
I'm modding this because I like the song, and Naruto, and wanna practice my modding skills... lucky ticket
sry if it's a shitmod no mod is a shitmod, opinions are opinions and sometimes people will agree and others people will disagree

Suggestion: at the last kiai time, just make it till the end? to emphasize the guitar? That's something to think about, but I do think I'll keep it as it currently is.

Hard

00:00:612 (1,1) - i kinda want to stack them ;w; I've changed this back and forth so many times lol.. This will be the last one as I do like it more >.>
00:47:497 (6) - use a slider and remove 00:47:825 (7) (it will feel kinda like this 00:49:464 (3,4,5) ) Hmmm, I like current better
01:06:185 (5) - turn up the volume, i think it should be http://puu.sh/onApM/039829c548.jpg I know but I'm keeping it simple. Want to give the song more depth as you go through the difficulties
01:07:825 (5) - snare missing? What do you mean darling D: fixed
01:26:841 - should be clickable to follow the guitar I do think that the drum is "more important" than the guitar here

Light Insane

00:00:612 (1,1) - stack them maybe? stacked
00:09:301 (5,8) - not sure if correctly blanketed ;w; sry my eyes arent my best these blankets are hard to see tbh lol, moved a bit, hope its better now
00:19:629 (5) - this should be a slider not a slider but added a circle to the red tick
00:44:218 (6) - nc NC'd the stream
00:50:120 (3) - at the big white tick, i think it should be clickable ;w; change a bit, but this white tick in particular is not necessaraly (is this even spelled properly lol) a clickable. The change was to make this diff more consistent with the insane and extra
01:03:562 (2,3) - use distanced blanket improved
01:26:841 - should be clickable (add a circle) same as before

Insane

I think hitsounds in this diff dont fit the song, makes me feel awkward while playing =w= but the criteria I used was the same for all dificulties D:
00:01:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - weird flow (http://puu.sh/onAHy/ea569ba9f5.png) lmao, ur PS skills are better than mine, I'm impressed hope you like the new shape, it's cleaner.. way more
00:05:858 (5) - why a 1/4 slider? ;w; dunno lol changed
00:14:710 (3,5) - move 00:14:710 (3) a bit closer to 00:15:038 (5) and blanket it? (well, for me, it feels weird from 1.08x to a sudden 2.00x) improved
00:21:267 (1) - move it down a bit, i kinda like the flow that dont make a straight movement while going for a new combo (example of a VERY good pattern 00:22:087 (2,3,4,5) ) moved a bit down
00:45:038 (6) - i'm questioning its existence... why is it here!? T_T (remove?) idk dude he likes to have his life moved it to something a bit more decent, but he keeps his life
00:50:448 (5) - for an insane diff, this should be changed to clickable circles or sliders, my finger feels like mashing the keyboard in a kiai time and this reverse slider killed my finger's dream ;w; (suggestion: make 00:50:120 (3) - a slider too) IDK this slider is OK and I'm very inclined to keep it, BUT i do think the shape kinda kills the mood here, so I changed it and I hope it improves a bit your finger's dreams
00:53:726 (2) - delete and copy 00:53:399 (1) instead? Nah, keeping
00:54:546 (6,1) - comparing to the distancce of 00:54:710 (1,2) they are too close, feels weird for me ;w; ;w; sry keeping
00:58:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are some good patterns!!!! (i like them) oh thank god
00:59:956 (6) - combo oopsie
01:00:612 (9,11) - make these sliders instead to fit the vocals? Nah I think current pattern is cool
01:02:579 (6) - nc and remove nc here 01:02:907 (1) Feel like current follows the vocals better (I dont even know dude I suck at NC wtf)
01:05:858 (6) - delete and copy 01:05:530 (5) - instead? nah
01:11:759 (7) - new combo... also make it a bit jumpy pls and remove nc here 01:12:415 (1) aight
01:19:956 (6,7) - stack? nah the stacks are for the same "type" of vocals (lol) so not stacking
01:26:841 - should be clickable same as before

Ill check extra section after... I'm extremely tired >.< papa bless, thank you

Seventh Hokage

00:06:185 (1) - why is it so weird QwQ!! thats sexy
00:10:120 (1,2) - i think its not correctly blanketed wasn't aiming for a blanket at first but yeah looks better
00:17:497 (5,6) - make it a bit jumpier k
00:23:562 (2) - x169 y199 maybe? (prev 1.63x and next 1.63x and it makes straight movement ;w;) nah
00:28:644 (6,1) - instead of stack, use blanket? nah I think it has a better emphasis while stacked
00:29:300 (2,3) - WTF THIS JUMP
00:42:907 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - fcing this is very satisfying (i like them) noice
00:45:038 (6) - why is it here
00:49:956 (3,4,5,6) - same as insane i think nah
00:53:235 (5) - just change to a triple if you want Feel like the kickslider is better
00:57:989 (5) - make this a slider instead (vocals) ctrl+g'd with the next circle
00:58:644 (9) - nc here and remove nc 00:58:972 (1) here nah
01:00:939 (4,5) - why are they here? I like 'em D:
01:07:825 (6) - nc here instead I think the current NC is better because of the vocals
01:10:776 (2) - make it a slider instead (vocals) ctrl+g'd
01:12:579 (4,5) - instead of stack, use blanket
01:13:890 (3,4) - ^ I like current better, in both cases
01:19:956 (3) - is the finish hitsound intentional? ops
01:21:595 (1) - should be a normal slider, and a reverse nah
01:21:923 - this beat should be clickable hm dont think so, but removed the reverse for something cooler
01:22:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - overmapped (too hard a jump all of a sudden)
01:25:202 (2) - shouldnt be a reverse slider I think it should D:
01:26:841 - should be clickable like before, drums are more important here, IMO

Inb4 you ignore everything ;w; it's a noob mod T_T helped a lot yo
Edit: oh if you have time can you mod my map too? link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/435150 I'm extremely busy IRL and have some pending mods to do... Don't think I'll have time to do so, sorry (If I do happen to have some free time, I'll try to look at it :3)

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons
Love this song <3

Insane

actually this diff doesnt have a real problematic thing,because even i can get this

00:02:579 (5,6,7,8,9) - way too close from the first 4 stream, try to reposition the entire stream here fixed in previous mod
00:14:710 (3,4,5) - better the blanket fixed in previous mod
00:16:349 (9) - looks ugly, try repattern no sliders look ugly... they're... special
00:28:317 - there is sound here keeping current
00:29:464 (4,6) - better the blanket this ain't a blanket yo
00:35:366 - 0,5 is way too slow at this point, prefer 0,8 nah 0,5 is cool :<
00:45:202 (7) - RNC NC because SV changed
00:48:808 (3,4) - better the blanket improved
00:50:448 (5) - i prefer to map the 'ho ho' sound, then just put a long reverse slider here
01:05:202 (4,5) - better blanket not a blanket
01:05:858 (6) - looks ugly lay down your pitchforks they are beautiful (✿ ◕‿◕) ᓄ✂╰U╯

Nandaime Hokage

same thing with Insane, notning problematic here

00:06:185 (1) - looks ugly
00:15:366 (6) - ^
00:28:153 (5) - should end at red tick, and reverse it nah, like current better
00:38:972 (5) - how bout reposition this to x:196 y:193 looks way too off lol
00:39:628 (6) - if you apply the 4th mod, then please reposition this to
00:44:628 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - i like this section man cool! me too, thanks
00:47:661 (6) - too close to pervious note think that makes a cool effect
00:50:448 (6) - same thing with insane (prefer to map the 'ho ho' sound, then just put a long reverse slider here) nah, keeping the current reverse on both diffs
00:59:628 (3) - too close think is ok
01:00:448 (3,4) - make this 2 too a straight line, and place 01:00:939 (4) - a little downwards fixed
01:27:333 (3) - well, i believe this slider doesnt end at blue tick (✿ ◕‿◕) ᓄ✂╰U╯

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time
Good Luck with your map thanks, papa bless you

and here a star you're the star yo

• 
  
  General

1. 00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) -
   
   
   Nanadaime Hokage
2. 00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far
3. 00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little
4. 00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work
5. 00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357
6. 00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar
7. 00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) -
8. 00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg
9. 00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point
10. 00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot
11. 00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little
12. 00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here
13. 00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick
14. 00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume
15. 00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note
16. 00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward
17. 00:14:054 - 60% volume again here
18. 00:24:546 - 65% volume
19. 00:31:431 - 70% volume
20. 00:35:366 - 65% volume
21. 00:40:284 - 70% volume
22. 00:42:907 - 75% volume
23. 00:45:038 - 60% volume
24. 00:45:530 - 80% volume
25. 00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart
26. 01:05:530 - 65% volume
27. 01:05:858 - 70% volume
28. 01:06:185 - 75% volume
29. 01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
30. 01:13:890 (3,4) - ^
31. 01:17:333 - 70% volume
32. 01:22:251 - 85% volume
33. 01:24:874 - 75% volume
    
    
    
    good luck
    

hyouri wrote:

Hello from hyouri's Modding Queue~ hi~

NM

• 
  
  General

1. 00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) - it's fine, both of the current ranked versions use this timing (and a note before the first red tick is ok, at least in this case)
   
   
   Nanadaime Hokage
   
   SPOILER
2. 00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far
3. 00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little
4. 00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work
5. 00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357
6. 00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar
7. 00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) -
8. 00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg
9. 00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point
10. 00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot
11. 00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little
12. 00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here
13. 00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick
14. 00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume
15. 00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note
16. 00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward
17. 00:14:054 - 60% volume again here
18. 00:24:546 - 65% volume
19. 00:31:431 - 70% volume
20. 00:35:366 - 65% volume
21. 00:40:284 - 70% volume
22. 00:42:907 - 75% volume
23. 00:45:038 - 60% volume
24. 00:45:530 - 80% volume
25. 00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart
26. 01:05:530 - 65% volume
27. 01:05:858 - 70% volume
28. 01:06:185 - 75% volume
29. 01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
30. 01:13:890 (3,4) - ^
31. 01:17:333 - 70% volume
32. 01:22:251 - 85% volume
33. 01:24:874 - 75% volume
    
    
    good luck

hyouri wrote:

Hello from hyouri's Modding Queue~ hi~

NM


General
00:00:612 - Timing should start here, or else don't use a circle here at all 00:00:612 (1) - t's fine, both of the current ranked versions use this timing (and a note before the first red tick is ok, at least in this case)


Nanadaime Hokage

SPOILER

00:01:595 (3) - This is a little too far It's fine as it is
00:01:759 (4) - Move down a little is stacking with the first slider
00:06:185 (1) - Slider art needs some work why does everyone call me out for this slider ;w;
00:05:366 (2,3) - Bad spacing between those two, move all these three 00:05:694 (3,4,5) - to somewhere like x:340|y:357 moved hitcircle 3 alone
00:12:251 (3) - spacing is off needs to be at like x:290|y:64 or similar dont think aiming for an even DS would make this better
00:12:415 (4) - unnecessary slider art just make it straight or use same as 00:11:923 (2) - Think it's fine
00:12:743 (1) - try sliderart like this http://puu.sh/oqu05/54d6b03067.jpg kool
00:15:038 (5) - remove red slider point and use normal curve / gray point I'll consider
00:15:366 (6) - CTRL + H this and move it to the same spot current one flows better than this
00:16:349 (4) - weird spacing, move it down a little moved a bit
00:16:677 (1) - Try normal non-weird slider here ok call me everything you want but this very weird slider fits well the vocal
00:00:940 - use 60% volume starting this green tick no
00:02:251 - New greentick here with ~65% volume no
00:00:612 - 80% volume on only this note hell no, green tick before a red tick glitches everything D:
00:03:562 - 70-75% volume from here and onward this one is nice, made it 70%
00:14:054 - 60% volume again here alright
00:24:546 - 65% volume kk
00:31:431 - 70% volume no
00:35:366 - 65% volume no
00:40:284 - 70% volume it's already 70% m9
00:42:907 - 75% volume k
00:45:038 - 60% volume k
00:45:530 - 80% volume already is at 80%
00:53:235 (5) - Remove this an pillow two circles on top of 00:53:399 (6) - 's stilderstart changed but no triple, to add consistency with the previous combo
01:05:530 - 65% volume 75% (added a previous with 70%
01:05:858 - 70% volume 80%
01:06:185 - 75% volume 85%
01:12:579 (4,5) - Bad pillowing, 01:12:579 (4) - should be part of 01:12:251 (2,3,4) - 's jumps and so should 01:12:743 (5) -
01:13:890 (3,4) - ^ change both, hope it plays better now
01:17:333 - 70% volume keeping at 60%
01:22:251 - 85% volume 90%
01:24:874 - 75% volume 85%

good luck thanks

2251,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
2333,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
2415,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2497,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
2579,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
2661,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
2743,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2825,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2907,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
3562,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0

Nephroid wrote:

Hi! From #modreqs here.

[Nanadaime Hogake]
Replay: http://puu.sh/ostQx/d4ad8a5ec9.osr
General Comments: Check the symmetry of all "3" shaped sliders. Like 00:07:497 (1) - 00:15:366 (6) - etc. fixed some, some of them are intentional

Also, I thought a lot of the hitsounds were boring, and some of them didn't really match the music. Use a wider range of volumes! Like from 10% to 100% instead of 60% to 90%. It'll make your map sound a lot more interesting. (This is just my opinion, but I'm sure I'm not the only one with this opinion.) I'll try to make the hitsound volume wider, but will avoid the hm lets say less than 40% range because I do not like hitsounds that cant be heard properly

A lot of my comments below are on hit sounds, which aren't difficulty-specific, so they're really for all difficulties. watch me fix for half difficulties and forget for the other half lol

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Gradually increase the volume on these. For example (add these to the "TimingPoints" section of the osu file):

2251,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
2333,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
2415,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
2497,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
2579,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
2661,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
2743,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2825,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
2907,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
3562,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0

about the stream: I liked the idea but didn't like how low you started the hitsounding... I'll increase the hitsound volume only slightly because I don't think the stream starts so (what's the word aaaaaaaaaaa) quiet as for 20% hitsound, but slightly increases so I'll do that (from 80 to 96%)

00:03:562 (1) - I think the hit finish would sound better on 00:02:907 (9). added a finish here and kept the one in the slider

00:04:054 (2) - Feels like there are too many claps here. oops.. this will take a while to check all diffs -_-

00:06:185 (1) - This shape and placement of this slider is a bit strange. I don't think this shape works very well on its own. guys pls he's beautiful

00:14:054 to 00:35:038 - Hitsound volume is a bit too loud. reduced, slightly, but reduced

00:35:038 (1) - 00:36:349 (4) - 00:37:661 (1) - 00:38:972 (5) - Gradually increase volume of hitfinish on these. sure

00:40:284 to 00:44:874 - At the beginning, suddenly drop the volume down (to maybe around 30%-ish), then gradually increase to 100% at the end. yo dog thats quite edgy from 30 to 100 but did increase the hitsound volume ceilling, but kept the 70% base

00:44:874 (5) - Add hitfinish. added

00:45:038 (6) - This detracts from the silence in the music. IMO it's even weirder w/o

00:48:153 (1) - Maybe add hitfinish. lets try some uh
00:50:448 (6) - ^ no
00:52:087 (5) - ^ yes
00:53:399 (6) - ^ yes
00:56:021 (1) - ^, and etc. for the rest of the kiai. hm lets see some

01:00:939 (4,5) - The hitsounds on these sound like a stream, which doesn't match the music. weirdly enough sounds worse w/o ;w;

01:27:333 (3) - A circle would probably make more sense than a slider. Nah, I like it D:


[Insane]
Replay: http://puu.sh/osv0p/3c886c0e2a.osr
General Comments: Same as above. Check "3" shaped slider symmetry and make hitsounds more fun to listen to. Among the difficulties I played, I think that this one is the best of them. The plot thickens

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as above. Same as above.

00:13:890 (8,9,1) - When you have a triple like this, it doesn't make sense to drop the volume on the last note. as weird as it is, I think it is as it is

00:22:579 (5) - Slider doesn't really feel like it belongs. (Visually, that is. It's fine rhythmically.) think it's good

00:24:546 - Use a wider volume range. The whole point of changing the volume is so that players notice the change, right? So what's the point of changing the volume from 60% to 65%? I don't think anybody can actually tell that the volume changed there, especially when they're playing the map.

00:44:874 (5) - Add hitfinish. SURE

00:45:038 (6) - Same as previous difficulty. sry, keeping it

00:45:530 to 01:17:005 - I'm assuming that you haven't gotten to adding hitfinishes to the Kiai section yet, but it'll sound a lot better with them. I'll add some as you suggested, to all diffs. Let's see how it rolls

01:26:349 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The gap at 01:26:841 sounds weird. It might just be the hitsounds on 01:26:349 (1,2,3) though. Yeah that could be it, because many people can swear there's a sound there but I can't hear it... Following the drums here

[Light Insane]
Replay: http://puu.sh/osvzn/a6eea6a29e.osr
General Comments: Same as above.

00:02:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above. Same as above.

00:30:448 (1,2) - The mapping of the "nani mo" in this section is inconsistent with the mapping in the previous section - 00:19:957 (1,2,3). fixed

00:35:530 (2) - You might want to remove slider tick noises. don't think it will change much

01:26:349 (5,6,7) - Missed a NC somewhere maybe? Insane has a NC here. fixed

01:26:349 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - This rhythm is really confusing, and the spacing on 01:26:349 (5,6,7) makes it harder to read than insane. yeah this has been pointed out before but dunno why I havent changed yet, fixed

[]
Good luck with your map!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Nanimo Nanimo >w<

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Yaa! You have my support. The video of the description is the best.

MkGuh wrote:

osu! needs more BR maps (?

Monstrata wrote:

[Nanadaime Hokage]

00:04:546 (3,4) - 1/2 slider. I can't see 4 being a circle because theres no note there. Same applies for 00:05:858 (4,5) - changed
00:08:317 (3,4) - Ctrl+G this rhythm. You might have to mvoe stuff around. think it's better as it is
00:08:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - Poor rhythm choice here too...changed a bit differently

Try this

00:17:661 (1) - Try and map the downbeat. Maybe reduce this slider to 1/2 and add a circle. okey
00:21:103 (1) - Unnecessary NC oops
00:28:808 (1,2,3) - This flows really poorly. hope its better now
00:40:612 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G the rhythm. Having the circles later fits better with the drums/ think current one is better because of the vocal
00:48:808 (3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm alright
01:00:284 (2,3) - Uh I don't get this rhythm at all... there are a lot of better rhythms here. i'm not sure what how much it improved but changed
01:01:103 (5) - Barely audible. Doesn't deserve a kickslider imo. ^
01:09:628 (2,3) - Ctrl+G rhyth,.
01:14:874 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhyth, changed both
01:22:251 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - These don't fit at all... There aren't even audible beats on any of the red ticks... aaaaaaaaaaaa
01:24:874 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Why don't you do the jump spam here? Where there are actually audible beats? I'll see what I can do ;w; will wait for this change because i'm really confused ;w; changed a bit but I'm still not sure if the jumps should be all removed ;w;

[Insane]

00:04:546 (1) - Map that downbeat please xP. alrighty

Rhythm like this would work nicely

00:20:939 (3,4) - 1/2 slider instead. 4 is barely audible. ok
00:34:054 (4,5) - Ctrl+G so you can begin the jump sequence on 00:34:382 - instead. prefer current one
01:21:267 (10) - This is really undermapped. try and map more of the drums here. changed

Hmm, the rhythms you used on the Insane are a lot better. thanks, I guess...? mean... gracias señor monstrata

[Light Insane]

00:06:186 (3,4,5) - Rhythm is off here too... I think you know what to do now, given the previous mods. fixed
00:34:382 (1) - I think 2 circles is better here... kay
00:47:989 (7,8) - This just sounds overmapped to me
00:55:939 (8) - ^ fixed both
01:18:644 (3) - Weird rhythm choice... changed

Try this instead

01:26:677 (3,1) - This is just going to bait people into clicking too early cuz of the pattern. Do something else, moves them apart

[Hard]

00:12:087 (3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm fixed
00:38:153 (4) - End it on the white tick 00:38:644 - instead. fixed
01:09:628 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G rhythm

You need to rework your NC rhythm for basically every diff. NC on downbeats please. A lot of your NC's are over the place and inconsistent sorry ;w; NCs are weird for me because it feels sometimes that I'm using NC on the same sentence, idk.. ;w; I'll make all on downbeats

Good luck! gracias señor monstrata

TheLeviathan wrote:

From my mod Q


To be honest... I don't know what to say, mapset by me feels pretty damn good, and i don't want to discover mistakes or stuff on it from nothing. So ill just shoot 2 stars on it