Short, but hopefully some of it helps
Normal
Normal
00:28:365 (1,2) - Not very important, but you might be able to make this look nicer with the blanketHard
00:51:442 (1,2) - again, I don't like modding blankets, but this can be nicer
01:07:750 (5,6,1) - TBH this pattern looks a little bit lazy and unappealing. I don't care much about the overlap, but the flow isn't very nice.
01:09:904 (2) - Slight movement of the sliderend to x461 y209
01:18:212 (5,6) - I'm not sure what the rules are on this, but Idk about these sliders for "Normal" difficulty, especially under 2*
01:59:135 (2) - Same as this. I think you can make this a single cirlce
02:04:058 (2) - ^
02:13:442 (2,3) - This pattern will be very confusing for a beginner
00:06:519 (2,3) - 00:26:827 (7,1) - 00:40:365 (4,5) - These patterns will also be too much for Normal. But I'm not too sure how you could change it to the beat
01:09:904 (2,6) - I know I made a mod to the position of this but now that I think about it, I think for normal difficulty they should be single circles
00:51:442 (4,5,1) - You use different spacing here than you do here 00:52:365 (3,4,5) - with the same pattern. I assume intentional, but maybe explain? D:
01:16:365 (3) - Possible give this part a little bit more flow and give the slider some curve (optional) Something like this
01:34:212 (3,4) - move to x211 y272
01:47:442 (1) - ctrl + j like you have it here 01:59:135 (7,1) -
01:49:289 (3,1,2) - The spacing between these are different, you can just move 01:49:596 (1,2) - up a little bit if you want
02:14:827 (5,6,7,8,1) - Personally on this part I feel you should go a little bit easier and make this 2 sliders and a circle for the end. Reasoning is that you don't have any other part in the map where you do this, but if you have a good reason for it then keep!