1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - All words sung from the beginning are held a specific length, yet these are the only ones represented by sliders. Horizontally spaced screen circles will do much better.
2. 00:28:697 (2) - Unstack; you haven't been stacking.
3. 00:35:266 (1,1,1,1) - If you're keen on keeping these as sliders, watch the spacing on 00:37:894 (1) - and keep it the same as the sliders. Also remove NCs.
4. 00:46:324 - Missing 1/4 triple here like the next three phrases.
5. 01:06:809 (1) - Combo structure inaccuracte. Try this http://puu.sh/p7AYF.png, with particular consideration to the 1/4 triple bursts.
6. 01:21:893 (6) - Mapping this fill more accurately, shorten slider by 1/2, then start new combo with four circles starting 01:22:112 - .
7. 01:22:441 - Missing timing section.
8. 01:23:880 (1) - Try 382;254, reverse 01:23:989 (2,3) -
9. 01:25:194 (1) - Should not be mapped like previous section, since this iteration starts on the downbeat whereas the previous does not (01:23:552 (4) - . Try 01:25:194 (1,2) - into slider.
10. 01:36:362 (1) - Remove new combo, or do what you did with the above suggestion at 01:06:809 - .
11. 01:49:936 (6) - Like 01:21:893 - .
12. 01:54:975 (1,2,3,4) - Guitar passage not prominent here; pentagon too regular, structured.
13. 02:07:128 (6) - Missing a huge part of the melody.
14. 02:18:072 (4) - Make 1/2 to fill more accurately.
15. 02:28:574 (6) - Use 1/2 sliders like previous phrases.
16. 02:31:749 (1) - Combo structure inaccurate. Use two (1,2,3,4) patterns instead of (1,2,3)s.
17. 02:58:034 (1) - 1/3 slider patterns (either 6 1/3 or 4 1/3 repeaters) might work a bit better here for the objects until red.
18. 04:16:868 (1) - Stream might be better replaced by mapping drums with circles and 1/4 triple bursts; the guitar passage from 04:15:992 (1) - continues and you've mapped in a 1/2 structure.
19. 04:23:437 (5) - Change to 1/2 slider, remove (6,7).
20. 05:03:287 (1) - Like 01:06:809 - .
21. 05:35:586 (6) - Like 02:07:128 - .
22. 06:41:406 (1) - Combo structure inaccurate. Just use (1,2)s or (1,2,3,4)s.

those wrote:

Hey man. Happy Anime North 2016.

1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - All words sung from the beginning are held a specific length, yet these are the only ones represented by sliders. Horizontally spaced screen circles will do much better. following vocals here + surrounding the background picture
2. 00:28:697 (2) - Unstack; you haven't been stacking.
3. 00:35:266 (1,1,1,1) - If you're keen on keeping these as sliders, watch the spacing on 00:37:894 (1) - and keep it the same as the sliders. Also remove NCs.
4. 00:46:324 - Missing 1/4 triple here like the next three phrases.
5. 01:06:809 (1) - Combo structure inaccuracte. Try this http://puu.sh/p7AYF.png, with particular consideration to the 1/4 triple bursts.
6. 01:21:893 (6) - Mapping this fill more accurately, shorten slider by 1/2, then start new combo with four circles starting 01:22:112 - . lmao there is no sound there
7. 01:22:441 - Missing timing section.
8. 01:23:880 (1) - Try 382;254, reverse 01:23:989 (2,3) - I wanted to make a flow break here and a jump to emphasis the change in guitars
9. 01:25:194 (1) - Should not be mapped like previous section, since this iteration starts on the downbeat whereas the previous does not (01:23:552 (4) - . Try 01:25:194 (1,2) - into slider. fixed it a different way
10. 01:36:362 (1) - Remove new combo, or do what you did with the above suggestion at 01:06:809 - .
11. 01:49:936 (6) - Like 01:21:893 - .
12. 01:54:975 (1,2,3,4) - Guitar passage not prominent here; pentagon too regular, structured.
13. 02:07:128 (6) - Missing a huge part of the melody. I skipped the down beat intentionally to bring out the guitar more
14. 02:18:072 (4) - Make 1/2 to fill more accurately.
15. 02:28:574 (6) - Use 1/2 sliders like previous phrases. this one was intentionally done to give a more rhythm variety, I fixed the one before because that one could use the 1/2 emphasis better
16. 02:31:749 (1) - Combo structure inaccurate. Use two (1,2,3,4) patterns instead of (1,2,3)s.
17. 02:58:034 (1) - 1/3 slider patterns (either 6 1/3 or 4 1/3 repeaters) might work a bit better here for the objects until red. the contrast here was the guitar 1/3 vs the drum 1/3, I used a more compact spacing for the guitars so the lead into the spaced streams give more impact
18. 04:16:868 (1) - Stream might be better replaced by mapping drums with circles and 1/4 triple bursts; the guitar passage from 04:15:992 (1) - continues and you've mapped in a 1/2 structure.
19. 04:23:437 (5) - Change to 1/2 slider, remove (6,7).
20. 05:03:287 (1) - Like 01:06:809 - .
21. 05:35:586 (6) - Like 02:07:128 - .
22. 06:41:406 (1) - Combo structure inaccurate. Just use (1,2)s or (1,2,3,4)s. this one is actually correct given the drums are in 3/4 in the background

jonathanlfj wrote:

uhh can someone come and unqualify my map, got some really good suggestions I want to apply

p/5170568

Stjpa wrote:

No need to add lead-in since the game does it already.
Also, a green and a red line shouldn't cause any problems as long as they have the same hitsound thingy and volume. Orange lines are a thing lol.

Fycho wrote:

That rule means these two cases: Two red lines at the same point; Two green lines at the same point.

One red line and one green line at the same point is always not a problem, so this should be fine.

Fycho wrote:

re-congratz jonathan o/

have fun on AN guys i hope i could go as well