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map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/455756 just pick one of the two extras or something, it doesnt have enough mods to go for ranking yet anyways :v
general stuff was already checked well enough here in the past so I'll skip that
[ex ex]
00:05:586 (4) - having this spaced like 00:03:986 (4) - (or even more) would fit the vocal+pitch wy better than a stack
00:09:786 (3,1) - not stacking this would make 00:12:986 (5,1) - easier to get since right now it'S easy to expect the second one to also be a stacked 1/1 (at least is messed me up on my sightread and I'd consider my ar9.3 reading fine enough)
00:17:286 (2) - would work wel las a kickslider to cover the weaker sound on the white tick, probably sth like http://i.imgur.com/uKrdTOy.jpg
00:24:286 (3) - slider starting on blue tick doesnt work that well here cause
00:29:786 (1,2) - i hate pointing out minor visual things, but http://i.imgur.com/02NX78U.jpgwould look so much nicer than the sligh overlap on the slidertail
00:40:386 (2) - is unsnapped, you probably wanted 0.9x sv here?
00:46:586 (2,3) - if you go with the "muted 1/4 sliders to emphasize vocals" thing then shoudnt those also be such sliders?
or maybe at least 00:45:786 (5,2) - cause they even have weak sounds on the blue ticks
01:03:186 (7) - missed nc? fits your 4/1 pattern in the chorus
01:16:786 (4) - unsnapped again, should use 2x sv or change the length slightly, but the first option fits the pattern better
01:17:786 (1) - could be spaced more to emphasize the finish, with how high the spacing before is it's unlikely to be misread as 1/2, sth like http://i.imgur.com/xOLAn9S.jpg
01:18:386 (4,6) - would work well with a bit higher sv cause they are pretty strong and high pitched
map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/455756 just pick one of the two extras or something, it doesnt have enough mods to go for ranking yet anyways :v
general stuff was already checked well enough here in the past so I'll skip that
[ex ex]
00:05:586 (4) - having this spaced like 00:03:986 (4) - (or even more) would fit the vocal+pitch wy better than a stack
00:09:786 (3,1) - not stacking this would make 00:12:986 (5,1) - easier to get since right now it'S easy to expect the second one to also be a stacked 1/1 (at least is messed me up on my sightread and I'd consider my ar9.3 reading fine enough)
00:17:286 (2) - would work wel las a kickslider to cover the weaker sound on the white tick, probably sth like http://i.imgur.com/uKrdTOy.jpg
00:24:286 (3) - slider starting on blue tick doesnt work that well here cause
00:29:786 (1,2) - i hate pointing out minor visual things, but http://i.imgur.com/02NX78U.jpgwould look so much nicer than the sligh overlap on the slidertail
00:40:386 (2) - is unsnapped, you probably wanted 0.9x sv here?
00:46:586 (2,3) - if you go with the "muted 1/4 sliders to emphasize vocals" thing then shoudnt those also be such sliders?
or maybe at least 00:45:786 (5,2) - cause they even have weak sounds on the blue ticks
01:03:186 (7) - missed nc? fits your 4/1 pattern in the chorus
01:16:786 (4) - unsnapped again, should use 2x sv or change the length slightly, but the first option fits the pattern better
01:17:786 (1) - could be spaced more to emphasize the finish, with how high the spacing before is it's unlikely to be misread as 1/2, sth like http://i.imgur.com/xOLAn9S.jpg
01:18:386 (4,6) - would work well with a bit higher sv cause they are pretty strong and high pitched