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Varien - Valkyrie (feat. Laura Brehm)

posted 2016-03-05T19:50:21+00:00

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Lumin

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-03-05T19:50:21+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 16, 2016 at 4:12:56 PM

Artist: Varien
Title: Valkyrie (feat. Laura Brehm)
Tags: drumstep english monstercat dance music electronic drum n bass dubstep dnb Hidari C00L
BPM: 174
Filesize: 3867kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:

Another (4.79 stars, 543 notes)
Cool's Insane (4.65 stars, 549 notes)
Easy (1.49 stars, 181 notes)
Hard (2.99 stars, 370 notes)
Hidari's Darkness (5.3 stars, 676 notes)
Light Insane (3.99 stars, 453 notes)
Normal (2.19 stars, 313 notes)

Download: Varien - Valkyrie (feat. Laura Brehm)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rank? Mayybe..?
Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Hard - by me
Light Insane - by me
CooL's Insane - by C00L
Another - by me
Hidari's Darkness - by Hidari

Last edited by Lumin 2016-05-16T13:13:19+00:00, edited 33 times in total.

Keycap

21 posts

Joined December 2014

Keycap 2016-04-08T18:30:23+00:00

You asked me to mod your map. I have modded your Easy, Normal and Hard difficulties.

[Difficulty: Easy]

The problem I found most annoying in your Easy Difficulty is the often boring and not appealing patterns. Sometimes you have too much for the player to progress, and the other times you have the player wait a bit too long. Most of the sliders are fine to play and do not appeal weirdly. Some of the sliders are to widely variated for an easy difficulty though. Fix this flowproblem.

00:03:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally the overuse of these back-and-forth sliders. Try http://puu.sh/oaN27/49fbbe7904.jpg.
00:05:778 (3) - Slight overlap.
00:11:295 - If I were you I'd blanket the 3'rd slider to the second, as you did with the first.
00:14:054 - You'd generally want a slightly different pattern around this point in the intro, it starts to get more intense and the sliders are exactly the same.
00:25:088 - The back-and-forth sliders are killing the fun of the map.
00:34:744 - In beginner maps, why is there a slider going that far to the right side and pointing to the outside of the screen?
00:36:813 - The whole map is back-and-forths slowly, and then you put a (imo) too fast slider just before another slider. Too fast for this point in the map.
00:36:813 - I'd make these into 2 single taps before starting the slider.
00:37:502 (3,4,5) - In my opinion this would look better when it would be in a perfect vertical line. The 3rd slider can point more towards the following slider.
01:17:330 - As you already had this back-and-forth slider in front of the following next slider, the single tap before you start a slider is not needed. It might confuse a beginning player.
01:19:399 - By removing the single tap, you can put a halfnote slider here. That way you can make an easier link to the following comboslider.
01:19:916 - Add single tap on sliderstart.
01:22:157 - Add a back-and-forth slider here (one and a halfnote).
01:28:364 - Remove single tap before slider.
01:30:433 - Remove single tap, add half slider.
01:30:951 - Add single tap on sliderstart.
01:39:571 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You're only making a circle, twice. Try to mix it up by going slightly to the righthand side. This will keep things interesting.
01:44:054 - I would make these single taps to amphasize the drums.
01:56:123 (1,2) - Slight overlap.
02:06:295 - Make halfnote slider here.
02:06:813 - Add single tap note here.
02:07:157 - Move slider to the left, otherwise its too large spacing.
02:17:502 - Add single tap here. You're letting the player wait a little bit too long.
02:28:364 - Remove single tap, add halfnote slider.
02:28:882 - Add single tap on sliderstart.
02:34:054 (6) - Move this to the right, it lacks flow. (x:360 y:60)
02:34:744 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can rotate 45 clockwise. This will create more flow
02:36:640 - This. I don't know about the single tap before the slider. In my opinion its a bit too hard to beginner players.
02:37:502 - Remove single tap, make it into a fullnote slider.
02:51:985 - Add single tap.
03:10:606 (4,5) - In my opinion, if these two look so different it's not looking well.
03:18:192 (2) - Slight overlap.
03:20:261 - Why is there nothing here?

[Difficulty: Normal]

The problem in this diffuculty is that you only go round clockwise. There is no variation in your map, it has a flow to spin like a washingmachine. Maybe mix things up every now and then with a slider going the opposite side. Your sliders have too much variation. Even if they are slow like this, they should be a little more streamlined.

00:13:364 (5) - It feels a lot better to play when the slider is rotated 30% clockwise and put to x:192 y:148. You will need to fix the following sliderstart as it is too far away from this one.
00:25:433 - I don't know why you leave this space open.
00:38:882 - You can turn this slider around to get a new kind of flow to give the map more interesting features.
00:38:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually, if you flip this all horizontally, you don't get too much variation, but will still get your preffered result.
00:58:192 - Maybe you can even turn the refrain horizontally the other way till the next spinner.
01:00:088 - Slider 5 + 6 should go a bit to the left.
01:08:192 - I should add three fullnote singletaps here.
01:11:468 (5) - This is one of the only 2 back-and-forth sliders in your map. Maybe think of removing them completely, or adding them more often.
01:20:261 - This is an oppertunity to give your map a new direction (swap it around maybe or go anti-clockwise) and by that a more fun experience.
01:58:364 - This is one of the only 2 back-and-forth sliders in your map. Maybe think of removing them completely, or adding them more often.
02:00:433 - Add a singletap after the slider. A different pattern that you can continue throughout the rest of the map.
02:11:468 - ^
02:12:502 - You can add a single tap before the sliderstart. This way the map gets a little more intensse
02:20:951 - This slidercurve feels weird.
02:29:054 - Adding a note here gives more flow.
03:01:813 - I'd rethink about this note. Seeing that it's only a normal, this might be too hard to read.

[Difficulty: Hard]

In my opinion I think you're trying to make the "Hard" Difficulty too hard in comparison to the other two difficulties. It's a giant step forward from 2.2* to 3.6*. Try toning the map down a little bit and to wait for the "Insane" guest difficulty. That way your mapset will have a good curve in difficulties.

00:25:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is weird flow, only part in the song with such close single taps. Right after this you leave a giant whole. Breaks up flow.
00:30:606 (3) - Slider looks weird.
00:34:744 (3) - Only back-and-forth slider this long entire map. It doesn't quite fit there in my opinion.
00:58:020 (1) - From here on it really gets too 'hard'. Try using a lower spacing and not so many notes in between the triples and shortstreams.
01:06:123 - This plays weirdly. You're stopping the flow, why not making it into a wholenote slider.
01:07:847 - This is quite ugly. Try to fix it.
01:11:123 (4,5,6,7) - This is too hard. Spacing.
01:22:157 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:33:192 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:09:054 (4,5,6,7) - ^
02:09:916 - Slider looks weird and is hard to read.
02:20:088 (4,5,6,7) - This is too hard. Spacing.
02:31:985 - Looks weird, hard to read. Place sliderstart somewhere else.
02:33:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is too hard for this difficulty.
03:01:813 - Another one of those invisible notes. This fits a lot better in this difficulty. But maybe try to give the player a little bit more of an idea what to expect.

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-08T19:41:13+00:00

Hidari wrote:
You asked me to mod your map. I wanted you to get experience, I didn't ask you to mod this for the map. Get your facts straight! I have modded your Easy, Normal and Hard difficulties.

[Difficulty: Easy]

The problem I found most annoying in your Easy Difficulty is the often boring and not appealing patterns. Sometimes you have too much for the player to progress, and the other times you have the player wait a bit too long. Most of the sliders are fine to play and do not appeal weirdly. Some of the sliders are to widely variated for an easy difficulty though. Fix this flowproblem. Hmm.. I'll look into it

00:03:020 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Generally the overuse of these back-and-forth sliders. Try http://puu.sh/oaN27/49fbbe7904.jpg. Did something different
00:05:778 (3) - Slight overlap. okay
00:11:295 - If I were you I'd blanket the 3'rd slider to the second, as you did with the first. Bad for flow, variety and and it overlaps with 1 then
00:14:054 - You'd generally want a slightly different pattern around this point in the intro, it starts to get more intense and the sliders are exactly the same. Did something
00:25:088 - The back-and-forth sliders are killing the fun of the map. ok dad
00:34:744 - In beginner maps, why is there a slider going that far to the right side and pointing to the outside of the screen? It's so slight that it won't be a problem
00:36:813 - The whole map is back-and-forths slowly, and then you put a (imo) too fast slider just before another slider. Too fast for this point in the map. Fits imo
00:36:813 - I'd make these into 2 single taps before starting the slider. Nah
00:37:502 (3,4,5) - In my opinion this would look better when it would be in a perfect vertical line. The 3rd slider can point more towards the following slider. It would be too hard to make look clever and this is fine
01:17:330 - As you already had this back-and-forth slider in front of the following next slider, the single tap before you start a slider is not needed. It might confuse a beginning player. Well on the first one range in chronologically from triple to slider is 1 beat but if i delete this note it will be 1 and a half beat to next slider so it would be more confusing, right?
01:19:399 - By removing the single tap, you can put a halfnote slider here. That way you can make an easier link to the following comboslider. Nah, I'll just want to emphasize this snare, and it feels better like this
01:19:916 - Add single tap on sliderstart. It would just confuse player when they cilck one beat from stream
01:22:157 - Add a back-and-forth slider here (one and a halfnote). Doesn't fit in 1.5 star map
01:28:364 - Remove single tap before slider. If this one fast 1/2 beat adapts to slider it wont be so hard to play
01:30:433 - Remove single tap, add half slider. Explained earlier
01:30:951 - Add single tap on sliderstart. Explained earlier
01:39:571 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - You're only making a circle, twice. Try to mix it up by going slightly to the righthand side. This will keep things interesting. It will make this too hard
01:44:054 - I would make these single taps to amphasize the drums.I don't feel like it
01:56:123 (1,2) - Slight overlap. It really wasn't a overlap, but spaced a bit more
02:06:295 - Make halfnote slider here. Explained earlier
02:06:813 - Add single tap note here. Explained earlier
02:07:157 - Move slider to the left, otherwise its too large spacing. No it's not you dimwit
02:17:502 - Add single tap here. You're letting the player wait a little bit too long. Ok dad
02:28:364 - Remove single tap, add halfnote slider. Explained earlier
02:28:882 - Add single tap on sliderstart. Explained earlier
02:34:054 (6) - Move this to the right, it lacks flow. (x:360 y:60) Spacing must be 1x everywhere on easy
02:34:744 (1,2,3,4,1) - You can rotate 45 clockwise. This will create more flow Explained earlier
02:36:640 - This. I don't know about the single tap before the slider. In my opinion its a bit too hard to beginner players. Explained earlier
02:37:502 - Remove single tap, make it into a fullnote slider. Explained earlier
02:51:985 - Add single tap. Not following vocals there
03:10:606 (4,5) - In my opinion, if these two look so different it's not looking well. They're fine
03:18:192 (2) - Slight overlap. Ok dad
03:20:261 - Why is there nothing here? I'm only following vocals there

[Difficulty: Normal]

The problem in this diffuculty is that you only go round clockwise. There is no variation in your map, it has a flow to spin like a washingmachine. Maybe mix things up every now and then with a slider going the opposite side. Your sliders have too much variation. Even if they are slow like this, they should be a little more streamlined. ok

00:13:364 (5) - It feels a lot better to play when the slider is rotated 30% clockwise and put to x:192 y:148. You will need to fix the following sliderstart as it is too far away from this one. Nah
00:25:433 - I don't know why you leave this space open. Following vocals
00:38:882 - You can turn this slider around to get a new kind of flow to give the map more interesting features.
00:38:882 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually, if you flip this all horizontally, you don't get too much variation, but will still get your preffered result.Best thing in your mod so far
00:58:192 - Maybe you can even turn the refrain horizontally the other way till the next spinner. Did something else
01:00:088 - Slider 5 + 6 should go a bit to the left. Nah
01:08:192 - I should add three fullnote singletaps here. No need imo, its like specially quiet part of the map so it could be left unmapped imo
01:11:468 (5) - This is one of the only 2 back-and-forth sliders in your map. Maybe think of removing them completely, or adding them more often.They fit imo
01:20:261 - This is an oppertunity to give your map a new direction (swap it around maybe or go anti-clockwise) and by that a more fun experience. Ok I made it like that
01:58:364 - This is one of the only 2 back-and-forth sliders in your map. Maybe think of removing them completely, or adding them more often. Explained earlier
02:00:433 - Add a singletap after the slider. A different pattern that you can continue throughout the rest of the map. Why? There is no sound
02:11:468 - ^ Explained earlier
02:12:502 - You can add a single tap before the sliderstart. This way the map gets a little more intensse Explained earlier in Easy diff mod
02:20:951 - This slidercurve feels weird. Changed a bit
02:29:054 - Adding a note here gives more flow. Explained earlier
03:01:813 - I'd rethink about this note. Seeing that it's only a normal, this might be too hard to read. More complaints = change

[Difficulty: Hard]

In my opinion I think you're trying to make the "Hard" Difficulty too hard in comparison to the other two difficulties. It's a giant step forward from 2.2* to 3.6*. Try toning the map down a little bit and to wait for the "Insane" guest difficulty. That way your mapset will have a good curve in difficulties. Thought about the same

00:25:088 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is weird flow, only part in the song with such close single taps. Right after this you leave a giant whole. Breaks up flow. ok
00:30:606 (3) - Slider looks weird. I like it :3
00:34:744 (3) - Only back-and-forth slider this long entire map. It doesn't quite fit there in my opinion. Fits perfectly in that part imo
00:58:020 (1) - From here on it really gets too 'hard'. Try using a lower spacing and not so many notes in between the triples and shortstreams. Something like that
01:06:123 - This plays weirdly. You're stopping the flow, why not making it into a wholenote slider. ?
01:07:847 - This is quite ugly. Try to fix it. Ok dad
01:11:123 (4,5,6,7) - This is too hard. Spacing. m'kay
01:22:157 (4,5,6,7) - ^ m'kay
01:33:192 (4,5,6,7) - ^ m'kay
02:09:054 (4,5,6,7) - ^ m'kay
02:09:916 - Slider looks weird and is hard to read. m'kay
02:20:088 (4,5,6,7) - This is too hard. Spacing. m'kay
02:31:985 - Looks weird, hard to read. Place sliderstart somewhere else. m'kay
02:33:882 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is too hard for this difficulty. m'kay
03:01:813 - Another one of those invisible notes. This fits a lot better in this difficulty. But maybe try to give the player a little bit more of an idea what to expect. Change if more complaints

Not a bad one for your first mod! Keep up the same work. Just be more accurate at modding easier diffs and avoid saying things that I have commented above. And yes it was helpful thank you.

Deppyforce

1,961 posts

Joined November 2014

Deppyforce 2016-04-11T14:27:08+00:00

@hidari

i dont think the lumin's m4m mod was useful enough (i denied a lot) so i'll just shoot 2 stars instead
gl

my reply to that mod in case you want it p/5031517
looks like im modding it

[General]
only highest diff can have custom diff name, rename your 'resurrection' to insane and name the extra to hidari's resurrection insted

[Easy]
u cant repeat slider twice in easy diff, as said in pm

the fact that the first part is more intense than the kiai here is extremely weird :/

01:11:640 - dont ignore drums since this is the kiai and it could be more intense than other parts, same with all next stanzas
01:18:882 (7) - http://puu.sh/oesmS/610c47ecd9.jpg works better cuz the gap will be classic 1/1 if you do this, and the spacing between 7 - 8 - 1 is almost same, beginner might misread
01:44:054 (4) - could split to 1/2 + circle cuz snare
02:05:778 (7,8) - same as 01:18:882 (7) -
02:28:882 - shouldnt ignore imo theres drums
02:55:433 - from this part on, the rhythms are kinda boring. try add circle to some of the 2/1 gaps
03:20:261 - downbeat with obvious sound got ignored

i dont like the fact that alot of drums got ignored, this is easy diff but it doesnt mean that you should ignore them

[Normal]
00:34:744 (3) - dont necessary but flows bad imo, try make this a curve slider instead
01:02:847 (5) - make this rhythm constant with 01:00:088 (5,6) - cuz its same
01:19:916 - why is this got ignored while u mapped alot of 1/2 rhythms? makes no sense imo
01:20:261 (1,2) - should be just stack here if u want to be safe
01:22:157 (4,5,6,7,1) - too long 1/2 train for normal diff, 5+6 / 6+7 to a 1/2 slider, same for all of this rhythm
01:44:054 (4,5,1) - make these form triangles for aesthetics
02:17:502 - u were mapping drums before but this got ignored
02:57:675 - missing note?

[Hard]
00:25:088 (1,2,3,4) - ppl might misread cuz the spacing is almost same but 3 -> 4 is 1/1
00:46:468 (4) - i dont hear any sound on 1/2 here
00:59:916 (3,4) - why is angle suddenly become sharp again? flows weirdd
01:05:778 (3,4,1) - same with 00:25:088 (1,2,3,4) -
01:06:468 (1) - could split to 2 sliders lol
01:44:054 (1,2,3) - make proper triangle pls
02:02:675 (3) - better to make downbeat clickable instead of landing on it
02:09:399 (5,1) - blanket
02:17:157 (1) - same as in normal
02:28:709 - ignored drum / this one really should be mapped since its the start of new phase
02:37:157 - pls make snare clickable
03:21:640 - missing note?

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-11T18:20:13+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
@hidari

i dont think the lumin's m4m mod was useful enough (i denied a lot) so i'll just shoot 2 stars instead
gl

my reply to that mod in case you want it p/5031517
looks like im modding it

[General]
only highest diff can have custom diff name, rename your 'resurrection' to insane and name the extra to hidari's resurrection insted I thought that it only applied to mapper's hardest diff, with no GDs includet but w/e

[Easy]
u cant repeat slider twice in easy diff, as said in pm

the fact that the first part is more intense than the kiai here is extremely weird :/ not anymore

01:11:640 - dont ignore drums since this is the kiai and it could be more intense than other parts, same with all next stanzas okay
01:18:882 (7) - http://puu.sh/oesmS/610c47ecd9.jpg works better cuz the gap will be classic 1/1 if you do this, and the spacing between 7 - 8 - 1 is almost same, beginner might misread Keep this for now
01:44:054 (4) - could split to 1/2 + circle cuz snare okay
02:05:778 (7,8) - same as 01:18:882 (7) - ^
02:28:882 - shouldnt ignore imo theres drums How do I map those drums without getting it like 2 star song/to make it look clever, and as I have ignored them earlier I will ignore them now too
02:55:433 - from this part on, the rhythms are kinda boring. try add circle to some of the 2/1 gaps okay
03:20:261 - downbeat with obvious sound got ignored Well I thought that I would just have mapped vocals but this goes too

i dont like the fact that alot of drums got ignored, this is easy diff but it doesnt mean that you should ignore them

[Normal]
00:34:744 (3) - dont necessary but flows bad imo, try make this a curve slider instead okay
01:02:847 (5) - make this rhythm constant with 01:00:088 (5,6) - cuz its same okay
01:19:916 - why is this got ignored while u mapped alot of 1/2 rhythms? makes no sense imo Because it is not a 1/2 rhythm.
01:20:261 (1,2) - should be just stack here if u want to be safe not intentional
01:22:157 (4,5,6,7,1) - too long 1/2 train for normal diff, 5+6 / 6+7 to a 1/2 slider, same for all of this rhythm is it? okay (I liked them tho)
01:44:054 (4,5,1) - make these form triangles for aesthetics Did triangles but in different way
02:17:502 - u were mapping drums before but this got ignored Following vocal there
02:57:675 - missing note? okay

[Hard]
00:25:088 (1,2,3,4) - ppl might misread cuz the spacing is almost same but 3 -> 4 is 1/1 okay
00:46:468 (4) - i dont hear any sound on 1/2 here I hear, its a really low one and it fits well in that part, sudden 1/1 slider would be random
00:59:916 (3,4) - why is angle suddenly become sharp again? flows weirdd okay
01:05:778 (3,4,1) - same with 00:25:088 (1,2,3,4) - okay
01:06:468 (1) - could split to 2 sliders lol Actually at first it was but I changed it to 1 but let's make it 2 again
01:44:054 (1,2,3) - make proper triangle pls It is not meant to be a triangle
02:02:675 (3) - better to make downbeat clickable instead of landing on it Both beats have same strenght, no need imo, more complaints = change
02:09:399 (5,1) - blanket okay
02:17:157 (1) - same as in normal Same as in normal
02:28:709 - ignored drum / this one really should be mapped since its the start of new phase not intentional
02:37:157 - pls make snare clickable okay
03:21:640 - missing note? Nope, no sound

Thanks for mod and stars

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2016-04-11T18:49:44+00:00

[General]

■ This map is used to image size 1366xx766 You try change to image size 1366x768
■ The map is used to breaks time, You are check Letterbox during breaks.

[Easy]

AR -1

■ 00:14:054 (1) I think a different sound to the slider head, I hope you find a different finish sound here.
■ 00:20:951 (2,3) I just suggestion this sliders symmetry. it's really clean pattern imo
■ 00:25:088 (1) This slider head the same 00:14:054 (1)
■ 00:44:399 (4) This slider three point move x320 y:160 is good shape
■ 00:58:192 (1) Can you add this slider head finish sound? cuz this point is a different feel starting point
■ 01:03:709 (1) Add finish this slider head.
■ 01:07:847 (1) The spinner end add finish please.
■ 01:09:226 (1) ^ The same
■ 01:19:399 (8) Hmm, I don't understand this note rhythm. it's so empty feel here, Can you add 1/1 slider this point?
■ 01:30:606 (8) ^ The same
■ 01:31:295 (1) Add finish to slider head.
■ 01:42:330 (1) Add finish this note.
■ 01:56:123 (1) This is point a different song starting point here. add finish please.
■ 02:07:157 (1) This is slider head add finish please.
■ 02:18:192 (1) ^
■ 02:29:226 (1) ^
■ 03:11:985 (5) This is slider shape a really low quality, I recommend 03:10:606 (4) slider copy and symmetry here
■ 03:21:813 (1) Why is spinner starting point here?, I think a little awkward rhythm imo. the spinner move 00:21:985 or 03:21:640 is good

[Normal]

AR- 1~2 OD - 1 It's really so hard AR OD setting BECAUSE this map is bpm a usually also reading is fine.

■ 00:58:192 (1) Add finish to slider head
■ 01:03:709 (1) ^
■ 01:07:847 (1) The spinner end add finish please.
■ 01:09:226 (1) Slider head add finish please.
■ 01:13:882 (4,5) I don't understand this slider and note rhythm and pattern. it's a little hard pattern imo. also You a lot of ignore this part rhythm. Can you try this rhythm and pattern?

SPOILER

■ 01:20:261 (1) The slider head point add finish please.
■ 01:24:916 (4,5) The same part 01:13:882 (4,5) here
■ 01:35:951 (4,5) ^
■ 01:40:778 (2,3,4,5) This is sliders Unrankable patterns. cuz this slider stack to beginner players is really can't reading also playing to this part is really confused here.
■ 01:43:537 (2,3,4,5) The same this part ^
■ 02:00:778 (4,5) Same 01:13:882 (4,5)
■ 02:06:295 (5,6) ^
■ 02:11:813 (4,5) ^
■ 02:18:192 (1) Slider head add finish please.
■ 02:22:847 (4,5) I think you already know this part.
■ 03:11:468 (2) You are check this slider spacing.

[Hard]

I hope this hard diff spacing to consistency.

■ 00:16:813 (5,6,1) Why you don't consistency spacing this patterns?
■ 01:00:088 (1,2,3,4) You try consistent of streets this patterns spacing.
■ 01:02:675 (1,2,3,4) ^
■ 01:22:847 (4,5,6,7,1) The spacing is wrong this note paterrns, The (7) note move x:256 y:348 here.

[Insane]

Seems this diff a little used to big spacing. I think this diff is Extra imo. but not sure my opinion. nevertheless, You try this Insane diff a recommended to reduce the distance.

[Hidra's Extra]

Look fine this diff :3

Good Luck.

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-11T20:18:15+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
[General]

■ This map is used to image size 1366xx766 You try change to image size 1366x768 Oh, whoops
■ The map is used to breaks time, You are check Letterbox during breaks. ?

[Easy]

AR -1 Okay

■ 00:14:054 (1) I think a different sound to the slider head, I hope you find a different finish sound here. Okay
■ 00:20:951 (2,3) I just suggestion this sliders symmetry. it's really clean pattern imo I'll keep this
■ 00:25:088 (1) This slider head the same 00:14:054 (1) Okay
■ 00:44:399 (4) This slider three point move x320 y:160 is good shape Okay
■ 00:58:192 (1) Can you add this slider head finish sound? cuz this point is a different feel starting point Okay
■ 01:03:709 (1) Add finish this slider head. Okay
■ 01:07:847 (1) The spinner end add finish please. Okay
■ 01:09:226 (1) ^ The same Okay
■ 01:19:399 (8) Hmm, I don't understand this note rhythm. it's so empty feel here, Can you add 1/1 slider this point? Keep this for now, it follows only snare there
■ 01:30:606 (8) ^ The same ^
■ 01:31:295 (1) Add finish to slider head. Okay
■ 01:42:330 (1) Add finish this note. Okay
■ 01:56:123 (1) This is point a different song starting point here. add finish please. Okay
■ 02:07:157 (1) This is slider head add finish please. Okay
■ 02:18:192 (1) ^ Okay
■ 02:29:226 (1) ^ Okay
■ 03:11:985 (5) This is slider shape a really low quality, I recommend 03:10:606 (4) slider copy and symmetry here Okay
■ 03:21:813 (1) Why is spinner starting point here?, I think a little awkward rhythm imo. the spinner move 00:21:985 or 03:21:640 is good Tried those other two but they feel awkward, so I'll keep this

[Normal]

AR- 1~2 OD - 1 It's really so hard AR OD setting BECAUSE this map is bpm a usually also reading is fine. Okay

■ 00:58:192 (1) Add finish to slider head Okay
■ 01:03:709 (1) ^ Okay
■ 01:07:847 (1) The spinner end add finish please. Okay
■ 01:09:226 (1) Slider head add finish please. Okay
■ 01:13:882 (4,5) I don't understand this slider and note rhythm and pattern. it's a little hard pattern imo. also You a lot of ignore this part rhythm. Can you try this rhythm and pattern? I'll look into it tomorrow with more time and see what I get done, now that you mentioned it it feels stupid for me too
SPOILER
■ 01:20:261 (1) The slider head point add finish please. Okay
■ 01:24:916 (4,5) The same part 01:13:882 (4,5) here
■ 01:35:951 (4,5) ^
■ 01:40:778 (2,3,4,5) This is sliders Unrankable patterns. cuz this slider stack to beginner players is really can't reading also playing to this part is really confused here. Okay
■ 01:43:537 (2,3,4,5) The same this part ^
■ 02:00:778 (4,5) Same 01:13:882 (4,5)
■ 02:06:295 (5,6) ^
■ 02:11:813 (4,5) ^
■ 02:18:192 (1) Slider head add finish please. Okay
■ 02:22:847 (4,5) I think you already know this part.
■ 03:11:468 (2) You are check this slider spacing. Okay

[Hard]

I hope this hard diff spacing to consistency.

■ 00:16:813 (5,6,1) Why you don't consistency spacing this patterns?
■ 01:00:088 (1,2,3,4) You try consistent of streets this patterns spacing.
■ 01:02:675 (1,2,3,4) ^
■ 01:22:847 (4,5,6,7,1) The spacing is wrong this note paterrns, The (7) note move x:256 y:348 here.
Everything fixed and inconsistency not intentional

[Insane]

Seems this diff a little used to big spacing. I think this diff is Extra imo. but not sure my opinion. nevertheless, You try this Insane diff a recommended to reduce the distance.
I like it now but more complaints = change

[Hidra's Extra]

Look fine this diff :3
Hidari smiled reading this

Good Luck.

Thank you for the mod! Helpful with hitsounding!

Kryptogram

600 posts

Joined December 2010

Kryptogram 2016-04-12T19:54:28+00:00

Hi Lumin!

General

Use the same Kiai parts for all the difficults.
00:58:192 - 01:07:847 I think that Kiai time its unnecesary, i think its just when the song rises and then drops at 01:09:226 where Kiai really starts.
01:08:882 (x) - That timeline is usseles (?).

Easy

I think OD should be 2 or 2.5 IMO.

NC:

Follow the same NC partners that you used in Normal, some examples:
00:27:847 (3) - NC here and remove it here 00:29:226 (1).
00:30:606 (2) - NC here.
00:33:364 (3) - NC here.
00:34:744 (5) - NC here and remove it here 00:36:123 (1).
01:58:882 (5) - Add a NC here.
02:04:399 (5) - Add a NC here.
02:09:916 (5) - Add a NC here.
02:15:433 (4) - Add a NC here.

And keep it up like that.

Mapping:
00:59:571 (2) - Press shift and move the slider up, to align it perfectly whit the previous slider.
01:00:951 (3,4) - You cand do the same whit those.
01:03:709 (1,2) - I'm not really sure if those sliders are hard to read for new begginers, IMO more than one reverse slider in an easy diff its hard to read.
01:17:330 (4) - I think this is hard to read for new players, consider removing it.
01:28:364 (4) - Same here.
03:14:054 (2) - 03:20:606 (1) - Too many sliders/notes together, make little breaks to make it more easy.
03:21:813 (1) - Start this spinner here 03:21:640 (x) it fits better (and end it in the same position).

Hitsounds:
00:47:157 (1) - I guess you can add a whistle, it feels a little bit empty.
01:20:261 (1) - Add a normal finish at the begin of the slider, it fits whit the isntrumental.
03:08:882 (3) - Replace the finish for a whistle, sounds better.

I think thats all, by the way, you can improve the shape of your sliders, examples: 01:11:985 (5), 01:17:502 (5). And fix the NC inconsistency, please.

Normal

02:17:157 (1) - Unnescesary NC.

Mapping:
01:20:951 (2) - I think this note its better if its not stacked whit the previous slider.
01:26:468 (2) - Same here.
03:11:554 (2) - Weird slider place.

Hitsounds:
01:31:295 (1) - Add a normal finish a the begin to follow the instrumental.
01:36:813 (1) - Same here.
02:07:157 (1) - Same here.
02:29:226 (1) - Same here.
03:08:882 (2) - Replace the finish for a whistle.

Good difficult, no major problems found.

Hard

NC:

Same problems as Easy, you should guide whit the NC that normal diff have. Some of them:

00:27:847 (8) - NC here and remove it here 00:29:226 (1).
00:30:606 (3) - NC here.

Mapping:
01:04:916 (5) - Add a note here, to keep the rhythm whit the instrumental.
01:06:295 (5) - Same here.
01:08:882 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure of this stream in a hard diff since the BPM is pretty high (this goes to all the next streams).
01:22:157 (4) - Fix the space please.
03:21:813 (1) - Start this spinner here 03:21:640 (x) it fits better (and end it in the same position).

Hitsounds:
01:36:813 (1) - Add finish at the begin, it flows whit the instrumental.
01:56:123 (1) - Same here.
02:40:261 (1) - Add a finish here to follow the instrumental.

The only thing i don't like are the 4-5 notes stream, i think its a Hard not an Insane, otherwise, good difficult.

Cool's Insane

OD should be 7 or 6,5, 9 is not worth it.

Mapping:
00:27:502 (6) - Please add a note there, it feels empty according to the vocals.
00:36:985 (3) - Add a note here too, to follow the vocals.
01:13:192 (4) - Move this note 2 grids to the left, to make a perfect blanket.
02:51:985 (2,3,4) - Fix the space in 2 and 3 please.
03:06:295 (4,5) - Fix the space here too.
03:11:813 (4) - Add a note here to follow the isntrumental.

Hitsounds:
01:42:330 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of the slider, to follow the instrumental.

Maybe too many jumps, but nice difficult.

Insane

OD 7 IMO.

Mapping:
00:29:399 (4) - I think u should delete this note, sounds overmaped to me.
03:21:726 (1) - Start this spinner on 03:21:640 (1), remove this note 03:24:399 (1) and finish the spinner there.

Hitsounds:
01:20:261 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental.
02:07:157 (1) - Same here.
03:01:813 (4) - Replace the finish for a whistle, sounds better.
03:03:709 (5) - Replace the finish at the end for a whistle, same reason.
03:09:226 (3) - Same here.

Hope it was a helpful mod, nice song and nice difficult, just in case in next beatmaps keep the consistency whit the NC. Good luck!

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2016-04-12T20:14:46+00:00

[Te][Amo] wrote:
Cool's Insane

OD should be 7 or 6,5, 9 is not worth it. yh ik when i started mapping this i put this to a extra sort of style in terms of the OD HP and AR, so yh that will be changed

Mapping:

00:27:502 (6) - Please add a note there, it feels empty according to the vocals. yh sure, sounds pretty kek
00:36:985 (3) - Add a note here too, to follow the vocals. ^
01:13:192 (4) - Move this note 2 grids to the left, to make a perfect blanket. ^
02:51:985 (2,3,4) - Fix the space in 2 and 3 please. thats there to emphasise the drum hit on the 02:52:330 (4) - so unfortunatelly im keeping that
03:06:295 (4,5) - Fix the space here too. ^ again same thing, i think leaving these notes at the same spacing or stacked is a bad idea that's why they are how they are
03:11:813 (4) - Add a note here to follow the isntrumental. i have to dissagree here the intrumental you are talking about is really faint which imo shoudnt be emphasised.

Hitsounds:

01:42:330 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of the slider, to follow the instrumental. im gonna leave that to lumin since i didnt do the hitsounds

Maybe too many jumps, but nice difficult. thank you and the jumps well lets be honest what dnb song doesnt have jumps

Hope it was a helpful mod, nice song and nice difficult, just in case in next beatmaps keep the consistency whit the NC. Good luck!

bleee

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Last edited by C00L 2016-04-12T20:45:45+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-12T20:37:22+00:00

[Te][Amo] wrote:
Hi Lumin!

General

Overall almost all mistakes in hitsounding and NCs were unintentional so as lazy as I I'll just answer fix to them without more explanation

Use the same Kiai parts for all the difficults. okay
00:58:192 - 01:07:847 I think that Kiai time its unnecesary, i think its just when the song rises and then drops at 01:09:226 where Kiai really starts. I think that it's the most intense part of the song
01:08:882 (x) - That timeline is usseles (?). It's a preview point my friend
Easy

I think OD should be 2 or 2.5 IMO. Keep this

NC:

Follow the same NC partners that you used in Normal, some examples:
00:27:847 (3) - NC here and remove it here 00:29:226 (1). Fix
00:30:606 (2) - NC here. Fix
00:33:364 (3) - NC here. Fix
00:34:744 (5) - NC here and remove it here 00:36:123 (1). something different
01:58:882 (5) - Add a NC here. Fix
02:04:399 (5) - Add a NC here. Fix
02:09:916 (5) - Add a NC here. Fix
02:15:433 (4) - Add a NC here. Fix

And keep it up like that.

Mapping:

00:59:571 (2) - Press shift and move the slider up, to align it perfectly whit the previous slider. Fix
01:00:951 (3,4) - You cand do the same whit those. I want to keep this
01:03:709 (1,2) - I'm not really sure if those sliders are hard to read for new begginers, IMO more than one reverse slider in an easy diff its hard to read. Oh, I had to change these damn
01:17:330 (4) - I think this is hard to read for new players, consider removing it. Fix
01:28:364 (4) - Same here. Fix
03:14:054 (2) - 03:20:606 (1) - Too many sliders/notes together, make little breaks to make it more easy. Fix
03:21:813 (1) - Start this spinner here 03:21:640 (x) it fits better (and end it in the same position). Fix

Hitsounds:

00:47:157 (1) - I guess you can add a whistle, it feels a little bit empty. Fix
01:20:261 (1) - Add a normal finish at the begin of the slider, it fits whit the isntrumental. Fix
03:08:882 (3) - Replace the finish for a whistle, sounds better. Fix

I think thats all, by the way, you can improve the shape of your sliders, examples: 01:11:985 (5), 01:17:502 (5). And fix the NC inconsistency, please.

Normal

NC:
02:17:157 (1) - Unnescesary NC. It suddenly follows vocals and combo coloring is different, I'll keep

Mapping:

01:20:951 (2) - I think this note its better if its not stacked whit the previous slider. Fix
01:26:468 (2) - Same here. Fix
03:11:554 (2) - Weird slider place. Fix

Hitsounds:

01:31:295 (1) - Add a normal finish a the begin to follow the instrumental. Fix
01:36:813 (1) - Same here. Fix
02:07:157 (1) - Same here. Fix
02:29:226 (1) - Same here. Fix
03:08:882 (2) - Replace the finish for a whistle. Fix

Good difficult, no major problems found. Nice

Hard

NC:

Same problems as Easy, you should guide whit the NC that normal diff have. Some of them:
00:27:847 (8) - NC here and remove it here 00:29:226 (1). Intentional
00:30:606 (3) - NC here. ^

Mapping:

01:04:916 (5) - Add a note here, to keep the rhythm whit the instrumental. Nah, I want to emphazise snare
01:06:295 (5) - Same here. ^
01:08:882 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure of this stream in a hard diff since the BPM is pretty high (this goes to all the next streams). Well I can't come up with anything else that would fit this spot
01:22:157 (4) - Fix the space please. Fix
03:21:813 (1) - Start this spinner here 03:21:640 (x) it fits better (and end it in the same position). Fix

Hitsounds:

01:36:813 (1) - Add finish at the begin, it flows whit the instrumental. Fix
01:56:123 (1) - Same here. Fix
02:40:261 (1) - Add a finish here to follow the instrumental. Fix

The only thing i don't like are the 4-5 notes stream, i think its a Hard not an Insane, otherwise, good difficult.

Insane

OD 7 IMO. I like 8

Mapping:

00:29:399 (4) - I think u should delete this note, sounds overmaped to me. You can hear a sound if you concentrate
03:21:726 (1) - Start this spinner on 03:21:640 (1), remove this note 03:24:399 (1) and finish the spinner there. Fix

Hitsounds:

01:20:261 (1) - Add a finish at the begin to follow the instrumental. Fix
02:07:157 (1) - Same here. Fix
03:01:813 (4) - Replace the finish for a whistle, sounds better. Fix
03:03:709 (5) - Replace the finish at the end for a whistle, same reason. Fix
03:09:226 (3) - Same here. Fix

Hope it was a helpful mod, nice song and nice difficult, just in case in next beatmaps keep the consistency whit the NC. yeah Good luck!

Thank you for the mod!

Pentori

1,157 posts

Joined November 2015

Pentori 2016-04-13T13:26:19+00:00

m4m

[General]
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/valky ... d891719965
http://music.monstercat.com/track/valky ... aura-brehm
add: dance music electronic drum n bass dubstep dnb to tags

[Hard]
00:11:985 (2) - this note sits in the middle of a string of beats. try stack it on one
00:14:744 (2,3) - copy paste 00:14:054 (1) - this slider so that 2,3 are parallel
00:18:537 (4,5) - lots of opportunities to blanket at the beginning of this map. maybe go back and look over your patterns and see where you can clean them up. this is a good example of where you could blanket
00:19:571 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders seem to just be placed here instead of using the rotate tool. use ctrl+shift+r and type 25 deg and use that 00:20:261 (2,4) - can be the same slider.
00:22:330 (1,2) - move a bit closer so they hug each other
00:29:226 (1) - this slider doesn't look good. if you move the 2nd last point which is white a little closer to the 2nd white point it'll look better http://puu.sh/ogE9H/1df554db03.jpg
01:25:433 (8,1) - bad overlap. give more room
00:30:606 (3) - only use 2 points after the red point http://puu.sh/ogEdS/f8504dc5ab.jpg
00:33:364 (1) - move the red point closer http://puu.sh/ogEex/de8027325f.jpg
00:44:399 (1,2,3,4) - use rotate tool
00:58:709 (5,7) - copy pasta so its the same slider
01:04:054 (2,3) - ^ and ctrl j h
01:05:433 (2,3) - blanket
01:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this is a pretty dull part here. i reckon you could put the effort in and remap this part to create something better that isn't just sliders on the same beats
02:12:330 (5,6,7,8,1) - i just realised this is a hard and looked at your map spread. you have a big hole between your 2.18 and 3.51. consider swapping out the streams here for a slider to nerf the map http://puu.sh/ogEza/7734ba1aeb.jpg
02:59:399 (6,7,1) - slow part of the song. delete note 7
03:07:675 (2,3,4) - delete 3

[C00L's Insane]
ur not using the first 2 green timing points so you can delete them
00:31:985 (4,5) - straighten slider 4 so it doesnt look like a failed blanket
00:34:744 (4,5,6,1) - why have you lowered ds all of a sudden? if you want to do it to the music you have to do it gradually
00:45:778 (4,5,6,1) - distance
01:09:226 (1,3,1) - dont use 3 of these sliders in a row. they're used to redirect flow and not to be used leisurely
01:13:364 (1,2) - you'll have to map down and to the right after pointing that way
01:17:502 (1) - this looks ugly make it http://puu.sh/ogFAl/d207c3861c.jpg
01:23:020 (1) - ^
01:40:088 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is hard and really uncreating. short jumps that change direction would be perfect here
01:51:295 (1) - remove this slider, you just used one 4 seconds ago
02:02:675 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - what are the double notes emphasizing here? if the answer is "i put them there for fun" then change it
02:16:468 (5,1) - blanket better
02:19:226 (5,6,1) - distance between 6,1 is double of 5,6 without anything dramatic happening. this shouldn't be a thing in a 4.65* map. you still can have that extra jump but please don't make it double
02:21:985 (5,6,1) - ^
02:24:916 (6,1) - ^
03:03:537 (4,1) - you only do something like this for spacing. the note here is right after. if you want to show that there is a drum sound, make the jump a tad bigger
03:06:295 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:11:295 (2,3,4) - how do you expect someone to read this? use spacing
03:18:882 (1,2,3,4) - check spacing of 1,2
I see that you are stacking by yourself to show doubles but it makes it really hard to read because there is no indication in the music for a double to be there

[Hidari's Darkness]
a lot of overmapping here to bring the difficulty up. you can make the louder parts of the song difficult but keep the softer parts playable and not having a note every tick
00:23:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks untidy, make a pattern
00:26:295 (5) - overmap
00:27:330 (3) - ^
00:29:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - more overmap. the vocal is on every 2nd white tick so why not just use 1/1 beat sliders
00:33:364 (1,3) - these sliders would look so much better like this http://puu.sh/ogGtn/d860c1529f.jpg
00:34:744 (4) - mirror 00:35:433 (6)
00:46:468 (5,6) - mirror
01:23:537 (3) - the main beat should always be clickable. here its on the end of a slider
01:26:295 (6) - ^
01:34:571 (2) - ^
01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - lol why. theres clearly still a beat going on in the background why not map to that?
02:39:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - uh? from what I see 4,5 are close 5,6 are apart when 6 is on red tick 9,10 are apart when 10 is on red tick and your 1 is apart which i guess is ok. fix distances
03:07:847 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmapping again, listen to vocals
03:23:364 (4,5,6) - what are these sliders following?
timing point 02:34:744 does nothing

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-13T14:28:23+00:00

Pentori wrote:
m4m

[General]
https://itunes.apple.com/us/album/valky ... d891719965
http://music.monstercat.com/track/valky ... aura-brehm
add: dance music electronic drum n bass dubstep dnb to tags Okay

[Hard]
00:11:985 (2) - this note sits in the middle of a string of beats. try stack it on one Only one stack in that whole part? Feels random
00:14:744 (2,3) - copy paste 00:14:054 (1) - this slider so that 2,3 are parallel Okay
00:18:537 (4,5) - lots of opportunities to blanket at the beginning of this map. maybe go back and look over your patterns and see where you can clean them up. this is a good example of where you could blanket It would bring inconsistency in spacing if I'd try to blanket everything there
00:19:571 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders seem to just be placed here instead of using the rotate tool. use ctrl+shift+r and type 25 deg and use that 00:20:261 (2,4) - can be the same slider. Okay (and I know how to use rotate tool btw :3)
00:22:330 (1,2) - move a bit closer so they hug each other Okay
00:29:226 (1) - this slider doesn't look good. if you move the 2nd last point which is white a little closer to the 2nd white point it'll look better http://puu.sh/ogE9H/1df554db03.jpg Okay
01:25:433 (8,1) - bad overlap. give more room Okay
00:30:606 (3) - only use 2 points after the red point http://puu.sh/ogEdS/f8504dc5ab.jpg Not much difference but w/e okay
00:33:364 (1) - move the red point closer http://puu.sh/ogEex/de8027325f.jpg Okay
00:44:399 (1,2,3,4) - use rotate tool I don't want this to be fully symmetrical
00:58:709 (5,7) - copy pasta so its the same slider Okay
01:04:054 (2,3) - ^ and ctrl j h Okay
01:05:433 (2,3) - blanket It's so far away tho
01:39:571 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - this is a pretty dull part here. i reckon you could put the effort in and remap this part to create something better that isn't just sliders on the same beats Well it gives a bit difference and rest
02:12:330 (5,6,7,8,1) - i just realised this is a hard and looked at your map spread. you have a big hole between your 2.18 and 3.51. consider swapping out the streams here for a slider to nerf the map http://puu.sh/ogEza/7734ba1aeb.jpg I might make this harder and map one 3 star dif
02:59:399 (6,7,1) - slow part of the song. delete note 7 Keep
03:07:675 (2,3,4) - delete 3 Keep

Thank you for the mod!

C00L

1,078 posts

Joined September 2014

C00L 2016-04-13T17:40:27+00:00

Pentori wrote:
[C00L's Insane]
ur not using the first 2 green timing points so you can delete them sure doesnt rly make a difference but yh why not
00:31:985 (4,5) - straighten slider 4 so it doesnt look like a failed blanket there wasnt a blanket there in the first place
00:34:744 (4,5,6,1) - why have you lowered ds all of a sudden? if you want to do it to the music you have to do it gradually it decreases gradually because the vocals get a lot less intense and so does the music, also it does decrease gradually have another look
00:45:778 (4,5,6,1) - distance i guess
01:09:226 (1,3,1) - dont use 3 of these sliders in a row. they're used to redirect flow and not to be used leisurely i really dont know what you mean by this point but i changed the 2 sliders after the first one since if you look forward into the map i use 2 different slider after the first one so i guess ya
01:13:364 (1,2) - you'll have to map down and to the right after pointing that way and that is because? if you mentioned this because of flow reasons, then i mean yh you are right but constantly going with the same point the slider is going is a bit boring imo
01:17:502 (1) - this looks ugly make it http://puu.sh/ogFAl/d207c3861c.jpg fair enough
01:23:020 (1) - ^ ^
01:40:088 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is hard and really uncreating. short jumps that change direction would be perfect here fine i changed this but im not entirely sure if that is what you meant, i changed it to back and forth jumps and that is staying but i adjusted their positioning which might be better
01:51:295 (1) - remove this slider, you just used one 4 seconds ago its a spinner (dont worry i always get it mixed up as well) and no im not removing it soz, there is le whoosing sound, and the previous one follows a sort of vocal sound
02:02:675 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - what are the double notes emphasizing here? if the answer is "i put them there for fun" then change it i mean the mapping process itself is 'fun' so i wount say thats a good word to use, and yh ill change it the reason that is there is because i was experimenting when i was mapping this was gonna wait till someone actually said something before i took it off. You were that guy
02:16:468 (5,1) - blanket better oops
02:19:226 (5,6,1) - distance between 6,1 is double of 5,6 without anything dramatic happening. this shouldn't be a thing in a 4.65* map. you still can have that extra jump but please don't make it double its way off being a double size but no this stays because the vocals change with that jump that's why there is a slider as well
02:21:985 (5,6,1) - ^ ^
02:24:916 (6,1) - ^ ^
03:03:537 (4,1) - you only do something like this for spacing. the note here is right after. if you want to show that there is a drum sound, make the jump a tad bigger i do this because between 03:03:364 (3,4) - there is a drum hit and after that you have a less stronger sound thats why the spacing gradually decreases
03:06:295 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
03:11:295 (2,3,4) - how do you expect someone to read this? use spacing i done something better i NC the notes which is better than applying uneccessary spacing
03:18:882 (1,2,3,4) - check spacing of 1,2 kek
I see that you are stacking by yourself to show doubles but it makes it really hard to read because there is no indication in the music for a double to be there if anyone else mentions something similar like this i will change it, but from my testplays i dont see anything bad with this tbh, but i get your point some are placed which i question if its ok but im gonna leave them for now

thanks

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Keycap

21 posts

Joined December 2014

Keycap 2016-04-13T18:44:39+00:00

Pentori wrote:
m4m

[Hidari's Darkness]
a lot of overmapping here to bring the difficulty up. you can make the louder parts of the song difficult but keep the softer parts playable and not having a note every tick I did something different, but implemented a lot of your mod into the map, so thanks.
00:23:709 (1,2,3,4,5) - looks untidy, make a pattern Fixed, sorta
00:26:295 (5) - overmap Fixed
00:27:330 (3) - ^^
00:29:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - more overmap. the vocal is on every 2nd white tick so why not just use 1/1 beat slidersFixed
00:33:364 (1,3) - these sliders would look so much better like this http://puu.sh/ogGtn/d860c1529f.jpg Did something different.
00:34:744 (4) - mirror 00:35:433 (6) I did something different
00:46:468 (5,6) - mirror ^
01:23:537 (3) - the main beat should always be clickable. here its on the end of a sliderFixed, thanks.
01:26:295 (6) - ^^
01:34:571 (2) - ^^
01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - lol why. theres clearly still a beat going on in the background why not map to that? Fixed
02:39:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - uh? from what I see 4,5 are close 5,6 are apart when 6 is on red tick 9,10 are apart when 10 is on red tick and your 1 is apart which i guess is ok. fix distances Did something different
03:07:847 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overmapping again, listen to vocalsI like this :3
03:23:364 (4,5,6) - what are these sliders following? Imo it suits those final guitar strings
timing point 02:34:744 does nothing Fixed

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40,96,157330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,157502,6,0,P|255:252|336:264,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,248,158020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,112,158192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,158278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,84,158364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,158450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,136,158536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,158623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,104,158709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,120,158795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,136,158882,5,4,0:0:0:0:
368,224,159399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,258,159485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,159571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,159657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,159743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,273,159830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,278,159916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,297,160002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,160088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,160174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,272,160261,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,165778,12,0,171295,0:0:0:0:
128,152,171985,53,0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,172157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,32,172330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,172502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,172675,2,0,B|296:184|296:184|352:184|376:216|376:216,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,48,173364,2,0,B|304:40|304:40|360:48,1,67.5000025749208
389,147,173709,2,0,B|382:189|382:189|361:234,1,67.5000025749208
354,238,173968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,261,174054,6,0,B|266:305|266:305|228:294|195:256,1,135.000005149842
120,64,174744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,272,175088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,175261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,276,175433,6,0,B|66:343|66:343|104:336|144:360,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,280,176123,2,0,B|266:347|266:347|228:340|188:364,1,135.000005149842
72,208,176640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,176726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,176813,6,0,B|108:153|108:153|175:109,1,135.000005149842
368,80,177330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,177502,2,0,L|240:176,1,67.5000025749208
50,99,177847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,177933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178192,38,0,B|108:73|108:73|152:104|200:88,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,178882,2,0,B|404:71|404:71|365:94|365:94|337:91,1,135.000005149842
444,348,179399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,348,179485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,348,179571,6,0,B|397:349|397:349|352:328,1,67.5000025749208
176,233,180261,2,0,B|175:186|175:186|199:144,1,67.5000025749208
298,165,180606,2,0,B|272:200|272:200|246:205,1,67.5000025749208
240,112,180951,2,0,B|240:72|240:72|263:23,1,67.5000025749208
368,48,181296,2,0,B|357:66|357:66|316:88,1,67.5000025749208
240,112,181640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,176,181813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,181985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,182157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,182330,6,0,B|304:104|304:104|336:136|376:160,1,135.000005149842
450,261,183020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,352,183192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,268,183364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,277,183537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,193,183709,6,0,B|152:152|152:152|192:144|240:112,1,135.000005149842
420,33,184399,2,0,B|424:72|424:72|408:112,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,184744,2,0,B|340:89|340:89|356:49,1,67.5000025749208
480,112,185088,2,0,P|499:182|467:246,1,135.000005149842
160,136,185778,2,0,P|179:166|219:190,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186468,38,0,P|120:224|88:120,1,202.500007724762
56,72,187157,2,0,P|144:88|168:152,1,135.000005149842
463,267,187675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,267,187761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,267,187847,6,0,B|384:320,1,67.5000025749208
320,264,188192,2,0,B|399:211,1,67.5000025749208
344,336,188537,2,0,B|321:365|321:365|265:389,1,67.5000025749208
201,333,188882,2,0,B|224:304|224:304|280:280,1,67.5000025749208
290,205,189226,6,0,B|301:245|301:245|333:277,1,67.5000025749208
392,288,189571,2,0,B|368:320|368:320|328:352,1,67.5000025749208
256,296,189916,2,0,B|264:336|264:336|296:376,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,288,190261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,167,190606,6,0,B|265:200|265:200|305:208,1,67.5000025749208
392,216,190951,2,0,B|380:176|380:176|333:146,1,67.5000025749208
238,167,191295,2,0,B|240:128|240:128|264:112|288:80,1,101.250003862381
432,40,191813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,191985,37,4,0:0:0:0:
72,152,192675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,183,192761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,192847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,250,192933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,281,193019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,309,193106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,332,193192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,349,193278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,356,193364,6,0,B|219:368|260:348,2,53.9999983520508
264,48,194054,2,0,B|288:120,1,53.9999983520508
224,160,194399,2,0,B|200:96,1,53.9999983520508
120,120,194744,2,0,B|120:168|120:168|152:200|152:240,1,107.999996704102
431,235,195433,2,0,B|416:288,1,53.9999983520508
328,268,195778,2,0,B|353:318,1,53.9999983520508
431,235,196123,6,0,B|408:200|408:200|376:192|376:192|352:160,1,107.999996704102
181,220,196813,2,0,L|120:240,1,53.9999983520508
96,160,197157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,197330,2,0,L|167:140,1,53.9999983520508
449,142,197847,6,0,B|432:168|432:168|392:184,1,53.9999983520508
243,228,198192,2,0,B|296:248,1,53.9999983520508
368,280,198537,2,0,B|316:322,1,53.9999983520508
292,247,198882,37,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,199054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,199226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,199571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,199744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,120,199916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,200261,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,200433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,200605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,200951,6,0,L|440:304,1,67.5000025749208
360,312,201295,2,0,B|320:248|320:248|328:200|328:200|304:160|256:144,1,202.500007724762
376,136,201985,2,0,B|280:36|232:56|184:96|168:152|192:200|248:224|248:224|252:272|184:288|132:248,1,472.500018024445
88,304,203364,2,0,L|136:368,1,67.5000025749208
224,352,203709,2,0,L|176:288,1,67.5000025749208
288,296,204054,2,0,L|336:360,1,67.5000025749208
408,352,204399,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,204485,12,0,208537,0:0:0:0:

Thanks

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

burstlimit2 2016-04-14T18:11:13+00:00

Oh hi there. Hidari requested M4M. Here we go...
[General]
- Offset feels a bit strange. Making like -10 will be better, but that's just my hearing of the song (well I used to put -10 offset to get perfect centered UR)
- 00:58:192 - 01:07:847 That's not kiai for sure
[Hidari's Darkness]
-As a I said to him in PM, those bursts feels too spaced
-Sliders should be slower until 00:58:020
-00:31:985 (1,2,3,4) - Boring.. Try inventing patterns for such parts. Its 5+* map, not 3*
-00:45:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - At least make the spacing consistent.
-01:03:020 (5,6,7) - Why did u increase spacing? There is no emphasis there
-01:03:709 (1,2,3,4) - Try [img=http://puu.sh/oi633/b3d230a679.jpg]this[/img]?
-01:06:295 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What the heck is going on with combos here?
-01:17:502 (5) - Make this the same as 01:16:985 (4) - Will look better imo
-01:41:813 (3,4) -What about slider here? 01:41:813 (3,4) -
-02:01:295 (3,4,5,6) - Is it a joke? Spaced bursts on slow part?
-ctrl+g 02:03:020 (2,3) - and that ctrl+g 02:03:364 (3) -
-02:35:778 (5,6) - fix spacing. no empphsis there
-02:38:192 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Looks not good
-02:39:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Same here
-02:52:675 (5) - Avoid anti-flow sliders after triangles especially at slow part
-03:21:985 (3) - Looks weird, just replace that red tick with white and it will look pretty neat

THATS NOT ALL OF MY MOD. I will do other diffs too, I just need to go now and I'm afraid of loosing my mod so ill post it

Bastionior

560 posts

Joined January 2013

Bastionior 2016-04-14T19:20:48+00:00

Dae

[Another]

00:03:020 - is the introduction of music I think is more applicable if the SV was for example x0,75
00:04:399 (4) - NC here because you aplied symmetry.
00:06:468 (2,3) - equals the distance between 2 notes.
00:16:640 - you missing a note.
00:19:730 - , 00:20:088 - .
00:20:951 (5) - make a curved slider like > http://puu.sh/ohZA2.jpg
00:59:226 (5) - I could have continued to follow the previous sliders?
01:00:088 (4,5) - hm, replace for 3 single notes and make another triangle pattern?
01:10:261 (3) - too distant, i think well this unnecessary distance.
01:23:020 (1) - This slider it has to be 3/4 to enfatizing a jump which occurs here. 01:23:364 - a example: http://puu.sh/oi28d.jpg
01:27:330 (4,5,6) - move to White tick because, that music does not follow rhythmically red tick, does not emphasize the rhythm.
01:38:364 (4,5) - it is well .. awkward.
you missing some notes on this part 01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - , you can do make some triangles patterns like that >> http://puu.sh/oi37P.jpg
Same ^ 01:43:020 - - 01:43:882 -
02:13:192 (2,3) - nonsense anti-jump.
02:31:468 (8,9,10) - in the previous parts you used a DS, different in that you used in these notes, fix.
02:36:468 (4,5,6,7) - just use the same distance, like those notes 02:37:157 (8,9) - example > http://puu.sh/oi3V2.jpg
03:11:554 (2) - i think better to NC to not confuse the player for just this note to start on the blue tick.

[Cool's Insane]

00:35:433 (5,6) - special reason to change DS ?
01:03:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it is very nonsense, each slide without a definitive way in addition to having a bad aesthetic fixing this, an example of how it should be: http://puu.sh/oi4OB.jpg.
01:23:364 (2) - give a resonable distance because have a enfatizing of whistle on this part.
02:05:088 (4,5) - fix ds.
02:18:709 (2,3,4,5,6) - I'm just quoting because it is the first of various that you did, could stop making so many star patterns, and make more possible ways, some will say it's lazy on your part.
02:18:192 (1) - same ^

[Light Insane]

00:19:571 (1,2,3,4) - could improve the allocation of each pattern
00:45:778 (3,4) - same as^ http://puu.sh/oiaA5.jpg
01:27:675 (4,5) - Random localization?
01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - remember the patterns that I said in another that could improve putting triangles, then gave another suggestion here, if you want to apply there http://puu.sh/oiaXU.jpg
02:09:916 (1) - improve blanket with 02:09:399 (5) -
03:11:554 (4) - nc here same example i said on another.

[Hard]

01:14:226 (5) - fix DS.

easy just have to follow the same ds until the end, and normal is right I think that does not have any error
bye.

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-14T20:16:31+00:00

Kalindraz wrote:
Dae

[Another]
00:03:020 - is the introduction of music I think is more applicable if the SV was for example x0,75 It's less intense than the part with 0.75x and the difference is not big
00:04:399 (4) - NC here because you aplied symmetry. It will break consistency between NCs
00:06:468 (2,3) - equals the distance between 2 notes. yeah
00:16:640 - you missing a note. I don't want to map so hard stuff in this part even though it would fit
00:19:730 - , 00:20:088 - . ^
00:20:951 (5) - make a curved slider like > http://puu.sh/ohZA2.jpg I have a code here, every combo has same slidershape between notes in combos and I will not break that consistency
00:59:226 (5) - I could have continued to follow the previous sliders? Yeah it could but this feels better in terms of flow, but as you pointed this slider out I changed it a bit
01:00:088 (4,5) - hm, replace for 3 single notes and make another triangle pattern? As you can see that I put every snare as sliderstart if time between snares are 1 1/2 beats and use notes if time between snares are only 1 beat
01:10:261 (3) - too distant, i think well this unnecessary distance. It is to keep flow but made it only a BIT smaller
01:23:020 (1) - This slider it has to be 3/4 to enfatizing a jump which occurs here. 01:23:364 - a example: http://puu.sh/oi28d.jpg No, overmapping, and I'm following drum here
01:27:330 (4,5,6) - move to White tick because, that music does not follow rhythmically red tick, does not emphasize the rhythm. Yes it does that guitar
01:38:364 (4,5) - it is well .. awkward. I think that they feel good tehre.
you missing some notes on this part 01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - , you can do make some triangles patterns like that >> http://puu.sh/oi37P.jpg Im only following that one sound, don't want to overmap by mapping that electrosound and drumsound
Same ^ 01:43:020 - - 01:43:882 - ^^
02:13:192 (2,3) - nonsense anti-jump. What antijump?
02:31:468 (8,9,10) - in the previous parts you used a DS, different in that you used in these notes, fix. I wanted a bit variation and it feels good imo but more complaints = change
02:36:468 (4,5,6,7) - just use the same distance, like those notes 02:37:157 (8,9) - example > http://puu.sh/oi3V2.jpg Nah, I like variety between notes in jumps myself but now that you mentioned this part I changed it a bit
03:11:554 (2) - i think better to NC to not confuse the player for just this note to start on the blue tick. It is a slider so no need

[Light Insane]
00:19:571 (1,2,3,4) - could improve the allocation of each pattern Don't really understand what you mean
00:45:778 (3,4) - same as^ http://puu.sh/oiaA5.jpg I don't want to map fully symmetrically, It's boring imo
01:27:675 (4,5) - Random localization? They have 1.5 beat between them so this is ok
01:40:261 (2,3,4,5) - remember the patterns that I said in another that could improve putting triangles, then gave another suggestion here, if you want to apply there http://puu.sh/oiaXU.jpg Keep this
02:09:916 (1) - improve blanket with 02:09:399 (5) - okay
03:11:554 (4) - nc here same example i said on another. explained on another

[Hard]
01:14:226 (5) - fix DS. okay
easy just have to follow the same ds until the end, and normal is right I think that does not have any error
bye.

Thanks for the mod!

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-15T15:10:47+00:00

m4m
[General]
Uncheck Widescreen
[Easy]
00:33:364 (4) - NC?
00:58:192 (1,3) - fix this stack
01:03:709 (1,2) - this is not recommended. Try something like this: It's really simple but I think it works well for an Easy http://puu.sh/oj5uh/5f44038bca.png
01:13:020 (6) - I wanted to see 01:13:020 - 01:13:364 - clickable.
01:14:054 (8,1) - Can it be blanket?
01:16:640 (3,4) - It might confuse a beginning player.. Actually, the whole rhythm here felt a bit odd. Try something like this: It's really simple but I think it works well for an Easy http://puu.sh/oj5V4/ac72510922.png
01:27:675 (3,4) - ^^
02:03:537 (3,4) - ^^
01:18:882 (7,8) - Just a nazi, maybe you can try this rhythmhttp://puu.sh/oj64B/a281f85fbe.png
01:29:916 (7,8) - ^^
02:05:778 (7,8) - ^^
01:30:606 (8,1) - Maybe blanket?
01:34:054 (5) - NC?
01:40:261 (3,4) - Not really sure about this rhytm. Try this http://puu.sh/oj6sO/fad47706e7.png
03:21:640 - try this http://puu.sh/oj6Ic/9d7f9973c8.png
02:17:502 (6) - x: 415 y: 223
02:26:468 (4) - x: 280 y: 173
[Normal]
00:59:226 (3,6,3,6) - please circle give players some rest
03:01:813 (4) - too hard to read for new players
[Hard]
CS 3,5? Put 4 please.
00:38:537 (6,1) - blanket please fix
[Light Insane]
00:26:123 (6) - i think it's must be better http://puu.sh/oj7do/51c51bc024.png
[Hidari's Darkness]
00:28:882 (4,1) - fix this stack
00:38:537 (3,4) - make it 1/4 folovving vocal
gl (:

Lumin

224 posts

Joined July 2014

Topic Starter

Lumin 2016-04-15T18:54:24+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
m4m
[General]
Uncheck Widescreen
[Easy]
00:33:364 (4) - NC? Actually why not
00:58:192 (1,3) - fix this stack fix
01:03:709 (1,2) - this is not recommended. Try something like this: It's really simple but I think it works well for an Easy http://puu.sh/oj5uh/5f44038bca.png I had it fixed already but didn't save it apparently. Now it's changed for sure
01:13:020 (6) - I wanted to see 01:13:020 - 01:13:364 - clickable. Keep this
01:14:054 (8,1) - Can it be blanket? Not seeing necessity but w/e
01:16:640 (3,4) - It might confuse a beginning player.. Actually, the whole rhythm here felt a bit odd. Try something like this: It's really simple but I think it works well for an Easy http://puu.sh/oj5V4/ac72510922.png Remapped
01:27:675 (3,4) - ^^ Remapped
02:03:537 (3,4) - ^^ Remapped
01:18:882 (7,8) - Just a nazi, maybe you can try this rhythmhttp://puu.sh/oj64B/a281f85fbe.png Remapped
01:29:916 (7,8) - ^^ Remapped
02:05:778 (7,8) - ^^ Remapped
01:30:606 (8,1) - Maybe blanket? Fix
01:34:054 (5) - NC? ok
01:40:261 (3,4) - Not really sure about this rhytm. Try this http://puu.sh/oj6sO/fad47706e7.png Keep
03:21:640 - try this http://puu.sh/oj6Ic/9d7f9973c8.png Did something else
02:17:502 (6) - x: 415 y: 223 Did something else
02:26:468 (4) - x: 280 y: 173 Did something else
[Normal]
00:59:226 (3,6,3,6) - please circle give players some rest Actually a great idea
03:01:813 (4) - too hard to read for new players Deleted note, not so important apparently
[Hard]
CS 3,5? Put 4 please. I wan't to keep this and not to follow CS4 "meta" but I might change it. Main reason why I'm not changing is that it adds difficulty pretty much
00:38:537 (6,1) - blanket please fix ok
[Light Insane]
00:26:123 (6) - i think it's must be better http://puu.sh/oj7do/51c51bc024.png Overmapping imo
gl (:

Thank you for the mod! Helped alot in easy because I don't know how to map easy

Keycap

21 posts

Joined December 2014

Keycap 2016-04-15T21:58:28+00:00

mamka322 wrote:
Oh hi there. Hidari requested M4M. Here we go...
[General]
- Offset feels a bit strange. Making like -10 will be better, but that's just my hearing of the song (well I used to put -10 offset to get perfect centered UR) It's fine like this.
- 00:58:192 - 01:07:847 That's not kiai for sure Fix
[Hidari's Darkness]
-As a I said to him in PM, those bursts feels too spaced Did something different
-Sliders should be slower until 00:58:020 I disagree.
-00:31:985 (1,2,3,4) - Boring.. Try inventing patterns for such parts. Its 5+* map, not 3*Fix
-00:45:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - At least make the spacing consistent.Fix
-01:03:020 (5,6,7) - Why did u increase spacing? There is no emphasis there I like this :3
-01:03:709 (1,2,3,4) - Try [img=http://puu.sh/oi633/b3d230a679.jpg]this[/img]?I like this :3
-01:06:295 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - What the heck is going on with combos here? This is how it should be.
-01:17:502 (5) - Make this the same as 01:16:985 (4) - Will look better imo Did something else.
-01:41:813 (3,4) -What about slider here? 01:41:813 (3,4) - Following drums.
-02:01:295 (3,4,5,6) - Is it a joke? Spaced bursts on slow part?Did something.
-ctrl+g 02:03:020 (2,3) - and that ctrl+g 02:03:364 (3) - Did something.
-02:35:778 (5,6) - fix spacing. no empphsis there Did something
-02:38:192 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Looks not good It's meant like this.
-02:39:399 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Same here ^
-02:52:675 (5) - Avoid anti-flow sliders after triangles especially at slow part. I like it like this :3
-03:21:985 (3) - Looks weird, just replace that red tick with white and it will look pretty neat ?

THATS NOT ALL OF MY MOD. I will do other diffs too, I just need to go now and I'm afraid of loosing my mod so ill post it

Thanks.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 68882
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Valkyrie (feat. Laura Brehm)
TitleUnicode:Valkyrie (feat. Laura Brehm)
Artist:Varien
ArtistUnicode:Varien
Creator:Lumin
Version:Hidari's Darkness
Source:
Tags:drumstep english monstercat dance music electronic drum n bass dubstep dnb
BeatmapID:920301
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16,272,175088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,175261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,208,176640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,176726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,80,177330,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,200,177502,2,0,L|240:176,1,67.5000025749208
50,99,177847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,177933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178020,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,99,178192,38,0,B|108:73|108:73|152:104|200:88,1,135.000005149842,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,178882,2,0,B|404:71|404:71|365:94|365:94|337:91,1,135.000005149842
444,348,179399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,348,179485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,348,179571,6,0,B|397:349|397:349|352:328,1,67.5000025749208
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240,112,180951,2,0,B|240:72|240:72|263:23,1,67.5000025749208
368,48,181296,2,0,B|357:66|357:66|316:88,1,67.5000025749208
240,112,181640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,176,181813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,52,181985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,182157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,112,182330,6,0,B|304:104|304:104|336:136|376:160,1,135.000005149842
450,261,183020,1,8,0:0:0:0:
390,352,183192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,268,183364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,277,183537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,193,183709,6,0,B|152:152|152:152|192:144|240:112,1,135.000005149842
420,33,184399,2,0,B|424:72|424:72|408:112,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,184744,2,0,B|340:89|340:89|356:49,1,67.5000025749208
480,112,185088,2,0,P|499:182|467:246,1,135.000005149842
160,136,185778,2,0,P|179:166|219:190,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186295,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,186468,38,0,P|120:224|88:120,1,202.500007724762
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463,267,187675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,267,187761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,267,187847,6,0,B|384:320,1,67.5000025749208
320,264,188192,2,0,B|399:211,1,67.5000025749208
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201,333,188882,2,0,B|224:304|224:304|280:280,1,67.5000025749208
290,205,189226,6,0,B|301:245|301:245|333:277,1,67.5000025749208
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392,288,190261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,167,190606,6,0,B|265:200|265:200|305:208,1,67.5000025749208
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432,40,191813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,136,191985,37,4,0:0:0:0:
72,152,192675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,183,192761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,216,192847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,250,192933,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,281,193019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,309,193106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
115,332,193192,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,349,193278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,356,193364,6,0,B|219:368|260:348,2,53.9999983520508
264,48,194054,2,0,B|288:120,1,53.9999983520508
224,160,194399,2,0,B|200:96,1,53.9999983520508
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431,235,195433,2,0,B|416:288,1,53.9999983520508
328,268,195778,2,0,B|353:318,1,53.9999983520508
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181,220,196813,2,0,L|120:240,1,53.9999983520508
96,160,197157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,197330,2,0,L|167:140,1,53.9999983520508
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292,247,198882,37,0,0:0:0:0:
280,168,199054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,199226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,40,199571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,199744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,120,199916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,128,200261,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,200433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,208,200605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,200951,6,0,L|440:304,1,67.5000025749208
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376,136,201985,2,0,B|280:36|232:56|184:96|168:152|192:200|248:224|248:224|252:272|184:288|132:248,1,472.500018024445
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256,192,204485,12,0,208537,0:0:0:0:

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