dj MAX STEROID - Arabian Rave Night · forum

beaw

Joined July 2015

beaw 2016-11-28T20:32:13+00:00

hey daddy
[Easy]
omg this beat is lit yo ;w;

[Normal]
00:12:354 (4,5,6,7) - ;w; this double seems a bit advanced and stuff but I don't make a lot of Normals
00:14:354 (2) - What is this mapped to besides the snare at the sliderend?
00:25:021 (2) - ^ etc. etc.
01:22:354 (5,1,3) - I think that it would be better to have 1's first curve blanket 5's sliderend. Same wiith 3.

[Hard]
idk there's not much to mod but I think you should switch directions more often especially in the beginning.

[6th's Hyper]
no thanks too good for me

[Insane]
00:28:021 (4,1) - I think it would look better it 4's angle was the same as 1's
00:29:354 (3,3) - Stack?
00:41:521 (8,2) - Stack?
00:49:021 (3,4) - Move 4 down a teeny tiny bit o3o
01:03:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that this might be confusing because it's the same stack as the other doubles. idk tho bc I didn't play it
01:28:021 (7,1) - overlap pls ;w;
01:50:021 (2,3) - I think that this spacing is too close ;w; maybe place the object closer or take away some of the repeats it could be really easy to sliderbreak

[Exote's Extra]
00:03:688 (1,2,3,4) - Line these up straight? That or make the angle more defined
00:25:354 (4,1) - Stack?
I didn't find anything else I'm not good at Extra difficulties >w> I like to give people their space with Extra difficulties. Also, the NC's are pretty inconsistent.

[Kyoko's Extra]
NC's are pretty inconsistent here too.
00:17:188 (4,5) - Blanket these better?
00:22:187 (3,4) - 4's sliderend needs to be brought down a little for a better blanket :3
00:42:854 (7,1) - This can be blanketed better as well.
I can't mod anything past this difficulty >w>
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glglglglgl I love this mapset ;w;

Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2016-11-29T17:07:31+00:00

Zetera wrote:
Hi, here's a little mod.

[Fookiezi's Extra]

00:26:188 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - How about you scale these down in a way, so you don't have to put 00:26:854 (5,1) - further right than 00:26:521 (3,4) - ? Here's an example. fixed
I'd also put 00:36:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - further down so the pattern doesn't have to touch with (4). You can use the 4 circles to create a blanket with 00:35:688 (3) - 's head, the curve's pretty much okay already. did it
I wasn't quite happy with 00:37:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , because they don't flow well and I feel like they are underwhelming as a pattern. The other difficulties offer some nice examples on what you might want to use instead. other difficulties use a triple or something along the lines for this, i dont really want to do that since the same flute thing plays before and i didnt use a triple there either, kinda makes no sense to put the only triple in this section for that. the flow is still poor so i changed that to something different but still simmilar.
Lastly, 01:50:688 - is not good on the ears. That's going to be priti's job though, from what I read. ye

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TitleUnicode:Arabian Rave Night
Artist:dj MAX STEROID
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Creator:Priti
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6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-11-29T17:47:28+00:00

Nvm I solved it

Hey !

SPOILER

Overall a nice diff with some nice consistencies, but I wasn't quite sure whether the overlaps in the beginning are necessary (00:06:354 (2,4) - , 00:07:688 (5,1) -). These just make this part feel slightly awkward to play, as if everything was centered here. So if these are supposed to have a visual effect, that's okay, but I'd recommend you use a wider area on the playfield for that otherwise. Fixed the 1st one. The 2nd one should be okay since it's a stack.

To clarify this a bit furtherly: 00:05:354 (7,8,2,5,6,7) - This is where your patterns seem to be centered around. I just can't understand why that would be the case. I'm sorry but I still don't really understand your point :/

There are a couple more clusters that don't affect the gameplay as much, but still look a bit off. Namely: 00:14:521 (4,2,3) - , 00:13:354 (5,6,7,3) -. After that, I don't see any issues with overlapping objects. True but it would make me redo the whole pattern... idk if it is worth it ?

One last issue I found is 01:36:021 (3) - , which may cause some sliderbreaks. I'd reccomend shortening this by 1 repetition. Hmm, I really wouldn't like it because skipping such strong song is not a really good idea imo.

Thanks ! http://puu.sh/syvDE/fdcf301667.osu

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Avena 2016-11-29T19:44:32+00:00

fixed for myself and kyoko everything
also fixed the small things for exote bcuz yolo sweq

Okoratu

Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator

4,912 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2016-12-12T18:57:09+00:00

[ULTRA]
00:10:021 (5) - 00:58:021 (3) - 2 circles would not leave awkward 3/4 clicking gap between objects, actually makes that thing more straightforward
00:19:354 (2) - 00:26:021 (2) - would expect red tick clickable
00:17:354 (4) - 00:22:688 (6) - same downpitch extend sound, one gets an extend, one doesn't, i think the extend is pretty hard to read so why not 2x 1/2 sliders
00:29:354 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think this is 1/8
00:38:354 (4) - this isn't 1/6 it's sth dumb like https://puu.sh/sN2hU/170551996c.png
01:32:188 (7) - i think ending sound is way stronger than beginning so i think wonkier rhythm fits better

[fookiezi]
00:01:688 (4,5,6,7) - 00:07:021 (4,5,6,7) - just putting a stream about all this stuff ignores that there's far more going on than just some constant sounds like 00:09:688 (5,6,7,8) - especially the frist blue ticks (both 5s) are way different but represented as the same
00:10:688 (2,3) - don't have 1/4 to support them, in fact these are way calmer than what you mapped
00:18:188 (3,1) - distance feels way too close when playing a sound like that lol
00:48:021 (1) - this should be two 1/4 sliders according to your logic in this part, due to the drums
00:55:021 - main beef i have with this part is that you swap the instrument you're following so much what it's unpredictable what you're following tbh
what i mean is
00:54:688 (6) - beep sound
00:55:021 (1) - bell
00:55:271 (2) - bell
00:55:438 (3) - beep sound
all while 00:55:188 - has another beep sound
i think sticking to less instruments more obvious instead of mapping everything in a mish-mash of layers there ends up easier to interpret without having to like look at edit or some stuff
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this less dense than 01:28:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , the things kinda repeat lol
01:27:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kiai kinda suffers from the same thing, you have 3 very distinct drum things, two just get a bunch of circles and the one that is actually doing something interesting 01:28:188 (6) - where 2 circles for drums would fit better doesn't do anything lol
01:30:688 (5) - this is 1/6
01:33:521 (6,7) - same thing, 01:33:354 (4,5) - are way louder drums for this kind of thing and they get circles and 01:33:521 (6,7) - are much more faint and get circles too
overall in a lot of places in kiai it's not really clear what you're doing with rhythm

[kyoko]
00:01:688 (8) - hearing loud drum in the middle of a slider can end up throwing ppl off rhythm would recommend following that drum instread
00:10:188 (2) - song is doing 3/4, why are you doing 1/2
00:08:354 (1,2) - would have expected big spacing like 00:03:021 (1,2) -
00:14:021 (2) - every other red tick in this section is clickable except this one making this rhythm look like a slipup on your end
00:24:521 (2) - same but white tick this time lol
00:38:688 (1,2) - seem random in context with everything else in the section, would either do more often ot not at all
00:47:354 (2,3,1,2,3) - this is cool
00:55:854 (5) - sounds would be distinct enough for 2 circles, would make 00:56:188 (6,7) - a bit more straightforward
00:56:688 (2) - would probs fit better as 2 circles due to instrument
01:00:354 - something seems to be missing here, makes the gap to 01:00:521 (6) - way harder to interpret than it probably should
01:37:854 (6) - not hearing this 1/6
01:22:854 (3) - would map this out considering most of your kiai follows drums
01:38:603 (4,1) - introducing this concept that far into the map seems meh
01:45:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - these kinda break the concept of have short sliders on doubledrums zzz
01:49:354 (2) - would probably be better as 2 sliders

[exote]
00:04:437 (2) - rhythm would be clearer if this was deleted
00:10:021 (7,1) - song does 3/4 and you do 1/1:/
00:02:354 (8) - 00:07:688 (6) - this extend doesn't really add anything, in fact it's even easier to misinterpret this
00:13:188 (4,5) - in comparison to what the rest was, this feels too small
00:45:354 (4) - 00:50:688 (4) - should be 2 circles similar to 00:47:854 (4,5) -
01:27:688 (4) - should maybe be circles
01:37:938 (2,3,4) - why do you suddenly switch to blue ticks if you're mainly following the drums in everywhere else
01:45:354 (5,6) - rhythm would make way more sense if crtl+g'd

[insane]
00:21:021 (3) - i think this should spike a bit because song is doing something different while map is doing same
01:20:688 (3) - 01:23:354 (2,3) - 01:29:021 (6) - 01:31:354 (3) - etc hurt while playing considering you're somewhat staying on drums because they're the most simple thing in this song in this part

[6]
00:12:521 (2) - why do you do this, half of it like follows drums and the other half vocals? 00:28:521 (2) - wait no you just do this just because or something
00:09:688 (4,5,6) - this kinda underrepresents whats happening, like even hard has more interesting stuff there
00:51:021 (1,2) - this is the most anticlimax build up you could get for this
00:57:688 (1) - https://puu.sh/sN7Qd/85b43792ce.png could maybe feel better due to less long holding of one slider
01:03:021 (1) - potentially confusing since this slider is almost as long as an 1/2 slider repeating but it's not
01:21:688 (1,2) - should be smaller than 01:21:854 (2,3) - since the stress is on 2,3 and not on 1 and 2
01:26:188 (2,4) - 01:42:688 (4,2) - ehhh this looks kinda un intentional
01:35:021 (1) - very not intense for what the song does same for the other
01:50:021 (2,3) - spaced 01:50:688 (4,1) - not spaced, why
01:57:188 (1) - 2nd half of this is 1/6 cant you uhh find something different to represent

lol your hard looks like a very dense normal sv wise
interesting
that kiai doesn't at least increase SV and is essentially the same as 00:11:021 - but a bit more dense is kinda underwhelming

[normal]
01:32:021 (3) - seems unnecessary, would rather force a slider on 01:35:354 (5) - instead
01:46:354 (5) - 01:51:688 (5) - 3/2 sliders would be less easy to misinterpret. (currently ppl can probably see this as 1/2 or 1/1 reverses and fuck the entire pattern up)

[]
meh i kinda think the extras and expert need a bit more work even after this

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Avena 2016-12-12T21:06:20+00:00

thank

edit: also applied for Kyoko

Exote

416 posts

Joined April 2013

Exote 2016-12-13T17:27:31+00:00

@Okorin

00:04:437 (2) - rhythm would be clearer if this was deleted - I'm pretty sure I hear 1/4 in the song, no change
00:10:021 (7,1) - song does 3/4 and you do 1/1:/ - it fits rn (according to the song)

fixed everything else, thanks

http://puu.sh/sObxG/0c8578112b.osu priteh can u hs again baby <,3

Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2016-12-13T19:59:04+00:00

Okorin wrote:
[ULTRA]
[fookiezi]
00:01:688 (4,5,6,7) - 00:07:021 (4,5,6,7) - just putting a stream about all this stuff ignores that there's far more going on than just some constant sounds like 00:09:688 (5,6,7,8) - especially the frist blue ticks (both 5s) are way different but represented as the same not sure if i understood exactly what you said, but i think just puting 2 1/4 sliders there should work instead? fixed for all expect the last one, i think its sounds well. 00:04:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - wasnt too sure what to do on this one so no change for now, would like for you to show me an example if you can.
00:10:688 (2,3) - don't have 1/4 to support them, in fact these are way calmer than what you mapped 1.i use 1/4's there to represent the beepy voice in the background, to differ from regular singletaps. 2. i use this part to get a good transition into the next part. i feel like this inteses more because of the riser and different sounds then before, therefore i make this a little hard. i think it fits tbh, no change.
00:18:188 (3,1) - distance feels way too close when playing a sound like that lol actually is like a more silent vocal then everything else here so it fits fine but changed anyways
00:48:021 (1) - this should be two 1/4 sliders according to your logic in this part, due to the drumstru
00:55:021 - main beef i have with this part is that you swap the instrument you're following so much what it's unpredictable what you're following tbh
what i mean is
00:54:688 (6) - beep sound
00:55:021 (1) - bell
00:55:271 (2) - bell
00:55:438 (3) - beep sound
all while 00:55:188 - has another beep sound
i think sticking to less instruments more obvious instead of mapping everything in a mish-mash of layers there ends up easier to interpret without having to like look at edit or some stuff totally agreed, i knew that part was really bad from the beggining. i will try and fix it soon
i think improved it, maybe. need to really sit on that part more, not the final thing.
01:23:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - why is this less dense than 01:28:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - , the things kinda repeat lol pretty sure i did this because i didnt want this part to be too spammed with 1/4 things. i think its ok though since i have repeat sliders so changed the first part to be the same as the second.
01:27:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kiai kinda suffers from the same thing, you have 3 very distinct drum things, two just get a bunch of circles and the one that is actually doing something interesting 01:28:188 (6) - where 2 circles for drums would fit better doesn't do anything lol fixed
01:30:688 (5) - this is 1/6 fixed
01:33:521 (6,7) - same thing, 01:33:354 (4,5) - are way louder drums for this kind of thing and they get circles and 01:33:521 (6,7) - are much more faint and get circles too sort of fixed? i changed it to be different but im not sure if i agree with you
overall in a lot of places in kiai it's not really clear what you're doing with rhythm

done with this, aplying second mod too so no code thingy yet

Last edited by Fookiz 2016-12-19T18:44:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-12-14T22:52:53+00:00

00:12:521 (2) - why do you do this, half of it like follows drums and the other half vocals? 00:28:521 (2) - wait no you just do this just because or something Fixed
00:09:688 (4,5,6) - this kinda underrepresents whats happening, like even hard has more interesting stuff there It doesn't but fixed
00:51:021 (1,2) - this is the most anticlimax build up you could get for this changed
00:57:688 (1) - https://puu.sh/sN7Qd/85b43792ce.png could maybe feel better due to less long holding of one slider Changed
01:03:021 (1) - potentially confusing since this slider is almost as long as an 1/2 slider repeating but it's not The AR makes it readable I guess
01:21:688 (1,2) - should be smaller than 01:21:854 (2,3) - since the stress is on 2,3 and not on 1 and 2 true
01:26:188 (2,4) - 01:42:688 (4,2) - ehhh this looks kinda un intentional It's not that annoying
01:35:021 (1) - very not intense for what the song does same for the other changed
01:50:021 (2,3) - spaced 01:50:688 (4,1) - not spaced, why fixed
01:57:188 (1) - 2nd half of this is 1/6 cant you uhh find something different to represent okay

Thanks for the mod !
http://puu.sh/sPKZ4/457cc257b6.osu

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2016-12-16T14:21:28+00:00

sorry for late
a bit busy with exam

[easy]

01:18:021 (1) - seems pretty weird that this is the only snare you skipped , the others rhythm around here you kinda follow the snare like this consistent imo (01:21:354 (2) - 01:24:021 (2) - 01:29:354 (2) - 01:32:021 (2) - ) so i think it would be better to add note here 01:26:688 - to make the rhythm a bit more consistent

[normal]

01:39:688 (2,3) - the transition here is a bit awkward imo , suddenly introduce the 1/2 gap like that can make player a bit surprised and confused imo i think try to make rhythm like this would make the player can react to the transition better
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[hard]

fine for me

[6th]

00:03:021 (1,2) - this looks like 1/4 spacing tbh cus the way they spaced so low and the 1/2 sapcing before 00:02:854 (6,1) - just already make player thinking that 1/2 spacing would be like that so changing them so different like this just make the player confusing so it would be better to space them a bit like 00:04:021 (4,5) -
00:15:521 (3,4,5,6) - why this 1/2 spacing different from the others , would be better to make the 1/2 spacing here a bit more consistent with other 1/2 spacing around here ( use 1.2x spacing)
00:21:354 (5,6,7,1) - same
00:57:688 (1) - is this supposed to snap to 1/1 ? the current one just make the rhythm here 00:57:688 (1,2) - play really awkward due to weird rhythm gap there , make this 1/1 slider would make rhythm sound a lots better
01:35:021 (1,2) - i think combine the double repeat 1/2 reverse slider there with the jumps just make this a bit hard for player to play it , player will have to focus on the slider track first but since they see 01:35:688 (2) - appear before the slider end so they're gonna thinking like they have to catch (2) fast since at this point the player are still develope skill in jumps so they can play them really well and then easilly miss like 1 repeat of 01:35:021 (1) - so i think it would be better to just try to simple this a bit by decrease spacing a bit so that the player can react to it better
01:47:688 (3,4) - why the spacing suddenly so small when the music doesn't change much here ? would be better to make spacing a bit more consistent here

i don't like how you stack thing like 00:12:354 (1,2) - normally i think stack work better with something that sound same or similiar like 00:34:188 (3,4) -00:45:354 (4,5) - but in this case it's not so it make it feel pretty weird and awkward there , stack should be use to emphasis something that sound similiar or same imo at this level

[insane]

00:18:354 (3,4,5) - improve the pattern thing here a bit ? somehow it looks a bit off for me , try move 00:18:604 (4,5) - to around x168 y272 ?

[exote]

01:18:854 (6,1) - i think a higher spacing would emphasis the beat here better and give nice impact
01:56:188 (4,1) - similiar to above , try move 1 to around x315 y164 ? so it would emphasis the beat on 1 better like 01:55:521 (4,1) -

[kyoko]

00:18:854 (8) - blanket looks kinda off from here , you can improve that a bit
00:20:688 (3,4,5,4) - stack for better aesthetic ?
00:24:521 (2,3) - 00:24:688 (3,4) - i think make these spacing a bit higher would express the beat better here , the beat there sound more emphasized than 2 so i think it would be more reasonable to use the higher spacing to emphasis that
00:30:021 (3,4) - not really sure what you're following here but i find them pretty weird that you skip the red tick beat here 00:30:188 - i think that red tick sound similiar to the most previous red tick there so i think it would be better to map it to make the rhythm stay consistent to make thing flow more smooth and consistent , try this rhythm ?
SPOILER
00:40:021 (1,2,3,4,1) - mm i don't find anything in the music that go more intense or something like that so the spacing increase here just feel weird for me so just make spacing stay the same like 00:39:688 (1,2,3,4) - to make it a bit more consistent with the music
00:42:021 - adding note here would make the rhythm transition a bit better here
00:55:354 (2,3,1) - i don't find anything in the music that feel static to emphasis the stack there like that , the rhythm in the music here just keep going on without anything to emphasis a stop movement flow thing like stack so i think if this is not stacked it would be a bit more consistent with the music
01:28:688 (2,3,4) - i think consistent spacing would make flow here better like 01:27:021 (1,2,3) -
01:45:688 (5,6) - i don't think the high 1/4 spacing flow like that would work well here because i don't find the beat or music there to be so intense to make the high spacing fit the music there like that , would be bette to try to decrease spacing here a bit to make thing a bit more consistent with the music or you can try to make flow a bit more intuitive like 01:48:021 (2,3,1) - , eventhough idk what suggestion flow to use for this lol
01:51:688 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - make them like uhh on the same line ? would make the pattern looks better imo

[fookiezi]

00:05:688 (1,2) - make the flow here a bit symmetry with 00:05:354 (3,4) - ? I think that would make flow a bit better here
SPOILER
00:27:021 (1) - current position make the pattern there 00:26:521 (3,4,5,1) - feel a bit messy and off imo , i think maybe move it to around x92 y228 would be better
00:36:021 (4) - I think stack this with 00:35:354 (2) - head would make the overall pattern here 00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - feel a bit more together or something like that
00:37:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not really sure what these circles are folloing in the music , tbh it's just sound like this part 00:35:021 - or00:32:354 - so i think it would be better to try to change the rhythm here a bit to make thing feel a bit more consistent currently this just feel a bit confusing of what you're following here and it kinda feel unexpected tho that the rhythm just change to something completely different when the music is not
00:48:021 (1,2) - this rhythm would work better imo because the 1/4 slider there would just help emphasis the strong beat here 00:48:021 - while the 1/4 circles help emphasis the consistent sound at 00:48:188 - 00:48:271 - , currently i think your rhythm kinda make the 00:48:188 - feel weird and give a bit awkward feeling by mapping it as sliderend and you even give a strong hitsound for them which also make it worse
SPOILER
01:25:688 (1,2) - spacing feel a bit too much imo , something like this 01:28:354 (1,2) - 01:21:021 (1,2) - would be enough now , that 1/4 doesn't sound standout much that it need to space so high like that imo
01:41:188 (2,3) - should just make the spacing or flow equal with 01:41:021 (1,2) - since the beat actually sound same , try move 3 to around x272 y108 ?
01:42:354 (3) - any reason why the curve has to be so edge like that , later similiar part i don't see you using this edge curve much tho (01:44:354 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:021 (1,2,3,4) - )
01:44:188 (5) - ctrl+g would make flow here feel 01:44:021 (4,5,1) - better
01:49:021 (1) - why is this nc ? the similiar part before this i don't see use nc (01:43:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) so delete nc there to make nc a bit more consistent ?

[ultra]

00:09:021 (5,6,7) - consistent spacing would improve flow here a bit imo
00:16:854 (3) - I think ctrl+h then reposition this make the flow here 00:16:688 (2,3) - better
00:22:688 (6) - i think this should snap to 1/4 i can only hear beat at 1/4
01:25:688 (1,2) - i think the rhythm sound better when you ctrl+g the rhythm here , 1 just sound so strong and fit for the 1/4 slider better imo
01:31:521 (4) - make this asymmetry with 01:31:354 (3) - ? would make pattern and flow looks better imo
SPOILER
01:48:354 (1) - ctrl+g would make the flwo 01:48:021 (4,1,2) - here better and make it consistent with the circular flow idea that you're trying to do around here
01:51:688 (3) - nc to indicate the change in spacing there ? currently the spacing 01:51:688 (3,4,5) - just looks like 1/2 spacing for me here so i think nc would help the readability here a bit

mmm the kiai on the extra diffs kinda completely out of my judging skill so i can't judge those good enough
good luck

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-12-17T00:20:17+00:00

00:03:021 (1,2) - this looks like 1/4 spacing tbh cus the way they spaced so low and the 1/2 sapcing before 00:02:854 (6,1) - just already make player thinking that 1/2 spacing would be like that so changing them so different like this just make the player confusing so it would be better to space them a bit like 00:04:021 (4,5) - okay
00:15:521 (3,4,5,6) - why this 1/2 spacing different from the others , would be better to make the 1/2 spacing here a bit more consistent with other 1/2 spacing around here ( use 1.2x spacing) fixed
00:21:354 (5,6,7,1) - same I didn't fix that one because it would feel too fast
00:57:688 (1) - is this supposed to snap to 1/1 ? the current one just make the rhythm here 00:57:688 (1,2) - play really awkward due to weird rhythm gap there , make this 1/1 slider would make rhythm sound a lots better I'm not sure about that one... it seems clearly playable
01:35:021 (1,2) - i think combine the double repeat 1/2 reverse slider there with the jumps just make this a bit hard for player to play it , player will have to focus on the slider track first but since they see 01:35:688 (2) - appear before the slider end so they're gonna thinking like they have to catch (2) fast since at this point the player are still develope skill in jumps so they can play them really well and then easilly miss like 1 repeat of 01:35:021 (1) - so i think it would be better to just try to simple this a bit by decrease spacing a bit so that the player can react to it better fixed
01:47:688 (3,4) - why the spacing suddenly so small when the music doesn't change much here ? would be better to make spacing a bit more consistent here fixed

i don't like how you stack thing like 00:12:354 (1,2) - normally i think stack work better with something that sound same or similiar like 00:34:188 (3,4) -00:45:354 (4,5) - but in this case it's not so it make it feel pretty weird and awkward there , stack should be use to emphasis something that sound similiar or same imo at this level They work well imo, even if your point of view could work too

Thanks ! http://puu.sh/sS1mO/6fe42e6b94.osu

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Avena 2016-12-17T07:40:53+00:00

oopdated

Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Avena 2016-12-19T10:25:20+00:00

fixed everything but:

01:25:688 (1,2) - i think the rhythm sound better when you ctrl+g the rhythm here , 1 just sound so strong and fit for the 1/4 slider better imo

on Ultra since the rhythm is actually much better atm since it follows the song precisely.

Fookiz

157 posts

Joined June 2014

Fookiz 2016-12-20T15:56:45+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[fookiezi]
00:05:688 (1,2) - make the flow here a bit symmetry with 00:05:354 (3,4) - ? I think that would make flow a bit better here
SPOILER
kinda fixed
00:27:021 (1) - current position make the pattern there 00:26:521 (3,4,5,1) - feel a bit messy and off imo , i think maybe move it to around x92 y228 would be better uh maybe im just not understanding you but doesnt really make a difference lol
00:36:021 (4) - I think stack this with 00:35:354 (2) - head would make the overall pattern here 00:35:021 (1,2,3,4) - feel a bit more together or something like that eh kinda didnt want to do that but w/e fixed
00:37:688 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - not really sure what these circles are folloing in the music , tbh it's just sound like this part 00:35:021 - or00:32:354 - so i think it would be better to try to change the rhythm here a bit to make thing feel a bit more consistent currently this just feel a bit confusing of what you're following here and it kinda feel unexpected tho that the rhythm just change to something completely different when the music is not eh, fixed
00:48:021 (1,2) - this rhythm would work better imo because the 1/4 slider there would just help emphasis the strong beat here 00:48:021 - while the 1/4 circles help emphasis the consistent sound at 00:48:188 - 00:48:271 - , currently i think your rhythm kinda make the 00:48:188 - feel weird and give a bit awkward feeling by mapping it as sliderend and you even give a strong hitsound for them which also make it worse
SPOILER
fixed in previous mod but not with another 1/4 slider instead of triple
01:25:688 (1,2) - spacing feel a bit too much imo , something like this 01:28:354 (1,2) - 01:21:021 (1,2) - would be enough now , that 1/4 doesn't sound standout much that it need to space so high like that imo oke
01:41:188 (2,3) - should just make the spacing or flow equal with 01:41:021 (1,2) - since the beat actually sound same , try move 3 to around x272 y108 ? i think its fine, also better then ur suggestion tbh
01:42:354 (3) - any reason why the curve has to be so edge like that , later similiar part i don't see you using this edge curve much tho (01:44:354 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:021 (1,2,3,4) - ) it looks cool fixed anyway xd
01:44:188 (5) - ctrl+g would make flow here feel 01:44:021 (4,5,1) - better i actually tried this and i know it is theoretically souposed to be better flow but it doesnt work?? idk tried something else but simmilar
01:49:021 (1) - why is this nc ? the similiar part before this i don't see use nc (01:43:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - ) so delete nc there to make nc a bit more consistent ? oops xd fixed

SPOILER

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420,288,116688,2,0,L|428:204,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
474,115,117021,6,0,P|424:114|358:147,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
312,164,117271,1,4,0:0:0:0:
292,172,117354,2,0,L|252:168,2,28.3333333333333,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
192,140,117521,2,0,L|152:136,2,28.3333333333333,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
79,132,117688,6,0,B|146:104|247:128|247:128|197:123|163:137,1,255,12|0,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:

both celsiuslk and oko mod implemented

Exote

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Exote 2016-12-20T16:40:05+00:00

@CelsiusLK

01:18:854 (6,1) - i think a higher spacing would emphasis the beat here better and give nice impact
01:56:188 (4,1) - similiar to above , try move 1 to around x315 y164 ? so it would emphasis the beat on 1 better like 01:55:521 (4,1) -

hm I'm not gonna change either of those, since it's real pain to change, actually other than a slight remap of those there isn't any other way. but if I can come up with something better I will try to change

ty

Avena

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Avena 2016-12-20T17:55:53+00:00

UPDATED

Voli

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Voli 2017-09-05T17:04:13+00:00

exote asked me to check his hard

01:03:021 (1) - consider splitting it in two shorter reverses as the sound comes in pairs of 3
01:20:021 - hs volume being 30% is odd here, barely audible
01:50:688 - volume sounds oddly low here too, should be the same as 01:50:021 -
01:57:688 - last timing point there not needed

diff looks nice, good job, gl

no kd lol

Exote

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Exote 2017-09-05T17:13:50+00:00

@Voli

exote asked me to check his hard

01:03:021 (1) - consider splitting it in two shorter reverses as the sound comes in pairs of 3 - oki done
01:20:021 - hs volume being 30% is odd here, barely audible - priteh hsssss
01:50:688 - volume sounds oddly low here too, should be the same as 01:50:021 - priti again
01:57:688 - last timing point there not needed - yep fixed

diff looks nice, good job, gl

thanks!!!

Surono

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Surono 2017-09-13T13:56:49+00:00

mashallah.wav

repost meem

hi prety, i luv u meem.

sahuang

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sahuang 2017-09-22T04:29:56+00:00

need metadata

Easy
00:18:021 (4) - 1/1 slider why you want a break here
00:22:354 - same? the break doesnt fit here
00:49:354 - 01:43:354 - 01:48:688 - add a circle, its very intense
01:50:688 (4,5) - try not to make them overlap

Adv
01:51:021 (1,2) - feels better with 2 sliders

Hard
01:23:021 (1,2) - the blanket is bad
01:28:021 (4) - since 01:28:188 - has a downbeat why not use a slider+circle? sth like http://puu.sh/xFOzS/8ae55f4d53.jpg
01:30:688 - 01:38:688 (5) - this is supposed to be a stream
Not bad, but a suggestion is don't need to stick to DS so much :d
Also considering Insane has many streams it would be good if you have 1 or 2 streams, can possibly in the place i mentioned in the previous mod lol

Insane
00:32:021 (5) - the music here is obviously different from the previous 4 so why not use 2 circles?
01:30:688 (8,1) - the ds is a bit big for 1/4, especially when its a super hard reverse. very easy to slider break. You can do it like 01:33:354 (8) -
Same for another one later

Expert
01:03:021 (1,2,3) - this is a bit weird because the rhythm is like 123123 but you are doing it with 121212
so basically 01:03:354 - should be clickable imo, you can take a look at top diff :d

Ultra
01:57:688 (1) - what happened to slider end???also silence it and its the only different ending time in the set lol
Also the 2 things i find it really hard to play:
01:22:938 (5,1) - i think its better if you dont separate them so much cuz this required back and forth movement. Something like 01:25:687 (1,2) - is much easier and makes more sense
01:30:688 (1,2) - i think the dominant sound here is 2 1/4 kick sounds so why not do 2 kick sliders??

Should be all

Exote

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Exote 2017-09-22T10:35:02+00:00

@sahuang

01:23:021 (1,2) - the blanket is bad - tried my best
01:28:021 (4) - since 01:28:188 - has a downbeat why not use a slider+circle? sth like http://puu.sh/xFOzS/8ae55f4d53.jpg - aside from the fact it's getting a bit too dense, it's basically the same as 00:18:688 (4) -
01:30:688 - 01:38:688 (5) - this is supposed to be a stream - I didn't put any 1/4 here so I can break the dense non-stop rhythm, kind of like in the first part 00:11:021 - , it's a hard after all, gotta have them occasional breaks
Not bad, but a suggestion is don't need to stick to DS so much :d - mapped it as ~~priti~~ avena wanted it to be, otherwise I cut out the DS from time to time
Also considering Insane has many streams it would be good if you have 1 or 2 streams, can possibly in the place i mentioned in the previous mod lol - thing is when I first started mapping it, it had more than necessary streams, but removed some because of the advanced-hard gap, an insane's insane, can't make a perfect fitting diff

Fixed the Expert 1/3 thingy

thanks!

http://puu.sh/xG2oE/76a9581eb0.osu - hard
http://puu.sh/xG2oU/28d18dfe8d.osu - ex

Avena

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Avena 2017-09-22T13:02:38+00:00

sahuang wrote:
Insane
00:32:021 (5) - the music here is obviously different from the previous 4 so why not use 2 circles? Because it can be really confusing for a player to readjust to a 1/2 rhythm after such confusing pattern, this is done to give them a bit of time to get their minds together.

Ultra
01:57:688 (1) - what happened to slider end???also silence it and its the only different ending time in the set lol That's the exact point where the sound ends, not on the white tick. Also I tend to overemphasize EVERYTHING in Ultras which is why it's mapped here.
Also the 2 things i find it really hard to play:
01:22:938 (5,1) - i think its better if you dont separate them so much cuz this required back and forth movement. Something like 01:25:687 (1,2) - is much easier and makes more sense This is done to emphasize the intensity. The reason the I made the other pattern so easy is because it's following a spaced stream, so the difficulty here is actually the anti-spacing.
01:30:688 (1,2) - i think the dominant sound here is 2 1/4 kick sounds so why not do 2 kick sliders?? It isn't? tbh the 1/6 is much more dominant.

Should be all

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sahuang

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sahuang 2017-09-23T10:25:34+00:00

Arabian Bubble

pishifat

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pishifat 2017-12-23T10:26:03+00:00

exote ex
00:38:354 (3) - should add another repeat. weird to cut when instrument plays another sound there

cal me bacK !!!!!

Exote

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Exote 2017-12-27T20:07:21+00:00

is priti alive tho

http://puu.sh/yP43v/a006a77301.osu fixed along with some aesthetic stuff and changed the first half of the ending part since it didn't fit with the rest of the map

sahuang

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sahuang 2018-03-08T03:05:41+00:00

wtf why where is priti

AltMirrorBell

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AltMirrorBell 2018-03-15T10:59:51+00:00

where are you now priti