Angela - Shangri-La

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Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

Remilia_CO wrote:

Remilia_CO wrote:

Another
  1. 01:12:201 - awkward pause, 建议把之前的那个note改成滑条 FIXED
  2. 01:41:816 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 变速滑条请NC FIXED
  3. 02:13:739 - 同最上FIXED
    其它问题感觉都是作图风格问题,没有什么好指摘的
Advanced
  1. 01:05:854 (3,4,1) - 这个flow有点别扭,ctrl+J之后感觉比较贴近顺手的flow。 FIXED
  2. 01:12:393 (1,2) - 同理,同样是从右到左,我会选择把滑条放在NOTE上方 FIXED
  3. 01:40:854 (1) - 噫!这个是unrankable的啊 FIXED
  4. 02:42:393 (1) - 噫+1
FIXED



Good luck XD
:)
JJburstOwO
m4m
[General]
预览线怎么没snap

[Another]
先检查一下NC,基本按长白线来就行,现在看着好乱啊
00:41:816 (3,5) - 00:44:701 (5) - 建议都用1/2,拉到蓝线打着很怪
00:44:701 (5) - 拉长1/4,这里滑条尾没音的
00:52:297 - 这根绿线干啥用
00:50:951 (8) - 我觉得节奏不好,老老实实1/2摆过去就行了。现在滑条中间漏音,两端又啥都没压到
00:52:297 - 这根绿线干啥用
01:12:008 (2) - 空这拍,在01:12:201 - 下note
01:23:931 (5,6) - vocal声调上下跳跃,全换note放大跳,01:24:701 (7) - 这里不叠
01:30:278 (3,4) - ^ 这都是kiai最好发挥的地方,被你带过去了= =
01:35:662 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice,有Aho的感觉
02:06:912 (2,3,4,5) - 这种排列已经被时代抛弃了吧.. 不要叠着,用短滑条摆开
02:18:739 (1) - 不要拆连打
02:30:085 (3) - 摆右边点不要遮
02:45:662 (1) - 用滑条

[wmw师傅]
01:03:162 (5,1,2,3,4) - 强迫症暴毙
01:06:431 (1,2,3) - 滑条尾消音
01:40:470 (4,5) - NC
01:47:008 (1,2,1,2) - 强迫症暴毙
01:53:451 (1) - ????
02:07:970 (1,2,3) - 消音
02:13:162 (1) - 取消NC
02:34:893 (1) - 取消NC
好奇怪啊,NC也通篇检查一下吧
02:42:008 (4,5) - NC
02:45:662 - 加个首尾滑条

师傅无敌!!

偷懒了,水到这吧 :)
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

JJburstOwO wrote:

m4m
[General]
预览线怎么没snap

[Another]
先检查一下NC,基本按长白线来就行,现在看着好乱啊 改了一波
00:41:816 (3,5) - 00:44:701 (5) - 建议都用1/2,拉到蓝线打着很怪 改了一波
00:44:701 (5) - 拉长1/4,这里滑条尾没音的 改了一波
00:52:297 - 这根绿线干啥用
00:50:951 (8) - 我觉得节奏不好,老老实实1/2摆过去就行了。现在滑条中间漏音,两端又啥都没压到 不行 我就要
00:52:297 - 这根绿线干啥用 行 改一波
01:12:008 (2) - 空这拍,在01:12:201 - 下note 行 改一波
01:23:931 (5,6) - vocal声调上下跳跃,全换note放大跳,01:24:701 (7) - 这里不叠 行 改一波
01:30:278 (3,4) - ^ 这都是kiai最好发挥的地方,被你带过去了= = 行 改一波
01:35:662 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice,有Aho的感觉
02:06:912 (2,3,4,5) - 这种排列已经被时代抛弃了吧.. 不要叠着,用短滑条摆开 不行 我就要
02:18:739 (1) - 不要拆连打 不行 我就要
02:30:085 (3) - 摆右边点不要遮 好好好
02:45:662 (1) - 用滑条 advocate用条子了……这里依旧spinner


偷懒了,水到这吧 :)
__Ag
general
首先吐槽一下这个排列看起来风格有点老啊,然后依照这歌排列和跳的程度AR绝对低了,怎么也要8.6保底,排列上有点不美观,不规则的三连很奇怪,看着奇怪打着也奇怪

00:21:431 - 这根线用0.5有什么用意吗?音量也太大了,只是调转盘的音的话没必要改速度啊,音量用20%够了

00:40:951 - 漏音,another漏音的话会少很多趣味和梗

00:43:258 - 这里很明显的音给漏了,后面应该也有很多,就不全说了

00:46:335 (5) - 我觉得要么就前后ds一致,要么你就和下一个滑条在靠近点,不然很奇怪

00:50:951 (8) - 全图很多这种overmap啊,强行压蓝线消尾音,我觉的人声部分overmap还可以,纯音部分还是不要轻易这样

01:11:047 (1,2,3,1,2) - 你看你这里,空拍和填满的间距都差不多,空拍还是做出一点明显的间距吧

01:17:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 干爆无规则跳,不会欣赏

01:18:931 (1) - 音量太大

01:36:431 (3,4,5) - 01:32:008 (1,2,3) - kiai的这些三连,你要么都一样的大ds梗,要么就一样的小ds梗,明明没有特殊的变化,却造这么多梗

01:58:162 (1,2,3) - 奇怪的overmap

02:06:912 (2,3,4,5) - 又是强行连打的overmap

02:16:431 (1) - remove nc

02:17:970 (5) - 折两下再接连打有点措手不及啊

02:27:681 - 感觉可以加一个全跟

02:42:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你更新之前比这个歪,但是现在还是不正,直接用多边形做一个啊

02:20:470 (1) - 音量太大
00:50:470 (6,7) - 不用antiflow,就顺着还好些,7叠到4上面

00:50:854 (1,2,3) - 没有明显的起伏为什么ds突然变这么大

00:53:931 - 首先这里不用漏音,然后00:54:124 (1) - 这个适合跟着人声折返

01:05:470 - 不建议漏这个

01:14:701 - 这里用circle,然后01:14:701 (2) - 这歌折返在circle后面更合曲,自然01:15:278 (3) - 改成circle

02:39:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 就insane来说我觉的略难了点,问问大佬吧

02:44:701 (2,1) - 闹哪样这间距,02:43:739 (3,1) - 这里都不吐槽了,最后这个还是悠着点吧,another都没这么跳的

有些空拍感觉掌握的不好,光是听起来就有点奇怪,打着应该更违和吧,主要是一开始比较多
00:34:508 (1) - 音量太大了,20%足够了

01:00:278 (1) - 这种不做尾巴消音吗

01:04:316 (5) - 少年,要空拍就nc吧

01:23:354 (1,2,3) - kiai这样空不合适吧,可以用滑条填上啊

01:39:893 (3) - 拉到长白线

02:24:893 (1,2,3) - 一样的kiai空拍

02:41:431 (3) - 拉到长白线

低难度好像没什么问题,GL
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

__Ag wrote:

general
首先吐槽一下这个排列看起来风格有点老啊,然后依照这歌排列和跳的程度AR绝对低了,怎么也要8.6保底,排列上有点不美观,不规则的三连很奇怪,看着奇怪打着也奇怪 不错了 我一开始准备双8的

00:21:431 - 这根线用0.5有什么用意吗?音量也太大了,只是调转盘的音的话没必要改速度啊,音量用20%够了 历史遗产 先放着

00:40:951 - 漏音,another漏音的话会少很多趣味和梗

00:43:258 - 这里很明显的音给漏了,后面应该也有很多,就不全说了 我会说这段全是跟VOCAL的吗?

00:46:335 (5) - 我觉得要么就前后ds一致,要么你就和下一个滑条在靠近点,不然很奇怪 只做强调用 还有人嫌遮

00:50:951 (8) - 全图很多这种overmap啊,强行压蓝线消尾音,我觉的人声部分overmap还可以,纯音部分还是不要轻易这样 。。。。。。

01:11:047 (1,2,3,1,2) - 你看你这里,空拍和填满的间距都差不多,空拍还是做出一点明显的间距吧其实我读起来感觉挺明显的

01:17:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 干爆无规则跳,不会欣赏 其实我只想画个圈(反正是顺着的 也不知道叫什么形状)

01:18:931 (1) - 音量太大 FIXED

01:36:431 (3,4,5) - 01:32:008 (1,2,3) - kiai的这些三连,你要么都一样的大ds梗,要么就一样的小ds梗,明明没有特殊的变化,却造这么多梗 我觉得这段挺爽就加大了 这个先放置

01:58:162 (1,2,3) - 奇怪的overmap 因为顺手

02:06:912 (2,3,4,5) - 又是强行连打的overmap 因为顺手

02:16:431 (1) - remove ncNO

02:17:970 (5) - 折两下再接连打有点措手不及啊没感觉 大概读图不行

02:27:681 - 感觉可以加一个全跟不跟

02:42:393 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你更新之前比这个歪,但是现在还是不正,直接用多边形做一个啊本来就是要歪的啊

02:20:470 (1) - 音量太大[/box] FIXED
啊,谢谢了
Pata-Mon

Shad0w1and wrote:

[pata]
00:46:239 (8) - 尾巴的flow和间距都过分了,问题在于stacking断掉了motion,起步飞2.8x不可行 下拍本来就重音,这里滑条尾2.8实际打起来很好打
01:15:278 (3) - flow断了,打着很奇怪
02:32:393 (7) - 看下前后DS,别超过2.8x 换了一下包的东西
02:42:008 (1) - 你老是说没有美感,到底还是试图表现一下节奏啊。。 不懂,看别人怎么说

-Irina Avaron- wrote:

[Pata-Mon's Insane]
01:17:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 感觉摆的奇怪 按照后面的FLOW更好一些的 不奇怪
01:55:278 (3) - 改成一个滑条吧 不 这段主要是考虑重鼓点,不把节奏下太密
02:02:585 (2,1) - 中间加一拍 ^
02:44:893 (1) - 说实话 有点远.. 一个note的话没问题的

Remilia_CO wrote:

Remilia_CO wrote:

Insane
  1. I'm not good at this mapping style.. so I just pick something to say..
  2. 01:58:739 (1,2,3) - seems better if the two sliders are straight angles instead of curves. 感觉现在挺好
  3. 02:02:393 - awkward pause 这段主要是考虑重鼓点,不把节奏下太密

    01:17:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - I like this

Good luck XD

__Ag wrote:

00:50:470 (6,7) - 不用antiflow,就顺着还好些,7叠到4上面 这哪里anti了。不改

00:50:854 (1,2,3) - 没有明显的起伏为什么ds突然变这么大 显然有起伏啊,不管原曲还是我的音效也都有体现

00:53:931 - 首先这里不用漏音,然后00:54:124 (1) - 这个适合跟着人声折返 两个低sv段我主跟的本来就都是鼓

01:05:470 - 不建议漏这个 ^

01:14:701 - 这里用circle,然后01:14:701 (2) - 这歌折返在circle后面更合曲,自然01:15:278 (3) - 改成circle 不改

02:39:316 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 就insane来说我觉的略难了点,问问大佬吧 不难

02:44:701 (2,1) - 闹哪样这间距,02:43:739 (3,1) - 这里都不吐槽了,最后这个还是悠着点吧,another都没这么跳的 another是another我的难度是我的难度,他难度还cs5呢

有些空拍感觉掌握的不好,光是听起来就有点奇怪,打着应该更违和吧,主要是一开始比较多 两段低sv下得跟副歌一样密有什么意思。听起来奇怪的很大原因一定是你的潜意识在跟人声,你听伴奏试试还违和不
谢谢~

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IamKwaN
我真的覺得mp3要裁一下
Pata-Mon

前奏的话因为这曲子本来就这样 不懂要不要裁
IamKwaN
我指的是前奏

EDIT: 恩..我是覺得前面空太多 其實能map的然後沒map到
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

sahuang wrote:

顶一下 :)
做完了我来mod-_-#




[Adv]

  • 开头加个转盘吧
  1. 老实说1.4x太高了。。。不过算了
  2. 01:35:278 (5,1) - blanket可以改善一下 恕在下无能,改不了
  3. 01:36:431 (3) - adv里面不知道这样行不行,这个shape也不是很好看
  4. 01:39:316 (1) - 不如滑条在01:39:701 - 停止然后后面4个单点。。现在重音在滑条尾
  5. 01:40:278 (2,1) - 其实不如一个滑条,这样就变成滑条+2圈+滑条,此外为什么NC。。。NC略做了调整
  6. 01:41:816 (1) - 别stack尾哦了
  7. 01:58:354 (3,1) - 这个stack也没啥必要
  8. 第二个kiai完全是复制翻转啊。。感觉略偷懒,我的话会复制节奏排列,但是形状没必要复制。。形状稍微修改了点。。。
[Another]
  1. 00:46:047 (2,3,1) - 间距不对,00:46:047 (2,3) - 这两个的距离应该是你现在00:46:335 (3,1) - 距离,反之亦然唉。。我弄成等间距了
  2. 00:54:124 (1,2) - blanket
  3. 01:22:008 (2,4) - 建议这两个stack,打起来爽多了
  4. 01:22:393 (4,5) - 其实不需要stack,不过也没啥
  5. 01:30:854 (4,1) - 物件完全遮挡折返滑条不知道是不是unrank。。这段改了
  6. 01:32:008 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 为什么DS不一样。。而且这间距略大这段改了
  7. 01:37:585 (3,4) - 有点吊
  8. 01:58:739 (4) - NC在这里
    02:01:816 (1,2,3) - 这种stack其实都不怎么好看我只是想转个向。
    02:03:931 (3,4) - 这是想包吗?02:04:701 (1) - 去掉折返02:04:893 - 加个物件包了。、。。。不拆
虽然another有很多flow不舒服但已经很好了。。我并不会做insane还在挣扎中
gl
Wing My Way
[给皇]
01:03:739 (3,4,5) - 间距百思不得其解,01:04:124 - 其实可以下
01:11:047 (1,1) - 这两个NC没太看懂 改了
后面那一段弄成kiai,其他好像没什么了,难得看到五秒王神麻婆做DS图
02:38:739 (1,2,3,4) - 对了,这种地方听music我觉得完全不该stack。。。小跳多好

[-Irina Avaron-]
wMw's Hard
01:18:354 (4) - 后面加一拍? 算了吧 嗯 好
02:19:893 (4) - 同上

[号被]
Hard
01:00:662 (2) - plz fix the blanket
02:02:201 (2) - ^
Good map, but I think you used too many double-tap patterns, it's better to change some.

[jjb师傅]
01:03:162 (5,1,2,3,4) - 强迫症暴毙
01:06:431 (1,2,3) - 滑条尾消音
01:40:470 (4,5) - NC
01:47:008 (1,2,1,2) - 强迫症暴毙
01:53:451 (1) - ????
02:07:970 (1,2,3) - 消音
02:13:162 (1) - 取消NC
02:34:893 (1) - 取消NC
好奇怪啊,NC也通篇检查一下吧
02:42:008 (4,5) - NC
02:45:662 - 加个首尾滑条 全改了

[琪老板]
00:34:508 (1) - 音量太大了,20%足够了 改成60%
01:00:278 (1) - 这种不做尾巴消音吗
01:04:316 (5) - 少年,要空拍就nc吧 都听琪老板的
01:23:354 (1,2,3) - kiai这样空不合适吧,可以用滑条填上啊
01:39:893 (3) - 拉到长白线
02:24:893 (1,2,3) - 一样的kiai空拍
02:41:431 (3) - 拉到长白线

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234,288,72970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,288,73162,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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315,69,74316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,95,74508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,71,74701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,280,81816,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,82008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,304,84316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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60,284,85854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,228,86047,2,0,L|20:160,1,65
80,116,86431,5,0,0:0:0:0:
236,124,86816,2,0,B|248:143|248:143|242:185,1,65
192,244,87201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,87393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,326,87585,2,0,P|240:336|288:332,1,65
300,264,87970,6,0,P|321:307|367:332,1,97.5
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348,196,88739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,40,89124,2,0,P|369:37|404:48,1,65
452,104,89508,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,128,89893,2,0,P|236:160|228:192,1,65
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156,148,90470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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12,116,92104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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182,127,93547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,167,93739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,240,95662,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,52,99316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,206,99701,5,0,0:0:0:0:
176,212,99797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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395,211,100470,5,0,0:0:0:0:
495,92,100854,2,0,L|480:294,1,195
480,286,101624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
407,313,101816,6,0,L|343:307,1,65
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61,280,102778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,203,102970,2,0,P|114:198|155:185,1,65
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208,154,103547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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347,293,105278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,293,105470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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205,301,107201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,247,107393,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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161,69,107970,6,0,B|181:79|181:79|196:118,1,65
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388,94,108739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,94,108931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
458,127,109124,2,0,L|465:195,1,65
389,211,109508,6,0,P|368:254|371:303,1,97.5
334,316,109893,2,0,P|301:313|269:317,1,65
194,295,110278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,262,110662,2,0,P|37:294|43:326,1,65
113,291,111047,5,0,0:0:0:0:
206,165,111431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,165,111624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,122,111816,2,0,P|130:153|132:185,2,65
205,81,112393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,113,112585,5,0,0:0:0:0:
277,190,112778,2,0,L|313:187,2,32.5
208,228,113162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,305,113354,5,0,0:0:0:0:
203,305,113451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,305,113547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
259,359,113739,2,0,P|289:347|321:350,1,65
373,292,114124,6,0,P|332:239|324:171,1,130
248,156,114701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,193,114893,2,0,P|173:227|191:267,1,65
253,304,115278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,276,115470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,293,115662,6,0,P|412:328|404:380,2,65
326,276,116239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,220,116431,2,0,L|280:135,2,65
220,95,117008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
294,76,117201,6,0,P|348:80|412:57,1,97.5
427,48,117585,2,0,L|417:131,1,65
361,172,117970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,118162,2,0,L|366:246,2,65
423,305,118739,6,0,P|363:330|298:293,1,130
258,243,119316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,263,119508,2,0,B|34:246,1,130
86,177,120085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,177,120278,6,0,B|99:126|76:89|76:89|97:43,1,130
160,16,120854,2,0,P|191:65|280:65,1,130
334,56,121431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,116,121624,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,180,121816,6,0,P|283:174|227:194,1,97.5
238,281,122201,2,0,P|292:249|354:279,1,130
297,333,122778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,333,122970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,362,123162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,317,123354,6,0,B|127:336|127:336|52:325,1,97.5
61,287,123739,2,0,B|76:266|76:266|70:204,1,65
89,150,124124,2,0,L|175:155,1,65
227,181,124508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,181,124701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,138,124893,5,0,0:0:0:0:
367,158,125085,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,235,125278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,292,125470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,138,125854,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,138,126047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,181,126239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,181,126431,6,0,B|200:198|200:198|119:184,1,97.5
96,187,126816,2,0,B|110:248|110:248|92:320,1,130
147,369,127393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,383,127585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
277,325,127778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,247,127970,6,0,P|309:229|346:178,1,97.5
381,184,128354,2,0,P|357:130|371:73,1,97.5
394,72,128739,2,0,P|347:68|312:35,1,97.5
276,18,129124,2,0,P|277:49|268:80,1,65
198,44,129508,5,0,0:0:0:0:
199,199,129893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,199,130085,2,0,B|188:137|188:137|114:166,1,130
71,217,130662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,288,130854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,312,131047,6,0,B|216:317|245:298|245:298|308:317,1,130
376,331,131624,2,0,L|382:195,1,130
396,90,132201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,46,132393,5,0,0:0:0:0:
331,46,132489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,46,132585,2,0,L|251:57,1,65
231,206,133162,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,206,133258,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,206,133354,2,0,L|152:195,1,65
40,105,133931,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,105,134124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,134508,5,0,0:0:0:0:
92,252,134701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,324,134893,2,0,L|-11:299,2,65
220,331,135662,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,255,135854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,181,136047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,193,136239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,266,136431,2,0,L|403:256,1,65
449,302,136816,2,0,L|479:242,1,65
505,148,137201,6,0,L|498:79,1,65
362,55,137585,2,0,L|353:124,1,65
232,170,137970,2,0,L|228:105,1,65
126,43,138354,2,0,L|116:130,1,65
172,264,138739,6,0,L|258:261,1,65
232,170,139124,2,0,L|306:182,1,65
262,360,139508,2,0,L|344:338,1,65
311,103,139893,2,0,L|379:130,1,65
416,216,140278,5,0,0:0:0:0:
394,338,141816,6,0,L|242:326,1,130
170,366,142393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,322,142585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,245,142778,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,230,142970,2,0,P|232:234|274:251,1,65
337,252,143354,6,0,P|325:208|328:166,1,65
274,129,143739,2,0,B|306:109|306:109|410:129,1,130
410,49,144316,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,30,144508,2,0,L|252:15,1,65
204,60,144893,5,0,0:0:0:0:
237,212,145278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
91,153,145662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
46,216,145854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,293,146047,2,0,P|42:333|62:365,1,65
129,371,146431,6,0,L|256:344,2,130
184,316,147393,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,260,147585,2,0,L|308:276,1,65
352,336,147970,5,0,0:0:0:0:
409,283,148162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
357,224,148354,2,0,B|328:150,1,65
256,150,148739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,150,148931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,157,149124,2,0,P|168:188|172:235,1,65
89,219,149508,6,0,P|46:198|21:152,1,97.5
33,119,149893,2,0,P|66:114|98:118,1,65
178,157,150278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,111,150662,2,0,P|330:143|319:178,1,65
263,226,151047,5,0,0:0:0:0:
415,191,151431,2,0,P|447:187|478:194,1,65
442,264,151816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,264,152008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,337,152201,2,0,P|438:341|398:329,1,65
326,316,152585,6,0,L|337:172,2,130
249,330,153547,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,334,153643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,338,153739,2,0,P|202:338|161:322,1,65
105,282,154124,5,0,0:0:0:0:
177,143,154508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,143,154701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,108,154893,2,0,P|99:140|104:182,1,65
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291,140,155662,6,0,P|243:148|211:140,1,65
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299,224,156431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
445,279,156816,2,0,P|445:239|429:191,1,65
421,183,157104,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,183,157201,5,0,0:0:0:0:
466,33,157585,2,0,P|486:57|510:101,1,65
497,163,157970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,183,158162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,119,158354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,56,158739,5,0,0:0:0:0:
230,56,158931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,133,159124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,133,159316,2,0,L|215:210,1,65
223,273,159701,2,0,L|307:257,1,65
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368,128,160470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,160662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,176,160854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,103,161239,5,0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,161335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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238,363,162008,5,0,0:0:0:0:
238,363,162393,2,0,B|284:352|284:352|386:361|386:361|439:343,1,195
489,267,163162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
463,173,163354,6,0,B|419:176|419:176|321:226|321:226|262:218,2,195
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Usami Sumireko
总体:俩主难度好几把难.又难rank又没人打系列(
[wMw's Hard]
01:23:739 (2) - 02:25:278 (2) - 建议改成滑条或者原地再加一个note
01:35:085 (4) - 原地再加一个note
虽然是hard但是为啥kiai的空音比其余部分加起来还多...
[Another]
主难度皮肤设置成默认皮肤没有意义啊....
难度感觉写个expert或者extreme比较靠谱
01:37:585 (3) - 照顾没有数字的player的话可以NC一下
01:53:258 (4) - 后面(1)(2)之间的四分拍有音不放,这里overmap也要放..总感觉怪怪的
02:13:739 - 没必要空 要空也是空(4)-说白了就是我觉得这么下我打的难受....
01:58:162 (3) - 不是很明白这里为什么要放三连overmap
02:43:162 (8) - 摆在右下比较顺
02:45:662 (1) - 感觉怪怪的.直接一个NOTE结束或者一个1/1滑条结束比较好吧(
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

Usami Sumireko wrote:

总体:俩主难度好几把难.又难rank又没人打系列(

[Another]
主难度皮肤设置成默认皮肤没有意义啊.... 我啊忘记改回去了
难度感觉写个expert或者extreme比较靠谱
01:37:585 (3) - 照顾没有数字的player的话可以NC一下 不照顾,坚决不照顾 233333
01:53:258 (4) - 后面(1)(2)之间的四分拍有音不放,这里overmap也要放..总感觉怪怪的 稍微修了下
02:13:739 - 没必要空 要空也是空(4)-说白了就是我觉得这么下我打的难受.... 我没感觉啊
01:58:162 (3) - 不是很明白这里为什么要放三连overmap 噶了
02:43:162 (8) - 摆在右下比较顺
02:45:662 (1) - 感觉怪怪的.直接一个NOTE结束或者一个1/1滑条结束比较好吧( 暂时就这样
_MiaoFUuU_
M4M

KwaN's Normal

  1. 00:54:124 - 这里建议重音开头,做成折返滑条
  2. 01:00:278 - ↑

Advanced

  1. 00:53:739 - 用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500502
  2. 01:10:854 (1,1) - 建议做成圈圈
  3. 01:12:393 (1,2,3) - 做成这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500530
  4. 01:18:354 (4,5) - 做成一个折返滑条
  5. 01:38:739 (1,1) - 这里已经没有拖音了,不要放长滑条,节奏可以下的密点
  6. 01:40:278 (3,1) - 这两个可以做成滑条
  7. 01:55:278 (4,5,6) - 同第一点
  8. 01:58:354 (3) - 做成滑条
  9. 01:58:354 - 建议用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500586
  10. 02:12:393 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - 同上面说过的
  11. 02:19:893 (4,5) - 折返滑条
  12. 02:22:393 - 用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500619
  13. 02:40:278 (1,1,2,3,1) - 同上面说过的

wMw's Hard

  1. 00:54:508 - 这里应该做成按得,不应该结尾
  2. 01:40:470 (1) - 可以删了这个圈 01:40:278 - 这里下一个滑条到红线
  3. 01:56:047 - 同第一点
  4. 02:42:008 (1) - 同第二点

Pata-Mon's Insane

  1. 01:41:431 (2) - 删了这个滑条,这里放一个圈在下一个滑条头就可以了
  2. 02:42:008 (1) - ↑

Another

  1. 好难,感觉滑条好粘,然后跳的距离又略大,经常出100,到了kiai部分时想放开来打,但是被滑条的速度限制了,变得进入滑条很慢,一出来就要很快的跳来跳去。建议有时间的话把滑条速度再提高一点来跟上大跳,或者绿线提高。
  2. 00:46:335 (3) - 这种摆法没必要
  3. 00:58:354 (3,4,5,6,1) - ↑
  4. 01:32:008 (1,2,3,1,2) - 太难了
  5. 02:13:547 (4,4) - 建议删了,和前面对应一下
  6. 02:17:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 换种摆法,很难
  7. 02:33:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议连打叠起来
  8. 02:39:316 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 遮挡太严重了,读起来难,而且折返连打比较难打
  9. 02:44:028 (3) - 开头放错了?
  10. 02:45:662 (1) - 换滑条


good luck!
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

M4M



Advanced

  1. 00:53:739 - 用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500502
  2. 01:10:854 (1,1) - 建议做成圈圈
  3. 01:12:393 (1,2,3) - 做成这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500530
  4. 01:18:354 (4,5) - 做成一个折返滑条
  5. 01:38:739 (1,1) - 这里已经没有拖音了,不要放长滑条,节奏可以下的密点
  6. 01:40:278 (3,1) - 这两个可以做成滑条
  7. 01:55:278 (4,5,6) - 同第一点
  8. 01:58:354 (3) - 做成滑条
  9. 01:58:354 - 建议用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500586
  10. 02:12:393 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - 同上面说过的
  11. 02:19:893 (4,5) - 折返滑条
  12. 02:22:393 - 用这种节奏 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5500619
  13. 02:40:278 (1,1,2,3,1) - 同上面说过的

Another

  1. 好难,感觉滑条好粘,然后跳的距离又略大,经常出100,到了kiai部分时想放开来打,但是被滑条的速度限制了,变得进入滑条很慢,一出来就要很快的跳来跳去。建议有时间的话把滑条速度再提高一点来跟上大跳,或者绿线提高。 再看看
  2. 00:46:335 (3) - 这种摆法没必要
  3. 00:58:354 (3,4,5,6,1) - ↑
  4. 01:32:008 (1,2,3,1,2) - 太难了
  5. 02:13:547 (4,4) - 建议删了,和前面对应一下删了前面一个
  6. 02:17:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 换种摆法,很难
  7. 02:33:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议连打叠起来
  8. 02:39:316 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 遮挡太严重了,读起来难,而且折返连打比较难打
  9. 02:44:028 (3) - 开头放错了?放前放后其实都可以
  10. 02:45:662 (1) - 换滑条好吧 既然这么多人提了还是换条子吧
moonlightleaf
懒癌晚期(

[General]

前奏40s要闹哪样

[骏妈]

咕咕,萌新也好想要骏妈姬滴 :(

[Advance]

00:40:278 (1) - 还是吐槽下,有什么特殊含义吗?感觉还是直线 没必要描点...

NC很乱, 我建议无脑2长白1NC 特殊地方自行斟酌(如变速啥的

前面小段DS比呜喵王的Hard还大...全图唯一,没什么特殊含义的话建议统一

00:50:854 (3) - 强迫症没在13中间

00:52:201 (3) - 不是很适合折返

01:05:854 (3,1) - 明显blanket就不提了,自己查

01:27:778 (1,2) - 换换节奏?

01:31:047 (1) - 其实适合跟前面一样滑条

01:41:816 (1) - 转盘到01:42:970 ?

[呜喵王]

00:41:816 (1,2) - 其实右下角好些 (392,320)

00:46:047 (5) - ctrl+g怎么样,或者前面4叠3上,推荐前者

00:54:124 (1) - ctrl+h这样?

01:07:970 (1,2) - 适合换成滑条

01:17:970 (3) - 有点远, 试试复制这货 01:16:431 (3) 再ctrl+g

01:40:278 - 加个note

02:05:085 (2,3) - ctrl+g吧

02:19:508 (3) - 往上拉点(260,336)

02:46:431 - note

[怕她猛]

考虑到你几乎不改 我就水水

01:10:854 (4) - ctrl+h

02:20:278 (1) - ^

01:18:739 (1) - ctrl+j

02:44:893 (1) - (376,312)

依旧是不喜欢的flow style

[Another]

00:47:201 (1,2,3) - 试试类似这种

00:56:047 (2) - ctrl+g

01:06:816 (2) - ^

01:34:124 (1,2) - 试试

02:02:201 (2) - DS不统一而且有点远

02:06:912 (2) - 没音的 删

02:18:451 (2) - ^

02:33:547 (1,2,3) - 感觉强行叠的 ,DS不统一,而且唯一大DS的3连

gg
Topic Starter
[Hijiri Byakuren]

moonlightleaf wrote:

懒癌晚期(

[General]

前奏40s要闹哪样 懒删无碍,反正有skip

[Advance]

00:40:278 (1) - 还是吐槽下,有什么特殊含义吗?感觉还是直线 没必要描点...。。。。。

NC很乱, 我建议无脑2长白1NC 特殊地方自行斟酌(如变速啥的

前面小段DS比呜喵王的Hard还大...全图唯一,没什么特殊含义的话建议统一????指出来啊

00:50:854 (3) - 强迫症没在13中间???

00:52:201 (3) - 不是很适合折返无碍吧

01:05:854 (3,1) - 明显blanket就不提了,自己查

01:27:778 (1,2) - 换换节奏? 不不不

01:31:047 (1) - 其实适合跟前面一样滑条 啊?无碍吧

01:41:816 (1) - 转盘到01:42:970 ? 不转盘了……后面都没


[Another]

00:47:201 (1,2,3) - 试试类似这种 不变

00:56:047 (2) - ctrl+g可以试试

01:06:816 (2) - ^ 改动后 我后面两个NOTE位置也变了

01:34:124 (1,2) - 试试

02:02:201 (2) - DS不统一而且有点远

02:06:912 (2) - 没音的 删

02:18:451 (2) - ^

02:33:547 (1,2,3) - 感觉强行叠的 ,DS不统一,而且唯一大DS的3连这里需要甩~

gg
Pata-Mon

sahuang wrote:

[巴达兽]
  1. 4.3* ar8,完全mapped for dt么。。。建议8.3 还是比主难度低点吧,ar8完全能打
  2. 01:10:662 (3,4,1) - 间距反了吧,听vocal 01:10:854 (4,1) - 间距显然应该大 有stack什么的整体排列不好搞,就这样吧
  3. 01:23:739 (2,6) - 为什么不这两个stack??明显三角flow更好 不啊,所有这个旋律(CFCF)全都用的这样来回叠
  4. 01:30:085 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这种stack没问题不过个人不大喜欢。。不如三角或者什么的跳,利用范围也大^
  5. 01:55:470 - 01:58:547 - 既然是insane这些地方没理由不下吧,毕竟01:57:008 (4,4) - 这种地方你都下了的 那两处明显鼓声
  6. 总体蛮好的,我觉得就是DT打起来还不错2333
    02:44:701 (2,1) - 这间距尼玛也太大了吧,缩小一半差不多。。。你这让人疯狂尾杀 先这样
gl

_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

Pata-Mon's Insane

  1. 01:41:431 (2) - 删了这个滑条,这里放一个圈在下一个滑条头就可以了
  2. 02:42:008 (1) - ↑

good luck!

moonlightleaf wrote:

[怕她猛]

考虑到你几乎不改 我就水水

01:10:854 (4) - ctrl+h 不 要叠

02:20:278 (1) - ^ 不。你选一下02:18:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 就知道

01:18:739 (1) - ctrl+j ^01:17:201 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) -

02:44:893 (1) - (376,312) 先这样

依旧是不喜欢的flow style
gg
no change

thanks for mod
[Mahua]
怎么把creator word改了 那个嘲讽明明说的对
suli
萌新来水摸一下 :)
前奏好长呀
[Another]
感觉AR可以高一点吧..
皮肤什么鬼
滑条打起来感觉有点粘,不是特别顺手,可能是我菜吧ORZ
00:41:816 (1,3) - 总感觉这种到蓝线的滑条迷之不顺手....
00:41:047 (3,4,5,6) - 这里不弄成等间距吗
01:35:662 (1,6) - 感觉这个NOTE叠上滑条尾会好点?
01:36:431 (3,4,5) - 感觉排成直线会更好看点
01:45:854 (3,4) - 滑条包住缩圈?好像无所谓
01:59:124 (2) - 不把这个滑条折返一下么
02:15:470 (2,3,4) - 这里是不是摆成直线会更好
02:30:278 (4) - 这个音真的不塞吗
02:39:316 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - 这个滑条和连打完全对上感觉应该会更好吧
美丽,原谅水摸,并不能摸得动ORZ
加油 :)
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