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BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!!
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Topic Starter
IRC Session.
2016-03-05 10:55 Timperjuncio: o/
2016-03-05 10:55 Timperjuncio: im the one of reddit
2016-03-05 10:55 Spaghetti: ooh
2016-03-05 10:55 Spaghetti: heyooo
2016-03-05 10:55 Timperjuncio: btw, do you speak Spanish?
2016-03-05 10:56 Spaghetti: i prefer not to but i do
2016-03-05 10:57 Timperjuncio: well, nvm, i can speak in English too
2016-03-05 10:57 Timperjuncio: shit-English, but good enough
2016-03-05 10:57 Timperjuncio: so... could you help me with that map? Like, give me advice, etc
2016-03-05 10:58 Timperjuncio: i would be grateful
2016-03-05 10:58 Spaghetti: sure :P\
2016-03-05 10:58 Spaghetti: link
2016-03-05 10:58 Timperjuncio: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Give Me Chocolate!]
2016-03-05 11:00 Timperjuncio: im new at mapping (yeah, i know i shouldnt start mapping with 7* maps, but it was a challenge :P)
2016-03-05 11:00 Spaghetti: your sense of rhythm is good
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: but as all new mappers
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: your structure is lacking
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: which is ok
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: but its not something that any mapper can teach
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: the only way to learn structure is to copy other maps and see how they map to the music
2016-03-05 11:01 Timperjuncio: i understand...
2016-03-05 11:01 Spaghetti: to see what patterns they use etc
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: 00:13:665 (1) - this slider should be on the red tick before it
2016-03-05 11:02 Timperjuncio: and for this map, what do you think i could improve?
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: hmm
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: wll there's some issues
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: like the one i just pointed out
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: but overall? id say try to use more of the playing field
2016-03-05 11:02 Spaghetti: everything is very centered right now
2016-03-05 11:03 Spaghetti: and spacing consistency
2016-03-05 11:03 Spaghetti: for example
2016-03-05 11:03 Spaghetti: why is the spacing at 00:16:120 (2,3) - bigger than the one at 00:16:392 (4,5) - when its essensially the same sound?
2016-03-05 11:04 Timperjuncio: and how do i make it the same?
2016-03-05 11:04 Spaghetti: just copy what you did on the first one
2016-03-05 11:04 Spaghetti: but if you want them exact
2016-03-05 11:05 Spaghetti: click on 00:16:120 (2,3) -
2016-03-05 11:05 Spaghetti: and look at the top right of the screen
2016-03-05 11:05 Spaghetti: http://puu.sh/nvTtn/8026bda000.jpg do you see this?
2016-03-05 11:05 Timperjuncio: yeah I do
2016-03-05 11:06 Spaghetti: actually bleh
2016-03-05 11:06 Spaghetti: just click this: 00:16:120 (2) - and look there
2016-03-05 11:06 Spaghetti: see how it says 1.21 on next?
2016-03-05 11:06 Timperjuncio: yeah
2016-03-05 11:07 Spaghetti: thats the distance between 2 and 3
2016-03-05 11:07 Spaghetti: so if you want to make 00:16:392 (4,5) - the same
2016-03-05 11:08 Spaghetti: look at the "Beat Snap Divisor" and hold tab
2016-03-05 11:08 Timperjuncio: where's that?
2016-03-05 11:08 Spaghetti: top right
2016-03-05 11:08 Timperjuncio: oh, distance snap?
2016-03-05 11:08 Spaghetti: see how it changes to distance snap?
2016-03-05 11:08 Spaghetti: yes
2016-03-05 11:09 Spaghetti: now hold shift+tab and adjust the distance snap thing to 1.21
2016-03-05 11:09 Timperjuncio: i can't it only lets me make it further
2016-03-05 11:10 Spaghetti: what do you mean?
2016-03-05 11:11 Timperjuncio: when i have those 2 notes selected with the distance snap and i hold shift+tab it should let me make them closer to the other one to get 1.21
2016-03-05 11:11 Timperjuncio: right?
2016-03-05 11:11 Timperjuncio: or am i wrong?
2016-03-05 11:11 Spaghetti: nono you dont have to have those two notes selected
2016-03-05 11:11 Timperjuncio: uhh ok
2016-03-05 11:12 Spaghetti: does it let you now?
2016-03-05 11:12 Timperjuncio: oh yes
2016-03-05 11:12 Spaghetti: awesome
2016-03-05 11:12 Spaghetti: ok now that you did that
2016-03-05 11:12 Spaghetti: look at the bottom right of your screen
2016-03-05 11:12 Spaghetti: see how theres something that says "distance snap"?
2016-03-05 11:13 Timperjuncio: yes
2016-03-05 11:13 Spaghetti: click it
2016-03-05 11:13 Spaghetti: then go to 00:16:529 (5) -
2016-03-05 11:13 Spaghetti: and drag it down
2016-03-05 11:13 Spaghetti: then ta daaa
2016-03-05 11:13 Timperjuncio: :o
2016-03-05 11:13 Timperjuncio: wow it works
2016-03-05 11:13 Timperjuncio: \:D/
2016-03-05 11:13 Spaghetti: yes :D
2016-03-05 11:14 Spaghetti: thats how distance snap works :P
2016-03-05 11:14 Spaghetti: 00:17:211 (7,8,9,10,1) - now you can try the same on this
2016-03-05 11:14 Timperjuncio: ok thanks very much lol
2016-03-05 11:14 Spaghetti: set the Distance Snap to 1
2016-03-05 11:14 Spaghetti: 1.00
2016-03-05 11:14 Spaghetti: and make these equal
2016-03-05 11:15 Timperjuncio: done
2016-03-05 11:15 Spaghetti: congrats, you now know how distance snap works \:D/
2016-03-05 11:15 Timperjuncio: :DDDD
2016-03-05 11:15 Spaghetti: to turn it off click the "Distance Snap" thing again
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: dont use it all the time though
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: only when trying to make things equal
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: for larger jumps it really isnt needed
2016-03-05 11:16 Timperjuncio: so i have to do that with all the patterns i think they should have it?
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: yep
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: :P
2016-03-05 11:16 Timperjuncio: ok, seems good
2016-03-05 11:16 Timperjuncio: ^^
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: something like this does NOT need distance snap:
2016-03-05 11:16 Spaghetti: 00:18:165 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-03-05 11:17 Spaghetti: because the distance purposely changes
2016-03-05 11:17 Spaghetti: see what i mean?
2016-03-05 11:17 Timperjuncio: yeah, like use it with logic, right?
2016-03-05 11:17 Spaghetti: mhm :3
2016-03-05 11:17 Spaghetti: well, all i have to say from now is copy other maps
2016-03-05 11:17 Timperjuncio: ok, i will modify it then
2016-03-05 11:18 Timperjuncio: alright
2016-03-05 11:18 Spaghetti: becuase the map right now isnt very moddable due to having several issues
2016-03-05 11:18 Spaghetti: which of course isnt bad because youre newe
2016-03-05 11:18 Spaghetti: r
2016-03-05 11:18 Timperjuncio: can i send it to you once i have done some modifications?
2016-03-05 11:18 Spaghetti: itll take a lot of maps and remaps to be able to make a map thats moddable and rankable
2016-03-05 11:18 Spaghetti: of course :D
2016-03-05 11:18 Timperjuncio: thanks very much man
2016-03-05 11:18 Timperjuncio: you helped me a lot
- Distance snap usage.
- Rhythm.
- Overall structure
Nanidere
If you are accepting Guess Difficulties, I would like to map Normal diff if that is okay with you. 
Topic Starter
It's OK, but I would like to get it ranked, so do your best please.BladesofSteel wrote:
If you are accepting Guess Difficulties, I would like to map Normal diff if that is okay with you.
Here is a sample of the Normal diff:
Let me know if this is acceptable or not for your beatmap.
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TitleUnicode:Gimme Chocolate!!
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ArtistUnicode:BABYMETAL
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Let me know if this is acceptable or not for your beatmap.
Topic Starter
Yeah, it seems good. Send me the map once it's finishedBladesofSteel wrote:
Here is a sample of the Normal diff:SPOILERosu file format v14
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BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:Gimme Chocolate!!
TitleUnicode:Gimme Chocolate!!
Artist:BABYMETAL
ArtistUnicode:BABYMETAL
Creator:Timperjuncio
Version:Bladesofsteel's Normal
Source:
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Let me know if this is acceptable or not for your beatmap.
Done.
Al few suggestions for your current beatmap:
Check your AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for general errors. The Kai times all seems to be unsnapped in your diffs. Plus there is no preview point made yet.
Good luck.
My diff
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TitleUnicode:Gimme Chocolate!!
Artist:BABYMETAL
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Source:
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136,44,54981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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32,360,56345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,360,60163,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,336,60981,2,0,P|104:328|56:212,1,199.999976158142
96,136,61936,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,308,68890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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124,44,74754,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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76,180,99436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,280,104890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,136,129026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,36,145935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,96,151935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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232,124,174571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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24,192,184663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,340,185890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,186163,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,204,186436,2,0,P|352:148|420:52,1,159.999980926514
480,24,187254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,116,187527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,356,188481,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,300,188754,2,0,P|240:280|168:304,1,119.999985694885
112,348,189436,2,0,P|76:356|20:344,2,79.9999904632569
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Al few suggestions for your current beatmap:
Check your AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for general errors. The Kai times all seems to be unsnapped in your diffs. Plus there is no preview point made yet.
Drowning
A list of horrendous overlaps where you should really consider trying to re-map these parts:
00:16:800 (1,2) -
00:59:891 (4,2) - There could be a nice blanket here
01:11:345 (9,2) -
01:13:527 (4,6) -
01:16:800 (2,4) -
01:28:800 (8,9,10) - and 01:30:981 (8,9,10) -
02:29:481 (6,7) -
03:23:073 (2,3) -
00:57:163 (8) - This slider also hinders the effective cymbal crash heard at 00:57:300, so you may also want to use new objects here too.
02:40:936 (4) - This slider's body is set completely outside of the playing screen.
I fear that you have also abused the whistle hitsound too much for your objects. Please remove some of them.
00:16:800 (1,2) -
00:59:891 (4,2) - There could be a nice blanket here
01:11:345 (9,2) -
01:13:527 (4,6) -
01:16:800 (2,4) -
01:28:800 (8,9,10) - and 01:30:981 (8,9,10) -
02:29:481 (6,7) -
03:23:073 (2,3) -
00:57:163 (8) - This slider also hinders the effective cymbal crash heard at 00:57:300, so you may also want to use new objects here too.
02:40:936 (4) - This slider's body is set completely outside of the playing screen.
I fear that you have also abused the whistle hitsound too much for your objects. Please remove some of them.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Thank you very much for your help. I would like to get this ranked, and I doubt that mi Insane diff is good enough to make this possible.BladesofSteel wrote:
Done.My diffosu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1
[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9300,69709,74754,113481,122754,175118,183845,219845
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
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Title:Gimme Chocolate!!
TitleUnicode:Gimme Chocolate!!
Artist:BABYMETAL
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Creator:Timperjuncio
Version:Bladesofsteel's Normal
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304,200,172935,6,0,P|376:192|412:208,1,79.9999904632569,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,156,173481,2,0,P|430:98|425:59,1,79.9999904632569
356,28,174026,2,0,P|327:95|296:118,1,79.9999904632569
232,124,174571,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,124,183845,6,0,P|68:108|68:108,1,159.999980926514,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,192,184663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,228,184799,2,0,P|124:232|172:220,1,79.9999904632569
212,288,185345,2,0,P|252:286|292:291,1,79.9999904632569
376,340,185890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,272,186163,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,204,186436,2,0,P|352:148|420:52,1,159.999980926514
480,24,187254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,116,187527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,160,187663,2,0,B|448:212|536:268|456:320,1,159.999980926514,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
384,356,188481,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,300,188754,2,0,P|240:280|168:304,1,119.999985694885
112,348,189436,2,0,P|76:356|20:344,2,79.9999904632569
72,260,190254,6,0,L|32:92,1,159.999980926514
76,20,191072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,191345,12,0,192572,0:0:0:0:
464,328,193800,6,0,P|476:244|440:144,1,159.999980926514
384,108,194618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,194890,2,0,L|196:92,1,79.9999904632569
140,152,195436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,195709,6,0,L|312:200,1,79.9999904632569
292,296,196254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,312,196390,2,0,P|176:308|112:236,1,159.999980926514,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,152,197209,2,0,P|112:100|92:48,2,79.9999904632569
160,164,197890,2,0,P|199:165|238:175,1,79.9999904632569
188,260,198436,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,328,198709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,272,198981,2,0,L|16:188,1,79.9999904632569
68,112,199527,2,0,L|92:28,1,79.9999904632569
180,72,200073,6,0,P|248:84|312:60,1,119.999985694885
384,36,200754,2,0,P|440:80|456:172,1,159.999980926514,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,201573,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,284,201846,2,0,L|240:272,1,79.9999904632569
200,276,202255,2,0,P|148:288|104:356,2,119.999985694885
236,188,203346,6,0,P|191:160|112:177,2,119.999985694885
332,172,204437,2,0,P|320:121|253:77,2,119.999985694885
328,220,205391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,205664,6,0,L|500:256,1,79.9999904632569,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,160,206209,2,0,L|420:168,1,79.9999904632569
380,152,206618,2,0,P|320:132|244:192,1,159.999980926514
212,276,207437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,268,207709,6,0,P|66:210|84:135,1,159.999980926514
160,76,208527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,208800,2,0,L|372:96,2,79.9999904632569
Al few suggestions for your current beatmap:
Check your AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for general errors. The Kai times all seems to be unsnapped in your diffs. Plus there is no preview point made yet.DrowningA list of horrendous overlaps where you should really consider trying to re-map these parts:
00:16:800 (1,2) -
00:59:891 (4,2) - There could be a nice blanket here
01:11:345 (9,2) -
01:13:527 (4,6) -
01:16:800 (2,4) -
01:28:800 (8,9,10) - and 01:30:981 (8,9,10) -
02:29:481 (6,7) -
03:23:073 (2,3) -
00:57:163 (8) - This slider also hinders the effective cymbal crash heard at 00:57:300, so you may also want to use new objects here too.
02:40:936 (4) - This slider's body is set completely outside of the playing screen.
I fear that you have also abused the whistle hitsound too much for your objects. Please remove some of them.
Good luck.
The map you did, in my opinion, was great! (I say this cuz I have no idea about modding
)Hope your answer, you can also contact me by osu!
IRC
21:46 BriedisLT: sup
21:47 Timperjuncio: o/
21:47 BriedisLT: i can either irc or forum mod
21:47 *BriedisLT is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!!]
21:47 Timperjuncio: i prefer forum mod, please!
21:48 BriedisLT: ill do forum if the map is not shit
21:48 BriedisLT: i mean its playable
21:48 Timperjuncio: oh ok
21:48 BriedisLT: eh you know wot m8 sorry i got your hopes up
21:51 Timperjuncio: u mean the mapping is shit, right?
21:51 BriedisLT: it is kinda but moddable for me
21:51 BriedisLT: i just dont feel like foruming
21:51 BriedisLT: your mapping is a bit chaotic that means you're quite new to mapping as far as i saw
21:56 Timperjuncio: yeah
21:56 Timperjuncio: if you could point me out a few things you see are totally wrong...
21:56 Timperjuncio: I would be grateful...
21:56 BriedisLT: irc?
21:56 BriedisLT: i'd be glad to
21:57 Timperjuncio: yeah
21:57 BriedisLT: i just cant force myself doing a forum
21:57 BriedisLT: np pls
21:57 *Timperjuncio is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!!]
21:57 Timperjuncio: (Chocolate Drowning)
21:57 BriedisLT: did you have playtesters?
21:58 Timperjuncio: not really
21:58 *BriedisLT is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!! [Chocolate Drowning]] -NoFail +Hidden
21:58 BriedisLT: wathcing others play your map is a great way to see where most of them fail
21:58 Timperjuncio:
21:59 BriedisLT: if there's a particular part where everyone freaks out that means it probably needs changing
21:59 BriedisLT: now i dont know if im gonna pass all that well because im meh today
21:59 BriedisLT: but ill give it a try and then go to mods
21:59 Timperjuncio: xD
21:59 BriedisLT: i wont ask you for pps even
21:59 Timperjuncio: thanks
21:59 BriedisLT: ^^
22:00 BriedisLT: lol
22:00 Timperjuncio: really meh today? ^^
22:00 BriedisLT: fak
22:01 BriedisLT: i feel like i should be playing a lot better
22:01 BriedisLT: nop fml
22:02 Timperjuncio:
22:04 BriedisLT: half is bad mapo
22:05 BriedisLT: half is my fatigue
22:05 Timperjuncio: 3/4 bad map prob.
22:05 BriedisLT: im guessing you're streams kind of a guy
22:05 *BriedisLT is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!! [Chocolate Drowning]]
22:05 BriedisLT: 00:04:939 (1) -
22:05 BriedisLT: idk if the spinner is necessary
22:06 Timperjuncio: well, it feels cool
22:06 BriedisLT: fuck let me delete the bgh
22:06 BriedisLT: idk its preference
22:06 BriedisLT: ah much better
22:06 Timperjuncio: x)
22:07 BriedisLT: you're using grid?
22:07 BriedisLT: dont
22:07 BriedisLT: get back to 2016
22:07 Timperjuncio: oh ok xD
22:07 BriedisLT: 00:09:845 (3) -
22:07 BriedisLT: flow here is kinda meh
22:08 Timperjuncio: because of the direction change?
22:08 BriedisLT: the direction is too extreme
22:08 Timperjuncio: hmm ok
22:09 BriedisLT: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4864777
22:09 BriedisLT: something like this would work
22:09 BriedisLT: first of all what kind of map are you making
22:09 BriedisLT: overmapped shite that rarely is good but you do it because you can
22:09 BriedisLT: or wanna-be ranked
22:10 Timperjuncio: none specially
22:10 Timperjuncio: i know, this was the first map i made and i still want this to get better
22:10 BriedisLT: oh first map
22:10 BriedisLT: dont get your hopes up
22:10 BriedisLT: im mapping my 8th and just maybe ill get it approved
22:10 Timperjuncio: haha
22:10 BriedisLT: first of all
22:11 BriedisLT: keep in mind for the awesome flow
22:11 BriedisLT: if you wanna make an awesome flow
22:11 BriedisLT: but then the jumps won't be possible
22:11 BriedisLT: you gotta make the flow move in a circular motion
22:11 BriedisLT: got it?
22:11 Timperjuncio: yeah
22:11 BriedisLT: ofc you can mix and math
22:11 BriedisLT: match
22:12 BriedisLT: 00:10:936 (9,10,11) -
22:12 BriedisLT: avoid overlaps like these
22:12 Timperjuncio: but if i make it in a circular motion, wouldn't it look like always the same patterns?
22:12 BriedisLT: no
22:12 BriedisLT: eh
22:12 BriedisLT: wanna see how i got "same patters"
22:12 BriedisLT: and i think it plays REALLY well
22:12 BriedisLT: on mi map
22:13 Timperjuncio: yeah
22:13 Timperjuncio: ok ^^
22:13 *BriedisLT is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/798854 Linkin Park - Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim)]
22:13 BriedisLT: i remapped until the 1st minute
22:13 BriedisLT: so everything beyond that is not that good
22:13 BriedisLT: 00:22:280 -
22:13 BriedisLT: really startring from there
22:15 Timperjuncio: oh i can feel the circles movement
22:15 Timperjuncio: like
22:15 Timperjuncio: the patterns
22:15 BriedisLT: yep
22:15 Timperjuncio: i think i got it
22:15 BriedisLT: that's like 4 remaps there
22:15 Timperjuncio: lol
22:15 BriedisLT: thats good flow
22:15 BriedisLT: but with that
22:16 BriedisLT: you need difficulty
22:16 BriedisLT: check the kiai times idk
22:16 BriedisLT: but since my song has the slower parts and harder parts
22:16 BriedisLT: whereas yours really doesnt
22:16 Timperjuncio: yeah that's true
22:17 Timperjuncio: but there arent really "hype moments" in my song
22:17 BriedisLT: avoid a lot of circles like the plague
22:17 BriedisLT: okay back to yours
22:19 BriedisLT: for example
22:19 BriedisLT: 00:11:889 (4) -
22:19 BriedisLT: sure its a viable mapping
22:19 BriedisLT: but it kinda doesnt fit idk
22:19 BriedisLT: thats more preference
22:19 BriedisLT: more importantly
22:19 BriedisLT: 00:12:298 (7) -
22:19 BriedisLT: overlap
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:12:844 (9,10,11,12,13,14) -
22:20 BriedisLT: long combo and
22:20 BriedisLT: straight motion
22:20 BriedisLT: these are kanker to play
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:13:936 (2,3,4,5,6) -
22:20 BriedisLT: kanker to play too
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:15:504 -
22:20 BriedisLT: missed note
22:21 BriedisLT: 00:20:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
22:21 BriedisLT: i'd probably use stacks
22:21 BriedisLT: if you want circular, 00:24:300 (1) - is kanker
22:21 BriedisLT: 00:24:845 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:21 BriedisLT: why all of a sudden these are so close
22:22 BriedisLT: 00:27:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - no reason for this clusterfuck to exist
22:22 BriedisLT: listen to the music and map accordingly
22:22 BriedisLT: watch for overlaps
22:22 BriedisLT: like this 00:27:300 (3) -
22:22 BriedisLT: 00:28:663 (8,9) - straight motion
22:23 BriedisLT: at least CTRL + G 00:29:618 (5,6,7) -
22:23 BriedisLT: if no stacks
22:23 BriedisLT: 00:44:209 -
22:23 BriedisLT: dont map to the voice strictly
22:24 BriedisLT: you mapped to the rhythm and then said nope fuck this going vocals only
22:24 BriedisLT: while 00:45:300 - gets left out
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:44:618 (4) - usually a slider that starts on a red tick is bad
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:50:754 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - say what you want this is usually confusing
22:25 BriedisLT: now flow-more like
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:52:253 (4,5) - this
22:26 BriedisLT: 00:52:390 (5) -
22:26 BriedisLT: rotate +30 clockwise and would feel much better
22:26 BriedisLT: keep in mind that seems minor but makes a huge difference overall
22:27 BriedisLT: 00:56:073 (1,3,4,6,8) - overlaps
22:28 BriedisLT: 00:58:118 (3) - 1.91 spacing idk you use that, use that in below 00:57:572 (1) -
22:28 BriedisLT: 01:00:300 - missing notes like this again, dont miss the beat, it throws everything off
22:28 BriedisLT: 01:12:300 (6,7) - straight motion
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:12:845 (8,9,1,2,3) -
22:29 BriedisLT: kanker
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:13:527 (4) - and overlap
22:29 BriedisLT: oh lol copypasted patterns too
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:23:072 (2) - wtf there's a beat right in the center
22:30 Timperjuncio: about the copypaste, a friend of mine told me that sometimes copypasting makes the song better to follow the rhythm X)
22:30 BriedisLT: 01:23:481 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - its time to stop
22:30 BriedisLT: yeah maybe flip it or something
22:30 BriedisLT: it can be noticable after a few tries
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:27:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - t
22:31 BriedisLT: this part is good in terms of vocal mapping
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:32:209 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - then its kanker
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:41:345 (2,3,4) - straigts
22:32 BriedisLT: 01:50:618 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - include sliders, get back to reality
22:33 Timperjuncio: if i include there sliders, the pattern is fucked up, dont you think so?
22:33 BriedisLT: 01:58:663 - idk about this part, you should try to experiment with different mappings ie to the song and the vocals and etc
22:33 BriedisLT: the pattern is fucked either way
22:33 Timperjuncio: lol
22:33 BriedisLT: ;^)
22:34 BriedisLT: 01:53:481 (7) - a backslider would just be nice here idk random thought
22:34 BriedisLT: 02:02:209 (1) - overlaps
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:02:481 (3) -
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:02:890 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - CIRCLES
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:07:254 (2,3,4,5) -
22:35 BriedisLT: sliders on red ticks nooo
22:36 BriedisLT: 02:16:254 (3) - overlap
22:36 BriedisLT: 02:17:209 (2) - too far of a reach with the jumps overall
22:36 BriedisLT: no context from the song for it
22:37 BriedisLT: 02:20:209 - no comment for this kanker, i dislike streams overall idk find someone else to ask for advice here
22:37 Timperjuncio: for all the stream part?
22:38 Timperjuncio: or just those patterns?
22:38 BriedisLT: 02:48:572 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - too many circles? also 90 degrees is usually really kanker
22:38 BriedisLT: im not even going to talk about streams i hate them no matter what you do with them
22:38 Timperjuncio: xD
22:39 BriedisLT: unless you skip them with a pause or incorporate sliders and backsliders and shit then maybe,
22:39 BriedisLT: do by yourself
22:39 Timperjuncio: right
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:51:163 - missing notes again
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:52:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kanker pattern
22:39 BriedisLT: also overlaps there
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:55:118 - this part is really unique
22:40 BriedisLT: i dont really love it but i dont see anything wrong with it either
22:40 BriedisLT: everything was good up until 03:07:800 (7,8,9) -
22:40 BriedisLT: 03:08:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - straights, 90s etc
22:41 BriedisLT: too many circles too
22:41 BriedisLT: 03:16:254 (2) - generally dont use more than triple backslider
22:41 BriedisLT: i mean three-note backslider
22:41 BriedisLT: four throws you off and five is meh unless its like 1/4 or less
22:42 BriedisLT: 03:17:754 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - boring pattern and quite linear and straight
22:42 BriedisLT: 03:19:936 (5,6,7,8) - then abysmal flow
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:26:754 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - no reason to go apeshit like this
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:28:118 (5,6,7,8) - so straight i wanna turn gay
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:40:254 (5) - overlap and straightness
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:40:663 (7) - ^
22:44 BriedisLT: that sums it up
21:47 Timperjuncio: o/
21:47 BriedisLT: i can either irc or forum mod
21:47 *BriedisLT is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!!]
21:47 Timperjuncio: i prefer forum mod, please!
21:48 BriedisLT: ill do forum if the map is not shit
21:48 BriedisLT: i mean its playable
21:48 Timperjuncio: oh ok
21:48 BriedisLT: eh you know wot m8 sorry i got your hopes up
21:51 Timperjuncio: u mean the mapping is shit, right?
21:51 BriedisLT: it is kinda but moddable for me
21:51 BriedisLT: i just dont feel like foruming
21:51 BriedisLT: your mapping is a bit chaotic that means you're quite new to mapping as far as i saw
21:56 Timperjuncio: yeah
21:56 Timperjuncio: if you could point me out a few things you see are totally wrong...
21:56 Timperjuncio: I would be grateful...
21:56 BriedisLT: irc?
21:56 BriedisLT: i'd be glad to
21:57 Timperjuncio: yeah
21:57 BriedisLT: i just cant force myself doing a forum
21:57 BriedisLT: np pls
21:57 *Timperjuncio is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!!]
21:57 Timperjuncio: (Chocolate Drowning)
21:57 BriedisLT: did you have playtesters?
21:58 Timperjuncio: not really
21:58 *BriedisLT is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!! [Chocolate Drowning]] -NoFail +Hidden
21:58 BriedisLT: wathcing others play your map is a great way to see where most of them fail
21:58 Timperjuncio:
21:59 BriedisLT: if there's a particular part where everyone freaks out that means it probably needs changing
21:59 BriedisLT: now i dont know if im gonna pass all that well because im meh today
21:59 BriedisLT: but ill give it a try and then go to mods
21:59 Timperjuncio: xD
21:59 BriedisLT: i wont ask you for pps even
21:59 Timperjuncio: thanks
21:59 BriedisLT: ^^
22:00 BriedisLT: lol
22:00 Timperjuncio: really meh today? ^^
22:00 BriedisLT: fak
22:01 BriedisLT: i feel like i should be playing a lot better
22:01 BriedisLT: nop fml
22:02 Timperjuncio:
22:04 BriedisLT: half is bad mapo
22:05 BriedisLT: half is my fatigue
22:05 Timperjuncio: 3/4 bad map prob.
22:05 BriedisLT: im guessing you're streams kind of a guy
22:05 *BriedisLT is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/919251 BABYMETAL - Gimme Chocolate!! [Chocolate Drowning]]
22:05 BriedisLT: 00:04:939 (1) -
22:05 BriedisLT: idk if the spinner is necessary
22:06 Timperjuncio: well, it feels cool
22:06 BriedisLT: fuck let me delete the bgh
22:06 BriedisLT: idk its preference
22:06 BriedisLT: ah much better
22:06 Timperjuncio: x)
22:07 BriedisLT: you're using grid?
22:07 BriedisLT: dont
22:07 BriedisLT: get back to 2016
22:07 Timperjuncio: oh ok xD
22:07 BriedisLT: 00:09:845 (3) -
22:07 BriedisLT: flow here is kinda meh
22:08 Timperjuncio: because of the direction change?
22:08 BriedisLT: the direction is too extreme
22:08 Timperjuncio: hmm ok
22:09 BriedisLT: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4864777
22:09 BriedisLT: something like this would work
22:09 BriedisLT: first of all what kind of map are you making
22:09 BriedisLT: overmapped shite that rarely is good but you do it because you can
22:09 BriedisLT: or wanna-be ranked
22:10 Timperjuncio: none specially
22:10 Timperjuncio: i know, this was the first map i made and i still want this to get better
22:10 BriedisLT: oh first map
22:10 BriedisLT: dont get your hopes up
22:10 BriedisLT: im mapping my 8th and just maybe ill get it approved
22:10 Timperjuncio: haha
22:10 BriedisLT: first of all
22:11 BriedisLT: keep in mind for the awesome flow
22:11 BriedisLT: if you wanna make an awesome flow
22:11 BriedisLT: but then the jumps won't be possible
22:11 BriedisLT: you gotta make the flow move in a circular motion
22:11 BriedisLT: got it?
22:11 Timperjuncio: yeah
22:11 BriedisLT: ofc you can mix and math
22:11 BriedisLT: match
22:12 BriedisLT: 00:10:936 (9,10,11) -
22:12 BriedisLT: avoid overlaps like these
22:12 Timperjuncio: but if i make it in a circular motion, wouldn't it look like always the same patterns?
22:12 BriedisLT: no
22:12 BriedisLT: eh
22:12 BriedisLT: wanna see how i got "same patters"
22:12 BriedisLT: and i think it plays REALLY well
22:12 BriedisLT: on mi map
22:13 Timperjuncio: yeah
22:13 Timperjuncio: ok ^^
22:13 *BriedisLT is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/798854 Linkin Park - Guilty All The Same (Feat. Rakim)]
22:13 BriedisLT: i remapped until the 1st minute
22:13 BriedisLT: so everything beyond that is not that good
22:13 BriedisLT: 00:22:280 -
22:13 BriedisLT: really startring from there
22:15 Timperjuncio: oh i can feel the circles movement
22:15 Timperjuncio: like
22:15 Timperjuncio: the patterns
22:15 BriedisLT: yep
22:15 Timperjuncio: i think i got it
22:15 BriedisLT: that's like 4 remaps there
22:15 Timperjuncio: lol
22:15 BriedisLT: thats good flow
22:15 BriedisLT: but with that
22:16 BriedisLT: you need difficulty
22:16 BriedisLT: check the kiai times idk
22:16 BriedisLT: but since my song has the slower parts and harder parts
22:16 BriedisLT: whereas yours really doesnt
22:16 Timperjuncio: yeah that's true
22:17 Timperjuncio: but there arent really "hype moments" in my song
22:17 BriedisLT: avoid a lot of circles like the plague
22:17 BriedisLT: okay back to yours
22:19 BriedisLT: for example
22:19 BriedisLT: 00:11:889 (4) -
22:19 BriedisLT: sure its a viable mapping
22:19 BriedisLT: but it kinda doesnt fit idk
22:19 BriedisLT: thats more preference
22:19 BriedisLT: more importantly
22:19 BriedisLT: 00:12:298 (7) -
22:19 BriedisLT: overlap
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:12:844 (9,10,11,12,13,14) -
22:20 BriedisLT: long combo and
22:20 BriedisLT: straight motion
22:20 BriedisLT: these are kanker to play
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:13:936 (2,3,4,5,6) -
22:20 BriedisLT: kanker to play too
22:20 BriedisLT: 00:15:504 -
22:20 BriedisLT: missed note
22:21 BriedisLT: 00:20:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
22:21 BriedisLT: i'd probably use stacks
22:21 BriedisLT: if you want circular, 00:24:300 (1) - is kanker
22:21 BriedisLT: 00:24:845 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:21 BriedisLT: why all of a sudden these are so close
22:22 BriedisLT: 00:27:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - no reason for this clusterfuck to exist
22:22 BriedisLT: listen to the music and map accordingly
22:22 BriedisLT: watch for overlaps
22:22 BriedisLT: like this 00:27:300 (3) -
22:22 BriedisLT: 00:28:663 (8,9) - straight motion
22:23 BriedisLT: at least CTRL + G 00:29:618 (5,6,7) -
22:23 BriedisLT: if no stacks
22:23 BriedisLT: 00:44:209 -
22:23 BriedisLT: dont map to the voice strictly
22:24 BriedisLT: you mapped to the rhythm and then said nope fuck this going vocals only
22:24 BriedisLT: while 00:45:300 - gets left out
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:44:618 (4) - usually a slider that starts on a red tick is bad
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:50:754 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - say what you want this is usually confusing
22:25 BriedisLT: now flow-more like
22:25 BriedisLT: 00:52:253 (4,5) - this
22:26 BriedisLT: 00:52:390 (5) -
22:26 BriedisLT: rotate +30 clockwise and would feel much better
22:26 BriedisLT: keep in mind that seems minor but makes a huge difference overall
22:27 BriedisLT: 00:56:073 (1,3,4,6,8) - overlaps
22:28 BriedisLT: 00:58:118 (3) - 1.91 spacing idk you use that, use that in below 00:57:572 (1) -
22:28 BriedisLT: 01:00:300 - missing notes like this again, dont miss the beat, it throws everything off
22:28 BriedisLT: 01:12:300 (6,7) - straight motion
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:12:845 (8,9,1,2,3) -
22:29 BriedisLT: kanker
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:13:527 (4) - and overlap
22:29 BriedisLT: oh lol copypasted patterns too
22:29 BriedisLT: 01:23:072 (2) - wtf there's a beat right in the center
22:30 Timperjuncio: about the copypaste, a friend of mine told me that sometimes copypasting makes the song better to follow the rhythm X)
22:30 BriedisLT: 01:23:481 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - its time to stop
22:30 BriedisLT: yeah maybe flip it or something
22:30 BriedisLT: it can be noticable after a few tries
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:27:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - t
22:31 BriedisLT: this part is good in terms of vocal mapping
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:32:209 (1,1,2,3,1,2) - then its kanker
22:31 BriedisLT: 01:41:345 (2,3,4) - straigts
22:32 BriedisLT: 01:50:618 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4) - include sliders, get back to reality
22:33 Timperjuncio: if i include there sliders, the pattern is fucked up, dont you think so?
22:33 BriedisLT: 01:58:663 - idk about this part, you should try to experiment with different mappings ie to the song and the vocals and etc
22:33 BriedisLT: the pattern is fucked either way
22:33 Timperjuncio: lol
22:33 BriedisLT: ;^)
22:34 BriedisLT: 01:53:481 (7) - a backslider would just be nice here idk random thought
22:34 BriedisLT: 02:02:209 (1) - overlaps
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:02:481 (3) -
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:02:890 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - CIRCLES
22:35 BriedisLT: 02:07:254 (2,3,4,5) -
22:35 BriedisLT: sliders on red ticks nooo
22:36 BriedisLT: 02:16:254 (3) - overlap
22:36 BriedisLT: 02:17:209 (2) - too far of a reach with the jumps overall
22:36 BriedisLT: no context from the song for it
22:37 BriedisLT: 02:20:209 - no comment for this kanker, i dislike streams overall idk find someone else to ask for advice here
22:37 Timperjuncio: for all the stream part?
22:38 Timperjuncio: or just those patterns?
22:38 BriedisLT: 02:48:572 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - too many circles? also 90 degrees is usually really kanker
22:38 BriedisLT: im not even going to talk about streams i hate them no matter what you do with them
22:38 Timperjuncio: xD
22:39 BriedisLT: unless you skip them with a pause or incorporate sliders and backsliders and shit then maybe,
22:39 BriedisLT: do by yourself
22:39 Timperjuncio: right
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:51:163 - missing notes again
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:52:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - kanker pattern
22:39 BriedisLT: also overlaps there
22:39 BriedisLT: 02:55:118 - this part is really unique
22:40 BriedisLT: i dont really love it but i dont see anything wrong with it either
22:40 BriedisLT: everything was good up until 03:07:800 (7,8,9) -
22:40 BriedisLT: 03:08:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - straights, 90s etc
22:41 BriedisLT: too many circles too
22:41 BriedisLT: 03:16:254 (2) - generally dont use more than triple backslider
22:41 BriedisLT: i mean three-note backslider
22:41 BriedisLT: four throws you off and five is meh unless its like 1/4 or less
22:42 BriedisLT: 03:17:754 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - boring pattern and quite linear and straight
22:42 BriedisLT: 03:19:936 (5,6,7,8) - then abysmal flow
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:26:754 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - no reason to go apeshit like this
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:28:118 (5,6,7,8) - so straight i wanna turn gay
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:40:254 (5) - overlap and straightness
22:43 BriedisLT: 03:40:663 (7) - ^
22:44 BriedisLT: that sums it up