1. Extra (5,48 stars, 913 notes)

LMT1996 wrote:

NM from our modding queue. очень приятно!

Extra

00:35:355 (3) - break this up into a circle here and slider from 00:35:526 - to 00:36:041 - to better follow the vocal line. Ok
03:08:955 (3) - same here. Ok
00:37:241 - missing vocal (moaning lel) tick here. Try out a few things, even a slider here to 00:37:326 - is legit. Ok
01:27:555 - drum tick here, you might want to add a reverse arrow, or a triplet , both work. Ok
01:28:584 (4) - I understand your intention of using 1/8 here, but this should be snapped on 01:28:669 - this tick (you're 1 1/8 tick early) since the drum at this tick is way too strong to ignore. Ok
03:08:955 (3) - same. Ok
04:02:612 (6) - just a suggestion here: 6 is rhythmically a lot weaker than 5, so a slider from 5 to 6 might fit the music more than a 1/2 jump. Ok
04:52:155 (1) - this could be a 1/2 jump to highlight the synth line you're following. Don't think that it's neccesary
04:54:555 (1) - this slider should end 04:54:726 - here since you're not following the vocal yet. And don't forget to NC 04:54:898 (2) - this.
05:05:526 (1) - same.
05:13:069 (1,2,3) - 1 should end 05:13:412 - here, 2 should end 05:13:926 - here and 05:14:098 (3) - should end 05:14:441 Ok
05:15:812 (1,2) - same stuff.Ok
05:15:126 (6) - should be a reverse slider with reverse arrow 05:15:298 - here and ends 05:15:469 - here. Use playback 50% to detect this. Ok

That's a really good map! Good luck on ranking this.

- Frontier - wrote:

DON'T GIVE ME A KUDOSU !! BECAUSE THIS IS A FAST CHECK !!

00:31:069 - 00:32:695 - It's nothing ?? IMO you should make a spinner here
some noob players that have miss from 00:00:041 - 00:31:069 . If it doesn't have anything here = failed Ok
01:17:526 (2,3,4,5) - kinda overmapped -
01:28:412 (2,3,4,5) - ^ -
02:05:183 (2) - ctrl+g for flow Ok

Bye for now

Naxess wrote:

From Queue

5.55 SR... Well, I'll try.

[ Extra]

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Modding 00:00:000 - 02:33:641 as requested.

00:13:755 (1,2,3,4) - Use rhythm of 00:11:012 (1,2) for consistency Ok

00:27:298 (4) - Rotate by -30 degrees on selection centre for better flow Ok

00:38:269 (4) - Ctrl + G flows better imo Ok

01:05:698 (5) - NC anti-jump for better readability, or space it out more so you don't mistake it for a 1/4 stream. Ok (use NC)

01:27:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider stream is overlapped by a longer slider, both looks bad and might cause issues with readability (01:28:412 (2,3,4,5) - streams like these are already hard to read as it is). Ok (add slider with reverse arrows 1/8)

01:39:641 (3,4) - Refrain from overlapping hitobjects with slider paths. May be a theme you've got going here, but it's still not preferable. Ok
01:40:155 (4,5) - ^ Ok
01:41:869 (1,2) - ^ Ok
01:42:383 (2,3) - ^ Ok
01:44:612 (1,2) - ^ this could be made into a slider bow very easily, for example. (This post, scroll down to 2. Slider bows, for reference) Ok (but not use slider bow)
01:45:126 (2,3) - ^ Ok
01:45:641 (3,4) - ^ Ok
01:47:355 (1,2) - ^ Ok
01:47:869 (2,3) - ^ Ok
01:48:383 (3,4) - ^ Ok
01:39:126 (2,3) - Overlaps like these are good, try making the rest like this as well.

01:48:898 (4,1) - SV is over 3.5x of the last SV and the transition is very sudden. This will likely cause ranking issues. Consider slowly changing SV, like you've done throughout 01:47:355 (1,2,3,4) -, instead of having an instant transition.
You could change 01:47:355 (1,2,3,4) from slowing down in SV to speeding up instead, for example.
Either way, something should be done about this because it's way too sudden as it is. Ok (use SV to speeding up)

01:54:212 (2,3) - Again, refrain from having sliders' paths overlap with other circles, heads or tails. It generally looks bad, and I doubt there'll be an exception for this map, so consider changing it. You can still overlap the two paths, for example, just as long as nothing else is getting overlapped. Ok
01:57:298 (3,1) - ^ Ok

Overall I think DS can be more consistent. 00:27:127 (3,4) and 00:29:869 (3,4) should have the same DS, for instance. Ok

00:32:955 (1) - Tail should be at 00:34:155 Ok

00:37:241 - Something should be here imo, since the vocal lightly resumes on this red tick. Ok

00:35:269 - Overmapping, I hear no sound and thus I don't believe that there should be an object here.
The one you are hearing here is probably the one at 00:35:355 Ok
00:35:441 - ^ This is definitely overmapping. Here it's 00:35:526 that should be mapped instead. Overmapping is, throughout the community and wiki, not seen upon well, so I'd recommend removing/moving this note. Ok

01:54:212 (2,3) - 02:20:955 - Whistles don't really fit to the song imo, try using some custom hitsounds for these.
Speaking of hitsounds, you could hitsound things like 00:00:041 - 00:00:555 - 00:01:412 - 00:01:926 etc. with a dampened drum-kick hitsound (again, custom hitsounds would probably work really well). Because I feel it might need some more variation other than just a few claps here and there.

02:11:355 (5,6,7,8,9,1,1,2,3,1) - I've gotta say, this is perfect.

I guess that's all, still terrible at modding extreme difficulties...

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1. Tags need to be redone. Adding every line of lyrics to your tags shouldn't happen, and periods do not mark the end of a single unified tag (as far as I know, anyway). Basically, every single space you have will make the word, or letter, a tag.
   So "Drum and Bass" will allow you to find it by searching just "Bass" in the search field for the beatmap listings.
   Firstly, remove all tags,
   then add the following tags (from Monstercat's Soundcloud for Calling Out):
   
   1. EDM
   2. Electronic
   3. Dance
   4. Drum and Bass
   5. DnB
   6. Melodic
   7. Monstercat
   Ok
   That should be all you need, but if you'd like more, then take a look at other official sources, for example. (Just remember not to include the same word twice throughout all of your metadata by adding it to your tags. Artist name etc. are basically already a part of the them)
2. Combo colors are default, consider changing this.
3. Your background image is 1366 x 683 instead of 1366 x 768, which is the preferred size, this means that your background is going to be slightly zoomed in, and some parts of the original image won't be visible because of this. It is not necessary to fix, but I thought I'd mention it at least. Ok

Good luck!