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Surono
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 Maret 2016 at 18:22:20

Artist: Demetori
Title: The Primal Scene of Japan the Girl Saw ~ Dance of puNDarika
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou man'enjushaka 曼衍珠汝華 Nada Upasana Pundarika Comiket77 fuujinroku mountain of faith stage 5 theme sanae kochiya ZUN team shanghai alice instrumental guitar
BPM: 135
Filesize: 9168kb
Play Time: 06:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (5,37 stars, 2370 notes)
  2. Oni (3,82 stars, 1742 notes)
Download: Demetori - The Primal Scene of Japan the Girl Saw ~ Dance of puNDarika
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dem sir
I no have idea which song for mapping, or lazy spread normal song, or lazy find a song to mapping.. and yeah, its Demetori song again.. but now its low bpm with lack sr? lol this cuz 1/6 stream.. and some 1/8 is bad to mappable.. ( dem to make 1/4+1/8, Ppl will be mad lol )
Some Inner patterns need left fingers alternating if You right finger singletapper and vice versa, 1/6 long stream patterns rip. dem Oni spamming dk pattern and kat now is no, ahay (focus at guitar flow, rip mah snare drum... ;_; I like more keep snare then kick.. I like get kicked. dem hrutsh.) te nonet tonetnet

enjoy~

  • Hei There!!
  1. Doyak : mod
  2. LigerZero: metadata
  3. SKSalt : mod & metadata
  4. Jason X : +2 stars
  5. Skeuddy : mod
  6. Smallwu : mod & stars
  7. Charlotte : +2 stars
  8. Pohm : mod
Topic Starter
Surono
make Oni cuz I care normal player, on of them is me an rsi player rip.. and Inner just harsh.. monstah pley..
I dont know why did it, but I just see discuss on Nwolf map tell about quality or what.. dem, every I chat and sometimes nwolf get topic on chat.. just say bad qualiti or blabla.. if that mapped cuz song lol is fine, I think nwolf map is guud cuz its mapped easir to play.. eg: 1/6 or 1/8 stream , mostly have kdkdkdkd or alternating bla ( mostly not have spam single color lol ).. this easir and fit with song lol. so thats why I make Oni.. change 1/6 to slider or 1/4 stream or emphasize delete..
so bla.. I just tell this cuz it my ordinary word or idk brain/mind/think... rip engrish

04/03/2016 : Added Oni diff
LigerZero
Surono pro menggoda ganteng...., hanya tags kok...... semua 100% OK cuman Tags doang, jadi nggak usah kasih kudosu karena nggak bisa ngemod taiko :(
Tags tambahin "man'enjushaka 曼衍珠汝華 Nada Upasana Pundarika Comiket77 fuujinroku mountain of faith stage 5 theme sanae kochiya ZUN team shanghai alice instrumental guitar"
Doyak
Hi~ my first Taiko mod... idk what to even say, but I'll try.

[Oni]
* 00:25:043 - Add d? 00:24:487 (120,121,122) - and 00:24:932 (123,124) - is almost similar and 00:24:932 (123,124,125,126) - feels pretty empty and I think here needs a build-up to emphasize 00:25:376 (125) -
* 00:27:043 (134) - k? as the tone is still high and it goes down at 00:27:154 - . Same for 00:28:821 (144) -
* 00:59:376 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/nuhW7/ab4b2f63b6.jpg As I hear 00:59:599 - very quiet while those are pretty loud.
* 01:42:265 (31) - 04:12:803 (41) - idk how Taiko maps should be but... Does this fit? I see you used 1/6 snap on Inner Oni to follow the drums but if you put a slider here than those will be 1/4 ticks.
* 01:46:487 (45,46) - Probably you can put 5 notes here, as there are good drums I guess? Maybe kkddk
* 02:03:154 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Just my preference, but I would like to use this rhythm instead: a aaa aaa aaaaa a For me, it feels more natural to increase the tension when you get closer to the next 'section'. Applies to all simialr parts if you agree. (I don't think you will anyway lol)
* 02:24:710 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Use more d's than k's? That part is mostly about low drums so I think it's better to put d's mostly. Something like http://puu.sh/nuivf/7e3bb858a9.jpg
* 02:39:599 (73,77) - K? I think you were keep trying to use K's on those cymbal sounds.
* 02:54:710 (133,134,135,136) - 02:58:138 (144,145,146,147) - Hmm why not fill all 1/4s out? They're all very obvious sounds.
* 03:19:352 (259,260,261,262,263) - This almost took me off as you never used this hard rhythm before, so how about dddkd kkd? More notes but feels easier for me. Same for 03:21:067 (269,270,271,272,273) - 03:22:781 (277,278,279,280,281) -
* 03:26:424 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Ehh why so many k's here? I wouldn't even surprise if all those were d's. Also that 1/3 stream(?)s are umm, I know it fits with the music, but you just used 1/4 stream on similar parts like 03:07:352 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - though. It's quite confusing and also when you listen to 1/6s you would bind them by 3 to think them as 3 sounds inside a 1/2. But if you put notes only at 1/3 you have to skip 1/2s which feels, weird.
* 03:56:581 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - Too many k's in a row I think? k k d kdkd how about this? Can be a good preparation for alternating on 03:59:692 (36,37,38,39,40) -
* 04:58:729 (3,4) - How about filling 1/3s with k k d? I hear extra drums on right side for 04:58:729 - 04:58:877 -
* 05:19:914 - add d? The drum sounds so obvious.
* 05:40:803 (75,76,77) - I want to use all d's here. It's pretty much same as 05:41:248 (78,79,80) - and they're all low drums. Or http://puu.sh/nujEF/5c19b7d1dd.jpg because two triplets doesn't represent the long 1/4 drums well imo.
* 05:46:692 (112,113) - Swap? the tone goes down.

That's all from me~ Maybe my mod was terrible as it's my first try of modding a Taiko map. I'll be waiting for your m4m part :D
Topic Starter
Surono

LigerZero wrote:

Surono pro menggoda ganteng...., hanya tags kok...... semua 100% OK cuman Tags doang, jadi nggak usah kasih kudosu karena nggak bisa ngemod taiko :(
Tags tambahin "man'enjushaka 曼衍珠汝華 Nada Upasana Pundarika Comiket77 fuujinroku mountain of faith stage 5 theme sanae kochiya ZUN team shanghai alice instrumental guitar"
makasih mas Liger :P

Doyak wrote:

Hi~ my first Taiko mod... idk what to even say, but I'll try. (OwO )9

[Oni]
* 00:25:043 - Add d? 00:24:487 (120,121,122) - and 00:24:932 (123,124) - is almost similar and 00:24:932 (123,124,125,126) - feels pretty empty and I think here needs a build-up to emphasize 00:25:376 (125) - this make close to Inner Oni spread.. so I might not adding note for as Oni
* 00:27:043 (134) - k? as the tone is still high and it goes down at 00:27:154 - . Same for 00:28:821 (144) - 00:23:487 - already have that, just for this pattern and similar
* 00:59:376 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - Something like this? http://puu.sh/nuhW7/ab4b2f63b6.jpg As I hear 00:59:599 - very quiet while those are pretty loud. nice catch, I make kk kdkk
* 01:42:265 (31) - 04:12:803 (41) - idk how Taiko maps should be but... Does this fit? I see you used 1/6 snap on Inner Oni to follow the drums but if you put a slider here than those will be 1/4 ticks. yes.. if I added 1/6 stream is would be harsh for Oni.. so Instead Slider
* 01:46:487 (45,46) - Probably you can put 5 notes here, as there are good drums I guess? Maybe kkddk I emphasize cymbal.. and for rest section
* 02:03:154 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Just my preference, but I would like to use this rhythm instead: a aaa aaa aaaaa a For me, it feels more natural to increase the tension when you get closer to the next 'section'. Applies to all simialr parts if you agree. (I don't think you will anyway lol) lol, ah nah.. to long XD
* 02:24:710 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Use more d's than k's? That part is mostly about low drums so I think it's better to put d's mostly. Something like http://puu.sh/nuivf/7e3bb858a9.jpg 02:26:043 - change don but I keep with dkk pattern, it sounds snare drum
* 02:39:599 (73,77) - K? I think you were keep trying to use K's on those cymbal sounds. hmm no for this.. it sounds just normal cymbal (not have like with snare drum too lol)
* 02:54:710 (133,134,135,136) - 02:58:138 (144,145,146,147) - Hmm why not fill all 1/4s out? They're all very obvious sounds. I consider this.. cuz for spread with Inner
* 03:19:352 (259,260,261,262,263) - This almost took me off as you never used this hard rhythm before, so how about dddkd kkd? More notes but feels easier for me. Same for 03:21:067 (269,270,271,272,273) - 03:22:781 (277,278,279,280,281) - its enough.. to harsh if make like that XD
* 03:26:424 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Ehh why so many k's here? I wouldn't even surprise if all those were d's. Also that 1/3 stream(?)s are umm, I know it fits with the music, but you just used 1/4 stream on similar parts like 03:07:352 (191,192,193,194,195,196,197) - though. It's quite confusing and also when you listen to 1/6s you would bind them by 3 to think them as 3 sounds inside a 1/2. But if you put notes only at 1/3 you have to skip 1/2s which feels, weird. yes.. exactly, I will considering this.. but yeah its still fine cuz fit with music *maybe offset.. I bad on this part, too lol*
* 03:56:581 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - Too many k's in a row I think? k k d kdkd how about this? Can be a good preparation for alternating on 03:59:692 (36,37,38,39,40) - fixed
* 04:58:729 (3,4) - How about filling 1/3s with k k d? I hear extra drums on right side for 04:58:729 - 04:58:877 - keep, for ez hit finisher lol
* 05:19:914 - add d? The drum sounds so obvious. same above with think this.. and also spreading with Inner
* 05:40:803 (75,76,77) - I want to use all d's here. It's pretty much same as 05:41:248 (78,79,80) - and they're all low drums. Or http://puu.sh/nujEF/5c19b7d1dd.jpg because two triplets doesn't represent the long 1/4 drums well imo.fixed
* 05:46:692 (112,113) - Swap? the tone goes down. keep this, please snare drum XD

That's all from me~ Maybe my mod was terrible as it's my first try of modding a Taiko map. I'll be waiting for your m4m part :D Your english pretty gyudd.. mine is dem ;w; but don wolli.. my modding is fine.. but not typing engrish :'D
well its your first modding.. but is helpful. wow XD
Thx for Nice mod 8-)
SKSalt
Hi, Taiko mod request from my queue.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:46:487 (67) - remove finisher? There is no strong sound.
  2. 04:21:803 (8) - change to d? What did it become k in consideration?
  3. 04:36:025 (8) - same as above.
  4. 02:03:265 (8) - ^
  5. 02:17:487 (8) - ^
[metadata check]
  1. Title should be "The Primal Scene of Japan the Girl Saw ~ Dance of puNDarika"
Pattern is almost good, easy to read for me.

Good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Surono

SKSalt wrote:

Hi, Taiko mod request from my queue.

[Inner Oni]
  1. 01:46:487 (67) - remove finisher? There is no strong sound. ups my bad, yes remove and.. I hear drum so from here 01:46:265 - kddkddk XD
  2. 04:21:803 (8) - change to d? What did it become k in consideration?
  3. 04:36:025 (8) - same as above.
  4. 02:03:265 (8) - ^
  5. 02:17:487 (8) - ^ yes this kat looks bad for mixed on long stream, but yeah.. I make like this to 04:35:914 (7,8,1,2) - emphasize this pattern for guitar and avoid monotone pattern.
    EDIT: so bad with that kat.. yeah changed to don and 02:03:043 - give this kat for avoid monotone pattern and others similar part.
[metadata check]
  1. Title should be "The Primal Scene of Japan the Girl Saw ~ Dance of puNDarika" fixed
Pattern is almost good, easy to read for me. I am glad to know that XD thanks

Good luck ;)
01:43:821 - and also self-mod for adding more notes.. have many ignored sound :'D

thanks for mod, sir! 8-)
Skeuddy
Hey

Oni
  1. 02:54:819 - Some note (k)
  2. 02:58:247 - ^ (k)
  3. 03:18:604 - ^ (k)
  4. 03:38:693 and 03:38:916 - ^ (d)
  5. 03:45:583 - ^ (k) and 03:45:916 - (d)
  6. 04:10:472 - ^ (k) and 04:10:916 - (d)
  7. 05:40:916 - ^ (d)
  8. 05:26:583 - 05:27:027 - 1/6 kd...dk
  9. 04:10:805 (28) to 04:10:472 and 04:10:805 - k
  10. 04:51:360 (6) - k
  11. 04:58:138 (9,2) - Swap, and 04:58:879 - k

Inner Oni
  1. 00:00:490 (6) or 00:00:193 (3,4,5) - k
  2. 00:17:971 (122,123) - ^
  3. 02:25:934 (19) - ^
  4. 03:20:212 (344) - ^
  5. 03:21:926 (356) - ^
  6. 03:23:640 (368) - ^
  7. 03:27:926 (31,32) - ^
  8. 03:38:730 (78,79) - ^
  9. 04:59:027 (5) - ^
  10. 00:14:712 (118) - d
  11. 04:51:694 (9) - Finisher
  12. 01:42:045 (37,52) - Swap, and 01:43:378 (53) - k
  13. 03:14:426 (297,298,299,300) - dkkd
Topic Starter
Surono

Skeuddy wrote:

Hey yoi

Oni
  1. 02:54:819 - Some note (k)
  2. 02:58:247 - ^ (k)
  3. 03:18:604 - ^ (k) actually is spread
  4. 03:38:693 and 03:38:916 - ^ (d) Keep for now
  5. 03:45:583 - ^ (k) and 03:45:916 - (d) did something
  6. 04:10:472 - ^ (k) and 04:10:916 - (d) 04:10:694 - move to 04:10:472 - and change kat
  7. 05:40:916 - ^ (d) did something
  8. 05:26:583 - 05:27:027 - 1/6 kd...dk keep with 1/4, I not feels good with 1/6 on Oni
  9. 04:10:805 (28) to 04:10:472 and 04:10:805 - k
  10. 04:51:360 (6) - k
  11. 04:58:138 (9,2) - Swap, and 04:58:879 - k


Inner Oni
  1. 00:00:490 (6) or 00:00:193 (3,4,5) - k n
  2. 00:17:971 (122,123) - ^
  3. 02:25:934 (19) - ^ too overemphasize
  4. 03:20:212 (344) - ^ not snare drum
  5. 03:21:926 (356) - ^
  6. 03:23:640 (368) - ^
  7. 03:27:926 (31,32) - ^
  8. 03:38:730 (78,79) - ^ n
  9. 04:59:027 (5) - ^ this downbeat
  10. 00:14:712 (118) - d
  11. 04:51:694 (9) - Finisher rip, I ignore that cymbal just for as pattern
  12. 01:42:045 (37,52) - Swap, and 01:43:378 (53) - k too bad
  13. 03:14:426 (297,298,299,300) - dkkd broken.. no no..
ty ty
Smallwu
Hi, mod from my queue

General
No problem, good job :3

Oni
Turn off "Widescreen Support"

03:48:472 - 03:48:805 -

03:50:250 - 03:50:583 - ^

03:58:805 - Add d - It can be easier than original pattern

Inner Oni
01:41:823 - 01:42:156 - Try

04:07:027 - 04:07:250 -

05:20:138 (42) - d Because no highlight sound
BTW I'm not good at mod this type songs
If my mod can't help you, sorry QwQ

GL with Rank! :)
Topic Starter
Surono
all fixed on Oni
but not accept on Inner Oni, theres have strong sounds and I follow Cymbal for finisher

Thanks for mod! cute small,wu
nakanotsu nimi
shiz i'm lazy modder never modded long songs :c

*surono slap pohm*
pohm cri

Sorry for late mod, but better than never XD

[ General]

d as Don
k as Kat
D as Finisher Don
K as Finisher Kat

I mod according to structure, flow and tones :3

[ Oni]

00:34:156 (160) - change to d (avoid previous dkdd pattern)
01:31:045 (17) - change to d (section that follows is similar ^)
02:54:819 - add k (don't ignore sound :C, sound love you <3)
02:56:747 - add d (same as inner oni)
02:58:247 - add k (don't ignore sound :C, sound love you <3)

[ Inner Oni]

04:44:694 - add d (mapping for more epicness)

taiko needs more demetori!! :3
Topic Starter
Surono

Pohm wrote:

shiz i'm lazy modder never modded long songs :c woahh why u did mod for this D: D: D: D: xd

*surono slap pohm*
pohm cri

Sorry for late mod, but better than never XD thats a good modder!

[ General]

d as Don
k as Kat
D as Finisher Don
K as Finisher Kat

I mod according to structure, flow and tones :3

[ Oni]

00:34:156 (160) - change to d (avoid previous dkdd pattern)
01:31:045 (17) - change to d (section that follows is similar ^) Nice XD Its already fixed when I did selfmod ( and forget Update this ), so thanks for point on there!!
02:54:819 - add k (don't ignore sound :C, sound love you <3)
02:56:747 - add d (same as inner oni)
02:58:247 - add k (don't ignore sound :C, sound love you <3) okay all accept.. I just trying remove for density as Oni. but okay my english is rip but okay they sounds LEALLY can to HEARRR :V

[ Inner Oni]

04:44:694 - add d (mapping for more epicness) noooo xd 04:44:805 - on here finisher uhe3uh3euh3euh3e

taiko needs more demetori!! :3 Yeee :3
arigatosss mod!!!
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