Hi ZzH
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BASIC
00:19:135 (19135|1) - 有突然的感觉, 建议移动到 00:19:318 - , 抓 1/1 音 here 会更好.
00:20:416 - 00:21:147 - 钢琴音, 加?
01:18:586 (78586|3) - 我觉得 LN 音 应该是这样 http://puu.sh/oqgRq/b47d9d9bc3.png
01:52:062 - 加一个给kick, 同样 > 01:54:257 (114257|1,114989|1) -
ADVANCED
00:34:684 - i think is fine to have double note here for crash, it won't really hard to play 啦
00:57:093 - There is still 1/4 sound here which u are following, u missed here
01:18:586 (78586|3) - like in basic, i think they are not only 1 long sound here
01:37:245 (97245|3,97367|0,97489|1,97611|2) - i am pretty sure they are 1/4 snap here :/
01:56:452 (116452|1,116544|0) - CTRL+G? could be fun :3
EXTREME
00:46:391 - 00:58:099 - 三个给crash吧
00:47:032 - 00:47:946 - 建议加上这些音,既然是 一样 1/4 音, 留出空间感觉一点奇怪. a stream 1/4 will work here nicely.
00:53:800 - 00:54:349 - and so on like above ^ i not sure why u spaced this, if 00:47:123 (47123|1,47123|2,47215|0,47397|2,47489|3,47489|1,47672|2,47763|1,47855|0,47855|3) - i can understand u are following another sound here
01:03:404 (63404|0) - delete? refer 01:01:940 - u spaced here
01:27:733 (87733|0,87733|2,87733|3,88099|3,88099|0,88099|1,88465|2,88465|3,88465|0,88830|1,88830|3,88830|0,89196|0,89196|3,89196|2) - i think double note is already enough
01:37:245 (97245|2,97367|0,97489|1,97611|2) - this is surely a 1/4 snap tho :/ try 25% playback
01:37:794 - 01:38:160 - 01:38:525 - actually u can have a note here for every red tick here too since they also having the same sound like 01:37:885 (97885|2,97977|1,98251|1,98343|2,98617|2,98708|1) -
01:44:745 - double for kick, this is a kick sound, there is no problem to have double here啦
01:53:160 (113160|3,113343|1) - no double? :< double啦
01:54:257 - 01:54:989 - is fine to have double here too for loud kick 啦
好运~
mod requested here 'w')
column 1 2 3 4
BASIC
00:19:135 (19135|1) - 有突然的感觉, 建议移动到 00:19:318 - , 抓 1/1 音 here 会更好.
00:20:416 - 00:21:147 - 钢琴音, 加?
01:18:586 (78586|3) - 我觉得 LN 音 应该是这样 http://puu.sh/oqgRq/b47d9d9bc3.png
01:52:062 - 加一个给kick, 同样 > 01:54:257 (114257|1,114989|1) -
ADVANCED
00:34:684 - i think is fine to have double note here for crash, it won't really hard to play 啦
00:57:093 - There is still 1/4 sound here which u are following, u missed here
01:18:586 (78586|3) - like in basic, i think they are not only 1 long sound here
01:37:245 (97245|3,97367|0,97489|1,97611|2) - i am pretty sure they are 1/4 snap here :/
01:56:452 (116452|1,116544|0) - CTRL+G? could be fun :3
EXTREME
00:46:391 - 00:58:099 - 三个给crash吧
00:47:032 - 00:47:946 - 建议加上这些音,既然是 一样 1/4 音, 留出空间感觉一点奇怪. a stream 1/4 will work here nicely.
00:53:800 - 00:54:349 - and so on like above ^ i not sure why u spaced this, if 00:47:123 (47123|1,47123|2,47215|0,47397|2,47489|3,47489|1,47672|2,47763|1,47855|0,47855|3) - i can understand u are following another sound here
01:03:404 (63404|0) - delete? refer 01:01:940 - u spaced here
01:27:733 (87733|0,87733|2,87733|3,88099|3,88099|0,88099|1,88465|2,88465|3,88465|0,88830|1,88830|3,88830|0,89196|0,89196|3,89196|2) - i think double note is already enough
01:37:245 (97245|2,97367|0,97489|1,97611|2) - this is surely a 1/4 snap tho :/ try 25% playback
01:37:794 - 01:38:160 - 01:38:525 - actually u can have a note here for every red tick here too since they also having the same sound like 01:37:885 (97885|2,97977|1,98251|1,98343|2,98617|2,98708|1) -
01:44:745 - double for kick, this is a kick sound, there is no problem to have double here啦
01:53:160 (113160|3,113343|1) - no double? :< double啦
01:54:257 - 01:54:989 - is fine to have double here too for loud kick 啦
好运~