Battle wrote:

Battle wrote:

Girl wrote:

LOL

Kalamitous wrote:

DED

Spaghetti wrote:

gorlni

Sliceofpie wrote:

02:27:067 (3) - new combo?

Espeon wrote:

checked mostly for blankets as you asked

mod

00:09:067 (2,3,4) - fix blanket
00:30:596 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:27:949 (5,6) - fix blanket
02:21:244 (6,7) - little off if you ctrl+g and look
02:45:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/p3Dg5.jpg
03:02:714 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - WOW
03:45:067 (1,2,3) - fix blanket
03:57:773 (1,2,3,4) - fix blanket
04:05:714 (6,1) - fix blanket if you were intending to
04:09:861 (4,5) - little off you can see if you ctrl+g
04:09:861 (4,2,1) - fix
04:14:008 (6,1) - i think this is off
04:22:832 (1,1) - fix
04:34:126 (5,1) - might be a pixel or 2 off
04:51:420 (1,1) - ^
04:56:008 (1,1) - little off, ctrl+g second note to see
04:59:185 (1,1) - fix

this map is so beautiful

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

no kds since not really a mod,

you have 2 soft-hitnormal58 and soft-hitnormal59

kickass map go for ranked

Sliceofpie wrote:

04:15:773 (1) - new combo seems weird here

Sliceofpie wrote:

noob mod
01:45:773 (1,1) - the SV changes are hard to read here. the 1:45 note has a new combo and no sv change, while the 1:46 note is the same but with a sv change. maybe remove the new combo on 01:45:773 (1) to just keep it consistent with 01:51:420 (3,4) -
01:51:773 (1) - maybe make the spacing between this note and the next note similar to 01:46:126 (1).
02:39:773 (6) - new combo?

Ascendance wrote:

lul

Girl wrote:

can bns just come to me instead xd

2016-06-26 19:24 Ascendance: link me ur map
2016-06-26 19:25 Girl: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/917176 Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere]
2016-06-26 19:25 Ascendance: where's the storyboard names for collab parts
2016-06-26 19:26 Girl: is it a must?
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: it's not a must, but it would be helpful
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: ok u got a lot of unrankable stuff lol...
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: SB\dreamBG.png (1366x1536) is more than the allowed maximum dimensions
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
2016-06-26 19:27 Girl: :O
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: lol
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: >Camellia - Exit This Earths Atomosphere Girl.osb.osb
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: delete this file
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: done
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: you have
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: 8 unused hitsounds
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: O
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: what are they?
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: drum-hitclap2
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: err here http://puu.sh/pHbaY/e84d25e4d5.png
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:33 Ascendance: tell me when to move on
2016-06-26 19:33 Girl: i fixed everything except for the dreamBG resolution
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i tried to downscale it but it messes up the SB
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i'll have to ask the SB guy later :d
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: yeah
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: SB\xd.jpg is unused
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: ahh
2016-06-26 19:35 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: and last but not least
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: 02:06:244 - has a red and green line with two different samplesets
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: ehh?
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: i dont quite understand what that means
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the red uninherited point has D:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the inherited one
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: has S:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: they need to be consistent or else it screws with osu
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: ohh i see it
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: k now we're done with the unrankable stuff \o\
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: which part is who's for the bookmarks?
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: RLC mapped from 2:06:244 to 2:51:420
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: everything else is by me
2016-06-26 19:43 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: 00:25:214 - you seem to be really missing a beat here, especially for a song like this, some type of constant beatflow is normal
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: you could stack it on top of 00:25:302 (4) - here
2016-06-26 19:45 Girl: easy fix
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: wait
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: 00:26:449 - I'd put a circle here and then turn 00:26:538 (4) - into a 1/4 slider since it seems to be a "held" note
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: i dont really hear a beat on that tho
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: o
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: nvm then
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: unless you wanna do it anyways
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: no1 will complain xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: nah i wont xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:47 Ascendance: the second one is actually there tho
2016-06-26 19:48 Girl: yeah
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: 00:27:332 - same with here, you could stack on 00:27:420 (1) - 
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: o that pattern repeats a lot
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: just try to make them all consistent i guess later
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: 00:42:067 (4,1) - awkward inwards flow here into 1, i'd make it face 2 instead
2016-06-26 19:50 Girl: fixed :o
2016-06-26 19:51 Ascendance: 00:45:773 (1,1) - are you sure about keeping the 1/4 gap between these? it sounds a bit choppy imo
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: vinxis suggested it
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: hmmm
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: maybe there shouldn't be a gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: since I dont really hear it in the song itself
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: just sounds weird to me but objectively its fine
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: i removed the gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: nice
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: should I do the same for the repeat slider after it?
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: i mean theres a spinner after that but idk if it matters or not
2016-06-26 19:53 Ascendance: should be fine with the spinner there
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: ok
2016-06-26 19:54 Ascendance: 01:23:185 (2,3) - feels odd to stack these since the beat there is constantly "moving", I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481793
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: true
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: fixed that
2016-06-26 19:56 Ascendance: 01:26:714 (3) - should be NC'd i think?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i think someone said to not NC it
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i remember it being NC'ed originally
2016-06-26 19:57 Ascendance: do you remember them saying why?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: I guess I'll just NC it again
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: since it seems right
2016-06-26 19:58 Ascendance: yeah 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: 02:02:891 (2,1) - the jump seems far but the movement seems too shallow imo 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: I'd change to something more vertical like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481831
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: for 02:03:067 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:02 Ascendance: also i moved 02:03:244 (2) - a bit away from 02:03:420 (1) - so as to not overaim the small jump
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: i move all of 02:03:420 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  away from 02:03:244 (2) -
2016-06-26 20:04 Ascendance: 02:08:008 (4,5) - this overlap confused me a bit on my first playthrough, since you have 1/4 spacing on other places at distances like 02:06:596 (2,3) - 
2016-06-26 20:05 Girl: thats RLC's decision, but I could fix that :o
2016-06-26 20:06 Ascendance: just point it out to him and let me know what he says
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481857
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: o
2016-06-26 20:07 Ascendance: 03:15:067 (5,6) - any reason why these are stacked?
2016-06-26 20:07 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: alright i made that entire pattern a pentagon
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481872
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: same with 03:21:773 (3,4,5,6) - you could curve this really well into 03:22:479 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481890
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: hows this?
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: yeah, looks nice 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: thx!
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: I'd give 4,5 a little more "curve" but 
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: thats stylistic
2016-06-26 20:11 Girl: hmm
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: 03:38:714 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:41:538 (3,4) - are inconsistent
2016-06-26 20:12 Ascendance: same sounds but emphasized differently
2016-06-26 20:12 Girl: i'll change 03:41:538 (3,4) -  into 4 circles then
2016-06-26 20:18 Ascendance: maybe the same as before with the gap 04:42:949 (1,1) - 
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: alrighty
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: the gaps still stay for the repeat sliders before those two right?
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: yeah, those are fine
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: after that
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: cool
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: have the sb guy fix that image
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and ask rlc about that thing
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and then call me
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: oki
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: thanks for the mod !
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: np:D
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: glad i could be of help
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: yeye
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: mutual pls                                                                         xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: done xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: thx x
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: d
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: x                                                                                                                                                                             d

Ascendance wrote:

Girl wrote:

can bns just come to me instead xd

gimme a picture of u if thats what you want i gues

my angel cirlsu

2016-06-26 19:24 Ascendance: link me ur map
2016-06-26 19:25 Girl: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/917176 Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere]
2016-06-26 19:25 Ascendance: where's the storyboard names for collab parts
2016-06-26 19:26 Girl: is it a must?
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: it's not a must, but it would be helpful
2016-06-26 19:26 Ascendance: ok u got a lot of unrankable stuff lol...
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: SB\dreamBG.png (1366x1536) is more than the allowed maximum dimensions
2016-06-26 19:27 Ascendance: (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)
2016-06-26 19:27 Girl: :O
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: lol
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: >Camellia - Exit This Earths Atomosphere Girl.osb.osb
2016-06-26 19:28 Ascendance: delete this file
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: done
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: you have
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: 8 unused hitsounds
2016-06-26 19:29 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 19:29 Girl: O
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: what are they?
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: drum-hitclap2
2016-06-26 19:30 Ascendance: err here http://puu.sh/pHbaY/e84d25e4d5.png
2016-06-26 19:30 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:33 Ascendance: tell me when to move on
2016-06-26 19:33 Girl: i fixed everything except for the dreamBG resolution
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i tried to downscale it but it messes up the SB
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: i'll have to ask the SB guy later :d
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: yeah
2016-06-26 19:34 Ascendance: SB\xd.jpg is unused
2016-06-26 19:34 Girl: ahh
2016-06-26 19:35 Girl: thanks
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: and last but not least
2016-06-26 19:35 Ascendance: 02:06:244 - has a red and green line with two different samplesets
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: ehh?
2016-06-26 19:36 Girl: i dont quite understand what that means
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the red uninherited point has D:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: the inherited one
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: has S:C1
2016-06-26 19:36 Ascendance: they need to be consistent or else it screws with osu
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: ohh i see it
2016-06-26 19:37 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: k now we're done with the unrankable stuff \o\
2016-06-26 19:38 Ascendance: which part is who's for the bookmarks?
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: RLC mapped from 2:06:244 to 2:51:420
2016-06-26 19:41 Girl: everything else is by me
2016-06-26 19:43 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: 00:25:214 - you seem to be really missing a beat here, especially for a song like this, some type of constant beatflow is normal
2016-06-26 19:44 Ascendance: you could stack it on top of 00:25:302 (4) - here
2016-06-26 19:45 Girl: easy fix
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: wait
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: 00:26:449 - I'd put a circle here and then turn 00:26:538 (4) - into a 1/4 slider since it seems to be a "held" note
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: i dont really hear a beat on that tho
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: o
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: nvm then
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: unless you wanna do it anyways
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: no1 will complain xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Girl: nah i wont xd
2016-06-26 19:46 Ascendance: kk
2016-06-26 19:47 Ascendance: the second one is actually there tho
2016-06-26 19:48 Girl: yeah
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: 00:27:332 - same with here, you could stack on 00:27:420 (1) - 
2016-06-26 19:48 Ascendance: o that pattern repeats a lot
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: just try to make them all consistent i guess later
2016-06-26 19:49 Ascendance: 00:42:067 (4,1) - awkward inwards flow here into 1, i'd make it face 2 instead
2016-06-26 19:50 Girl: fixed :o
2016-06-26 19:51 Ascendance: 00:45:773 (1,1) - are you sure about keeping the 1/4 gap between these? it sounds a bit choppy imo
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: vinxis suggested it
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: hmmm
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: maybe there shouldn't be a gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: since I dont really hear it in the song itself
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: just sounds weird to me but objectively its fine
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: i removed the gap
2016-06-26 19:52 Ascendance: nice
2016-06-26 19:52 Girl: should I do the same for the repeat slider after it?
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: i mean theres a spinner after that but idk if it matters or not
2016-06-26 19:53 Ascendance: should be fine with the spinner there
2016-06-26 19:53 Girl: ok
2016-06-26 19:54 Ascendance: 01:23:185 (2,3) - feels odd to stack these since the beat there is constantly "moving", I'd do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481793
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: true
2016-06-26 19:54 Girl: fixed that
2016-06-26 19:56 Ascendance: 01:26:714 (3) - should be NC'd i think?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i think someone said to not NC it
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: i remember it being NC'ed originally
2016-06-26 19:57 Ascendance: do you remember them saying why?
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: I guess I'll just NC it again
2016-06-26 19:57 Girl: since it seems right
2016-06-26 19:58 Ascendance: yeah 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: 02:02:891 (2,1) - the jump seems far but the movement seems too shallow imo 
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: I'd change to something more vertical like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481831
2016-06-26 20:01 Ascendance: for 02:03:067 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:02 Ascendance: also i moved 02:03:244 (2) - a bit away from 02:03:420 (1) - so as to not overaim the small jump
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: fixed
2016-06-26 20:04 Girl: i move all of 02:03:420 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -  away from 02:03:244 (2) -
2016-06-26 20:04 Ascendance: 02:08:008 (4,5) - this overlap confused me a bit on my first playthrough, since you have 1/4 spacing on other places at distances like 02:06:596 (2,3) - 
2016-06-26 20:05 Girl: thats RLC's decision, but I could fix that :o
2016-06-26 20:06 Ascendance: just point it out to him and let me know what he says
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481857
2016-06-26 20:06 Girl: o
2016-06-26 20:07 Ascendance: 03:15:067 (5,6) - any reason why these are stacked?
2016-06-26 20:07 Girl: dont think so
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: lul
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: alright i made that entire pattern a pentagon
2016-06-26 20:08 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481872
2016-06-26 20:08 Ascendance: same with 03:21:773 (3,4,5,6) - you could curve this really well into 03:22:479 (1) - 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5481890
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: hows this?
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: yeah, looks nice 
2016-06-26 20:10 Girl: thx!
2016-06-26 20:10 Ascendance: I'd give 4,5 a little more "curve" but 
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: thats stylistic
2016-06-26 20:11 Girl: hmm
2016-06-26 20:11 Ascendance: 03:38:714 (3,4,5,6) - and 03:41:538 (3,4) - are inconsistent
2016-06-26 20:12 Ascendance: same sounds but emphasized differently
2016-06-26 20:12 Girl: i'll change 03:41:538 (3,4) -  into 4 circles then
2016-06-26 20:18 Ascendance: maybe the same as before with the gap 04:42:949 (1,1) - 
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: alrighty
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: the gaps still stay for the repeat sliders before those two right?
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: yeah, those are fine
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: after that
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: cool
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: have the sb guy fix that image
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and ask rlc about that thing
2016-06-26 20:19 Ascendance: and then call me
2016-06-26 20:19 Girl: oki
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: thanks for the mod !
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: np:D
2016-06-26 20:20 Ascendance: glad i could be of help
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: yeye
2016-06-26 20:20 Girl: mutual pls                                                                         xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: done xd
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: thx x
2016-06-26 20:21 Girl: d
2016-06-26 20:21 Ascendance: x                                                                                                                                                                             d

mithew wrote:

03:05:185 (5) - use S:C63 here (which i even MADE for you [since i couldn't find it in akasha -_--] )
03:11:008 (6) - S:C52 uploaded just 4 u
03:11:714 (3) - S:C66
03:13:126 (4) - S:C61 link
03:13:302 (5) - S:C60 link
03:13:479 (6) - S:C61
03:13:655 (7) - S:C63
03:16:479 (2) - S:C63
03:22:126 (5) - S:C56
03:22:302 (6) - S:C52
03:22:832 (2) - S:C66 (on the slider tail)
03:23:185 (1) - S:C59
03:23:185 (1) - S:C57 on slider tail
03:24:243 (2) - S:C61

gonna fix this for u brb ok helo

mithew wrote:

i fuckED up use this instead

Ascendance wrote:

fixed a red/green line inconsistency with kiai times

bubble #1

Ascendance wrote:

fixed a red/green line inconsistency with kiai times

bubble #1

Riari wrote:

Ascendance wrote:

fixed a red/green line inconsistency with kiai times

bubble #1

Man this CtB map sure does look cool

Arusamour wrote:

o is that bubled i se?? ha gl maybe u can rank it with.outT dq !!! glglgl <>33