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The Prototypes - 'Don't Let Me Go' Feat. Amy Pearson (Origin

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Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Kloyd wrote:

  • Insane
  1. 01:39:011 (1,2) - this can make consistency http://puu.sh/nupVY/c9f2b7cd97.jpg - Yes, why not
  2. 01:39:615 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/nupZ3/4f956dd040.jpg - Okay

  • Hard
  1. 00:25:391 (7,8) - for better shape http://puu.sh/nuq2F/44985e7f55.jpg / - done
  2. 01:02:460 (3) - http://puu.sh/nuq5V/e2c76e209e.jpg / take care for the notes away from the stacks and blankets - ^

  • Advanced
  1. 00:33:667 (4) - how about putting this at here ? i think it can be regarded as a overspacing (considering its difficulty) http://puu.sh/nuqfQ/e54dcae877.jpg - but, it's DS

goodluck
Thank's
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
From my queue

1pc test play
[Insane]
00:28:322 - decrease the volume here
00:30:908 (3) - wrong place, should stick the end of 00:30:046 (3) -
00:31:253 (1) - ^
00:53:494 (1,2,3,4) - actually 1>2 DS should be bigger since is 1/1 snap, shouldnt be the same as/closed to 3>4, this is kinda ahrd to read with HD, and same 00:54:184 (4,1,2) - and 00:55:046 (3,4,1) -
00:57:632 (1) - move to 320 148 to consist the flow in front, and 00:57:977 (2,3) - need a small fix
01:14:011 (7) - stick with 01:13:149 (2) - or try dont overlap
01:16:598 (7) - same above 01:15:391 (9) -
01:17:977 (8) - stick the end of 01:16:942 (1) -
01:24:874 (6,7) - the DS shouldnt be small here

sorry i only can mod insane of your map :\
GL~
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
Привет.

[General]
  1. sb\glow.png не используется
Тайминг в начале битый из-за вокала. На каждой дифке нажми F6, сотри красную точку, потом скопируй и вставь вот это:
14909,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
19061,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
21114,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
28341,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
30095,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
32133,352.941176470588,4,2,0,50,1,0
32853,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
34734,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
35604,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
36942,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0

Если ты изменял скорость слайдеров, то её надо восстановить, для этого добавь зелёную полоску прямо на каждую из новых точек. Ещё надо будет вручную реснапнуть все объекты в начале (но их там мало) и в одном месте 00:32:133 - проверить длину слайдеров.

[Insane и Hard]
  1. 00:36:942 - я бы ноту добавил, чтобы у этого участка было логическое завершение
На самом деле, это всё. Остальное было бы такими мелочами, что их нет смысла выписывать.
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

1pc test play
[Insane]
00:28:322 - decrease the volume here - Good idea
00:30:908 (3) - wrong place, should stick the end of 00:30:046 (3) - I really don't understand, what you mean
00:31:253 (1) - ^
00:53:494 (1,2,3,4) - actually 1>2 DS should be bigger since is 1/1 snap, shouldnt be the same as/closed to 3>4, this is kinda ahrd to read with HD, and same 00:54:184 (4,1,2) - and 00:55:046 (3,4,1) - I don't think, This pattern, a kind of acceleration
00:57:632 (1) - move to 320 148 to consist the flow in front, and 00:57:977 (2,3) - need a small fix
01:14:011 (7) - stick with 01:13:149 (2) - or try dont overlap - done
01:16:598 (7) - same above 01:15:391 (9) - done
01:17:977 (8) - stick the end of 01:16:942 (1) - done
01:24:874 (6,7) - the DS shouldnt be small here - fixed

sorry i only can mod insane of your map :\
GL~
Thank's
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

TicClick wrote:

Привет.

[General]
  1. sb\glow.png не используется
Тайминг в начале битый из-за вокала. На каждой дифке нажми F6, сотри красную точку, потом скопируй и вставь вот это:
14909,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
19061,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
21114,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
28341,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
30095,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
32133,352.941176470588,4,2,0,50,1,0
32853,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
34734,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
35604,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0
36942,344.827586206897,4,2,0,50,1,0

Если ты изменял скорость слайдеров, то её надо восстановить, для этого добавь зелёную полоску прямо на каждую из новых точек. Ещё надо будет вручную реснапнуть все объекты в начале (но их там мало) и в одном месте 00:32:133 - проверить длину слайдеров.
Сделано
[Insane и Hard]
  1. 00:36:942 - я бы ноту добавил, чтобы у этого участка было логическое завершение - C учётом нового тайминга, играются они не очень
На самом деле, это всё. Остальное было бы такими мелочами, что их нет смысла выписывать.
Большое спасибо за помощь!
Last edited by Welpe , edited 1 time in total.
Mikii
393 posts
Joined August 2013
Mikii
Fixed hitsounds and things from aimod. Fixed all overlaps

http://puu.sh/nuyuP/6c109f2693.txt
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
3,218 posts
Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Велпе ты меня убиваешь... За 3 дня сделал то что я год пытаюсь...
Last edited by Shmiklak , edited 1 time in total.
-Tochi
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
-Tochi
As requested :3

  • Insane

  1. 00:27:665 (1) - I don't this NC here is necessary tbh. (No SV changes, only volume)
  2. 00:29:375 (1,3) - Please improve this blanket.
  3. 00:34:059 (1) - Unnecessary NC again.
  4. 01:00:217 (10,11,1) - This would look better when it's stacked like: http://puu.sh/nvsP1/d90d1e7d67.jpg
  5. 01:25:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - The flow here doesn't seems that good in my eyes, try something like: http://puu.sh/nvsTd/3421a2f536.jpg
  6. 01:31:424 (4) - Would be better to make this slider two circles instead, it fits more with the vocal also like: http://puu.sh/nvsX2/eecaba8969.jpg


  • Feedback


    Nice map, good luck!
Namki
1,281 posts
Joined November 2014
Namki
удачи~
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

-Tochi wrote:

As requested :3

  • Insane

  1. 00:27:665 (1) - I don't this NC here is necessary tbh. (No SV changes, only volume) - Ok
  2. 00:29:375 (1,3) - Please improve this blanket. - where you saw the blanket?
  3. 00:34:059 (1) - Unnecessary NC again.
  4. 01:00:217 (10,11,1) - This would look better when it's stacked like: http://puu.sh/nvsP1/d90d1e7d67.jpg - Yeah, why not
  5. 01:25:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - The flow here doesn't seems that good in my eyes, try something like: http://puu.sh/nvsTd/3421a2f536.jpg - hmm, I like it
  6. 01:31:424 (4) - Would be better to make this slider two circles instead, it fits more with the vocal also like: http://puu.sh/nvsX2/eecaba8969.jpg - Changed, but as I think


  • Feedback


    Nice map, good luck!
Thank's
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Namki wrote:

удачи~
Спасибо~
Aia
181 posts
Joined October 2013
Aia
"Mod" in IRC:

logs
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: Hey~ sup?
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: are you accepting mod reqs?
2016-03-06 16:07 Aia: hi
2016-03-06 16:07 Aia: I don't really mod.
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: hmm
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: okay
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: sorry to trouble
2016-03-06 16:08 Aia: Don't worry about it.
2016-03-06 16:08 Welpe: and
2016-03-06 16:08 Welpe: you can test maybe?
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: 01:00:217 (10,11,1) - 
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: Are these supposed to be stacked like that
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/917120 The Prototypes ft. Amy Pearson - Don't Let Me Go [Insane]]
2016-03-06 16:10 Welpe: 01:00:045 -
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: there was no stacks
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: but modder advised to make
2016-03-06 16:11 Aia: no, but 10 & 11 are stacked
2016-03-06 16:12 Aia: and 1 is not stacked with them
2016-03-06 16:12 Aia: That seems weird to me
2016-03-06 16:13 Aia: 00:58:666 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would move this a bit closer to the previous object
2016-03-06 16:13 Welpe: 01:00:217 (1,2,3) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/M7EHLdE.png now its fine?
2016-03-06 16:13 Aia: Jump seems really big for no reason
2016-03-06 16:14 Aia: I mean this, the slider is not stacked with the 2 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669928
2016-03-06 16:14 Aia: Nothing related to NC's
2016-03-06 16:15 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:16 Aia: 01:36:855 (3,4) - Wouldn't have these two objects like this, would put them more to the side so it looks better
2016-03-06 16:16 Welpe: but its stack https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/EgCgWlw.png
2016-03-06 16:17 Aia: hm, might just be a bug for me, nevermind then
2016-03-06 16:17 Aia: 01:39:614 (3,4) - Same thing here, but this is just something I'd prefer, imo it looks better
2016-03-06 16:18 Welpe: like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/gl22S62.png ?
2016-03-06 16:18 Welpe: or not stack?
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: um, no wait a second
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669960
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: Like that
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: Just looks nicer imo
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: yes
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: and it was before
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: but
2016-03-06 16:19 Aia: Those look fine on curved sliders, but it looks weird on straight sliders
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: it was uncomfortable to play
2016-03-06 16:19 Aia: what
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: yeah
2016-03-06 16:20 Welpe: just look at my thread
2016-03-06 16:20 Aia: Not really
2016-03-06 16:20 Aia: They're perfectly fine to play
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: Also, I think you should be consistent with the 2 notes after sliders
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: Sometimes you stack the two notes, sometimes you don't
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: 01:39:614 (3,4) - stacked here, but not stacked here 01:40:993 (3,4) - 
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: a like stacks
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: I*
2016-03-06 16:23 Aia: Yeah, but why do you not stack some of them then?
2016-03-06 16:23 Aia: 01:40:993 (3,4) - like here
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: and make 01:28:579 (3,4) - like this
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: but
2016-03-06 16:24 Welpe: i dont really want all cirlcles like these
2016-03-06 16:24 Welpe: idk
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: hmm okay
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: How about you try this
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: 01:28:666 - Here
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669997
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: Try this instead?
2016-03-06 16:25 Aia: Looks a lot better
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: your skin
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: omg
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: ? :o
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/wq75dNY.png
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: this nice?
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: Should I use another one?
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: Is it hard to see
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: That's fine too
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: But if you didn't want to make everything stacked like you said, not to make everything the same
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: okay i like it
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: i makes
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: maked*
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: Okay
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: all stacks
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: oh
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: okay
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: i need just update
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Aia wrote:

"Mod" in IRC:

logs
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: Hey~ sup?
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: are you accepting mod reqs?
2016-03-06 16:07 Aia: hi
2016-03-06 16:07 Aia: I don't really mod.
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: hmm
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: okay
2016-03-06 16:07 Welpe: sorry to trouble
2016-03-06 16:08 Aia: Don't worry about it.
2016-03-06 16:08 Welpe: and
2016-03-06 16:08 Welpe: you can test maybe?
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: 01:00:217 (10,11,1) - 
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: Are these supposed to be stacked like that
2016-03-06 16:09 Aia: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/917120 The Prototypes ft. Amy Pearson - Don't Let Me Go [Insane]]
2016-03-06 16:10 Welpe: 01:00:045 -
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: there was no stacks
2016-03-06 16:11 Welpe: but modder advised to make
2016-03-06 16:11 Aia: no, but 10 & 11 are stacked
2016-03-06 16:12 Aia: and 1 is not stacked with them
2016-03-06 16:12 Aia: That seems weird to me
2016-03-06 16:13 Aia: 00:58:666 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would move this a bit closer to the previous object
2016-03-06 16:13 Welpe: 01:00:217 (1,2,3) - https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/M7EHLdE.png now its fine?
2016-03-06 16:13 Aia: Jump seems really big for no reason
2016-03-06 16:14 Aia: I mean this, the slider is not stacked with the 2 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669928
2016-03-06 16:14 Aia: Nothing related to NC's
2016-03-06 16:15 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:16 Aia: 01:36:855 (3,4) - Wouldn't have these two objects like this, would put them more to the side so it looks better
2016-03-06 16:16 Welpe: but its stack https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/EgCgWlw.png
2016-03-06 16:17 Aia: hm, might just be a bug for me, nevermind then
2016-03-06 16:17 Aia: 01:39:614 (3,4) - Same thing here, but this is just something I'd prefer, imo it looks better
2016-03-06 16:18 Welpe: like this https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/gl22S62.png ?
2016-03-06 16:18 Welpe: or not stack?
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: um, no wait a second
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669960
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: Like that
2016-03-06 16:18 Aia: Just looks nicer imo
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: oh
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: yes
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: and it was before
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: but
2016-03-06 16:19 Aia: Those look fine on curved sliders, but it looks weird on straight sliders
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: it was uncomfortable to play
2016-03-06 16:19 Aia: what
2016-03-06 16:19 Welpe: yeah
2016-03-06 16:20 Welpe: just look at my thread
2016-03-06 16:20 Aia: Not really
2016-03-06 16:20 Aia: They're perfectly fine to play
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: Also, I think you should be consistent with the 2 notes after sliders
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: Sometimes you stack the two notes, sometimes you don't
2016-03-06 16:21 Aia: 01:39:614 (3,4) - stacked here, but not stacked here 01:40:993 (3,4) - 
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: a like stacks
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: I*
2016-03-06 16:23 Aia: Yeah, but why do you not stack some of them then?
2016-03-06 16:23 Aia: 01:40:993 (3,4) - like here
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: and make 01:28:579 (3,4) - like this
2016-03-06 16:23 Welpe: but
2016-03-06 16:24 Welpe: i dont really want all cirlcles like these
2016-03-06 16:24 Welpe: idk
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: hmm okay
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: How about you try this
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: 01:28:666 - Here
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4669997
2016-03-06 16:24 Aia: Try this instead?
2016-03-06 16:25 Aia: Looks a lot better
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: your skin
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: omg
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: ? :o
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/wq75dNY.png
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: this nice?
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: Should I use another one?
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: Is it hard to see
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: That's fine too
2016-03-06 16:26 Aia: But if you didn't want to make everything stacked like you said, not to make everything the same
2016-03-06 16:26 Welpe: okay i like it
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: i makes
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: maked*
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: Okay
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: all stacks
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: oh
2016-03-06 16:27 Aia: okay
2016-03-06 16:27 Welpe: i need just update
Thank's for mod!
Krfawy
1,373 posts
Joined March 2012
Krfawy
Mikki's Easy
  1. 00:33:542 (3) - Personally I think a whistle on the very end of the slider would emphasize the vocal better. :3
  2. 00:47:977 - 00:58:666 - This section is not equipped with any hitsounds except soft-hitnormal which is kind of empty now. I am pretty sure it would be a good idea to use a whistle on every (or every second) white tick so players can get more clear feedback. :C
Desperate
  1. Despie, AR4 on such distances and slider velocities like 00:47:977 (1,2,3,4) - here and 1/2 and 3/2 slider combinations like there 00:59:011 (1,2,3,4) - is quite mean because it's really hard to follow the notes if we can see like 6 notes in a row or 3 of them where two sliders last like forever so I suggest to use AR4.5-5.0. :V
Advanced
  1. 00:36:466 (6) - Свисток на конце слайдера? По моему считает лучше. :v
  2. 01:10:046 (1) - А может софт-финиш? Так-то будет выгодное для музыки. :3
Hard
  1. 01:08:494 (1) - Блин, что случилось? Слайдер выглядит так уродливо, а ты знаешь как поставить прекрасные слайдеры! На пример 00:49:184 (2) - вот и самый правильный слайдер.
Insane
  1. Дай, пожалуйста, ОД8.5-9.0 чтобы игроки получили более пп. :^
Очень хороший мапсет, я бы сексовал! о/ Удачи, ребёнок! \ ^3^ /
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe
Krfawy's Mod

Krfawy wrote:

Mikki's Easy
  1. 00:33:542 (3) - Personally I think a whistle on the very end of the slider would emphasize the vocal better. :3
  2. 00:47:977 - 00:58:666 - This section is not equipped with any hitsounds except soft-hitnormal which is kind of empty now. I am pretty sure it would be a good idea to use a whistle on every (or every second) white tick so players can get more clear feedback. :C
Desperate
  1. Despie, AR4 on such distances and slider velocities like 00:47:977 (1,2,3,4) - here and 1/2 and 3/2 slider combinations like there 00:59:011 (1,2,3,4) - is quite mean because it's really hard to follow the notes if we can see like 6 notes in a row or 3 of them where two sliders last like forever so I suggest to use AR4.5-5.0. :V
Advanced
  1. 00:36:466 (6) - Свисток на конце слайдера? По моему считает лучше. :v - Можно попробовать
  2. 01:10:046 (1) - А может софт-финиш? Так-то будет выгодное для музыки. :3 - Да, звучит не плохо
Hard
  1. 01:08:494 (1) - Блин, что случилось? Слайдер выглядит так уродливо, а ты знаешь как поставить прекрасные слайдеры! На пример 00:49:184 (2) - вот и самый правильный слайдер. - Поправил
Insane
  1. Дай, пожалуйста, ОД8.5-9.0 чтобы игроки получили более пп. :^ - Хорошо
Очень хороший мапсет, я бы сексовал! о/ Удачи, ребёнок! \ ^3^ /

Спасибо, сынок! ♥
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Krfawy & Mako, all fix.

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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Lefia
674 posts
Joined August 2014
Lefia
From NM queue

mod
[Hard]

HP 6? I think it must be 5,5 or 5 because 6 is for light insane

00:19:923 (8,9,1) move it into x:144 y:164
00:30:612 (4,5,6,1,2)
4 > Move to x:368 y:276
5 > Move to x:416 y:208
6 > Move to x:288 y:264
1 > ^
2 > ^
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

MadaoX wrote:

From NM queue

mod
[Hard]

HP 6? I think it must be 5,5 or 5 because 6 is for light insane - We have many Hard diffs with HP 6, but I can make 5.5

00:19:923 (8,9,1) move it into x:144 y:164 - Explain the reason why I have to move?
00:30:612 (4,5,6,1,2)
4 > Move to x:368 y:276
5 > Move to x:416 y:208
6 > Move to x:288 y:264
1 > ^
2 > ^
Thanks~
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Here is your request M4M

[Mikii's Easy]

00:16:633 (2) - your this note hitsound add. so whistle add here
00:19:750 (3) - tail add whistle.
00:42:460 (1) - I think is this need whistle. cuz this part is piano sound

[Desperate's Normal]

01:39:529 (4) - Maybe this is better patten here :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4682099
01:42:460 (4) - NC. cuz this part song sound down.

[Advanced]

00:16:633 - Whistle.
01:18:322 (1) - This move better 244:232. maybe this change flow is good.

[Hard]

00:16:288 (3) - Tail add whistle.
01:18:322 (1) - Move better here :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4682132

[Insane]

00:16:288 (3) - Tail add whistle.
00:25:079 (1) - Delete NC here. don't need this NC i think.

Good Luck.
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe
HabiHolic

HabiHolic wrote:

Here is your request M4M

[Mikii's Easy]

00:16:633 (2) - your this note hitsound add. so whistle add here
00:19:750 (3) - tail add whistle.
00:42:460 (1) - I think is this need whistle. cuz this part is piano sound

[Desperate's Normal]

01:39:529 (4) - Maybe this is better patten here :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4682099
01:42:460 (4) - NC. cuz this part song sound down.

[Advanced]

00:16:633 - Whistle.
01:18:322 (1) - This move better 244:232. maybe this change flow is good.

[Hard]

00:16:288 (3) - Tail add whistle.
01:18:322 (1) - Move better here :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4682132

[Insane]

00:16:288 (3) - Tail add whistle.
00:25:079 (1) - Delete NC here. don't need this NC i think.

Good Luck.
Thanks, fixed all!
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
one thing i'd like to know before start to mod your map:
About those red time line, I think they were just set to follow those vocal and make no sense. I think it's better to follow those background sounds, they are snap without those red time line and it's better for players to enjoy the song. If you'd like to insist to keep this timing, just told me reasons and explanation.
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

ZZHBOY wrote:

one thing i'd like to know before start to mod your map:
About those red time line, I think they were just set to follow those vocal and make no sense. I think it's better to follow those background sounds, they are snap without those red time line and it's better for players to enjoy the song. If you'd like to insist to keep this timing, just told me reasons and explanation.
I rechecked. The current timing is better, because it's focused on vocal intro. I trust TicClick. I intend to leave it at that. In any case, I have to consult with him
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,416 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick

ZZHBOY wrote:

About those red time line, I think they were just set to follow those vocal...
Yes, they were!

ZZHBOY wrote:

...and make no sense.
Eh? They do have a meaning, and you pointed that out a couple of words earlier. I had to set them up due to vocals being.. well, vocal and much more strong than these background sounds that form the beat later. Yes, the melody in background can be described with a plain single red line, and yes, if it would be mapped to that melody, I'd probably leave it alone (although I'm not so sure about this one). But the beginning of all difficulties of the set is actually mapped to the vocal part of the song.

On the contrary, the timing provided by me may be incorrect. It may be not good enough. The host's gonna probably get in trouble because of some sliders' dangling tails, like 00:18:357 (1) and stuff on Easy. I recommend you two to get someone else's (preferably, a QAT member) opinion on the current state of things. In the end, it's up to you and them to decide, not me.

I won't hold grudges against you two if you reset timing back to what it was, but honestly, although I can't say I am dead sure about my part of work, the map feels more on-spot for me with multitiming in the beginning.
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
emmmm...though those time line followed vocal well, but i don't like them. anyway they worked well, so just keep them :>

[General]
  1. gap between Hard and Advance seems a little big because Hard diff has plenty of 1/4 rhythms, so you'd better add some 1/4 repeat slider in advance to make a better spread imo.
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - consider to start from 00:34:906 - ?
  2. 01:32:115 (1) - move to around 360 168 to avoid overlap with 01:30:046 (2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - also suggest to start from 00:34:906 -
  2. 00:42:460 (1) - Easy diff stopped this spinner at 00:46:424 - , and i think you can try it as well
  3. 01:26:598 (1,2) - you can make them blanket well
  4. 01:42:286 - rhythm here seems a little confusing, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690876
[Advance]
  1. 00:29:030 (6) - here has no clear vocal, maybe you can remove this circle
  2. 00:35:604 (3,6) - maybe you can make this blanket well
  3. 00:42:460 (1) - suggest to end at 00:46:424 -
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:030 (6) - remove?
  2. 00:31:301 (1) - nc is unnecessary here, consider to remove this nc
  3. 00:42:460 (1) - end at 00:46:424 - ?
  4. 01:25:735 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690912
  5. you followed those 1/4 drum so it's not good to just use 1/2 rhythm in this part (from 01:25:217 -), you can add some 1/4 rhythms properly to make this part be consistent with previous part.
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:030 (7) - remove?
  2. 00:55:045 (3,4) - such large jump is unreasonable imo, maybe you can move them closer, try to move 00:55:217 (4) - to around 204 312?
nice flow

call me back :3
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

ZZHBOY wrote:

emmmm...though those time line followed vocal well, but i don't like them. anyway they worked well, so just keep them :>

[General]
  1. gap between Hard and Advance seems a little big because Hard diff has plenty of 1/4 rhythms, so you'd better add some 1/4 repeat slider in advance to make a better spread imo. - I think so too
[Easy]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - consider to start from 00:34:906 - ?
  2. 01:32:115 (1) - move to around 360 168 to avoid overlap with 01:30:046 (2) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - also suggest to start from 00:34:906 -
  2. 00:42:460 (1) - Easy diff stopped this spinner at 00:46:424 - , and i think you can try it as well
  3. 01:26:598 (1,2) - you can make them blanket well
  4. 01:42:286 - rhythm here seems a little confusing, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690876
[Advance]
  1. 00:29:030 (6) - here has no clear vocal, maybe you can remove this circle - but there is a clear sound
  2. 00:35:604 (3,6) - maybe you can make this blanket well - done
  3. 00:42:460 (1) - suggest to end at 00:46:424 - it makes sense, yes
[Hard]
  1. 00:29:030 (6) - remove? - ^
  2. 00:31:301 (1) - nc is unnecessary here, consider to remove this nc - removed
  3. 00:42:460 (1) - end at 00:46:424 - ? ^
  4. 01:25:735 - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690912 - Yes
  5. you followed those 1/4 drum so it's not good to just use 1/2 rhythm in this part (from 01:25:217 -), you can add some 1/4 rhythms properly to make this part be consistent with previous part. Yeah, done
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:030 (7) - remove? - ^
  2. 00:55:045 (3,4) - such large jump is unreasonable imo, maybe you can move them closer, try to move 00:55:217 (4) - to around 204 312? - done
nice flow

call me back :3
Thank you so much!
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
I don't really like the giant up of OD between Hard and Insane (6 to 8.5). Didn't check rest of the map but Insane looks clean except this OD.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo

HabiHolic wrote:

[Desperate's Normal]

01:39:529 (4) - Maybe this is better patten here :arrow: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4682099 I don't think so, I prefer two curved sliders here
01:42:460 (4) - NC. cuz this part song sound down. There is no reason for a single object combo here.

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - also suggest to start from 00:34:906 - Fixed!
  2. 00:42:460 (1) - Easy diff stopped this spinner at 00:46:424 - , and i think you can try it as well No, I think it fits better here and Normal can have a lower gap after the spinner.
  3. 01:26:598 (1,2) - you can make them blanket well It's intentional, I prefer more strongly curved sliders
  4. 01:42:286 - rhythm here seems a little confusing, try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4690876 Done!
Thank you! :3

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Title:Don't Let Me Go
TitleUnicode:Don't Let Me Go
Artist:The Prototypes ft. Amy Pearson
ArtistUnicode:The Prototypes ft. Amy Pearson
Creator:Welpe
Version:Desperate's Normal
Source:
Tags:DnB Drum and Bass LunarBlossom Mikii Desperate-kun
BeatmapID:917118
BeatmapSetID:424568

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
As promised I'll recheck again after zzbn bubble :)
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Mako Sakata wrote:

As promised I'll recheck again after zzbn bubble :)
Thank you so much! ;)
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY

Nozhomi wrote:

I don't really like the giant up of OD between Hard and Insane (6 to 8.5). Didn't check rest of the map but Insane looks clean except this OD.
how about this? consider to set Insane's od to 8?
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

ZZHBOY wrote:

Nozhomi wrote:

I don't really like the giant up of OD between Hard and Insane (6 to 8.5). Didn't check rest of the map but Insane looks clean except this OD.
how about this? consider to set Insane's od to 8?
I've already changed, LOL
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
seems fine, bubbled~!
btw to welpe: to show that you are a polite mapper, remember to reply all comments in your map's thread properly before push your map go ahead :3
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Nozhomi wrote:

I don't really like the giant up of OD between Hard and Insane (6 to 8.5). Didn't check rest of the map but Insane looks clean except this OD.
I changed, Insane=OD 8, Hard=OD 6.5, Adv=OD 5
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

ZZHBOY wrote:

seems fine, bubbled~!
btw to welpe: to show that you are a polite mapper, remember to reply all comments in your map's thread properly before push your map go ahead :3
Thank you so much! I take a note :3
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

ZZHBOY wrote:

emmmm...though those time line followed vocal well, but i don't like them. anyway they worked well, so just keep them :>

[Easy]
  1. 00:34:734 (1) - consider to start from 00:34:906 - ?
  2. 01:32:115 (1) - move to around 360 168 to avoid overlap with 01:30:046 (2) -
2016-03-10 15:32 Mikii: http://puu.sh/nBwLs/626bff2674.txt
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Hello recheck

General
  1. Sb element glow.png not in used, better delete that. You can make sure again with your storyboarder
  2. Can I have metadata source?
Insane
  1. 00:40:648 - Try to pull the break time back to its default state, before http://puu.sh/nCyeO/30d639ce28.jpg and after http://puu.sh/nCyfQ/83b0d71730.jpg. So it more consistent with your other diffs
  2. 00:25:079 (5) - Better nc to make it consistent with similiar pattern like 00:19:405 (1) - 00:30:612 (1) - and etc
  3. 00:28:341 (5) - Also nc for anti jump
Hard
  1. Try od 7 and hp 6?
  2. 00:28:341 (4) - Imo better nc to indicate the anti jump
  3. 01:41:598 (5,1) - I think the nc should be on (5) instead, at least it more consistence with 01:38:839 (1) -
Advanced
  1. Try od 6? try to have the configuration more balance on this set
  2. 00:28:341 (4) - Nc for anti jump
  3. 00:51:943 (2) - Object not snapped
Desp Normal
  1. 00:27:665 (3) - and 00:51:943 (4) - Object not snapped
  2. 00:41:079 - About the break time, I think better to use default one http://puu.sh/nCyTJ/6e7dcdc49b.jpg ?
  3. 00:42:460 (1) - How about make that spinner end on 00:46:424 - instead? rather ending the spinner on nothing here 00:47:286 - the vocal and instrument kinda weak on that one imo
  4. 01:10:735 (3,4,5) - 01:13:493 (3,4,5) - 01:16:252 (3,4,5) - and 01:41:942 (3,4) - Is the spacing on those 1/2 rhythm intentional to be compressed? if so, why another 1/2 rhythm like 00:59:701 (3,4) - 01:02:460 (3,4) - and etc using regular 1.1 spacing instead? I think you should make them more consistent or something here
Miki easy
  1. 01:08:666 (3) - Delete clap on slider head
The timing seems fine
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hello recheck
Hello recheck

General
  1. Sb element glow.png not in used, better delete that. You can make sure again with your storyboarder - Deleted
  2. Can I have metadata source? - Yes, added
Insane
  1. 00:40:648 - Try to pull the break time back to its default state, before http://puu.sh/nCyeO/30d639ce28.jpg and after http://puu.sh/nCyfQ/83b0d71730.jpg. So it more consistent with your other diffs - fixed
  2. 00:25:079 (5) - Better nc to make it consistent with similiar pattern like 00:19:405 (1) - 00:30:612 (1) - and etc - done
  3. 00:28:341 (5) - Also nc for anti jump - done
Hard
  1. Try od 7 and hp 6? - I did HP 6 and OD 7
  2. 00:28:341 (4) - Imo better nc to indicate the anti jump - done
  3. 01:41:598 (5,1) - I think the nc should be on (5) instead, at least it more consistence with 01:38:839 (1) - I agree
Advanced
  1. Try od 6? try to have the configuration more balance on this set - Ok
  2. 00:28:341 (4) - Nc for anti jump - done
  3. 00:51:943 (2) - Object not snapped - fixed
Miki easy
  1. 01:08:666 (3) - Delete clap on slider head - fixed, with his permission
The timing seems fine
Fixed all!
Thank you so much! ♥
Last edited by Welpe , edited 1 time in total.
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Stjpa
That's the right Metadata btw. Taken from their soundcloud. And yes, you also have to use these '.

No kudosu because it's just metadata.
Welpe
105 posts
Joined November 2015
Topic Starter
Welpe

Stjpa wrote:

That's the right Metadata btw. Taken from their soundcloud. And yes, you also have to use these '.

No kudosu because it's just metadata.
Thanks
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Stjpa
(because of Metadata, you have to use 1:1 the same as in the screenshot, dunno if you changed it or not)

Because of the storyboard: I don't really understand why the background blurrs while playing in the beginning instead of getting clearer and then getting blurried again during the break.
Also, why don't you use another hitnormal sound that's quite loud? In the Easy diff as example it's quite hard to hear the drums because the melody is actually dominant. Also the claps are on the upbeats (dunno if they are called like this lol) so you have some missing emphasizing. Might just be me though.

[Mikii's Easy]
• 01:05:217 (2) - You should really stick to the drums on the white ticks because it feels really weird if you switch it for a short period.
• 01:15:562 (1,2,3) - Why are you forcing a pattern like this when you have so much space?
• 01:35:562 (2,2) - As before. I see that you want to follow the melody, but switching like this feels just so weird.


[Desp]
• 00:29:375 (1,3,4) - That's not a perfect triangle. :^) just going nazi because the map has quite some mods already.
• 00:32:133 (1,2) - Might wanna fix the DS.


[Advanced]
• 00:19:923 (4) - Why not 1/2 slider + circle to emphasize the N of the word "nights"? Can't tell if's also better on the similar patterns afterwards lol.
• 00:36:942 - Would actually love to see a circle here.
• 01:00:736 (2,3) - Improve blanket? Looks odd atm.
• 01:02:460 (3,1) - ^


[Hard]
• 00:36:810 (1) - Why do you NC it if you didn't do in previously too? It would be completely fine if it was on the red line, but this isn't the case. It's just a simple syllable without having a strong beat that can be emphasized this way.


Edit: Just some little changes in Insane that aren't worth to be mentioned. Also fixed the Metadata.
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