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Naxess

Nomination Assessment Team

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-04-24T12:14:01+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Storyboard
00:22:047 - until 00:44:116 - your pulse effect is rather odd, the main pulse image is mainly on center of playfield, yet the main bg is moving to the right side of the playfield, it makes the effect on both images not sync, as you can see on the pulse around this timestamp 00:24:806 - and so on until 00:44:116 -
Indeed, I shall fix this.

Updated. The pulse effects, movement and vector scales, are now synchronized with the background, both off kiai and on kiai.
(The colors and particles deviate slightly as a result of random variables)
http://puu.sh/otQAu/730cec2425.osb

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-04-25T15:30:49+00:00

short sb mod mainly about reducing the burden on low-end machine

[Storyboard]

00:00:668 - from here, please notice that those particle.png are still available after they are out of screen.

Usually the more particles exsit, the more lags will be caused.
So just turn "F" to "0" after they are off-screen.
00:44:116 - same as above.
00:44:116 - 01:06:185 - BG.png (Line 7) is totally unnecessary here. Hide it or delete it.

Naxess

Nomination Assessment Team

390 posts

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-04-25T16:04:47+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
[Storyboard]
00:00:668 - from here, please notice that those particle.png are still available after they are out of screen.

Usually the more particles exsit, the more lags will be caused.
So just turn "F" to "0" after they are off-screen.
I didn't realize, thanks for pointing it out.
00:44:116 - same as above.
00:44:116 - 01:06:185 - BG.png (Line 7) is totally unnecessary here. Hide it or delete it.
Don't know how the line system works, but yes, I shall see to it that this is fixed.

~~Updated.~~
EDIT: I accidentally removed some stuff, give me a moment

EDIT2:
Updated.
Background image is now hidden, particles are optimized and overall SB Load is greatly reduced.
http://puu.sh/oxG07/44e8a5a648.osb

Last edited by Naxess 2016-04-27T14:42:42+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-04-26T09:16:28+00:00

Dynamix's fixed as requested by him.
lsahi's updated

All finished and waiting for nomination

Last edited by sahuang 2016-05-02T21:56:57+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Harubi Lira

147 posts

Joined May 2012

Harubi Lira 2016-04-26T09:16:58+00:00

Mako Sakata wrote:
Isahi
00:06:875 (4,5) - Too far, not sure why put a jump there, yet on same rhythm here 00:09:634 (4,5) - and 00:12:392 (5,6) - you use regular dsI just tried to make a blanket and maybe it seems not as good as I thought
01:03:427 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - That part overmapped as for a lower Hard the rhythm should be less dense than Hyper, so my sugestion try to use more simple or easier rhythm on that partfixed
thx

code

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207,243,60151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,330,60323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,330,60496,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Vert

424 posts

Joined October 2013

Vert 2016-05-11T10:42:44+00:00

no kd

01:28:254 (1,1,2,1) - 这几个滑条建议重新扭一下，有点蠢

可以，比我第一次看强不少

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-05-12T08:34:17+00:00

Vert wrote:
no kd

01:28:254 (1,1,2,1) - 这几个滑条建议重新扭一下，有点蠢

可以，比我第一次看强不少

ok,thx

I need u Gero <3

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-06-24T02:41:50+00:00

Changes/Fixes

Resnapped some green lines in the last difficulty.
Added green lines at Hard.
Changed some patterns at Insane.
Changed the volume to hear the end of the sliders in Hard/Extra.

Log

2016-06-23 20:18 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/952007 Knife Party - Give It Up [Dynamix's Insane]]
2016-06-23 20:18 Gero: check the snaplines, some of them are unsnapped
2016-06-23 20:19 sahuang: oh
2016-06-23 20:19 Gero: almost all
2016-06-23 20:19 Gero: btw
2016-06-23 20:19 sahuang: yeah,i see
2016-06-23 20:19 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/927521 Knife Party - Give It Up [lsahi's Hard]]
2016-06-23 20:20 Gero: 01:06:789 - on Isahi's Hard, I would like to do the same thing I suggested in the last difficulty, about silence the end of this kind of sliders and rhythms
2016-06-23 20:20 Gero: it's kinda annoying to hear that sound when there's nothing, you know
2016-06-23 20:20 Gero: 01:11:703 (1) - all of them
2016-06-23 20:20 sahuang: i see
2016-06-23 20:20 sahuang: yeah
2016-06-23 20:20 sahuang: that's true
2016-06-23 20:20 sahuang: 10%will be nice i think
2016-06-23 20:21 Gero: use 10 in both difficulties then
2016-06-23 20:21 sahuang: sure
2016-06-23 20:22 Gero: that's all, call me back once you fixed it
2016-06-23 20:22 Gero: it wont be that hard tbh
2016-06-23 20:22 sahuang: sure
2016-06-23 20:22 sahuang: i will ask them for permission so it's a quick fix lol
2016-06-23 20:22 Gero: sure
2016-06-23 21:13 sahuang: uploaded lol
2016-06-23 21:14 sahuang: snapped all and made volume 15%
2016-06-23 21:14 Gero: alright
2016-06-23 21:14 sahuang: and for Insane i also rearranged some patterns so it looks better
2016-06-23 21:14 Gero: which patterns did you changed?
2016-06-23 21:15 sahuang: just some jumps
2016-06-23 21:15 sahuang: like
2016-06-23 21:15 sahuang: 00:21:358 (3,4,5,6) -
2016-06-23 21:16 sahuang: 00:28:944 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-06-23 21:16 sahuang: and things like 01:20:668 (1,2,3,4) -  etc.
2016-06-23 21:17 sahuang: not adding stuff,just change shape lol
2016-06-23 21:17 Gero: okay

~ Bubbled ~

sahuang

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Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-06-24T02:42:49+00:00

Thanks Gero!

Edit: after next mod i will add 'Naxess' to tags since he created the storyboard.

pw384

2,286 posts

Joined January 2012

pw384 2016-06-24T12:25:04+00:00

nb

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-07-01T23:11:37+00:00

Heey~~ from my queue uvu

General - clear!
I just don't understand the hitsound pattern in most of the diffs, they seem pretty inconsistent? Would be nice if someone could explain them.. o:

Easy
00:30:323 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you could re-arrange this slightly so (2) doesn't overlap with the default HP bar!

Kencho's Normal
01:00:668 (1,1) - you need at least two beats of recovery time in Normal diffs, please end the spinner earlier.
Otherwise a really nice diff, I just wish you would clean up the stacks. >:
There are quite a few of them that overlap with previous objects,.. if you want to see how your stacks look while playing enable View > Stacking.
Here's a short list, should make it a bit easier for you to fix them, if you want to. (just stack them manually?)
00:11:013 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/pMKth.jpg (not that much of an issue)
00:16:530 (1,2,3) -
00:31:530 (4,1,2,3) - not that bad, but because of two stacks pretty confusing o:
00:36:530 (3,4,1,2,3) -
00:39:289 (2,3,1) -
00:42:565 (4,1,2,3) -
00:59:289 (1,2,3) -
01:38:599 (2,3,1) -
01:40:668 (1,2,3) -

lsahi's Hard
00:06:358 (3) - and 00:09:116 (3) - can't say I really agree with them, because you leave the sounds at 00:06:185 - and 00:08:944 - blank, while they're just as strong as the others.. I mean, ya, it's just the intro, but the rhythm would still be super simple even if you add circles there? (which would be my suggestion to keep the pace steady, but up to you)
00:11:358 - and 00:14:116 - are similar to ^
00:17:910 (1) - consider removing NC to keep it consistent with previous NCs, not really needed.
00:20:668 (1) - same here, but since music changes, it'd be fine to keep this, I think
00:23:427 (6) - heavily overlaps with default HP bar, try to avoid that please o:
01:01:358 (1) - and 01:02:737 (1) - NCs are unnecessray again, imo. Remove?
01:16:530 (3) - would be nice if the sliderend was clickable instead, because of the vocal. It says "give" right there, so would be nice if this was similar to 01:05:496 (1,2,3) -
01:26:530 (3) - and 01:27:910 (4) - imo would be better to replace them with two circles, there's no important sound on the 1/8 so having the reverse there doesn't match well, I think. Also on (4) there are the vocals again and they should be clickable, imo.
01:29:979 (2,3,4) - move the whole stack a few pixels further down to avoid the overlap with previous slider. (only visible while playing)
01:37:737 (1,2) - move NC to (2) instead of (1) to have this consistent with 01:15:151 (2,3,1,2) -
also consider removing NCs on 00:37:565 (1) - and 00:40:323 (1) - , you have the same kind of stack here 01:08:944 (1,2,1) - and here 01:42:047 (1,2) - and all of them should be consistent, imo.
Hmh, tbh I don't really agree with some sliders ending on 1/8 beats.. They're not even present in Hyper and only few of them in Insane and Extra, using them in Hard doesn't work well for the spread, imo.. but might just be me.

Lyric's Hyper
Hmmh, plays very nice, I just found the claps starting here 00:22:392 - really weird. Consider replacing them with a custom hitsound? They also become inconsistent after the next pattern, so you might wanna re-check them.. //after looking through all diffs I noticed that this doesn't only apply to this diff, but still. xD
01:42:737 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not too sure about this pattern, because (3,4) looks very similar to (5,6) distance-wise, but the snap is different, so would be nice if the jump from (3,4) was removed, even if it's just small.

Insane
00:10:668 (1) - 00:13:427 (1) - 00:16:185 (1) - 00:18:944 (1) - any reasons for NCs here? Looks a bit confusing to me. Idk, I'd expect them to be different from the other sliders, but they aren't.. 00:20:668 (1) - IS different, so that's okay, but the others?
01:06:185 (1) - would be nice if you could increase spacing here slightly, because it should have more impact than 01:05:841 (1,2) - I think.
01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:29:634 (1,2,3,4) - are so different from 01:18:599 (1,2,1,2) - 01:40:668 (1,2,1,2) - ..why? Variety is nice, but the impact of the patterns is so different, while the music is the same.. doesn't make sense to me. >:
01:10:323 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:358 (1,2,3,4) - 01:32:392 (1,2,3,4) - 01:43:427 (1,2,3,4) - consider changing all of those (1)s to something different maybe.. the sound on (2,3,4)s is clearly seperate from (1)s, so it would be nice if that could match with the visuals.
01:25:496 (1) - 01:47:565 (1) - they feel very off, because the sliderhead starts at nothing.. I mean there's a break and it has a huuuge impact, but there is no on-going sound, so following a slider doesn't make any sense, especially not if there is a different sound starting in the middle of the slider (01:25:668 - and 01:47:737 - ) which shouldn't be completely ignored, imo..

Dynamix's Extra
Are you sure it's x's and not x'?
00:10:668 (1) - why do you ignore the sound at 00:10:841 - ? 00:05:496 (1) - and 00:07:910 (1) - don't have any sound on the 1/2 so they're fine, but here is one and covering it up by the slidertrack doesn't match well, imo. :c
00:13:599 - shouldn't here be another circle? There is a sound and the pace doesn't change so it feels a little weird to have a gap here. Especially since you kind of mapped the previous similar sound with ^
and then here 00:18:944 (5) - you could've used another extended slider because there is no other beat and an on-going sound, but here you decide to not follow that.. looking at all of that together seems a bit contradicting. D:
00:20:668 (1) - music slows down, so why do you increase SV? Feels off, imo, because so much movement doesn't go well with a slow-down in the music. And it gets quieter, too. Also, in comparison to this, 00:21:185 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesn't work to well, because the movement is close to the same as 00:20:668 (1) - while it should have a bit more impact, I think.. because it's leading to 00:22:047 (1) -
00:29:634 (1) - if you're following the vocals with the sliders, then this should be a 1/4 slider, too, no?
00:31:013 (2,3) - migth be just me, but they feel too close considereing the high spacing between (1,2)
00:34:461 (1,2,3) - spacing feels weird here, because the strong sounds are on (1,3), but the jump is from (1,2).. reduce spacing between (1,2) and increase between (2,3)?
00:38:944 (2,3,4) - even considering slider leniency I think (3) is a bit too far from (2).. or rather it's not differentiable that (2,3) are 1/8 apart and (2,3) 1/4, because they look the same. Would be better to make this clear, similar to 00:40:668 (3,4,5) - for example
00:54:634 (4,5,6) - should be euqally spaced, imo, cause sound is the same on all circles.
01:05:496 (1) - sound ends on the 1/4, not the 1/8, would match better to snap it like that, imo
01:47:220 (2) - heavily overlaps with HP bar, consider moving it somewehre else?
01:50:323 (5) - should have NC for consistency with previous patterns
yah, didn't say much about the Kiai parts, because it feels very exaggerated. The speed is somewhat fine, but the inconcistent 1/8 usage, especially when you ignore other, stronger sounds that way, feels off. (to me!)

Hm, so I really like the song and there are things in each diff that are mapped well and play nice, but the set as a whole doesn't look ready to me tbh. It's not bad, the Insane for example is nice, it lacks just some consistency here and there; similar in the Extra just with the 1/8 usage and some SV changes. So (imo!!) the set could be polished a little more. There's nothing unrankable, but there is still room for improvement. (Not only what I pointed out could be slightly better, also the visuals with some messy looking overlaps, some jumps could be better balanced etc)

> I won't push this foward in the current state, because of the reasons stated above. Feel free (any of the mappers!) to ask me if you have any questions because of the mod or if you want to talk about this in detail.
Good luck for now!

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2016-07-01T23:21:36+00:00

[Dymanix' Exrtra]

00:05:496 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Considering that this is some kind of build up part to the first verse, I think this is slightly too fast and too jumpy as it would give a really cool effect to the player. It would be really cool if you could tone that down a little, keeping in mind that there are more spots where this emphasis would fit better.

I also don't quite get why you've silenced 00:05:496 (1,2) - and 00:08:254 (1,2) - only, but not the rest of these sounds. There are also weird antijumps, for example 00:13:082 (3,4) - , or 00:16:358 (5,1) - where you probably are better off with more spacing. 00:20:668 (1) - This however is cool. Anyway, I can only advise that you look over the first part again, as it seems way too heavy and slightly too random imo.

00:55:151 (1,2,3) - Stuff like this looks really confusing imo, I was not sure whether this is 3/4 or 1/2, because the sliders are coming in different sizes. You should reconsider this and place it slightly different to make it more obvious.

Would be nice if you could consider some of these things, if you have questions please ask them! gl

Lyric

293 posts

Joined September 2013

Lyric 2016-07-02T12:41:20+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Lyric's Hyper
Hmmh, plays very nice, I just found the claps starting here 00:22:392 - really weird. Consider replacing them with a custom hitsound? They also become inconsistent after the next pattern, so you might wanna re-check them.. //after looking through all diffs I noticed that this doesn't only apply to this diff, but still. xD
sounds not bad 'n i just want keep this :]
01:42:737 (3,4,5,6) - I'm not too sure about this pattern, because (3,4) looks very similar to (5,6) distance-wise, but the snap is different, so would be nice if the jump from (3,4) was removed, even if it's just small.
OK, I fixed this weird patten!

thanks for your mod!

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-07-02T13:10:24+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Heey~~ from my queue uvu

General - clear!
I just don't understand the hitsound pattern in most of the diffs, they seem pretty inconsistent? Would be nice if someone could explain them.. o:
Easy is copied from Insane, the hitsounds have a rhythm:
if u look at white and red lines in 1/2, 8 in a row: finish clap empty clap soft-whistle+finish soft-whistle+clap soft-whistle soft-whistle+clap (non-kiai)
in kiai i also follow the rhythm and it surely goes well imo
Also true in Dynamix's and Kencho's cuz all used the same system but made several minor changes according to their own taste.

Easy
00:30:323 (1,2,3) - would be nice if you could re-arrange this slightly so (2) doesn't overlap with the default HP bar!
sure,fixed

Insane
00:10:668 (1) - 00:13:427 (1) - 00:16:185 (1) - 00:18:944 (1) - any reasons for NCs here? Looks a bit confusing to me. Idk, I'd expect them to be different from the other sliders, but they aren't.. 00:20:668 (1) - IS different, so that's okay, but the others?
>>in fact the NCs are indeed unnecessary here so i removed. tbh i used 0.8x sv here b4 cuz sound is a little bit different, but Gero and others said sound here is the same and i think that's true. so removed.
01:06:185 (1) - would be nice if you could increase spacing here slightly, because it should have more impact than 01:05:841 (1,2) - I think. yes
01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:29:634 (1,2,3,4) - are so different from 01:18:599 (1,2,1,2) - 01:40:668 (1,2,1,2) - ..why? Variety is nice, but the impact of the patterns is so different, while the music is the same.. doesn't make sense to me. >:
ok,i will explain this owo i think i explained b4 in this thread lol
i have to say that this is made on purpose. As you can see,each kiai(all together 4 kiai) has 2 such kind of music,so there are 8 altogether.If i make them the same it will be boring to play ofc,so i use 4 short sliders and 4 jumps patterns.
Also,there is actually a rule here: for the first and third kiai i use small jumps and for the second and fourth kiai i use sliders. So kiai(1+2)=kiai(3+4) in terms of pattern, which seems alright to me.

01:10:323 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:358 (1,2,3,4) - 01:32:392 (1,2,3,4) - 01:43:427 (1,2,3,4) - consider changing all of those (1)s to something different maybe.. the sound on (2,3,4)s is clearly seperate from (1)s, so it would be nice if that could match with the visuals.
hmm i dont think so. tho 1 and 234 have some difference, i just consider them as four 1/4 rhythms and i think it's good if i just use 4 identical sliders. when players play this they won't be misled and the pattern is symmetrical
besides u can have a look at the ranked version of this song by Shadren. in 01:10:309 (1,2,3,4) - etc. he used 4 sliders as i did so imo this is fine

01:25:496 (1) - 01:47:565 (1) - they feel very off, because the sliderhead starts at nothing.. I mean there's a break and it has a huuuge impact, but there is no on-going sound, so following a slider doesn't make any sense, especially not if there is a different sound starting in the middle of the slider (01:25:668 - and 01:47:737 - ) which shouldn't be completely ignored, imo..
well,there is indeed sound 01:25:496 - and 01:47:565 - . 01:47:565 - for example, because theres sound 01:47:910 - ,it would be nice if i emphasise the difference between 01:47:220 (2,1) - and use different sv,NC here plays well. about the sound 01:47:737 - i think it's ok to ignore.
what i can do now is to change 01:25:496 (1) - end to 01:25:668 - . idk if you want this change, i keep it for now and tell me if it deserves a change

The consistency in Insane imo is not that bad o.o 4 kiais follow same system and overall i use identical patterns.

Hm, so I really like the song and there are things in each diff that are mapped well and play nice, but the set as a whole doesn't look ready to me tbh. It's not bad, the Insane for example is nice, it lacks just some consistency here and there; similar in the Extra just with the 1/8 usage and some SV changes. So (imo!!) the set could be polished a little more. There's nothing unrankable, but there is still room for improvement. (Not only what I pointed out could be slightly better, also the visuals with some messy looking overlaps, some jumps could be better balanced etc)

> I won't push this foward in the current state, because of the reasons stated above. Feel free (any of the mappers!) to ask me if you have any questions because of the mod or if you want to talk about this in detail.
Good luck for now!

Well, carefully considered your ideas and made the diffs clearer. I guess the consistency is improved now and idk, the hitsounds seem good to me,Gero and some other testplayers. Waiting for all gders to fix the problem and let's see if we can push this forward!!!

Harubi Lira

147 posts

Joined May 2012

Harubi Lira 2016-07-02T14:50:46+00:00

Squichu

Heey~~ from my queue uvu

lsahi's Hard
00:06:358 (3) - and 00:09:116 (3) - can't say I really agree with them, because you leave the sounds at 00:06:185 - and 00:08:944 - blank, while they're just as strong as the others.. I mean, ya, it's just the intro, but the rhythm would still be super simple even if you add circles there? (which would be my suggestion to keep the pace steady, but up to you)
00:11:358 - and 00:14:116 - are similar to ^Here I only follow the strong drum, and after 00:11:013 (1) - a track of bass appears and I add it in my track too. I think even though it lost some certain point, I'd like the way.
00:17:910 (1) - consider removing NC to keep it consistent with previous NCs, not really needed.fixed
00:20:668 (1) - same here, but since music changes, it'd be fine to keep this, I thinkI keep it here
00:23:427 (6) - heavily overlaps with default HP bar, try to avoid that please o:Oops fixed
01:01:358 (1) - and 01:02:737 (1) - NCs are unnecessray again, imo. Remove?fixed
01:16:530 (3) - would be nice if the sliderend was clickable instead, because of the vocal. It says "give" right there, so would be nice if this was similar to 01:05:496 (1,2,3) -I'd tried my best to make it easy as well as follow the rhythm, I did that in 01:05:496 (1,2,3) because the slider before the tap is long enouth that players could prepare for the following tap. However, this pattern seems harder in the same way/
01:26:530 (3) - and 01:27:910 (4) - imo would be better to replace them with two circles, there's no important sound on the 1/8 so having the reverse there doesn't match well, I think. Also on (4) there are the vocals again and they should be clickable, imo.acceptable and fixed
01:29:979 (2,3,4) - move the whole stack a few pixels further down to avoid the overlap with previous slider. (only visible while playing)fixed
01:37:737 (1,2) - move NC to (2) instead of (1) to have this consistent with 01:15:151 (2,3,1,2) -
also consider removing NCs on 00:37:565 (1) - and 00:40:323 (1) - , you have the same kind of stack here 01:08:944 (1,2,1) - and here 01:42:047 (1,2) - and all of them should be consistent, imo.fixed except the last 2 because I think an NC follows the strong drums from the music.
Hmh, tbh I don't really agree with some sliders ending on 1/8 beats.. They're not even present in Hyper and only few of them in Insane and Extra, using them in Hard doesn't work well for the spread, imo.. but might just be me.Just like I've said above I think where I've placed a 1/8 pattern, I'll give enough time for players.

Thanks

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Haganenno

247 posts

Joined July 2014

Haganenno 2016-07-02T22:29:52+00:00

[Easy]
01:00:668 (1) - extend spinner to here.

[Isahi's Hard]
00:06:185 - undermapped
00:08:944 - same
00:11:358 - same
00:14:116 - guess

[Insane]
00:38:082 (4) - Considering this hitcircle is a bit unexpected considering the blank space one pattern before, this hitcircle should be placed to be seen easier.

[Dynamix's Extra]
00:18:944 (5) - make it a slider that lasts to 00:19:203 -
01:18:599 (3,4,5,6) - lineair slider placement kills the momentum
01:25:668 (2) - feels bad
01:47:737 (2) - same

sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-07-03T01:12:48+00:00

no change to Easy and Insane.

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-07-03T11:43:25+00:00

Squichu

Squichu wrote:
Kencho's Normal
01:00:668 (1,1) - you need at least two beats of recovery time in Normal diffs, please end the spinner earlier. Yea I know Normal diffs need at least two beats of recovery time, but this song is 87BPM, so it just need one beats in Normal diffs and it is enough.
Otherwise a really nice diff, I just wish you would clean up the stacks. >:
There are quite a few of them that overlap with previous objects,.. if you want to see how your stacks look while playing enable View > Stacking.
Here's a short list, should make it a bit easier for you to fix them, if you want to. (just stack them manually?) It is hard to fix, so I using CS3.4 then fixed overlap problem.
00:11:013 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/pMKth.jpg (not that much of an issue)
00:16:530 (1,2,3) -
00:31:530 (4,1,2,3) - not that bad, but because of two stacks pretty confusing o:
00:36:530 (3,4,1,2,3) -
00:39:289 (2,3,1) -
00:42:565 (4,1,2,3) -
00:59:289 (1,2,3) -
01:38:599 (2,3,1) -
01:40:668 (1,2,3) -

Kencho's Normal

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65841
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2

[Metadata]
Title:Give It Up
TitleUnicode:Give It Up
Artist:Knife Party
ArtistUnicode:Knife Party
Creator:sahuang
Version:Kencho's Normal
Source:
Tags:cut short drumstep dubstep abandon ship earstorm kencho lsahi lyric dynamix
BeatmapID:941950
BeatmapSetID:424397

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:4.5
ApproachRate:5.5
SliderMultiplier:2.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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sahuang

2,293 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

sahuang 2016-07-05T07:51:49+00:00

all updated and removed dynamix's diff on his request

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-07-06T21:40:48+00:00

rechecking--

General - still clear!

Easy
01:08:599 (4,1) - yah, well, blanket could be fixed with next update
01:15:841 (2,1) - would be nice if you could move 1's tail further from 2, so beginners won't confuse it with the sliderhead
01:29:634 (3) - consider making this consistent with 01:07:565 (3) - from first Kiai?
dunno how I missed these things earlier

Kencho's Normal
pretty lazy fix huh xD
00:39:806 (3,1) - still overlapping, tho. same for 00:59:806 (2,3) - and 01:38:599 (2,3,1) -
and about 01:00:668 (1,1) - no matter the bpm, the next hitobject becomes visible while the spinner is still active, which is really confusing for target players, that's why it should be avoided.

lsahi's Hard
Was the diff updated correctly? Cause I can't see any changes (even the parts that should've changed according to the reply)....?

Lyric's Hyper lookd good to me!

Insane
01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - etc. I still don't really agree with the inconsistencies, but that's up to you ofc. What I think would be a nice addition is if these jumps had more impact than jumps like 01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - ; they're very similar but the first pattern sounds much louder (to me at least), so if the spacing could be increased a bit that would fit slightly better, imo.

Well, as I said, I still think the set could be improved further before it gets qualified. Even if all of the suggestions above were applied, there's more that could be worked on, especially the visuals (imo).

Harubi Lira

147 posts

Joined May 2012

Harubi Lira 2016-07-07T12:35:23+00:00

I'm sorry that something goes wrong and I failed to upload my diff and just leave there without a check by myself.

Waiting sahuang for upload

Kencho

952 posts

Joined August 2013

Kencho 2016-07-09T18:46:10+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Kencho's Normal
pretty lazy fix huh xD
00:39:806 (3,1) - still overlapping, tho. same for 00:59:806 (2,3) - and 01:38:599 (2,3,1) - Um...then I using CS3.5, it really hard to fix. x_x Before this map I always ignore overlap in Normal diffs……
and about 01:00:668 (1,1) - no matter the bpm, the next hitobject becomes visible while the spinner is still active, which is really confusing for target players, that's why it should be avoided. Well, I fix that, just for avoid trouble.

Kencho's Normal

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sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-12T01:56:01+00:00

Patterns in insane are not very well designed but still playable and fine imo... Anyways gonna work on it later. I don't wanna remap this...

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-13T12:20:38+00:00

Squichu wrote:
rechecking--

General - still clear!

Easy
01:08:599 (4,1) - yah, well, blanket could be fixed with next update yes
01:15:841 (2,1) - would be nice if you could move 1's tail further from 2, so beginners won't confuse it with the sliderhead k
01:29:634 (3) - consider making this consistent with 01:07:565 (3) - from first Kiai? i feel this is fine,in 4 kiais i use different patterns but overall consistent. It's a variety here <3
dunno how I missed these things earlier

Insane
01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - etc. I still don't really agree with the inconsistencies, but that's up to you ofc. What I think would be a nice addition is if these jumps had more impact than jumps like 01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - ; they're very similar but the first pattern sounds much louder (to me at least), so if the spacing could be increased a bit that would fit slightly better, imo.

Well, as I said, I still think the set could be improved further before it gets qualified. Even if all of the suggestions above were applied, there's more that could be worked on, especially the visuals (imo).

So basically I rearrange almost half of insane patterns, including the openi and the kiai. Rest I think it's fine.

All UPDATED.

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Gero 2016-07-16T00:13:33+00:00

~ Rebubbled ~

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-16T01:23:27+00:00

ty Gero <3

Gust

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Gust 2016-07-26T06:47:07+00:00

给皇无敌

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-26T06:58:33+00:00

Ultimate Madoka wrote:
给皇无敌

2kd位。。

smallboat

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smallboat 2016-07-28T04:26:37+00:00

Offer some opinion (Normal Hard Hyper are fine imo): ~~其實是想混個KD賺活躍~~

[Easy]
Just say, this 01:00:668 (1,1) - spinner space are fine due to low bpm (87) by QAT confirmed is okay , so it is nothing, don't pick it.

[Insane]

後面這兩個note好像不太流暢，移這些位子看看
01:49:806 (6) - (232|228)
01:50:323 (1) - (431|264)

sahuang

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sahuang 2016-07-28T04:54:36+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Offer some opinion (Normal Hard Hyper are fine imo): ~~其實是想混個KD賺活躍~~

[Easy]
Just say, this 01:00:668 (1,1) - spinner space are fine due to low bpm (87) by QAT confirmed is okay , so it is nothing, don't pick it.
www as confirmed by kwan

[Insane]

後面這兩個note好像不太流暢，移這些位子看看
01:49:806 (6) - (232|228)
01:50:323 (1) - (431|264)

all fixed,updated