moonlightleaf wrote:

看到bg不想下载系列,

给个ticket如何? 或者换个别的pending图 ? (妹子bg或者风景画bg)

Narcissu wrote:

moonlightleaf wrote:

看到bg不想下载系列,

给个ticket如何? 或者换个别的pending图 ? (妹子bg或者风景画bg)

me too

• [Light Insane]

1. 00:06:185 (3,4,5,6) - inconsistent with the part 00:08:944 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:10:323 (3,4,5,6) - , the spacing change should make something similar
2. 00:08:082 - inconsistent here, add a note, since you add it all after
3. 00:23:944 (4,5) - make the spacing 4>5 larger since 00:24:116 (5) - is a really strong beat, like sth you did it 00:29:461 (4,5) -
4. 00:34:979 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:38:254 (5,6) - why the notes here are stick together for no reason lol?
6. 00:43:772 (6,7) - same as 00:23:944 (4,5) -
7. 01:15:841 (1,2) - 這邊怎不百的跟前面01:14:461 (1,2,1,2) - 一樣?
8. 01:18:599 (1,2) - doesnt match with the music, obviously, here is a clean 4 beat not triplet
9. 01:20:668 (3) - NC this otherwise will be inconsistent with 01:09:634 (1,1,1) -
10. 01:24:116 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:37:910 (1,2) - same as 01:15:841 (1,2) -
12. 01:40:668 (1,2) - same as 01:18:599 (1,2) -
13. 01:42:737 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent with the previous part 01:31:703 (1,2,3,4) - 01:20:668 (3,4,5,6) - 01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) -
14. 01:46:185 (1,2) - same 01:18:599 (1,2) -

• [Dynamix's Insane]

1. NCs on the long white tick lol, you got so many incorrect NCs
2. mute every 3/4 sliderend on kiai mode
3. 00:08:513 - mute, doesnt have a sound here
4. 00:10:668 (5) - maybe NC on change sv slider? and i think this slider is inconsistent with other part
5. 00:31:272 (3) - i cant heard a beat here..
6. 00:34:634 (2,3) - is there a reason that you map the spacing so small here lol?
7. 00:49:116 (4,5) - the spacing here should be the smallest since the beat 00:49:289 (5) - isnt obvious
8. 00:50:496 (4,5) - same 00:34:634 (2,3) - , sound same imo
9. 01:02:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - spacing here is absolutly wrong, the spacing here should be the same as 01:00:668 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - or even bigger
10. 01:08:944 (3) - NC here otherwise will be inconsistent with the other kiai part

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

From my queue

• [Light Insane]

1. 00:06:185 (3,4,5,6) - inconsistent with the part 00:08:944 (3,4,5,6) - and 00:10:323 (3,4,5,6) - , the spacing change should make something similar
2. 00:08:082 - inconsistent here, add a note, since you add it all after
3. 00:23:944 (4,5) - make the spacing 4>5 larger since 00:24:116 (5) - is a really strong beat, like sth you did it 00:29:461 (4,5) -
4. 00:34:979 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:38:254 (5,6) - why the notes here are stick together for no reason lol?
6. 00:43:772 (6,7) - same as 00:23:944 (4,5) -
7. 01:15:841 (1,2) - 這邊怎不百的跟前面01:14:461 (1,2,1,2) - 一樣?
8. 01:18:599 (1,2) - doesnt match with the music, obviously, here is a clean 4 beat not triplet
9. 01:20:668 (3) - NC this otherwise will be inconsistent with 01:09:634 (1,1,1) -
10. 01:24:116 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:37:910 (1,2) - same as 01:15:841 (1,2) -
12. 01:40:668 (1,2) - same as 01:18:599 (1,2) -
13. 01:42:737 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent with the previous part 01:31:703 (1,2,3,4) - 01:20:668 (3,4,5,6) - 01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) -
14. 01:46:185 (1,2) - same 01:18:599 (1,2) -

i try to make m4m fair but i only can mod insane :\ no worries it's really nice
anyway GL~

1. soft-hitfinish99, soft-hitfinish99, drum-hitfinish99 have ~2ms of delay
2. I don't agree with where the maps begin, feels a bit sudden and out of place, either begin from the start or not until 00:21:185 - ish

1. Past the intro your NCs are a mess, just place one very measure, and occasionnally on jumps or weird rhythm etc
2. the intro's SV is way too fast for the intensity of the song and the section, making the part feel too overwhelming with a lot of cursor mouvements for not much
3. 00:13:427 - map on this beat, otherwise it feels very lacking, especially with nothing on 00:13:599 -
   Also I'd advise not to stack 00:13:082 (3) - perfectly on top of (1) to prevent confusion
4. 00:19:116 - ^
5. 00:20:668 (1) - Players can't possibly predict this SV, there are no rhythmical cues for the player to understand that this slider is accelerated this much, apart from 00:21:185 (1) - which comes in too late for the player to anticipate anything
   If you really want to keep it, make it bend in a way that prevents any slider breaks thanks to the slider leniency, like this for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:21:358 (3,4,5,6) - the slider ends on those are way too loud
7. 00:23:772 (8,1,2) - this linear flow ruins the rhythmical break on (1) because the player will aim (2) immediately, making the cursor continually move.
   You should place (1) around x:504 y:170, but the ideal would be to stack (1,2) together:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:57:910 (1,2,3,4) - not sure what kind of flow you're trying to achieve here but it doesn't work and feels really awkward
9. 01:06:185 (1) - probably the most intense drop of the whole song yet the spacing is ridiculously low, making this beat really underwhelming
10. Generally, and more specifically for Kiai, you use to much DS and linear flow, making the map feel underwhelming as a whole and awkward to aim and play, like for example: 01:12:392 (1,2) - just ctrl + g (1) and (2) individually, and you already have a more interesting a fun pattern, or 01:14:461 (3,4,5) - linear flow with changing SV, very awkward to play, just try yourself with your mouse/pen only to go in a same direction but changing the speed constantly, it really feels forced

1. 00:08:082 - feels lacking, and the spacing of 00:07:565 (3,4,5,1) - is basically the same everywhere but the rhythm isn't the same, which is confusing to read. I'd suggest even stacking (5,1) to emphasize the break in the rhythm, and inverse 00:08:254 (1,2) - :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. This will be a general mod, because there's so much to cover a case by case will waste our time:
   Be careful of your flow, you have a lot of unjustified linear flow like 00:38:254 (5,6,1) - 00:32:047 (3,4,5) - 00:59:979 (5,6,7,1) - a bit everywhere which make the map awkward to play. Don't forget it concerns sliders as well, 01:44:461 (4,1) - for example has two sliders going in the same direction but making the cursor accelerate and slow down in a weird way
   The spacing feels too random, important beats are often ignored while more normal ones have too much emphasis, for example: 01:08:254 (5,6,1,2) - (5,6) and (1,2) have the same spacing yet (1,2) sounds considerably more powerful, or 01:32:047 (3,4,1) - with (3,4) having a large spacing for no reason and then nothing (a stack) for (1)
3. I noticed you have this kind of slider pattern 00:11:013 (1,2) - a bit everywhere, it works under certain circumstances, but not here, actually I don't think I've seen it work even once in your map

1. 00:16:530 (1,2) - put those at the beginning, you were doing a nice build up, just to ruin it with long and boring 3/1 sliders
2. 00:24:461 - you should map this, either with a circle or deleting 00:24:806 (1) - and putting a slider beginning on 00:24:461 - until 00:24:806 -
   This concerns all other patterns with the same issue
3. 00:26:530 (4,1) - slight overlap
4. 00:32:392 (4,1) - try to make them parallel, like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:44:116 - erm you should map this part, no reason not to since all the other diffs have it (except Kencho's but you should tell him to map it as well)
6. 01:09:634 (2,4) - unreadable for beginners
7. 01:17:220 (1,2,3) - try to make your blankets with the same spacing, looks better and consistency in design makes everything feel "professional"

• Ctrl + Shift + A and Check DS

1. 00:35:841 (1) - dont like this slider
2. 01:42:047 (1) - ^

• Nothing to say. A good map.

1. 00:13:082 (6,1) - dont like this http://puu.sh/o8bnO/63504056e5.png
2. 00:47:565 (3) - noooo, change it!
3. 01:33:772 (1) - ^

• nothing to say

1. 00:11:703 (3,4,5,6) - dont like this pattern
2. 00:23:427 (1,2,3,4) - maybe square?
3. 00:39:289 (2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 01:28:254 (1) - change
5. 01:33:772 (1) - no, it looks crooked. work whit this

1. 00:22:737 (3,4,5,6) - square?
2. 00:53:427 (5) - x360 y232 for best triangle

1. 01:04:116 - maybe one more revers?
2. 01:16:530 (5) - overlap looks so bad

1. 00:20:323 (3,1) - bad overlap for hard diff imo
2. 01:26:185 (1,2,3,4) - its very hard to play for "hard" diff
3. 01:27:565 (1,2,3,4) - ^
4. 01:42:047 (7) - NC

1. 00:44:684 - why this part not mappedO_o(imo it should)

1. widescreen support
2. 00:13:082 (3,1) - 太近了吧 尤其是这个空拍还来得比较突然
3. 00:19:289 (1) - 考虑一下ctrl+G? 主要是前面有00:18:254 (2) - 同向 打起来可能会感觉有点不好
4. 00:24:806 (4,1) - 保持00:24:634 (3,4) - 这样的间距？
5. 00:37:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里有点挤了 和前后比起来
6. 00:57:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这两组我个人推荐交换 因为先向里再向外感觉有一种冲击感 虽然差别不大
7. 01:19:979 (1) - 按前面那样的话这个不应该NC吧 虽然实际上我是不太理解前面那样为什么不NC的..
8. 01:27:392 (4) - ctrl+G？和前面一样一正一反 顺便也和后面NC那种两个同向区分一下变化
9. 01:47:220 (2) - 这个挡血条太多了
10. 01:47:220 (2) - 在01:47:479 - 这里拆个单点出来？尤其是结尾接转盘感觉效果比较好

1. 00:07:565 (3,5,1,2) - 这种距离堆叠 如果是隔1/2也感觉完全没问题 所以从这个角度来看隔1/1就比较误导了 虽然这个AR下应该是没问题 姑且提一下
2. 00:42:737 (1) - 这种节奏感觉一般把这个叠在(2)上空一拍比较好吧
3. 01:25:151 (6,7,1) - 额 我觉得既然是light Insane就最好不要出现这种难梗吧 与整体难度也不相符(而且这里也不像是应该坑人的地方) 正常近点就挺好的吧
4. 01:47:479 (7) - ^
5. 01:50:323 (8) - 来发NC？
6. 挺好的 主要是00:06:530 (5,6,1) - 00:17:565 (5,6,1) - 这种折返移动然后接钝角flow的感觉不太爽 参考一下owo
7. 讲道理整体这个难度的话OD7感觉刚刚好...你们怎么都这么喜欢高OD啊我等没有acc的玩家哭了

1. 00:46:875 (6) - NC？类似前面那样子 后面几个同理
2. 01:43:427 (5,6) - 怎么突然这么近了

1. 00:05:841 (2,3) - 这个应该保持1-2的间距吧(不是DS)
2. 00:09:116 (3,4) - 这近了啊 (4)到320|120多么好
3. 00:13:772 (1) - ...这位置怎么这么蛋疼，我觉得可以设计一下角度怎么和00:12:392 (5) - 的尾巴叠一下
4. 00:24:806 (1,2,3,4) - 也是不太理解这间距怎么总变的.. DS不好么QwQ
5. 00:30:323 (1) - 推荐大弧度滑条类似这样，接前面那种空一拍还有平滑条感觉不太好
6. 01:09:289 (2,1,2) - ，，这间距强行误导节奏(虽然有NC提醒但是这距离配合这节奏间隔打起来不爽啊)，还不如01:08:944 (1,2,1) - 这仨都堆一起
7. 01:42:047 (7) - NC
8. 虽然你们都说ZZH垃圾，但是Hard开DS这点我还是支持ZZH的

1. nothing Orz

1. 00:08:254 (1,2) - 这角度其实不太好 像这样就好很多 虽然改这个后面大概要动 总之也是参考一下（
2. 00:22:047 (1) - 放这里相对好 感觉都是见缝插针 哪里空就往哪里怼
3. 00:26:530 (4,1) - 可以调整到不沾 顺便这包的确实太差了233
4. 01:03:427 (1,1) - 忘记Easy里对转盘后面物件出现的时间间隔的要求了 但是我感觉近了 因为转盘还在转的时候缩圈就出来不少了
5. 01:17:220 (1,2,3) - nazi 调整一下 这俩间距看着就不一样..
6. 01:24:116 (2) - 强行stack flow不好啊 不如放140|108做个正三角形 01:24:461 (3) - 172|192，01:24:806 (4) - 324|268
7. 01:33:772 (1,2,3,4) - 显得比较挤 非要做个stack就搞个类似这样的？至少不显挤啊;w;

1. 00:10:668 (5) - in similar sounds like this you chose to emphasise to slow down with the SV which plays well imo, but the thing is 00:13:427 you miss it here why?
2. 00:16:530 (1) - same here, the thing is the tune is getting more intense but that sounds is still there and it dominates over the rest
3. 00:19:289 (1) - ^
4. 00:20:668 (1) - tbh with you i would mute the slider end here since no sound goes with it, something like this sounds better
5. 00:28:254 (1,2) - at these sliders there a sounds that dont go well with sliders, both of these sliders have a strong sound at the end of them which imo doesnt go well since that should be clickable
6. 00:28:944 (3,4,5,6) - on the other hand these notes fit sliders more than the circles :/ i would strongly suggest you changing both of those suggestions
7. 00:34:979 (4) - why has this note got so much emphasis ? its so much less stronger than this note 00:34:461 (1) - and that has less emphasis
8. 00:36:875 (4,5) - see you emphasise this nicelly with the sounds you should do something similar with ^ not the same placememnt or style just like DS wise
9. 00:40:323 (2,3) - you could give this a nice blanket tbh
10. 00:47:392 (3) - see this note through out this whole increased sort of tune wise you only done it once, and i would recommend you change this note since not only is it kinda anticlimatic because of the short spacing but it also plays cringy :/ 00:49:461 (6) - if you done something similar to this, it plays better already
11. 01:00:667 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you create these HUGE jumps and its cool since it emphasises the sounds so much and then 01:02:047 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it just dies? its the same sound try to use the space not make it like less spaced or, decrease the spacing on the first notes i highlighted and use it consistently on the second part as well
12. 01:05:496 (1) - i dont think this slider should slow down, in fact i think it should be an increase in the SV because of the fast sound. The sound ends on the red tick as well rather than the blue tick, it ends here 01:05:668
13. 01:15:496 (6,7) - i would increase the spacing between these just a little bit because it is the intense part of the song, make it a bit harder, if you place 01:15:668 (7) - at x:188 y:112 not only does it play better but it doesnt interfere with your DS as well since the strong slider at 01:15:151 (5) - has a spacing of 2,15 towards the next note, and the spacing to the next is at 2 which is a slight decrease and thats fine since its not as strong
14. 01:25:668 (2) - this note doesnt fit anything, i would say delete it but after i listened to it a couple of times you could be fancy and create a slider here because of that whoosing sound tbh
15. 01:33:772 (1) - god i sliderbroke on this, its not that bad i just sliderbroke on it lol, wanted to say that . But you could adjust it a little bit so that its a bit similar to the previous ones on the similar sounds i.e. make it a bit straight-er
16. 01:37:565 (4,5) - remember the previous thingy about that spacing yh, just apply the same thing here
17. 01:44:461 (4,1) - god i don't like this overlap :/
18. 01:47:565 (1) - you could map something to this spinner

1. 00:16:185 (5) - you could map notes to these vocals instead since vocals dont pop up as often, except of that slider
2. 00:26:875 (5,6) - why stack these if the sounds are so different :/
3. 01:03:427 (1) - common man the strongest part of this entire build up and you put a spinner? ... map repeat sliders to this or a stream its not a easy its an insane it's just so anticlimactic to build up notes to a really strong part and the put a spinner there, its like mapping a camellia map and leaving the drop as a break
4. 01:06:185 (1,2) - you could blanket this get those style points
5. 01:16:875 (2,3) - emphasise these aka make these jumpy to the vocals dont just stack them :/
6. 01:25:410 (7) - you could stack this note actually it would be greatly appriciated by the player imo since it would be somewhat easier to hit
7. 01:27:737 (6) - dont stack that strong sound man
8. 01:32:047 (3,4) - cmon no stackerooni, its just too strong to stack atm
9. 01:38:944 (2,3) - ^ just the same thing i'm gonna leave this point now there is a couple more similar to this just spot them out

1. 00:05:841 (2) - tbh you could stack this on top of 00:06:013 (3) - no idea why it just plays nicer imo
2. 00:31:703 (5) - you could give this slider some shape rather than just leaving it blank, something like this looks better in my eyes, its just so that the slider has some yeno style to it at a pretty wubby part of the song (the whole song is wubby but shhhhhh dont tell anyone)
3. 01:14:461 (1) - that looks awkward man, cmon think of a better slider shape :/
4. diff is pretty good can't find anything that stands out as much, me gusta

1. see tbh with you the start plays really weird to me it's a hard so imo it should emphasise more sounds like these 00:07:392 like even somkething like thissounds so much better than what you have 00:06:875 (4) - but maybe that's just me yeno
2. 00:20:668 (1) - i dont really see a point in NC this tbh i would just leave this as it is, unless its for HP recover purposes then i guess it can stay
3. 01:50:151 - you could place a note here for the banter

pic of message

1. 00:23:427 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of messy tbh --> looks like a kind of square. to fix square I would put 3 @ x:123 y:348
2. 00:26:185 (1,2,3,4) - similar here. 4 to x:352 y:343
3. 00:32:220 (4) - would play better if was a bit better centered to the next and previous(Ex: @x:322 y:191) right now its not very noticeable
4. 00:32:392 (5) - copy and paste this design to this slider 00:32:737 (6) - .. 01:35:841 (5) - to 01:36:185 (6) -
5. some people would suggest making these slider ends silent 01:18:599 (1,2, 3, 4) - 01:24:116 (1,2,3,4) - 01:40:668 (1,2,3,4) - 01:46:185 (1,2,3,4) -
6. assuming 01:49:461 (4,5,6) - is supposed to be a triangle ... for better triangle you can move 01:49:634 (5) - to x:361 y:333
7. There is no sound here? 01:16:703 (2) -

1. 01:06:875 (2,3) -01:12:392 (2,3) - 01:17:910 (2,3) - 01:23:427 (2,3) - 01:28:944 (2,3) - 01:34:461 (2,3) -01:39:979 (2,3) - 01:45:496 (2,3) - each circle of these(or at least a few for variety) were sliders

Mercusheigan wrote:

Lyric's Hyper

SPOILER

Good job, really good difficulty >>>thanks
just a small suggestion 01:48:599 (3) - I'd break down into two hitcircles >>>using a slider is smoother in here

Kagetsu wrote:

[Lyric's Hyper]

1. 00:10:668 (9) - spacing isn't correct... i believe this should be 1.1x instead of 1.2.. if you want to make an antijump with 00:11:013 (1) - it's better to move 1 instead of 9
   suggestion

   
2. 00:18:944 (9) - ^ >>>no DS considered in these patterns, because this is a very hard diff.
3. 01:03:427 (1) - i would divide this into more sliders, because you're ignoring an important beat that should be clickable ( 01:04:116 - ) OKAY~
4. 01:11:703 (1) - there's nothing wrong with this slider but would be a lot better if you could make a cool shape with this... a straight slider doesn't really fit with this type of music imo >>>a big straight slider is exciting
5. 01:28:082 (8,1) - stacking those 2 felt weird to me because 01:28:254 (1) - has a lot of emphasis >>>stacking here to relax your right hand
6. 01:44:806 (1) - same as 01:11:703 (1) - >>>ditto

WISPG_G wrote:

Lyric's Hyper
• 01:11:703 (1,3) - place end of slider 3 on slider 1? >>>unnecessary but inconvenient to do that
looking good =) >>>=)

LMT1996 wrote:

Lyric's Hyper

00:11:703 - (strong keyboard sound) missing a crucial tick here. OR 00:11:875 (3) - (drum line) is too silent to be mapped. >>>fixed
00:39:979 (4) - seems like you're mapping to the vocal line and you should stick to one in this case. This slider should be from 00:40:151 - to 00:40:323 - . >>>no i'm mapping to the rhythm line

Testo wrote:

[Lyric's Hyper]

1. 01:04:116 - maybe one more revers? >>>Yes, fixed that.
2. 01:16:530 (5) - overlap looks so bad >>>not at all

TheLeviathan wrote:

Lyric's Hyper
00:13:599 - 00:16:358 - same thing about not simmilarity with same parts of song in other positions, on this diff i think it is better to leave those empty >>>there's a little difference in every parts
01:11:358 (6) - 01:22:392 (6) - 01:33:427 (6) - 01:44:461 (6) - all this sliders are... wrong... it either must be single notes in the begining of each slider, or previous reverse sliders must be reversed for one more tic >>>WHY?

Misure wrote:

[Lyric's Hyper]

1. 00:46:875 (6) - NC？类似前面那样子 后面几个同理 >>>好。
2. 01:43:427 (5,6) - 怎么突然这么近了 >>>fixed

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Title:Give It Up
TitleUnicode:Give It Up
Artist:Knife Party
ArtistUnicode:Knife Party
Creator:sahuang
Version:Lyric's Hyper
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292,34,88082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,34,88254,6,0,B|342:102|342:102|350:239|350:239|416:111,1,359.99996612549,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,146,89289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,335,89634,2,0,P|342:353|405:335,1,89.9999915313724
350,239,89979,2,0,P|303:221|240:239,1,89.9999915313724
190,304,90323,2,0,P|227:229|170:135,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,226,91013,5,4,0:0:0:0:
190,304,91358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,90,91703,2,0,P|145:140|176:188,1,89.9999915313724,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,121,92047,2,0,L|366:107,1,89.9999915313724
434,203,92392,2,0,L|240:229,2,179.999983062745,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,109,93427,2,0,L|254:121,1,89.9999915313724
255,226,93772,6,0,B|251:40|251:40|212:145|126:160,1,359.99996612549,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,2,94806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,172,95151,2,0,P|44:226|83:254,1,89.9999915313724
122,347,95496,2,0,P|77:360|21:351,1,89.9999915313724
184,249,95841,2,0,B|227:236|227:236|312:262|312:262|380:237,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,150,96358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,150,96444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,150,96530,6,0,P|453:184|441:311,1,179.999983062745,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,207,97220,2,0,L|273:18,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,43,97910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,43,98254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,258,98599,2,0,P|142:258|215:158,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,79,99116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,151,99289,6,0,B|180:289|180:289|232:261|278:282|278:282|336:316|408:259,1,359.99996612549,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
438,76,100323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,80,100668,2,0,L|232:180,1,89.9999915313724
344,206,101013,2,0,L|333:106,1,89.9999915313724
230,169,101358,2,0,P|230:256|308:318,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,161,102048,5,4,0:0:0:0:
269,41,102392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
153,223,102737,2,0,P|97:230|52:203,1,89.9999915313724,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
22,32,103082,2,0,L|13:121,1,89.9999915313724
119,119,103427,2,0,B|219:51|219:51|202:121,2,179.999983062745,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,296,104461,2,0,P|93:252|67:216,1,89.9999915313724
2,344,104806,6,0,L|378:296,1,359.99996612549,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,99,105841,1,0,0:0:0:0:
449,340,106185,2,0,P|459:290|425:225,1,89.9999915313724
358,211,106530,2,0,P|348:261|382:326,1,89.9999915313724
440,154,106875,2,0,L|237:182,1,179.999983062745,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,120,107392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
169,120,107479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
161,223,107737,6,0,P|168:278|136:321,2,89.9999915313724
64,172,108254,2,0,L|77:55,1,89.9999915313724,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,30,108599,2,0,L|165:147,1,89.9999915313724
261,178,108944,2,0,P|310:183|364:149,1,89.9999915313724
443,119,109289,2,0,L|438:17,2,89.9999915313724,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,212,109806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
414,281,109979,2,0,L|310:275,1,89.9999915313724
256,192,110323,5,4,0:0:0:0:

• • I'd reduce SV a little since this is the easiest difficulty, 0,70 seems better.
  • 00:35:841 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it back again at x:336 y:292.
  • 01:00:668 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:05:496. (if I were you I'd just delete it and add a long slider instead)
  • 01:25:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Just add a slider or two.
  • 01:41:358 (1) - Remove this NC, it's not necessary.

• • AR6 looks better here.
  • You seem to add NC way too often, like for example these NCs 01:07:565 (1), 01:10:323 (1), 01:13:082 (1), 01:15:841 (1) are not necessary but I guess is fine if you want to keep them, doesn't make much of a difference.
  • 00:20:668 (1) - This slider should end 1/4 earlier, if you want to keep it this way then add a green section at the end with 5% volume.

• • 00:05:841 (2,3) - How about changing the rhythm here? Try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:08:599 (2,3) - ^
  • 00:11:013 (1,2,3) - ^ and so on, if you decide to change it then make your similar patterns consistent and change them as well.
  • 00:29:461 (5,6) - Ugh, do you really have to place this circle and this slider under the (3)? They're kinda hidden, move them to the left, you have a lot of space.
  • 01:05:754 (x) - Add a green section with 5% volume.
  • 01:05:841 (1) - Remove the NC, it's not necessary.

• • 00:24:806 (1) - Move the ending slider control point at x:224 y:152.
  • 01:14:461 (1) - I don't like this slider, how about shaping it differently?
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:25:323 (6,7) - How about adding a 1/4 slider instead? Feels better to play.

[alt][F4] wrote:

M4M from pm's

[Light Insane]
Cleaning:

1. 00:23:427 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of messy tbh --> looks like a kind of square. to fix square I would put 3 @ x:123 y:348
   >>>nope it's fine,i want to emphasis distance
2. 00:26:185 (1,2,3,4) - similar here. 4 to x:352 y:343
   >>>^^
3. 00:32:220 (4) - would play better if was a bit better centered to the next and previous(Ex: @x:322 y:191) right now its not very noticeable
   >>>i remapped here,so no such problem now
4. 00:32:392 (5) - copy and paste this design to this slider 00:32:737 (6) - .. 01:35:841 (5) - to 01:36:185 (6) -
   >>>ys
5. some people would suggest making these slider ends silent 01:18:599 (1,2, 3, 4) - 01:24:116 (1,2,3,4) - 01:40:668 (1,2,3,4) - 01:46:185 (1,2,3,4) -
   >>>yeah!!!!
6. assuming 01:49:461 (4,5,6) - is supposed to be a triangle ... for better triangle you can move 01:49:634 (5) - to x:361 y:333
   >>>should be fine
7. There is no sound here? 01:16:703 (2) -
   >>>yes,deleted
   

Would be a little more fun(or active) if...

1. 01:06:875 (2,3) -01:12:392 (2,3) - 01:17:910 (2,3) - 01:23:427 (2,3) - 01:28:944 (2,3) - 01:34:461 (2,3) -01:39:979 (2,3) - 01:45:496 (2,3) - each circle of these(or at least a few for variety) were sliders
   >>>circle is neat here,ill wait for others' opinion

If you haven't checked out this guide, its worth doing imo t/208596/ Why? you may ask... I don't like this slider. 01:33:772 (1) -
>>>thanks lol

1. 00:24:461 (4) - on end, missing finish
2. 00:28:254 (2) - wrong place clap on begin, as you style consistency, the clap should be remove
3. 00:30:323 (1) - missing finish on begin and clap on end
4. 00:55:151 (1,2,1,2) - you hitsound, seem lot missing hitsound, example 00:55:151 (1) on end, have clap but on 00:57:910 (1) - don't have clap, try be more consistency

1. 00:24:461 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - the rhythm is really abuse and hard play for this level Normal, the bpm is high, this could be reduce rhythm and give little break
2. 00:29:979 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ same happen
3. 00:35:496 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^ same
4. 00:41:013 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^^
5. 01:25:841 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - very lot 1/2 slider and abuse, feel more harder, reduce rhythm.

1. the begin, the volume is soo high I can't hear song that part in 00:05:496 at 00:20:668 this part is low song and relax, try reduce volume to better hear song and hitsound as balance

1. 01:09:634 (1) - this need remove new combo, you never NC like other pattern
2. 01:15:151 (1) - the Slider velocity is same as 01:14:461 (1) so no need new combo
3. 01:37:220 (1) - ^ same happen
4. 01:42:047 (7) - missing NC

1. 00:24:634 (7,1) - you shouldn't make jump, I know is strong beat and vocal, but as you style you didn't make jump other pattern example 00:27:392 (8,1) this part have strong beat but you didn't make jump, another example 00:30:151 (6,1), and many more, so this 00:24:634 (7,1) shouldn't make jump. if you wanna keep it, then make jump other pattern (Jump is better, this level is hyper)

1. 00:30:668 (1) - if Easy and light insane made by you, make consistency, there missing clap

1. 00:07:910 (5) - SV change is huge, need NC
2. 00:10:668 (5) - ^ same
3. 00:13:427 (5) - ^ same
4. 00:16:185 (5) - ^ same
5. 00:18:944 (5) - ^ same
6. 00:22:737 (4,5,6) - the spacing is weird, don't know why increassing, make normal spacing 1.50x all this objects
7. 00:23:599 (2,3) - you don't wanna make more symentrical triangule with 00:23:944 (4) ? like this http://puu.sh/obmKK/717a6d929f.jpg
8. 01:14:461 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the read NC is very hard people will missing because the SV change huge, the nc should be like this http://puu.sh/obmXZ/ae6e29cc68.jpg
9. 01:36:530 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ same happen

1. 00:21:358 (3,4,5,6,1) - the spacing is way too high for this level Insane, 7.00x and 10.00x, would be nice if reduce spacing at 5.00x.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi, M4M from my modding Q~
Thank you for the mod before~

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

easy

[Easy]

1. 00:13:772 (1,2) - It seemed that your blankets are still pretty off. Try to use approach circle as a guide to make a perfect blanket. As you see here, this is your current blanket http://puu.sh/o9i1b/98a9ee0f61.jpg it's pretty off because it's not covering the approach circle perfectly. To do a perfect blanket, firstly, adjust the approach circle so it would be placed at the slider's body line, use 25% playback rate to make it easier. You can also change the note position in timeline if necessary to make it clearer, like on your case, I moved the circle to red tick. Then adjust the slider body so it would perfectly align with the approach circle like http://puu.sh/o9i8i/afa76d1467.jpg Pay attention to DS afterwards since it might change. It might seem little, but blanket is pretty much important to make your map looks neater. 00:15:151 (3,4) - this still off too, and maybe some other blankets, try to check them yourself >>>i remapped it just after you modded lol so now it's fine(even not a blanket lol
2. 00:17:910 (2) - The red anchor could be adjusted better so it would fall perfectly on the sound on red tick.>>>fixed a bit
3. 00:40:668 (4,2) - I think it'll looks neater if these two are parallel... it would kinda make the flow better too. http://puu.sh/o9ilP/657490d92b.jpg
   >>>fixed
4. 00:55:151 for this part, since there's like increasing sound, I mean the sound got bigger gradually, maybe you could match it with also increasing the hitsound volume gradually. For example you increase 1% every big white tick so it should be 61% here 00:56:530 62% here 00:57:910 and so on until it's reached it peak on 70% volume on the chorus. It would make a nice dynamics >>>yes!
5. 01:00:668 (1) - Wow, great job spinner gap rule, you make this feel totally off and awkward :/ How could we make this better....? Somehow I suggest to just end the spinner here 01:05:496 where the music ends but start the chorus here 01:06:875 so it won't violate the rules. Still feel weird but somehow more fitting because there's a dominant sound that's also start here 01:06:875 so starting the chorus there should be better than ending the spinner before the music actually ends xD Like http://puu.sh/o9iPi/d056e50243.jpg
   >>>yes,fixed although still weird cuz the rule
6. 01:25:496 I suggest to start the break here (do it by roll over your pointer beside the "break" writing and drag it, in case you don't know)
   >>yeah ik,fixed
7. 01:41:358 (1) - Remove NC ye
8. 01:42:047 (1) - 2/1 slider don't really fit here because the sound here 01:42:392 is too big to be ignored. Either change the rhythm to 1/1 slider (that you uses before) or change the slider shape so the sound would be supported with red anchor like http://puu.sh/o9j1D/a189344842.jpg But I suggest more to just use 1/1 slider since the sound is too big even for red achor.
   >>>sure
9. 01:43:427 (2,3) - I prefer something like this http://puu.sh/o9j4h/a78f8b48ee.jpg or if you actually wanted an oval pattern http://puu.sh/o9j5f/f962437f9f.jpg yes
10. Okay that's it, good map overall

I'll end it here~

Just a little suggestion about diff name
I think Light Insane should be simply named Insane because it's 4.36 stars and it's a standard diff for Insane. Light Insane should be around 3.8 until 4.0 stars.
And the actual Insane should be named Extra or use some kind of custom name since it's reached 5 stars and is qualified enough to be titled Extra (Edit: I took a quick glance and it's really Extra, not Insane. 01:13:082 (3,4,5,6) - This is a pattern for Extra)
Yeah, it's really should be like that, let me just paint it blue.
>>>yes
Good luck~^^

Diasios wrote:

[Easy]

• • I'd reduce SV a little since this is the easiest difficulty, 0,70 seems better.>>>1.47 stars mmmm....just leave it there
  • 00:35:841 (1) - Flip this slider vertically and move it back again at x:336 y:292. >>>sure
  • 01:00:668 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:05:496. (if I were you I'd just delete it and add a long slider instead)
  • 01:25:000 (break) - Is this break really necessary? Just add a slider or two.>>>i think it's fine
  • 01:41:358 (1) - Remove this NC, it's not necessary.>>>yes

CyberX wrote:

Here we go my mod
note that everythings here is just my opinons

Light Insane

i think the CS should be 4 because its light insane>>>now it's insane
00:24:461 (6) - try to reposition,or change it to something else,its feels empty>>>reverse slider is fine imo
00:27:047 (6) - there is no sound here>>>a beat here
00:35:151 (5) - the gameplay is feel weird here,because of the position of this circle>>>fixed
00:58:599 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much circle>>>on purpose
01:06:185 (1) - this slider should end at 01:06:703
01:11:703 (1) - this slider should end at 01:12:220
01:17:220 (1) - this slder should end at 01:17:737]
all fixed b4 i saw this post
*fix the other slider that has same issue with above slider,because for me its sound like that

Thanks in advance for choosing my ModQ
Come again next time

Naxess wrote:

From M4M Request

Easy

SPOILER

1. 00:17:910 (2) - Sharp turns like these are usually not very good in easy difficulties. Everything should be easily followed and predicted, including flow, sliders, and rhythm.>>>guess i remapped after u posted
2. 00:13:772 (1,2) - Blanketing upcoming objects is generally not a good idea for flow in easy, since they almost always force sharp turns, which really makes the flow awkward considering that you've got two of them right after each other. Try something like this:
   First, move 00:12:392 (2) up, so the other notes don't hit the floor of the screen. Then rotate the sliders a bit and reorganize them as in this image or similar:
   >>>welp i also remapped so this doesnt exist
3. 01:17:220 (1,2,3) - Bad flow, Ctrl + G 01:17:220 (1) then move to 354, 200
4. 01:09:634 (2,4) - Refrain from stacking in easy. Objects should be visible from the moment they appear.
5. 01:20:668 (2) - Tail is on downbeat, consider making it clickable. Refer to other kiai areas, for example what you've done at 01:10:323 (3,4) .
   Guess I'll explain this shortly: Downbeats (large white ticks) are often loud sounds in the song and as such wouldn't make sense to lift your finger on. Plus, by having downbeats clickable, it also allows the player a point of reference to the rhythm.
   Anyway, whether downbeats are clickable or not should, for the most part, be consistent over all similar parts of the song (all kiai areas, in this case).
6. 01:41:358 (1,2) - Too short combo, plus it's inconsistent, look at the other kiai areas. You should also change the color of 01:28:254 (1) to light blue because of the break at 01:25:496 which doesn't force an NC, and thus causes a combo inconsistency for the other kiai areas.
   
   
   
   
7. 01:40:668 (3,4,5) - This is going to be very confusing for newer players who are still learning the time to distance principle, which we mappers and modders are supposed to make sure they learn from early on. Basically, don't place later notes closer than, or even at the same distance as, sooner ones. This generally also applies to normal. You should basically be able to see, from your last position, which notes come first on a still image of notes without numbers or approach circles. Imagine it like this, for example:
   
   As you can see, even doing a new combo here because of it doesn't help. Unless they've memorized it from previous encounters, they will most likely click on the closest note to the last position, as if that note were at 01:41:013 on the timeline. So consider changing this.

>>>all above considered changing
Looks like this has potential. GL on ranking
I'll send you my map as soon as it's done.