1|2|3|4
[Rolling]
00:11:456 - There's a slight sound here. You might move 00:11:379 - to avoid jacks
00:11:764 - Same, there's a sound
00:11:841 (11841|0) - You could delete this and add 00:12:149 - Here, since you gave triples to every snare drum
00:13:918 - Add a note
00:18:841 - Add a note
00:21:610 - Add a note * I noted that it seems intentional. You could reject it
00:23:995 (23995|3) - Move to 3
01:37:225 (97225|0,97225|2) - These long notes, if you are following vocal, should start 01:37:149 -
01:43:533 - This part seems awkward although you are following the vocal. The entire song's balance has its base on fast tempo notes. Consider re-patterning this part
01:58:918 - Add a note at 4
02:10:149 - Add a note
02:11:841 - Add a note
02:26:610 - Consider deleting one notes each jack, and leave 4 at the end
02:56:764 - Delete one note; its a bass sound, not snare
02:57:379 - Add a note at 4
02:58:610 - How could i explain this part, you could add a long note to express the off-going vocal. *02:58:610 - ~ 02:58:764 -
03:01:533 - Add a note
[Insane]
00:09:533 - Move these two notes to somewhere else, to avoid 4 jacks on col 4
00:26:918 (26918|0) - This to 3?
00:29:995 - 00:30:610 - 00:31:225 - These parts are missing a note for snare. *Same goes from 00:34:610 -
00:39:302 (39302|1) - Delete
00:49:379 - Add a note at 1
00:58:918 - Add a note at 3
01:43:533 - Same as Rolling difficulty
02:23:225 - One note for snare.. hmm seems lonely Same 02:24:456 -
02:25:687 - 02:25:995 - Add notes
02:42:918 - 02:44:149 - Same, add 2 notes
[Hard]
00:29:687 - From here, you should consider re-patterning the whole thing, to make 00:29:995 - 00:30:610 - 00:31:225 - these notes fitting the snare. Seems quite awkward and empty, although you are following Bass. Ignore if intended
*00:59:225 - This verse has same 'problem' as well
-> I'm not pretty sure about Mania submission system, but I heard notes strongly following vocal sounds CANNOT be ranked. I'm not 100% sure about it, but you should consider it if you are aiming for ranking your maps. For example, Hard difficulty has a lot of blank spaces due to vocal-following-LongNotes. Consider re-patterning
-> I'm really bad at modding easy maps. Sorry
-> Awesome song
-> I'm a KOREAN too. Just living at Guatemala