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Asphyxia

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Asphyxia 2016-04-15T21:12:09+00:00

DaxMasterix wrote:
ASPHYXIA---------------
[*]00:13:563 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe, for a better consistency (Don't caring about different mappers) change this pattern to some like this (00:06:504 (4,5,6,7) - ) Maybe? Personal preference here, but I think plain notes a little better
[*]00:20:622 (4) - This surely fits better stacked in 00:20:732 (1) - I can see what you mean, but I disagree. I think the slider at 00:20:732 (1) - has such a strong crash to it, so it has to be emphasized with some kind of a movement, and I were to stack the note with that slider, it'd destroy that.

Thank you!

Cellina

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Joined March 2013

Cellina 2016-04-24T14:24:14+00:00

just asking, does the diff name is rankable?
cuz i saw Taeyang's remote control got unranked even the diff name was related to the song.

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2016-04-30T03:34:04+00:00

I'll check mods and I'll fix the hitsounds too.

diraimur

547 posts

Joined December 2013

diraimur 2016-05-14T18:12:19+00:00

ay quick mod

Asphyxia
00:12:680 (1) - blanket /me runs

-kevincela-
00:48:416 (1,2) - isnt perfectly overlapped

Secretpipe
00:50:070 (2,5) - kinda unimportant but you could've blanketed those (tho its probably not even noticable unless you play with EZ so who cares \o/)
00:57:460 (3) - should've been two sliders imo; breaks consistecy

Irreversible
01:45:769 (2) - could've been two 1/4 sliders

Kyshiro
02:40:916 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I personally would prefer if second triangle got bigger than first one instead of other way around.
02:52:386 (3) - maybe put a repeat for the effect at 02:52:497 - ?

EvilElvis
03:53:158 (1,1) - this is kinda hard to read; i would prefer if they werent perfectly overlapped
04:34:298 (1,1,1,1,1) - i dont see the purpose of nc spam

Monstrata
04:42:680 (1) - turn off grid snap and ctrl+down arrow
04:47:754 (4) - turn off grid snap and ctrl+up arrow

alacat
05:02:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - how2say this i dont know but if you listen to it closely you will notice it is; in fact; like this.

Pretty good map overall, sorry for bad mod but I couldnt really find sth to mod so I had to mention super subjective things and turned out to be not really good mod. Good luck with this map. xd

Gero

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Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Gero 2016-06-25T11:32:55+00:00

-M4x

Hey Gero and guys lol

In case the background is final I would definatly recommend to move the mappers name away from the pink accent in the BG like secret asphy and kevin are kinda colliding with the big S http://puu.sh/obN0X/0d40339136.jpg Similar thing at the top right: http://puu.sh/obN6k/a3e00db370.jpg
Additionally, what about placing all the names at the same location? For example here: http://puu.sh/obNdm/dc2ad41ab7.jpg Well that was a joke lol
But what about moving all names to the location where you put Iyasine's name when the first part begins? It looks nice over there

Well enough about that.. Yeah I wanted to put them all in the same place, but the problem is that I don't wanted to cover the lyrics from the video, that's why.

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00:26:247 (2,3) - Wow I have to start with a blanket... (But that isn't nazi xD since 00:25:695 (3,1) - this is perfect ) Nice catch, fixed.
00:34:519 (1) - What about a rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/obOl5/6431182216.jpg I think it would flow really well with 00:34:188 (2,3) - if you also stack the notes! This way you also create a difference between the drum on 00:34:519 - and the vocals 00:34:629 - So I would consider that I really prefer my own rhythm, I'm following the "wubwub" sounds at this part as well.
01:48:636 (4) - Nc for easier readability? Fixed.
02:39:592 (3,5) - NC them? would look nicer imo! Great, applied.
03:37:386 (1,2,3,4) - What about that rhythm here? http://puu.sh/obSzh/019f3f0eb2.jpg I think it fits better to the song, cuz you emphasize more details! I don't have a nice example pattern for that tho sry :/ Yeah, you're right.
04:12:680 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - So this is very confusing! I mean the NC does make it better I guess but then you put nc here too 04:13:563 (1) - So I would suggest to remove nc on that ^^ And then it's fine I guess o: Fixed.
04:54:041 - Don't you miss a drumbeat here? o: I would add a circle to that point :3 (Maybe stack with 04:54:151 (3) - ? ) This is intentional.
05:02:092 (1) - What about continuing mapping the drum there and to end the map with a slider on the wuuush sound (which starts here 05:03:416 - ) o: Applied already.

Well yea that's everything I could find. I love this song and the map! Great work guys

Good Luck

DaxMasterix

GENERAL

Seriously, You know me so... I think say "Change the name diff" will be a quite obvious, right? To? to Collab :3 I like my custom name.
This is weird but... Look this, You already know what to "fix" Already fixed.
Audio 80% ..I know now every player can change the volume individually but, please, my ears ;-; Changed.
:')))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) xD?
Why the "EvilElvisV2" tag Because it's his old username.

// LOVE; server IP=argv(HEART);(EXIT_FAILURE);

SECRETPIPE---------------

00:09:151 (1) - Yah, you should change this pattern since is the same in 00:02:092 (1,2,3)
00:10:033 (4,5,6,7) - The same, this moment with 00:02:975 (6) - , I recommend to change this slider to a 1/6 stream. IMO, Fits betters
00:51:063 (5) - NC?
00:54:592 (4) - NC?
00:58:122 (4) - NC?
01:01:651 (4) - NC? Applied everything.
GERO---------------
00:23:048 (3) - This slider plays weird with the last object, I think inverted can plays better Fixed.
00:28:563 (1,2,1,2) - Ay, this reminds me charles, (meme video) please try to change this, I like it but,, aaaaaaa What's wrong with it?
00:34:519 (1) - Overlap :'( Fixed.
IYASINE---------------
01:10:805 (x) - Maybe add a note stacked in the next slider or here I don't think so.
01:11:247 (1) - Ctrl+G (? It flows weird imo.
01:11:908 (1) - Ctrl+G (? Same as above.
01:12:239 (1) - I think this can plays better like This (0,5x SliverVelocity and extend the slider to the red stick. No changes.
BLUOXY---------------
04:12:901 (1,2,3,4) - This is ok, but is so confussing Changed a bit.
IRREVERSIBLE---------------
01:33:416 (1) - Complety Unnecesary, I highly recommend to change this He's following the "wubwub" sound at the background.
03:39:151 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern makes the jump between 2 and 3 the highness (Sorry bad english) But I preffer if you change this to 1 - 3 - 2 - 4 and make a zig-zag jump likethis, makes sence with 03:43:011 (1,2) - :3 This is perfectly fine.
03:43:011 (1,2,3) - If you don't make my last suggest, then you maybe want this to be likethis ^
EVILELVIS
03:54:592 (1) -I think this is unmapped yet This was intentional.
03:58:122 (1) - Same? Same as above.
04:01:651 (1) - Same, please work on those greatness Slider with direction changes acording to the voice :p No changes.
04:05:732 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Iuu no please, this no This pattern is really nice, no changes.

That's all, good luck to everyone! If you don't undestand me because my english suck, please, ask me in-game!

diraimur

ay quick mod

Asphyxia
00:12:680 (1) - blanket /me runs Fixed.

-kevincela-
00:48:416 (1,2) - isnt perfectly overlapped You mean stacked? yes it is.

Secretpipe
00:50:070 (2,5) - kinda unimportant but you could've blanketed those (tho its probably not even noticable unless you play with EZ so who cares \o/) Already fixed.
00:57:460 (3) - should've been two sliders imo; breaks consistecy Some of variation doesn't hurts at all.

Irreversible
01:45:769 (2) - could've been two 1/4 sliders I don't think so.

Kyshiro
02:40:916 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I personally would prefer if second triangle got bigger than first one instead of other way around. This looks better like this way.
02:52:386 (3) - maybe put a repeat for the effect at 02:52:497 - ? Sorry, but no changes.

EvilElvis
03:53:158 (1,1) - this is kinda hard to read; i would prefer if they werent perfectly overlapped It's not.
04:34:298 (1,1,1,1,1) - i dont see the purpose of nc spam This empathize the density of the background music, that's why.

Monstrata
04:42:680 (1) - turn off grid snap and ctrl+down arrow Why?
04:47:754 (4) - turn off grid snap and ctrl+up arrow ^

alacat
05:02:092 (1,2,3,4,5) - how2say this i dont know but if you listen to it closely you will notice it is; in fact; like this. Right, but this flows better like this.

Pretty good map overall, sorry for bad mod but I couldnt really find sth to mod so I had to mention super subjective things and turned out to be not really good mod. Good luck with this map. xd

Updated~

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-06-26T05:08:47+00:00

IRC

2016-06-25 22:24 Natsu: 00:49:739 (4) - se te olvido el NC
2016-06-25 22:24 Gero: no me habia fijado, listo añadido
2016-06-25 22:25 Natsu: 00:17:975 (1) -  Deberias de mover el punto final  ax:178 y:315
2016-06-25 22:25 Natsu: 00:23:600 (2,3) -  el stack esta bien off
2016-06-25 22:25 Natsu: 00:27:239 - agrega un circulo? 
2016-06-25 22:25 Gero: cierto, añadido
2016-06-25 22:25 Gero: todo
2016-06-25 22:26 Natsu: 00:23:930 (1) -  es necesario el NC?
2016-06-25 22:26 Natsu: 00:33:857 (4) -  nc aqui tambien
2016-06-25 22:26 Gero: si maje es necesario porque ahi cambia la musica en el fondo, ademas de que es otro ritmo
2016-06-25 22:26 Gero: NC añadido
2016-06-25 22:26 Natsu: 00:35:622 (1,1) -  stackea bien la cola con el cuerpo del slider?
2016-06-25 22:28 Natsu: 01:12:239 (1) -  unsnapped
2016-06-25 22:28 Natsu: 01:34:298 (2,3,1,2) -  enserio este stack esta bien mierda
2016-06-25 22:28 Natsu: miralo en juego hahah
2016-06-25 22:29 Gero: listo, arregle todo
2016-06-25 22:29 Natsu: 02:13:563 (5) -  no deberia ser NC?
2016-06-25 22:30 Gero: cierto, se habia movido y no me habia dado cuenta xD
2016-06-25 22:30 Natsu: 03:15:769 (1) -  Unsnapped
2016-06-25 22:31 Gero: listo, snapped
2016-06-25 22:31 Natsu: 03:22:827 (1,1) -  q feo overlap
2016-06-25 22:31 Gero: movi el siguiente slider un poco para evitar el overlap
2016-06-25 22:32 Natsu: tenes metadata?
2016-06-25 22:32 Gero: me la reviso Lanturn y alacat
2016-06-25 22:32 Gero: espera te paso el video
2016-06-25 22:33 Gero: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XhUAO8JUQk
2016-06-25 22:33 Gero: Reol obviamente y SYSTEMATIC LOVE porque en el video aparece así, Lanturn me la checo maje
2016-06-25 22:34 Natsu: maje tenes un hitsound en mp3 cambialo a wav
2016-06-25 22:34 Gero: cual?
2016-06-25 22:34 Gero: D:
2016-06-25 22:35 Natsu: drum-hitwhistle10.mp3
2016-06-25 22:35 Gero: como lo cambio maje?
2016-06-25 22:35 Gero: ah ya, fixed
2016-06-25 22:36 Natsu: arreglaste el nombre en el sb}?
2016-06-25 22:36 Natsu: xq tenes unos hitsounds con el storyboard
2016-06-25 22:36 Gero: porque añadi los hitsounds en el storyboard para evitar más lineas
2016-06-25 22:36 Natsu: si me refiero a que
2016-06-25 22:36 Gero: ademas de que si añadia más sliderticks el mapa pesaba mas
2016-06-25 22:36 Natsu: si cambiaste el 
2016-06-25 22:37 Gero: ah si la extensión xD
2016-06-25 22:37 Natsu: drum.whistle 10 mp3  a  drum whistle wav