Hey Gero and guys lol
In case the background is final I would definatly recommend to move the mappers name away from the pink accent in the BG like secret asphy and kevin are kinda colliding with the big S http://puu.sh/obN0X/0d40339136.jpg Similar thing at the top right: http://puu.sh/obN6k/a3e00db370.jpg
Additionally, what about placing all the names at the same location? For example here: http://puu.sh/obNdm/dc2ad41ab7.jpg Well that was a joke lol
But what about moving all names to the location where you put Iyasine's name when the first part begins? It looks nice over there
Well enough about that..
Good Luck
In case the background is final I would definatly recommend to move the mappers name away from the pink accent in the BG like secret asphy and kevin are kinda colliding with the big S http://puu.sh/obN0X/0d40339136.jpg Similar thing at the top right: http://puu.sh/obN6k/a3e00db370.jpg
Additionally, what about placing all the names at the same location? For example here: http://puu.sh/obNdm/dc2ad41ab7.jpg Well that was a joke lol
But what about moving all names to the location where you put Iyasine's name when the first part begins? It looks nice over there
Well enough about that..
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Well yea that's everything I could find. I love this song and the map! Great work guys - 00:26:247 (2,3) - Wow I have to start with a blanket... (But that isn't nazi xD since 00:25:695 (3,1) - this is perfect )
- 00:34:519 (1) - What about a rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/obOl5/6431182216.jpg I think it would flow really well with 00:34:188 (2,3) - if you also stack the notes! This way you also create a difference between the drum on 00:34:519 - and the vocals 00:34:629 - So I would consider that
- 00:51:063 (5) - This is the note where I got my first combobreak, cuz I missread it! Putting a new combo would make it way easier to see the drastic sv change coming Same to 00:54:592 (4,4,4) - btw ^^ Maybe you (Secret) also want to discuss with Iyasine whether to silence the sliderticks or not cuz.. yea.. idk it sounds weird when you first hear them and then suddenly they are away o: I mean I know it's a collab and that every mapper maps kinda different, but anyways, it's just a suggestion
- 01:12:239 (1) - Since everybody will expect a low sv here, why don't remove new combo here to make it more visible to the player that he doesnt have to slow down? What you could also do is to set a inherit point at the sliderstart and set the sv to something around .4 - .5 and let the slider end on the red tick!
- 01:24:813 (2) - I suggest to make this a simple 1/4 slider like 01:24:592 (1) - I mean if you follow the vocals I would do that for sure and even if you mapped to the wubwub, I can't hear a overwhelming sound to use a kickslider over a 1/4 In addition I think it just plays better xD
- 01:34:298 (2,3,1,2) - Did you do this on purpose? Idk xD If it was by accident try this: http://puu.sh/obPxw/c4c2656dea.jpg You could also do something cool like this http://puu.sh/obQi1/05ef40690e.jpg! to create a difference between the wub at 01:34:298 (2,3) - and the pure vocals here 01:34:739 (1,2) -
- 01:35:842 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Leben am Limit
- 01:47:533 (3,4,1) - o god s h a p e s
- 01:48:636 (4) - Nc for easier readability?
- 01:59:004 (3,4,1) - I would increase the spacing here to at least as much as the spacing between these two 01:58:783 (2,3) - ! You could achieve that by moving 01:59:225 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - a bit so that 01:59:886 (4) - is stacked with 01:58:783 (2) - //This would interfere with Kyshiros part tho!!
- 02:04:188 (2,3) - I think this is a bit too huge ^^ I have a suggestion for that: http://puu.sh/obR2p/b51b2be6e7.jpg Something like this would work pretty well I guess, since it reduces the spacing a little bit and provides a nice kind of circular thingy with the following notes
- 02:11:798 (1,2,3) - This looks awesome!
- 02:13:452 - Put a circle here and stack it with 02:13:563 (1) - ? It would fit the song very well it's not too difficult and additionally it would be a nice end for your part there!
- 02:22:827 (5) - I would definatly ctrl + g that! My cursor just goes there!
- 02:39:592 (3,5) - NC them? would look nicer imo!
- 02:47:975 (1) - Move this to: http://puu.sh/obRH6/52b747f10c.jpg? I think it would play better, because of the distance to 02:48:195 (2,3,4) -
- 02:51:283 (5) - And this a bit more to the right? Again I just think it would play better http://puu.sh/obRP7/0699678f56.jpg This would also look good patterwise!
- 03:00:327 (1,1,1) - WOW nice
- 03:05:952 - What about adding a note here? I think it would fit nicely! Maybe stack with 03:06:063 (2) - ?
- 03:15:769 (1) - All the sliderart looks really awesome! except this one imo xD I mean it looks good but it could look nicer! Try to adjust the 4th additional sliderpoint a bit so that the last curve looks more like a perfect curve
- 03:26:357 (5) - One does not need the Storyboard the realize that the mapper has changed here xD
- 03:37:386 (1,2,3,4) - What about that rhythm here? http://puu.sh/obSzh/019f3f0eb2.jpg I think it fits better to the song, cuz you emphasize more details! I don't have a nice example pattern for that tho sry :/
- 04:12:680 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - So this is very confusing! I mean the NC does make it better I guess but then you put nc here too 04:13:563 (1) - So I would suggest to remove nc on that ^^ And then it's fine I guess o:
- 04:17:092 (1,2,3) - I really like the 1/3 rhythm changes! Although they are quite hard to expect xD
- 04:29:776 (4,5) - Isn't that a bit short? (That's what she said lol) Consider spacing them a little more ^^ Maybe something like that http://puu.sh/obT4a/31df96b321.jpg
04:35:622 (1) - It's amazing how I don't even have to look in the top right corner to know who's part starts now, when looking at the following rhythm and patterns xD
04:54:041 - Don't you miss a drumbeat here? o: I would add a circle to that point :3 (Maybe stack with 04:54:151 (3) - ? )
05:02:092 (1) - What about continuing mapping the drum there and to end the map with a slider on the wuuush sound (which starts here 05:03:416 - ) o:
Good Luck