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Yuki Kajiura - Lacie

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Cactipiller
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Potato-chii
Hi, from my queue~ I only give recommendation, feel free to disagree!

[General]
Hm… maybe reduce straight sliders and actually curve them? They looks repetitive and boring, especially in a slow song where you can notice all of the shapes of the sliders.

[Normal]
I guess you have to be more consistent for normal diffs. I think using red ticks isn’t suitable for this map (the bpm is kinda high, notes will be too bunched up), except for repeat sliders, I guess they’re fine.
00:00:515 (1,2,1) – Notes bunched up together aren’t good for newbies :/ I’m talking about the pattern, btw.
00:03:943 (3) – Make this slider point the other way. People are gonna mistake the end as the start of the slider.
00:05:658 (1,2,1) – Too bunched up. Maybe at this stage, you might wanna make sure that the end of sliders point at the next slider’s head (or start, whatever you call it OWO )
00:08:229 (2,3) – This is way too confusing.
00:14:229 – more like this and stack 3 and 4.
00:14:229 (4,2) – 2 shouldn’t overlap 4
00:18:836 – More like this but I don’t think you really have to map it, since it’s only a normal diff.
00:21:729 (2,3,4) – Put a repeat slider instead of circles.
00:24:514 (3) – Maybe don’t put it up here again. Players will find it repetitive.
00:26:872 (2,3,4) – Repeat slider again.
00:32:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:372 (3,1) – Confusing.
00:54:515 (2,1) – No overlapping ><
00:57:515 (2,3,4) – Repeat slider.
01:05:444 (2,3,4) - ^ I guess you know where to put them now, so I won’t be mentioning this again for the next parts that need repeat sliders.
01:07:801 – Maybe more like this and stack them.
01:12:515 (2,3) – Confusing.
01:21:086 (3,1,2) – Confusing and no overlapping.

[Hard]
Lots of blankets need fixing, but I won’t point all of them out. One example: 00:22:371 (1,2) don’t make them glued together O.O
Also, you can turn some notes into blankets. Eg. 00:03:086 (3,4) That would look much better if 4 blankets 3.
00:10:372 (2,1) – Maybe stack these two rather than these 00:09:943 (1,2)

That’s all! Hope this helped and GL o/
Topic Starter
Cactipiller

Potato-chii wrote:

Hi, from my queue~ I only give recommendation, feel free to disagree!

[General]
Hm… maybe reduce straight sliders and actually curve them? They looks repetitive and boring, especially in a slow song where you can notice all of the shapes of the sliders. More curvy sliders but i left the repeat sliders straight so they wouldn't look too clunky.

[Normal]
I guess you have to be more consistent for normal diffs. I think using red ticks isn’t suitable for this map (the bpm is kinda high, notes will be too bunched up), except for repeat sliders, I guess they’re fine.
00:00:515 (1,2,1) – Notes bunched up together aren’t good for newbies :/ I’m talking about the pattern, btw. Changed pattern throughout map
00:03:943 (3) – Make this slider point the other way. People are gonna mistake the end as the start of the slider. Fixed
00:05:658 (1,2,1) – Too bunched up. Maybe at this stage, you might wanna make sure that the end of sliders point at the next slider’s head (or start, whatever you call it OWO ) Rearranged sliders throughout map
00:08:229 (2,3) – This is way too confusing. Fixed
00:14:229 – more like this and stack 3 and 4.
00:14:229 (4,2) – 2 shouldn’t overlap 4
00:18:836 – More like this but I don’t think you really have to map it, since it’s only a normal diff.
00:21:729 (2,3,4) – Put a repeat slider instead of circles. Fixed throughout map
00:24:514 (3) – Maybe don’t put it up here again. Players will find it repetitive. Fixed
00:26:872 (2,3,4) – Repeat slider again.
00:32:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:52:372 (3,1) – Confusing. Fixed
00:54:515 (2,1) – No overlapping >< Fixed
00:57:515 (2,3,4) – Repeat slider.
01:05:444 (2,3,4) - ^ I guess you know where to put them now, so I won’t be mentioning this again for the next parts that need repeat sliders.
01:07:801 – Maybe more like this and stack them. Kind of half changed-ish
01:12:515 (2,3) – Confusing. Fixed
01:21:086 (3,1,2) – Confusing and no overlapping. Fixed

[Hard]
Lots of blankets need fixing, but I won’t point all of them out. One example: 00:22:371 (1,2) don’t make them glued together O.O Fixed throughout map
Also, you can turn some notes into blankets. Eg. 00:03:086 (3,4) That would look much better if 4 blankets 3. Changed to this pattern in some of the map
00:10:372 (2,1) – Maybe stack these two rather than these 00:09:943 (1,2) Fixed

That’s all! Hope this helped and GL o/
Thanks for the mod!
Ambu5h
Hi, please dont give kudosu

Normal

00:01:158 (2) - maybe rotate 90 degrees clockwise, to avoid overlaps?
00:03:086 (2,3) - how about blanket here? http://puu.sh/nsMRb/da3a0fd9ac.jpg
00:16:372 (3) - make just one repeat and put circle 00:17:658 - on this time
00:29:658 (3) - same
01:25:426 - maybe circle? use 1/8 to find this time
01:29:229 - silence the end of spinner

increase spacing a bit, because tehre are too many overlaps, and they doesnt look nice

Hard

00:00:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty hard for hard, but well, its playable i guess
00:01:372 (5,1) - fix overlap
00:03:086 (3,4) - here you can increase spacing i think
00:06:300 (4,5,6) - i think you should change these three notes into reversal slider tbh and do this in all parts, which contains 6 notes singltap
00:06:943 (1,2) - spacing is too low, also make blanket more accurately
00:08:229 (3,4,5,6) - there are no reasons to increase spacing, make it constant
00:19:800 (4) - nc
00:22:371 (1,2) - increase spacing
00:23:657 (3,4) - ^
00:27:515 (1,2) - fix overlap
00:28:800 (1,2) - low spacing again
00:33:943 (3,4) - and again
00:49:372 (5) - nc
00:58:372 (1,2) - fix overlap
01:15:515 (3,5) - and another one

well hope you understand main mistakes, that i tryed to point out

make this diff a bit easier, because diff spread in set is too much i think, this diff is >3 stars, and the first one <2

sorry, i dont find this mod really helpful, so thats why i asked to not give kudosu, but i hope you can fix some mistakes and make your map better

good luck with set
Topic Starter
Cactipiller

freebird42 wrote:

Hi, please dont give kudosu

Normal

00:01:158 (2) - maybe rotate 90 degrees clockwise, to avoid overlaps? Fixed
00:03:086 (2,3) - how about blanket here? http://puu.sh/nsMRb/da3a0fd9ac.jpg Added
00:16:372 (3) - make just one repeat and put circle 00:17:658 - on this time Fixed
00:29:658 (3) - same Fixed
01:25:426 - maybe circle? use 1/8 to find this time Added
01:29:229 - silence the end of spinner Shortened

increase spacing a bit, because tehre are too many overlaps, and they doesnt look nice Spacing of the whole map increased a little

Hard

00:00:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - pretty hard for hard, but well, its playable i guess Changed to 3 circles and a slider throughout the map
00:01:372 (5,1) - fix overlap Fixed
00:03:086 (3,4) - here you can increase spacing i think Slightly increased
00:06:300 (4,5,6) - i think you should change these three notes into reversal slider tbh and do this in all parts, which contains 6 notes singltap Changed throughout map
00:06:943 (1,2) - spacing is too low, also make blanket more accurately Fixed throughout map
00:08:229 (3,4,5,6) - there are no reasons to increase spacing, make it constant Changed
00:19:800 (4) - nc Fixed
00:22:371 (1,2) - increase spacing
00:23:657 (3,4) - ^
00:27:515 (1,2) - fix overlap Fixed
00:28:800 (1,2) - low spacing again Increased slightly
00:33:943 (3,4) - and again
00:49:372 (5) - nc Fixed but removed nc from following note
00:58:372 (1,2) - fix overlap Fixed
01:15:515 (3,5) - and another one

well hope you understand main mistakes, that i tryed to point out

make this diff a bit easier, because diff spread in set is too much i think, this diff is >3 stars, and the first one <2 Reduced to 2.7 after changes

sorry, i dont find this mod really helpful, so thats why i asked to not give kudosu, but i hope you can fix some mistakes and make your map better

good luck with set
Thanks for the mod, very helpful and well appreciated! :)
Puhehuhe
Little NM here

General

Timing for this is little hard because it s not constant 140 bpm. Main rhythm is 140 bpm but some notes in the song itself are little late or little early. This could be fixed with little audio editing. Difficulty isn't even high so I don't see this is as a must have.

Also, using Distance Snap is very recommended for these types of difficulties.

Normal
  1. 00:18:086 (1) - Ctrl + G
  2. 00:28:800 - 00:29:229 - Some notes here?
  3. 00:39:515 (2) - Mirror horizontally (slider goes right)
Hard
  1. 00:13:372 (3) - Turn the tail down
  2. 00:45:515 (5) - This doesn't need to be curved
  3. 00:54:515 (2) - Ctrl + G, maybe?
  4. 00:59:229 (2) - Ctrl + G
  5. 01:10:586 (4) - Something like this?
  6. 01:13:372 (4) - Curve from the other side
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Cactipiller

Puhehuhe wrote:

Little NM here

General

Timing for this is little hard because it s not constant 140 bpm. Main rhythm is 140 bpm but some notes in the song itself are little late or little early. This could be fixed with little audio editing. Difficulty isn't even high so I don't see this is as a must have.

Also, using Distance Snap is very recommended for these types of difficulties.

Normal
  1. 00:18:086 (1) - Ctrl + G Changed
  2. 00:28:800 - 00:29:229 - Some notes here? Not quite sure what you mean
  3. 00:39:515 (2) - Mirror horizontally (slider goes right)Changed

Hard
  1. 00:13:372 (3) - Turn the tail down Changed
  2. 00:45:515 (5) - This doesn't need to be curved Changed
  3. 00:54:515 (2) - Ctrl + G, maybe? Changed
  4. 00:59:229 (2) - Ctrl + G
  5. 01:10:586 (4) - Something like this? Changed into a similar pattern, just going the other direction so that it wouldn't be too crowded
  6. 01:13:372 (4) - Curve from the other sideChanged
Good luck!
Thanks for the mod!
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