1. Blue - 4Key (2.22 stars, 709 notes)
2. Green - 4Key (1.4 stars, 417 notes)
3. Red - 4Key (4.34 stars, 1429 notes)
4. Yellow - 4Key (2.99 stars, 1147 notes)

Soul Evans wrote:

I'll do red tomorrow, so you can give me kds for this but not for red. Here's the mod:

Yellow

00:05:764 Try reversing this pattern Following the pitch in the piano
00:33:999 Move 2 to 1 too keep consistency such as 00:35:058 ,00:35:411 and 00:36:822 Applied
00:43:881 rolls seem a little boring to me, so i would suggest doing something like this to keep it creative and fun!
Changed it
01:43:175 move 1 to 3 Done
01:51:469 and 01:51:646 to lane 4 for balance Following piano pitch
01:55:969 move to 4
01:56:058 move to 3 as for reasoning for both is that well, fun pattern for it ahaha
01:57:469 move to 2
01:57:558 move to 1
01:57:646 move to 4
01:57:734 move to 2 and you have a nice pattern lol
Changed the patterns
02:05:058 little hard try moving lane 4 to 3 Keeping this
02:15:646 Here come dat pattern:
Applied
02:45:830 add note to 2 timesnap doesn't exist and want to keep triples
02:46:528 add not to 4 because heavy sound keepin triple

Soul Evans wrote:

I'll do red tomorrow

Red

00:21:205 (21205|2,21293|1,21469|1,21646|1) - ctrl-H all of these, it makes more sense PR wise

00:22:087 (22087|2) - does this LN have to exist?

00:29:234 (29234|0,29322|1,29411|2,29411|0,29499|1,29587|0) - yo nice HAND BALANCE

00:29:764 - should be a jump

01:05:322 - any reason there's a note missing here?

01:13:616 - same here

01:54:469 (114469|3,114558|2,114646|3,114734|2,114822|3,114911|2) - might wanna balance this out a bit, having something like balances out the patterning and it also works

from 02:07:175 - to 02:28:352 - all white ticks should have at least a jump on them

02:44:411 - you've got notes here on the yellow diff and not on this diff?

Hydria wrote:

Soul Evans wrote:

I'll do red tomorrow

well here I a---oh wait nvm this is someone else

1/2/3/4

General: I don't think monstercat should be labelled as the source since they're just the licencing dep or something

Applied
Changed
Get Shrekt

Red

00:21:205 (21205|2,21293|1,21469|1,21646|1) - ctrl-H all of these, it makes more sense PR wise You can do that?

00:22:087 (22087|2) - does this LN have to exist? Yes

00:29:234 (29234|0,29322|1,29411|2,29411|0,29499|1,29587|0) - yo nice HAND BALANCE I work hard sometimes

00:29:764 - should be a jump K den

01:05:322 - any reason there's a note missing here? You killed me day one

01:13:616 - same here Shouldn't have killed me then, that naive cop could have helped you

01:54:469 (114469|3,114558|2,114646|3,114734|2,114822|3,114911|2) - might wanna balance this out a bit, having something like balances out the patterning and it also works I tried

from 02:07:175 - to 02:28:352 - all white ticks should have at least a jump on them Should be good now

02:44:411 - you've got notes here on the yellow diff and not on this diff? Fixed

Yellow

I feel like 00:21:469 (21469|1) - should be on 4 and 00:21:646 (21646|1) - should be on 1 for PR Ok

00:29:058 (29058|1,29234|1,29411|1,29587|1) - might wanna change the patterning here slightly to avoid this Ok

00:30:116 (30116|0,30205|1,30293|0,30381|1,30558|1,30646|0,30734|1,30822|0) - oops hand balancing Changed the patterns

00:53:764 (53764|2,53764|3,53852|1,53940|2,54028|3) - might wanna shuffle some notes around here ^

00:54:822 (54822|2,54911|3,54999|2,55087|3,55175|2) - again with this hand balance, you really love the right hand how else am i going to my business

01:54:911 (114911|2,115087|2,115264|2) - wew, move 01:55:087 (115087|2) - to 2 Changed the patterns

01:59:499 (119499|1,119675|1,119852|1) - >_> ^

ok that's all for now good luck with the rest cya latter despair

Chronocide wrote:

Totally on time
Using lane 1-2-3-4

Blue

1. 00:00:646 (646|3) - Could be hold
2. 00:06:293 (6293|3) - ^
3. 00:21:469 (21469|1,21646|1) - Since this is an easier difficulty, suggest moving these to 4-1
4. 00:22:352 (22352|0) - Lol that anchor
5. 00:28:352 (28352|3) - You could keep the 1/2 clap going here
6. 00:33:293 (33293|2,33469|2,33646|2) - Rain-bow-road, suggest using 3-1-4?
7. 02:04:352 (124352|2) - ^
8. 00:33:999 (33999|2) - Double, for more emphasis? This would conflict with 00:34:705 (34705|2), so up to you
9. 00:43:881 (43881|3) - Could make it more interesting? http://puu.sh/r39kT/f33d087267.jpg
10. 00:53:764 (53764|0) - ^
11. 01:42:558 (102558|3) - ^
12. 02:15:646 (135646|3) - ^
13. 00:57:646 (57646|3) - Single, 01:00:469 (60469|3) double, I get that you don't want doubles, but consider it
14. 01:52:881 (112881|0) - This is probably harder than the pattern above
15. 01:05:587 (65587|3) - Make it 1/4 shorter, this is kinda tricky
16. 01:11:587 (71587|3,71940|2,72469|3,72822|2) - Add
17. 01:54:646 (114646|0) - Vary this up a bit (1-3-2-4, for example)
18. 02:05:764 (125764|0) - Nice variation ^^
19. 02:16:616 (136616|0) - Remove, make 02:16:705 (136705|3) double, for extra emphasis on that snarejump

Yellow

1. 00:00:646 (646|3) - Could be hold
2. 00:21:293 (21293|1) - Lol, exactly what I wanted to see in Blue, maybe use the patterns in Blue in Yellow?
3. 00:24:116 (24116|2,24469|0,24822|2) - Make double
4. 00:25:469 (25469|2) - Oh man that's so awkward
5. 00:28:352 (28352|3) - That is incredibly dense for a 3,01* chart, and 00:31:175 (31175|0) here it gets easier again, the drop 00:33:999 (33999|2) is also way easier than the buildup. Either make the chart in general harder, or make this easier (suggest harder, since Blue is already quite easy)
6. 00:33:999 (33999|2) - The drop is relatively boring (simple jumpstream), use the synth sounds, if possible? (Maybe LN's or triples, idk)
7. 01:11:587 (71587|3,71940|3) - Triple for more emphasis
8. 01:27:646 (87646|0) - Chart the violin, perhaps? This part is very empty
9. 01:48:116 (108116|2) - Repeat the pattern, make 01:48:469 (108469|1,108646|2,108822|3) etc also doubles so there's more emphasis on the keys? Or use singles for the clap and doubles for the keys. Something like http://puu.sh/r3a1m/83637b1bfc.jpg perhaps?
10. 02:05:058 (125058|3,125146|3) - Different pitch, don't use minijack here
11. 02:05:764 (125764|0) - This is nice in difficulty
12. 02:16:705 (136705|2) - Triple

Red

1. 00:00:117 (117|0) - For extra dickery: http://puu.sh/r39EJ/7fb026b66d.jpg
2. 01:20:587 (80587|0) - ^
3. 00:21:469 (21469|2,21646|2) - 4-1
4. 00:21:822 (21822|1,21999|3,22175|1) - Add, maybe?
5. 00:25:469 (25469|2) - Cri everytiem
6. 00:31:175 (31175|1) - BLASTIX ROAD
7. 00:33:999 (33999|3) - Use the synths, very easy compared to BLASTIX ROAD
8. 00:43:969 (43969|2,44322|2,44675|2) - Move this around a bit, people probably just jumptrill this. Make it more gay http://puu.sh/r3aln/496c9bf450.jpg like that
9. 02:15:646 (135646|3) - ^
10. 01:27:646 (87646|1) - Chart violin here?
11. 00:53:764 (53764|1) - BLASTIX ROAD
12. 01:54:469 (114469|3) - This explains the 4*
13. 02:00:116 (120116|1) - Go full dickery and have 1/8 rolls here, also, BLASTIX ROAD

If I'm honest, this is one of those songs which are very tricky to map properly. The BLASTIX ROAD sections could be made more interesting, but the drop in general is very plain and doesn't allow for much creativity.

Applied most of the minor fixes, want to focus on the piano parts for all diffs, changed some of the patterns in yellow and blue, some in red, btw this was the og blastix . Ty for your time

Soul Evans wrote:

Fuck i forgot it's time, oh well then, lets start.

R E D

General : Disable wide screen support in all diffs, since you didn't use any storyboard for this map.
Make NM diff have only OD 7 HP 7, no need for it to be 7.5 that's too high
Instead, make the HD diff OD 7.5 HP 7.5, because 8 shouldn't be like that,
same with MX, change to OD 8 HP 8, because what you used it simply too high, remember, the more scarier/intense the song sounds the more OD you should use, and also be aware of what difficulty are you targeting towards for.
revamped the OD/HP on all songs, disabled widesscreen
00:31:175 - This part has a lower sound than the one on this 00:32:058 - be sure to use something else for patterns that has one not like a roll because the bn who is gonna check this will say the same thing i believe.
i guesss well see, but ill stay with it for now
00:33:293 (33293|0,33469|0,33646|3) - The man says ''rainbow road'' but his voice only is backing the notes which should be only 1 long note per column, i suggest deleting the ones i highlighted or move around other columns to make your own pattern.
changed it up
00:44:940 (44940|1) - Turn this into 1 LN that lasts until 00:45:293 - because of the persons scream.
done
02:04:352 - Sane issue as i stated above, delete one ln per column
done

That's all the suggestions i have, sorry this was a short mod but i had not alot of issues with red, good luck on ranking this.

Raveille wrote:

ohaiyo since u wanna M4M my map then IMA DO THIS

|1|2|3|4|

Applied
Changed
Hell nah

Before I start...

I wanna recommend better names for your difficulties, cause just putting colours seem bland.
Basic Green
Normal Blue
Hard Yellow
Insane Red
No
Then again this is up to you.

Green

00:33:999 - yea I know the pattern here but this should at least be a double because its the start of KIAIIIIAIAIAIAIIA
meh, ill do it
00:43:881 - now I'm thinking whether I should say doubles for cymbals. and yes, I think you need a double here cause of the cymbal.
00:45:293 - hi yes another double
00:50:940 - hi yes
00:52:352 - hi yes
00:53:764 - hi ye- ok you know it.
00:56:587 - ok this will be the last time I point out the cymbals here so you know the drill, cymbals = doubles
01:06:469 - this can be an exception of a double but maybe a single?
02:05:764 - ok you know this part too, all the way, cymbals = doubles
02:24:116 - again another exception for a single
really want to focus on the snares in this spread, but i did do cymbals in the latter diffs

Blue

00:33:999 - cymbals = doubles, I think you can find them yourself
ok tbh check Green for all the parts I mentioned doubles and follow them and check out for the exceptions
01:54:469 - add one at 4 for double cause of the strong drum beat b a s s
done
most of this is repeated in Green so check Green for Blue too.

Yellow

00:27:999 (27999|3,28175|3,28352|3,28528|3,28705|2,28705|3,28881|3) - o boi here comes the a n c h o r s. I know why you do this, but this isn't comfortable by any means. I think you know what to do here and switch'em up.
00:53:764 (53764|3,53764|2,53940|3,54116|3,54205|2,54293|3,54381|2) - nooooooooooo
00:54:028 (54028|0,54116|1,54293|0,54469|0,54646|0,54646|1,54822|0,54911|1,54999|0) - nooooooooooo part 2
last time im ganna change this part, should be fine now
01:11:587 (71587|3,71587|0) - these 2 can be holds up to 01:11:764 -
done
01:38:234 - what happened to your break consistenCYYYYYYYYYYY
I dont know why it does that, all the parts end and start on the same note for all diffs
yea patterning wise your choice of them aren't that big, a lot of 1234321 rolls that get monotonous. mix them up, experiment.
tried to change them up

And that's all from me. Good luck

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1. Easy [Green]
2. Normal [Blue]
3. Hard [Yellow]
4. Insane [Red]