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4399guangguang

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4399guangguang 2016-02-27T04:36:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2019年5月13日 at 22:07:10

Artist: Yui Sakakibara
Title: Katayoku no Icarus
BPM: 179
Filesize: 1599kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Anivex's Insane (5.33 stars, 292 notes)
Easy (1.82 stars, 113 notes)
Hard (3.38 stars, 245 notes)

Download: Yui Sakakibara - Katayoku no Icarus
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Needs guest diffs and help for hitsounds and offset
Normal diff is not complete
摁摁

Modder list:
1:MadaoX
2:vanillas
3:[Monochrome]
4:EedowChyan0w0
5:WhozChao
6:Deppyforce
7:Kana chan
Special thank to guess diff maker:Anivex

Redownload if downloaded before 28/2.
3/25 Easy diff has been remapped.

Last edited by 4399guangguang 2019-05-13T14:07:48+00:00, edited 35 times in total.

[ Monochrome ]

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[ Monochrome ] 2016-02-27T07:14:46+00:00

开始的SPINNER之后的休息时间可以不要，背景音乐再大声点

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-02-27T12:32:57+00:00

Hi~ From #modreq~
（不對我可以用中文 XD）

[General]
首先先弄下預覽時間啥的，用AIMOD檢查下
Source還有Tags，雖然沒rank之前也不用太在意
KIAI TIME設置一下？

pic

還有這個OSB文件刪了吧

pic

[Easy]
這個可以算得上是Normal難度了啊，easy的難度要小於1.5的。
然後用AIMOD檢查下間距，EZ和NORMAL難度的話間距要固定的。

pic

先把間距改了吧
啊，對了
00:23:079 (2,4) - 在easy和normal難度的話最好不要出現這種重疊

[Hard]
音效的話如果不想添加用soft吧，normal有點吵。slidder弄靜音？
00:07:150 (5) - 略難看，個人感覺不需要折返，後邊一段跟著vocal就好
00:11:507 - 加一個Note?
00:12:680 (1) - 略難看
00:14:524 (4,5) - 沒包好(blanket)，稍微修改一下滑條
00:17:876 (6,7) - 稍微修一下，包好
00:28:602 (7) - 考慮適當插音？長滑條的話表現不是太好
00:36:647 (6) - 修飾一下？
00:39:328 (5,6) - 稍微移動一下包好
00:40:837 (1,2) - 這兩個搞個對稱？
00:43:183 (1) - 滑條從00:43:351 - 開始然後再00:43:183 - 加個note ?
00:47:541 (4,5) - blanket?
00:49:217 (1,3) - 考慮下和blanket？
00:52:401 (4,5) - ^
00:53:407 (7,1) - 這兩個首尾重疊下（stack）
01:03:965 (7,8,9) - blanket?
01:05:474 (2,3) - (3)稍微移動下位置，這樣重疊感覺不太好看
01:16:200 (2,3) - 兩個重音可以考慮間距大一些

4399guangguang

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Topic Starter

4399guangguang 2016-02-27T14:16:17+00:00

vanillas wrote:
Hi~ From #modreq~
（不對我可以用中文 XD）

[General]
首先先弄下預覽時間啥的，用AIMOD檢查下
Source還有Tags，雖然沒rank之前也不用太在意
KIAI TIME設置一下？
pic

還有這個OSB文件刪了吧
pic

[Easy]
這個可以算得上是Normal難度了啊，easy的難度要小於1.5的。
然後用AIMOD檢查下間距，EZ和NORMAL難度的話間距要固定的。
pic

先把間距改了吧
啊，對了
00:23:079 (2,4) - 在easy和normal難度的話最好不要出現這種重疊

[Hard]
音效的話如果不想添加用soft吧，normal有點吵。slidder弄靜音？
00:07:150 (5) - 略難看，個人感覺不需要折返，後邊一段跟著vocal就好
00:11:507 - 加一個Note?
00:12:680 (1) - 略難看
00:14:524 (4,5) - 沒包好(blanket)，稍微修改一下滑條
00:17:876 (6,7) - 稍微修一下，包好
00:28:602 (7) - 考慮適當插音？長滑條的話表現不是太好
00:36:647 (6) - 修飾一下？
00:39:328 (5,6) - 稍微移動一下包好
00:40:837 (1,2) - 這兩個搞個對稱？
00:43:183 (1) - 滑條從00:43:351 - 開始然後再00:43:183 - 加個note ?
00:47:541 (4,5) - blanket?
00:49:217 (1,3) - 考慮下和blanket？
00:52:401 (4,5) - ^
00:53:407 (7,1) - 這兩個首尾重疊下（stack）
01:03:965 (7,8,9) - blanket?
01:05:474 (2,3) - (3)稍微移動下位置，這樣重疊感覺不太好看
01:16:200 (2,3) - 兩個重音可以考慮間距大一些

KIAI忘了弄，搞定了
OSB檔案不知道是什麼...刪了
EASY的話感覺2星以下還可以接受
間距改掉了
重疊方面的確難看已改

00:07:150 (5) - remap了
00:11:507 - 不加比較好吧...
00:12:680 (1) - 已改
00:14:524 (4,5) - 不太懂blanket的意思....不過改了一點點
00:17:876 (6,7) - OK
00:28:602 (7) - 改掉了
00:36:647 (6) - OK了
00:39:328 (5,6) - 包好了（其實什麼是包
00:40:837 (1,2) - 對稱了（應該
00:43:183 (1) - 改了
00:47:541 (4,5) - 恩恩
00:49:217 (1,3) - 摁摁（
00:52:401 (4,5) - 包了
00:53:407 (7,1) - 其他都stack了，不知道會不會變難看
01:03:965 (7,8,9) - OK
01:05:474 (2,3) - 改了~
01:16:200 (2,3) - 距離大了一點

總之謝謝大神的MOD

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-02-27T16:27:11+00:00

4399guangguang wrote:
OSB檔案不知道是什麼...刪了 osb的話是storyboard的文件，如果沒做的話不需要的~
EASY的話感覺2星以下還可以接受 rank準則的話 easy的難度定義要小於1.5星星

關於blanket:

一些blanket的圖
good blanket
good blanket
bad blanket

大概就是這個意思。。。

總之謝謝大神的MOD （並不是Orz

NO KD!!!

Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-02-28T09:07:15+00:00

NM queue here

mod

[/notice]

[general]

- the volume of the song is low, you should loud it
- where's the tags and the source?
- ask someone for the better hitsound

[easy]

Check again the DS

00:07:317 (4) bad shape
00:09:161 (2) ^
00:24:747 (1) Blanket it
00:40:837 (1,3) avoid overlap

[Hard]

HD must be 5 , 6 is not suitable with hard

00:12:680 (6) change the shape of the slider
01:07:652 (3) NC
01:17:708 (5) NC
01:18:379 (1) remove NC [/notice]

GL~

4399guangguang

75 posts

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Topic Starter

4399guangguang 2016-02-28T10:32:05+00:00

MadaoX wrote:
NM queue here

mod
[/notice]

[general]

- the volume of the song is low, you should loud it
- where's the tags and the source?
- ask someone for the better hitsound

[easy]

Check again the DS

00:07:317 (4) bad shape
00:09:161 (2) ^
00:24:747 (1) Blanket it
00:40:837 (1,3) avoid overlap

[Hard]

HD must be 5 , 6 is not suitable with hard

00:12:680 (6) change the shape of the slider
01:07:652 (3) NC
01:17:708 (5) NC
01:18:379 (1) remove NC [/notice]

GL~

OMGGG thanks for your mod

but i don't know how to loud the song

Hope this map will rank soon

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-02-28T12:16:44+00:00

4399guangguang wrote:
but i don't know how to loud the song

幫你弄好了，然後如果你重新上傳的話在介紹頁加上” 如果在XX時間之前下載的請重新下載“之類的話

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4v9eh ... sp=sharing

NO KD!

4399guangguang

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Topic Starter

4399guangguang 2016-02-28T12:37:49+00:00

vanillas wrote:
4399guangguang wrote:
but i don't know how to loud the song
幫你弄好了，然後如果你重新上傳的話在介紹頁加上” 如果在XX時間之前下載的請重新下載“之類的話

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B4v9eh ... sp=sharing

NO KD!

謝謝音量方面終於搞定了

Eedow

178 posts

Joined June 2015

Eedow 2016-03-01T11:03:25+00:00

offset=681可不可行呢:)

4399guangguang

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4399guangguang 2016-03-01T11:18:02+00:00

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:
offset=681可不可行呢:)

我試一下聽上去其實有點怪，也不知道offset應該調多少

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-03-02T11:45:58+00:00

4399guangguang wrote:
EedowChyan0w0 wrote:
offset=681可不可行呢:)
我試一下聽上去其實有點怪，也不知道offset應該調多少

681是肯定不行的啊，OFFSET要在重拍（小節第一拍開始）
offset現在這個值差不多可以，偏差也就幾個ms。

然後又看了下
01:02:003 - 預覽時間改到這裡
Easy難度，00:11:725 (1,2,3) - 轉盤後邊緊接著這幾個會反應不過來，尤其這是EZ難度，實在不行就刪了吧
01:02:675 (1,2) - 還有這裡也是
（KD不要亂給啊，有了幫助在給，要不BN容易Deny掉）
NO DK

4399guangguang

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Topic Starter

4399guangguang 2016-03-02T13:03:21+00:00

vanillas wrote:
4399guangguang wrote:
我試一下聽上去其實有點怪，也不知道offset應該調多少
681是肯定不行的啊，OFFSET要在重拍（小節第一拍開始）
offset現在這個值差不多可以，偏差也就幾個ms。

然後又看了下
01:02:003 - 預覽時間改到這裡
Easy難度，00:11:725 (1,2,3) - 轉盤後邊緊接著這幾個會反應不過來，尤其這是EZ難度，實在不行就刪了吧
01:02:675 (1,2) - 還有這裡也是
（KD不要亂給啊，有了幫助在給，要不BN容易Deny掉）
NO DK

就不信會被DENY>3<
預覽時間和Easy那邊改掉了

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-03-04T11:55:40+00:00

4399guangguang wrote:
就不信會被DENY>3<
預覽時間和Easy那邊改掉了

（一臉懵逼

Nelliel

874 posts

Joined September 2015

Nelliel 2016-03-06T04:21:45+00:00

[General]

Check AIMOD

[Easy]
HP And OD Both Should Be Raised To 3
00:25:970 - 1/2 slider
00:26:137 - get rid of that
01:02:338 (1) - stack that with the next slider
01:19:769 - bounce that slider like this

http://puu.sh/nwqdl/d589b0eed7.jpg

Good Job On Easy (Although it Turned out to be normal)

[Hard]
00:25:970 - 1/2 slider
00:37:534 - NC
00:38:204 - NC
00:40:383 - NC
00:40:886 - NC
00:47:590 - NC
01:21:109 - instead of big slider maybe you shoud map this part like this maybe?

With Doubles?

Great map in general! Good Luck <:

4399guangguang

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Topic Starter

4399guangguang 2016-03-06T05:03:20+00:00

WhozChaos wrote:
[General]
Check AIMOD

[Easy]
HP And OD Both Should Be Raised To 3
00:25:970 - 1/2 slider
00:26:137 - get rid of that
01:02:338 (1) - stack that with the next slider
01:19:769 - bounce that slider like this
http://puu.sh/nwqdl/d589b0eed7.jpg
Good Job On Easy (Although it Turned out to be normal)

[Hard]
00:25:970 - 1/2 slider
00:37:534 - NC
00:38:204 - NC
00:40:383 - NC
00:40:886 - NC
00:47:590 - NC
01:21:109 - instead of big slider maybe you shoud map this part like this maybe?
With Doubles?

Great map in general! Good Luck <:

Easy's AR,HP and OD are changed as 1.84 stars.
Hard's combos are changed also.
01:21:109 I have remapped it.

Deppyforce

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Deppyforce 2016-03-06T09:46:42+00:00

hi m4m
[General]
kiai end here imo 01:25:048 -

[Easy]
sv change in easy is not recommended, but its fine
avoid overlapping circles in easy diff e.g. 00:06:362 (2,4) - this looks bad
00:10:049 (1,1) - need 4 beats to recover after spinner in easy diff
00:17:423 (2,3) - dont use 1/2 in easy diff, its unrankable
00:20:105 (2,3) - blanket
00:55:635 (4,1,2,3,4) - check ds
01:03:679 - this should be clickable, fits more with vocals
01:24:295 (2) - this flows bad, its too edgy

[Hard]
00:01:500 - 00:02:841 - add circles, fit with vocals
00:23:792 (8) - add nc
00:37:870 (2,3) - flow bad tbh maybe mirror (2)
00:44:239 (4,5,6) - this is strong why use low spacing?
00:49:937 (2,3,4) - blanket
00:59:490 (1) - music got ignored which is bad, consider remap this part with 1/2 rhythms
01:11:389 - ignored upbeat, should be mapped

[Anivex' Insane]
00:07:199 - shuld be clickable cuz strong lyrics
00:23:540 (2) - mapped on nothing
00:33:344 (1) - music in the background got ignored :v
01:00:998 (1,1,2,3) - overlap looks bad
01:22:618 (1,2,3,4) - strong lyrics got ignored, would play better if these are 1/2 notes
01:27:813 - unnecessary inherited point

alot of thing could be improved, keep finding mods and this map will become better eventually
gl

4399guangguang

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4399guangguang 2016-03-06T10:10:06+00:00

Deppyforce wrote:
hi m4m
[General]
kiai end here imo 01:25:048 -

[Easy]
sv change in easy is not recommended, but its fine
avoid overlapping circles in easy diff e.g. 00:06:362 (2,4) - this looks bad
00:10:049 (1,1) - need 4 beats to recover after spinner in easy diff
00:17:423 (2,3) - dont use 1/2 in easy diff, its unrankable
00:20:105 (2,3) - blanket
00:55:635 (4,1,2,3,4) - check ds
01:03:679 - this should be clickable, fits more with vocals
01:24:295 (2) - this flows bad, its too edgy

[Hard]
00:01:500 - 00:02:841 - add circles, fit with vocals
00:23:792 (8) - add nc
00:37:870 (2,3) - flow bad tbh maybe mirror (2)
00:44:239 (4,5,6) - this is strong why use low spacing?
00:49:937 (2,3,4) - blanket
00:59:490 (1) - music got ignored which is bad, consider remap this part with 1/2 rhythms
01:11:389 - ignored upbeat, should be mapped

[Anivex' Insane]
00:07:199 - shuld be clickable cuz strong lyrics
00:23:540 (2) - mapped on nothing
00:33:344 (1) - music in the background got ignored :v
01:00:998 (1,1,2,3) - overlap looks bad
01:22:618 (1,2,3,4) - strong lyrics got ignored, would play better if these are 1/2 notes
01:27:813 - unnecessary inherited point

alot of thing could be improved, keep finding mods and this map will become better eventually
gl

Thank you,the map looks better now

Kana chan_old

Kana chan_old 2016-04-17T05:30:17+00:00

Easy

00:12:060 (1) - make the red dot in the middle
00:12:730 (2) - same
00:32:842 (5) - start new combo here
00:50:272 (5) - red dot pls
00:55:635 (4) - same
01:05:021 (1) - same

your easy diff should prob be <1.5 stars cuz aimod is complaining just sayin
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria <--- see that for star values

Hard

00:00:663 (1) - symmetrical pls? (and a bunch of other sliders in the diff)
00:23:792 (1) - bend this the other way
00:31:837 (7,8) - parallel pls
00:38:204 (3,5) - same
01:18:429 (5) - start new combo here

Insane

00:28:819 (7) - red dot may help
00:30:663 (4) - blanket??
nice jumps m8 great diff

i can make you a gd if you want about the same difficulty as https://osu.ppy.sh/b/954846&m=0

4399guangguang

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4399guangguang 2016-04-17T05:48:21+00:00

Kana chan wrote:
Easy

00:12:060 (1) - make the red dot in the middle
00:12:730 (2) - same
00:32:842 (5) - start new combo here
00:50:272 (5) - red dot pls
00:55:635 (4) - same
01:05:021 (1) - same

your easy diff should prob be <1.5 stars cuz aimod is complaining just sayin
https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria <--- see that for star values

Hard

00:00:663 (1) - symmetrical pls? (and a bunch of other sliders in the diff)
00:23:792 (1) - bend this the other way
00:31:837 (7,8) - parallel pls
00:38:204 (3,5) - same
01:18:429 (5) - start new combo here

Insane

00:28:819 (7) - red dot may help
00:30:663 (4) - blanket??
nice jumps m8 great diff

i can make you a gd if you want about the same difficulty as https://osu.ppy.sh/b/954846&m=0

Easy

00:12:060 (1) - make the red dot in the middle Done
00:12:730 (2) - same No way:D
00:32:842 (5) - start new combo here Done
00:50:272 (5) - red dot pls Done
00:55:635 (4) - same Done
01:05:021 (1) - same Done

Hard

00:00:663 (1) - symmetrical pls? (and a bunch of other sliders in the diff) Cant get it
00:23:792 (1) - bend this the other way Cant get it;_;
00:31:837 (7,8) - parallel pls Done
00:38:204 (3,5) - same Nope
01:18:429 (5) - start new combo here 01:19:098 (1) - Made this the new combo

Insane

00:28:819 (7) - red dot may help Better ask Anivex:D
00:30:663 (4) - blanket?? Done

No need Insane gd but Normal diff is welcome

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vanillas wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

MadaoX wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

vanillas wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

vanillas wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

4399guangguang wrote:

WhozChaos wrote:

Deppyforce wrote:

Kana chan wrote:

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