HNRGH
I wish I could map like this.
Tak, you are the shit.
Hope this gets ranked!
STAR!
I wish I could map like this.
Tak, you are the shit.
Hope this gets ranked!
STAR!
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hapi - NTD03 ''26ROAD'' (Full Edit)
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Put "Seizure warning" in the description.
Easy time!
00:34:720 (1) Move spinner back 1 blue tick?
01:07:970 (5) Doesn't seem to mesh well with this area.
Normal is fun!
01:31:970 (3) I advise symmetry.
But really, at this point I believe it fully deserves a Star!
Easy time!
00:34:720 (1) Move spinner back 1 blue tick?
01:07:970 (5) Doesn't seem to mesh well with this area.
Normal is fun!
01:31:970 (3) I advise symmetry.
But really, at this point I believe it fully deserves a Star!
Topic Starter
Fixed, Kudosu and thanks <3
[General]
- You have 4 differant .osb file in your map
Remove hapi - NTD03 26ROAD (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD#03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb
After that, fullsubmit.
- Your background should be 1024*768 and not 960*768 Resize it and fullsubmit
- The tag "hapi" and "NTD03" are useless, they already are in the Artist name and in the tiltle. Remove them in all difficulty
[Easy]
01:07:970 (5) - I think this kind of slider are bad in easy diffs.
01:14:637 (1) - Hide by the previous sliders
01:20:303 (2) - In my opinion, you shouldn't stack this note with (1)
01:27:970 (1) - Extend by 1/1 ?
01:39:970 (2) - Same as 01:07:970 (5)
Why this difficulty hasn't the same lenght as the others ? o_o
[Normal]
00:34:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later or earlier
01:02:137 (2) - It sounds off. Something like that would be better
01:06:637 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier
01:17:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:970 (1) - Remove new combo
01:41:303 (2) - Add new combo
01:58:637 (1,2) - Sounds weird o_o
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:42:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later
[Hard]
00:31:970 (1) - End it 1/2 later
00:45:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:637 (7) - New combo
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:41:137 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier
[Insane]
00:31:804 (6) - Don't stack it with the oter circle, It's very confusing.
01:18:803 (1) - Begin it 1/2 earlier
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
Star
- You have 4 differant .osb file in your map
Remove hapi - NTD03 26ROAD (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb - hapi - NTD#03 üg26ROADüh (Full Edit) ([Takuya]).osb
After that, fullsubmit.
- Your background should be 1024*768 and not 960*768 Resize it and fullsubmit
- The tag "hapi" and "NTD03" are useless, they already are in the Artist name and in the tiltle. Remove them in all difficulty
[Easy]
01:07:970 (5) - I think this kind of slider are bad in easy diffs.
01:14:637 (1) - Hide by the previous sliders
01:20:303 (2) - In my opinion, you shouldn't stack this note with (1)
01:27:970 (1) - Extend by 1/1 ?
01:39:970 (2) - Same as 01:07:970 (5)
Why this difficulty hasn't the same lenght as the others ? o_o
[Normal]
00:34:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later or earlier
01:02:137 (2) - It sounds off. Something like that would be better
01:06:637 (1) - End it 1/1 earlier
01:17:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:970 (1) - Remove new combo
01:41:303 (2) - Add new combo
01:58:637 (1,2) - Sounds weird o_o
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:42:637 (1) - End it 1/1 later
[Hard]
00:31:970 (1) - End it 1/2 later
00:45:303 (1) - End it 1/1 later
01:39:637 (7) - New combo
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
02:41:137 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier
[Insane]
00:31:804 (6) - Don't stack it with the oter circle, It's very confusing.
01:18:803 (1) - Begin it 1/2 earlier
02:31:970 (x) - Add a spinner who ends at 02:33:970
Star
*star*
Topic Starter
All fixed and thanks for the stars~
~
❤ = ★
❤ = ★
star 
Star *-* awesome map <3 I really liked the Insane diff ^-^~
A poke'mon beatmap? With a strobe-light Pikachu in the background? This is going to need something a little different than I usually use... colors other than black!
Medium Suggestion. Serious Consideration.
Easy: 01:42:303 (3,1) - This transition doesn't look so great. Please fix. Other than that, no problems I can see.
Normal:00:28:970 (4) - Scoot this note to the right one space.
00:29:303 (1) - You might want to scoot this slider up one space and right two to make it match with 00:27:970 (1,2,3,4). Actually, I suggest that you move all of 00:29:303-00:34:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) at once so that you don't have to adjust anything else.
00:33:303 (2,3,4,5) - You might want to move these notes down one space to match with the slider.
01:04:970 (2) - You might want to scoot this note left one space. If you do, also adjust 01:05:303 (1,2).
01:34:637 (1) - Improper spacing?! Oh noes!
02:09:303 (3) - Scoot this slider down one space to stack on 02:07:970 (1). (Osu really fought with me on this one, but I was able to stack the slider with DS on, so it's proper spacing.) Afterwards, adjust 02:09:970 (4).
Hard:00:37:303 (1,2) - You might want to insert a note in between these two to match with 00:39:970 (1,2,3).
00:44:637 (7) - You might want to scoot this slider down one space to make it nice and neat.
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I've got to give you kudos for this pattern. This is awesome looking!
01:09:970 (1,2,3,4) - This line seems crooked. I suggest that you move (2) up and left one space.
01:56:970 (1) - Maybe move this right one space?
02:38:637 (1,2,3) - These sliders need to stack. Switch the grid level to 4 and they'll line up perfectly.
02:39:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - After you fix those sliders ^ you should scoot these notes over one space (size 3 grid).
Insane: I don't like modding Insanes.
Pika Piiii! Err... I mean starred.
Medium Suggestion. Serious Consideration.
Easy: 01:42:303 (3,1) - This transition doesn't look so great. Please fix. Other than that, no problems I can see.
Normal:00:28:970 (4) - Scoot this note to the right one space.
00:29:303 (1) - You might want to scoot this slider up one space and right two to make it match with 00:27:970 (1,2,3,4). Actually, I suggest that you move all of 00:29:303-00:34:303 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) at once so that you don't have to adjust anything else.
00:33:303 (2,3,4,5) - You might want to move these notes down one space to match with the slider.
01:04:970 (2) - You might want to scoot this note left one space. If you do, also adjust 01:05:303 (1,2).
01:34:637 (1) - Improper spacing?! Oh noes!
02:09:303 (3) - Scoot this slider down one space to stack on 02:07:970 (1). (Osu really fought with me on this one, but I was able to stack the slider with DS on, so it's proper spacing.) Afterwards, adjust 02:09:970 (4).
Hard:00:37:303 (1,2) - You might want to insert a note in between these two to match with 00:39:970 (1,2,3).
00:44:637 (7) - You might want to scoot this slider down one space to make it nice and neat.
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I've got to give you kudos for this pattern. This is awesome looking!
01:09:970 (1,2,3,4) - This line seems crooked. I suggest that you move (2) up and left one space.
01:56:970 (1) - Maybe move this right one space?
02:38:637 (1,2,3) - These sliders need to stack. Switch the grid level to 4 and they'll line up perfectly.
02:39:637 (1,2,3,4,5) - After you fix those sliders ^ you should scoot these notes over one space (size 3 grid).
Insane: I don't like modding Insanes.
Pika Piiii! Err... I mean starred.
Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold
[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical
[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me
[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing
[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing
In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM..
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold
[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical
[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me
[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing
[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing
In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM..
Pokemon <3
[Insane]
0:26:637 (1) left 1 grid
0:29:803 (5) place at x:128, y:296
0:29:970 (1,2,3,4) stack the ending properly
1:06:607 (1) place like (3,5,7) looks better
1:09:803 (5,6,7,8) uneven spacing
[Hard]
0:37:470 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) up 2 grids
0:43:637 (3,4) spacing different from others
1:44:303 (3,4,5,6) (3,4) right 1 grid, (5) right +down 1 grid, (6) down 1 grid
[Normal] and [Easy]: fine spacing
star
[Insane]
0:26:637 (1) left 1 grid
0:29:803 (5) place at x:128, y:296
0:29:970 (1,2,3,4) stack the ending properly
1:06:607 (1) place like (3,5,7) looks better
1:09:803 (5,6,7,8) uneven spacing
[Hard]
0:37:470 (2,3) (2) up 1 grid, (3) up 2 grids
0:43:637 (3,4) spacing different from others
1:44:303 (3,4,5,6) (3,4) right 1 grid, (5) right +down 1 grid, (6) down 1 grid
[Normal] and [Easy]: fine spacing
star
<3<3<3<3<3<3 x3 automatic star
Topic Starter
Fixed (adding hitsounds)kanpakyin wrote:
Hey....Here my mod
=========================
ReD=I think you should fix this
BluE=Suggestion only
*Major issue are in Bold
[Easy]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:39:970(1)-Hairlike spacing mistake
01:11:303(4)-2 grid left
01:11:970(x)-add a note here
01:23:970(2)-spacing
01:30:637-Start with here..I suggest you use soft hitsound until 01:38:637
02:07:970(2.3)-Make it more symmetrical
[Normal]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:42:637(2)-The rhythm is doesn't fit the music
01:59:970(1)-Remove New combo
02:05:303(1.2)-IMO..These slider is X_X for me My tetris-like sliders ;_;
[Hard]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:34:637(1~3)-Uneven spacing
00:37:970(x)-add a note here
01:12:970(1~5)I suggest you re-map these slider My tetris-like sliders ;_;
01:23:637(4)-Spacing
01:45:637(3~6)uneven spacing
02:40:303(5)-Spacing
[Insane]
Missing Hitsound?Please add it
00:32:637(5)-This jump is random They first were under the slider, but then I got suggested to move them cause they seemed confusing, I kinda don't find them bad
00:39:970(1)^
00:43:970(1)Remove New combo
01:06:637(1)-Spacing
In overall..I think the placement is ruleless..
So..Sorry I can't Star ATM.. I heavily disagree, but's okay, I'm not trying to "catch'em all".
Catch'em all
looooooooool
looooooooool
Topic Starter
Ahahahhah
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!
- Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)
- 01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303
- .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?
.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 6, dai
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levalo
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:SPOILER.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!
Topic Starter
Fatto tuttoCard N'FoRcE wrote:
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)- Storyboard:
- Puoi aggiungere un Preview point se vuoi (Timing - Set Current Position as Preview)
- Easy:
- 01:30:637 - da qui in poi il pulse veloce è fuori posto, ti suggerisco di disattivarlo e farlo ripartire a 01:41:303
- Normal:
- .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:49:303 (1) - allunga fino a 01:51:303?- Hard:
.Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 3 o 4, dev'essere un po' maggiore della Easy, dai
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
01:54:637 (1) - allunga fino a 01:56:637?- Insane:
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 6, dai
.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
00:28:970 (4,1,2) - sinceramente l'inconsistenza sulla griglia mi pare troppo eccessiva per non renderla facilmente confondibile ;_; Per favore allontana l'1 dal 4 (e correggi poi anche le cose dopo relativamente ai nuovi cambiamenti)
Ci sono due "remix" nelle tags, levane uno; "pokemon" nelle tags non serve, levaloSono piacevolmente sorpreso.
- .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
Overall Difficulty 7, a 5 sicuramente è troppo bassa per una Insane e toglie sfida.
.Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
00:45:303 (1) - allunga fino a 00:47:970?
00:59:970 (1,2,3) - magari specchiala orizzontalmente?
01:46:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - qui sinceramente trovo lo stream fuori posto (non sono sbagliati comunque). Secondo me potresti arrangiare degli slider usando il ritmo che ti ho segnato nell'immagine sotto:SPOILER.Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/42998
01:56:637 (3) - nuova combo, così si capisce la somiglianza con la pattern precedente
Fammi sapere le tue decisioni riguardo a quello che ho detto (hli Errori però DEVI correggerli eh :<) e te la bollo volentieri!
Non hai fatto "Full Submit" quando la hai aggiornata ;~;
Fammi sapere quando lo fai.
EDIT: everything fixed, fun map, promising mapper, my first bubble to you ^_^
RE-EDIT: you silly, don't update or the bubble will pop :3
Rebubbled
Fammi sapere quando lo fai.
EDIT: everything fixed, fun map, promising mapper, my first bubble to you ^_^
RE-EDIT: you silly, don't update or the bubble will pop :3
Rebubbled
[Hard]
03:00:970 (3) - Should add a new combo here because it's hard to tell that it's different from the previous sliders.
03:04:303 (2) - Suggestion: Maybe add a finish here?
03:04:970 (4) - ^
03:05:636 (6) - ^
[Insane]
01:46:887 (2) - Why the slight pause? You should stick with 1/2 beats like you did with the rest of the song.
01:48:220 (2) - ^
Maybe do something like this?
03:00:970 (3) - Should add a new combo here because it's hard to tell that it's different from the previous sliders.
03:04:303 (2) - Suggestion: Maybe add a finish here?
03:04:970 (4) - ^
03:05:636 (6) - ^
[Insane]
01:46:887 (2) - Why the slight pause? You should stick with 1/2 beats like you did with the rest of the song.
01:48:220 (2) - ^
Maybe do something like this?
Topic Starter
Fixed
Alright, a few small things have been fixed and this map can finally be ranked.
Topic Starter
Thank you very much and thanks to Eddieee,Cnf,all my friends and who star'd it ^_^
This map is rules as hell. Great work.